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Title: Can you accept my love? - chapter 1 (MaYuki) 6/03/2016
Post by: yumii07 on March 06, 2016, 07:24:35 PM
Hello everyone... I can't update my currently fic, because i make a little mistake at last chapter  :depressed: and that make me confused how to repair it.
I must make new plot, and i can't make it fast. So my currently fic will be update for 2 week maybe. i can't promise you.. 

okay... this fic is inspired by my favorite comic from junior high school. but i don't know what kind of the comic tittle. because the tittle use much Kanji, amd i didn't know how to read kanji  :? :?
actually i want make this be one shoot, but i will make it for 2 shoot. So i added some scene that never appear on original comic.

i don't know what kind of the tittle i must choose,
i hope you will like it..





~Can You Accept My Love?~
(MaYuki)


Part 1




(Mayu POV)

"Mayu chan, you get 100 point againt"
"Mayu chan, you're genius"
"i envy to you Mayu chan"
"you always get full poit of all the test"


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Yeah... it's me 4 years ago. I always be the cleverest student in my school. But now i was a high school student.
i see the teacher come to my class.

"i have 2 news to you, first a good news and the second the bad news. Wich one do you want to hear first" the teacher said with flat tone.
"i want to hear the good news first" all of my friend said at the same time.

"okay, the good news is student with the highest point it was from our class" after the teacher said first news, all of my friend look at her,
"give applause to Kashiwagi Yuki" then all of my classmate congrate her
"sensei, what the bad news?" one of my classmate ask.
"hmm.. the bad news is student with the lowest point it was from our class too, Watanabe san why you get the lowest point again? i wondering why in my class i have the student who get highest and the lowest point?" the teacher signed and then my classmate are look at me. I hate this, but i must admit that. I know that i not the cleverest student anymore.

Suddenly, the teacher say an announcement.

"ahh.. i almost forgot to say this, if the next test someone of our class get the lowest point, all of class personil get the punishment" teacher warning us.
"What kind of the punisment sensei" one of my classmate ask.
"you must to clean our swimming pool" the student said and permision hiselft because the bell has sounded

"i don't want it, why don't just the lowest student who will get that punishment?"

i just stare that scene, then some of them come to me. "oh it's rare someone in this class wanna to talk with me, what are they want?" i thought.

"Watanabe san, you hear that right? don't dare you make us clean the swimming pool. especially the honored student"
"Do you want the highest student will clean the swimming pool with you? don't ever think about this even thought in your dream"

"gomenne ,, i will try my best" i said to them but didn't dare to look at them eyes. They are really scary, like a tiger maybe.

"don't try, just do it"

"ahh.. okay" i said and look at her the cleverest student in our class and our school. Kashiwagi Yuki.


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(No One POV)


"what i must to do? i don't know why do I always be the lowest" Mayu thought while brush her teeth. Suddenly she heard the bell rang, and she wash her mount and her face then she run away to her apartemen door to greet the guest.

"what kind are you doing mayu? you make me wait you long" them guest said with sarcasm tone

"i'm sorry Yuki, i was brush my euummpptt...." Mayu didn't can to finish her word because Yuki kiss her passionately. And both of them stop that kiss because lack of air. Mayu wash blushing because the sudden kiss from her girlfriend or she must call she was her secret girlfriend. That because Yuki diddn't want anyone know she date with the nerd and the dumbest student in her school.

"your taste feel like tooth paste, you must wash that well." Yuki said like nothing happen while Mayu still regulate her breath.

"i'm sorry Yukirin"

"ahh.. i feel starving. what you have for our dinner?" Yuki said.
"come here,, i make karagee for us, and there your favorite water melon juice to" Mayu drag her girlfriend to the kitchen. Mayu Prepare dinner for both of them. then they eat that meal peacfeully.

"Yukirin, do you like that karagee, i make it by myself" Yuki just nodded while munching her meal.
"What about the watermelon juice? you like it?" Yuki nodded again.

"nee Yukirin, can you teach me? i don't want to make our friend clean that swimming pool"
"just eat your meal Mayu, lets talk after dinner. i'm stil tired"

"okay, i'm sorry"



(after dinner)

Yuki lied her body on the bed, and Mayu lied beside her.
"Yukirin..." Mayu whispered while warper her hand to Yuki waist.
"hmmm"
"Yukirin, you will sleep over again?" Mayu make Yuki facing her
"yes mayu, just sleep now. i'm tired" Yuki said and try to close her eyes again.

"but Yuki, will you teach me for next test?" Mayu begged to Yuki but Yuki ignore her girlfriend she pecked Mayu lips and sleep.

Mayu stare at her girlfriend,
"is she really love me? why she accept my confession before?" Mayu thought, and carress Yuki cheek, "Good night Yukirin, I Love You"



(Next Day) (Mayu POV)


I was sat on my chair until the hansome girl run toward me. All of my classmate shocked by that scene. Because the one who come toward me was the one of ace from my school. Yeah,, her name is Miyazawa Sae.

"Mayu chan,, can you come with me for a minute?" Sae said while take Mayu wist.
"ehhh... why she ask me to come with her" i thought

"wait miyazawa san, you know my name?" I ask to her

"of course i know you Mayu" Sae said while give Mayu her charming smile.
everyone in that class wishpering each other

"Maybe she make a trouble with Sae" one of them wishpering but I still can hear that

"Mayu chan, what are you waiting?"
"but why Miyazawa san?"

"ahh i think you just make it will be hard, i will say it now..."
"haah?" Mayu wondering what that Miyazawa want to say

"Mayu chan,, i love you.. do you want to be my girlfriend?" Sae bowed to me.
Everyone in the class shocked because the ace confess to that nerd.

Suddenly Yuki come into the classroom, I stare at Yuki. She afraid if Yuki hear that Miyazawa was confess to me.
But Yuki just ignore them, and sit on her stool and start to read her book.

"What am i expecting, she never care about me. especially at school." I thought.
"Mayu chan what is your answer?" Sae look at me with pleading eyes.
"what i must to answer, i was yukirin secret girlfriend but Miyazawa confess to me infront of her" i thought still can't answer her

"Mayu chan,, okey i will wait for you" Sae said and she pecked my cheek. and walk away.

i look around my class, and i see all of my classmate wishpering each other, i know they talk about me, but what can i do?
i see her again, "didn't she feel jealous?"




~to be continued~




it's to short? i'm sorry
i will try my best for the next part
please forgive my poor english  :gmon tears:
Title: Re: Can you accept my love? (MaYuki)
Post by: Siren on March 06, 2016, 08:02:27 PM
Uwah its abit short though but nice plot  :thumbup

Sae confessed to Mayu   :shocked

AND Yuki is secretly dating Mayu  :shocked

I wonder what is Yuki actual feeling  :?

But Yuki like kissing Mayu though  :wub:

Hahaha somehow Mayu and Yuki role switch in this story  XD
Title: Re: Can you accept my love? (MaYuki)
Post by: fath107 on March 07, 2016, 04:38:55 PM
Kinda complicated for mayu  :shocked

Like, yuki accepted mayu confession and then she kissed mayu just like a lovers do, she's even sleepover in mayu home  :huhuh

Then, whenever mayu asking yuki to teach her, yuki always ignore her and i'm surprised when sae confessed her feelings toward mayu  :O :shocked

OMG! Yuki! Did you really not care or feel jealous?!! (`Δ´)!

Why she had to hide her relationship with mayu? And... why mayu become a dumbest student? Is there something happen in mayu? ._.

Haha it's okay author-san. Your english are fine and good too :) keep on going and please update soon! :D
Title: Re: Can you accept my love? (MaYuki)
Post by: Yurena on March 19, 2016, 05:42:07 AM
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