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AKB48 Fanfics => AKB48 Fanfics => Topic started by: JennyAJ on October 01, 2014, 01:00:10 AM

Title: Is this the End? (MaYuki & WMatsui) other pairings included
Post by: JennyAJ on October 01, 2014, 01:00:10 AM

 :twothumbs

Title: Re: Is this the End? (MaYuki & WMatsui) other pairings included
Post by: Kirozoro on October 01, 2014, 03:56:34 AM

Hmm i wonder what happening

And who is that girl with her two sibling

Title: Re: Is this the End? (MaYuki & WMatsui) other pairings included
Post by: Siren on October 01, 2014, 11:01:34 AM

New story, nice opening  :on GJ:

I have to know more  :hehehe:

Who is the girl and who are her siblings  :shock:

Hope u update sooonn..  :prayers:

Title: Re: Is this the End? (MaYuki & WMatsui) other pairings included
Post by: Siren on October 03, 2014, 04:43:25 PM

Wah, Jun is really responsible eventhough Mayu's the eldest. :bingo:

Mayu really cared about his family though  :hee:

Wah, the girls are the hero in the story  :shock:

Update soon, can't wait for Rena and Yuki to appear soon  :on lol:

Ja ne~  :byebye:

Title: Re: Is this the End? (MaYuki & WMatsui) other pairings included
Post by: gek geki on October 04, 2014, 12:54:36 AM

Baka mayuyu why going outside when a giant comes??! Oh i know so the you could meet with yuki maybe lol yeah

Title: Re: Is this the End? (MaYuki & WMatsui) other pairings included
Post by: Siren on October 05, 2014, 06:36:08 AM

Yay, Mayu and Yuu team up to kill the giant  :onionwhip:

Where is the giant? Did it die already by the girls?  :dunno:

Rena and Yuki ha not appear yet :fainted: Can't wait for them  :glasses:

Thanks for the update and update the next one soon  :on lol: :hee:

Title: Re: Is this the End? (MaYuki & WMatsui) other pairings included
Post by: mayuki0048 on October 05, 2014, 08:11:40 AM

THAT GIANT!  :twothumbs

Title: Re: Is this the End? (MaYuki & WMatsui) other pairings included
Post by: Kairi65 on October 05, 2014, 09:52:51 AM

Quote from: Siren on October 05, 2014, 06:36:08 AM

Where is the giant? Did it die already by the girls?  :dunno:

meaning? which girls? :?

cant wait to read the next one! :thumbsup

Title: Re: Is this the End? (MaYuki & WMatsui) other pairings included
Post by: MaYukiIsLife on October 05, 2014, 09:56:40 AM

@Kairi65 I think what @Siren meant by that was did the YukiRena duo kill the giant....

I also wonder~

Title: Re: Is this the End? (MaYuki & WMatsui) other pairings included
Post by: gek geki on October 06, 2014, 07:07:52 AM

Giant attack on titans?

Title: Re: Is this the End? (MaYuki & WMatsui) other pairings included
Post by: Siren on October 07, 2014, 11:17:41 PM

Mayu is caring toward his family aww~   :wriggly:

Yuu always the trouble one  :on drink: Don't tell me uncle Oshima friend is Yuki or Rena's father  :shock:

Yeah they are appearing the next chapter  :wahaha:

Thanks for the update JennyAJ-san  :on gay: Gambatte  :on woohoo:

Title: Re: Is this the End? (MaYuki & WMatsui) other pairings included
Post by: MaYukiIsLife on October 09, 2014, 10:41:07 PM

One thing I would say, is paragraphs and you need to do another paragraph everytime someone speaks~

But otherwise, good plot, Yukirin's in this fanfic (Is Miyuki (Watanabe Miyuki) in this?)

Title: Re: Is this the End? (MaYuki & WMatsui) other pairings included
Post by: gek geki on October 10, 2014, 05:10:10 AM

Dont tell me yuki meet with mayu on the way to rena's and something happen lol

Title: Re: Is this the End? (MaYuki & WMatsui) other pairings included
Post by: Siren on October 10, 2014, 04:52:18 PM

Is something wrong with Yuki? Overprotective cousin, wait till she meet Mayu  :ding:

Aww, Jun has feelings for Rena already, Rena too and thats so cute  :luvluv2:

Looks like WMatsui has progressing, now waiting for Mayuki  :on drink:

Update soon author-san, gambatte  :on GJ:

Title: Re: Is this the End? (MaYuki & WMatsui) other pairings included
Post by: Siren on October 22, 2014, 04:30:22 PM

An update yatta~

Wow so Mayu, Jun and Yuu is going to train cool  :ding:

Yay, Mayu has meet Yuki and Mayu smiled  :hee:

Can't wait for their progress and fighting scene  :onionwhip:

Gambatte author-san  :on woohoo:

Title: Re: Is this the End? (MaYuki & WMatsui) other pairings included
Post by: Kairi65 on October 22, 2014, 04:38:58 PM

an update~!!! :mon beam:

i forgot to read ch4 when they were updated but it really good~~!! :on GJ:

they came from...another world..? :mon duh:

fated love~~ :mon inluv:

i wonder who are the other 4..? :mon innocent:

cant wait for the next update!! :mon thumb: :mon lovelaff:

ps: in chapter 4, who's matthew?