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Title: I love you, Forever (re-write) Chapter 1 (Kojiyuu)
Post by: jhom_09 on May 07, 2015, 07:55:13 AM

Hi everyone, yes its me again, i wanna say sorry because i delete and cancel my fic but there's someone always asking me to continue this fic.
So yes i will re-write this until i finish this story. i know lot of you disappoint but i hope you all can still accept me. i will try my best to finish this i think there's few more left chapter until i finish this story, again im sorry  :kneelbow:

Hmmm before i begin to start this i want to remind you all im not really good in english i know there's a lot of wrong grammar and if you find this fic not interesting dont read it and find other story that you will enjoy. And please if have wrong sentence dont make fun of it, thank you for understanding. Lets move and forget what happen i will start to continue this until i finish the story.




I LOVE YOU, FOREVER

Prologue
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What would you feel if someone tell  you that you’re not gonna live long and you only lived for only lived for only 3 months? Maybe you would say, I’m gonna live my life to the fullest.  I will do all the things I want to do, travel to the place I want to go. But me? when I heard the doctor said, “I’m sorry Kojima-san, but you’re not gonna live long” what I just said to him that time was like. “Oh..? ok, so how long I will live?” I only ask him, like a normal conversation. “3 months” my only reaction was, “Ohh..? that’s too short.” Yes that’s the only reaction I have and I don’t care if I will die, I don’t have anybody, I don’t have many friends and I don’t have somebody to love. So it’s ok if I die now, I’m always alone, my only best friend I have is my psp and my ds. I never go out and have fun with my friends, I never socialite or date someone, I don’t know why I’m like this but I’m more happy when I’m alone. When I was young my parents die in the car accident, maybe that’s the reason why I choose to be alone. I grow up without parents, I grow up without telling me don’t do stupid things and I grow up with someone telling me ‘Congratulation’ if I achieve something. I’m always at the hospital because I’m sick, it’s already too late when I notice. Well I think that’s life, you just need to accept the reality.


That’s what I really feel, but when I meet this girl, my mind changed. It was a coincident but that event changed me. I was walking in the street after I go with my doctor and hear the news. And then someone tap my shoulder in the back, “Miss..?” she call me. I turn around to look at that person and she want to give me something, “I think this is yours?” I look at her hand and notice my wallet. “Yes..” I grab my wallet, “I saw you drop that, you walk so fast so I run to give back the wallet.” I want to thank her, I put my wallet in my bag and look at her again to see her clearly. But when I saw her, my heart don’t stop from pounding. I saw this small girl standing in front of me, she’s smiling  and I can see her two dimples and her squirrel teeth. Her face so bright, she still smiling at me, but me? I froze and still looking at her cute face. And then she look at her watch, “Crap.. I’m so late” she grab her head, “Ahhh… she’s going to scold me again.” She’s so cute, “I have to go now” she bow at me, I’m trying to bow also but she’s already gone. I try to find her where is she, but I saw her running, when she’s not that far, she stop. And look at my direction, “I hope you don’t drop that again Miss”, she wave her hand and I also wave my hand and now she’s gone. I’m smiling at myself like an idiot and still wave even if she’s gone already, ‘She’s interesting’ I put down my hand. Because I notice everyone looking at me like I’m so stupid but this girl there’s something about her, but I don’t know what. And that day I can’t forget her smile, her dimples and her face. And that girl changed everything, I don’t want to die, I hate this sick, I want to live long. I want to share my life with her, I want to grow old with her. I want to marry her if I can, I want to have a family with her. I want to love her with all my heart and I want her to love me also. But I know it’s impossible, I only have 3 months to live, I don’t want to hurt her. Am I willing to love her even if I know I’m going to leave her? Or she’s willing to love me even if she know I’m dying?




TBC




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I know you already read that prologue but i changed some of the lines, for now just a prologue and i will post the remaining this week and i will start my new chapter. so for now bye bye :byebye:


 
 
Title: Re: I love you, Forever (Kojiyuu)
Post by: yuuchans on May 07, 2015, 11:09:46 AM
UUAAAAHH~~ THAT'S REALLY INTERESTING~ :heart:  :wub:
Cant wait to see how they'll get together in future, or not   :cathappy:
And this one is long fic? I really hope so.. :yep:

Anyways thanks for sharing this  :cry: , since there's no one updated Kojiyuu, my heart's been craving for them lately :banghead:  :bleed eyes:

Title: Re: I love you, Forever (Kojiyuu)
Post by: arawche079 on May 08, 2015, 06:22:15 PM
next chapter please
Title: Re: I love you, Forever (Kojiyuu)
Post by: Korisu29 on May 10, 2015, 03:12:35 PM
interesting!!  :mon determined:
waiting for the next chapter ...  :mon trannie:
Title: Re: I love you, Forever (Kojiyuu)
Post by: JoeYee on May 10, 2015, 05:35:08 PM
Wow..
Haruna has three months eh?〒_〒
Please do update the fic and thank you for the prologue. (´∀`)♡
Title: Re: I love you, Forever: CHAPTER 1 (Kojiyuu)
Post by: Korisu29 on May 14, 2015, 07:11:04 AM
so cute!!!  :mon lovelaff:
want moooooreeeee!!!  :mon dance:
pliiiisss update sooon!!!  :mon XD:
Title: Re: I love you, Forever: CHAPTER 1 (Kojiyuu)
Post by: Kirozoro on May 14, 2015, 09:36:26 PM
Update ASAP please!!!!!

Title: Re: I love you, Forever: CHAPTER 1 (Kojiyuu)
Post by: Haruko on May 15, 2015, 04:45:35 AM
OMG so cute! I  love it!
Title: Re: I love you, Forever: CHAPTER 2 (Kojiyuu)
Post by: yuuchans on May 16, 2015, 09:55:17 AM
It is really good~  :wub:  :twothumbs
Its surely rare that Haruna's the one liking Yuko first  :inlove:
Hope to see more soon  :hip smile:
Title: Re: I love you, Forever: CHAPTER 2 (Kojiyuu)
Post by: Haruko on May 16, 2015, 10:07:12 AM
You are so inlove haruna, jajajaa well at least ypu know her name
Title: Re: I love you, Forever: CHAPTER 2 (Kojiyuu)
Post by: Kirozoro on May 17, 2015, 09:55:23 PM
Ahhhahah Haruna don't be so nervourse u can do this!!!

Thx for the update!!
Title: Re: I love you, Forever: CHAPTER 3 (Kojiyuu)
Post by: Korisu29 on May 23, 2015, 12:29:56 PM
Ohmygosh! Kojiyuu is soo cute!
But when i remember haruna gonna die,i feel sad..
Plis update soon..
I like it
Title: Re: I love you, Forever: CHAPTER 3 (Kojiyuu)
Post by: shanju on May 23, 2015, 03:19:20 PM
Jhom san,
You made my day :D
Aaaa, i can die in happines LOL
Update soon,
You know, officially iam your fans now  :lol:
Title: Re: I love you, Forever: CHAPTER 3 (Kojiyuu)
Post by: Haruko on May 23, 2015, 05:41:29 PM
its not boring at all! I love this step by step relationship :D, so cute and I can feel why haruno is falling for yuko´s charm :D
Title: Re: I love you, Forever: CHAPTER 3 (Kojiyuu)
Post by: JoeYee on May 23, 2015, 05:42:13 PM
Finally they officially met! Yay!
Kojiyuu is just too cute (´∀`)♡
Thank you for your update and hope to see you update again soon!(⌒o⌒)
Title: Re: I love you, Forever: CHAPTER 3 (Kojiyuu)
Post by: arawche079 on May 23, 2015, 05:49:57 PM
Yeah!!!!!

Finally haruna had the courage to speak......

Jhom-san you're gone for a while but you updated two stories in one day.... :cool1:

Ah....I almost forget that haruna only have three months to live.. :mon prayer:

Extend her life please :kneelbow:pa-extend pa pohehe...

 :thumbup More
Title: Re: I love you, Forever: CHAPTER 4 (Kojiyuu)
Post by: shanju on May 28, 2015, 10:04:58 AM
No its not bored! Its amazing jhom san >,<
I love the way haruna daydreaming about their future, and yuko too gentle i cant handle it >,<
Update soon :byebye:
Title: Re: I love you, Forever: CHAPTER 4 (Kojiyuu)
Post by: arawche079 on May 28, 2015, 10:51:14 AM
LOL!!!

Yes extend her life.........

Haha Haruna is so cute......

pa update agad
Title: Re: I love you, Forever: CHAPTER 4 (Kojiyuu)
Post by: Haruko on May 29, 2015, 02:57:15 AM
Woot! It´s not boring that all! Seriously! We love it!.. Ilove this relationship but I feel sad because Haruna´s disease... please just dont killl her -_- thanks for this updated
Title: Re: I love you, Forever: CHAPTER 4 (Kojiyuu)
Post by: JoeYee on May 30, 2015, 12:40:33 AM
Aha.. I like where this is going but Haruna is sick..( TДT)
Take your time and I hope you get your inspiration back to write.~\(≧▽≦)/~
Thank you for the update. (´∀`)♡
Title: Re: I love you, Forever: CANCEL
Post by: arawche079 on August 07, 2015, 02:28:21 PM
dude anong nangyari?????

Why did you cancel this fic?????? :banghead: :banghead: :banghead:

Come on jhom-san I know you're still around.....repost this fic....

DANG.............COME ON!!!!! :angry: :angry: :angry: :angry:
Title: Re: I love you, Forever: CANCEL
Post by: Celashcole on August 07, 2015, 02:37:42 PM
Nuuuuu, why...?
Please continue...
Title: Re: I love you, Forever (re-write) Prologue
Post by: jhom_09 on August 10, 2015, 04:11:35 AM
dude anong nangyari?????

Why did you cancel this fic?????? :banghead: :banghead: :banghead:

Come on jhom-san I know you're still around.....repost this fic....

DANG.............COME ON!!!!! :angry: :angry: :angry: :angry:



arawche079 = yes im always around and searching for some kojiyuu fic, hehe i do what you request i will continue this. and thank dude ayan huh

Nuuuuu, why...?
Please continue...


Celashcole = hehe i never see you before in my fic so im happy to see you here, im glad you want me to continue this







Title: Re: I love you, Forever (re-write) Prologue
Post by: arawche079 on August 10, 2015, 04:18:04 AM
Touch down
I'm glad you're back hehe.....
 :shifty::on GJ:
Title: Re: I love you, Forever (re-write) Prologue
Post by: shanju on August 10, 2015, 04:18:57 AM
wow, you comeback  :twothumbs

hmmm i started to miss kojiyuu fic and its a good news that you back with your old fic

I really love this fic,

And iam waiting for your next update jhom san.

Thank you for the prolouge,  XD
i cant wait the new chapter, even we already knew the story heheee
Title: Re: I love you, Forever (re-write) Prologue
Post by: jhom_09 on August 13, 2015, 08:53:03 AM

Like i promise i will post this again, so yes this is my new chapter for the day i'm sorry i take it too long, kind of busy, i changed this a little. And for my other fic, actually i already finish my other fic and now im doing my season two for that, if your interested you can message me and ask my link for that fic,

So here's my new update, and before i start i want to remind you guys, im not good in english and i know i have a lot of wrong grammar here, if you find this not interesting dont read my fic, give some respect. thank you




I LOVE YOU, FOREVER


Chapter 1

I’m Kojima Haruna, 27 years old, single, no boyfriend since birth. I don’t have a parent anymore they die when I was 10 years old. I grow up with my Auntie but right now I have my own apartment and live there alone. I’m a model, maybe some people know me but I’m not consider myself has a famous model, for me this is only a job and the only thing I’m really good of. I’m one of the top models here in Japan, they say I’m perfect, beautiful face, perfect body and have a big boobs. Some guy wants my attention but I feel weird because even though they handsome, rich and have a good body, I don’t see them interesting. I feel they just want me because of my physical appearance and of course the fame I have, it’s not I don’t like them but there’s no spark that all the girls searching or maybe I just don’t believe in love. But earlier something happen, I met this girl, the person who pick my wallet. There’s something about her that my smile don’t fade away. I still remember her, her cute face and her two dimples but the sad news is I don’t know her name, I don’t even know where she live and I don’t know if I can see her again.




“Why your smiling Nyaro?” my friend Mariko ask me, I call her to accompany me here in the mall and we agree to meet in our favorite café, we always do this if we have a time. Mariko is one of my close friend, well their not that many but I still have a friends. She sit in front of me, I know she’s waiting for my answer. “Is there something wrong if I’m smiling?” I ask her with a frown face, “Well there’s nothing wrong, but seeing you smiling like that I know something happen, it’s rare you know.” I just grab the menu and act like I didn’t hear her, when I noticed she also browsing the menu and find what we want to eat. I call the waitress and give our order, when the waitress get our order and leave.  Mariko look at me again, “So what happen today?” she ask me again. “Nothing..?” after I say that I look away, she rest her chin in her hand and still looking at me. “Come on.. I know your lying, so what really happen?” she know me so well. But I feel weird, why I can’t tell her that I just met a girl and why I feel shy because of that. “I met someone earlier” I said softly while I bit my lips and look down, Marichan sit straight when she hear me and look at me with a curious face. “So..? you met someone and you’re smiling because of that someone?” she smirk after that. Ahh.. I hate that smile, “So, Kojima Haruna get interested with someone? That’s new” and now she’s laughing at me. “I’m not interested ok..?! I just drop my wallet and she pick my wallet, she’s just helping me” I said with annoyed voice. She frowned when she hear me, “She..? As in she?” she ask me, “Yes..!! she and that someone is a girl” i can see a disappoint look. “I thought his a guy” she cross her arm and think for a while, “Wait..? and why your smiling like that? Like you see your love of your life” “What?!!” I try to say something more but she stop me. “Oh my god Nyaro, so that’s the reason you never get interested in a guy before” she said. I open my mouth to defend myself but I can’t say anything. Until the waitress came and serve our order but Marichan can’t keep her eyes off me. So I need to say something or else she will think something again, “Look, I will be honest with you, I find her interesting and have cute smile, cute dimples, cute face, but that’s all.” But my answer make the situation worst, “it’s ok with me if you’re interested with girls because I’m your friend” I sigh. “I don’t like her Marichan, not the like you think”, “Ok fine, you don’t like her, so how you find her interesting?” she ask me. And then I start thinking her again, “Well she’s cute” she laugh so hard when she hear me. “What..!?” I ask her half shouted, she touch her stomach and still laughing, “It’s funny because the why you say that, it’s like you’re in High School and that’s the first time you saw your crush and it’s not you Nyaro” my face turn to red when I heard that. “Shut up Marichan, this is not funny” I get irritate now, “Ok.. I’m sorry, so what is her name?” I feel sad when I remember I don’t know her name. “I don’t know” I pout. “You don’t know? I thought she help you?” “Yes she help me, but after that she leave so fast, so I never get a chance to talk to her.” We start to eat our food, “What if you two meet again? You know destiny” she start to teased me again. “Impossible!?”  I answer her back, “Why it’s impossible? You two walk in the same street, I can feel you two will meet again” I just keep listening to her. “What if you two really destined for each other?” she ask me that same question again. “You know I don’t believe with that kind of thing” I answer, “Well believe now because I can really feel that you and her will meet again.” Her l sentence break my heat because I know were not because I only have 3 months to live. Even if we meet again, I can’t be with her for the rest of my life. So you’re wrong Marichan were not destined for each other.






After are shopping, I’m in the train, I’m going back to my apartment and get a lot of rest. I’m so tired because of the things we do today and the worst of all I can’t find a sit, so I’m standing. And what the hell!? Where’s the gentleman here and offer me a sit. I sigh, but I feel something, I feel dizzy, I close my eyes and touch my head, ‘God not now’ I said softly. When I feel I’m going to fall, someone catch  me using her body. That person hug me, “Are you ok?” she ask me with a worried tone, when I hear her voice, I’m glad it’s a girl I recognized her by her voice. I still close my eyes because I can’t open it because I still feel dizzy. “I feel you’re not ok, come on, I will take you to my sit” she help me to walk. And because of that I have a chance to smell her  because were to close that I can feel her body heat. She smell nice and I feel I’m addicted with her and noq I turn to be a pervert, “Come on sit here” she said, she help me to sit. “Thank you” I said when I feel I can relax and feel better, I slowly open my eyes and look up to see the face of the girl helping me. When I clearly see her face, my heart beating faster and I feel the time stop. I’m still looking at her face, and that face I can’t forget that, that cute dimples and that smile, she’s the girl I met earlier. And now she’ standing in front of me, “Are you ok now Miss?” she ask me softly. And that voice, I feel, it’s  like music in my ears, “Ye.. Yes..” and now I’m stuttering like an idiot. She frown, “Ok..? that’s good” and now she smile at me cheekily. She so cute, that I can die now, ‘oh my god I need to say something’ I try to open my mouth to start the conversation but my mind going crazy what to ask first. But the train interrupt me, she look at the door near to us. “Oh..? this is my stop, I need to go now” she said, the situation wake me, she turn around and start to leave. When she’s outside but I can still see her, she turn around again and for the last time she said something again. “Miss..? next time be careful ok..?” and then the door of the train close. My mouth still hanging open because I can’t believe what happen, I grab my head with my both hands because I’m so frustrated. “Why I’m so stupid, it’s so simple but why I can’t ask her name? “ I sighed and feel sad, ‘I hope I can meet her again.’


TBC 






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That's my update i know still the same, but i hope you all can enjoy that, i'm busy with my other fic and enjoying the fic of my friend there, so that's it for today  :byebye:





arawche079 = Yes I'm back, alam mo na



shanju = Thank you, i get shy suddenly  :hee: and thank you for the support


And to all the people view this story thank you so much  :kneelbow:



Title: Re: I love you, Forever (re-write) Chapter 1 (Kojiyuu)
Post by: arawche079 on August 13, 2015, 09:10:48 AM
Touch down
Title: Re: I love you, Forever (re-write) Chapter 1 (Kojiyuu)
Post by: shanju on August 14, 2015, 12:35:18 AM
Ahhhh haruna really really act like she falling in love with that girl  :lol:
Can be so stupid infront of yuko, hmmm i wondering will yuko find haruna interesting like haruna did? Because i just know from haruna pov
But good job jhom san, i really miss this fic.
I hope you can update fast so i will not curious again about what happen next hehee
Thankyou  :mon thumb:
I hope they can meet soon  :mon inluv: