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Title: « chrunoi's SS + OS »
Post by: chrunoi on September 20, 2014, 05:33:26 AM
New Note: There are several one shots that I've deleted, sorry about that.

Current status: Semi hiatus.

Ongoing Stories: Hedgehog's Dilemma / Leather Jacket → The Collision Of Stars








This is a comfort fic and has mentions of panic attacks, therefore if you feel like you're uncomfortable with it, please close this fic  :kneelbow:



« Fragments of You and I »

The Takahashi family were foster parents and great ones at that. Though they had one daughter, they still continued being a foster family for orphans once in a while and their daughter, Minami didn't mind at all. In fact she liked it, she liked making new friends though they usually left after year or two but nonetheless she kept contact with most of them so she was still happy.

Minami was 16 when her parents took in another orphan after a year of not fostering any children. This time it was different, usually the orphan was a young child, around the age of 5 to 6, but the orphan this time was the same age as Minami.

Her name was Maeda Atsuko and she was the first foster child that Minami met who had withdrawn into herself. Atsuko, or Acchan as Minami had called her, was an orphan who's parents had died in an accident not long and she had no relatives from what Minami's parents had told her. Acchan never showed much facial expression, she always had that blank face that sometimes annoyed Minami but no matter how hard Minami had tried, Acchan didn't show any emotion. She would only answer in either a nod or just silence and quite frankly, Minami was irritated with her.

Minami understood that losing both her parents was hard on her but it's been a year since Acchan came but she still hasn't made an effort to talk to Minami or her parents, even better, she spends her time just inside her room now, not even bothering to go to school or going downstairs for meals. And it felt like Acchan was just a bothersome presence in the house now.

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Minami was home alone that day, well not exactly since Acchan was holed up in her room as usual but it felt like Minami was alone. Minami was napping downstairs, having fallen asleep on the couch while watching TV when she was woken up by something.

She rubbed her eyes as she heard loud gasping noises and Minami quickly realized that the sounds were coming from Acchan's room and she ran upstairs. Minami opened Acchan's door to find said person huddled in a corner or the room, knees to her chest and head down with shaking hands gripping her hair tightly while gasping loudly for air.

Minami quickly ran over to her, gently prying Acchan's hands from her hair and holding her trembling hands in her own. Acchan looked up, with tears and snot running down her face while still gasping and Minami let go of her hands in favor of hugging the trembling girl and stroked her back in assurance as she felt the girl's heart beating fast. The gasping and shaking subsided after a while and Minami felt hands gripping her back tightly, as if afraid that Minami would just let go and leave.

"I'm sorry I'm sorry I'm so sorry," She heard Acchan mutter into her shirt and she patted her head.

"Shh it's okay, you're okay right now Acchan," Minami whispered to her as she continued to rub her back. Acchan pulled away after a few more minutes, wiping away her tears and held her knees to her chest once again.

"I'm sorry I'm so sorry I can't stop apologizing oh god I'm sorry. I know I haven't been the greatest to your family and I'm so sorry please don't leave me. Please don't throw me out, please," Acchan blabbered out in one breath and Minami saw tears well up in her eyes again as well as her hands starting to tremble. Minami once again reached over to pull the girl into another hug, this time Acchan buried her head in Minami's chest and gripped the front of her shirt.

"I'm just so afraid,I'm afraid of the future where I am alone, where I have nobody. I'm afraid of dying alone, I'm afraid of everyone leaving me just like my parents," Minami heard her whisper out and Minami felt her own tears in her eyes . She had never known that Acchan had these type of thoughts and she even thought of her as bothersome.

Minami felt Acchan tighten her grip on her shirt and let out a hiccup.

Almost as if to say "Please don't leave me too," in a wordless plea.

"You're okay, I won't leave you, I promise." Minami vowed to the girl and Acchan looked up.

"You promise?"

"I promise." Minami assured her.

"No matter what?" Acchan question again, insecurity rising up again.

"No matter what. I will always be by your side, don't worry. I'll never leave you." Minami said firmly and leaned down to place a soft kiss on Acchan's forehead as if to seal her promise to the girl and Minami saw the girl close her eyes and she felt Acchan's heart rate calm down.

After a few more minutes of Acchan not moving, Minami looked down to find her asleep and Minami smiled. She tried to unwrap Acchan's hands from her shirt but all that did was cause Acchan to wrap her arms around Minami's waist.

Minami decided that Acchan was probably not going to let go anytime soon and made herself comfortable on the floor without moving as much as she can. She placed another kiss on her forehead before wrapping her arms around Acchan in return, feeling Acchan snuggling close to Minami, and she closed her eyes and fell asleep.

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Minami's parents came home to a quiet house, with the TV still softly playing but with Minami nowhere in sight.

Mama Takahashi walked quietly upstairs and was surprised to find Acchan's door open so she peeked in.

She let out a smile when she saw Minami laying on the floor with her arms wrapped around Acchan and Acchan resting her head on Minami's shoulder with her arms too around the other.

"I knew you could get her to open up Minami," Mama Takahashi whispered to them as she grabbed Acchan's blanket off of her bed and carefully draped it on them before quietly leaving.

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I don't know what to say ah a I had the fic title in my mind for a while but I couldn't fit an idea to it but then I thought of this and yeah  :on roll:

I thought of this last night and when I woke up I immediately came on to write this  :farofflook:

Anyway I hope you liked it, I'll update chapters of my stories later so I'll run off now  :pen_whirl:
Title: Re: « chrunoi's OS area: #1 - Fragments of You and I »
Post by: cisda83 on September 20, 2014, 05:58:25 PM
Yeah... atsumina story...

Ah... Minami promised not to ever leave Atsuko....

Poor Atsuko for being orphan... but also scared to be alone...

What's going to happen to Atsumina next?

Would Atsuko be able to be with Minami's family for a long time?

Because normally they are only there until they are 16 or 18 years...

Whichever they thought was the right age for them to be called adult.

can't wait to see more

Thank you

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: « chrunoi's OS area: #1 - Fragments of You and I »
Post by: jumpcx on September 20, 2014, 08:05:47 PM
I have been reading all ur fanfic but this one Really  got me :ding:
Lol I'm a Atsumina shipper and ur stories are all of my otp  :luvluv1:
And this story is very interesting   :farofflook:
Cuz it seems like there could be a back story behind acchan's parents death  :glasses:
So Thx for the fic and hope u continue  :kneelbow:
Title: Re: « chrunoi's OS area: #1 - Fragments of You and I »
Post by: chrunoi on September 24, 2014, 01:35:35 PM
Warning: Major Angst and character death [ may possibly need tissues ]

Also the song versus aren't meant to be read with the song, it's just that the lyrics fitted it so I placed them in there and I had the idea of putting song lyrics into a fic so yeh. No update for Two years but extra long angsty one-shot makes up for it right?  :nervous

When The Cherry Blossom Petals Blooms



I remember when I transferred in the first year of junior high, you were the only one who was absent. Your seat was next to the window and mine was next to yours. You didn't come to school for a week and when I asked my new classmates about you, thats when I found out.

Your name was Maeda Atsuko and you had leukemia.

You hadn't come to school when I transferred because you were doing treatment at the hospital.

I was expecting to see a frail weak looking girl when you returned to school a few days later, not a cheerful girl.

You were in class before me and you sat at your seat, with a beanie on your head, looking out the window. When you heard the sound of my chair being pulled back, you turned around and smiled at me and introduced yourself.



That was one of the brightest smile I had seen from anyone and it made my heart beat faster for a reason I didn't know back then.



We somehow got closer through the years, I'd write down notes on the days you had to go for treatment and visit you at home and help you with your homework. And then we'd fall asleep together on your bed and your mother would put a blanket over us.

In our third year of junior high, they said you were cured, you were free from leukemia though there was a chance you could have a relapse, but it was low.

Our class had a party in celebration, celebrating that you could grow your hair again and it'd be beautiful. That you wouldn't need to go to the hospitals that often and you wouldn't feel so much pain anymore. That you were a fighter, for not losing to the cancer during your young childhood years.

♫ A spring breeze
Comes from somewhere
Changing the colours
Of this familiar road♫

We were in the same class in high school, and once again, we were seated right next to each other.  Your hair had grown now, though it was short, you still looked beautiful.

And whenever we talked, my heart would beat faster for a reason I still hadn't known.

We had a group of friends, some who had come from another school but still, we were great friends. Having lunch and sometimes going out for little window shopping dates after school became our little thing.

♫This season
Puts the happiness and sadness in the past
And we start walking
A new road♫

A few days after your birthday, I finally couldn't resist asking the one question on my mind.

"Why is my heart beating so fast around you, Atsuko? I asked everybody but they refused to tell me, telling me to ask you instead.." I nervously asked as you stared at me with wide eyes.

A smile slowly spread on your face and you cupped my face to make me look at you.

"When your heart beats fast around someone.. it means you like them, Minami. Like like-like them," You told me with a huge smile on your face. I began blushing hard and you giggled.

"I-I," All I could do was stutter as you continue to stare at me.

"My heart beats fast around you too, Minami. And I really like you a lot, more than best friends. Do you feel the same way?" You asked, knowing my true feelings but still wanted me to say it out loud.

"I do, Atsuko, I do. I like you more in the more than best friends way too." I said shyly and you once again giggled. I will always love that giggle, I decided.

"This means we're girlfriends now right~?" You happily said and before I could answer, planted a quick kiss on my lips.

I nodded shyly, not trusting my voice. My face felt hot and it was probably really red.

You cheered happily before kissing me once more and then immediately getting on your phone to mail the news to our friends. All of whom had said it was about time we got together.

♫Whether it’s a sunny day or a rainy one
Tomorrow will come
So I’ll smile
As I take a step♫

We had been dating for a year, now in our second year of high school. However, a week after your birthday, you didn't come to school and I couldn't contact you.

♫Under the spring-coloured sky
You start walking alone
Down the long road you painted
Like a dream you had one day♫

I had asked everyone what happened to you, including your mother but she was crying when I called her and she couldn't get a word out. That's when I realized something bad had happened to you.

Then you finally called me, but you sounded different.

Your voice sounded weaker than before and you sounded exhausted.

"M-minami, sorry for not contacting you," You said into the phone and your voice brought tears to my eyes. "I..I just didn't know how to tell you," Your voice cracked towards the end of your sentence and you sounded choked up.

"What is it, Atsuko? Tell me, please," I choked out. You let out a sob and a hiccup before you continued.

♫The tear that landed on my cheek
When you looked back uncertainly
And forced a smile
Was a period
To help me grow up♫

"I relasped, Minami. It came back." You cried into the phone. And I cried with you. I immediately went to the hospital, to see you lying the bed, tears and snot running down your face. And your hair was gone.

But you still looked beautiful to me. No matter what.

I walked over, and you tried to speak before I hushed you. I made a motion for you to make some space for me on the bed and you did. I climbed in, intertwined my hand with yours tightly and leaned my head on your chest.

Listening to your heart beating, fighting for you to stay alive.

You tried to say something again but I hushed you.

"Let's stay like this for a while, Atsuko."

♫When I look up at the sky
Its vastness
Showed me how endlessly long
This road is♫

We fell asleep like that, like old times. Not too long later your mother woke me up, careful to keep you asleep, and she pulled me out into the hallway. I asked her how it happened and she started to cry again, causing my own tears to well up.

She said she didn't know how, there wasn't any signs of a relapse until you collapsed at home a day after our one year anniversary.

And apparently, this time the cancer was stronger than before.

She told me how the doctors didn't have much hope for her anymore, that you wouldn't have long to live.

And that's when I broke down further, slowly sliding down to floor and sobbing my eyes out.

♫The cherry blossoms are a future bookmark
I pray that I’ll remember
The dreams I had one day...
The cherry blossoms are a bookmark of hope
Instead of giving up
I’ll open to this page♫

After that you woke up, and called for me. I quickly wiped my tears and calmed myself before walking back in. From the expression on your face, I knew that you knew I had heard the news. However you gave me one your beautiful smiles and instead asked about our friends.

I sat on the chair beside the bed, intertwined our hands once again and then told you what you had missed. You listened enthusiastically, adding in your thoughts here and there.

I continued to talk before realizing you weren't paying attention to me. You were staring out at the window, at the cherry blossom tree.

"Do you think I'll live long enough to see the cherry blossoms bloom, Minami? Do you think that maybe I could graduate school as well?" You whispered and I squeezed your hand at the longing in your voice.

"You'll live long, Atsuko. You'll be able to fight the cancer again. We'll be able to see the cherry blossoms bloom every year." I said, and to be honest, I wasn't sure if I was trying to convince you or myself.

But still you turned back to face me, signaled me to move closer to you and when I did, you planted a kiss on my lips like you always did and gave me a wide grin.

And then you told me to continue talking, because you liked listening to my voice.

♫The area by the classroom window
Is warm and sunny
Not much time left on the spring calendar♫

Now we were third years and we were about to graduate high school in a month. I was worried at first, when you said that no matter what, you still wanted to graduate high school. Though I was worried, you seemed to be doing well with your studies, even better than I was.

Occasionally, I could hear the whispers of our schoolmates, talking about you and I. About how unfortunate we were. But then Yuko would give them a glare and they would shut up and run off. But you still had a smile on your face and ignored them.

♫When I look around in class
All my friends
Wearing the same uniform
Look grown-up♫

You seemed frailer than ever now, but still you were beautiful to me. You were lying in your hospital bed and you were staring out the window again. And I simply studied our held hands, and then I would study your face.

"Hey Minami?" You quietly said, still staring out the window.

"Hm?"

"Whenever the cherry blossom petals bloom, I want you to remember them as me." You turned and looked at me, and I nodded. And then you turned back to the window. After a few more minutes of silence, you asked if we could watch a movie and I let you pick out one and we soon fell asleep, cuddled together in each others arms like old times with the movie still playing softly in the background.

♫We’re all going to set out
To our respective futures
We have
The wings of dreams
On our backs♫

When it was the day before graduation, you insisted that you wanted to go to school and personally receive it. You even started to cry a little when your mother tried to talk you out of it. In the end she agreed.

On the day of our graduation, you put on your uniform with the help of your mother, and then I carried you and gently placed you down on the wheelchair.

"I feel like a princess when Minami carries me like that~" You said with a huge smile and giggled and I blushed. I took the blanket your mother held out to me and placed it over your lap. You protested saying you didn't need it but you let me do it anyway.

We arrived at school late but nobody minded. Yuko and the others met us outside the school hall and opened the doors for you and I.

We had interrupted the principal's speech but nobody said anything as our friends led us over to our seats with our class. I sat beside you and then the principal continued his speech and you rested your head on mine and wove your fingers through mine.

I couldn't pay attention when all I could think about was how thin you had gotten. I quickly shook the thought out of my mind and tried to pay attention to what the principal was talking about.

The only thing I managed to catch from his speech was something about cherry blossoms.

"The cherry blossoms are blooming now. And cherry blossoms are the bookmark in our hearts," He'd said and you repeated it and whispered to me that you liked that sentence.

Soon after, it was time to receive our certificate and our class was up first. We watched as our classmates went up one by one to receive it and you were talking about how proud you were of them and how glad you were that you were in this class.

Then it was your turn and silence suddenly fell upon the hall as the principal called out your name and everyone watched as I got up and wheeled you to the stage.

He was going to bend down and give it to you but you stopped him and told me to help you up and I protested for a moment before you gave me those puppy dog eyes.

I sighed and helped you up, holding onto your arm as you smiled at the principal and received your certificate and then even managed to bow at him and the rest of the students before slowly sitting back down into the wheelchair.

You were breathing hard and I quickly pushed you back to our seats and handed you a bottle of water and you drank it, thanking me.

♫When I look back, both my joy and sadness
Have left a road
I was never
Alone♫

After all the classes have received their certificates, the principal once more congratulating us before letting us go. Our teacher suggested that since the cherry blossoms were blooming, we should take a picture outside with it. Everyone immediately turned to look at the two of us, silently asking if we were okay with it.

"I don't thi-" I started to say but you placed your hand on mine to stop me.

"Sure, let's take our last picture together as a class!" You smiled at them and looked up at me with eyes that told me to go agree with her. I nodded and smiled to assure her I wasn't upset.

Everyone slowly walked out, with our friends beside us and talking about their plans now that they've graduated. You were listening enthusiastically to them, though I could see you were clearly exhausted, you still talked cheerfully with them, even promising to make plans to meet them in the future. At that, I felt tears well up in my eyes.

I wanted to desperately believe that you truly were going to be able to beat the cancer again but I knew, our friends knew, at one look that you were losing the fight.

And no matter how much any of us desperately wished and pleaded to God that you were going to win this fight, we knew that you were losing and we couldn't do anything about it.

We reached the huge cherry blossom tree and watched as the crowd of parents as well as students that were in front of it slowly part to make way for us. We walked towards the tree and you thanking them along with our classmates.

We got into three rows, you and I were in the middle and you laced our hands together and we all smiled as our teacher counted down before taking the picture.

♫I smile
In our graduation photo
I want to watch
The seasons go by
Goodbye♫

A day after that, you fell into worse conditions than you were before and you were always sleeping when I visited at the hospital. Occasionally you woke up when one of our friends visited and you greeted them before you'd let out a ragged breath and fell back asleep.

"I'm always tired and sometimes it hurts, but if Minami is here with me, I can bear with it." You told me during one of the rare times you were awake enough. At that I broke down and sobbed into our held hands and you started to cry as well.

"I'm so sorry Minami, I'm sorry you fell in love with some-" You started to say through your tears and I stopped you.

"No, don't apologize Atsuko. I'm actually glad I fell in love with you, I don't think I'd love someone else as much as I love you. Remember that." I told you and started to hum a tune and you slowly calmed down and fell asleep soon after. I looked out of the window that you liked so much, and found that the sakura tree outside was also blooming, with petals floating in the wind. A few petals even managed to fly in and land by your bedside.

When you woke up after that and saw the petals in the wind, you told me you wanted to go out and see that tree. I protested saying that you shouldn't go out, your body is weak. But you looked me straight in the eyes and said,

"Minami, I can feel it."

My breathing stopped for a moment before I nodded. I went to request for a wheelchair and when the nurse brought it into the room, she gave me a small smile.

I carried you onto the wheelchair and you muttered something about feeling like a princess once again and giggling and I smiled as I placed a blanket over your lap. You pulled along your iv as we went out of the room, we came across your mother but she didn't say anything to stop us instead she smiled and patted you on the head before continuing on to your room.

It was like she knew as well.

When we reached the tree, and you spotted a bench in front of it and pointed towards it and I pushed us over. We admired the petals that were floating in the wind for a minute or two before you spoke again.

"Minami, I want to sit on the bench, please." You turned to look at me and I smiled and nodded before carefully lifting you up and onto the bench. You pulled on my arm and then told me to sit with you and I did.

I wrapped my arms around you and you rested your head on my right shoulder. We sat there for a while just like this, watching the cherry blossom petals float into the sky and then down to the ground.

"Minami, I'll miss you.." It was barely a whisper but I heard it and my breath stopped. "I love you, Minami." You said and looked at me.

"I love you too, Atsuko." I replied, giving you a dimpled smile and you grinned and motioned me to put my face closer with trembling fingers. I did as requested and just like the many times before, you pecked me on the lips, slightly longer than any of the previous times and with much more love in it.

You then turned your attention back to the tree and once again a comfortable silence fell upon us.

"Sing a song, Minami. I want to listen to your voice." You whispered, intertwining our hands and placing them on your lap and then closed your eyes as I started to sing.

And a few moments later, I choked up and started to cry as I felt your grip on my hand loosen and felt you let out your last breath.I immediately hugged your body tighter to me and started to wail and watched through blurry eyes as a few petals floated over and landed on your still body.

"I already miss you Atsuko," I choked out, my tears falling onto your head.

♫Petals of tears fall
Down my cheeks as I walk away
As I look up at the blue sky
And take a big, deep breath
Petals of tears fall
As beautiful as my memories
Let’s wave as we walk up the stairway to adulthood together♫

I placed the bouquet of flowers on top of your grave and brushed away the dirt that had gotten onto the gravestone. And I sang softly, the song that you last heard.

Maeda Atsuko

July 10 1991 - March 24 2009

Beloved daughter, friend and girlfriend

"You're here as well, Minami?" Yuko's voice came from behind and I turned to see her and her girlfriend, Haruna. I smiled and nodded and moved aside as they set down their bouquet of flowers they brought. They bowed and Yuko and squatted down before touching the gravestone with her fingertips and whispering to it.

I watched as the cherry blossom petals that Atsuko loved floated down onto her grave from the tree that her grave was planted beside, some landing on the three of us, as if it was Atsuko saying hello to us.

I smiled and closed my eyes, feeling the wind once again around me.

"I miss you Atsuko," I breathed out in a whisper and then opened my eyes and saw Yuko and Haruna looking away as if to give me some privacy with her.

I moved to be in front of the grave again and like Yuko did before, reaching out my hand and letting my fingers stroke the smooth stone.

"I wonder, if Heaven is nice for you right now... I think it's nice isn't it?" I paused for a moment before continuing. "I'll come and visit again next week, okay? I'm going to go now. I love you forever, Atsuko." I finished and stood up and walked over to the couple and I gave a wave to the grave before walking out of the cemetery.

"How are you doing, Minami?" Yuko asked as we walked into a cafe.

"Fine, Miichan gave me a job at her cafe so it's good that I've got money to cover my rent." I answered and I looked at the menu as we sat down.

"What about.. love life?" Yuko cautiously asked and Haruna elbowed her.

"It's okay, Haruna. I have no interest in dating, Yuko. I don't think I'll find anyone more special than Atsuko." I answered with a smile then turned to the waitress and ordered Katsudon.

"Ahh," Yuko simply said before she and Haruna ordered too. Then the couple began to talk and I looked out of the shop's window.

For a moment there, I saw Atsuko standing in front of the glass, holding a few cherry blossom petals in her hand and she smiled at me.

"I love you, Minami." She mouthed before she faded into petals.

I smiled.


♫When the cherry blossom petals bloom
I can hear the bells of hope ringing somewhere
Giving us the freedom and courage
Of tomorrow
When the cherry blossom petals bloom
Someone is surely praying somewhere
To open the door to a new world with their own hands♫



"I love you too, Atsuko."




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HOW WAS THAT ANGST FOR YOU GUYS BC IT WAS HORRIBLE ON ME

I was crying while writing this but I had to get the angst out of my system oh god. :mon runcry:

Also I will write a second part for Fragments of You and I since some people wanted it but it will take a while~

BUT HERE TAKE THIS ANGSTY OS INSTEAD

I'll run before people kill me for this angst  :pen_whirl:
Title: Re: « chrunoi's OS area: #2 - When The Cherry Blossom Petals Bloom [Angst] »
Post by: Kairi65 on September 24, 2014, 03:18:35 PM
sobs...too sad and angsty! are you trying to kill me?! :pleeease: :gyaaah: :bleed eyes:

do update the second part of fragments of you and i! gotta to love it~!! :farofflook:
Title: Re: « chrunoi's OS area: #2 - When The Cherry Blossom Petals Bloom [Angst] »
Post by: cisda83 on September 24, 2014, 07:53:12 PM
Such a bittersweet love story...

Like how Minami was there all the one for Atsuko

Even after her death...

She just seems to live everyday just to be there for Atsuko even after her death...

Just waiting and live her life until she can join Atsuko later after her death

Minami is so faithful toward Atsuko... by saying not interested in love, 'there is no one other than Atsuko for her'

Well somehow Minami is not moving on with her life just drifting... or going with the flow....

But at least she is not suicidal... just hanging... surviving each day until her time to join Atsuko naturally

Very good OS there... Like it lots...

Thank you for the meaningful story

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: « chrunoi's OS area: #2 - When The Cherry Blossom Petals Bloom [Angst] »
Post by: chrunoi on September 26, 2014, 02:12:11 PM


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Title: Re: « chrunoi's OS area: #3 - Experiment Q10 [crack pairing I think] »
Post by: Kairi65 on September 26, 2014, 05:10:04 PM
hmm, quite a rare pairing to see..

but, the story's interesting though :thumbsup
Title: Re: « chrunoi's OS area: #3 - Experiment Q10 [crack pairing I think] »
Post by: MYJR on September 29, 2014, 10:32:02 AM
Hoho... I like this "trash" nyaa~ :cathappy:

crack pairing my favourite :twisted:
don't know why... I just want to laugh like Mariko right now

continue part 2 nyaa~ :cathappy:
Title: Re: « chrunoi's OS area: #3 - Experiment Q10 [crack pairing I think] »
Post by: ptrd3009 on September 29, 2014, 07:29:59 PM
so good  :lol: can i request atsuyuu?
Title: Re: « chrunoi's OS area: #3 - Experiment Q10 [crack pairing I think] »
Post by: MaYukiIsLife on September 29, 2014, 07:40:26 PM
Can I request YukiMilky? :heart:
Title: Re: « chrunoi's OS area: #3 - Experiment Q10 [crack pairing I think] »
Post by: chrunoi on September 30, 2014, 02:31:27 PM

Warning: extremely short nonsensical one-shot


° Junai no Crescendo °



Kai looked out of the car into the rainy street.

He didn't know what possessed him to even drive in this rainy weather, much less to Kabukicho.


The red light district


If any of his friends knew he went to Kabukicho, knowingly or not, they were going to tease him until the end of the world.

He looked out once more, slowly driving along, there were certainly many clubs and bars around, the neon signs standing out in the rain. Though it was often called the 'Sleepless Town', the rain had driven almost everyone indoors, with nobody on the streets.

What am I thinking anyway, who would be out here on the streets in the heavy rain? Kai scolded himself as he continued to drive slowly.

The rain was slowly letting up every once in a while but then it'd be heavy again.

Kai sighed once again and drove slightly faster, wanting to get out of Kabukicho before he spotted something.

No, someone.

Her back was facing Kai, her short hair just above her shoulders, and she had a shawl wrapped around her upper body. She also had on a rather short dress and heels and Kai realized why the girl was in the streets.

A prostitute.

Kai slowed down the car's speed and continued to watch the lone girl. She was simply standing on the streets, seemingly not caring about the rain as she was soaked through. She raised her head slightly up to the night sky and Kai watched the street light cast its light onto her face and Kai was surprised to see how beautiful she was.

After few minutes, Kai drove slowly and stopped beside the girl.

The rain had once again became lighter, almost a drizzle now.

The girl turned to look at Kai, before giving a small somewhat bitter smile and walked over to his side of the car and Kai rolled down his window.

"Company or more?" She asked in a soft voice as she bent down to look in.

Kai looked down and thought for a moment.

"Company," He replied just as quietly and she nodded and walked over to the passenger side of the car. Kai unlocked the car and watched as she sat her soaked form in his seat, not minding that she was ruining his seat.

He started to drive, the rain once again becoming heavy. He didn't know why he'd asked her for company, perhaps he was getting tired of being the fifth wheel among his friends who had girlfriends. Or perhaps it was because she was simply standing in the rain and she looked lonely.

They quietly drove back to Kai's apartment and he let her in.

The girl peeled her wet shawl from her body and folded it and placed it on a table before starting to remove her dress.

"W-wait! D-don't undress," Kai stuttered, slightly blushing as she had the top of her dress already pushed down with her bra showing.

"This is what you picked me up for, right? Why are you embarrassed?" The girl said, slightly amused at Kai attempting to shield his eyes.

"I meant it when I said I wanted your company only," He stuttered out and she stared at him for a few moments before nodding but still not making a move to put the top of her dress back up.

"Which is your room?" She asked and he pointed to one of the doors and she walked towards it and opened it and went inside. Kai followed after a few moments and found her looking through his closet and then taking out a shirt and boxers.

And to Kai's embarrassment once again, she pushed her dress down to the ground, leaving her only in her underwear and then she proceeded to put on his oversized shirt and boxers. She then sat down on his bed and removed her heels, setting them aside.

"Are you just going to stand there?" She asked him with a small smile.

"I don't know what to do," He muttered and fidgeted slightly before realizing that he didn't even ask for her name. How stupid! Kai mentally smacked himself. "What's your name by the way? I'm Kai," he asked her and watched as she seemed to think for a moment before answering.

"Atsuko," She finally said and then patted the space beside her on the bed, signaling for Kai to join her. He did as she asked but sat at the head of the bed instead and then motioned for her to join him which she did.

Atsuko then rested her head on his shoulder and the two let a comfortable silence settle between them.

"How come you didn't want more than company? That's what people go to Kabukicho for," She asked him in a soft voice and he thought for a moment.

"Because I don't want to use you in that way. I simply wanted company that's all," Kai answered honestly and Atsuko let out a small chuckle.

"Company? Company from a prostitute?" She sounded bitter and he turned to face her, gently holding her chin to look her directly in the eyes.

"It doesn't matter who I seek company from, right now you're just a normal girl to me," Kai told her and he saw a bit of tears welling up in her eyes and she tried to push him away but Kai just pulled her closer, hugging her to his chest.

"I'm far from normal, Kai." Atsuko whispered, her voice shaky and her grip tightened on his shirt. Kai heard his name from her lips for the first time and he liked how it sounded from her lips.

"You're normal to me, Atsuko. It doesn't matter what you do, if you want, you could just let it all out," Kai whispered into her ear and he heard her let out a breath and then she hiccuped and started to cry.

Kai started to rub her back, whispering soothing words into her ears. And soon enough, her tears subsided into sniffles and she pushed herself away from Kai's chest.

"I had to do it because I was abandoned and living on the streets, it was the only way I had to surive." Atsuko curled into a ball, facing Kai spilling her life story to this stranger who just picked her up and simply wanted her company. "It was the only way I knew how to survive." She whispered.

Kai felt sorry that she had to do such things to survive on the streets, it shouldn't happen to anyone. He pulled her to his chest again but this time they were lying on the bed.

"You don't have to do it anymore, you know. You're an adult now aren't you? You could get a normal job," Kai suggested softly and she shook her head.

"I couldn't get a job, nobody wanted to hire me," Atsuko answered, burying her face into Kai's chest further. Kai in turn stroked her back and head, once again whispering soothing things.

"You could get off the streets, I would let you stay here and get you a job, you know?" Kai suggested and Atsuko looked up at him and let out a small laugh.

"You're willing to let someone stay here even though you just met them an hour ago and you only know their names?" She asked him and he blushed slightly.

"I somehow feel I can trust you," Kai shyly muttered out, feeling embarrassed all of a sudden.

"You shouldn't trust people so easily, Kai, there also bad people in this world." Atsuko said and shifted herself to make herself more comfortable in Kai's arms.

"I don't trust a lot of people easily but you make me feel calm so.." Kai muttered out. Atsuko did really make him feel calm and that was rare. He felt so at peace with her in his arms and he didn't want anything else.

He looked down when he didn't receive an answer and smiled.

Atsuko was asleep, her breathing even and her face looked like she was at peace and free from troubles of having to scrap enough money to get by.

Kai carefully leaned down slightly and kissed her on the forehead before snuggling closer, careful not to wake her up and soon enough he fell asleep listening to rain outside the window.

° °° ° °° °

I don't know what I just wrote  :depressed:

But I was listening to Junai no Crescendo and I wanted to write a lil OS or maybe even a short fic on it but somehow my idea didn't really come together so just have this that somehow popped out of my head  :ptam-glow:

I will work on my part two of both the one-shots soon before I write requests or any OS ideas.... hopefully  :mon sweat:
Title: Re: « chrunoi's OS area: #4 - Junai no Crescendo »
Post by: chrunoi on October 07, 2014, 10:13:34 AM

Based off of the drama, SPEC though its a OS so it's just really one case because I don't think I'd be able to write a full length fic of this but yep.

Preview of chrunoi's new OS:

UNIT: 48


Takahashi Minami sighed. It's been a week since she was transferred to Unit 48 but it was just a nice way of putting it. The fact was that because she fought and talked back with the chief of her unit, she ended up coming to this new unit that she didn't even know nor want to work in. Though this past week she had learnt bits about the Unit. Such as it was mostly made up of people that were troublemakers in the police department though most of them were geniuses or had a special talent in something.

It was also a unit that most people avoid considering how their "office" is really just in the basement of the police department though thankfully it was huge.

"Oi Takamidget," Yuko called from her desk and Minami grumbled slightly about the nickname but nodded for Yuko to continue. "We've got a new case." At that news, Minami let out a sigh. As much as she liked solving cases, the police department threw cases at them that were usually either from years ago or ones that they can't really solve and just decided to leave the dirty work to them.

"Also, they're assigning someone new to this unit," Yuko added and at that news Minami perked up from making coffee. Someone new? "They're coming right about now." Yuko finished before turning back to her magazine.

Just as she finished, the lift outside the door dinged and everyone in the office looked at the door. A moment later, a short haired girl stepped in. She wore a long sleeve collared shirt, suspender skirt as well as thigh high socks along with floral combat boots. An outfit that certainly did not match this dingy office. Everyone here was dressed in jackets and jeans or something comfortable.

"This is Unit 48's office?" The girl asked and looked around as she took a lollipop and unwrapped it before putting it in her mouth. Minami nodded slowly.

"Great! I'm Maeda Atsuko, the new girl." Maeda said with a smile before walking over to Minami's desk and sat on top of it.

"I look forward to working with you all~" Maeda sang out before placing the lollipop back into her mouth and looking through papers on top of Minami's desk.

'Oh boy' Minami thought. More and more weird people were coming to this Unit and Minami wasn't sure whether it was a good or bad thing.
Title: Re: « chrunoi's OS area: #5 - UNIT: 48 [Preview] »
Post by: Kairi65 on October 07, 2014, 10:29:18 AM
sounds interesting.. :roll:

will you make it to a proper fic..? :D :bow:
Title: Re: « chrunoi's OS area: #5 - UNIT: 48 [Preview] »
Post by: chrunoi on October 08, 2014, 12:11:04 PM

@Kairi65: I actually wanted to make this as a normal fic but I can't think up of a plot line and I doubt I'd be able to write action scenes well enough that's why it ended up being a one-shot in the making! However, I may post multiple parts of this perhaps as a second case or something similar? I'm not sure but that's probably what I'll do!  :hee:
Title: Re: « chrunoi's OS area: #5 - UNIT: 48 [Preview] »
Post by: chrunoi on October 14, 2014, 02:34:05 PM

Warning: Short and not very well written OS I'm very sorry



Cupid's Club                       
                                                           
Where love could sneak up on you


Yuko laughed when she saw the card Minami had given to her. She knew Minami owned a club but she didn't know that she had such a lame tagline for it. But it apparently wasn't lame to the large crowd of people lined up outside the club.

Heck, Yuko knew it was popular but not this popular!

Yuko walked to the front of the line, with several people grumbling about her, and asked to be let in.

"Name?" The security guard asked and she gave it to him. He checked his clipboard and then nodded, and allowed her inside. Before Yuko went in, she stuck her tongue out at the people waiting in line before skipping in and upon hearing them grumble again she let out a laugh.

She squeezed her way through the crowd of dancing people, grimacing a little when her arms touched another person's sweaty skin. Yuko spotted Minami standing next to Atsuko, who was a waiter in Minami's club, waving to her. Yuko smiled and quickly continued to squeeze her out and let out a brief sigh of relief at having her own personal bubble back before skipping over to the two.

"Bakamina! Didn't know your club was this popular!" Yuko said and hugged the two though Minami grumbled about the nickname.

"Come on, let's go meet up with our friends," Atsuko interrupted Minami's grumbling, grabbing Minami's hand and motioned for Yuko to follow her as she walked into the VIP area and headed towards an area at the back that was sectioned off. It seemed like it was an area meant for the owner and friends.

Yuko was officially impressed with Minami's club.

"We're back guys~" Atsuko said as she approached a table in the middle that had several people sitting there. Yuko spotted Mariko and Miichan along with Tomochin and Chiyuu and someone else who she couldn't see.

"The guest finally arrived huh?" Mariko said smiling as she moved to the side to allow the three to sit at table.

"Yup, the star of the night is finally here!" Yuko announced and bowed before sitting. She looked around and stared at the unknown girl who was sitting opposite Yuko for a long time, breaking it to stare at Minami and slightly nod her head towards the girl. Minami let out a 'o' and proceeded to introduce her.

"Yuko! You haven't met KojiHaru before right? Yuko, this is Kojima Haruna and Haruna this is Oshima Yuko. You might know Haruna from some magazines before she does modelling!" Minami finished and gave a wide smile that Yuko nor Haruna seemed to acknowledge. Yuko grinned, she had observed Haruna and found her breast size how she liked it.

Haruna seemed to be spacing out, seeing as their friends started a conversation while Haruna looked up at the ceiling with a rather blank look on her face. Yuko had continued her rather creepy observation for quite a while before Haruna finally realized something.

"You've finally come back to reality huh?" Yuko said with a grin and Haruna tilted her head and Yuko came to a realization.

Shes like a cat. I've got the perfect nickname for her!

"I'm Yuko! Nice to meet you, Nyannyan!" Yuko said with a huge smile, feeling satisfied at her nicknaming skills.

"Nyannyan?" Haruna asked with a small pout and Yuko suddenly felt like the girl in those shoujo mangas when her heart started to speed up a little.

"Yes! It's a nickname I've just come up with for you! Because you remind me of a cat," Yuko explained and Haruna clapped her hands together and smiled.

"Ohhh! That's creative. Nice to meet you too. Ah everyone left us to dance.." Haruna said, realizing only now that she was left alone with Yuko.

"Ah is that so?" Yuko hadn't realized it as well, being caught up in her nicknaming thoughts. "Ah they did. Oh well. This reminds me, are you single?" Yuko supposed she was taking a slight risk by just straight out asking the question on her mind but this was a good way to ask since everyone was dancing with their girlfriends.

"Me? Oh no. I haven't really met anyone special yet," Haruna answered and gave Yuko a dazzling smile and Yuko could feel her face heating up with a blush. "Are you alright? Your face seems really red.." Haruna asked in concern, leaning close to Yuko's face and Yuko blushed even harder.

"I'm f-fine!" Yuko stuttered and in an attempt to lightly push away Haruna, she ended up grabbing one of Haruna's breast. Yuko shrieked slightly in both joy and slight horror before quickly pulling her hand back and standing up.

"I'm so sorry! I didn't mean to do that!" Yuko quickly apologized though inside she was rejoicing at that few moments she had held Haruna's boob. It was as great as I thought it'd be ahhhhh!! Haruna looked at Yuko surprised at her outburst and then let out a smile.

"It's okay! Don't feel so bad. Come sit back down!" Haruna patted the seat beside her and immediately Yuko sat next to her and snuggled up to her. Yuko could not resist the urge anymore. Yuko was worried for a moment that Haruna would push her away but instead she felt a pat on her head and looked up to see Haruna smiling at her.

"OOOO looks like some people have been getting cozy eh?" Mariko's voice came from behind and Yuko turned to see her friends standing behind her with a grin on their faces. Yuko stuck out her tongue and clung to Haruna more but Haruna was somewhat embarrassed now as their friends started to tease the two and she tried to pull away from Yuko.

"Stop pushing me away Nyannyan! Don't deny the attraction!" Yuko declared and everyone laughed as Haruna whacked Yuko on the head though Yuko smiled when she saw a blush forming on Haruna's face as well. After a while more of talking, everyone was starting to get tired and decided to head home.

Though it was in the early morning hours, the club still seemed full and lively and Yuko wondered where did these people get all that energy from. Almost everyone of her friends left, Minami and Atsuko had stayed in the club but moved to Minami's office to do what? Yuko didn't know.

Yuko moved to stand next to Haruna who was grabbing her handbag and then blocked her way as Haruna tried to get up.

"Yuko? What are you doing?" Haruna asked confused.

"Um Nyannyan I was just thinking that we should meet up again and get closer! But I don't have your number to do that.." Yuko was not as subtle as she hoped to be in asking her number but Haruna didn't seem to mind since she clapped her hands and let out a 'ahh!' and reached into her bag for her phone.

"Of course! Here's my number and tell me yours!" And the two exchanged their numbers and then with one last hug from Yuko which resulted in a light smack on the head (she'd tried to grope Haruna's breast again), the two exchanged goodbyes as well.

Yuko watched as Haruna got into a taxi and waved to her from inside which she returned and then reached into her bag for her car keys. She ended up pulling the card of the club that Minami had given to her and she laughed.


'Where love could sneak up on you' huh? Who knew that that would be true.' Yuko thought and then unlocked her car and proceeded to send a goodnight message to Haruna before driving home with a smile on her face.


- - - - - - - -

Not very romantic of me I know but I've been promising to get up some one-shots so yep  :sweat:

Sorry if it's not good enough for you  :OMG:

I'll hopefully update some better OS soon! :on roll:

I'll maybe edit this tomorrow to make it more interesting ahh  :mon trudge:
Title: Re: « chrunoi's OS area: #6 - Cupid's Club [Kojiyuu] »
Post by: ChibiRine on October 14, 2014, 04:03:57 PM
I LOVE IT~! :mon inluv:

Waifuuuuuu, you should teach me about your writing skills~ :glasses:

Short or not, it's awesome! :mon thumb:
Title: Re: « chrunoi's OS area: #6 - Cupid's Club [Kojiyuu] »
Post by: atsukojiyuu_C on October 14, 2014, 06:27:22 PM
Chrunoi-san, are you sure *cough* this is just *cough* ...an OS? *cough*

Ugh cute KojiYuu!! >w<

More! More! Hhahahaha no offense though. Just keep the great works XD
Title: Re: « chrunoi's OS area: #6 - Cupid's Club [Kojiyuu] »
Post by: Kairi65 on October 16, 2014, 06:18:17 PM
Short or not, it's awesome! :mon thumb:

fully agreed~!! :onioncheer: :sleep:
Title: Re: « chrunoi's OS area: #6 - Cupid's Club [Kojiyuu] »
Post by: love angel on October 17, 2014, 12:01:11 PM

 author san for the Junai no Crescendo
 hmm...can I have the part 2???
 But if you can't it's okay
 Sorry for my bad grammar  :sweatdrop:
Title: Re: « chrunoi's OS area: #6 - Cupid's Club [Kojiyuu] »
Post by: Haruko on October 18, 2014, 06:18:36 AM
aww kojiyuu
Title: Re: « chrunoi's OS area: #6 - Cupid's Club [Kojiyuu] »
Post by: chrunoi on October 20, 2014, 11:01:47 AM
@ChibiRine: Thank you waifuuu~  :mon inluv:

"@atsukojiyuu_c: It's a OS I just didn't know how to continue  :mon sweat: I will write more kojiyuu don't worry!  :mon beam:

@love angel: Sorry for late reply! I will write a part 2 for it since you requested for it though it may take a while like my other part 2s...  :mon sweat:


Cafe AKB - Part 1 [ Atsuyuu Request ]

"Why are you bringing me there again?" Yuko asked Minami who was playing a game on the phone. She looked up when Yuko asked her the question.

"Why not! Their katsudon is good! Trust me on this. You'll definitely love it," Minami assured her which didn't reassure Yuko. They were taking an escalator up to the eight floor of this shopping mall in Akihabara which Yuko didn't even know about but apparently it was famous.

"Cafe AKB?" Yuko read out as they arrived on the eight floor. She looked around in awe at the entire floor which had a somewhat of a waiting area which led to a cafe. Not just any old cafe.

A maid cafe.

This was like Yuko's just made up dream come true. Then she realized something and tugged on Minami's arm.

"Are you saying you've been coming to a maid cafe?" Yuko asked incredulously. She just remembered that Minami had talked about how their katsudon is good which means that Minami has been coming here for quite a while. Never in a million years Yuko thought that Minami would get the courage to go near a maid cafe, let alone eat in one.

"Umm Haruna told me to come try it and I can't say no.." Minami quietly explained, a blush forming from embarrassment. She had been hoping Yuko wasn't that bright to catch on to what she had said but obviously it failed.

Yuko wanted to laugh out loud at Minami's embarrassment but since there were a lot of people near her, she attempted to muffle the laughter with a hand. Yuko looked at the wall of photos on the wall to the left, going closer for a better look.

"Hey, they have like Top Maid and such? Wow this is.. grand," Yuko admitted. And Minami joined her. There were two neat rows consisting of 9 photos while there was a much bigger picture of a pretty girl surrounded by flowers.

"Oh yeah. Maeda Atsuko is the top. She's most requested and basically, you can't get her if you don't make a reservation and pay a hefty sum for it. She's pretty much exclusively for VIPs in a sense." Minami explained and Yuko stared at her in wonder.

"How did you even know that?" Yuko asked and Minami continued to look at the pictures.

"Haruna is the manager here. Though she's not exactly responsible.. More like the cover manager, someone else is doing all the paperwork and things," Minami explained and then went back to pull Yuko up to door of the cafe.

"Hey Takamina~ Yuko~ Who do you want?" Haruna greeted with a beaming smile and Yuko wanted to reach for her chest but held herself back.

"Um who do you want Yuko?" Minami turned to ask her and pointed to the wall of photos.

"I want hm... I don't know! There's too many choices!" Yuko whined and the other two laughed.

"How about you guys just go over to the table over there and I'll get a maid over. It's like a surprise~" Haruna offered and the two agreed, following her instructions and headed over to the table.

"Welcome back to Cafe AKB~ I'm Maeda Atsuko nyaa~!" A voice came from Yuko's left and she looked up at the cutest maid she'd ever seen. Her mouth was open and Atsuko placed menus down on their table and Yuko watched her every move. Atsuko was wearing the usual maid outfit along with cat ears and a rinbbon with a bell around her neck.

"What would you like to order? Perhaps our omelette rice? I'll write anything you want on it too~ Or maybe even me nya?" Atsuko said with a teasing grin as she bent forward and leaned towards Yuko.

"I'll take you thanks." Yuko immediately replied and Minami reached over to smack her across the head. "What was that for?! She offered!" Yuko told Minami while rubbing the side of her head but turned towards Atsuko with a huge smile when she heard giggles.

"If you want me, you'll have to pay a lot~ Anyway, what would you like?" Atsuko asked once more with a smile and took down their orders and turn to leave but not without feeling a hand on her butt. She turned around in time to see Yuko quickly retracting her hand and avoiding Minami's hands that were trying to smack her once more. Atsuko blew a kiss over to Yuko who enthusiastically grabbed at the air and she laughed before continuing on to the kitchen.

After about 10 minutes, Atsuko went back to their table along with their food. She placed the omelette rice that had boobs along with several hearts drawn in ketchup in front of Yuko and a big bowl of katsudon in front of Minami.

"Enjoy your food nya~ Do you want anything else?" Atsuko asked, staring at Yuko.

"Your number? God Takamidget stop being so violent!" Yuko exclaimed as she rubbed her sore head once more. Atsuko giggled before leaning close to Yuko's face.

"You want my number~?" Atsuko asked in a whisper and Yuko nodded her head furiously and Atsuko grinned. "What are you going to do? I don't freely give out my number to people, even if they're friends with Haruna~" Atsuko told Yuko and pulled back and watched Yuko who was now thinking hard.

"I'll come here every week?" Yuko finally suggested and Atsuko pretended to think for a moment before she shook her head.

"Only every week?" Atsuko asked with a pout and Yuko felt her face heat up.

"Well... I'm pretty sure I can't come here everyday though I want to.." Yuko muttered and Atsuko moved closer to Yuko and somehow managed to plop herself on Yuko's lap and wrap her arms around Yuko's neck. Minami watched and she wanted to laugh at Yuko's somewhat flustered expression. Yuko's hands immediately moved on its own to cup Atsuko's butt and Yuko nearly screamed in happiness.

Atsuko watched as Yuko's eyes drifted down to her chest and she laughed when she Yuko's eyes widen. Soon her amusement turned into panic as blood began to drip down Yuko's nose.

"Oh my god! Are you okay?" Atsuko asked and Yuko snapped out of perverted trance and put a hand to her nose.

"Don't worry, this happens to Yuko all the time the moment anyone's boobs is so close to her face," Minami assured Atsuko who nodded but still looked concerned.

"The midget's right. I'm fine, don't worry!" Yuko told Atsuko who then smiled and placed a quick kiss on Yuko's cheek before getting up from her lap and then gave a wave to the two short girls before skipping (somewhat) away to serve other customers.

Yuko placed a hand on her cheek and let out a happy sigh before scooping up some omelette rice and eating it. Minami watched as her friend seemed to be in lala land from that simple kiss.

"Wow you're really into her huh?" Minami asked and Yuko turned to her with a huge grin.

"Yep!" Yuko answered without hesitation.

"But isn't her boob size smaller than what you like?" Minami asked curiously. Yuko always talked about her preferred breast sizes and to Minami's knowledge, Yuko liked girls with Haruna's breast size though thankfully she didn't go after Haruna much.

"Yeah! But well I can make an exception. She's cute! No offense but even cuter than Haruna in a way~ I think I'm not going to wash this cheek for a week.." Yuko muttered towards the end and now Minami was questioning whether to laugh or be somewhat freaked out.

"What? Are you serious?"

"Trust me, Takamina. I'm almost always serious but this is the most serious I've ever been. I'm going to get Atsuko to like me. I'll chase her until she likes me~" Yuko said with a dreamy sigh, once more fantasizing about Atsuko being her girlfriend.

"Yeah okay you're being very creepy though, Yuko." Minami told her and Yuko narrowed her eyes slightly.

"It's not creepy, Takamina. It's called love!"

- - - - -

"You have your eye on someone now, Acchan? That's rare." Haruna asked Atsuko who was staring at the two midgets.

"Mhm." Atsuko simply answered, not bothering to form a sentence. Haruna patted Atsuko on the back with a smile.

"Okay, but go easy on the teasing hm?"

"Ehh? Well I guess I'll try? Though I think Yuko, her name was it?, would enjoy it," Atsuko replied Haruna with a grin. Haruna turned back to greet new customers and Atsuko saw Yuko and Minami look over to where she was.

She gave a wave and a wink to the two and laughed when Yuko waved back enthusiastically and started to bounce in her seat and swinging Minami's hand up and down like a child.

I'm going to have so much fun from now on~ Atsuko thought with a smile and then proceeded to make a list of what she could do to tease Yuko.

- - - - - - -

Uh uh don't look at me I don't know what I just wrote...

Somehow it feels weird to write Atsuyuu though I love them tons...

I hope this OS didn't turn out too weird  :OMG:

Title: Re: « chrunoi's OS area: Cafe AKB - Part 1 [Atsuyuu Request] »
Post by: AshuraX on October 20, 2014, 02:13:34 PM
I kept pressing the Thanks button and just realized there's an 'Undo'. Good thing though. The button would be broken by now. Either that or my mouse will.

AAAAAANYWAY, this is pretty cute. I like how you're just testing the pairings, not really thinking about those 'doki doki' shoujo moments. I see that you're not too much of an AtsuYuu fan too but the way you portray the pair is perfect! (BTW, at this point I had to bang my head to the table multiple times to focus and NOT look at that pyon pyon Acchan GIF... WHY IS SHE SO CUTE?!)

You should make a sequel out of this. There's a lot of people I know that would LOVE to read more AtsuYuu (that is not from me because I'm such an illiterate). I expect a lot of things from you. Though if you don't want to, that's completely okay. AtsuYuu isn't your favorite pair anyway xD

I- It's not like I want you to write or anything!
Title: Re: « chrunoi's OS area: Cafe AKB - Part 1 [Atsuyuu Request] »
Post by: Kairi65 on October 20, 2014, 07:10:03 PM
I'm more of an atsumina shipper but reading this fic leaves me... :wub: :inlove:

Are you going to make more, author san?

Waiting for an update~ regardless which fic :deco:
Title: Re: « chrunoi's OS area: Cafe AKB - Part 1 [Atsuyuu Request] »
Post by: jenzybenzy on October 21, 2014, 04:03:05 AM
want....more..... :drool:
Title: Re: « chrunoi's OS area: Cafe AKB - Part 1 [Atsuyuu Request] »
Post by: ChibiRine on October 21, 2014, 02:46:03 PM
Waifuuuuuuuuu~! Like I said your works are awesome~ :mon inluv:

I ship KojiYuu and AtsuMina, but reading your OS is kinda something :mon innocent:

It's not what you think! :mon zoom:

As usual, you always left me with an 'awe' on my face because of your works :on gay:
Title: Re: « chrunoi's OS area: Cafe AKB - Part 1 [Atsuyuu Request] »
Post by: chrunoi on October 26, 2014, 08:24:27 AM

To Be Rewritten As "Memories".
Title: Re: « chrunoi's OS area: To You, In Another Life [Part 1] »
Post by: ChibiRine on October 26, 2014, 08:49:04 AM
Tch. Takamina, doesn't need to be nervous because she's a man. :mon inluv:

As usual, your OSs are one of the best! :mon thumb:

Yuko cares for Takamina eh~? :hehehe:

But the dream, it's really something! :tantrum:
Title: Re: « chrunoi's OS area: To You, In Another Life [Part 1] »
Post by: Kairi65 on October 26, 2014, 09:08:13 AM
the mystery is....want to know more~!!

what happened? is it really their past life..?

update soon! craving for more~!!!
Title: Re: « chrunoi's OS area: To You, In Another Life [Part 1] »
Post by: chrunoi on October 31, 2014, 02:36:00 PM

Based off of Acchan's play! Well the plot of it. More of KojiYuu here than Atsumina it seems oh well at least the KojiYuu makes up for the bad writing?  :mon sweat:

Also if it seems too fast-paced... I'm sorry ; A ;

Taiyou 2068



Maeda Atsuko sighed and paced around in her home. She was worried because her sister, Haruna had failed to come home yet. Though their little town was safe, nobody knows what could happen.

Especially when there was Knox.

Though Knox was only a rumor, but word has it they were just in hiding. Knox were much stronger and smarter than the normal humans, Curio, due to bioterrorism.

Atsuko knew her sister had always wanted to see for herself, a true Knox, despite how much Atsuko protested. Haruna, liked to venture near the dark forest where the rumored Knox hid in since young, while Atsuko was dragged along and tried to persuade her sister to leave and go back. Then their mother would find them and the two would end up punished, including Atsuko who had done nothing wrong at all.

She knew her sister meant no harm and was simply curious, but sometimes, Atsuko hated Haruna's stubbornness and curiosity that led the two into trouble. Atsuko sighed and put on a cardigan and grabbed a small flashlight to guide her way in the dark town.

Atsuko locked the house door and switched on the flashlight before heading down an all too familiar path to the forest.

"Haruna?" Atsuko called softly into the trees and darkness, hoping to make out her sister in it.

"Haruna?" Atsuko called again, voice now slightly shaky as she slowly stepped into the forest. She hated how eerie it was, how silent and cold it was as well. Atsuko also hated the night skies at this moment. Their mother had always told her that the night may be beautiful and calm, but it was also dangerous. And Atsuko fully believed in their mother's words.

Unlike Haruna.

Atsuko kept calling out for Haruna quietly, as much as she wanted to loudly yell for her sister, she was still afraid something might just hear her voice and then come to kill her.

With no sign of Haruna being near her, Atsuko decided to do one thing she truly hated. Going even deeper into the forest. Atsuko took a deep breath and then slowly walked deeper and soon her effort paid off when her flashlight shined onto a little stone path.

What's a stone path doing in the forest..? Nobody said anything about anyone living in the forest except for.. Atsuko quickly pushed her thoughts down. She didn't want to think about the Knox right now. They are just a rumor, She told herself, gathering up her courage once more, she followed the little stone path.

After about a minute of walking, the path led to a little trapdoor in the forest ground. It was somewhat hidden, as Atsuko had kicked away fallen branches and leaves in frustration before she found it. Atsuko wrapped her cardigan a little tighter around herself, before squatting down and reaching for the handle.

"What do you think you're doing?" A voice asked from behind her, sounding somewhat playful, and Atsuko shrieked and then her body did the most logical thing it thought of.

Atsuko fainted.


- - - - - - -


"Welcome back Takam- What are you carrying?" Yuko had heard her friend come home and waited by the steps when her friend, Takahashi Minami, came down with something in her arms.

"A Curio. Like the one you found and turned in the afternoon," Minami replied and led the way to the guest room.

The two lived underground, since Knox were unable to stand the sun. Though it got lonely sometimes, Yuko more than made up for it with her bubbly personality.

Minami laid the Curio girl gently down on the bed and Yuko watched her friend, surprised when the girl ran her hand through the Curio's hair gently and somewhat lovingly.

"Where did you even get her from?" Yuko asked Minami as the two left the room and settled down in the living room.

"I found her outside about to open our door and I simply asked her what she was doing then amazingly, she fainted," Minami explained with a laugh and Yuko laughed as well.

"They're such interesting creatures, aren't they?" Yuko said and Minami nodded and switched on the TV.

"How's Haruna?" Minami asked Yuko who instantly had a huge smile on her face the moment Minami mention the name.

"She's doing so good! Plus I managed to ahem, touch her b-"

"Haruna? You have Haruna?!" A voice interrupted the coversation between the two Knox and Minami turned to look at the owner of it. It was the Curio girl who had fainted.

"You're awake?" Minami asked but was shot a glare as the girl gripped the hem of her cardigan and stepped further into the room and asked once more.

"Do you have Haruna?"

"Yeah, why?" Yuko answered, slightly peeved that the Curio had interrupted a good moment.

"Well give her back! She's my sister and I'd like to go home with her now!" Atsuko shouted and Yuko narrowed her eyes at her words.

"Sister? Ah. So you're the 'Atsuko' she was going on and on about," Yuko clapped her hands together in realization and instantly she smiled.

"So what if I am! Now I'd like to just get my sister and go home now," Atsuko repeated once more and Minami stood up.

"I'm afraid that's not possible," Minami said quietly, watching as confusion showed on the Curio's face.

"What do you mean?"

"I uhm uh," Minami struggled to find an explanation when Yuko butted in to help.

"This midget means that Haruna needs to stay underground. Because the sunlight will hurt us," Yuko explained and swatted away her friends hand when Minami tried to elbow her.

"What? Haruna is not allergic to the sun, thank you very much. I'd like to take her and leave now!" Atsuko was growing more frustrated by the minute. She had to go into this stupid forest to find her sister, ended up fainting, woke up in a unfamiliar room and now was told ridiculous things.

"She's not lying, Acchan." Atsuko's breath stopped and she slowly turned to face her sister.


- - - - - - -


This cannot be happening, Atsuko thought as she looked at her sister. Haruna was wearing something that Atsuko was pretty sure Haruna didn't own.

A black dress. Atsuko was very sure that Haruna's closet consisted mainly of clothes of the color white along with pastel colors. But never black.

Because the stores in town never sold black clothes.

"Where did you get that dress? You were wearing a white one when you left!" Atsuko asked and watched as her sister shifted uncomfortably under her gaze.

Turning back to face the other two, Atsuko realized the other two were wearing all black outfits as well.

"Why are you all wearing black? The town shops doesn't sell black clothes.." Atsuko whispered, turning to face her sister again.

"Um, I don't know how to tell you, Acchan. But you know what I love right?" Haruna slowly said and Atsuko nodded her head, confusion still evident on her face.

"Knox," Atsuko whispered and Haruna nodded.

"And this forest is where they live right?"

"Rumored to be living," Atsuko corrected her sister but Haruna shook her head.

"No, they live here. They do exist, Acchan." Haruna watched her sister look even more confused than before. Haruna watched as Atsuko immediately smiled and laughed.

"That's a funny joke, Haruna. You went to great lengths to prepare this joke. I'll give you that. Now let's go home, I want to sleep." Atsuko said and made a move to grab her sister's hand but Haruna took a step back.

"It's not a joke, Atsuko. There are really Knox living here. The two over there are Knox.." Haruna tells her sister, slight irritation clear in her voice but now she felt slightly guilty for what she was about to say as Atsuko's smile turned into a frown.

"And I'm Knox too."

And for the second time that day, Maeda Atsuko fainted.


- - - - - - -


"Nyan nyan~ Your sister faints a lot it seems?" Yuko said while clinging onto Haruna's arm as they sat beside Atsuko who was once again laying in the bed. Haruna let out a little laugh when Yuko snuggled closer but smacked her head playfully when Yuko was too close to her chest.

"She's a little bit weak in the health department but she's usually okay. Acchan just took in too much information, that's all.." Haruna trailed off, now feeling bad as she remembered what happened that led to this.


- - - - - - -


Like always, Haruna went to the forest and explored. She knew Acchan would not be happy with it like usual but as long as she got home for dinner, Acchan didn't mind.

Haruna squealed when she found a stone path that eventually led to a wooden trapdoor and without second thoughts, she reached for the handle and opened it. Haruna peered into the darkness and with the light shining in from the entrance, Haruna slowly walked down the steps into the underground house, carefully and quietly closing the trapdoor behind her.

Haruna quietly walked and stopped at a door and peered into what seemed like a study room, amazed at how furnished it was.

"What's a Curio doing here?" A playful voice from behind Haruna asks and Haruna shrieked and jumped before turning around, cheeks visibly red from embarrassment as she stared at the much shorter girl in front of her.

"N-nothing. I'm sorry for coming in uninvited.." Haruna apologized and pouted, feeling sad at the possibility of being kicked out.

"Don't worry! You're cute so I don't mind~ Come here!" The short girl smiled and assured her and held onto Haruna's hand and led her back to the living room. Haruna's blush deepened at the contact. She had never held hands with anyone but her family and she would never blush like this and Haruna didn't understand why she felt shy and embarrassed all of a sudden.

She sat down as directed by the girl and jumped slightly when the girl continued to cling onto her despite the two sitting on the sofa.

"I'm Oshima Yuko! Nice to meet you!" Yuko pulled herself back from Haruna but still held on and introduced herself with a huge smile and Haruna was reminded of how similar she looked to a squirrel.

"Nice to meet you, Oshima-san. I'm Kojima Haruna," Haruna smiled and bowed her head slightly.

"Call me Yuko! Nice to meet you too, Nyan nyan," Yuko grinned and snuggled close once more.

"Nyan nyan?" Haruna asked with a slight tilt of her head and Yuko laughed.

"You remind of me a cat! You look very much like one, especially when you tilt your head like that. Plus you're really cute like a cat!" Yuko explained and Haruna let out a 'ahh' and nodded.

"Say, why do you live underground anyway?" Haruna asked, looking around curiously and Yuko pulled back.

"Um, do you know about Knox?" Yuko cautiously asked and watched as Haruna's eyes immediately sparkled.

"Yes! Everyone tells me to stop asking about them but they interest me so much! I wonder, if I could ever meet or be one.." Haruna sighed with a smile as she started to daydream. She broke out of it when Yuko shook her arm slightly.

"You're speaking to one right now," Yuko said softly and watched as Haruna went from surprise to shock to surprise once more and then a huge smile covered her face.

"Are you serious?! You're not lying to me, right? Right?" Haruna asked excitedly and Yuko giggled at how cute Haruna was and nodded.

"Ah, so is it true you can't stand the sunlight? That's why you're in this underground house?" Haruna started to bounce in her seat now and Yuko laughed and tugged on Haruna's arm to calm her slightly.

"Yeah. There's another Knox here too. Shorter than me hehe~ You sure do know your facts huh?" Yuko asked curious at how this Curio was so interested in Knox. Yuko knew from experience that Curios were mostly cautious and afraid of the Knox, yet here was a Curio who was the opposite of that. And Yuko loved it.

"Yes~ But my sister, Atsuko or Acchan as I call her, dislikes how interested I am in Knox. She listens to our mom all the time about how Knox are to be stayed away from so she firmly believes that what I'm doing is going to get me in trouble. I still love her though," Haruna answered with a smile, clearly to Yuko, Haruna loved her sister very much.

"But your sister is right, you know? Us Knox are much stronger and sometimes we can't control ourselves.. Speaking of your sister, shouldn't you go home? She'll be worried you know." Yuko said and Haruna's heart twinged at how lonely Yuko sounded at that moment.

"I'll stay." Haruna answered, with a reassuring smile to Yuko. Haruna knew that she should go back home, but after hearing how lonely Yuko sounded, she didn't want to leave her at all.

"Bu-" Yuko started but Haruna placed a finger on her lips.

"I'll stay." Haruna repeated in a firm voice and Yuko nodded. The two sat in silence for a moment, though it wasn't awkward. Yuko snuggled up to Haruna every now and then and Haruna would pat her on the head.

"I really feel like turning you into one of us right now. I don't want you to leave," Yuko whispers and Haruna pulls back slightly to look Yuko in the eyes.

"How do you turn into Knox?" Haruna asked curiously and Yuko explained.

"Um, you have to drink the blood of a Knox by, oh god usually this isn't embarrassing to say but right now somehow it is.." Yuko mumbled and Haruna playfully punched Yuko's arm.

"Tell meeee~" Haruna whined with a pout and swung Yuko's arm from side to side and Yuko laughed before leaning over to peck Haruna on the cheek, effectively stopping Haruna from her childish actions and cup her kissed cheeks with a blush. Yuko grinned at the reaction and leaned much closer to Haruna but Haruna pouted and pushed Yuko away slightly.

"Tell me before you do anything!" Haruna insisted and Yuko nodded.

"Uh by kissing.." Yuko told her and Haruna looked shocked.

"Really?" Haruna asked and Yuko nodded. "You're sure it's not just your preferred way because you're like a pervert?" Haruna asked once more and laughed when Yuko pouted. She leaned over and like what Yuko did before, kissed her one the cheek and pulled back and giggled.

"NYAN NYAN~ I LOVE YOU~" Yuko immediately shouted and planted her face into Haruna's chest and Haruna smacked her head and pushed her off playfully.

"I wouldn't mind if you turned me into Knox. I've been so curious about it and I know it's probably not a great idea but well, you'll help me, right?" Haruna says truthfully and wathed as Yuko's face lit up with hope.

"Really? Are you sure? You wouldn't be able to go out and you'll have to stay here and-" Yuko started to list out the cons when Haruna stopped her.

"I want to." And Yuko swallowed once and nodded. Haruna knew she should have gone home and consulted her sister, but Haruna felt it was a now or never situation, so she chose now.

Haruna watched as Yuko dragged a fingernail hard over her own wrist and placed her now bleeding wrist to her mouth. Then Yuko signaled for Haruna to lean closer as she puts down her bleeding wrist and immediately crashed her lips onto Haruna's. 

Haruna never thought her first kiss would be so messy, with her drinking blood and all but still, there were sparks like she'd heard about. Haruna pushed herself closer to Yuko and felt Yuko's arm wrap around her waist and Haruna took a gulp of Yuko's blood.

A second later she pushed away as a burning feeling engulfed her chest as she started to clutch as her chest and gasping loudly for air. Yuko immediately wrapped her arms around Haruna, whispering to her about how soon it'll be over and it'll be alright soon.



- - - - - - -


Atsuko woke up once again in that unfamiliar room and immediately screamed when she saw her sister locking lips with the other short girl she had seen in the living room.

"OH MY GOD! Get away from my sister you pervert!" Atsuko shouted as she got up and pushed Yuko away from Haruna.

"Haruna come on, we're leaving. I'll heat up dinner for you," Atsuko told Haruna and then grabbed her hand and pulled her out of the room but was stopped by the other short girl.

"We can't let you leave. Please, hear us out." Atsuko narrowed her eyes at the midget.

"No." Atsuko pushed past the short girl and despite Haruna's protests, pulled her along until a hand firmly grabbed her wrist, bringing her to a stop.

"Acchan, please. Please listen," Haruna pleaded with tears in her eyes and Atsuko now felt guilty and slowly let go of Haruna's hand. And Atsuko shook off the hand that was firmly holding on to her, watching as the girl who was kissing her sister, cling to Haruna's arm.

"Is this your way of telling me you want space? That you don't like living normally?" Atsuko asked quietly and Haruna immediately shook her head.

"It's not any of those, Acchan. I know I should've gone home, consulted you about me turning into Knox but you would never let me no matter how much I want to.." Haruna starts to explain and Atsuko starts to tear up.

"So you think I'm controlling?" Atsuko asked, now feeling hurt by her sister's words.

"No no, I've never said that. You should stop thinking so negatively, Acchan. I wanted this, I know and accept the results of this and besides, I'm not alone. Yuko and Minami are here with me," Haruna tells her sister and introduces the two small girls. Haruna slowly walks towards her sister and holds Atsuko's hand in hers, trying to get Atsuko to face her.

"Are you leaving me alone?" Atsuko asks quietly, tears running down her face at the thought of being alone and Haruna immediately hugs her.

"I'll never leave you, Acchan. You can also live here, I'm sure! This underground house has a ton of rooms so yeah!" Haruna cheerfully says and Atsuko laughs.

"I'll think about it, maybe. But I can't abandon the house either.. I don't know. This is all too complicated for me right now. Could I just sit down for a moment? Alone?" Atsuko asked and Haruna nods and leads Atsuko to the living room.

Atsuko thanked Yuko for a cup of water that Yuko brought and the two left her all alone in the living room. Atsuko takes a sip of the water before burying her head in her hands and groaned.

"I'm sorry for causing you so much trouble, I'm sorry for making you upset." A voice to her right says and Atsuko looked up to find Minami sitting beside her.

"You're not the one who was kissing my sister," Atsuko saids sulkily and Minami laughed.

"I know, but my friend troubled you so I'd like to apologize anyway," Minami admits and Atsuko stares at her.

"You're a weird Knox," Atsuko bluntly tells Minami and once again Minami laughed.

"I know, I don't mind it though." Minami gives Atsuko a dimpled smile and Atsuko found herself blushing and quickly looked away. Why am I blushing?! Stop it, Atsuko! She's cute but you have bigger problems right now!

"Hey are you okay? Your face looks flushed," Minami asked in concern and tries to lean closer to Atsuko.

"I-I-I'm f-fine!" Atsuko stuttered out and Minami was now confused.

Minami watched as Atsuko attempted to hide her face in her hands and turning away from Minami.

"What's your name by the way? I'm Takahashi Minami! This is a rather late introduction but an introduction nonetheless right?" Minami clapped her hands and watched as Atsuko peeked out from behind her hands rather cutely.

"M-maeda Atsuko," God, Atsuko. You're a stuttering mess. Hold yourself together! Atsuko was now beyond embarrassed. She'd never stutter like that before. And now it was all thanks to the midget.

"Well nice to meet you, Atsuko! Would you like to stay the night here? I think it's too late for you to be going home and I'm sure we'll work something out tomorrow?" Minami asked with a smile and received one back as well as Atsuko pulled her hands away from her face.

"You're cute when you smile, you know?" Minami blurts out and was surprised as Atsuko was at her own words and felt her face heat up.

"T-thanks, you're cute too.." Atsuko tells her with just as red cheeks and the two simply watched each other for a moment. Soon enough, Minami began leaning closer, and nearly closed the little space left between the two when a moan interrupted them.

Immediately, Atsuko snapped out of her trance and ran to the source of the noise, Minami following behind her. Atsuko slammed opened the door to find Yuko on top of Haruna and Haruna grabbing Yuko's breasts, in somewhat of a attempt to push Yuko off.

"GET OFF MY SISTER YOU FREAK." Atsuko shrieked and pushed Yuko off and Yuko unfortunately landed on the ground and she groaned. Atsuko immediately clung to her sister, hugging her like a koala and stuck her tongue out at Yuko.

"I'm sleeping with Haruna. You get your own bed." Atsuko told her and ignoring Yuko's protest, laid down next to Haruna and closed her eyes. Haruna laughed, patting and stroking her sister's hair and she nodded for Yuko to leave.

Minami then stepped in and reached for Yuko.

"Good night, Minami." Atsuko's muffled voice surprised Minami and Minami smiled before nodding to the shyly smiling Atsuko.

"Good night, Atsuko." Minami replied, nodding to Haruna and then pulled Yuko out and closed the door behind them.

"Hey! You're blushing! Oh my god you're growing up, I'm so proud," Yuko dramatically said and wiped non existent tears from her eyes and Minami rolled her eyes.

"Shut up! You shouldn't be so perverted! And I was so close to kissing her when you interrupted darn it..." Minami mumbled out the last bit and Yuko's ears caught it and she gave a signature squirrel smirk.

"Oooooooh~ You almost had a kiss eh? And you're calling me perverted? Looks like you're perverted yourself." Yuko smugly said and laughed when Minami started to blush hard and hit Yuko playfully.

"Shut up! I-I'm going to sleep!" Minami exclaimed and then quickly walked back to her room though not without hearing Yuko's words and blushing harder.

"Night night, sleep tight~ I'm sure you'll be dreaming of Atsuko tonight eh? Have fun with that!" Yuko said and laughed before heading to her room herself.


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Abrupt ending is abrupt.

I'll edit this tomorrow to make it I don't know uh more interesting or something but I wanted to get something up for halloween?? Though this isn't really halloweeny.. :depressed:

HAPPY HALLOWEEN EVERYONE THOUGH!  :mon beam:
Title: Re: « chrunoi's OS area: Taiyou 2068 [KojiYuu + Atsumina] »
Post by: Kairi65 on October 31, 2014, 05:07:46 PM
enjoying the update~ :cow:

too bad its an OS and it ended just like that... :cry:

waiting for the next one~ :deco:
Title: Re: « chrunoi's OS area: Taiyou 2068 [KojiYuu + Atsumina] »
Post by: korin48 on October 31, 2014, 05:49:19 PM
Eh? That's all? Aw! Too short.  :(
So anyway, cant wait for your next update  :deco:
Title: Re: « chrunoi's OS area: Taiyou 2068 [KojiYuu + Atsumina] »
Post by: atsukojiyuu_C on November 09, 2014, 09:40:05 AM
Are you sure this is just an OS ??????!!
This deserved a continuation~!!

No, I'm not pushing you to it. LOL
But yeah, it's just too interesting to be an OS XD
Thankyou anyway chrunoi-san :yep:
Title: Re: « chrunoi's OS area: Taiyou 2068 [KojiYuu + Atsumina] »
Post by: ChibiRine on November 09, 2014, 11:35:07 AM
I forgot to left my comment. I'm so sorry again! :mon cry:

Alternative ending waifu! Alternative ending! :mon XD:

Wahehehe, for the nth time, you write beautifully! So don't be embarrassed or something nee? :on gay:

More update! More AtsuMina! More KojiYuu wahehehehe :mon determined:
Title: Re: « chrunoi's OS area: Zutto Zutto [Atsumina] »
Post by: chrunoi on November 28, 2014, 01:11:02 PM

I haven't uploaded a OS in a long time ahh  :mon sweat:

Well truth be told, it was just pure laziness. I'm very lazy, I'm sorry about that..  :mon trudge:

Anyway here an AtsuMina !!  :mon beam:

Note: Atsuko is a ordinary girl but Takamina is an idol yep yep, a very cheesy story but yep.


Zutto Zutto



Spring


Minami paused at her door. She had a feeling that if she entered her apartment, something bad will happen though she didn't know why. But it was late and she was tired so she pushed the feeling aside and stepped through the door. She was taking off her shoes in the hallway when she heard a voice coming from the darkness.

"You're late again, Minami." Atsuko's quiet voice stated and Minami nearly screamed in surprise. Minami quickly fumbled for the switch and flicked it on, revealing Atsuko who was sitting on the couch and staring at her with a blank look. Minami swallowed, knowing that under the look, Atsuko was pretty pissed off.

"I'm sorry. We ended up practicing and I lost track of time," Minami replied, though not really sure why she was apologizing. She felt she needed to apologize for being late though she hadn't really recalled Atsuko asking to meet her at her apartment. Then again, the girl would come and go as she pleased, seeing as Minami gave her a copy of the key.

"Why are you here, by the way?" Minami asked curiously and cautiously. She wasn't sure if the question would make Atsuko's temper flare but there was a high possibility it would. And it did.

"Why am I here? Oh I don't know. Maybe it's because I wanted to make a surprise dinner for our one year anniversary or something. But obviously it didn't go according to plan and I ate the dinner all alone," Atsuko's sarcasm was in full-force and Minami winced when she realized that it was indeed their one year anniversary and she had stupidly forgotten it.

"I-I," Minami struggled to find an explanation which of course wasn't going to work. There was no explanation for all this. She had forgotten their one year anniversary and she couldn't really make up an excuse for it.

"You know, Minami. I'm getting sick of being so lonely these days," Atsuko said and stood up from the couch and stared at Minami and continued. "You don't make time for me anymore even though I always find time but you're always too busy with performances or guest appearances. And it doesn't feel like we're even dating anymore."

"W-what are you trying to say?" Minami asked, feeling her heart starting to race as a possibility of something she never thought would happen, might happen right now. on their one year anniversary no less.

"Minami, you know what I'm trying to say. If you can't make time to be with me despite how much I'm trying, there's no point in us being together. I love you a lot, you know that Minami. And I know you love me but love can't just magically become glue and fix this distance between us, you know that." Atsuko didn't want things to end up like this but it was inevitable with the way things were now. She had hoped to patch things up and rekindle their relationship with the surprise dinner but as fate decided, it wasn't meant to be.

"Atsuko, you can't do this." Minami stubbornly said and immediately walked over to cradle Atsuko's hands in her own. "I know I haven't been a good girlfriend but you know how AKB is important to me plus I have to lead the group. That's why I haven't been spending time with you but please, you can't do this." Minami had tears in her eyes now and she wanted to just curl up and cry at this very moment but she couldn't.

"Am I not important too? I know how important the group is, but I can't come first? Minami, you have to admit it. We're drifting away from each other and we hardly even talk on the phone much now as compared to how we were when we first started dating. Minami, I'm sorry but let's break up." Atsuko finally choked out  the words she once thought she'd never say to Minami. At this point Atsuko had started to cry because of Minami's crying but she told herself not to get distracted.

Atsuko then took her hands out of Minami's hold and grabbed her bag and headed for the door. But before she could take another step, Minami shouted.

"Am I the only one at fault here?! You're at fault too! You can't expect to just be number one at everything in my life! I have a career that takes up a lot of time, yes, but the least you could do is understand me! I thought you were better than this, Atsuko. In the end, you're nothing but selfish." Minami blurted out in anger. 

"I'm selfish? Well sorry for being selfish because I want to spend more time with you." Atsuko spat out, furiously wiping away the tears that had welled up in her eyes because of how hurt she felt by Minami's statement. Atsuko then quickly walked and reached for the door handle and paused for a moment.

"I'm sorry." Atsuko whispered to Minami who was watching her back, then she grabbed the door handle and walked out before gently closing the door behind her.

Minami's legs gave out immediately and she sat on the floor and just wailed into her hands. She knew it was mainly her fault for this break up but she can't help but feel an anger within her because of Atsuko. The fact that Atsuko can't see now, how important Minami's role is and how much responsibility she has and just takes for granted that Minami would be by her side 24/7.

But yet, what she had said in her anger to Atsuko was not fair. There was no way now to turn it back, she could only wait a few days, hoping that possibly the tension between the two would dissolve and she could apologize to Atsuko.

With that, Minami wiped her tears and got up from the floor, heading over to her room and without bothering to shower, simply changed into her pajamas and headed back into the living room to watch some TV to hopefully ease the pain for now.


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It didn't help at all that a lot of things in Minami's apartment reminded her of Atsuko. Such as the numerous framed photos of the two, or magazines and books that Atsuko had brought over and read while waiting for Minami but had left it there. It was even worse when Minami opened her closet to change and she'd found some of Atsuko's clothes when she would stay over on the nights they had movie marathons.

All in all, Minami was regretting it. Regretting that she had the leader position, that she didn't do enough to spend time with Atsuko. That she had allowed Atsuko to come to the conclusion that distance was too big of an issue now. That she made Atsuko doubt they could still be together despite how busy she was.

Minami laid in her bed, cuddling Nyaachan to her chest. She was reminded of how she had met Atsuko, the somewhat awkward, clueless girl that somehow eats a lot.

Minami had met Atsuko at high school actually. The two were classmates but due to their different personalities, had never spoken to each other. Minami had then gone on to be a full time idol when they graduated while Atsuko worked at a pet shop. They had only talked to each other for the first time years later at the pet shop Atsuko worked in when Minami was looking for a pet. Somehow the two clicked and got closer. Soon after that, they both confessed to each other and then dated. It was a pretty cliche way to have fallen in love, but Minami loved it.

Minami now felt no motivation to do anything. She didn't want to go to practice, she didn't want to be an idol anymore. At the moment, she just wanted Atsuko by her side, telling her that she liked how Minami danced and sang and such trivial things that somehow meant a lot to Minami.

Minami wanted to pick up the phone and call Atsuko and apologize, but yet stubbornness and pride stopped her. Why should she apologize when Atsuko was the one who broke things off and then walked out on her. If anything, she felt Atsuko should call her up and apologize.

With that thought in her head, Minami got up and decided to get over Atsuko with a new and old love, Katsudon.


- - - - - - -


End of Summer


Weeks had passed since they broke up. Somehow, through some sources, Yuko had found out about it and told her friends. And though Minami assured her friends that she was fine and never felt better, they didn't really believe it. They've noticed that Minami seemed distracted during practice, and constantly checked her phone and she seemed disappointed whenever she put her phone away.

Today they decided to go to a nearby restaurant after practice for lunch, something they hadn't done lately.

Once they settled in their seats, they once again watched as Minami pulled out her phone and type something before shaking her head slightly and then start scrolling.

"What are you looking at, Minami?" Haruna asked without a thought and immediately Minami looked up at her, wide-eyed. And then Minami mentally smacked herself. Once again without realizing, she had pulled out her phone and checked her message inbox for any new messages from a certain someone.

"N-nothing," Minami cursed herself for stuttering and before anyone commented anything else, she placed her phone on the table and stood up. "I'm going to the toilet for a moment, excuse me." And then she quickly escaped to the toilet. Immediately after Minami went out of sight, Yuko quickly snatched up Minami's phone and scrolled through the messages.

"Yuko! You shouldn't look through Takamina's phone!" Haruna scolded Yuko and Yuko stuck her tongue out at Haruna.

"Shh Nyan nyan. This is a great opportunity to see why Takamina keeps looking through her phone more than usual!" Yuko declared and proceeded to look through her messages. She accidentally clicked unsent saved messages and she let out a tiny shriek.

"Look at this, look at this you guys!" She beckoned everyone over excitedly and immediately, Haruna shifted closer while Mariko and Miichan stood behind them.

= = = = = =

To: Atsuko

I'm sorry, I really am.

= = = = = =

= = = = = =

To: Atsuko

I want to see you again

= = = = = =

= = = = = =

To: Atsuko

I really miss you a lot. I do.

= = = = = = 


"What the hell? Takamina can write things like that?" Yuko said in disbelief and Haruna slapped her arm.

"It seems like Takamina hasn't really gotten over her breakup, huh?" Mariko commented and then her eyes widened as she spotted Minami coming back, they quickly sat back down and Yuko quickly dumped Minami's phone to where it was and then quickly put on a innocent smile as Minami approached.

"Have you guys ordered yet?" A unsuspecting Takamina asked the others as she sat back down and they shook their heads.

"We were waiting for you." Miichan said and Minami nodded before opening the menu, scanning through it. After a moment, she realized that everyone still had their eyes on her and she paused.

"What? Do I have something on me?" Minami asked, patting her head self-consciously. The other four looked at each other and then nodded and Yuko turned back to face Minami.

"You need to send those messages to Atsuko." Yuko said after a moment and immediately, Minami's eyes widened.

"You checked my phone?!" "Yuuchan!" Both Minami and Haruna shouted at the same time. Yuko looked at Haruna and the others questioningly and then smacked her head in realization.

"I wasn't suppose to say that bit out, was I?" Yuko whispered to Haruna and Haruna nodded and Yuko groaned as she avoided the shortest girl's glare. "Ooookay, ignoring what I just said like two minutes ago... You need to talk with Atsuko again. You obviously miss her and it's not good to keep up these pent up feelings. You've changed because of it, you know?"

"I-I.. I'm sorry.." Was the only thing Minami could say. She didn't know what else to say when she just felt guilty hearing from her friends that she isn't herself anymore.

"Aw don't apologize with that face, Bakamina. You'll make us sad too!" Miichan shouted and before Minami knew it, she was enveloped in a group hug along with pats on the head and Minami felt tears well up in her eyes.

"Thank you, you guys. It means a lot." Minami sniffles as she wipes the tears from her eyes and everyone laughed.

"Does this mean you'll talk to her?" Mariko asks and Minami paused for a moment before smiling and nodding. Yuko cheered once more and hugged the shorter girl again. Everyone paused when a growl broke the moment and immediately everyone turned to look at Miichan who simply smiled sheepishly.

"I'm sorry.. but can we eat first?" Miichan asked shamelessly and everyone laughed and nodded.

- - - - - - -


Autumn


Minami stared at her phone, her thumb hovering over the 'send' button. She was hesitating now, as with the past two days. Minami had promised her friends that she would talk to Atsuko, but she never really promised when.

Maybe sending a message isn't the best way to do this, should I call her instead? Minami groaned and paced around her living room. Then, with a spur of the moment courage, she exited out of the messaging app and dialed Atsuko's number.

She wasn't sure if Atsuko would even pick up, considering how stubborn the two had been at refusing to give in nor apologize. Minami didn't even know what Atsuko had been up to despite how much she wanted to know, but her pride got in her way. Now that it was a rare moment and chance her urge and want to see Atsuko won over the pride, she took it. Minami's heart raced, as she heard dial tone, she got more worried as the seconds passed, that Atsuko wouldn't even want to talk to her anymore.

"Hello?" Atsuko's voice said and Minami sucked in her breath. She had no idea what to do now that Atsuko had actually answered her phone. "Hello?" Atsuko once more asked, confusion clear in her voice and Minami realized that Atsuko didn't check who was calling and simply answered her phone.

"I want to see you." Minami blurted out without a thought and she wanted to die at the silence that followed it. She knew the silence meant that Atsuko recognized her voice and was thinking of what to do and quite frankly, Minami was surprised that Atsuko didn't hang up the moment Minami finished her blurting.

"Umm.." Minami mumbled, she was beyond embarrassed right now, that moment of courage had flown out of the window and all that was left was sheer embarrassment and fear. But mainly, embarrassment.

"Okay." Minami paused.

"What?"

"Okay." Atsuko repeated, just as quietly as the first time. And Minami's heart started to beat even faster at the fact that she would get to see Atsuko.

"Really?" Minami asked, cringing a little when her voice sounded breathless.

"I'll be at your apartment soon, don't leave." Atsuko replied, ignoring Minami's question and hung up. Minami put her phone down, sat down and buried her face in her hand, still feeling the embarrassment from before. But yet she smiled, somehow like always, Atsuko knew where Minami was without even asking, just like before. Realizing that Atsuko would be here soon, Minami quickly stood up and patted herself down to make herself somewhat presentable and then looked around her house to see if it was messy. However before she could even clean up, her doorbell rang and she froze.

Apparently, the definition of Atsuko's soon was like 'I'm going there and reaching it in less than five minutes'.

Minami quickly stood up and went to get the door, pausing in front of it for a moment to pat her hair down once more and then breathed in and out. Realizing that she had zoned out a little and was still staring at the closed door, Minami blushed and quickly opened the door. She stared the taller woman who stood in front of her and Minami realized that they had been apart for a long time. The hair that Atsuko used to sport, which just touched her shoulders, grew longer till it was past her collar bone. And though Minami wished that she could've been there to watch Atsuko's hair slowly grow, she thought it suited her well.

Realizing that she'd just been staring at Atsuko for a good minute or two, Minami felt her cheeks heat up even more but somehow managed to step aside, allowing Atsuko to step in and Minami to close the door behind her. Atsuko walked over and settled herself on the couch and looked around the apartment where the last time she was in, it ended up in a argument. She avoided the eyes of Minami who sat on the armchair beside the sofa. The two sat in an odd mixture of awkward yet comforting silence for a few moments, both avoiding each other's eyes.

"You still have the things I've left here." Atsuko broke the silence and Minami looked up at her. It wasn't a question, but a statement and Minami could tell that though her voice sounded indifferent, Atsuko's face showed a hint of happiness at that.

"I don't see why I have to throw your things out. It makes my apartment look nicer." Minami explained and shrugged, it was true after all, there was also the fact that she couldn't bear to throw them out, so she kept it. Another few minutes of silence followed as Atsuko fiddled with her own fingers and Minami was just staring at her hands.

"I-" "I-" The two said at the same time and looked at each other and Atsuko burst into giggles and Minami smiled. Atsuko then gestured for Minami to go first while holding her hand over her mouth, trying to stifle the giggles.

"Um.. I don't know why it has taken me this long, okay wait. It took me this long because I was stubborn and I had a lot of pride. And I'm sorry. I really am. I should've thought more about you, I shouldn't have lashed out at you. And I'm really really sorry. There is no other way to put it, but I'm really sorry." Minami breathed out as she finished saying her piece and looked down at her hands. She felt vulnerable at this moment, admitting her flaws were not her favorite thing to do. But if it was to Atsuko, Minami felt, it was alright for the person she loves to know.

"I've missed you so much." Minami added quietly and there was silence that followed and Minami's heart raced even more as the seconds passed. A few moments before Minami felt familiar arms and scent wrapped around her and immediately, Minami hugged Atsuko back tightly, burying her head in the crook of Atsuko's neck and she breathed in the scent that she missed for so long.

"I've missed you too." Minami heard Atsuko whisper into her hair and Minami continued to nuzzle Atsuko's neck. Minami then scooted further back into the armchair, still not letting go of Atsuko, and pulled Atsuko down so that Atsuko was now sitting on her lap. Atsuko puled back from the hug and wrapped her arms around Minami's neck instead and smiled at Minami.

"I'm sorry too. I should've been more considerate, knowing how busy you are. I'm really sorry too." Atsuko apologized and though it was much lesser than what Minami said, Minami knew she meant it and smiled and hugged Atsuko close once more.

"I love you, Minami." Atsuko whispered to Minami and pulled back just enough to place a peck on Minami's lips before returning back to hugging Minami and nuzzling her hair.

"I love you too, Atsuko." Minami replied and hugged her tighter.

"Always?" Atsuko whispered and Minami pulled back and smiled widely at Atsuko.

"Always." Minami promised and kissed Atsuko once more, to seal the promise. Atsuko giggled and then hugged Minami once more. After a while of hugging, Minami felt a little uncomfortable.

"Can we move to the bed? It's much more comfortable to cuddle there." Minami suggested and Atsuko laughed, causing the crinkles that Minami loved to appear at the top of her nose.

"Hmmm, okay~ Will we be doing more though~?" Atsuko's voice dropped to a low whisper at the end and Minami gulped and nodded.

"Yay~ Let's go~" Atsuko cheered and quickly stood up and held Minami's hand and dragged her to Minami's room. Minami groaned, knowing it was going to be a long night, just like old times. But Minami smiled when Atsuko pushed her against the bedroom door and leaned in once more, kissing her. This was what she love, spending time with Atsuko, being close to Atsuko, and Minami didn't want anything else.


- - - - - - -

Very lame cheesy ending yes.

Just to update you guys ( if any of you even read this ); I have uhm 2/3 AtsuMina OS in the planning, one of them is a christmas fic, 1 KojiYuu fic, and another possible one of another ship but that might never be done ..

But anyway, I hope you enjoyed it ~~  :gmon nya:
Title: Re: « chrunoi's OS area: Zutto Zutto [Atsumina] »
Post by: ChibiRine on November 28, 2014, 01:32:36 PM
Oh nooooo~ :stoned:

I think I don't need to rest because your OS healed me~ :mon inluv:

It's not lame, at all! :hiakhiakhiak:

But that cuddle part though. :luvluv2:

More OS waifu~ :mon bye:
Title: Re: « chrunoi's OS area: Zutto Zutto [Atsumina] »
Post by: black_maa on November 28, 2014, 02:21:55 PM

It's good OS.. and with good end.. I like it..  :nya:


At the beginning I thought, when they breake up, Acchan would never forgive her, but luckily, she did.  :on woohoo:


Please write others OS too..  :roll: 
Title: Re: « chrunoi's OS area: Zutto Zutto [Atsumina] »
Post by: hidden_player on November 28, 2014, 05:38:17 PM
Awwwwwwwwww  :wub: :wub: :wub:

More Atsumina, please XD
Title: Re: « chrunoi's OS area: Zutto Zutto [Atsumina] »
Post by: Kairi65 on November 29, 2014, 10:54:29 AM
eekk~!!

so...sweet~  :wub: :wub:
Title: Re: « chrunoi's OS area: Zutto Zutto [Atsumina] »
Post by: Haruko on November 30, 2014, 01:04:14 AM
not cheesy, was cute.. :D Im waiting for the kojiyuu story *O*
Title: Re: « chrunoi's OS area: Zutto Zutto [Atsumina] »
Post by: cisda83 on November 30, 2014, 02:18:45 PM
just been reading all the Atsumina OS that you have here....

Very interesting and lovely stories you have here....

Even if there are short... but just lovely...

Thank you for the nice stories...

Can't wait to see more Atsumina

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: « chrunoi's OS area: Zutto Zutto [Atsumina] »
Post by: chrunoi on December 08, 2014, 02:26:21 PM
A reaaaaalllllyyy short thing, a drabble I suppose. Gotta get out these feels from that announcement, thanks Takamina. :ptam-cry:


Warning: When I said short, it is short. It doesn't even make sense but whatever. :on roll:



No Matter What


"Are you sure? That you want to do this?" Maeda Atsuko asked as she stared at the back of the short haired girl sitting on her couch in her living room. It was supposed to be a movie marathon night, one they hadn't had in ages. It was also the week before the 9th anniversary performance at the theater, and though Atsuko had been busy with filming and was tired, she made an exception for the girl before her.

Now their plans for the night had come to halt, when the short girl told Atsuko what she planned to do at the performance. The food that Atsuko was preparing laid forgotten on the kitchen table as she softly approached the back of the sofa, gripping the hem of her shirt.

Takahashi Minami didn't answer and instead patted the spot on the sofa beside her and Atsuko obeyed the silent girl and sat beside Minami as she had asked. Minami looked at Atsuko, who was looking down and playing with her fingers on her lap, and smiled. Minami reached over and gently took one of Atsuko's hands and cradled them in her own, causing the taller girl to look at her.

"It's hard for me to make this decision, but I can't stay in AKB forever. You know how much I complain to you about having this position. Plus that episode on Shin Domoto Kyoudai with you made me think y'know. I want to start a new journey, just like you two years ago." Minami quietly said to Atsuko and squeezed her hand.

"Well you did complain a lot, that's for sure." Atsuko could only say as she continued to think over what Minami had said and Minami laughed. Of all things Atsuko could've picked out, she picked the complaining one to talk about first.

"When is the actual graduation date though?" Atsuko asked and Minami thought over it for a moment.

"On the tenth anniversary. It seems somewhat fitting, doesn't it?"

"It does." Atsuko answers simply and then started to play with Minami's fingers. The two sat in silence for a while more. Atsuko continued to play with Minami's fingers while thinking what to say as she stared at the forgotten dvd cases lying on the floor in front of the two. The silence, however, started to bother Minami and in an effort to break it, she rested her head on Atsuko's right shoulder and snuggled closer.

Minami knew the taller girl was struggling to string her thoughts together about Minami graduating so she squeezed Atsuko's hand once more reassuringly.

"You don't have to think so hard about what to say."

"I'm not." Atsuko answered childishly, hating the fact that Minami still knew what she was thinking. Minami simply laughed and snuggled close once more.

"I'll support you no matter what," Atsuko finally said as she rested her own head on top of Minami's. "Just like what you've been doing for me these past two years." Atsuko continued. It was true, she would support Minami in whatever the midget decided to do.

"No matter what?" Minami asked as she shifted her head slightly to look at Atsuko.

"Mhm." And Minami smiled as Atsuko changed her position and was now hugging Minami tightly. Though the girl had sounded nonchalant with her short answer, she knew Atsuko meant it. Minami stroked Atsuko's back as the girl snuggled closer in the crook of her neck. After a few more moments, Atsuko pulled back and gave Minami a smile before leaning close and pecking Minami on the lips. Usually Minami would've tried to pull away in embarrassment but this time, she didn't struggle and instead leaned forward when Atsuko leaned back and stole another kiss causing Atsuko to giggle.

"Should we start our movie marathon now? I think the food is cold too." Minami asked as she glanced around Atsuko and at the dvd cases. Atsuko thought for a moment before nodding.

"Maybe just two, I still got filming tomorrow. You can pick them." Atsuko decided as she got off the midget and to the kitchen to reheat the food.

"Alright." Minami answered as she stretched and then bent down to gather up the cases and then started to pick. She had just picked one and placed it in the player when Atsuko returned with their food and snuggled up to the short girl once more.

Minami was pretty sure that Atsuko was not paying attention to the movie considering how Atsuko was only paying attention to her bowl of food and constantly snuggling even closer to Minami somehow, but she didn't mind it. It was about another half an hour of silence before Atsuko spoke again.

"I love you." Atsuko said and it surprised Minami slightly as she stared at the sleepy girl who was cuddled with her head on Minami's chest. Then Minami smiled again and leaned down to kiss Acchan's forehead.


"I love you too."


And the two fell asleep halfway through the second movie, still snuggled together with the two holding on to each other tightly.
Title: Re: « chrunoi's OS area: Zutto Zutto [Atsumina] »
Post by: ChibiRine on December 08, 2014, 02:29:53 PM
Geez, thank you waifu for giving me the feels. :depressed:

Still sad here But we need to accept it though. :mon cry:
Title: Re: « chrunoi's OS area: No Matter What [Short Atsumina] »
Post by: Minami-chan on December 08, 2014, 11:39:17 PM
 :ptam-cry: Today it´s a very sad day for takaminas fans....
Title: Re: « chrunoi's OS area: No Matter What [Short Atsumina] »
Post by: cisda83 on December 10, 2014, 07:02:37 PM
Oh... such a realistic OS there....

Can just see the situation...

Thank you for the OS

Such a fitting OS for Takamina's graduation

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: « chrunoi's OS area: No Matter What [Short Atsumina] »
Post by: Haruko on December 11, 2014, 07:36:41 AM
atsuminaaa miss them
Title: Re: « chrunoi's OS area: No Matter What [Short Atsumina] »
Post by: chrunoi on December 14, 2014, 11:31:34 AM


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Title: Re: « chrunoi's OS area: Only Today? [KojiYuu] »
Post by: ChibiRine on December 14, 2014, 12:17:16 PM
Wh-? You're not really that bitchy. :dunno:

But let's not talk about it here~ :mon sweat:

I loved it waifu! :mon inluv:

The KojiYuu here is just perfect! :luvluv1:

It's not good, it's perfect! :gmon bang:

And now here I am at the party smiling like an idiot! Waaah! :farofflook:

Thank you waifu! :mon inluv:
Title: Re: « chrunoi's OS area: Only Today? [KojiYuu] »
Post by: Haruko on December 14, 2014, 07:02:48 PM
beautifuuuuuul! I just wanna say yes to haruna!
Title: Re: « chrunoi's OS area: Only Today? [KojiYuu] »
Post by: phoenix0i on December 15, 2014, 05:22:02 PM
I really love Zutto Zutto. One of my favs. Keep it up.  :thumbsup
Title: Re: « chrunoi's OS area: Only Today? [KojiYuu] »
Post by: chrunoi on December 16, 2014, 01:26:12 PM
Note: I don't know what I was writing yup yup :on roll:



Diamonds



Waking up with a groan, the girl sat up in the bed, pulling up the blanket along with her. She glanced at the empty spot beside and then her gaze shifted to the familiar note on the nightstand. She leaned over and grabbed the note and then laid back down to read it.

--
I've gone to the club first, like always, I've got you a new dress so go shower and leave your old one there.

PS; You look stunning like always even when you're sleeping.

~ K.

--

It was the usual, she didn't know why she read the note always but she did. The girl stood up, feeling goosebumps rising up as the cool air brush against her bare skin as she left the warmth of the blanket, walked over to the chair near the bed and took out the dress from the bag.

"Hm. Black again.. well this is a different dress than the others," The girl mumbled and then glanced at the forgotten dress laying on the floor beside her underwear. The dress on the floor was also a gift from a similar situation as now from a few days ago. "Oh, he bought new underwear too.." The girl took out the set of lace underwear before smiling and heading over to the hotel bathroom.

♢ ♦ ♢ ♦ ♢ ♦ ♢ ♦ ♢ ♦ ♢ ♦ ♢ ♦ ♢ ♦ ♢ ♦ ♢ ♦

She walked into the dressing room and set her clutch bag down at the sofa.

"Oh! Acchan you're here! You're a little late though, the usual?" Haruna greeted Atsuko who smiled and nodded at the question as she made her way to her own dressing table which was opposite from Haruna's.

"He's at the usual place." Haruna informed the shorter girl and Atsuko hummed in response. Atsuko sat in front of her dressing table and quickly fixed her makeup before standing and adjusting her dress. She smiled at her reflection in the mirror, the strapless black dress with little diamonds scattered on it as well as a slit on the left side fitted her perfectly. The dress was longer than the usual dresses he bought her, it stopped just above the floor and it was something one wouldn't really wear to a club since it was elegant. But then again, he liked Atsuko to dress elegantly to fit him and stand out from the rest so she went along with it. Atsuko completed the look with a pearl necklace and sheer black stockings held up a garter belt and black high heels. She also adjusted her fringe parting and shoulder length hair swept to the right properly before waving goodbye to Haruna was also touching up her make up, grabbed her clutch and then left.

The club music pounded in her ears loudly but she was used to it and skillfully weaved through the drunk and high crowd on the dance floor and near the bar as she headed towards the back where the VIP area was sectioned off. Upon seeing the familiar girl, the two security guards nodded and let her through and she thanked them with a smile.

The VIP section was not much different from the normal area with the amount of people, but they did seem less crazy. Atsuko made her way towards the middle. She was about to reach her destination when someone gently grabbed onto her hand, making her pause. Atsuko turned around and stared at her empty hand which was being held and shifted her gaze up to the offender.

"Fancy meeting you here, Atsuko." Sato Takeru smiled at the girl and Atsuko simply stared. She could feel a familiar pair of eyes staring intently at her back and feeling satisfied knowing that that person was watching her, she gave Takeru a dazzling smile.

"Having a good time?" Atsuko asked as she stared up at him and his grin widened.

"You're planning something aren't you." Takeru said, it wasn't a question but a statement and his eyes flickered behind Atsuko for a moment and she saw a corner of his smile lifting into a smirk. "I don't suppose it has something to do with that guy staring at you with a blank stare, does it?"

"Maybe, maybe not." Atsuko answered with a sly smile and the mischievous side of her made its appearance as she moved closer to the man, his arms instantly wrapping around her waist and hers around his neck as she tilted her head up to stare at him from under her eyelashes. Takeru let out laugh, knowing what Atsuko was planning, it wasn't all that difficult to figure out.

"He doesn't look all that happy. Seems like what you're planning is working." Takeru said as he leaned down and whispered it into her ear, causing her to giggle. Then the moment was interrupted when someone tapped on Atsuko's shoulder, making her turn her head slightly to face the person with narrowed eyes.

"Takahashi-san said you shouldn't be playing anymore." The hostess nervously said and Atsuko shifted her gaze to the smirking midget and turned back to the girl.

"Tell him I'm busy." Atsuko instructed and then turned back to Takeru, leaving the girl nervous and confused as to what to do. Atsuko knew that she was suppose to stop talking to Takeru and go to him as originally planned before Takeru stopped her but she was having too much fun with this. It wasn't everyday that she got to rile him up using this way.

"You're really going all out with this, aren't you?" Takeru laughed and Atsuko laughed along with him. From an outsider's perspective the two looked like more than friends but in reality, the two were just friends that at certain times, made use of each other like how Atsuko was right now. It wasn't like it was anything bad, the two didn't mind it as long as they reached their end goal.

At this moment, the club's music changed to a familiar song that Atsuko loved.

♪Shine bright like a diamond

Shine bright like a diamond♪

"Mhm." Atsuko hummed out as she started to hum along to the tune and before Takeru could respond, someone pulled Atsuko away from Takeru. Atsuko had to suppress the knowing grin that wanted to appear on her lips when she saw who pulled her away.

♪Find light in the beautiful sea

I choose to be happy♪

"Nice to see you, Takahashi Kai." Takeru greeted as if nothing was wrong but was met with a glare from the shorter man. Without a word, Kai grabbed Atsuko's hand in a gentle but firm grip and led her away from Takeru, who waved goodbye to her, and to where he was seated before.

♪You and I, you and I

We're beautiful like diamonds in the sky♪

He sat down with a huff before picking up his glass and taking a sip and Atsuko sat beside him with a small sly smile after she set her clutch on the table.

♪You're a shooting star I see

A vision of ecstasy♪

"You're enjoying this, aren't you?" Kai grumbled after a moment, realizing he'd been manipulated by the taller girl.

"Mhm, who knew you could be that jealous?" Atsuko answered as she reached over and took the glass out of his hands and took a sip from it. She shifted so that she sat pressed against him and he wrapped one arm around her shoulder to pull her even closer.

♪When you hold me, I'm alive

We're like diamonds in the sky♪

"Shut up, you should stop playing your little games." Kai mumbled as he stared at Atsuko and she returned the gaze with another playful smile.

"What games?" Atsuko asked as she feigned innocence and then she leaned over to place a soft, short kiss on his lips and pulled away with a giggle and Kai smiled.

♪I knew that we'd become one right away

Oh, right away♪

"What am I going to do with you and your devious personality?" Kai asked playfully and she laughed.

"Oh come on, you know you love it." Atsuko answered and she took another sip and handed it back to Kai who took a sip as well. He stopped for a moment and looked up and down the woman beside and smiled.

♪At first sight I felt the energy of sun rays

I saw the life inside your eyes♪

"You look stunning." Kai complimented her and a light blushed settled on her cheeks. "As always." He whispered into her ear and pulled back as he watch the blush deepen further.

"What can I say? You do have good fashion taste." Atsuko said, still not all that flustered even though the compliment made her heart race.

♪So shine bright, tonight, you and I

We're beautiful like diamonds in the sky♪

"I mean it, you know," Kai said softly and Atsuko turned to look at him. "You're always so beautiful." The blush on Atsuko's face couldn't get any deeper but she shrugged it off and then sat up, took the drink out of his hands and set it on the table and then proceeded straddled Kai. It was a bold move done in a moment of courage to hide her embarrassing blush but it wasn't like she didn't like it. She wrapped her arms his neck and Kai's arms automatically found purchase on her waist, pulling her even closer. And Atsuko could tell Kai liked it too, from the sparkle in his eyes which made her smile.

And then she brought her head down, and kissed Kai on the lips almost forcefully as their lips crashed together.

♪Eye to eye, so alive

We're beautiful like diamonds in the sky♪

"You're beautiful like diamonds in the sky." Kai sang along to the song, changing to lyrics as they pulled away from each other, both slightly breathless. Atsuko smiled at then and placed another chaste kiss on his lips.

"Want to get out of here?" Atsuko asked in a whisper and Kai smiled nodded. "Let's go then~" Atsuko said and got off of Kai's lap and adjusted her dress and hair as Kai stood up. He held out a hand to her which she accepted with a smile and handed her clutch to her and then led the way out of the bar. On the way out, Atsuko locked eyes with Takeru who gave her a nod, as if to say 'good job' before turning back to his friends.

"Did you just look at him?" Kai asked with a pout and Atsuko laughed.

"That look didn't even mean anything, you jealous midget. Besides, I'm yours, aren't I?" Atsuko answered and it immediately replaced the pout with a smile and Kai didn't answer as he led the way to his car. He held the passenger door open for her and closed it once she made herself comfortable and strapped herself in. Kai then got into the passenger seat and started to drive.

♪Shine bright like a diamond

Shine bright like a diamond

Shining bright like a diamond♪

"We're here." Kai announced as he stopped the engine and got out and headed over to the other side to open the door for Atsuko who stepped out and stared at the mansion before her.

"This is different." Atsuko commented as Kai locked his car and held her hand, leading the way into the house. Usually it was a hotel, there was no particular reason why they always chose hotels but perhaps it was because Kai seemed to have too much money on his hands and he liked to spend it on luxurious hotels and spoil her with new outfits.

"It doesn't really matter, does it?" Kai said as they approached his room on the second floor.

"It feels more special though." Atsuko answered as Kai let go of her hand in favor of switching on the lights and removing his suit jacket while she placed her bag on a table.

Kai didn't answer but instead made his way over to the bed and sat on it while loosening his tie. Atsuko grinned then walked over and straddled him for the second time that night and captured his lips in one of their many kisses. In the middle of the kiss that was now becoming fiery with every passing second, Atsuko kicked off her heels and Kai did the same.

They pulled away a few moments later for air and they simply stared at each other for a moments, before leaning in for yet another kiss. In the midst of it, Kai unhooked Atsuko's stockings from her garter belt while Atsuko had pushed him down onto his bed as she slowly unbuttoned his shirt. She stopped and moaned when Kai's hand brushed against her inner thigh and rubbed circles. She looked down at Kai, now panting heavily.

"More." Atsuko whispered as she stared down at her lover.

"Anything for you, princess." Kai answered as he tangled his fingers in her hair, gently bringing her head down once more to continue their kisses and more.


♪We're beautiful like diamonds in the sky♪


♢ ♦ ♢ ♦ ♢ ♦ ♢ ♦ ♢ ♦ ♢ ♦ ♢ ♦ ♢ ♦ ♢ ♦ ♢ ♦


I'll edit this tomorrow of any mistakes, I'm too tired to do it now...  :mon sweat:

This would've been up sooner if I hadn't procrastinated.. oh well  :mon trudge:

My next updates will probably be the christmas OS and then WGM's first chapter, just a heads up~  :mon beam:
Title: Re: « chrunoi's OS area: Diamonds [KaiAcchan] »
Post by: ChibiRine on December 16, 2014, 02:03:28 PM
*trying to catch my breath* :depressed:

Alright, alright, alright. :frustrated:

You did well! Oh my gahd! :mon XD:

Looks like Takeru is a good friend of Acchan~ :farofflook:

Buuuut- Kai is just urgh! :mon inluv:

Plus the last part is awesome! :depressed:

Look! I can't use my proper emotion! :gmon bang:

Looking forward to more OS waifu~ :mon bye:
Title: Re: « chrunoi's OS area: Diamonds [KaiAcchan] »
Post by: Kairi65 on December 19, 2014, 06:28:07 AM
......eekkk~~!!!!

Just no word...Kai sure is possessive..

Can't wait to read next!
Title: Re: « chrunoi's OS area: Diamonds [KaiAcchan] »
Post by: cisda83 on December 23, 2014, 03:19:30 AM
well the Yuko Haruna OS was lovely and cute

But AtsuKai OS was very adult....

So great OSs as always....

Thank you for the stories

Can't wait to see more

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: « chrunoi's OS area: Diamonds [KaiAcchan] »
Post by: chrunoi on December 25, 2014, 01:55:57 PM
Note: This was based off of the new Team A pv but not that much really since I didn't watch the entire thing but yeh. Man I wish Acchan and Mariko were in it.. This is like not very romantic-ish.. But hey, Merry christmas !

Also, if you're uncomfortable with like, slight kinky things, then close this right now okay?  :on roll:




Letting Loose



"Come on, there's nothing to worry about." Kojima Haruna assured the short girl with a smile, one that Takahashi Minami decided looked a little bit more mischievous and cat like than usual.

"Uhm, I really don't think this is a good idea.." Takamina mumbled out but it didn't seem to faze Haruna as she carried on pulled the short girl past the line of people in the streets to the front of a building, guarded by two giant muscular men in suits. Haruna ignored the line and stood in front of them. Takamina looked around nervously, trying to hide her small form behind Haruna from the stares of strangers.

She felt extremely uncomfortable, the line of people were dressed way too sexy for her comfort zone. They were all dressed in tight, black skimpy outfits, outfits that Takamina never wanted to see in her life. But yet here she was, dressed up in a black lace top with a tight high-waist leather skirt as well as ankle boots. An outfit that she never owned but Haruna had brought it over and forced her to wear it. Haruna was dressed similarly as well, in a strapless leather dress along with a leather jacket and sheer thigh highs.

"I've brought a friend, Marichan said it was okay~" Haruna told the two security guards and they nodded as they moved aside to let them in. This made Takamina wonder, was Haruna coming here often? So much that she knows someone important here? All questions flew out of her mind though, when Haruna grabbed her once more by her wrist and dragged her into the building.

It was like what Takamina had imagined, a sea of people dancing in the dimly lit club along with people crowded by the bar. She was not expecting the stage that was set up in the middle of the large room, along with a pole in the middle and the people crowding around the stage. Takamina's eyes widened when she saw a girl dressed up as a, ahem, sexy cop holding a crop while circling a chair with a girl, in her underwear and a choker, tied to it. She quickly averted her eyes from the scene, panicking inside on just what Haruna had really dragged her to.

Haruna had watched Takamina's expression that had gone from curiosity to horror in just a matter of seconds and she wanted to laugh.

This was only the beginning.

She continued to walk and weave through the crowd while still dragging a shy Takamina until they reached the steps by the bar guarded by yet another pair of burly men. One look at her, the two immediately moved aside to let her up and she thanked them and led Takamina up the stairs.

Haruna continued walking up the steps past the second floor while grumbling about how much she had to walk. Takamina stayed quiet, wide eyes looking around. She wanted to break Haruna's hold on her and just run out and go home where she could just watch crime shows and cuddle up with a cup of hot chocolate. But Haruna's grip was tight so she couldn't escape, even though she had heard moaning noises coming from the second floor and had tried to pull away. They were now walking along a hallway with doors on either side, but they were walking towards the door at the end of the hallway. Takamina jumped at every moaning noise she heard that came from the doors. They stopped in front of the door, and Haruna turned slightly to face the terrified short girl.

"You're going to have the time of your life." Haruna told her and before she could respond, Haruna pushed open the door and pushed her in.

Takamina stumbled a little and straightened herself up with pink cheeks when she heard giggling. She looked up and saw a raised platform at the end of the large room, with a sofa with a victorian design. Takamina glanced to her left and right and she was horrified once more. There were people making out, several tied to chairs or chained to the walls while getting hit with with various things. Takamina's hand immediately brought itself to her face in an attempt to shield her eyes. Haruna pushed her forward from behind, till she was several steps away from the platform.

There, sitting leisurely on the sofa with an arm propped up on its armrest, was a short hair girl that looked like a model dressed similarly like the rest of the club-goers except with a fur coat. Takamina's eyes wandered over to the girl that was sitting on her knees beside the short-haired girl but had her arms wrapped around the model's neck and her head on her shoulder while the model's arm was around her waist. The girl had tousled shoulder length hair, revealing a black spiked leather choker around her neck. She wore a white sweetheart strapless top with a black bra frame over them along with a black skater skirt, sheer thigh high socks held up by a garter belt and black heels.

"The one with the fur coat is the owner, Shinoda Mariko. And the one beside her is Maeda Atsuko!" Haruna introduced them to Takamina and then left the side of the short girl, leaving her standing alone and stepped up the platform and sat beside Atsuko. Takamina watched as Atsuko looked up at Mariko for a moment and Mariko gave a small nod and immediately, Atsuko left Mariko and switched over to Haruna and hugged the girl. Haruna laughed and patted Atsuko on the head, earning a quiet giggle from the girl.

Mariko shifted her gaze from the two, to Takamina, causing the short girl to squeak. Mariko then turned back to Haruna with a questioning look.

"She's Takahashi Minami. Dear Takamina here needs to spice up her life a little, according to Yuko, so I brought her here!" Haruna answered and Mariko let out an 'ah' and turned back to Takamina.

"So, Takamina. How do you feel right now?" Mariko asked and Atsuko turned to look at Takamina and the three waited for her answer.

"I-I w-want to go home.." Takamina muttered and Mariko laughed and Takamina jumped slightly.

"Perfect." Mariko said and then waved her hand. Almost immediately, a girl with a collar quickly walks to her, placed a collar in Mariko's open hand and then quickly walks away. She then handed the collar to Atsuko who took it and looked at Mariko with a slight tilt of her head.

"I can?" Atsuko asked and Takamina perked up at hearing her voice for the first time, her voice was soft and delicate and Takamina wondered how a girl like her got into .. this kind of things.

"Mhm." Mariko answered and Atsuko gave Mariko a big smile before kissing her on the cheek and getting off the sofa and walked towards the short, terrified girl. Atsuko smiled at Takamina, which made her blush and without a word, took her hand and led her out of the room and into the hallway.

"Lift your head up." Atsuko instructed and Takamina immediately did as told, even though she was unsure. She was rewarded with a smile by the taller girl and she was about to smile back when she felt something slightly heavy around her neck. Takamina looked down and her hand touched the black leather collar that was now sitting snugly around her neck.

"It fits you perfectly!" Atsuko praised her and Takamina's blush deepened.

"T-thank you." Takamina stuttered out and she was groaning inside at the stutter. Atsuko then gently grabbed Takamina's wrist and then led her down the hallway before stopping in front of a door and opening it. Atsuko let go of Takamina's wrist as they stepped into the spacious room and flicked the light switch on. Takamina was cautiously walking towards the bed as she looked around and she stopped when she spotted whips and crops hanging on one side of the wall. Wait.. whips and crops?! Takamina thought fearfully but was literally pushed out of her thoughts when Atsuko pushed her onto the bed and straddled her waist. She followed Takamina's gaze to the whips and crops and she smiled.

"Don't worry. We won't use it.. yet!" Atsuko said cheerfully and Takamina had relaxed when Atsuko said she wouldn't use it but immediately stiffened when the 'yet' was added.

"Wait, yet?! Why!" Takamina shouted and Atsuko laughed.

"Well, we're not just going to stop today are we? We're going to spend more time together even after today!" Atsuko answered, with the same amount of cheerfulness from before. And before Takamina could get another word out, something clicked around her wrists and she looked down in disbelief.

"Handcuffs?!" Takamina asked as she shook her bounded wrist, the chains jingling at the action.

"Why not! Plus these are my favorites, it has the heart lock! You should be happy you got these pretty ones." Atsuko told her with a pout and Takamina looked away in defeat. They were like that for a few moments, Atsuko straddling Takamina's waist while Takamina was avoiding the taller girl's gaze. Atsuko grinned as she watched the shorter girl trying to stay avoiding her gaze. She hooked a finger around the chains that connected the handcuffs and pulled it so that Takamina now sat up and Atsuko was leaning over her.

"You don't have to think anything. Just let go and enjoy yourself tonight, Minami~" Atsuko whispered and immediately crashed her lips onto Minami's and ran the tip of her tongue along Minami's lower lip. Minami moaned and Atsuko pushed her tongue into Minami's mouth, her tongue wrapping around Minami's. Minami was now growing frustrated at her bounded hands as she moaned, she wanted to touch Atsuko, but she couldn't do anything with these stupid cuffs. Atsuko pulled back after a while, both girls now breathing heavily as Atsuko rested her forehead against Minami's.

"See? You're enjoying yourself now, aren't you~?" Atsuko whispered and Minami couldn't do anything but nod as the taller girl reached behind Minami's head and tugged on the ribbon that held Minami's braided hair together. She tossed the ribbon aside and ran a hand through her hair and then grabbed her hair and pulled it back so that Minami's back was now arched.

Atsuko brought a free hand and gently traced the side of Minami's face, down her neck and the contours of her body until she fingered the hem of Minami's lace top. She gave a chaste kiss to Minami's lips once more and giggled when Minami whined when she pulled back.

"Don't worry, we'll be doing much more~" Atsuko whispered with a grin and pulled Minami's top off and wrapped the cloth around the bounded hands. Then she pulled down Minami's skirt and dropped it on the ground along with her shoes, leaving Minami now only in her underwear.

"N-not fair.." Minami muttered and Atsuko stared at for a moment, watching the short girl's cheeks growing redder by the second. Then she grinned and stood up, her grin widening as she saw Minami following her with her eyes. Atsuko then slowly bent down, showing her cleavage as she took off her heels. Then Atsuko stood up and removed the bra frame and threw it onto the bed next to Minami. Feeling satisfied at how much Minami was paying attention to her, she took off her top and stepped out of her skirt, leaving the garter belt, socks and underwear on.

"Better?" Atsuko asked as she resumed her position of straddling Minami's waist and giggled when Minami nodded rapidly. They kissed once more, this time, Atsuko allowed Minami's tongue entrance but pulled away when she felt Minami's fingers around her bra covered breasts.

"Impatient, are we?" Atsuko breathed as she tugged roughly on Minami's hair, making a bit of tears appear at the corners of Minami's eyes. But Minami's eyes showed no fear, instead it was arousal, the roughness turning her on even more. Atsuko then traced her index finger down Minami's body, Minami feeling the goosebumps rising as the taller girl's fingernail gently dragged across her skin and down to her panties.

"Wow, you're really excited, hm?" Atsuko whispered, a breath away from Minami's lips as she rubbed a finger on the shorter girl's panties, feeling satisfied at the wetness that had soaked through the cloth and the sweet moans that kept on coming out of Minami's lips.

"P-Please.." Minami begged and Atsuko's smile widened, showing her teeth. She leaned down to close the distance between their lips and captured the girl's lips once more in a hot kiss.

"Whatever you want, Mi~Na~Mi~" Atsuko breathed as she slipped her hand into Minami's panties and pushed it down slightly, grinning at the breathy moans that started to escape the short girl's lips once more.



- - - - - -


I know, don't look at me. I know.  :ptam-...:

I wasn't going to get anything up for christmas but well here have this because I couldn't stop my dirty mind > u >

I think I'm never doing this again... meep.  :ptam-glow:
Title: Re: « chrunoi's OS area: Letting Loose [AtsuMina] »
Post by: ChibiRine on December 25, 2014, 03:11:42 PM
The title got me alright :depressed:

Plus the last paragraph! *insert some random nosebleed emoticon, GIF, etc lol*

*looks at you* Seriously? You will never do this again? :dunno:

You should write more! BWAHAHAHAHA! :mon XD:

Looking forward for more~ :mon bye:

Merry Christmas~! :gmon bang:

*dead*
Title: Re: « chrunoi's OS area: Letting Loose [AtsuMina] »
Post by: black_maa on December 25, 2014, 07:51:53 PM
Oh.. that was.. hot..  :sweat:
You need write more.. and more.. about this..  :oops: 
So, I hope see more this kind of stories..  8)
Title: Re: « chrunoi's OS area: Letting Loose [AtsuMina] »
Post by: Tanchan on December 26, 2014, 03:56:32 AM
Why did you stop right there? We're getting to the good part XD
Title: Re: « chrunoi's OS area: Letting Loose [AtsuMina] »
Post by: phoenix0i on December 26, 2014, 05:25:27 AM
That was something. Haha.  :banghead:

Merry Christmas author-san.
Title: Re: « chrunoi's OS area: Letting Loose [AtsuMina] »
Post by: cisda83 on December 26, 2014, 10:55:23 PM
Eh... Minami and Atsuko in S&M

Very extreme imagination.... though Atsuko being the S is correct somehow...

Thank you for the interesting OS

Can't wait to see more Atsumina OS

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs

Merry Christmas and Happy New Year
Title: Re: « chrunoi's OS area: Letting Loose [AtsuMina] »
Post by: chrunoi on December 31, 2014, 01:55:56 PM


Note: read the Author's note at the end okay!  :on ksweat:



New Years.


Takahashi Minami sighed against her knees as she continued to watch a random cooking channel. She glanced at the clock hanging on the wall every now and then, watching as the time slowly ticked by, inching closer to the new year. Yet, that person wasn't home. She let out another frustrated sigh and rubbed her head before stretching out her legs, shifting into a new position on the sofa and continued to watch a random lady cook.

It was half an hour later, when she heard the door opening, revealing the person she had been waiting for. Maeda Atsuko stumbled a little when her leg got caught with her skirt as she entered the house and Takamina smiled at the clumsy act.

"I'm sorry for being late~" Atsuko apologized as she took off her shoes and dropped her bag on the carpet before sitting on the sofa next to Minami.

"It's alright. I didn't mind waiting." Minami answered as she ruffled the hair of the taller girl affectionately. Atsuko then rested her head on Minami's shoulder and the two watched the TV, where two teams were competing in baking. They stayed that way for a while, waiting until the commercial break before they spoke again.

"How come you were late today?" Minami asked as the advertisements started to play. 

"Onoe treated me to dinner. More like the agency did, since my movies are coming out soon." Atsuko answered with a sigh and almost immediately, a frown made it's way to Minami's lips. She never did like it when she saw Atsuko and that man together, even though it was just a publicity stunt.

"You shouldn't frown like that when we haven't seen each other in a while, much less on the last day of 2014." Atsuko sat up and poked Minami's cheeks but the action caused her to frown even more.

"I wonder who's fault is it that we haven't met up in so long..?" Minami asked the taller girl in a quiet voice, causing Atsuko to pull her hand back and stare at Minami with narrowed eyes. Minami knew she shouldn't have said it in that manner that would've hit a short nerve in the taller girl. She should've smiled after that but she didn't. It was the bottled up of pent up frustration of not meeting Atsuko in so long that has opened up and Minami should've closed it immediately.

"We met at the start of the month, a week before the 9th anniversary, doesn't that count? But we haven't met up after that. Only a phone call from the very generous Takahashi Minami who has been using her time to get closer to Nyannyan." Atsuko replied in a sarcastic manner. She hadn't plan on this argument (somewhat) to happen on today of all days and it was starting to ruin the happy mood she'd arrived with.

"You don't have to sound that bitchy at that last part. You're not in AKB for them to pair me up with, so Nyannyan is just filling in for you in the fanservice department." Minami explained, her voice now softening when she realized how upset the other girl was becoming. This was not how she wanted to end 2014 with.

"Well sorry for being bitchy then." Atsuko replied and before Minami could say another word, she stood up and walked into Minami's bedroom and slammed the door. Minami groaned and leaned back onto the sofa. Sometimes, she really hated that short temper that Atsuko has, more so on occasions like this. Minami decided to leave Atsuko a while to cool down and continued to watch the TV.

When the TV show ended, Minami switched it off, got up and quietly walked to the closed bedroom door and pressed her ear gently against it, trying to hear if Atsuko was still awake. When she couldn't hear anything, she turned the doorknob, and opened the door to find Atsuko lying on the bed in her pajamas. Minami entered the room and closed the door behind her and walked over to the bedside. She sat on the bed and then crawled over to fit herself in between Atsuko's arms and snuggled close so that the taller girl was spooning her. Minami smiled when she felt Atsuko's arm tighten a little and she intertwined both her hands with Atsuko's.

"I'm sorry, I didn't mean for it to come out that way. I'm glad that we met up today." Minami apologized and she felt Atsuko's head press closer against the back of her's and she giggled.

"I'm sorry too, I shouldn't have gotten mad." Atsuko apologized, though quieter and Minami laughed because Atsuko sounded like a child who was scolded.

"It's alright~" Minami assured her and they laid there in silence for a while and Minami thought Atsuko had fallen asleep and was startled when the taller girl spoke.

"Minami?"

"Hm?"

"I wanna be the small spoon." Atsuko demanded childishly and Minami laughed and agreed. So Atsuko and Minami turned over so that their position was now switch, though Atsuko had to move a little lower down the bed because she insisted she wanted Minami's head on top of hers. Minami had one hand stroking Atsuko's hair while the other one had Atsuko's head lying on top of it while she played with Minami's free hand.

The pair stayed like that for a while in silence. They didn't mind the comfortable silence, they preferred it that way at certain times. But the sound of fireworks in the air broke the silence and they glanced out the window, admiring the fireworks that signaled a new year.

"Ahh, it's already 2015. Happy new year, Minami~" Atsuko told her as she looked up and smiled at Minami.

"Happy new year too, Atsuko." Minami replied and then placed a little kiss on Atsuko's hair which made the taller girl giggle and they continued to watch the fireworks until people no longer set them off.

"Love you, Minami.." Atsuko mumbled, half asleep after a while and Minami hugged her a little tighter.

"I love you too, Atsuko." Minami replied to the girl in her arms and smiled when Atsuko scrunched up her nose a little bit before relaxing and smiling.

Minami looked up at the starry night sky, as Atsuko drifted deeper into dreamland. She decided that in 2015, she would make sure that she met up more often with Atsuko. And love the clumsy sleeping girl in her arms even more than ever.

And then she too, feel asleep, still being the big spoon.


------


I felt like I wasn't going to be able to get motivation tomorrow to write a new years fic so here, have it now.  :on roll:

I think, my plan for now, is to (try to) finish Aftermath 2.0 and then head into a little hiatus. Because I honestly have no motivation to write. I'm not feeling happy enough when I sit in my chair and stare at my laptop.  :cool2:

I feel like I'm also loosing a little of my writing touch, it doesn't feel like I have the magic of writing fics now, so that'll be my main reason for going into writing hiatus.  :mon sweat:

I thought I should tell you guys that if you don't see me writing after (hopefully) completing Aftermath 2.0, you'll know why. I do hope that I will get my writing touch back soon though but oh well..  :mon trudge:

So yeah, hope you enjoy it anyway~

Title: Re: « chrunoi's OS area: New Years [Short AtsuMina] »
Post by: Kairi65 on December 31, 2014, 06:44:53 PM
*faint due too critical nosebleed..

Eh? On hiatus?  I hope you would quickly get out of that state..  :rock:

Good luck!!  :fap
Title: Re: « chrunoi's OS area: New Years [Short AtsuMina] »
Post by: cisda83 on December 31, 2014, 09:22:58 PM
Thought there would be some crisis there, when they started arguing?!

Glad nothing major happened and they settled things easily.

Yeah, it would be great if they met up more, then may be I could see more pictures of them together.

Since this is the last year of Takahashi Minami being in 48 group.

Well can't wait to see more Atsumina OS

Thank you for OS

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs

Happy New Year 2015
Title: Re: « chrunoi's OS area: New Years [Short AtsuMina] »
Post by: black_maa on February 14, 2015, 11:53:45 AM
That was..... good!  :twothumbs
I realy love it.. Atsumina - forever!  :oops:
Please, write more this kind of OS or make them into stories!  :)
Title: Re: « chrunoi's OS area: Hairband Girl [AtsuMina] 14.02.2015 »
Post by: cisda83 on February 14, 2015, 02:18:39 PM
Actually it's interesting story

Quite funny in some part...

I enjoyed the story very much...

Cute lovely Atsumina OS

Thank you for the OS

Can't wait to see more Atsumina

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: « chrunoi's OS area: Hairband Girl [AtsuMina] 14.02.2015 »
Post by: phoenix0i on February 14, 2015, 04:00:40 PM
This Atsumina OS sure is cute.  :thumbup
Title: Re: « chrunoi's OS area: Hairband Girl [AtsuMina] 14.02.2015 »
Post by: KaoriChan on February 15, 2015, 11:16:28 AM
Atsumina!! :heart: :heart:


Sweeter than the chocolate I received from my friend yesterday..
hahaha :nervous
Title: Re: « chrunoi's OS area: Hairband Girl [AtsuMina] 14.02.2015 »
Post by: chrunoi on February 18, 2015, 11:56:38 AM
Note; I am a little confused, in the song it doesn't say whether the date starts at 7:12, or ends at 7:12 [or it does and I'm just blind], so I chose for it to start at 7:12 though it is an odd time but yeah.



7:12 am


She fought against the morning crowd, trying to push her way to the train platform. Takahashi Minami let out a sigh of relief as she walked towards one end of the platform where there were lesser people. It was crowded in the mornings because of people rushing to work and school, she belonged to the latter.

She adjusted the tie of her uniform and her jacket and then looked out at the platform, waiting for the train. Then out of the corner of her eye, Minami saw the person she looks forward to seeing every morning.

The girl was a student as well, though she went to a different school as the uniform she wore was a sailor uniform while Minami's school had the suit jacket ones. Minami watched as the girl adjusted her navy blue skirt. Minami didn't recognize which school had the sailor uniform in navy blue along with dark red lines, but she did know it was near hers as the girl got off on the same stop as she did. Then Minami turned her head back to the front, when she heard the train starting to come into view and soon at the platform.

At exactly 7:12 am.

As she boarded the train, she stared out of the corner of her eye as she headed to the doors, her usual spot to lean against, and the other girl went for the opposite ones. As people filed in one after another and started to block her view, Minami did smile when she could still spot the shoulder length haired girl from in between the human sea.

Minami pulled out her earphones and phone from her skirt pocket and plug them into her phone and then the buds into her ears. She pressed play on her playlist and then lifted her head back up to watch the girl from afar. She smile when she saw her reading the a book. As the train started to continue on its journey, Minami wondered.

How did she become like this? Waiting anxiously everyday, at the same time, for this girl opposite her to show up at the train station just so she can see her for the next twenty minutes. The funny thing was, she didn't even know the girl's name and the girl probably doesn't even that Minami looked forward to be on the same train ride as her everyday. It has been like this for a year already, and yet Minami didn't understand how she fell in love with someone she didn't even know. It wasn't a fleeting love, it was most definitely not that. Minami knew that somehow she felt close to this unknown girl though they have never exchanged words even once. But each time they happened to pass by each other, mainly when they entered and left the train, Minami felt her heart race even though the girl never looked her way even once.

Minami had told her best friend, Oshima Yuko, about it and Yuko stared at her wide eyed for a minute and then proceeded to tell her that her first crush was developed in a rather odd place but that she was 'glad you're not going to die a virgin'. Yuko had time and time again, encouraged her to talk to her crush but Minami didn't have the courage to, every time she thought she was going to do it, her insides twisted and knotted as butterflies started to come alive in her stomach and then she would shy away and proceed on with her life. But then again, she didn't mind just watching from afar. Surely, one day it'd stop, and that day would be sad for Minami but if she could believe that she will be able to work up courage before then and talk to her, she'd be fine.

Minami looked up as she heard the announcer's voice reciting the station name they'll be arriving at in a few minutes, which was hers and the girl's. And then a miracle had happened, she locked eyes with the girl, Minami froze, without any idea what to do. And then the butterflies came alive once more when the girl gave a shy smile and a nod. Then the doors behind the girl opened and people started to leave, including the girl and Minami snapped out of her trance and rushed out but the girl was now lost in the sea of people, gone from Minami's sight.

Feeling disappointment in herself at not reacting faster, she sulkily made her way out of the station and to school. But a small smile made its way onto her face, as she remembered the girl's smile. Then a realization sank in and she groaned.

The girl knew I have been watching her, how embarrassing! Minami wailed in her mind as she covered her face with her hands.

But as embarrassing as it was, it was nonetheless a good start to the day.


- -


"Why didn't you wake me up, mom!" Minami shouted back to the house as she ran towards the station while trying to make herself look presentable. For the first time, she was late. It was already 7:10 when she had left the house, she wasn't going to be able to make it for the 7:12 train. She pushed herself to run faster.

It felt wrong to miss a day, and after what happened a few days ago, she never wanted to. After that day, they exchanged smiles with each other, but they never talked. But at least it was something to start with.

Minami panted as she made her way into the station and up to the platform, people were staring but she ignored them. She made it to the platform in record time, but instantly disappointment filled her when her eyes scanned through the few people waiting for the train but none of them were the girl. Minami looked up at the screen and confirmed it.

7:17 am

She made her way sulkily to her usual spot at the end of the platform and placed her earphones in her ears and started to listen to music while staring at her feet. She looked up, when a pair of shoes stopped beside her and found the now familiar navy blue sailor uniform in her view and then that familiar smile. Immediately,  Minami pulled out the ear buds and held in her hands as the girl greeted her.

"This is not our usual train nor time, but I'm glad we still got to meet." The girl told her with a wide smile which Minami found herself returning.

"Me too." She answered as she packed her earphones away into her pocket while the other girl watched.

"Nice to meet you, I'm Maeda Atsuko." Atsuko introduced herself, stretching out a hand for the other girl to shake which Minami gladly did so.

"Takahashi Minami, nice to meet you as well." Minami replied and then the train came, making them stop their handshake.

"Let's talk more! I've been wanting to talk to you." Atsuko exclaimed as she grabbed Minami by the hand when the train doors opened and stepped in with her.


That day, Takahashi Minami was glad that she was late for the first time.


♪ I wonder if we'll meet again? ♪

♪ A first love, at 7:12 am ♪


---


A/N; yeah, I don't know why I got another one shot up this quickly either. But I've been listening a lot to the song and well I managed to write half last night and today I still have some inspiration so yeah. Though it seems like my writing skills are rotting though, oh well.

I may be going on another hiatus, though I almost usually am but still. I'm starting to fall back into my 'failure mood' again whereby I just feel like an absolute loser everyday so yeah, don't expect much from me any more.

It's chinese new year tomorrow but I'm not that pumped up for it (except for the money), but to my fellow chinese people and just everyone, Happy [early] Chinese New Year!!  :mon firecrack:
Title: Re: « chrunoi's OS area: 7:12 am [Short AtsuMina] 18.02.2015 »
Post by: cisda83 on February 18, 2015, 04:02:21 PM
Ah.. so sweet....

Minami had a crush on Atsuko...

And she got a chance to talk intro herself to Atsuko by being late to school...

Very nice plot there

Thank you for the lovely OS

Can't wait to see more

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: « chrunoi's OS area: 7:12 am [Short AtsuMina] 18.02.2015 »
Post by: black_maa on February 18, 2015, 08:39:02 PM
It really was fast update..  :huhuh
....But I am happy for that.. if it's Atsumina.. then more often is more better.  8)
And this was also so sweet OS!  :oops:
Thank you!! Waiting others too!!!  :)
Title: Re: « chrunoi's OS area: 7:12 am [Short AtsuMina] 18.02.2015 »
Post by: phoenix0i on February 19, 2015, 01:45:59 AM
Call it fate. Still, Atsumina is an amazing pair.
This fic wants me to read more.

Thanks for the update.
Title: Re: « chrunoi's OS area: 7:12 am [Short AtsuMina] 18.02.2015 »
Post by: Haruko on February 19, 2015, 05:44:58 AM
so cute our atsumina
Title: Re: « chrunoi's OS area: 7:12 am [Short AtsuMina] 18.02.2015 »
Post by: chrunoi on March 14, 2015, 01:57:58 PM
R.I.P Simon, my cat that died on March 13th, I love you.



Second Chance


xx April


Takahashi Minami quickly scanned through her presentation slides again, as if the previous times weren't enough to assure her that there were no spelling or grammar mistakes. Once she finished looking through the slides, people started to file into the room and sat themselves in their respective seats.

This was it, this was her chance to get that promotion once and for all. If she pulls this presentation of a new product off, surely, she'd get promoted. The lights dimmed and then Minami started.

As she neared towards the end of the meeting, a soft buzz distracted her. Minami looked over to the podium, where her laptop and her phone was. Her phone was lighted up, the buzzing signalling an incoming call. No, She told herself firmly and began to talk as if there wasn't any pause. I can't screw this up now, she should understand how important this is to me, Minami discreetly walked back to the podium and tapped on her phone screen and then proceeded to continue explaining.

------

Atsuko <3

>Answer    >Ignore


------


-///////-


Maeda Atsuko slowly brought her hand down, staring at her phone's home screen. Anger, sadness, disbelief now bubbled within her as she gripped the phone in her hands tightly until her knuckles started to turn white.

How could you ignore me?

She wiped a tear away. This wasn't anything new, she should be used to it by now. After all, work was more important than her. Now, Minami didn't bother much about her anymore. It was all about work, the promotion, the raise. Everything else came before Atsuko, even when she voiced out to her girlfriend how unhappy she was, Minami brushed it off, didn't even bother to lift her head up from her papers to look at her.

It feels like there's nothing left for me, Atsuko thought as she slowly made her way to the pedestrian crossing. My girlfriend doesn't care about me anymore, I have nobody else to talk my feelings to. I have nobody. I.. am alone.


And I don't want to be alone.



Atsuko glanced up at the 'red man' signal, then turning back to the busy road where cars zoomed passed without a care. Then without a second thought, she started to walk forward, onto the road where the cars were still moving. There were shouts behind her, telling her to get off the road, but she continued on forward.

Then Atsuko closed her eyes as she felt an impact on her side and her phone slipping out of her grasp as she fell to the ground, welcoming the darkness that engulfed her.


I don't want to be alone.


-///////-


Oshima Yuko quietly rubbed her friend's back. They were sitting in the stiff hospital chairs outside the operating room, waiting for good news. She kept quiet as her friend tried to stifle her sobs.

"I messed up, Yuko. It's my fault that she's in there right now. " Minami's voice cracked as she spoke in between sobs.

"No it isn't."

"It is, she called me." Minami sniffled and wiped her tears.

"She did?" Yuko asked slightly surprised. She didn't know that. Minami nodded.

"She called me, I should've answered it." Minami spoke in a small voice and Yuko leaned closer.

"You didn't answer the call?" Yuko asked with wide eyes and Minami locked eyes with her for a second before looking away. The guilt eating her up even more when she had seen the surprise on Yuko's face.

"I was in a meeting." Yuko immediately moved back and sank into her chair and covered her face with her hands. As much as she had wanted to yell at her friend for not answering Atsuko's call, this wasn't the place nor time to do it. Minami seemed to be beating herself up over it quite a lot as well, she shouldn't rub salt into the wound. Then they sat in silence for a few minutes more, waiting for the red light above the doors to turn off.

Then Yuko heard the sound of the doors opening and the two stood back onto their feet and rushed over the the surgeon who had come through the doors.

"How is she?! Is she okay? Was everything successful?" Minami asked question after question and the doctor waited for her to release her grip on him before speaking.

"I'm sorry, Takahashi-san. Unfortunately we did all that we could but we couldn't save her. The impact of the hit was hard enough to cause her ribs to break and one of the broken ribs pierced her heart. I'm sorry for your loss." The doctor solemnly informed the two, bowed and then left. Immediately, Minami sank to the ground on her knees and started to sob once again, and Yuko could only hold her friend, hoping that at least this hug provided some comfort.


-///////-


"She still looks so beautiful." Minami whispered, stroking Atsuko's hair. Yuko could only watch as her friend stayed quiet and continue to stroke her dead girlfriend's hair. It stayed like that for a few more minutes, Minami saying absolutely nothing and Yuko just watching her.

"I want to be alone with her." Minami quietly said and Yuko nodded and then left the room, and sat outside the door. Minami walked a few steps down, and then reached for the cold hand, linking their fingers together. Bringing the entwined hands up to her face, she kissed the back of the cold one and then started to sob.

"I'm so sorry, Atsuko. I'm so sorry." Minami sobbed out as she sank to her knees. "I'm so sorry I made you feel alone."

Atsuko had told her before, that she never liked being on her own, she hated it. She wanted someone to always be right beside her, to make her happy, to take her mind off things. Atsuko wanted someone to love her, to put her first. It was in a sense, selfish of Atsuko to want that but Minami had seen the sadness and loneliness in her eyes when they first met and she didn't want that there. Minami promised Atsuko, that she'll be there by her side, all the way, no matter what and to listen to her problems.

But she broke it, she had broken the very promise when she had prioritized work over Atsuko. Minami just hadn't expected that Atsuko would've committed suicide driven by loneliness.  If Minami had known this would've happened, she would've given up on the opportunity of a promotion and a raise. If she had simply answered her phone, this could've been prevented.

"I wish I could turn back time.. I wish I could have one more chance." Minami whispered against their connected hands and squeezed them.

Yuko shook her head slightly outside as she leaned her head back against the wall. She let out a sigh as she stared at the rather dull pink wall opposite her.

"You can't change the past, Bakamina." She whispered to herself.


-///////-
-\\\\\\\-


Minami groaned, when she heard the doorbell ringing. She didn't want to deal with people for the rest of her life. She took all the leave days that she didn't use and it amounted to about two months. It has been days, since Atsuko's death and her funeral but Minami was still struggling to let go. Her apartment had pictures of her and Atsuko all over the house, especially on the fridge door. Whenever Minami needed to get water or some food, she would have to look at the pictures that showed that at one point everything was okay, everything was great. And it just hit Minami harder that everything fell apart.

She wrapped the blanket around her and then proceeded to make her way to the door where someone stood outside waiting. When Minami looked up after opening the door, she was shocked.

There before her, stood her smiling girlfriend. The girlfriend that was supposed to be dead.

Atsuko tilted her head with a confused smile before pouting when Minami didn't speak after a while and pushed her way inside with a paper bag. Minami pushed the door closed and stared at Atsuko who was now unpacking things from the paper bag.

"Atsuko?" Minami asked, still in disbelief.

"Hm? What do you want, Minami?" Atsuko turned to her with a smile. This is real, she's actually back! Minami smiled and immediately ran over and hugged the taller girl. Atsuko was a bit confused but she hugged Minami back just as tightly. Out of the corner of her eye, Minami noticed the calender sitting on a nearby table.

xx March

Minami couldn't believe it. Time had reverted itself back a month before everything went wrong. Some God or someone of the sort is actually giving me a second chance to prevent Atsuko's death! Minami was beyond happy and excited. This is it, this was what she had been wishing for!

"Minami? Are you okay?" Atsuko asked as she pulled back slightly to look at the shorter girl in concern. Minami nodded with a wide smile and without hesitation, pushed herself up slightly and connected her lips to Atsuko's in a short kiss. When she pulled back, Minami giggled at the blush that had made it's way onto Atsuko's cheeks.


This was what Minami had missed during those few days, and she was glad she could have it again.


-\\\\\\\-


Minami made sure that she spent more time with Atsuko than before. They had more dates such as cycling together near the beach, more movie nights and sleepovers and dinner dates and just plain lazy days together. This second chance was turning out to what Minami had wanted, becoming closer and being the pillar of support and love to Atsuko. But the day where Atsuko's accident happened was approaching, tomorrow in fact, and Minami was nervous. She wasn't sure if she could truly prevent it, but Minami told herself to believe. After all, she did get this second chance.

"Atsuko?" Minami murmured, watching said person in her arms shifting slightly to look up at her. They were watching a movie on the couch in the living room while cuddling.

"Hm?" Atsuko hummed as she snuggled closer.

"Do you have any plans tomorrow?" Minami asked and Atsuko thought for a moment.

"I don't think so? Maybe I might go home and see if I need to buy anything but other than that.. not really. Ah! You have that meeting tomorrow, right? The one where you possibly get promoted?" Atsuko got up and faced her with a smile which Minami returned. That's right.. that meeting.. Minami felt a little uneasy about the meeting and Atsuko noticed it.

"Don't be so nervous! I'm sure you'll impress everyone and you'll definitely get promoted! You know what? I'll meet you after your meeting, I'll bring a present too!" Atsuko grinned, her signature crinkles appearing. Minami couldn't help but giggle at how excited Atsuko looked and nodded.

"I hope I do." Minami told her sincerely. I don't just mean about the promotion, I also mean about your death.

"Ah! Minami, we missed a large chunk of the movie.. hurry sit back down so we can cuddle again." Atsuko told her as she quickly rewinded back to where they last watched and cuddle close again.


--


Here she was, back again in the middle of the meeting. Minami talked confidently, having gone through it before. She looked over to the podium where her phone was and looked at the time. It was almost the time when the accident occurred although this time there was no phone call. Minami was feeling anxious, what if by the time the meeting was over, the accident would happen and she couldn't stop it? What if Atsuko was already hit?

She had paused and wasn't talking now and the people in the room stared at her and started to murmur among themselves.  Minami looked around for a moment before making up her mind and ran out of the room. She had to be sure that this second chance would not be wasted, that she would surely change Atsuko's fate. Her chance at promotion is nothing and can be earned again.

Atsuko hummed along to the music that was blasting in her ears from her headphones as she admired the sunflower in it's pot in her hands. It was her present for Minami like what she had said yesterday, Atsuko wanted to give Minami something she could have at her office that would remind the short girl of her, as if the framed pictures on Minami's desk weren't enough.

Atsuko continued to fiddle with the flower, trying to make it look as perfect as possible as she approached the pedestrian crossing. She put one foot in front of the other and continued to walk forward without realizing that the 'red man' was still up. She continued to walk forward, this time unintentionally as she was too preoccupied in trying to make the flower look perfect.

Without warning, a hand grabbed Atsuko's and pulled back away from harm's way and back onto the pavement. Atsuko turned around to find a panting Minami and she pulled off her headphones, slightly confused.

"Minami?" She asked the tired girl who simply held up a hand before grabbing Atsuko's hand and leading her away and into a nearby cafe. They sat down in silence for a few moments as Minami tried to catch her breath again. Atsuko sent down the sunflower and pushed the pot towards Minami who looked confused.

"It's your present!" Atsuko told her with a smile. Minami gently grabbed the pot and watched the flower for a moment and then giggled.

"Thank you, Atsuko. It's such a pretty flower." Minami thanked her as she played with a leaf.

"Oh, how was the meeting?" Atsuko asked as she watched Minami and Minami paused.

"I left it halfway. I had a bad feeling about you and so I trusted my gut instinct and then what do I find? You nearly getting into an accident!" Minami told her with a pout and Atsuko let out an 'ah'.

"I'm sorry.. I was so into the music and trying to make sure the flower was pretty.. I'm sorry, Minami. I'll be careful next time." Atsuko apologized, looking down at her hands on her lap. Minami giggled at the sight and then reached over the table to hold Atsuko's hand.

"It's alright but I'm glad you're safe. I love you." Minami blurted out and then blushed as Atsuko giggled.

"I love you too." Atsuko answered with a giggled before looking at a menu. "Now since we're here.. Let's order food and eat!" Atsuko excitedly told Minami and Minami smiled and followed Atsuko in scanning through the menus.


Thank you, God, for this second chance.


-\\\\\\\-


Very lame ending because I'm getting tired from writing this.

This is based on the mv for JYJ's song, In Heaven. I was going to make this exactly like the mv in the sense that they both died but I couldn't bring myself to write it..  :mon POd:

I actually had planned on quitting Jphip but then decided to just come on and read stuff and leave comments and not write but then my cat died and I felt the need to write something slightly angtsy..  :fainted:

So yeah, I apologize if this isn't good, my writing has gotten rusty. I may not be very active in writing stories but I'll try to be.  :on roll:

Have a good day / night everyone!  :gmon sing:
Title: Re: « chrunoi's OS area: Second Chance [AtsuMina] 14.03.2015 »
Post by: cisda83 on March 14, 2015, 02:09:27 PM
Ah... so Minami able to prevent Atsuko from getting into accident

The first one... Atsuko intentionally getting hit

The second one is unintentionally and Minami chose Atsuko not her meeting

Very good story there...

Thank you for the OS

Can't wait to see more Atsumina OS

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: « chrunoi's OS area: Second Chance [AtsuMina] 14.03.2015 »
Post by: black_maa on March 14, 2015, 02:14:39 PM
From the start I was shocked, because Acchan died.. :shocked ..
but then.. somehow time went back and she is still a live..  :)
I am glad, that Minami didn't waste her second chance..


Thank you for this OS!  :)  It was very good..
Title: Re: « chrunoi's OS + SS: Untitled [Prologue thing] 17.04.2015 »
Post by: chrunoi on April 17, 2015, 01:31:16 PM
Pieces - Prologue Thing.



Takahashi Minami leaned back into her chair and crossed her arms behind her head and closed her eyes for a little break.

She had been doing paperwork for the last two hours straight and honestly, she was sick of doing nothing but writing. Minami opened her eyes after a few minutes, adjusted her glasses before letting out a sigh and then glancing back at the paper that was on her desk.

Minami's eyes glanced to the photo frame above the paper. The photo that was framed was of a meek looking girl who was holding up her fingers in a peace sign albeit rather shyly. Her black hair was short and straight, barely brushing past her shoulders. Her lips pulled up at the corners in a small smile that lit up her ordinary face.

Minami smiled to herself as she remembered the moment before the picture was taken, where the other girl had protested and whined about it but eventually gave in and let Minami take a picture of her.

Then Minami's gaze hardened as she leaned back into her chair and she looked down at her hands on her lap.


"I'll find you, Akiko." Minami whispered determined before relaxing and returning to her paperwork.


--

So I had an idea for a story, which hasn't happened in ages wew, but I've been thinking whether or not to post it so I decided to just make a prologue thing and then see if I want to continue and I didn't want to create a new thread so I just converted this OS area, yeah.

Note: Akiko will be Acchan's name in the fic for a bit, and then it'll just be 'Atsuko' from there on. Also, it's a sort of love triangle thing but it'll be eventual AtsuMina, yep.

I don't know if I want to continue but I'll just leave this here, so yup.  :gmon hi:
Title: Re: « chrunoi's OS + SS: Untitled [Prologue-ish thing] 17.04.2015 »
Post by: korin48 on April 18, 2015, 05:44:02 AM
Great update, as usual! \ (^o^) /

........ You wont abandon this fanfic?  :cry:

Because you usually abandon your fanfic (well, i noticed) XD

Cant wait for this next update! \ (^o^) /
Title: Re: « chrunoi's OS + SS: Untitled [Prologue-ish thing] 17.04.2015 »
Post by: chrunoi on April 18, 2015, 09:15:52 AM
Thank you and ah you noticed that > u >

The fics I've abandoned are due to lack of inspiration, where I don't know how to continue so they're just left at that and there are a few that are left because I don't feel confident(?) enough to continue them..  :cool2:

But I've planned this fic out, at least with the ending and certain bits here and there so hopefully I won't?

It's just that I don't know if people want to read anything by me anymore lol

I'll try my best to update the first chapter soon! :mon determined:
Title: Re: « chrunoi's OS + SS: Untitled [Prologue-ish thing] 17.04.2015 »
Post by: kuro_black29 on April 18, 2015, 09:44:58 AM
Dont worry author san...
ur work/fic will always be read (in here)~
Just not being comment...lol
(They will just lurking in dark)avoid the light~
xD...please do continue~

Waiting forward for chap 1
Title: Re: « chrunoi's OS + SS: Untitled [Prologue-ish thing] 17.04.2015 »
Post by: black_maa on April 18, 2015, 10:47:35 AM
I really waiting first chapter for this story.  :roll:

And I think kuro_black29-san is right about all that things..

So, do your best to writing it..  :thumbsup
Title: Re: « chrunoi's shots & whatnot : Untitled [Prologue-ish thing] 17.04.2015 »
Post by: chrunoi on June 18, 2015, 03:01:10 PM

Jane Doe - A little preview UPDATE: ON HOLD



"You're up in 5 minutes, Takamina." A staff member called out to the girl and she nodded as she made sure her make up as well hairpiece were in place.

Takahashi Minami, also known as Takamina, a rising singer in the industry who managed to climb to number 1 on the charts with her debut single, Jane Doe, that she had written and composed herself.

She stood up and patted down her red dress. It used to reach the floor but she disliked it after a few performances and had it altered to be just above the knee.  Takamina quickly walked over to the curtains by the side of the stage, waiting for the hosts to announce her name.

Head peeking out, Takamina gave the crowd a quick scan, a slight smirk tugging at the corner of her lips as she spotted the glimmering jewelry against women's necks as the various studio lights reflected the gems. She scored a big fish tonight, with this prestigious music award show.

As she continued to wait she decided to pick, from memory, who she wanted to steal from.

That's right, steal. Takahashi Minami is a rather famous thief known as Doe. Though the nickname served mainly to unidentified corpses, the media nicknamed her that as she left without a trace along with jewels and money, the name being 'Doe' because nobody knew what gender nor how she looked like. So she adopted the new name, leaving the initial 'D' now as her signature whenever she stole.

Tonight would be no different. She was going to make off with a few of those rich women's precious jewels and then she would read and watch the news the next day of a rather angry police chief that would once again declare that he'll catch the 'low-life thief' once and for all.

Humming her song's tune, she tapped her foot and waited as the hosts continued to drone on and on. However, her humming immediately stopped as she heard a whisper right by her ear. Startled, she looked around with wide eyes, at the mass of people that were staff running around here and there making sure things were perfect. She tried to spot if any girls were leaving but she didn't catch anyone, she was only left with the lingering scent of lavender and roses that was not there before as her only evidence that she had not imagined the soft female voice.

Someone gently pushed her out from the curtains as her cue and Takamina immediately composed herself and plastered a smile on her face and walked out and bowed at the applause.



"Don't get too greedy now, Doe."


---


A/N; I haven't written anything in a long time but I'm getting back into the writing mood, a little at least, so have this as I go to work out the rest of the plot and stuff. I also have another 1/4 done fic draft in the makings right now so yup.

Anyway, I hope you like what just spun out of my head from listening to Jane Doe non stop lately. Until I actually get the motivation to finish them, see you~  :gmon hi:
Title: Re: « chrunoi's shots & whatnot : Jane Doe [A Preview] 18.06.2015 »
Post by: black_maa on June 18, 2015, 03:36:46 PM
AH..!! I want to know more..  :w00t:
Please don't make me wait too long..  :roll:


Thank you for this update!  :)
Title: « chrunoi's SS : Hedgehog's Dilemma [Prologue / AtsuMina] 15/11/2015 »
Post by: chrunoi on November 15, 2015, 03:29:43 AM
Hedgehog's Dilemma - Prologue [AtsuMina]


"A man who has some heat in himself prefers to remain outside, where he will neither prick other people nor get pricked himself." - Arthur Schopenhauer


-


I looked around my new dorm room, satisfied at how I had unpacked and settled most of my things in. Don't be mistaken, I'm not a university student at all. I'm in my second year at high school, actually. My mom decided to send me to this dorm because its closer to my school than my home, and the school that I attends has their own affiliated university which I'm probably going to so might as well start getting used to living away from home.

I headed back outside to get the last of my boxes, checking the contents first to make sure nobody stole anything even though I doubt anyone on this floor would do that. As I stood up with the box ready to head back into my room, I hear footsteps coming my way. I turn and watch as a girl with shoulder length hair in a dark blue sailor uniform walk towards me. Immediately, I straighten my back and smile, hand ready to extend for a handshake. The girl barely spares a glance my way when she stopped in front of the room next to mine.

"Hi I'm-" Before I can even finish introducing myself, the girl had entered her room and closed the door shut. Instantly the smile is replaced with a scowl as I reenter my room and close the door. I lightly placed the box on my desk and huffed. First day here and I'm already brushed off by my neighbor. Maybe it's just a bad day for that girl at her school today. I did move in on a school day afternoon (I know I should've moved in on a weekend but my mom insisted today was the day).

Perhaps tomorrow or another day I would be able to at least introduce myself.




A/N

Hello? It's me. After well months of not posting anything I'm here to present you this~ This story I've had in my head for a loooong time and I've had several drafts of the prologue/chapter 1 but I didn't like the setting I wrote it in so I finally stopped being lazy and wrote this.  I'm done rambling so see you next time hopefully with a chapter 1~  :gmon hi:

 

Title: Re: « chrunoi's dump site : Hedgehog's Dilemma [AtsuMina] 15/11/2015 »
Post by: cisda83 on November 15, 2015, 09:09:12 AM
Erm... about Doe the thief with a girl neighbor?

What's going to happen next?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: « chrunoi's SS : Hedgehog's Dilemma [Prologue / AtsuMina] 15/11/2015 »
Post by: black_maa on November 16, 2015, 09:33:31 AM
Hmm... yeah..  :hehehe:
Sounds like a mysterial story too..  :roll: ..But if not like that, its still okay.. until it's AtsuMina story..  8)
Waiting for first chapter..  :)
Title: Re: « chrunoi's SS : Leather Jacket [Prologue / AtsuMina] 09/01/2016 »
Post by: black_maa on January 09, 2016, 10:32:09 AM
It's ooooookkkkk!!!
Just give me AtsuMina!  :glasses:

 XD

 8)