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Title: Sorry For Loving You (Sae, Mayu, Yuki, Rena and Others) - Chapter 5 - 01/03/2016
Post by: yumii07 on January 17, 2016, 03:58:54 PM
Hello everyone
This my first time post my fanfic there
And it's my first fanfic I ever post at my blog
Hope you will like it


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## CHAPTER 1 ##


#in the morning#

"Mayu chan... Can you make it fast!! I don't want to be late!!!" Sae shouted while knock Mayu's room. "Shigh, she just ingrone me?" Sae thought then went to the kitchen to prepare bento for both of them. After prepare that bento, she start to impatien because Mayu never appear, "what the hell make her so long?" Sae murmured. "Mayu chan, if you never come, I'm sure you will walk at school by yourself!!" Sae shout with a little anger at her voice ,"SAE CHAN WAIIIT!!!" Mayu shouted and run from her room who still manage her tie.


---- suddenly ----


****BRUUKK BRUUUKK BRUUKK****

"Ittaai..."
"Mayu chan what happen?" Sae run to Mayu who rubb her but.
Then Sae realized Mayu was fall from the stair and start laughing because she think Mayu face is really funny.
"Happy now? Huh" Mayu said pouting while hold her tear.
"Gomen.. Gomen... Mayu chan you should see where you walk" Sae help Mayu to stand up. Then she realized Mayu's tie still mess. "There.. There Mayu, let me help you to tying that" Sae start to tying Mayu's tie while Mayu still pouting at Sae.
"Okay,, that perfect, let's go to the school!!" Sae say happily while prepare her bicylcle.
"Why she really exited?" Mayu whispered to herself but Sae still can heard that, she just smirk because Mayu's action. Then Sae tell to Mayu to sit at the back sit of her bicycle and start bike as fast as she can because they both almost to late.


#At School#

"Here we are" Sae still manage her breath. Her sweat flowing like a waterfall.
"What that for? You want we die?" Mayu glare to Sae because she bike like crazy.
"That your fault! If you don't take so long to tying that, I don't have did that" Sae shout at Mayu. Then she realized Mayu face who change and she feel guilty.
"......."
"Mayu, gomen.. I didn't mean like that" Sae try to calm Mayu.
"No need to  sorry, because what you say is true" Sae was surprise because suddenly Mayu say and hug her.
"Hey,, why you hug me?" Sae still rub Mayu back.
"Nothink, I just want to hug you"

--- DONG DING DONG ----


"Psst.. Yukirin" Mayu try to hold her voice as low she can.
"Nani?" Yuki said with low voice to, because she doesn't want her teacher aware they were talking during of the lesson.
"Did you have a candy, I haven't get breakfast before. Sae don't want we late because of me." Mayu explain to Yuki as short as possible.
"I'm sorry Mayu, but I don't have candy or something that can you eat" Yuki say sorry to her bestfriend.
"I see.." Mayu take her head down then she sleep.
"How can she just sleep like this" Yuki look at Mayu whit a suprise.



**KNOCK KNOCK**




"Hontou ni gomenasai, I'm late" the girl said to the teacher.
"Oh you must be the ten ko sai, come in. And please introduce yourself" the teacher ask to the girl.
"HII!! My Name Jurina Matsui. I'm from Nagoya and move here because my father business. Yoroshiku Onegaishimasu!!" Jurina say happily.

"Kyaaa.. Kakkoi" a girl say
"She's really ikemen" another girl added

"It's look like she will be next player" the teacher thought then tell Jurina sit beside Mayu.

While Jurina walk to her seat, she look at the girl who sleep like a princess.
"Kawaii...." She thought. Then she want to wake that girl up, but Yuki touch Jurina hand and whispered something whit low voice.
"Don't wake she up" Jurina just nodded and smile to Yuki who sit ahead Mayu.
"Hey, my name is Yuki Kashiwagi. But my friend call me Yukirin. Yuki try to be friendly to the tenkousai.
"You're really beautiful, I felt very lucky can be transferred at school who full of princess , oh.. My name is.." Before Jurina has to finish her word. Someone yelled at her.
"URUSAIII!!! Mayu yelled at the person beside her.
"What that Watanabe? Are you sleep at my class again?" The teacher say whit anger on her face.

"It's not like that Shinoda Sensei"
"I don't need your explain" Mayu try to explain but she just punished to stand out at the corridor.

Mayu sigh and walk away from her seat. But before Mayu goes to the door, she just fainted. But Jurina so fast and she grab Mayu waist at the great time.

Everyone was shocked about that scene.
"I will take her to nursery" Jurina take Mayu whit bridal style.

"Kyaa.. She's really gentle" the girls of the class say like crazy.

"Mayu chan!!" Yuki stand up from her seat and run after Mayu and Jurina.

"Who they thing am I?" The teacher say toherself.



-TO BE CONTINUED-



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I think it's really short, sorry for my bad grammar
I still study hard fo make my english be better..

Please leave your comment
Title: Re: Sorry For Loving You (Sae, Mayu, Yuki, Jurina, and Other)
Post by: arawche079 on January 17, 2016, 04:42:45 PM
Oh.... Is this going to be saeyuki or mayuki
Saejuri or jurimayu?
What is sae relationship with mayu? sisters? I'm sorry if i missed it...
Too short I want to read more.... I will be following this fic... :cool1:

Good job author-san...welcome to jphip....
Title: Re: Sorry For Loving You (Sae, Mayu, Yuki, Jurina, and Other)
Post by: yumii07 on January 17, 2016, 05:07:18 PM
Oh.... Is this going to be saeyuki or mayuki
Saejuri or jurimayu?
What is sae relationship with mayu? sisters? I'm sorry if i missed it...
Too short I want to read more.... I will be following this fic... :cool1:

Good job author-san...welcome to jphip....

I still thinking about this story.. And I'll try to update that fast..
About SaeMayu relationship I will tell at next chap
Thanks for coment
Title: Re: Sorry For Loving You (Sae, Mayu, Yuki, Jurina, and Other)
Post by: Minami-chan on January 17, 2016, 10:01:30 PM
mmmm

It may be interesting story.

please continue.
Title: Re: Sorry For Loving You (Sae, Mayu, Yuki, Jurina, and Other)
Post by: genkingblack on January 18, 2016, 04:07:05 AM
Yeaaahh there are Sae and Yuki :3

I hope it will be saeyuki and jurimayu in end

oh yeah welcome to jphip ,and nice ff btw :D
but I think you should proofread or something because I noticed that there are few of mistake in grammar, but thats okay its still read-able

otsukareee~ :on gay:
Title: Re: Sorry For Loving You (Sae, Mayu, Yuki, Jurina, and Other)
Post by: yocelin17 on January 18, 2016, 04:46:14 PM
I was curious what will be the pairing, and i also curious about how will this story continued from this. I will follow this story, please continue
Title: Sorry For Loving You (Sae, Mayu, Yuki, Jurina, Rena and Other) - Chapter 2 -
Post by: yumii07 on January 21, 2016, 03:29:29 PM
Hello everyone I back xD

@Minami-chan : thanks for comment,
but I can't promise to update that fast
@buciq : do you want SaeYuki and JuriMayu?
I don't know but I still wonder who pair  I must to choose at the end.
@yocelin17 : Thanks, I will try my best to make this fic will be better.

I don't know if this fic will be interesting or be dissapointed you,
Especially about my grammar, I not really good write story in english.
So I can't make long fic, because I afraid to make you bore.
But I still do my best and keep learning anything.

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## CHAPTER 2 ##





"Okaa san.. Okaa san... Hic hic" Mayu say seem she have a bad dream.
Suddenly Sae opened the nursery door. "What happen to her?" Sae run to Mayu whit  worried in her face.
"I don't know, she just fainted before take shinoda sensei punishment" Jurina still look at Mayu holding Mayu's hand.
"What punishment?" Sae ask curiously.
"I think it is because Mayun't had breakfast this morning, and she get punishment because she fell sleep at Shinoda sensei class" Yuki explain while added look at Sae. Then she caressed Mayu cheek and she realized Mayu face is burning.
"Sae chan... Mayu is burning!! Her face turn red too" Yuki say panicked to Sae.

"Oh god.. Yukirin, can you tell teacher, because I want to take Mayu at hospital now. So I and Mayu go home early today" Sae carried Mayu at her back and run from that room.
"Sae chan, but.." Yuki can't finish her word because Sae already disappear. Jurina just look at the scane.
"I think it's will be triangle love" he thought  and smirk.
"What that for? Huh?" Yuki feel irritated because of Jurina smirk at that time.
"No.. No.. I just forget to introduce my self to that persone, if I don't mistake who you call Sae chan.Oh let's back at class, I don't need lose my first time at school" Jurina say nervouse and smile awkward at Yuki.
"Oh you are right, let's go Jurina san"

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"Sae chan, I'm alraight, you don't need take me at hospital" Mayu say in low tone.
"Okay, but I still need to take care you. I will carried you to home" Say said whit lovely tone to Mayu.
"But it's really long way, you can't carried me home, I don't want you get tired. Next week your tournament come" Mayu want to refuse but Sae interrup her.
"No need to argure Mayu!! You're my cousin and now you're responsibillity of my parent." Sae said and raise her voice.
"Gomen ne.. Sae chan. And Arigatou for always taking care me" Mayu thighten her grip around Sae neck.
"Just sleep Mayu, if you keep talk to me. I'm sure I will be tired because I must carried and talk to you"


-Back To School-

Luch Time


"Yukirin san, do you mind have lunch with me?" Jurina ask carefully,
because this her first day and she thing she must  make a friend.
"I don't mind, let's have lunch at rooftop, there I usualy spend my lunch time" she say and take her bento, Jurina just follow Yuki who walk away from the class.. "Wait me Yukirin....!!!"

After they're arrived at rooftop.

"Heii Rena, you're so fast, because I think the lunch time just start 2 minute ago. Or maybe you're  don't take a class before?" Yuki greet the girl who like finish her lunch.
"Aahh.. Heii Yukirin.. I just don't want to take that class because I didn't feel comfortable because I think something bad just happened" she said and look at the girl beside Yuki. "Who is she? I never seen her before" Rena ask still stare at Jurina.
"Oh.. She's ten ko sai at my class. And she..." Yuki want to finish her word but Jurina interup her.
"Hei.. My name is Jurina, Matsui Jurina... But for you just call me Jurina chan" Jurina smile then she take Rena hand.
"Eehh.." Rena just get suprise about Jurina action but she didn't want look lose her modesty.
"My name Rena, Matsui Rena. You can call me Rena if you want" she give her charming smile while shake Jurina hand.
"Sou ka... Let's eat our lunch. Before next class attended" Yuki said then she  start to eat her bento.

When they're enjoying their lunch, Jurina realized there is something disturbing thoughts am Rena. "Etto.. Rena chan, you look like uncomfortable? What happen? Am I bothering you? Are you don't like if I join whit you and Yukirin?" Jurina ask many question to Rena whit sad face.
"It's not like that Jurina, I just wondered what happen to me. I just feel something bad happened." Rena felt guilty because her make Jurina feel bad.

"Aahh.. Rena, did you know that... Mayu get fainted before, and Sae carried Mayu to house, do you want to cheek her after school? Oh you're to Jurina, if you want.. You can join with us" Yuki said after finish her lunch.
"I'm really want to see Mayu, but I have part time after school" Rena look down she feel bad because can't be beside sick Mayu her best friend or maybe her soulmate.

"I see.. What about you Jurina?" Yuki look at jurina wait her respon.
Anoo... I have something to do after school. I'm sorry I can't accompany you, beside I even greet her before. Is will be awkward if I join." Jurina try to refuse Yuki invitation politely. 

"Ahh.. Alright.. I will go by myself, beside Sae bicycle still in parking lot. And I think I have to deliver it" Yuki say pouted because her will be goes to SaeMayu house by herself.
"Yukirin kawaii... You look really adorable if you pouted like that" Jurina teased Yuki then try to hug Yuki but she fall at the end because Yuki avoid that sudden hug.

"Yeah.. I'm sure you don't think she cute after you see her other side" Rena grinning to Yuki then she get punch at her shoulder.
"Tch... Whatever, I go to class first!!" Yuki get up and leave Jurina and Rena. But rena just smirk because Yuki act like 5 years old child who lose her ballons.
"Rena chan... Can we exchange phone number or email or your another social media?" Jurina give her puppy eyes who can make anyone melt if see that.
"What should I give it to you? We just know each other about a few minute ago" Rena widden her eyes because sudden ask.
"Because we're friend. Yuki is my friend and you're Yuki friend. That mean you're my friend to" Jurina explain to Rena hope her wish will be granted. "What kind of that equal you make" Rena say still hold her smile whit Jurina explanation.
"Pleasee.... Pleasee... I want make many friend, it's hard to make friend" Jurina still make her negotiation whit Rena will be succeed. But she's wrong... The bell interup them convercation. "I think it's will be next time.
"Bye Jurina" Rena waving her hand and smile at Jurina.
"Okay.." Jurina smile back at Rena.
"Next time I will make you're mine" Jurina thought.

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After arriving at home, Sae realized no one inside, then she go to Mayu's room and Sae laying Mayu in her bed, then she walk to the kitchen to take towel and a basin of water to compress Mayu. When she returned from the kitchen, she heard the sound of crying from Mayu's room. She walk faster than before to cheek what happen.

"Okaa san... Don't leave me.. Hic hic hic... I promise I won't be a little brat anymore" Mayu sobbing while sleep. Sae put towel to Mayu fore head.
"Don't leave me alone,, I'm afraid to be alone hic hic" Mayu still sobbing.
"Mayu chan" Sae worried about her cousin.
"I think she had that dream again" Sae thought
"I'm here Mayu, I don't wanna make you feel lonely. I... I..."

Suddenly the bell was ringging. Sae shigned and go to the door. And she realized the guest is Yuki.
"Aahhh... Yukirin, come in? What bring you to here? Are you skip class?" Sae said coriously, because it's to early to left the school.
"Ettooo.... What about Mayu condition, is she alraight?" Yuki try avoid Sae question, because actually she skip her class just for see Mayu or maybe Sae.

"She's sleep at her room and she's still burning. Ahh.. I want to make porridge for Mayu, do you want something to eat or drink? I will serve it to you" Sae goes to kitchen left Yuki is still at living room. But Yuki follow Sae. "I want to help you" She smile like an angle and goes to the kitchen prepare porridge for Mayu. Suddenly she saw something at refrigerator, and take it.



Sae chan..... I and your Dad will go to Taipei for 3 days for our bussines, I put money at closet. And don't forget to give Mayu's medicine. We love you.
NB: Don't dare you burn this house xD"




"Mayu's medicine?" Yuki murmured, she want to ask Sae but she think it's not a good time to aks that question. She just save it for another time. Yuki saw Sae who still busy prepare porridge for Mayu, she really know Sae so good at kitchen. She want to help Sae, but Sae refused her. So Yuki just sit and wait Sae finished her pouridge.

