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Title: A Stupid Feelings [Atsumina]
Post by: verlinechannn on January 18, 2015, 01:30:52 PM
Domoo! i'm new here :D  , but i alwaaaaaaaays read in here hehe  XD . okay this my first fanfic i hope you like it , i really nervous you know >__< . sorry if my english bad :( but i'll do my best! .  8)

prologue

I sit here as usual, I'm waiting for someone who is very important for me in this cruel world and also the most loved wholeheartedly .. maybe my love for her is very restricted and probably everyone would consider me disgusting .. But trust me my feelings for her not only a feeling for best friend .. this has developed into a feeling of 'Love'. I know my love may not be reciprocated, indeed I am? Of course I can not force her to love me back but .. it seems the feeling is not impossible to know ..
I know it .. and I dare to hurt .. here I am Takahashi Minami.


Title: Re: A Stupid Feelings [Atsumina]
Post by: IamNot_Glad on January 18, 2015, 01:43:34 PM
One-sided love is so   :smhid :smhid :banghead: :banghead:   XD XD

Good luck to your fic   :on GJ: :on GJ:
Title: Re: A Stupid Feelings [Atsumina]
Post by: ubulubulbilu on January 18, 2015, 01:55:32 PM
Yeay! Atsumina new ff. Since others ff of Atsumina have no update, i'm counting on u Author San. Good luck :cow:
Title: Re: A Stupid Feelings [Atsumina]
Post by: black_maa on January 18, 2015, 03:01:17 PM
Oh.. New story!  :w00t:  Good luck with writing and can't wait first chapter..  8)


Atsumina -  :love:
Title: Re: A Stupid Feelings [Atsumina]
Post by: Kakeru15 on January 18, 2015, 03:10:07 PM
Can't wait... ^^
Title: Re: A Stupid Feelings [Atsumina]
Post by: cisda83 on January 18, 2015, 11:10:48 PM
Yeah... Atsumina...

AH... Love between girls is disgusting huh????

Interesting concept and idea there...

Can't wait to find out how the story is going to develop

Thank you for the new story

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: A Stupid Feelings [Atsumina]
Post by: verlinechannn on January 19, 2015, 01:40:49 PM
Waa my sory can make some people intersted huh?  :hehehe: , sorry if this is not what you want but I'm trying  :sweat: . ANDD PLEASEE COMMENT HEHE

and sorry if this chapter too short  :mon whimper:



Chapter 1

"Minami!"

I snapped out of my reverie, it turns out she has been here, beside me.

"Atsuko w-what? Don't surprise me like that!, maybe I could die young if you always like that! "I pinched the adorable cheeks , and i can see she pouted me cutely but soon after that she smile again.

"Eeeh ~? If you die I'll follow you Mi-na-mi~ " she answered with a teasing tone and maybe able to make my heart beat twice faster than a normal human , that adorable face makes me want a quick hug her and would not let go again NEVER, argh! Atsuko you really drives me crazy!

"How was school today? Is it fun? "I changed the subject immediately before I killed a heart attack because of her.

"Hmm .., today I get 20 love latters and its contents boring" she said as she walked beside me.

I thought for sure she would answer like that, because she is a Maeda Atsuko, a girlfriend who really dreamed by every man on this earth, cute-looking,very intelligent brain, perfect body, soul soothing voice, the smile that makes your day bright, kindness scaled by her father as an angel and natural beauty was revealed by her mother who will probably make you fall in love at first sight ..
and I was one of those who fell in love with her ..

without me realize I'm dreaming again

"Minami ~! , What do you think? From the earlier you always daydreaming if there is something wrong? "Asked atsuko with a worried voice .

"Ah um I'm not just thinking about my grades are down lately" okay I lied , for salvation to be asked to the death by her.

"Hmm so, if you want me to teach you I would be happy to receive you know ~" Atsuko looked at me and we kept walking

"No need .. anyway you've stayed with me and it was enough for me .." I said quietly as possible that I could

"Eh? What are you talking about? " Thankfully she did not hear it ..

"Nandemonaiyo ~" I said and ran leaving

"Eeeh ?! Minami! matte !! "Atsuko with a loud shouted and ran after me

"Catch if you can!!" I Challenged her and ran to the playground near our house.

we continue to pursue each other without a clear purpose, it sounds childish but it is fun! i really have fun with her , I can feel I'm alive, to feel pleasure, feeling that my life was not in vain, feeling the warmth, feel the love is growing stronger ..

after we were tired, (actually I'm tired of running because my legs are small like this one) we sat on the porch swing and breathe oxygen so much as possible. Maybe other people think we are two high school students who are playing silly as crazy. but I don't care if it's with her. with me to know everything I do is right and also fun, and her would accompany me forever.. we both enjoyed this silence, we are busy with their own thoughts, I wonder if Atsuko think about me? until the sound was coming ..

"ah ! acchaan!"

we both turned to the source of a very shrill voice I recognize in this world is only one who has such a shrill voice. Yuko.

"ah yuko~"atsuko stand of swing and jogged toward Yuko and finally they embraced, actually I'm a little jealous of that scene, but I know it's just a hug friendship

"what the hell are you doing here? why you alone? where your bakamidget?" Yuko ask to atsuko and still don't realize I'm here.

"as you can see I'm playing here, nope I'm not alone .. uhm you know I'm here to play with Minami" Atsuko replied shyly
soon I saw atsuko give a gap that yuko can see my presence here

"Yo! takamidget! o hisashiburi yoo nee~" i can see yuko came to me with a big smile in her face .

"ha? yuko , you ALWAYS meet me in the workplace" I answered with a mocking tone


"hehe, but I've missed you takamina is a great partner of the day did not see you it feels like a year for me ~" yuko walked up to me with her hands stretched ready to hug me

but never thought Atsuko was behind yuko ..

"yuko! stop talking sweet like that to Minami, if you forward it I do not know what to do Haruna you!" Atsuko pull the collar and threw uniform yuko. Atsuko you stronger.

"Tch, acchaan you do not have to be jealous of the midget, you know you are the most beautiful woman in our school and you're probably the mascot of our school, and not to mention you were always approachable by all students of our school, and you still want to be jealous of the midget and more--"

 i can see Atsuko tried to cover squirrel

"o-oi Atsuko maybe you should release your hand now , if you don't want that squirrel dead" okay i'll try to be nice with yuko here , BUT someday i will ask for pay for this hihi.

atsuko finally releasing his hand from yuko and ran to me with innocent face

"FUAAAH ! , Arigatou midget if you don't say like that maybe i will never see my NyanNyan Body Forever"

"Tch you really pervert yuko"

"Bu-" i can hear my phone ringing when yuko want to answer my mockery .

"sorry , i will go for a minute" I excused myself for a while on their

"Moshi-moshi?" i answered when i know who call me at this time . so rare actually

"ah okaa-chan" (okaa-san = mother)

"minami-chaan where are you now? i'm at home you know , let's have a dinner together tonight , if you want ask atsuko-chan to come too , it will be fun if she want nee.. minami-chaan~"

"Urusai yooo oka-chan!! , ah so rare you home right now kaa-chan , okaay i'll be there , if i'm lucky atsuko will come kaa-chan ////"

"ah hurry okaay? i got many food heree~ . ah my doughter now grow up huh? good luck my musume ! fight!"

tuut...tuuut...tuuuut

and that's.. my lovely mother style

I went back to the last swing and I just saw atsuko were swinging there.

"aah gomeeen, if I'm too long Atsuko, eh? where yuko? what you fight and one you have to go home?" I teased her

"nope , yuko had affairs with her and her leave me alone here" Atsuko pouted cutely , oh god why you create this cute girl? i pinch her cheeks

"hee rude yuko , leave a angel here alone" i see her eyes , thats sparkling.. and her cheeks turn pink.. are she blush?

"a-aah yeah! you right! and who calls you minami?" she asked . hee? whether she changed the subject? , Cute ~

"ah my mom asked if you want to come to my place for dinner with her , s-sure if you can't is no problem for me.." ahh why I was nervous ??!

"umm .. it's okay , anyways my parents were away so it's sounds good! let's go minami i'm starving!" she walked ahead of me

"Matte yoo atsukooooo !!" i ran leads to her okaa-chan thanks to pyring for my luck!

tbc~
Title: Re: A Stupid Feelings [Atsumina]
Post by: black_maa on January 19, 2015, 07:49:05 PM
I want more..!! :panic:
Its looks like interesting story!
Please continue!  :)



Thank you for update!
Title: Re: A Stupid Feelings [Atsumina]
Post by: Kakeru15 on January 19, 2015, 08:37:44 PM
sweet scene^^
another chapter please~ hahaha :nervous
Title: Re: A Stupid Feelings [Atsumina] (28-01-2015)
Post by: verlinechannn on January 28, 2015, 02:15:59 PM
@black_maa : aaa yokatta~ my favorite writers here >_< thankyouu

oke this next story sorry if this too sort  :fainted: i really thinking how to break readers hurt  :cry:

for silent readers THANKYOUU  :mon kissy:

Chapter 2

On the way home there was silence between us, the silence which is very convenient for me .. I know maybe this time we just shut up with their own thoughts, but I'm trying not to smile happy that does not look like a crazy person by her hehe. I wanted to know what was in it when I think about this, what she thought about the way I always thought of in every second of my life? Did she think of others? ... uh oh I'm very curious!

And we have come to my house, my house is too big for my mother and myself. and so .. quiet and dark.

"Tadaimaaaa ~, okaa-Chaan" I opened my door and atsuko just follow me

"Ojaamashimasu .." (sorry to bother. This sort of manners in Japan when I want to enter someone's house)

"Ah! Minami-chan! At-chan! Okaerii nasai ~

"my mother came from the kitchen, she was only wearing a tank top covered by an apron and a pair of very short for old age! And worse she hugged atsuko not me who plays a daughter!

"Ah obaa-chan! Hisashiburi yo ne? Genki desu ka? " Atsuko asked my mother as she hugged , that should be me ..

"Genki dayo! Acchan you look more beautiful than ever! no wonder Minami-chan increasingly fall on you ~ "AH MY MOTHER ALWAYS LIKE THAT!

"Okaa-Saan ?! Urusaii yoo! then why are you dressed like that? Can you dressed like the other mothers? Ugh okaa-san .."
she looked at me confused and so is Atsuko, did I say something wrong?

"Aaa ~! Minami-chan want me like the other mothers? My heart aches Minami-chan hiks.. ~" my mother ran to the back of the back Atsuko like she wants to ask for protection from someone who I like, okaa-san you're not fair!

"Minami! Don't like that to your mother! Quick to apologize! . NOW!" Heee ?! Why is this like I'm the villain here? I could see my mother laugh behind her back atsuko! shit! okaa-san! can not be allowed if this continues I shall lose it at any time atsuko came to my house ..!

"HEE? Why do I have to apologize atsuko? "I protested Atsuko directly at me with a look of sinister

"Minami .. NOW!" Why this woman could look so sinister ?! Ugh damn you mom! I could see it once again stifle a laugh and this time she showed the finger 'V'!

"Okey ... mom i'm sorry .." okay mom now I give up .. you win ..

"Apology accepted! ~ Nee I'm hungry let's eat! Acchan come here, come eat with us " atsuko and my mother's hand and headed to the kitchen and left me with my failed expression .

I followed those already seated at the dinner table, uwaaaa a lot of food here! Does she buy? not, he may not buy as much food as this. he's probably better to buy a new laptop for the time-consuming job of it!

"Taadaa ~ Minami-chan quickly sit down! We're both hungry !! "my mother told me to quickly sit down at the dinner table, I could see Acchan smiled at me .. okay if you asked me not to eat I would be glad to tell you to take all of this for me one of her smile was enough for me ..

Ittadakimasuu ~

We say it together, let's great fun! Feel there are two people who are very you love in this world, sat together, joked together and laugh together .. maybe I'm the happiest person for this moment, considering my mother was always busy with her work..
My mother was a single parent she raised me alone, my mother gave birth to me when she was fifteen years old is very young, and now knows where my dad was clear I was not going to look for it and also will not care about him.
My mother expelled by a grandmother-grandfather because it is considered shameful family name, but she still tried raising me by renting a small room once, I remember when I could just sleep and watch TV there and nothing else.

But I feel happy, I'm happy because you have a mother who loved me. then she wrote the story of her life and she sends it to the post office, my mother unexpectedly writing is very popular and very best-selling sudden she became a famous novelist, her novels often made into a film by some directors. Knowing this we also improved life, my mother bought me a huge house when asked why she simply answered "I just don't want you to feel embarrassed when you invite your friends to our home" as that is the answer, my mother is very different from people not most mothers she works dead- nail just to support me with abundant riches but in return she always had time for me.

I understand, when the other children being scolded by their parents because get bad grades she just said "Minami-chan, are you mad at me because I did not pay attention to you? Sorry about that I too busy, I will try to find an opportunity to play with you again, I promise" that promises made my mother, since then she always had time for me, although only two times a month but it is worth it to me, sometimes we just going to play in amusement park or something. And when I told her I liked a girl she just smiled at me and said "if you love and love to eat strive to get it, I will always support you Minami-chan" really I was the luckiest kid .. and who knows my mother is just Atsuko , because he who always I tell my mom.

"Minami-chan! , Why did you just say something? Are you sick? "My mother asked me which makes my thoughts disappear

"Minami yeah, why are you silent and not eat? Are you unwell? "I turned towards atsuko seen once in her face worried me

"Ah! No I am not anything okaa-chan, atsuko, I just feel happy just to be with you here" I answer both those questions is different, but the same goal
I could see they were silent for a moment, I saw my mother smile at me

"Minami-chan you know? You are sweet talker like him "
I can only hold my head bowed down with shame do not want in teased by a parent seems if I flushed now!

"Un ~ minami you look very romantic moment, this one is why I want to always be near you ~ that is the nature of your little very soft!"
I glared atsuko sitting opposite me being stuck out her tongue at me, let them both have similarities! : Both liked to make me embarrass!

"Mouu ~ Urusaii yoo okaa-chan! Acchan! "I looked down because I do not want them to see me blush

"Araa ~ Minami-Chaan very red face! Hahaha it's so much fun to tease you should know that, nee Acchan? "She looked at her atsuko who nodded in agreement
Arghh .. !! they both really!

"Okaa-chan! Urusai! . But okaa-chan.. why did you buy and make this much food? whether this is an important day? "I finally could change the subject

"Uuw Minami you always change the subject when you're cornered hehe" What ?! Now atsuko also chimed mocking me? Arghhh why the two of them could be so compact?!?!

"Sou desu nee yoo Acchan you already knew it turns ahahaha" ugh and now they were both laughing at me! damn it!

"You have not answered me okaa-chan" I interrupted their laughter annoying but makes me happy

"Of course this important day! Because I'm going to dinner with my daughter who has grown up! So I bought some food and food ingredients and then cook it enough im smart right? hehehe "I saw my mother with her acting believe it

"Hai hai, you are the smartest of all time mother okaa-chan" I give up if this time you fight her again maybe I will in embrassed again in front atsuko
When I saw atsuko, she was silent and smiling I do not understand what's wrong with that sudden silence like it and it seems she is also aware of

"Atsuko? Why are you silent on that? Is something wrong? "I asked her worried

"Yeah Acchan? Are my food too bad? Sorry if it's not delicious "my moter looks worried, their
Realizing that question atsuko rush to answer

"Ah! not like that obaa-chan! your food always tasty as usual, but it's just that I'm a little jealous of you two .. you look very close .. even you do not look like mother and daughter. not like me are always alone at home hahahaha "
I could feel atsuko bitter tone, I looked at my mother and my mother nodded

"Acchan .. you do not need to feel jealous of us, you know? You're always welcome here, this house is your house too, I know how busy your parents so do not hesitate to stay here, I'm sure Minami-chan happy to share a room with you "I could feel my mouth wide open, damn I should have the to speak!

"Thank you obaa-chan .. I'm very happy .." atsuko see the two of us with a smile that always makes my day-colored ..

"Saaa ~ let's spend this food and went to bed, you do not want to be late to school right?" My mother asked us

"Haaai" I replied in unison I and atsuko

**
After eating my mom told us to quickly go to sleep and as usual atsuko wearing sexy pajamas it .. oh if this happens every day I do not promise that I will be blown every day

"Nee minami" atsuko calling for immediate large to bed it

"Nani?"

"Do you know? You're like a Sister to me "

DEG ..

Sister? ...

Is that what you feel for me atsuko?..

*Tbc

How? i really do the best for this chapter sorry if this chapter no romantic scene  :mon POd: but next chapter i will do my best  :mon study:
Title: Re: A Stupid Feelings [Atsumina]
Post by: KojiMa MaYuki on January 28, 2015, 04:01:12 PM
so much fun
update soonp author san  :)
Title: Re: A Stupid Feelings [Atsumina]
Post by: black_maa on January 28, 2015, 07:19:43 PM

Them really like to tease Minami.  XD
Acchan only think about Minami like as sister?!? :huhuh  .....You can't do that!!!  :smh
I hope Acchan very often will stay at Minamis place...  :D


Thank you for update and waiting next one!  :cool:
Title: Re: A Stupid Feelings [Atsumina]
Post by: Kakeru15 on January 29, 2015, 02:53:19 AM
Sisterzone(?)  :shocked :shocked

update soon^^
Title: Re: A Stupid Feelings [Atsumina]
Post by: Haruko on January 29, 2015, 04:33:54 AM
Sisterzone(?)  :shocked :shocked

update soon^^

that´s worst than Friendzone...
Title: Re: A Stupid Feelings [Atsumina]
Post by: verlinechannn on February 16, 2015, 03:23:13 PM
@AI712 : yeah like it hehe sorry if you do not understand  :mon sweat:

Chapter 3

I do not know anymore, what's in the thinking girl lying next to me? I could see her face like an angel fell asleep, as she did not have the slightest load, should I sleep and forget her words. I know I'm running problem 'again'. but this is actually Takahashi Minami , a coward girl who fear the painful things but instead challenged destiny to love a girl who is none other than her best friend.

"Yo, Takamina!" I looked back and saw the figure of a handsome woman than myself

"Ah .. Sayaka, Ohayou .." I greeted lazy

"Eh? Doushita Takamina? You look very bad today and probably the worst of all your bad days (?)"

"I'm fine, it's just that I think about how I walked'll love story" I looked out the window, see the cherry trees which I think is wonderful.

"Aaah, young love yea? Relax kiddo, it would not be fun if you know the end of a love story "I looked back at Sayaka a strange look

"What?" This athletic woman saw me confused

"Ah no, you right Sayaka .. should I live there in front of me right? You're really good friends, I'm lucky to be friends with the friendly and kind as yo" I smiled at her

"Nah .. it's okay kiddo, you know? I'm more proud to have great friends like you, you know? You can only know who you are from the judgment of others instead of ourselves" one word longer capable of making me pause, this woman .. absolutely amazing!

I think back, if I atsuko eyes as well as what was said earlier Sayaka? Do atsuko think I just annoy her? Is she going to yell at me "you're disgusting!" Like that? So should I ask her directly later

"Sayaka" I called her

"Yeah?"

"Many thanks for all your help for me during this" I smiled sincerely at her, I could feel the warmth of friendship between us, of course, I only saw her as a friend and nothing more

"Thank you back" Sayaka winked at me and smiling

 I sent an email atsuko vigorously

To: Atsuko
Hey, I want to talk seriously with you, I'm waiting at the school gates okay?

Send ..
After a while I saw my cell phone back and smiling

To: Minami
Okay i'll be there after school. and i wan't to talk you something too! it's happy news!
p.s: I'm curious!

**
I waited at the school gates with confidence, no actually I was nervous I was really nervous! Okay calm Takahashi Minami! confident, you've been with her so long, and today you're going to put it!
and It's weird .. why atsuko so long? What happened? Did something happen to her? Ugh I began to worry with this woman! I ran wanted to enter the building but I stop when I see atsuko out of the building

"Acc-h .." my voice was choked when I saw the figure of a man with thick eyebrows air and holding her hand, I see Acchan laugh with him and look at me .. damn.

"Minami !!" atsuko waved her hand at me and smiled at me, I could see the man who was with her also smiled at me, and they still hold hands. hurt. Damn you heart why you so weak?!.

"Ah Acchan" I greeted her and smiled at her, let misprint I tried to smile at her

"What you've been waiting a long time? Sorry there are some things that I should take care in student council " atsuko arm around my shoulders and smile, smile so bright.

"Oh it's okay I just got here, and it looks like you're not alone Acchan .." I'm trying to find out who he was, even though I knew I would regret ask like this
"Ah ..  let me introduce you minami, this Matsuda Shota-kun, he was my secretary on the student council , my classmates, and he ... is my boyfriend!"
....
I could feel my chest ache
I could feel my breath started to become heavy
I wanted to shout as loud as possible
But I just can ..
"Ah, Takahashi Minami desu, her childhood friend Acchan. yoroshiku. "I bowed my head trying to hold back my tears

"Matsuda Shota desu, yoroshiku" he bent like me then smiled at atsuko
"Okaaaay ~ introductory session has been completed, and by the way does not matter if Sho-kun came home with us right minami?" I have not had time to answer atsuko has continued very word makes me angry "and we can while talking about what you want to say hehe me, you know I'm very curious ~! "

Ah she remembers but .. Does she not understand that I want to talk alone with her? Did she never thought of my feelings? Did she know I’m hurt here? Damn you atsuko.

I had to look for a reason
"Umm I seem to just get a telephone call from my mother to get home, so .. we can talk about it sometime hehe jaa nee atsuko, Matsuda-san!" I ran from them and look they’re surprised with my attitude

I ran as fast as I could, I don’t know where I'm going but what I want is to go as far as possible from them. I entered a small forest near my garden, I ran until I fell over backwards ..

Why so sick?  -It Wounds in the knees
Why so tiring? -Not because you're exhausted running
Why am I so stupid? -It Because not your grades
Why I could fall in love with the wrong person? – you Innocent minami
Why?

Question after question popped into my head, but if there is someone who always answered my question .. but who? .

tbc
Title: Re: A Stupid Feelings [Atsumina]
Post by: black_maa on February 16, 2015, 07:09:56 PM
Whaa...  :O ?!
Poor Minami.. her heart already broke..  :cry:


Thank you for update!
Title: Re: A Stupid Feelings [Atsumina]
Post by: Dianalrs on February 17, 2015, 06:25:29 AM
 :cry: I feel bad for Minami 

 :cry:
Title: Re: A Stupid Feelings [Atsumina]
Post by: Kakeru15 on February 17, 2015, 01:06:21 PM
I know your feeling takaboy :')
Title: Re: A Stupid Feelings [Atsumina]
Post by: verlinechannn on February 19, 2015, 12:42:04 PM
hei! gomenne I can not update fast as the others but I tried :mon yeah: and it seems this chapter is slightly longer, sorry if boring :mon sweat: .

Chapter 4

“The SADDEST people always try their hardest to make people Happy , Because they know what it’s like to feel absolutely worthless , and they don’t want anybody to feel like that”

"Minami-Chaan let up! Is not this the day you promised me you'd want to meet my boss family? Quickly get up !! "

I could hear my mother's voice shouting from downstairs of my house, argh! Why it is very noisy old lady ?! After what have I told her, she was still just act normal and not trying to encourage me again! huh basic old woman! But I remember the words that made me speechless words were always ringing in my head when I met with atsuko after the event I run away from her last week

Flashback

"Tadaima .." I entered my house, which was dark, maybe she had gone to bed

"Okaerinasai Minami-chan" I saw my mother sitting at the dinner table waiting

"Eh? Okaa-san? Why are you still awake? "I asked her and looked at my watch has shown that it is now already past midnight

"Hee? Of course I will not be able to sleep knowing my daughter has not come home at midnight "she smiled at me

"Okaa-san .. why are you smiling? .." I asked her, to be honest it was a bit painful ..

"Hmm, you know? I will always be a good listener for you" she smiled again, a smile that made me feel small in the surrounding areas, the same smile as me having dimples

I was silent, the incident was when I met with atsuko back is turned in my brain, the incident made me feel stupid, weak and also earned want to think I scream as loud as possible, let the world know the pain I was feeling.
I felt the tears running down my cheeks, flowing with a very heavy, my knees buckled and I sat on the floor. I don't understand why I was crying and not screaming like crazy, I cry in silence I don't want to look like this in front of my mother.
I felt my mother had hugged me into a hug, hug and strong, makes me cry very loudly in the hug I remember the words of a person in the movie that I watched "there are two places for you to cry, first in the toilet, and the second in the mother's hug"
Now I understand his point

"Minami-chan .. yosh yosh .. wept as satisfied as you, I will not leave you alone," I felt my mother's hands holding my head. calm down. I feel that after a few minutes I decided to tell her

"Okaa-san, why is it so painful? .."

"You have to take the risk to fall in love Minami-chan and you have to accept the fact that the risk of falling in love is hurt" I'm speechless ..

"But .. why do not you ever yell at me "disgusting" like everyone else? You know I love a girl and not a man "

"Love never see who the people we love, what kind of character, what he/she looked like, what we know when we fall in love infatuated with that person no matter she is a woman or a man" I'm speechless. again.

"So the pain was when I saw Acchan with another man is a risk of falling in love?"

"Of course it includes the bitter sweet love, when you're hurt you will learn how to not hurt back, the pain you love it includes a trip" okaa-san ..

"So what should I do when I see her? I don't want to be hurt like this again okaa-san .., you know? It felt like I was suffocating in the sense on Acchan "

"Do not ever give up Minami-chan, you are my daughter, you're strong like me, don't avoid and behave like reasonable, it's your choice. all is your choice "

"Okaa-san .."

"Nani Minami-chan?"

"Itsumo Arigatou ne? Sorry I can not be a daughter as you want "

"All I want is within you Minami-chan"
I feel stronger hugged my mother, oh god I'm grateful to have a mother like this

"Ne Minami-chan"

"Nani?"

"Sundays later, let's meet with one of my boss do you know he has a beautiful daughter hehe"

"Okaa-Saan !!"

"Hai hai, okay let's sleep and get ready for the mother and her child!"

"Yoooossshhh !!!"

End Of flashback

"Minami-chaaaaaan !!!! Wakeeee uuup! Mooouu why you love to sleep ?! "my mother pull the covers I do not know where she's coming but it's pretty creepy

"Mou okaa-san! now still time? It's still early you know it ... "

"Morning ?! Now it is at 11 !! Mou ~ okay if you do not want to buy you a new manga! hmpph! "
"Aaaah HAI HAI SOON I'LL BATH AND STAND BY ME IN THE CAR  okaa-SAMA"
I do not understand but I take a shower as soon as possible, of course you're not going to give up new stuff for free! Hehe

"Omatase kaa-san"

"Hai hai, Minami-chan! Clean up your hair!"

"Eeeh? But why? I do not have time smoothed okaa-san"

"Mouu ~! After all you're still women Minami-chan! See the clothes you're wearing jeans and a shirt! You really like men if you're dressed like this! Here let me Clean up your hair!"

"Urusai okaa-san" I scowl at her, uh but did I look like a man .. but let it go! I still have a long hair like hers! It is very troublesome mothers

"driver, please stop at the salon subscription me as usual"

Eh?

"Okaa-san?"

"Shut up and let your mother after finish everything" she winked at me

I feel uneasy.
We stopped at one of the salons in Shibuya, I do not understand but why?

"Welcome to our salon! Oh Takahashi-san? "

"Ah hey! , Please provide a suitable hairstyle for my daughter and I ask that this be completed within 30 minutes "
My mother left me alone here and blinked again, how she could be cruel ?! Damn you oka-san!

"Ah okay with pleasure, Takahashi junior ne?" The clerk asked me with a smile

"Ah yes .. yoroshiku onegaishimasu" I bend bit to him

"Yeah yoroshiku hihi you have charisma like you're mother Takahashi-san" The clerk smiled at me again

"Ah thank you .." and we also ended the conversation because I'm so sleepy .. I fell asleep and when I opened my eyes .. I can see my hair ..

"Haaa? WHY MY HAIR SHORT LIKE THIS? "I shouted hysterically because how could my hair into a short look like this? Damn! It definitely plan that old woman!

"You look charming Takahashi-san" one of the female employees were flushed when I complimented me too, flushed like her ..

"Minami-chan ah! sugoii! You look like me and your father! "

"Urusai okaa-san!" I scowl at her because I knew she vanished when she asked the guard hair tokok what suits me

"Hehe mitee I brought a present for you"

"Heee ?! YATTAAA watashi no manga !!! "I ran over to her and forget that my hair long now no longer

"Saa let's meet with my boss!"

"Okaay!" I shouted and busy towards the car and opened the my new 'gift'

**
I looked around the place was very luxurious at all, from the outside the restaurant was luxurious and elegant European style! Uwaaa she did great! But why do I feel silly wearing jeans like this? We then entered the restaurant

"Takahashi-san" I and my mother turned to the source of the sound

"Kojima-san has been waiting for you in the VVIP" one waiter that looks cool and also great! And again we entered the room very very luxurious VVIP it

"Ah thank you" we also follow up the waitress , as we are the servant tail
Soon we too luxurious to the round table, and of course lots of food! I could see the man wearing beige Tuxedos lift our hands up in order to get there.

"Hisashiburi Takahashi Mei-san" he smiled at her and reached out

"Hisashiburi Kojima Ryou-san" she smiled and shook hands with the manly man

"Please sit down let's talk over dinner" he smiled again, a smile that really got me stunned, he has a face very hard but has a soft heart

"You certainly Takahashi Minami-chan ne?" He view me, I could feel his gaze sharp yet warm it.

"A-ah yes, Hajime Takahashi Minami mashite desu yoroshiku onegaita shimasu" I bowed to him

"May I, heee no wonder why you often boast her daughter really good and also pretty" he smiled at me

"Of course!She was a best Doughter ever! "she winked at me again I felt my face heat up because in such praise

"Hehe you must be acquainted with my daughter Minami-chan! She was in the toilet ah there it is! "
I turned in the same direction as Ryou-san
I saw a tall woman with long hair and well, she's really like a model!

"May my daughter introduced Minami-chan"

"Kojima Haruna, Yoroshiku onegaishimasu" the woman bent down and I could see Breas- ah! Damn!

'Okaa-san thank you! "I turned to my mother who smiled nodded at me

tbc*

aaaaah and it is this chapter :gmon hi:, sorry I added a new character though not boring hehe :mon pray2:, okay I'll do a quick update! :mon yeah:
Title: Re: A Stupid Feelings [Atsumina]
Post by: Kakeru15 on February 19, 2015, 01:51:06 PM
TakaNyan~~ ;3
Title: Re: A Stupid Feelings [Atsumina]
Post by: phoenix0i on February 19, 2015, 02:04:17 PM
TakaHaru sugoi!
What would happen to Atsumina now?  :grin:
Title: Re: A Stupid Feelings [Atsumina]
Post by: cisda83 on February 19, 2015, 05:33:42 PM
Ah... Minami and Haruna next....????

Is there going to be something there...?

What about Atsuko?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the updates

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: A Stupid Feelings [Atsumina]
Post by: black_maa on February 19, 2015, 07:40:26 PM
I somehow want, that Minami will start go a dates with Haruna, and Atsuko will see it.. result - jealous Atsuko!  :D
....But it's only my imagination!  XD


Waiting next update!
Title: Re: A Stupid Feelings (Atsumina)
Post by: verlinechannn on February 21, 2015, 10:28:18 AM
ch 4.5

I saw a woman named Kojima Haruna smiled at me, I do not know why but I feel my face started to heat up

"Haruna, it is a family Takahashi" Ryou-san introduced us to her daughter.

"Ah haruna-chan Doumo, Minami-chan introduce yourself to her" my mother smiled at her and looked at me

"Takahashi Minami desu" I smiled at her showing my dimples to her I could see even if only briefly because she suddenly turned her gaze from me with a red cheeks ..

"K-Kojima Haruna d-desu" why with her? Is she sick? Why is she down?

"Haruna, do not bow your head when introducing themselves to others" I saw Ryou-san chide her daughter

"Gomen Otou-san" she lifted his face had returned to normal

Now I can clearly see the face of the model basin, big eyes, sexy lips, funny cheeks . argh for a moment I really can forget Atsuko! Is this what is called love at first sight? But it is not possible! just a few hours ago I want to express love in Atsuko and now I fell in love with someone else? I'm not someone like that!

finally we ordering food, we ate in silence  oh why ?  come on why this atmospehere very awkward ? Who talked only my mother and Ryou-san, I just shut up and answer the question if there is a question for me

"Minami-chan" I turned toward Ryou-san

"Hai?"

"I want to leave my daughter to you because she's going to school with you" the man said quietly

"HAI ?!" I almost spitting out my food, WHAT? i'm misheard right ? WOMEN LIKE A MODEL WILL go to school with me ?!

"Hahahaha, you really like your mother when you were surprised to like it and it looks like your mother has not told you" I felt my face heat up again, and i looked at my mother she just continued eating calmly and peacefully. Damn no bad defeat had mothers who did not have the feeling like my mother's

"Well I'll explain it, my daughter will be attending the same school with you because I believe in you even though I knowing you from your mother stories , meanwhile I get a job abroad for a few months, and therefore my daughter will stay with you because I do not want happen to her "

I was stunned, my mouth open, I'm speechless, I'm confused. and when I saw her again she was smiling evilly at me, I see Kojima-san stifle a laugh when they see me, I'm willing to bet how my face looks silly now

"Ahem .. and I really ask for your help to keep my daughter in my absence, I heard you always get a championship medal when competation" Ryou-san went on to say that made me even more confused

"s-so I'm going to be her bodyguard?" I asked while in control of the scene embarrass myself

"Hmm if the ballpark arguably language like that, but I'm going to calm your salary every month, and I do not want you to consider yourself as a bodyguard, I want to call you a her first friend" Ryou-san smiled at me and his daughter also smiled at me that made me even more awkward

***
Atsuko POV's

It's been one week I spent my time for my boyfriend, I had a little bit guilty feel to my best friend minami, already one week I did not see he coming to my class . I do not mean selfish but this was her habit when she knew we were different class for our second school year. Minami who is smart she first entered the excellent class and I only able to enter the third grade.

"Hey! Acchaaan ?! Did you hear me ??? !! "I was shocked shocked look towards miichan


"Ah nani miichan? Gomenne I daydream "I smiled at her

"Oooh! Did you miss your midget? I have news for you "

"Urusai miichan! she was not my midget! And what new cheapo news you that? 10 seconds as usual "I glared at her

"This about the causes your midget not come here lately!" Smiled miichan proud of me. huh? The cause? I do not understand

"Cause what? Miichan? Explain properly baka! "I hit her head

"Eh? You do not know that at the midget class have a new student? The most severe and again is that midget always with the beautiful new students! You must see yourself Acchan !"

Eh? What is this? Curiosity exploding inside me, the curiosity of someone who has transferred minami view for me, but not this show that I'm selfish? I want to have attention minami and also sho-kun, minami smart and sho-kun popular .. I really selfish.

"Miichan now they where?" I did not realize what I was talking about all I know is I want to meet with that girl

"I've been seeing them back to school, and maybe they are doing things that are very fun acchaaan ~"

BRAK!

I stood up and pushed my desk made me the center of attention in class. I felt my cheeks heat up and I looked fix my desk. profit Sho-kun was playing soccer with his friends.

"Miichan. Take me to them." I held her hands and walked out of the classroom . I know maybe this time I look very creepy and anyone who would stop me i will swallow them alive, but my heart is screaming out loud in order to quickly find the girl who took care minami me!

"Acchan, can you walk slowly?" I saw miichan trying to catch a fast pace

"No"

"that Midget was not going to go anywhere from this school Acchan!" I saw again miichan terilah fatigue but I don't care about her  my goal is to find minami.

I run this may not include ran, I ran, dragging miichan that since from my attitude was always complaining because I'm down behind the school and did nothing. i had a little disappointed feeling in my heart, but I'm still looking for it, by all means. I do not care miichan already exhausted, I even asked our seniors. and the result is the same. nothing.

Where you minami?

"Acchan!" Miichan stop footsteps

"What?" I saw miichan pointing towards me.

I saw minami with the girl, holding hands and laughing together. and they headed towards us, I do not know whether minami saw me or not and whether minami notice me or not in front of her but at the moment I'm really sure minami eyes look at me, and I felt our eyes meet each other but ..? minami back to talk to the girl and 'only' stepping past from me ..
what is this? Did I do something wrong with her? Why do I feel uncomfortable?

Tbc

Aaah sorry this chapter very short  :err: because my idea suddenly disappeared! :fainted: .. GOMENASAI!  :on speedy:

Actually I want to be honest that I was very bad in the writing end of the story, so anyone please help me and give me a little inspiration ne :mon pray2: ?! greetings of peace  :mon squee:
Title: Re: A Stupid Feelings [Atsumina]
Post by: Natsuko on February 21, 2015, 11:34:06 AM
Yadaa!!  :cry:
But honestly I like the drama xD ..
hmmm TakaHaru huh.. How about AtsuYuu, to make it more complicated hahaha

Joudan dayo :peace: :peace:

Thank you for the update I'll wait for the next one  :cow: :cow:
Title: Re: A Stupid Feelings [Atsumina]
Post by: cisda83 on February 21, 2015, 12:34:11 PM
Ara... Minami ignored Atsuko

What... why... Eh...

I guess Minami and Haruna getting closer...

If Haruna in same class as Minami then... Haruna very smart too like Minami

What's going to happen next?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: A Stupid Feelings [Atsumina]
Post by: black_maa on February 21, 2015, 03:58:52 PM
I somehow want that Minami won't speak with Acchan some while.. and then Acchan start to feel more jealous and understand her true feelings towards Minami..  :D  ..also Acchan could see, that those two are very clingy for each other..  -result - scary Acchan, who is trying to get back hers migdet attention ..  8)  ... or Achan have chance speak with Haruna.. when Minami isn't around.. and tell her to stay away from hers midget..  :lol:  .. or Acchan and Minami start to comparing with lovely moments with their partners and these moments each of them see it..  8)  .. aslo there is some upcoming party!  8)  ..or something will bad happen one of them.  [oh my!]


Ah... my imagination start to work again, sorry.!  :kneelbow:


Waiting next update! You can do it!!!  :thumbsup
Title: Re: A Stupid Feelings [Atsumina]
Post by: Kakeru15 on February 21, 2015, 04:43:37 PM
Love triangle~
Title: Re: A Stupid Feelings [Atsumina]
Post by: Ando on February 23, 2015, 10:32:02 AM
Oooo...ooo..interesting ~ *grin*

Waaa..suddenly wish for TakaHaru happiness..lol..cause they're cute when together in this story..huhuhu..eventhough this is AtsuMina story.. [emoji6][emoji6][emoji6]

Anyway..dun give up!! ganbatte kudasai~ take ur time~gonna wait for the update..

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Title: Re: A Stupid Feelings [Atsumina]
Post by: phoenix0i on February 23, 2015, 11:09:16 AM
I guess, Takamina needs to be happy once in awhile.
Title: Re: A Stupid Feelings [Atsumina]
Post by: KojiMa MaYuki on March 09, 2015, 12:31:44 PM
Takamina affair with Haruna make Acchan jealous sea drain viewers XD :lol:
thank's for update ,update soon author-san  :thumbsup
Title: Re: A Stupid Feelings [Atsumina]
Post by: KashiwagiRena on March 10, 2015, 08:37:43 AM
Update soon author-san! :)
Title: Re: A Stupid Feelings [Atsumina]
Post by: verlinechannn on March 17, 2015, 01:30:29 PM
@Natsuko : nah i’m kinda think about it haha  :lol:

@black_maa : that’s sound great! But i want more drama between them ahaha , thanks for your inspiration , thats make me think a lot what should minami do hehehe . what do you think about i added one character unexpected hehe , i want make minami-kun to be harem kyaa! >_<
@kakeru15 : noo it’s no triangle love but ..  hehe

@Ando : yeah , I actually really want to reproduce scenes Takaharu but I can’t because this is a story about atsuko and minami hahaha

@phoenix1 : yeah i want it too  :monk gboy:

author note's : sorry if you don't understand this chapter , i really say sorry from my heart . i kinda busy lately  :mon cry: and my inspiration is gone :mon cry:


In this it's was still atsuko pov's

Ch 5

She will avoid you

She will not want anymore friends with you

She already has someone because you so busy with you're boyfriend

Everyone will get bored and tired if they were never given a response
Everyone including without permission she would go in your life if you do not stop her
She's been ignoring you and also avoid you because you have made a mistake
Perfect life that you crave will disintegrate slowly atsuko ..

"STOP IT!" I shouted up from my sleep, oh it was only a nightmare it again ..

Indeed, a few days I had the same dream every night, the dream will my friendship with her will end, friendship which has a major role in my life, the role will not be replaced by anyone except herself, I do not understand why I always dreamed like this. and I always call takamina and she too responded as well, as if no matter what happens between us.
But when we met at school as like we do not know each other .., I always ask myself , maybe i make a big mistake and enough to her so that she acted like that to me? , If I had made her angry? But what do I do? ..

"Atsu! Let us breakfast! "I heard my mother scream calling from below

"I'll be right down okee mom!"
I'm getting ready to wear school uniform and I opened my phone, just curious if minami give me an email. note just curious

There emails. bingo

I smiled when I saw the display name of a cell phone, minami.
To: Atsuko
Ohayou Acchan! Have a nice day! 
p.s: I miss you ~

without me knowing I smiled reading a short message from the midget, but why she said she missed me? have we not always met while at school, and if she wants she can to my class, right? Why moments like this makes me want to slap myself? Oh come on atsuko! you should be able to resolve this problem! find out why minami behave like that to you!
but .. I'm really curious .. why minami so cold to me in school yet so warm when sending a message? Ugh! why is this so complicated .. sucks. whether the date is not minami who sent me a message like that? But it's true it is a telephone number minami !! ARGGGHHH REALLY COMPLICATED!

"Atsu! rapid fall down! "I snapped out of my reverie

"Haai mama!"...

**

i don't know why , but my memories when i and minami be friend is coming to my mind ..
"Hey, you! You are the son of an artist, right? "I saw a boy that pushes me

"You must be very happy to have the mother of an artist because you're hoping to get special behavior of all people right?" The other boy also make fun of me ..

"Hah! Do not expect! Do not expect we would like to give a special behavior for you! "I saw there was another girl shove

"we don;t want to be friends with the son of an artist like you!"

"Yes! For what we are friends with you but we were not able to meet your mother ?! "

"Do not hope so!"
I'm speechless .. I just wish there was someone who helped me from the situation, I hate this time, it feels like I'm running as fast as lightning as I could! anyone help me!

"Hey! Can you stop bothering ?!" I saw a little kid short use hat  yelling at us, instead of us but they

"Do you not see that she does not want to play with you? Can you go now? Before I hit you one by one! "I could see the short kid yelled trying to protect me and help me

"Hey! Are you okay? Are you hurt? "The kid ran to me and then look to the rest of my body if I was injured or not. I felt my face heat up

"I-im okay .." I ducked

"Hey are you sick? If not why do you look down? Are they say rude to you? Hey do not worry me! "The kid tried to look at my face, but I was scared when he saw my face he would go like other children ..
I lifted my head ..

"HAAAAAA !!! Y-YOU !! MAEDA ATSUKO?! A CHILDREN FROM MY FAVORITE ARTIST AND MY MOM ?! "the kid was surprised and a little jump from me, but I could not see his face because he was covered with a hat!

"H-hai ha-hajimemashite Maeda Atsuko desu" I introduce myself
I could see the boy was silent for a moment, there is little sense of regret because I introduced myself to him as soon as this, and now I will soon lose him
But it seems I was wrong .., little boy approached me and shook my hand-with vigor. I'm more curious about this child's face!

"Ano .. Can you let go of your hat? and also introduce yourselves? my mother said that I should not shake hands with a stranger " I want see it ..

"AH! Gomen, WAIT "

little boy screaming at me, let go my hand, he facing backward and take ponytail ribbon from her purse .. a woman? And finally he turned to me I could see her hair as she so cute ponytail.

"I'm ready! , Hajimemashite Takahashi Minami desu! Yoroshiku onegaishimasu! "The girl looked at me and grinned I could see her dimples appeared on her cheeks.

"Nee nee! if you're really a child artist? I never thought my first friend is a child artist! uwaaaaah my mother would envy with me!"
the little girl grinned and proud of her, but do not I have not said that I and her are friends?

"Friends?" I asked confused

"Ah do not you want? sorry I immediately conclude you are my friend .." I saw the little girl replied with a tone of disappointment
Suddenly there was a bad feeling attacked me

"Aah! of course I would!" I smiled stiffly at her

"It's okay if you do not want to be friends with maeda-san, I-.."

"I said I want to be your friend minami!" I yelled at her a little bit .. do not understand what happened to me but I feel that if I let go of this girl I'll regret it later, I could see her face puzzled, and I felt my cheeks start to heat up
Suddenly I saw that beautiful smile back on her face

"Yokatta ah! ~ Arigatou Maeda-san, korekara yoroshiku nee ~!" Minami grinned at me, inevitably something will come smiling hence



"Acchan! This is the third time this morning you daydreaming! what is wrong with you? Yesterday you were pulling me to pursue stupid midget! Now after you throw at her you always daydreaming like that! "I saw in front of me i see mii-chan being alone with my behavior spputer this .., must be very pleasant if minami here with us ..

"ACCHAAAN!"

"MIICHAN WHAT?" I reply shout at damn gachapin ..

"You! what is wrong with you? Did you fight with a midget? What with Matsuda-san? "

"None of your business gachapin"

"AH! THAT! YOU ALWAYS SAY THAT IF YOU PRESSED ACCHAN!"

I was silent for a long time ..

"ARGH! I HAVE ENOUGH Acchan with you! "

"Okay just go away miichan" I smiled at her ignorant

"ALL RIGHT!"

"Acchan... , you are giving that name to me .. minami

okay let's continue my flashback again ..


I always thought that if the day that I do not want to be her friend if I'm going to be myself now? Who have many friends and also popular as it is now? .
if this will not change if no Minami in it? What will be different? I am curious.

I remember that day since I became friends close to her, we were like sisters inseparable twins, we were always together, we always support each other, we laugh, we cry, we fight all our already passed. But lately I've always felt there was something different with Minami, from the way she looked at me, until she treats me. I just felt it was not right, Minami is now very different from the first Minami, whether Minami likes me? Of course I also love her too but I like her as a friend .., could Minami likes of another way? But it is not possible right? We both girls, and it will be considered abhorrent by others ..
Minami change more visible when we entered high school, I felt Minami much more protective of me and who approached me to be honest it was very disturbing because I was not free to associate with whomever I want, but I believe, Minami did it because she was afraid something happen to me.

when our first year, we passed by a very fun believe me if you have minami around you it will feel comfortable, my friend is a friend Minami, Minami is my friend Sunggu funny when I think about it, I remember when we all compact to make Minami cry when her birthday and many very fond memories ..
Until then I started to fall in love with a man, to be honest I was never told this to anyone, even at minami though. Somehow I was just scared and I'm ashamed .. and so I was determined to try his own without the help of my friends and also Minami. I start from want to know his name and I managed yap hehe man named Matsuda Shota he is our football club striker and he has a very sweet smile! Kyaa ~.

We started to become close moments class promotion test, i don't know but then I kept secret from all my friends, including Minami ..
Maybe because I was too busy with Matsuda-kun I became not focus on my studies, Minami had asked me what happened to me, but I just smiled at her and said I was fine. I never thought of this makes me separate my steps with my friends and also Minami .. but I know my time with Matsuda-kun class I re excited, I felt I was the happiest person in this world, maybe it's my fault because I was not paying attention to the possible minami also because it minami so often to my classroom at lunchtime.

But the time it took me to lunch minami not and never thought I liked the man took me to lunch together! I started to feel my heart strong berdegub we chose the roof of the school and it was pretty quiet day here .. until now ..

"Acchan hey umm .. I want to tell you something .."
My heart seemed berdegub toned it will explode!

"What it sho-kun?" (We started calling recent first name)

"Umm .. do-don't you have a boyfriend? .. Yaa i-if you do not want to answer do not have the force?! // "
Ah kawai ~

"I-I do not have"

"Really?!" I saw sho-kun standing and a wide smile on his face .. like the first face when me and her first met ..

"Yeaah! Why? "I asked innocently

"A-ano .. if you do not mind .. will you be my girlfriend?" He said embarrassed
I felt my cheeks heat up, I never thought my first love avenged like this! but I tried to calm myself

"Oo-of course I do" I smiled sweetly at him

"REALLY?"

"Yeah" I laughed at the question

"Yatta! Now I have a beautiful girlfriend! "I saw him jump for joy like a child .. but somehow I felt something strange in my hear "

"Hey, I want to talk seriously with you, I'm waiting at the school gates okay?"
I get emails from minami, talking seriously? What would he tell me? I am curious!

"Atsuko? Let's go home together hehe "I looked at the sho-kun he smiled at me for a moment I forget that minami want to talk seriously to me and that means there's only two of us .. but I could not let sho-kun home alone right? Anyway we only officially have a relationship .. ah! minami probably would not mind if I invite sho-kun

I walked out of the school building after clearing my job as student council, from a distance I've seen minami standing near the gate, his body that makes me immediately knew that it was him and do not forget! Ribbon in her hair hehe
"Minami!" I shouted and waved to him, for some reason I was so eagerly wanting to bring them both! I walked over to him and of course I and sho-kun holding hand .. and ..


///

"Maeda-san!" I heard someone call me

"MAEDA-SAN!" I gasped stood up and looked around, and look towards the teacher who seems to have no wish to see my face in her class

"H-hai? Sensei "I stammered when he saw how long and hard ruler which he held

"You! You do not pay attention to schoolwork ?! Standing outside right now! "I could feel the sho-kun help laughing when I'm instructed to leave the classroom. I feel embarrassed.

**

After that incident I re-entered the classroom during recess, as usual I was eating my lunch box together miichan and also sho-kun on my desk, until I heard the noise

"Hey! Dude! She's really sweet! "

"Shee really has a face like a cat that is really cute!" who is that?

"Damn why she entered in the superior class?"

"Of course, because she's smart, you fool!"

"She came !!"

"Ano, whether in this class there named Maeda Atsuko?" I saw a familiar figure, the latter figure makes me feel annoyed because she is always with minami

"I am" I stood up and answering as calmly as I could

"Ah, can we talk for a while? Both "I could see in her face a serious face, what is it?

We headed to the art room fairly quiet

"What do you want the transfer student?" I asked sarcastically her

"You do not like what she's talking to me" she smiled mockingly

"What do you mean?" I asked confused

"Are you really friends minami?" Ah .. apparently .. wait!? why this girl called her by her first name ?!

"Of course! , We've been friends for a long time "I challenge her

"Ah okay lady friend, so you do not need to bother me again"

"What do you mean, and what do you want?! I do not have much time "I grew impatient with this ridiculous conversation

"I want you to stay away from takahashi minami"

Tbc

AAAAH HOW?  :mon dunno: i hope you like it >_< , sorry yuko so rare in this story because ... i don't have idea .. , so i hope you enjoyed hehe  :mon fyeah:
Title: Re: A Stupid Feelings [Atsumina]
Post by: phoenix0i on March 17, 2015, 02:08:09 PM
KojiHaru is so blunt here.
What would Atsuko do?
She needs to make her choice.

Thanks for the update.
Title: Re: A Stupid Feelings [Atsumina]
Post by: black_maa on March 17, 2015, 09:48:31 PM
Sta...stay away!?!? From... Minami!?!?  :shocked  That was - WOW-  from Haruna!  :O
I can't wait to know what Acchan will do.. what will be hers answer..?!  :w00t:  At first, probably in shock..
But, yeah.. Acchan have to choose.. [hehe.. in the end you turn, that Acchan have to stay away from Minami..that was good XD ]
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Hmm.. about your question... (If I understand it right) Then you meant, that you want to add without Harunas one more character... then go ahead!  :thumbsup  It would be more interesting, if for Minamis attention would fight more then two people. hehe.. :D  - {-or it wasn't what you meant!? :roll: }
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Thank you and waiting next update!  :)
Title: Re: A Stupid Feelings [Atsumina]
Post by: yuuchans on March 18, 2015, 01:15:50 AM
WOW

it seems like the rivalry is getting more and more intense  :shocked
Anyway, cant wait to see Atsuko get her girl back,
or it will be nyanmina?
   :panic:  :?

Thanks for the update verlinechan, take your time and i'll surely look out for ur fic :cathappy:
                                                 :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: A Stupid Feelings [Atsumina]
Post by: verlinechannn on September 14, 2015, 04:47:09 PM
Hi there ! this is i dont know why i wrote this but i just can share it   :lol:
and this had a song too but i translate it to english and yeah its a atsumina maybe so hope you like it !  :D

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=apqVKaifjSk#action=share (hope you can open it)

*Graduation*

It was an unconfessed love, but…

I know I should tell you my feelings at that time .. that time before that man confessed he feeling to you

The season when the grasses are painted spring,
And the word “graduation” echoes,
Has come


now is the time of graduation,i don’t feel like I have wasted my time with you .. well, you know? It was very fast for me

I burn in my mind
The overflowing cherry blossoms
And my memories with you


it feels like I have to force my brain to forget you, forget our memories with the cherry blossoms are falling here

It was just so beautiful that
I will probably remember it
Even after a lot of years


perhaps it was too beautiful memories for me to forget, memories of which there is only me and you. I will probably always remember this no matter how many years would pass me later

It was an unconfessed love and yet
It stays in the heart like this


Maybe my love never be delivered to you, but this love will continue to be at this heart and also this body

You probably
do not remember
The happy words you said to me


maybe you do not remember the cheesy kind words you said to me atsuko, but the words are always managed to make me smile

But every time I recall those words,
It gives me courage
Thank you


do you know? every word you say to me it always makes me be brave, it's like I feel like I have someone who will always cheer me!

You gave confidence to me
who always looks down


You always forced me to look up, look how beautiful the scenery around me, thank you atsuko  you always take me to your beautiful and marvels world

You taught me
How good it feels
To raise my head high
And look forward


You also taught me about what I can do and show to the world if I lifted my head and no longer looked down , you also taught me about that in this life there is hope that the beautiful

It was an unconfessed love and yet
It stays in the heart like this
Thank you for both the joy and pain
The spring wind pushes my back


This is a love that will never you know atsuko, love you always wanted to tell you but I can only be in this heart alone.
thankyou for giving me both, yes gave me happiness and pain
The wind had pushed my back


I will never forget
I will never forget
The fact that I loved you
Now, let’s walk forward,
Let’s walk on.
Now I have graduated from you.


I will never forget, really I would never forget about this wonderful feeling, wonderful feeling but can not convey to you atsuko. the fact that there is that I love you atsuko
but now, we must walk forward, with no looking back. and now I also have to Graduated from you atsuko



the end?


sorry for bad grammar  :cry:
Title: Re: A Stupid Feelings [Atsumina]
Post by: black_maa on September 14, 2015, 06:30:33 PM
It's really some while, when you last time posted something in here.. :roll:
..Thank you for this..  8)
Title: Re: A Stupid Feelings [Atsumina]
Post by: Saint0angel on September 15, 2015, 12:49:16 AM
Domoo! i'm new here :D  , but i alwaaaaaaaays read in here hehe  XD . okay this my first fanfic i hope you like it , i really nervous you know >__< . sorry if my english bad :( but i'll do my best! .  8)

prologue

I sit here as usual, I'm waiting for someone who is very important for me in this cruel world and also the most loved wholeheartedly .. maybe my love for her is very restricted and probably everyone would consider me disgusting .. But trust me my feelings for her not only a feeling for best friend .. this has developed into a feeling of 'Love'. I know my love may not be reciprocated, indeed I am? Of course I can not force her to love me back but .. it seems the feeling is not impossible to know ..
I know it .. and I dare to hurt .. here I am Takahashi Minami.

Title: Re: A Stupid Feelings [Atsumina]
Post by: cisda83 on September 16, 2015, 11:33:46 AM
Oh... What's going to happen next?

Would Takamina really just keep quiet about her feeling?

Would Atsuko be able to recognize her feeling for Takamina?

What's going to happen?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the updates

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs