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AKB48 Fanfics => AKB48 Fanfics => Topic started by: Yhuiii on February 14, 2015, 12:09:38 AM

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Post by: Yhuiii on February 14, 2015, 12:09:38 AM: I’ve decided to delete all of my stories because I haven’t been active for a while, and I don’t have the time to finish them. Thank you to everyone who read and supported my work, I really appreciate it.
Title: Re: Gomennasai (Prologue)
Post by: Kirozoro on February 14, 2015, 12:51:24 AM: Omg why!!! Mayu life is so drama

Please update soon
Title: Re: Gomennasai (Chapter 1) [Feb, 15 2015]
Post by: ChibiRine on February 15, 2015, 02:15:21 AM: Riku and Yuko died :depressed:

WHY OH WHY?! :mon zoom:

Well, destiny brought them there...not Mayu. :mon cry:

Update soon, author-san~ :on gay:
Title: Re: Gomennasai (Chapter 1) [Feb, 15 2015]
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on February 15, 2015, 02:23:50 AM: :shocked :shocked :shocked

.................Crap.
Title: Re: Gomennasai (Chapter 1) [Feb, 15 2015]
Post by: Hikachi_Jayne on February 15, 2015, 04:23:23 AM: ohh no!.
what will happend after that accident.?
Mayuyu get strong!! :-(
Title: Re: Gomennasai (Chapter 1) [Feb, 15 2015]
Post by: chiqinna on February 15, 2015, 04:37:20 AM: oohh I like this!
Sae, Mayu and Yuki are siblings..
can't wait to see more from you.. ganbatte!
Title: Re: Gomennasai (Chapter 1) [Feb, 15 2015]
Post by: mayura48 on February 15, 2015, 10:02:11 AM: I will wait for this !!

I was curious with how story would going on.. Yuki and Mayu, Sae ? Family ? i like this !! :inlove:
Title: Re: Gomennasai (Chapter 1) [Feb, 15 2015]
Post by: gek geki on February 15, 2015, 10:12:42 AM: Whaaaat!!!?
How how can yuki blamed mayu for missed her parent? It was normal!! Even mayu was spoiled child,she not wrong!

If yuki and sae hated mayu because of that,ah poor mayu

So much drama, but is it mayuki saeyuki or something else? They were sibling right?
Title: Re: Gomennasai (Chapter 1) [Feb, 15 2015]
Post by: Mayukishipper on February 17, 2015, 03:16:55 PM: What ? :shocked
Riku and Yuko dead ? Omg
Why ?
They shouldn't blame on mayu
Title: Re: Gomennasai (Chapter 1) [Feb, 15 2015]
Post by: kurogumi on February 19, 2015, 11:27:44 AM: Wah too bad mayuki are sibling then there no lovey dovey couple in this story, not even saeyuki

I love mayuki, it doesnt matter if they not couple but it hurt me when knowing yuki and sae gonna hated mayu for the one who caused their parent death,that unfair
What kind of sister they are?
Blamed your little sis?
I hope their parent still has a chance to life,maybe they safe but in unknown island? Hehe
Title: Re: Gomennasai (Chapter 2) [Feb, 20 2015]
Post by: blackcold on February 20, 2015, 02:50:36 AM: Author-san , you're really mean :depressed:

you make me cry :gyaaah:

but i really want to read more :wub:

Please update soon :thumbup
Title: Re: Gomennasai (Chapter 2) [Feb, 20 2015]
Post by: fath107 on February 20, 2015, 03:27:16 AM: hmmm.... you make me want to cry :cry:

sae and yuki..... i don't know what i have to say but.... :smhid

actually, it's not mayu fault, it just mayu missed riku and yuko. but... when die comes, we never know it right? :sweatdrop: so it's not mayu fault!!!! :bleed eyes:

i'm curious about mayu illness... :panic: i hope it's not a bad one :cry:

thanks for the update :cry: even it's make me sad and almost cry :bleed eyes:

UPDATE SOON! :thumbsup
Title: Re: Gomennasai (Chapter 2) [Feb, 20 2015]
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on February 20, 2015, 03:41:22 AM: Quote from: fath107 on February 20, 2015, 03:27:16 AM
sae and yuki..... i don't know what i have to say but.... :smhid

Here's what they deserve: :thumbdown:

This WHOLE thing was NOT Mayu's fault!
Title: Re: Gomennasai (Chapter 2) [Feb, 20 2015]
Post by: kurogumi on February 20, 2015, 04:19:40 AM: It's not mayu fault!
Hope there some miracle like yuko and riko still alive
Title: Re: Gomennasai (Chapter 2) [Feb, 20 2015]
Post by: Kirozoro on February 20, 2015, 04:34:57 AM: Poor Mayu...It's not fully Mayu falls in this accident

I hoped Mayu is fine

Please update fast i want to read more
Title: Re: Gomennasai (Chapter 2) [Feb, 20 2015]
Post by: gek geki on February 20, 2015, 04:59:41 AM: I dont care anymore about what pairing,its sisterly story
Ah poor mayu she got an illness

I hope sae and yuki just mad for a while and not to long cause mayu newd them now

Will sae and yuki happy if their sister died too? I think not
Title: Re: Gomennasai (Chapter 2) [Feb, 20 2015]
Post by: Mayukishipper on February 20, 2015, 05:08:01 AM: Its been 3 years ? Sae and yuki still hate mayu ? Oh no!!
Mayu be strong, papa Riku and mama Yuko always watch you from heaven
Sae you really harsh to mayu, i hate you

Thanks for make me crying author-san
i'll waiting for next update
Title: Re: Gomennasai (Chapter 2) [Feb, 20 2015]
Post by: Weird Panda on February 20, 2015, 06:06:01 AM: Quote from: Yhuiii on February 20, 2015, 01:42:32 AM
I forbid the maids to tell my siblings, because they might throw the food if they knew that I made it.
I laugh so hard in this part
Title: Re: Gomennasai (Chapter 2) [Feb, 20 2015]
Post by: yurin23mayuki on February 20, 2015, 10:34:46 AM: :cry: update soon author-san
wanna read the next one
hope mayu will be okay T_T

mou~ mayuyu :cry:
Title: Gomennasai (Chapter 2) [Feb, 20 2015]
Post by: qweakb on February 20, 2015, 12:07:36 PM: Somehow got a feeling that mayu might end up [emoji24][emoji24][emoji24]

Author-san, i know your pain of losing akb data... I have this experience before just that lucky now most of it able to retrieve back...
Title: Re: Gomennasai (Chapter 2) [Feb, 20 2015]
Post by: gek geki on February 20, 2015, 01:30:57 PM: Ok i forgot that saeyuki ignored mayu for 3 years!! Gosh that awful!

If they promised to take care mayu,they shouldn't doing that to mayu, mayu hury too
Title: Re: Gomennasai (Chapter 2) [Feb, 20 2015]
Post by: arawche079 on February 20, 2015, 04:32:54 PM: Arghhhhhh......

That's not how to treat your youngest sister..... :scolding:

3 years was too much....... :on cloudeye:

saeyuki should try to google the word acceptance... :on study:
Title: Re: Gomennasai (Chapter 2) [Feb, 20 2015]
Post by: kuro_black29 on February 20, 2015, 05:05:19 PM: 3 years is soooo long..how mayu stand that..
Thanks for the update author san~
This is addictive
Imma so gonna cry (´∩｀。)

*hides myself in blanket
Title: Re: Gomennasai (Chapter 2) [Feb, 20 2015]
Post by: mayuki_daisuki on February 22, 2015, 02:07:52 AM: (late at reading and commenting :sweatdrop: )

Gimme more pwease onegai~~

Love the drama~ XD although I feel so sad for Mayuyu :cry:

Update soon~ :cow: :bow:
Title: Re: Gomennasai (Chapter 2) [Feb, 20 2015]
Post by: sastio13 on February 22, 2015, 04:30:43 PM: sad...poor mayuyu.
even after 3years, sae & yuki still cold to mayu.
ouch, does mayu okay? what kind of ill she got?
Title: Re: Gomennasai (Chapter 3) [March, 6 2015]
Post by: Minami-chan on March 06, 2015, 01:50:25 AM: I am totally shocked.
Please follow it soon've got it hurts the heart of sadness
Title: Re: Gomennasai (Chapter 3) [March, 6 2015]
Post by: kurogumi on March 06, 2015, 02:52:18 AM: I need more chapter

Yeah from what i know,liver cancer can be happen cause the person have some stress,in this matter i think mayu stressed cause her brother and sister also the guilty

But it still in first stadium it should be cured but of course she need the money
Title: Re: Gomennasai (Chapter 3) [March, 6 2015]
Post by: junrena on March 06, 2015, 02:59:48 AM: mayuyu :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry:
Title: Re: Gomennasai (Chapter 3) [March, 6 2015]
Post by: arawche079 on March 06, 2015, 03:59:52 AM: What the :banghead:

Mayu :cry: :cry: :cry: :( :angry:
Title: Re: Gomennasai (Chapter 3) [March, 6 2015]
Post by: fath107 on March 06, 2015, 04:12:42 AM: Oh.. god.. damn! I hate yuki and sae! :angry: :banghead:

Yuki start to worried about mayu.. :smhid

Mayu! Ganbare! Keep strong! :cry:

It's okay if you make me sad or cry author-san.. :)

Because...

YOU HAVE TO UPDATE SOON! I WANT TO KNOW ABOUT MAYU CONDITION! :cry:

Btw.. thanks for the update :)
Title: Re: Gomennasai (Chapter 3) [March, 6 2015]
Post by: Kirozoro on March 06, 2015, 04:50:33 AM: Gahhhhhh!!!!

Where did Mayu going to get that much of money!!!

And gosh Yuki and Sae stop being a dick head

Update ASAP pls
Title: Re: Gomennasai (Chapter 3) [March, 6 2015]
Post by: The Ray on March 06, 2015, 06:45:53 AM: Sae, Yuki please help mayu.. :pleeease:

I can't hold this anymore :on speedy: :on speedy: :on speedy:
Title: Re: Gomennasai (Chapter 3) [March, 6 2015]
Post by: crosteks on March 06, 2015, 10:31:37 AM: Quote from: The Ray on March 06, 2015, 06:45:53 AM
Sae, Yuki please help mayu.. :pleeease:

I can't hold this anymore :on speedy: :on speedy: :on speedy:
I can't hold it too anymore :on speedy: :on speedy: :on speedy: :on speedy: :on speedy: :on speedy:
Title: Re: Gomennasai (Chapter 3) [March, 6 2015]
Post by: gek geki on March 06, 2015, 02:59:29 PM: sae, you think you deserved to be called oniichan by mayu?? yup nope!

at least i still found yuki have a heart for mayu, even just a bit but yuki seems care about mayu, i'm not surprise if yuki is the one who opened her heart for mayu

mayu ill could be cured but it cost lot of money
Title: Re: Gomennasai (Chapter 3) [March, 6 2015]
Post by: Mayukishipper on March 06, 2015, 03:08:22 PM: Nee author-san thanks for make me crying again

Sae and Yuki please lend mayu that damn money, i dont wanna see mayu suffer again, this is too much

Thanks for update author-san
I need more chapter T_T
Title: Re: Gomennasai (Chapter 3) [March, 6 2015]
Post by: gyuchan on March 06, 2015, 06:39:14 PM: sae,yuki i'll kill you because treated mayuyu like that :twisted:
Title: Re: Gomennasai (Chapter 3) [March, 6 2015]
Post by: kuro_black29 on March 06, 2015, 10:45:35 PM: MAYU SAMA :gyaaah:

JUST LEND MAYU THE MONEY :banghead:
baka brother and sis..wuuu :tantrum:
thank you author san..update please :on drink:
Title: Re: Gomennasai (Chapter 3) [March, 6 2015]
Post by: kymkamwm48 on March 07, 2015, 12:45:07 PM: not mayuki? :(
sad :( i'm so sad at Mayu's current state right now. They treat her like hell waaaahhhh :((((
Mayuki :( :heart:
Title: Re: Gomennasai (Chapter 3) [March, 6 2015]
Post by: blackcold on March 07, 2015, 12:59:41 PM: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry:

I hope your story could make all my tears go out :lol:

I can't even cry when i want to XD

But your story almost did it , hope for sooner update :kneelbow:
Title: Re: Gomennasai (Chapter 3) [March, 6 2015]
Post by: gek geki on March 08, 2015, 12:07:40 PM: woooooooh

wooooooh

woooooh
woooooh
Title: Re: Gomennasai (Chapter 3) [March, 6 2015]
Post by: mayuki_daisuki on March 08, 2015, 05:09:23 PM: Yhuiii-san me want more pwease~~ :mon cute:
Title: Re: Gomennasai (Chapter 3) [March, 6 2015]
Post by: Minami-chan on March 08, 2015, 06:59:42 PM: Quote from: mayuki_daisuki on March 08, 2015, 05:09:23 PM
Yhuiii-san me want more pwease~~ :mon cute:

yes plis!
Title: Re: Gomennasai (Chapter 3) [March, 6 2015]
Post by: Rufy SaeYuki on March 11, 2015, 05:07:22 AM: I'm very love it.. Poor mayu, but I don't cry either.. Keep writing #GBU
Title: Re: Gomennasai (Chapter 3) [March, 6 2015]
Post by: sadrilim on March 11, 2015, 05:24:54 AM: Oh no!! My heart is not strong enough for this sad story. Please spare Mayu chan. Poor her. :cry:
Title: Re: Gomennasai (Chapter 3) [March, 6 2015]
Post by: Terragen on March 14, 2015, 12:51:51 AM: Aww this is breaking my heart

Sae yuki please,where your soft heart?

Your mother's will mad if you treathen mayu your sister like that
They will sad, they will regret why they entrust mayu to you two

Poor mayu, don't she has any friend's in school that can trust? We need new character here
Title: Re: Gomennasai (Chapter 3) [March, 6 2015]
Post by: Raizel on March 14, 2015, 03:46:46 AM: Poor mayu.. :gyaaah::fainted:
Why Sae and Yuki so cold, I really hate this side of them.. :angry1:
Update soon please.. :pleeease:
Title: Re: Gomennasai (Chapter 3) [March, 6 2015]
Post by: KojiMa MaYuki on March 15, 2015, 03:17:40 AM: keep strong mayu chan :gyaaah: :fainted:
I want to kill Yuki and Sae, they are very-very stupid :on voodoo: :mon worklate:
Title: Re: Gomennasai (Chapter 3) [March, 6 2015]
Post by: gek geki on March 15, 2015, 06:18:18 AM: Pleaseeeeeeee updateeeeee

Mayuuuuuuuuuuuuu be stroooooong

Saeeeeeeeeeeeeeee you jeereeerrrrk

Yukiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii Please open your heart
Title: Re: Gomennasai (Chapter 3) [March, 6 2015]
Post by: sastio13 on March 24, 2015, 07:47:24 AM: huuwaaaaaaaaaaa......
poor mayu, i want to cry but I'm not crying haha
please update more as soon as possible author yhuiii-san, please I beg you...
I like this sad angst story
update more pwease
Title: Re: Gomennasai (Chapter 3) [March, 6 2015]
Post by: Hikachi_Jayne on May 15, 2015, 09:13:51 AM: -Pray and Contribution for MAYUYU Heart-
hehehe

update soon author-san. :)
Title: Re: Gomennasai (Chapter 3) [March, 6 2015]
Post by: Kirozoro on May 16, 2015, 04:43:06 AM: Yhuiii-san please update the chapters :beg:
Title: Re: Gomennasai (Chapter 3) [March, 6 2015]
Post by: junrena on May 17, 2015, 02:01:02 PM: Update please,,,,, :bow: :bow: :bow:

:deco:
Title: Re: Gomennasai (Chapter 3) [March, 6 2015]
Post by: mayuki_daisuki on February 14, 2016, 01:51:27 AM: author-san.. PLEASE UPDATE I WANNA KNOW WHAT HAPPENS TO MAYUYU!! ;A;
Title: Re: Gomennasai (Chapter 3) [March, 6 2015]
Post by: ttwm123 on February 14, 2016, 09:03:55 PM: update this story, please... :cry:
Title: Re: Gomennasai (Chapter 3) [March, 6 2015]
Post by: Yurena on May 21, 2016, 01:50:27 AM: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry:
T_T please don't make what i think of become true
It will be nice but my heart can't handle it
Please update soon i want to know what will happen
Title: Re: Gomennasai (Chapter 3) [March, 6 2015]
Post by: ttwm123 on May 21, 2016, 05:15:08 AM: update, please :cry:
Title: Re: Gomennasai (Chapter 3) [March, 6 2015]
Post by: minami_24 on May 21, 2016, 05:16:07 AM: Update please 😢
Title: Re: Gomennasai (Chapter 3) [March, 6 2015]
Post by: Jkugang on May 21, 2016, 01:55:48 PM: Uwaahhh!
So heart wrenching! :ptam-hbk:
Author-san, where forth arth thou?!
Please update! My heart can't take it not knowing what will happen next! :ptam-cry: :gyaaah: :fainted: :imdead: :mon waterworks:
Anyway, your fic is so good! :twothumbs
Right in the kokoro :heart:
Title: Re: Gomennasai (Chapter 3) [March, 6 2015]
Post by: ttwm123 on June 19, 2016, 06:12:22 PM: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry:
Title: Re: Gomennasai (Chapter 3) [March, 6 2015]
Post by: Pokotan on August 03, 2017, 10:48:32 AM: almost 3 years.. where are you... :pleeease:
Title: Re: Gomennasai (Chapter 3) [March, 6 2015]
Post by: keijuna on August 22, 2017, 07:09:31 AM: Ne author san when will you update??? I really want to know what's going to happen to mayu and her siblings... *pout* Will she die? Will sae and yuki learn to 'forgive' mayu and get over their big ego's to save their sister? Or will it be too late?? Hmm so much questions that needs to be answered and it can only be done with updates haha XD take your time tho lol no rush!
Title: Re: Gomennasai (Chapter 3) [March, 6 2015]
Post by: rightsaver143 on August 31, 2017, 03:23:07 PM: Waaaahhh!!!!~~~`

what ill happen to mayu :dunno:

Mayu don't die please :ptam-cry:

At least Yuki cares a little for Mayu :bingo:(Sae is a jerk for not caring for her little sister!!!!! :angry1: )

Update it please :kneelbow: :kneelbow: :kneelbow:
Title: Re: Gomennasai (Chapter 4A) [July 3, 2018]
Post by: Minami-chan on July 04, 2018, 12:55:55 AM: Are you going to follow the fan fiction?
That would make many of us very happy, both those who write and those who are just readers.
I'm sorry I can not help you, I'm not a native English speaker, so I can only really show my support with these messages
Title: Re: Gomennasai (Chapter 4A) [July 3, 2018]
Post by: Pokotan on July 04, 2018, 09:26:45 AM: yeay an update ^^ thank you for continue this story..... :twothumbs

woaaahh sae.. yuki,.... :bleed eyes: how cruel.. he kicked mayu out :doh: :bleed eyes: what will happen next? :panic:

i hope things will get better :farofflook:

gommen author-san :mon pray2: my english is so bad i can't help you :on cloudeye:
Title: Re: Gomennasai (Chapter 4A) [July 3, 2018]
Post by: Kirozoro on July 22, 2018, 01:28:56 AM: Omg you finally come back!!!!

Please do update more!!
Title: Re: Gomennasai (Chapter 4A) [July 3, 2018]
Post by: mayuki_daisuki on July 22, 2018, 10:24:49 PM: Thank you for the update I look forward to more~