"Yuki, do you want something? I will cook it for you" Sae put the porridge on the bowl.
"I'm not hungry, ohh... I see it at your refrigerator" she give the paper what she take before. Sae read this and she just nodded.
But she just ignored and follow Sae.
"Thanks Yukirin, let's go to Mayu's room. You said you're here for her right?" Sae put the porridge, a glass of water and some medicines on tray and carried this to Mayu's room. Yuki wondered why Sae put any medicines if Mayu just get fever.

Sae put that tray at the table near Mayu's bed. Then she change Mayu's towel. "Mayu chan.... You still sleep? Sae carresed Mayu cheek but Yuki just stare that lovely scane.
"Uuhh.. Sae chan... I have that dream again" Mayu eyes started watery,she still sobbed in silent. Then Sae hug Mayu thight. "Don't ever be sad again, I'm here with you... We are her for you, you're not alone Mayu. Of course we love you"
Mayu hug Sae at the same way. Then she realized Yuki who still look at them, Mayu release Sae hug.

"Ehh.. Yukirin, gomen I didn't realize you're here, what bring you're here? You ready miss me?" Mayu teased Yuki then give Yuki her charming smile.
"Mou... Mayu don't tease me, I really worried about you, you're my best friend." Yuki sit at Mayu bed. "I think it's time for you're medicine Mayu, let's me feed you before you take you're medicine" Sae interrupt that conversation and start feed Mayu. After half of porridge, Mayu say she didn't want it anymore because she say she not hungry. And take her medicine.

"Sae chan, why don't you take Yukirin home. I want to sleep. Beside I afraid if any jerk will be try to do something bad to Yukirin" Mayu push Sae then she prepare to sleep again and covered her face whit blanket.

"Let's me take you home Yukirin" Yuki just nodded and sit at back sit of Sae bicycle. "Hug me, or you will be fall in the middle of  the street. Suddenly Yuki face become red to hug Sae but luckyly Sae didn't notice it. And still bike her bicycle as fast her can.



-At The Cafe




"I think there she is" Jurina turn in at manga cafe that she sure Rena do her part time here.

"Welcome to our cafe, qre you alone?" one of the maid greet her. Jurina just nodded and the maid pointed back sit and Jurina smile wider because someone she look appear from staff room (maybe).
After Jurina sit, the maid ask Jurina what she want to order, but Jurina pointed Rena.
"I want her to take my order" Jurina give her wink at the maid.

"How can do you find me?" Rena shout whit low voice at Jurina(????)
"Of course because I want to be your friend so I just to follow you and get my order" Jurina just see Rena whit her puppy eyes
"Alraight, what do you want to order?" Rena take her note and pen about to write Jurina order

"I want your number, your email and all of your social account" Jurina say still hold her smile. Rena just sigh, she think Jurina won't be give up until she get what she want.

"Okay.. You win" Rena write all of Jurina order and give it to her

##
Email : m.rena@xxxx.xxx
Phone : xxx-xxxxxx
Twitter : @rena_m

-Rena Matsui-
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"Happy now?" Rena want to walk away but Jurina grab her hand.
"Rena chan... Arigatou" Rena just smile then Jurina say to Rena about her actually order.
"Can I order banana split? I think I want to stay here for a while.. And I never think you will be damn handsome if you cross dreser "
Rena just blushing and walk away to continue her job.

[ Yeah I make Rena have her part time at danso cafe ]



-Yuki's Home--




"Thanks for taking me home, actually you don't must to did it, because Mayu still sick and she need you." Yuki say but she didn't dare look at Sae eyes. Sae notice it, she know Yuki always shy if there only two of them.

"I don't mind, you're my friend, and I don't want if beautifull girl like you walk to her home by byherself.
It's to dangerous" Sae said while hold Yuki's hand and that thing make Yuki blushing badly.

"Aahh... Kawaii ne.." Sae pinched Yuki cheek.
"Sae chan...." Yuki blushed like tomato.

"Nee.. Yukirin, thanks for be Mayu friend. Don't ever make her sad. Okay" Sae said in serious tone
"I promise, I will never make Mayu sad... She my really best friend and the someone who always be at first line if I down." Yuki said honestly to Sae.

"Sou ka... Don't leave Mayu alone to long.. She's your beautifull cousin to". Yuki give Sae her angelic smile.
"Ohh okay... Bye Yuki" Sae start to bike her bicycle to her house, while Yuki just wavet at her.

"Mayuu...." Suddenly this name come to Yuki's head but she just ignore that.



--SaeMayu House--



"Sae chan, you're home?" Mayu say whit low tone.
"I'm here Mayu" Sae hold Mayu hand
"Where is Oji-chan and Oba-chan?" Mayu ask her cousin because she feel this house really desolate.
"They go to Taipei about 3 days. So if you want something just ask me, okay"


"Sae chan...." Mayu want to ask something to Sae,
"Do you want something Mayu?" Sae look at Mayu gently.
"Sleep whit me tonight, can you? I little afraid because that dream. Please" Mayu held Sae hand like she doesn't want to let it go.

"Okay Mayu... But I want to clock the door before" Sae carresed Mayu cheek and kiss Mayu fore head. She actually know why Mayu act like this. She sure that dream really distrub her. Sae goes downstair and lock all of the door then she goes to Mayu's room again. Sae laid beside Mayu, suddenly she felt Mayu hug her.




"Sae don't ever leave me, like what them did to me"



-TO BE CONTINUED-


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Ahh I can't make long fic because I not good at english, and I can't promise you to update fast. I have another job. I don't want my boss yell at me,  If I finish late from the schedule that she gave.

And I will said this again---
Sorry for my bad grammar... I still try get better..
Thanks for read
Title: Re: Sorry For Loving You (Sae, Mayu, Yuki, Jurina, Rena and Other) - Chapter 2 -
Post by: genkingblack on January 21, 2016, 03:52:45 PM
Which pairing do I prefer?
thats not important actually ,just write the pairing that you like the most :D

Well if you want I can proof-reading ur fic. just send me by PM

but you're getting better ,keep the hardwork! :on gay:
Title: Re: Sorry For Loving You (Sae, Mayu, Yuki, Jurina, Rena and Other) - Chapter 2 -
Post by: arawche079 on January 21, 2016, 03:59:28 PM
Hi!!nice update you've finally made sae at mayu's relationship clear...

Well I'm a saeyuki and jurimayu and wmatsui shipper... So I'm liking this story

Don't be bothered by your english and grammar its understandable to me...
I'm not good at it too...lol..practice makes perfect

Just keep on writing....

Update soon...
Title: Re: Sorry For Loving You (Sae, Mayu, Yuki, Jurina, Rena and Other) - Chapter 2 -
Post by: mayuki_daisuki on January 21, 2016, 08:49:48 PM
MOAR PWEASE~~ :cathappy:
Title: Re: Sorry For Loving You (Sae, Mayu, Yuki, Jurina, Rena and Other) - Chapter 2 -
Post by: faanpal on January 22, 2016, 07:40:59 AM
Somehow, I'm sensing that actually Yuki likes Mayu. Oh, I don't know. Maybe I'm just a bit biased since I'm a MaYuki shipper. :dunno:
But, hey! I LIKE this fic.
Well, if you're not sure with the grammar, having a proofreader is something that you need. :-)
Anyway, GANBATTE!
Title: Re: Sorry For Loving You (Sae, Mayu, Yuki, Jurina, Rena and Other) - Chapter 2 -
Post by: yumii07 on January 22, 2016, 12:22:35 PM
@buciq : I still think about pair that I must choose in the end.
yeah I think I need help to make this fic will be better.. And I just write this fic by my phone
Because I was left my laptop at hometown.
@arawche079 : ahh.. So you are SaeYuki and Wmatsui shipper?
Yeah.. I'm happy if you like and didn't confuse whit my fic. Keep read
@mayuki_daisuki : ahh you're there? I like your fic too.. Thanks for read my fic
@faanpal : No actually Yuki just see Mayu as her bestfriend and her soulmate.
Thanks for comment..


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I think chapt 3 will be another person will be come..
But I still have much another job.
And I don't want to lose my job. Because It's very hard to find a job today.

One more again
Thanks for reader for read and give the comment.
Title: Re: Sorry For Loving You (Sae, Mayu, Yuki, Jurina, Rena and Other) - Chapter 2 -
Post by: genkingblack on January 22, 2016, 02:00:08 PM
sugoiiii you write this whole chapter via phone only ?? :O

just think about it carefully ,either way us (reader) will accept author's decision.

if you needed any help just contact me okay, me also still learning how to write a good story.

just i'll be a good boy while wait for your update :on gay:
Title: Re: Sorry For Loving You (Sae, Mayu, Yuki, Jurina, Rena and Other) - Chapter 2 -
Post by: yocelin17 on January 22, 2016, 02:16:16 PM
After read the second chapter i realize that you always wrote "whit", i think you mean "with", i just want to correct it so this story become better.

Thank you for this story once more.  :thumbup
Title: Re: Sorry For Loving You (Sae, Mayu, Yuki, Jurina, Rena and Other) - Chapter 2 -
Post by: yumii07 on January 23, 2016, 11:57:47 AM
sugoiiii you write this whole chapter via phone only ?? :O

just think about it carefully ,either way us (reader) will accept author's decision.

if you needed any help just contact me okay, me also still learning how to write a good story.

just i'll be a good boy while wait for your update :on gay:

Arigatou..... I hope you still read my fic after this





After read the second chapter i realize that you always wrote "whit", i think you mean "with", i just want to correct it so this story become better.

Thank you for this story once more.  :thumbup

Really???? I didn't notice it before
Thanks for tell me.... I was re-write it...
Title: Re: Sorry For Loving You (Sae, Mayu, Yuki, Jurina, Rena and Other) - Chapter 2 -
Post by: yocelin17 on January 23, 2016, 07:52:55 PM
Your welcome, i hope your fanfic continue to be better after this
Title: Re: Sorry For Loving You (Sae, Mayu, Yuki, Jurina, Rena and Other) - Chapter 2 -
Post by: culjurio on January 24, 2016, 07:35:24 AM
eeehhhh jurina falling in love with rena already ??? its interested..waiting for next chapter author san  :cow: XD
Title: Re: Sorry For Loving You (Sae,Mayu,Yuki, Jurina,Rena,and Other) - Chapter 2 -
Post by: yumii07 on January 24, 2016, 02:52:54 PM
@Culjurio : are you WMatsui shipper? Hope you will like my fic.

Ahhh... I'm studying hard so that ways of writing I'm better. In this chapter will be new comer who showed up. hope you like it. And I hope no more mistake in my writing.

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##CHAPTER 3##



"Mayu, I will go to school now! You're sure will be alright if I left you alone?" Sae put the tray on Mayu's table.
"Don't worry Sae chan, I just get fever.. I will be alright soon, just get your ass and go to school, I don't want you to be late because you take care of me"

"Okay.. but make sure your ate this porridge  and all of  your pill!!

"Haiii.... Haiii.... Now you act like a doctor" Mayu chuckle and start to ate her breakfast even thought she don't really want to eat, because all that goes into her mouth tasted really bitter.

"I go now! But I will back so fast I can. Lock all of the door and don't go anywhere, or my parents gonna kill me, if something happens to you." Sae said and she left Mayu with hesitate on her mind.

"I know Sae chan.. Just go now" Mayu give a big smile to Sae, because she don't want to be vex her cousin. Then Sae goes to school left Mayu eventhought she really want to take care her cousin.



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"Why that dream always come lately?" Mayu thought because she always had a dream about her mother lately.


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-FLASHBACK


"Otou san....... Why? why did the stupid doctor said if my mom's will be gone forever? She just sleep right?" Little Mayu sobbing while  shake died body of her Mother.
"Mayu chan,, look at your mother... She's beautiful, isn't she? What the doctor said false.. She always beside you,, beside us" Mayu's father try to calm her little princess. Because he very understand how the feel if you lost someone important in early age.

"No!!! She lied, oka san always said she will be my side forever. But oka san lied to me. She sleep like she doesn't want to wake up anymore. She doesn't love me. She just love kami sama. So oka san left us and meet kami sama." Mayu crying hard and hug her mother.

"I hate oka san" Mayu still sobbed

"Mayu chan... Don't ever say like that.. She love us.. She love you"

"But, why she don't bring me with her. I want always by her side"

"Mayu chan... You still have me, your father.. We will meet again with your mother. But you must promise, you must to be good girl." What can his do just hug Mayu. He hold his tears, because he doesn't want look weak when it like this,especially infront her little princess.

Mayu's mother died because had liver cancer, but she never show her weakness infront anyone. She always smile like never feel hurt.

"Oka san... Hic hic,, I promise I will be god girl for you" Mayu swept her tears and give her mother kiss on forehead for last time.

"Otou san.. It's about two of us right.. You will be always beside me... Promise me" Mayu ask her father to pingky swear and her father smile and accept what his little girl want.

-END OF FLASHBACK-


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-Meanwhile At school gate-


"Here you're... Call me if your school finished, and I will pick you up" a girl who look like a cat said to another girl.
"Alright honey,, have a nice day" then she give a peek on her girlfriend lips.
"Jaa ne... Ahh.. Don't dare you firlt with another cute girl or I'm sure to kill you" the girl who look like a cat  said while pinched her girlfriend cheek.

"Okay.. I love you"

"I love you too"


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-SaeRena Class-


A girl come into the class with quiet she just look down, but she still be able to steal the entire outlook of the people who are in class. After she look her best friend, her face was change, her smile widened and she look like an angel who fell to  earth.

"Sae-chan.. It's very looong time not to see you" She hug her friend tightly.

"Easy Atsuko... Where have you been" Sae release herself from that long hug.

"I just go to Dubai for Vacation"
"WHAT!!! You left school just to vacation?"
"Heii!! Don't ever said like that.. There's no way that I left school without preparation. I took online classes"

"What do you mean about online class? Sae said with full curious in her face.

"You just have to know more about the owner of this school" she said as if that's a normal thing. Sae just shook her head because she don't know what else she must said.


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"Ohayou... *yaawn*" Rena greet her friend but she look like so damn sleepy.

"Ohaa!! Rena chan.. Don't miss me? Huh?"
"Kyaaa... Acchan... It's really you? I miss you so damn" the both of them give a teletubbies hug.

"Rena chan, why you look like so tired? Are you lack of sleep?" Sae said interrupt both of AtsuRena moment.

"Oh,, don't mind of me.. I just took hours extra work, because I need something to buy. And my salary is not enough to buy it... Heheee"

"Eehh... Don't ever do that again.. If you need money you can ask me"

"You help me so much at the past.. I don't want to vex you anymore"
"Renaa... You're my ex.. My best ex girlfriend I ever have. So if you get into big trouble just ask me okay?" Atsuko pinched Rena cheek who make Rena blush so hard.

"Aahh Sae you're just jealous right? You should search for girlfriend... And I'm sure you will realized what feel of love" Atsuko teasing her friend still clings at Rena arm.

"Of course I have!!!"

"WHO!!!" AtsuRena ask at the same time

"Ettoo... Ettooo"


-DING DONG DING DONG-


Suddenly the teacher come in, and all of the student sit on them own seat.
For this time Sae make it out of question she really wants to avoid.

"Fhiuuuhh... I'm safe now" Sae thought.


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(Let's Skip the school scene - this time school was finished)


-RING RING RING-

Mayu wake up and pick up her phone. It was Sae.
"Moshi.. Moshii"
"Mayu chan,, gomenasai... I have sudden practice, the tournament was close.. So the coach does not want us to lose in the game"

"No problem Sae chan, I'm feel better right now" Mayu said at the other line.



"get off your ass, and let's practice!" the coach shout to all tennis member.



"Mayu chan,, I will leave know.. Please take care"

*beeb*beeb*beeb*


"Sae chan,, why are you always worried about me?" Mayu look at wallpaper on her phone, it's she and Sae hug each other.


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A car stopped in front of the school gate and a woman standing near the car. it's for sure, she is waiting for someone who is in this school.

"Oh.. Honey! Did I make your wait for me?" The younger girl clings on the older girl.
"Who is she?" The older girl ask her girlfriend"
"Oh, she's my best friend. And actually she's my ex" the younger girl explain to her girlfriend.

"My name is Matsui Rena, nice to meet you, Kojima san"
"You know my name?" The older girl suprise because she really sure never meet this girl before.
"Of course, Atsuko tell me about you before" Rena give her angelic smile for the girlfriend of her ex.


Haruna face turn to blank, she don't know what to ask. But Atsuko patt her shoulder.. "Can we go now?"
"Oh.. Of course,, let's get in.. Good bye matsui san" she wave her hand to Rena

"I will go now,, bye Rena chan" Atsuko kiss Rena on the cheek. Who make Rena suprise and push Atsuko, because she don't want Kojima will be misunderstanding about them relationship.

Atsuko get in Haruna car and left Rena behind.

"Like I think, Atsuko never change.. She always warm to me even thought what I was did to her at the past" Rena smile while look the car.


(actually there someone who hide at bushes still look at the scene)

"Rena chan....."


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-At Danso Cafe-

"Ahh your came again" the danso maid (I don't know what they call) who she meet before greet her.
"I want banana split again, it's really delicious" Jurina said and give her puppy smile.
"Okay, take your seat here and we will bring your order"


*CLING*

Suddenly Jurina look at the person who new one come into the cafe. She felt recognized that person.

"Yukirin,, what bring you here?" Jurina wave her hand and ask Yuki to sit with her. And Yuki just nodded and sit with Jurina.

"Tell me, what bring you here? Are you into girl?" Jurina teased Yuki.

"Actually I usually come here, because Rena have part time at here and this cafe have a very strawberry cake I ever ate" Yuki try to explain then she felt about want to go to bathroom. And ask Jurina if the maid come to make order for her. Jurina just nodded.

Then the danso maid come back while bring what Jurina order. Like was Yuki said, she ordered Strawberry cake to the danso maid.



"Etto...."
"Yes? Anything you want to order?"
"Noo.. It's enough. I just want to ask. Where's Rena, I mean Matsui Rena? "

"Oh today it's her day off. Why do you ask? Do you like her? " The danso maid ask to Jurina, who make Jurina speechless. Then she smile at Jurina then walk away left blushing Jurina.

TO BE CONTINUED


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It's to short?
I'm sorry, but I think I must update today because I have huge job until next month.
I hope I can buy laptop next time,
it's really hard if I write by my phone.

And actually this fic don't ever edited before.. If there much mistake I'm really sorry. And just tell me.

I will edited next time.
Title: Re: Sorry For Loving You (Sae, Mayu, Yuki, Jurina, Rena and Other) - Chapter 3 -
Post by: genkingblack on January 24, 2016, 04:33:43 PM
hey its me again

about the question you asked earlier
of course i'll read yours as long as you update this fic :D
*probably i'll update mine as well*

ojou(?) I think you mistaken ojou for otou.
ojou is kind like mistress something
otou is father
in this case I think otou is what you meant right?

hmmm...
I swore my heart skipped beat when I saw SaeRena *lol

so rena is working as danso maid (?)
and she is acchan's ex gf ?

still curious about next.

otsukareee~ :on gay:
Title: Re: Sorry For Loving You (Sae, Mayu, Yuki, Jurina, Rena and Other) - Chapter 3 -
Post by: yumii07 on January 24, 2016, 05:07:01 PM
hey its me again

about the question you asked earlier
of course i'll read yours as long as you update this fic :D
*probably i'll update mine as well*

ojou(?) I think you mistaken ojou for otou.
ojou is kind like mistress something
otou is father
in this case I think otou is what you meant right?

hmmm...
I swore my heart skipped beat when I saw SaeRena *lol

so rena is working as danso maid (?)
and she is acchan's ex gf ?

still curious about next.

otsukareee~ :on gay:

Yeah,, Rena is Atsuko ex
And she be whit KojiHaru now

Ahh... I just forget about what father call in jpun..
So I search about it, but I see I get troll xD

Okay.. I will edit
Title: Re: Sorry For Loving You (Sae, Mayu, Yuki, Jurina, Rena and Other) - Chapter 3 -
Post by: genkingblack on January 24, 2016, 05:26:18 PM
hey its me again

about the question you asked earlier
of course i'll read yours as long as you update this fic :D
*probably i'll update mine as well*

ojou(?) I think you mistaken ojou for otou.
ojou is kind like mistress something
otou is father
in this case I think otou is what you meant right?

hmmm...
I swore my heart skipped beat when I saw SaeRena *lol

so rena is working as danso maid (?)
and she is acchan's ex gf ?

still curious about next.

otsukareee~ :on gay:

Yeah,, Rena is Atsuko ex
And she be whit KojiHaru now

Ahh... I just forget about what father call in jpun..
So I search about it, but I see I get troll xD

Okay.. I will edit

eeh??
did I offended you somehow?
i'm not trolling you ._.

if so i'm sorry :kneelbow:

I thought you will pair SaeRena for this fic *lol
Title: Re: Sorry For Loving You (Sae, Mayu, Yuki, Jurina, Rena and Other) - Chapter 3 -
Post by: yocelin17 on January 25, 2016, 12:32:52 AM
I'm curious about Rena and Acchan, why they broke up and how Acchan and Kojiharu fall jn love with each other.

Thanks for your update
Title: Re: Sorry For Loving You (Sae, Mayu, Yuki, Jurina, Rena and Other) - Chapter 3 -
Post by: yumii07 on February 24, 2016, 01:28:54 PM
Hello everyone! I think it's very long time since i update this fic.
Is there someone waiting for the continuation of this fic? But i hope my fic not make you bored  :bow:

@yocelin17 : thanks for leaving comment.  Regarding the relationship AtsuRena, i will explain letter.



##CHAPTER 4##


It's been 3 days since Mayu didn't attend at school. She began to be bored. Beside Mayu fever had gone. So she decided to go to school today.

"Sae Chan, please. I promise i don't make you carried me again. I want go to school,  beside your parent will be back this night.  I feel lonely" Mayu begging to her cousin
Sae really understand why her cousin begging like this, because Mayu afraid to be alone. Especially when she remember her past.

"You must have one day for rest Mayu, please,  don't be stubborn" Sae say serious.
"It's that because the damn liver i have? Just because i have same disease with my mom. You're treat me like i was dying" Mayu look down hide her teary eyes. "Mayu Chan... I'm sorry, i didn't mean like that.  "I HATE YOU MIYAZAWA SAE!!!" Sae try to hug Mayu but mayu just push her cousin just run to her room.

"Mayu Chan... I just don't want to lose you" Sae signed and goes to school.

Mayu seeing her cousin from the window, and she signed. "I know Sae, you just worried about me. But i want to see her" Mayu look at the photos on her desk. Photos of her with the girl who she love.  "Yukirin, i love you" then Mayu realizes breakfast and her usually medicine on her desk, she throw away her breakfast and her medicine."I'm really tired, i don't want that damn medicine anymore"
Then Mayu lay on her bed and fell sleep.



(at school)



It's was been 4 day since Jurina had transferred at this school. However she has joined at baseball club. When she success hit that ball thrown far away.  And the practice was over.then Jurina went to the bench and wipe her sweat. Her charming make many girl shouted her name like fangirl.

"Kyaaaa~ she made 5 home run!!!" One of her fangirl shouted.
"Jurina Sama, you're really awesome" 2nd fangirl shouted.
"Jurina Sama you're so hand some" another fargirl shouted

"Heiii heii... easy girl. Don't be crazy" Jurina gave her charming smile and left her fangirl with her wink.

"You really fast boy!!" One of Jurina teammate patted her shoulder.
"I can't believe that,  you make many girl fall for you that fast" another her teammate said. Jurina just smile and scratch her head. Then she look at the girl who was sit under sakura tree. Jurina walk towards that girl, and she sit beside her. Jurina realize that girl was asleep.

"Is she an angel??"

"Jurina Chan, what are you doing there?"
"Ahh... Rena Chan, i just finished practice"
"I see... "

Suddenly the girl beside Jurina open her eyes. She surprised at the presence of two people around her.

"Rena Chan, finally you come, but why you come with her?"
"No actually before i come here i see Jurina sit beside you. And i think you both know each other, but seeing you ask, i think you're both didn't know each other"

"She sit beside me while i sleep?" Atsuko look at Jurina
"Gomenasai..." Jurina just look down.

"Actually she's Matsui Jurina, a transfered student from Mayu class"

"Mayu class?"
"Yes, why Acchan?"
"Nothing..." she shook her head but Rena notice Atsuko look little sad.

"Ooh.. hello Jurina, I'm Maeda Atsuko. But since i know you're Rena friend you can call me Acchan" Atsujk greet Jurina and gave her angelic smile, her teeth greatly visible when she smile, that make her beautiful increase.

"Nice to meet you Acchan, why i never see you before. I'm very confident nice girl like you would be easily recognizable...... ittaaii heiii!! What that for Rena? You want to broke my head? Jurina said while rubbed her head.

"Because you're a player who flrit many girls around"
"Heii Rena...  don't be jealous" Atsuko said and hug Rena thighly.
"Mou... Atsuko! I don't want your girlfriend misunderstand me if you hug me like this" Rena said while try to release Atsuko hug.

"My girlfriend or you crush Rena!" Atsuko give her deep look at Rena.
"Nee... Rena Chan.. you still love her right? The only one who you love since junior high school"

"Eehh.. so Rena Chan love someone for a long time? Who is she?"

"Acchan... please don't "
"And you broke with me because i cant replace her in your heart right? And i hate because even you broke with me,  you still never confess to her!!"

"Atsuko... enough... " then Rena look at Jurina and give her sign to leave her alone with Atsuko. Jurina just nodded and left Rena with Atsuko.

"Atsuko.. please, you have Kojima San now.. she really love you. I think she can make you the happier woman in the world"

"THE ONLY ONE WHO CAN MAKE ME HAPPY JUST YOU!!" Atsuko said with teary eyes.

"Atsuko..."

"I cant forget you Rena...  i still love you... i love you Rena..  come back to me" Atsuko try to hold not to cry.

"Atsuko, i can't...  i don't want you suffering because of me anymore.  And the reason i don't confess to her because i know she love eeummpptt" suddenly Atsuko  kiss Rena on the lips, the kiss was full of love, grief and anger. Rena didn't react but she just let what Atsuko do.

"I'm sorry Rena" Atsuko cant hold her tears anymore, she cried in front he ex.
"No need to apologize Atsuko...  there.. there" Rena open her arm and give signal to her ex to hug her...
"I'm sorry Atsuko, i think i hurt you to much at the past. But why you always kind to me? Rena said while carresed Atsuko back who still sobbing.


"Rena Chan..." Jurina whispering whilebhide at bushes, then she walk away from that scene.



(after school)


"Yukirin, can you look after Mayu?"
"Ehhh...?"
"I'm sorry if you can't, i will ask Rena"
"I don't mind Sae Chan,  but why you ask me?"
"Because i have meeting with my club.  Then i doubt Mayu will have her lunch and take her pills"
"Okey...  i will look after her and make sure she will take her pills and her lunch"
"Thanks Yukirin" then Sae give Yuki kiss on cheek. That sudden kiss make Yuki blushing like tomato.
"Sae Chan... why you did that" Yuki pinch Sae arm but not to hard. Sae just smile because Yuki behaviour then Sae patted Yuki head.

"Ja nee"

"Sae Chan...  wait!!!"
"Nani Yukirin?" Yuki give chocolate to Sae.
"What that for?"
"I don't want you get sick because fatigue, so i hope this chocolate will help to maintain your stamina"

"Aah... Arigatou Yuki Chan,  can i have a bite now?" Sae ask teasing Yukirin.
"Of course baka !! It's yours." Then Sae bite and start to chewing that chocolate.

"Yukirin...." Sae look at Yuki eyes deeply.  That make Yuki heart beating so fast.

"Ehmmm..." Yuki try to hold her nervousness.

"You love me right?"

"Eehhh....." Yuki face turn red than before and that world make her heart beating so fast more than before like her heart will explode.

"Just kidding Yukirin " Sae give Yuki her ikemen smile and left Yuki who still manage her beating heart.

"You're right Sae Chan...  actually i love you... more than friend" Yuki murmured


TO BE CONTINUED





It's too short?
I'm really sorry...  because i don't have much time for make this fic.
Please comment...  and say what mistake i have did on this chapt..


Sorry for my poor English. :gyaaah:
Title: Re: Sorry For Loving You (Sae, Mayu, Yuki, Jurina, Rena and Other) - Chapter 4 -
Post by: genkingblack on February 24, 2016, 01:54:57 PM
Ahh I've been wondering when you'll update this
since i saw you left comment on mine :D

Aahhh...  :hehehe: :hehehe:

so mayu like Yuki, it turn out that Acchan still love Rena. But who is the one that rena love?
Yuki like Sae???  :luvluv2: :luvluv2:

I'm totally Ship my OTP there fufufufu~  :hiakhiakhiak: :hiakhiakhiak:
Title: Re: Sorry For Loving You (Sae, Mayu, Yuki, Jurina, Rena and Other) - Chapter 4 -
Post by: Puririnpha on February 24, 2016, 02:59:46 PM
I'm curious who is rena love? mayu, yuki or another else? :shy2: ...
Title: Re: Sorry For Loving You (Sae, Mayu, Yuki, Jurina, Rena and Other) - Chapter 4 -
Post by: culjurio on February 24, 2016, 05:39:44 PM
wkwk, i really can't imagine atsurena scene, because i never see they're together.
BUT WHEN RENA HIT JURINA'S HEAD, IT'S JUST TOO PERFECT.!!

Okay then. looking for next chapter yumii saann  :lol: :twothumbs :shakeit:
Title: Re: Sorry For Loving You (Sae, Mayu, Yuki, Jurina, Rena and Other) - Chapter 4 -
Post by: Raizel on February 25, 2016, 10:18:38 AM
Gahh... This story really make me frustated.. :banghead:
So many routes and twist, I can't imagine the end of the route. But that also make it interesting. :D
It can be whoever. Well gonna wait for next update then..
Thanks~ :thumbsup
Title: Re: Sorry For Loving You (Sae, Mayu, Yuki, Jurina, Rena and Other) - Chapter 4 -
Post by: yumii07 on February 27, 2016, 04:47:12 AM
@buciq : heiii you leave comment again, thank you so much... i glad if you happy that i make SaeYuki moment  :mon sweat: :mon sweat:

@puririnpha : what i must choose?MayuRena/RenaYuki but i think it's so rare to see RenaMayu on other fic...  :kekeke: so i will make MayuRena moment

@culjurio : aahh.. you happy if Jurina get hit by Rena? I don't believe that  :wahaha: :wahaha:

@raizel : yeah i think i will be make much pair that i like and i hope you don't get angry if there not the usual pair at the end of this fic...  :mon whimper: :mon whimper:


Ahhh... thanks for reader to spend your time to read my fic...
Hope you still follow it  :bow: :bow:
I think i will update chapter 5 tomorow, hope i don't have huge job at that time.

Title: Re: Sorry For Loving You (Sae, Mayu, Yuki, Jurina, Rena and Other) - Chapter 4 -
Post by: maharani niken on February 27, 2016, 08:20:20 AM
yes please make MayuRena moment
Title: Re: Sorry For Loving You (Sae, Mayu, Yuki, Jurina, Rena and Other) - Chapter 4 -
Post by: yumii07 on March 01, 2016, 08:03:45 AM
@maharani niken : thanks for comment

Heii,, i promise that i will update thin fic on, but i can't open this web.
So i update today... gomen me  :bow:


There's chapter 5. Hope you like it




##CHAPTER 5##

Yuki sighed again and again to calm her heartbeat that beat so fast. especially after hearing Sae statement about her feelings. She didn't expect Sae will notice her feeling. But she wondering why Sae just say she was kidding? Is she play with her heart? Then she remember her promise to Sae for look after Mayu. So so decided to buy 2 cake for her and Mayu. After that she walk to Mayu house, but on her way to Mayu house, she look Rena who talk with Atsuko. She wondering what they both did,  because AtsuRena really rare use this way if they was go home. But she didn't think about it to much.

"Heii Acchan, Rena Chan... what are you doing here?" Rena and Atsuko look at Yuki.
"I want to Mayu house, what about you Yukirin?" Rena ask to Yuki.
"Me to,, do you mind if i join with you two?"
"No problem,  let's go" Atsuko and Rena said


(At Mayu House)


Mayu very happy because her friend come tobsee her, actually because of Yuki.
"Mayu Chan, I'm sorry i just have time to see you" Rena say to Mayu feel sorry.
"Don't worry Rena Chan, you work hard at that cafe. This awesome, can i join with you someday?" Mayu look at Rena with charming eyes and make Rena blushing. 

"Ahh Rena Chan blushing, kawaii.." Mayu patted Rena head and Atsuko just look other way.

"Mayu Chan, i, and i notice Rena bought cake to, right Rena Chan?" Yuki ask to Rena.

"Ah yes... hee hee"

"I think it's enogh for us, lets eat that" Atsuko said.
"I will prepare the plate" Rena said
"I will make a green tea" Yuki added

"Heii I'm owner of this house but you act like i was the guess" Mayu chuckles...

"No Mayu,  just sit and let us prepare it to you" Yuki said and force Mayu sit at living room.
"Ahh Atsuko can you accompany Mayu Chan for a while?" Rena said, and Atsuko just nodded.  She sit with Mayu at living room and watch anime with Mayu.

Then RenaYuki walk out from the kitchen. And prepare cake and green tea. Actually AtsuRena ate the cake that Rena bought and MaYuki ate that cake Yuki bought.

"It's very delicious, Yukirin do you want some? Say aahhh...."
"Eehh...  eumptt" before Yuki resist that cake already on her mouth..
"Whmmm nyemmm" Yuki protest to Mayu while her mouth chewing that cake Mayu feed to her.

"Yukirin... it's not good if you talk while you eat" Mayu chuckled and shook her head,
“It’s your fault actually” Yuki pouting. Rena just stare that scene, she feel little sad but she didn't want to show that she jealous. Atsuko know what Rena feel now, so she want to cheer up her ex.

"Rena Chan, can i have your cake a bite?, it's look so delicious than mine" Rena just give what Atsuko want, her eyes still at Mayu.

"No Rena Chan, feed me...  like Mayu feed Yuki" Atsuko begged to Rena like a child. 

Mayu look at Atsuko and Rena, "Rena Chan....  i think you and Atsuko senpai was break up?" Mayu ask to Rena. 

"What wrong? I just miss Rena spoil me? It's that bothering you?" Atsukl said.

"Gomen nee Atsuko senpai...  i don't mean like that. I just asking, i know you both have a relationship before but it was end, and you have girlfriend now, i thinks Rena with be... aawww" Mayu can't finish with her want to say because Atsuko grab her collar.

"What do you want to say Mayu? Rena will be hurt right? No, Rena will be hurt not because of me but...." suddenly Rena hug Atsuko...

"Atsuko... enough... please" Rena said to Atsuko, while Yuki just stare that scene. She didn't expect Atsuko will did that to Mayu. Atsuko release Mayu.

"Gomen ne Mayu Chan"

"No problem Atsuko senpai, i was the one who must say sorry"

~ring ring ring~


"Moshi moshi... Ahh... haiii, wait a minute.  I will send the address to you. I love you to" Atsuko hang up her phone.

"It's kojima San right?" Rena ask to Atsuko.
"Yeah, she want to pick me up" Rena just nodded

"Nee.. Yukirin, where is Sae Chan?" Mayu ask to Yuki.
"She have meeting with her club, so she ask me to look after you. Aah before i forget, where's your pills, i think this time you take your pills"

"Mou... i tired to eat that yummy pills" Mayu pouted.
"Mayu don't say like that, this you pills, ate them and then you must rest again" Rena said while bring Mayu's pills. Yuki feel little surprise because of Rena know where Mayu's usually pills.

"Rena Chan... please, just for today. Can i split that pills?"
"If you ate this pills i will granted your wish to have a part time with me" Rena tried to give offer on Mayu

"Really? Can i? Okay i will ate that all" Mayu said with big smile and Atsuko just look other way.

Suddenly Atsuko hand phone rang again, her lover come to pick her up.

"I think i must go now, haruna already waiting for me" Atsuko said and excuse herself.

There's only three of Mayu, Rena and Yuki... Rena and Yuki cleans all clean all the dishes and glasses that they used before. They insisted that mayu remain seated in the living room, while they were in the kitchen.

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"Yukirin, what would you do if someone likes you, but you love someone else?" Rena give Yuki sudden questions.
"Why you ask Rena? It's about you and Atsuko? You love someone else? Who is she?" Yuki ask Rena.
"Answer me first Yuki. I know you love Sae. But what will you do if someone love you and you didn't notice it?" Rena still force Yuki who tried to resist answer her question.
"Rena don't say that you love me?" Yuki close her mouth with her palm.
"Of course no!! BAKA!! Just answer me, please..." Rena pinch Yuki armrm but not to hard, and still begged.
"Awww.. that hurt Rena, i don't know, I never at that position."i Yuki pouting and rubbed her arm.
"Indeed, you're in that position yuki" this time Rena just whispering.
"You say what?" Yuki ask again because she didn't hear what the last sentence that Rena said.
"Oh nothing,  forget it"

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"I'm home" Sae shouted.
"Welcome home Sae Chan" Mayu said and run to her cousin
"Ehh.. Mayu Chan, i think you still angry with me?˝Sae said and patted mayu's head.
"No... i can't angry that long with you" Mayu said and clinging on Sae.


"Sae Chan, you're home" Rena said to Sae.
"Heiii... Rena Chan, i don't know you were here to.  Because i was ask Yukirin to look after Mayu" Sae smile at Rena and Yuki. Yuki don't dare look at Sae, she still remember about her and Sae scene before.

Suddenly Mayu release Sae, "Yukirin can you accompanying Sae? I have to talk with Rena privately."
"Mayu can,  but..."

"Bye Yukirin... let's go Rena, come to my room." Mayu grab Rena arm and drag Rena to her room.


(Mayu's room)


"What that for Mayu?" Rena ask to Mayu.  She was the one who know Mayu have secret love to Yuki
"What do you mean?" Mayu just laid at her bed and Rena sit next to Mayu. She caress Mayu hair and play with it.

"I know you still love her Mayu"
"Don't say that Rena please, she love Sae..  what can i do? I just want her to be happy, i don't have heart to see her tears"

"What about your feelin?"

"........"

"Mayu? Gomen" Rena feel guilty because Mayu sad expression

"Rena Chan, can you lied beside me?"

"Eehhh...." Rena feel her hearts beat so fast, she never image she can lied beside the girl thatbshe love for long time ago

"Please Rena...." Mayu begged
"Okay" Rena try to hold her nervousness, but Mayu don't help her. She hug Rena so tight. Rena blushing luckyly Mayu didn't notice it.

"Your heart beating so fast Rena Chan. Are you nervous or shy if i hug you? " Mayu ask but don't see at Rena.

"It just because i never that close with you, we never share this hug while we lied on the bed"

"Ahhh... i see,  but please Rena just for this time"
"Alright Mayu... just sleep okay?" Rena carress Mayu back head. While Mayu rubbed her head tobrena chest.

"So soft..." Mayu murmured, but Rena still can heard that.


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"Yukirin thanks for look after Mayu"
"No problem Sae Chan" Yuki said but still don't dare to look at Sae.

"Yukirin,, Gomen about what i said before. I never think that what i said will be bothered you" sae lifted yuki chin and make Yuki look at her.

"Do you apologize me, Yukirin?" Yuki just nodded

"Thank you " Sae kiss Yuki cheek.
"Sae Chan, what that for?"
"Ahh... gomen, but you're to cute while shy like that. I can hold my self to not kiss you"

"Sae Chan you just make me fall for you more than before" Yuki thought.


to be continued




I'm sorry if this chapt so boring..
Please let me know your comment  :bow:
Title: Re: Sorry For Loving You (Sae, Mayu, Yuki, Rena and Other) - Chapter 5-
Post by: genkingblack on March 01, 2016, 09:03:37 AM
Hey it's me again  :lol:

Ah.. this chapter is getting complicated
1.atsuko love Rena while she is in relationship with Haruna
2. Rena --> Mayu ---> Yuki ---> Sae (?)

does Rena love Mayu? ._.

ah maybe its not my place to say this, but sometimes i feel disconnect while reading this
Quote
"What do you want to say Mayu? Rena with be hurt right? No, Rena will be hurt not because of me but...." suddenly Rena hug Atsuko...

Do you mean will be hurt?  :?

Quote
"Eehhh...." Rena feel her hearts beat so fast, she never image she can lied beside her lover.
Did they already in relationship? ._.

Quote
"Did you apologize me, Yukirin?" Yuki just nodded
I think you want to say "Do you forgive me?"

Ah i think i made long comment :D
keep up writing~ Thank you :on gay:
Title: Re: Sorry For Loving You (Sae, Mayu, Yuki, Rena and Other) - Chapter 5-
Post by: yumii07 on March 01, 2016, 09:31:54 AM
@buciq : aahh arigatou, i feel BAKA because i didn't notice it. I just post after finish this fic.. arigatou...
Title: Re: Sorry For Loving You (Sae, Mayu, Yuki, Rena and Other) - Chapter 5-
Post by: genkingblack on March 01, 2016, 10:56:39 AM
Hey thats okay :D

sometimes i made a mistake too not mention a lot of typo, because we are too immersed with the story :D

there are many author will help you to make more fic readable and understandable :D
Title: Re: Sorry For Loving You (Sae, Mayu, Yuki, Rena and Other) - Chapter 5-
Post by: yumii07 on March 03, 2016, 10:04:23 AM
Thank you so much buciq...
You really help me,

But i very doubt if this fic will be interest..
Since i have very poor english  :mon surr:
I not sure if i will continue this fic or not.
Title: Re: Sorry For Loving You (Sae, Mayu, Yuki, Rena and Other) - Chapter 5-
Post by: genkingblack on March 03, 2016, 03:33:36 PM
Thank you so much buciq...
You really help me,

But i very doubt if this fic will be interest..
Since i have very poor english  :mon surr:
I not sure if i will continue this fic or not.

Your welcome~ just PM me if you need help for proofread next time :D
btw done with voting~

hey dont get so down about that, my English isnt very good either :D
at least i understand what are you trying to say
ganbatteee~ :on gay:
Title: Re: Sorry For Loving You (Sae, Mayu, Yuki, Rena and Other) - Chapter 5-
Post by: arawche079 on March 03, 2016, 04:10:57 PM
Hi I'm reading this fic but I'm eyeing for a pairing so i choose not to comment and just follow how the story goes as I don't want to limit your ideas with what paur I prefer...but since you have created a poll I decided to go out on my hiding place...

About your english its readable for me so its not a problem....I'm not good in english to...Hehe...

One of reader once told me that I should not be say sorry about not being good at english as it was not my countries main language and just be free on writing...

I hope you could still continue this fic because I ff the story...


 
Title: Re: Sorry For Loving You (Sae, Mayu, Yuki, Rena and Other) - Chapter 5-
Post by: culjurio on March 05, 2016, 12:31:50 AM
Hello yumii saann.
Finally i have a time to read your fic  :lol: :twothumbs
I'm kinda busy lately, :shakeit: :shakeit:

But, where is wmatsui moment --"
Omg there is no obe wmatsui momeeeenttt.. :panic: :panic:
I feels like wanna kill you  :lol: :lol:
Title: Re: Sorry For Loving You (Sae, Mayu, Yuki, Rena and Other) - Chapter 5-
Post by: Rufy SaeYuki on April 24, 2016, 06:20:34 PM
Hey it's me again  :lol:

Ah.. this chapter is getting complicated
1.atsuko love Rena while she is in relationship with Haruna
2. Rena --> Mayu ---> Yuki ---> Sae (?)

 I don't means, if this is short  beacause I love saeyuki. please make them be a couple lover.
Title: Re: Sorry For Loving You (Sae, Mayu, Yuki, Rena and Other) - Chapter 5-
Post by: Rufy SaeYuki on June 26, 2016, 11:40:58 PM
no saeyuki? T.T.
just Wmatsui then..
from many members, why mayu??!! why!!??
#dissappoint