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The Hello! Project Fanfics => H!P Fanfics => Topic started by: raspberrygashes on November 17, 2006, 12:40:05 AM
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This is sort of an experimental fic, but I'm posting it anyway :P I'm not entirely sure how far I'll go with it yet. But anyway, I'll just post a prologue for now.
P.S. I know the title's a little weird, but bare with me.
PROLOGUE
Reina remembered exactly how she ended up in this place, though she wished she didn't. Even though the recent events seemed somewhat fuzzy, it was very clear at the same time.
There was no way she could support herself after the car accident involving her parents. There weren't many jobs in Japan that would pay for her age, and so she somehow ended up in this place, across from the boyish Hitomi Yoshizawa. She remembered the "career" had been suggested by a friend of hers, and after searching for who knows how long and finding nothing, she resorted to her current place.
The Yoshizawa-san in front of her wore a smug smirk as Reina finished explaining her story, and why she'd requested a visit with Yoshizawa-san. Reina wasn't enirely sure why this Hitomi Yoshizawa woman was so amused, wearing that little smirk on her face, but she was just hoping that she'd be taken in and not left on the streets, like she so feared.
"Well..." Hitomi began, her smirk dropping as she stood and circled Reina in the seat she sat in. "You're kind of young. How old did you say you were?"
"17..." Reina replied rather quietly. Usually she was more perky than this but, in this sort of situation she felt that impossible.
"Hmm...I have been looking for some additions, however. So..." Hitomi sat again and pushed a paper in from of Reina. As Reina went to sign it, however, she was stopped. "You do know," Hitomi began again. "Exactly what you'll have to do, don't you? Once you sign that contract, there's no getting out."
Reina nodded, keeping her eyes down. She didn't want to look at the woman in front of her. It just showed how miserable her future would be...at least, for a while.
"All right. It's for two years. After that time, you'll decide if you want to go or stay." At that, Reina signed her signature on the line and Hitomi stood with a smile and a hand held out. Reina stood, and shook it, still looking as miserable as ever.
"You'll be sharing a room with Miki-san for now until you're room is added. She's a bit feisty so..." Hitomi scratched the back of her head nervously but nodded nonetheless. "Welcome to the house, Tanaka-san. I hope you know what you're getting yourself into."
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Blah, I know. But for now it's just experimental.
Comments?
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Oooh :]
I see this turning into a Reina x Miki by the looks of it. Nonetheless, this is the first AU story I've seen in awhile, so good luck with it XD
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it looks interesting, not exactly sure where your heading with this story but its got Reina in it so i'm interested to see how it goes.
I'll be looking forward to the next chapter.
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Yossi is a PIMP ?!?! so what makes the house? :o
wonders what other girls she has :D . GJ.
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HELLZ YEAH! Continue please!
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It's 11.00, I'm bored, so here's the first "chapter".
Prologue Two: Ungraceful Greetings
Reina sighed as she quietly shut the door to the room she now shared with some unkown girl. It was dark in the room besides the crescent moon shining through the single window. But, there was a problem...
There's only one bed! Reina thought, gawking down at the single twin-sized bed pressed evenly against the wall. But she realized something else also, after a creak sounded behind her. There was no one in said bed...
"HAYAH!"
Reina shrieked as a sharp pain vibrated through her back. She spun around and was greeted with the light being turned on and a thin, angry looking girl threatening her with a cigarette lighter.
"Who are you and what do you want?" The girl said, glaring and holding the lighter closer to Reina's precious, smooth skin.
"I live here!" Reina shouted, all ready frustrated. She honestly didn't need some girl threatening to burn her skin off.
"Hey, Miki, what's with all the shrieking? Business is over for the day, you know." A somewhat chubby, blonde-haired girl peaked her head through the door and stared between Miki and Reina.
"This little girl just showed up all of a sudden, Mako-chan." Miki said, still panicky and not letting her defense down.
"Oh, so you're Miki?" Reina said, heaving a sigh and smiling. "I'm your new room mate, Tanaka Reina-san!"
Miki stared wide-eyed and gawking at Reina, while "Mako-chan" just looked at Reina curiously, fully stepping into the room.
"Room mate? You're like...twelve..." Miki said, putting down the ligher on a nearby night stand and crossing her arms.
"Twelve?" Reina exclaimed, almost offended. "I'm seventeen!"
"Huh? So Yossie is letting sixteen-year olds in now," The large-breasted brunette scoffed from next to Mako-chan. "That money-crazed little..."
"Not in front of the kid, Gocchin." Reina began to feel exhausted as a light-brunette haired woman stepped into the room with a rather confidant smile as she stared Reina up and down. "Hey, she's kinda' cute."
"She's twelve..." Miki grumpled.
"Seventeen!"
"Why are you guys yelling so late at night?"
How many people are here? Does Yoshizawa-san own all of these women?
"I guess she's new, Kaorin." The one who had previously been observing Reina said to the newly entered woman.
"Yuu-chan is all ready scheming how to get her in bed," Mako-chan said, nudging Yuu-chan playfully in her side.
"Uhmm..." Reina began quietly, feeling as if proper introductions were in order. "Well, shall I introduce myself? I'm Tanaka Reina-chan, the new addition." She bowed politely and grinned at the women before her. She could at least try to act a bit optimistic about the situation. It looked like she would have great friends in the future, so maybe she wouldn't feel so bad about her new "job".
"Aw~! So cute and polite," Yuu-chan said, wrapping an arm around Reina's shoulder. "She'll be a popular one,"
"Yuko, stop it." Maki said, giving Yuko a stern look.
"It's just a bit of fun Maki, come on! Loosen up!" Yuko said, grinning sheepishly but removing herself from Reina.
"As you've heard, this is Yuko. Call her Yuu-chan," Maki said, looking right into Reina's eyes. "Watch out for her...she'll creep into your bed when you least expect it..." Maki grumbled before bowing. "I'm Maki. Call me Gocchin."
"I'm Miki, you're new room mate, I guess!" Miki said, rather excitedly and pulled the same move Yuko had just a few seconds ago.
"And Miki's no better than Yuu-chan, trust me." Maki mumbled. "This is Makoto, or Mako-chan." The first blonde who'd entered the room bowed. "And Kaorin," Now it was the brunette. "I suppose you'll meet the others later..." Maki trailed off.
"For now, though," Yuko began, yawning and beginning to walk toward the door to Miki and Reina's bedroom door. "I'm tired. See you all in the morning."
When everyone else was gone, Miki smiled at Reina. "Sorry about earilier. You gave me a bit of a scare!"
"Pfff! I gave you a scare?"
Miki laughed nervously. "Nonetheless, there's only one bed so hop in, kid. I'm tired as hell!" Miki yawned and crawled under the covers, leaving Reina no choice but to fallow suit.
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Okay so I'm trying to think of how to make the story progress smoothly:P Oh well, it's late and now I'm tired. I'll try to get more into the story tomorrow or something. G'night!
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Oh dear, Reina couplings are endless XD But this is just a prologue, so I shouldn't expect too many things with the endless scenarios. So you better write more! -hands you a hardhat to protect from brainfarts-
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Hm, I like this! :)
*patiently waits for more*
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this looks very interesting, Miki with a different personality from the glimpse, I like it so far.
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I'm hooked already, please post more soon.
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Woohoo new fic! And a very interesting one too. I'm already hooked like rndmnwierd and you're only into the prologue! :lol:
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Me too! *sneaks into building**goes and gets reina*...
*bump*
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*squeal*
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Oooo this seems very interesting. I like it already. Different than alot of fics floating around.
Write more ^_^
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Why is it that I have a strange feeling that their job is in a bakery?
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Thanks guys :heart: :D I'm really trying to think of how the story should progress, and what events should happen so it's not boring...
...so far I haven't gotten many ideas :evil:
XD
Oh well! Here's the actual first chapter.
Ichii: Hot Pink Lips
Reina yawned as she stepped out of her new bedroom, feeling as if she hadn't gotten an ounce of sleep the previous night. Actually, she could bet that she didn't. Not only was it difficult for her to fall asleep, but she kept being woken up by Miki either hugging or groping her in her sleep.
"How annoying..." She thought aloud as she groggily made her way down the hall of the place that contained all of the bedrooms for Hitomi's girls, and into the kitchen.
In there, Makoto greeted her giddily. "Ohayou, Reina-chan! Want some breakfast?"
So Makoto was more spunky than Reina had thought last night. She must've been tired last night, I guess. Reina thought as she sat down and yawned again. "Yes, please."
"Neee...you look tired." Makoto stated and piled foods after foods onto a plate in front of Reina. "No sleep?"
"That's right." Reina said, perking up a little at the sight of food.
"Ah...I imagine it can be a bit odd for you right now..." Makoto continued, sitting next to Reina and looking her curiously. "Where do you come from anyway?"
"I'm from around." Reina replied, trying to keep her mind on the delicious food in front of her, rather than the topic she prefered not to speak of so soon.
"Hey, what's cookin'?" A very pretty girl with a large grin spread over her face said from the doorway to the kitchen. She stopped suddenly, however, and looked at Reina with a furrowed brow. "Eh? Who are you?"
"Ah, Ai-chan! This is Tanaka Reina-chan. She's the latest addition." Makoto explained while putting a plate with (probably too much) food for Ai on the table.
"Addition, huh?" Ai said, smiling at Reina and sitting next to her. "When'd you get in?"
"Just last night." Reina said, trying to smile through a mouth full of food.
"I'm Takahashi Ai-san." Ai giggled. "You look like...twelve, though..."
"I'M SEVENTEEN!" Reina yelled, spitting food all over the place as she fumed at Ai.
Ai picked some egg out of her hair, laughing at Reina's sudden outburst.
"You people don't know of something called "sleep", do you?" Kaori said, sitting next to Ai. "Morning Ai-san, Reina-chan. What's going on?"
"Eh...Ai seems to be picking up Miki's dialect." Makoto giggled out, giving Kaori food also. Reina concluded that Makoto was the motherly one...next to Hitomi, of course.
"Ah, that's what I thought I heard." Kaori responded, beginning to dig into her food.
"I wonder if we can get a bit of time off today. We could use Reina as an excuse." Makoto said, grinning at Reina who playfully stuck her tongue out at the blonde.
"Hey, Ayappe asks for breakfast." Yuko yawned from the doorway, grabbing a plate from Makoto and sitting on the counter.
"Ayappe?" Reina looked at Yuko curiously. "Who's Ayappe?"
"She's retiring. Hitomi's letting her live here, though, since she's been of such service over the years." Yuko explained, shoving piles of food into her mouth.
"Ah...so she's like a senpai."
"To you, maybe." Yuko shrugged, winking at Reina. "Hey, so who thinks we can use Reina as an excuse to get out today?"
Reina grumbled. "You guys are so mean..."
"Ohayou, everybody." Hitomi said from the doorway, compose and fashionable-looking in her pinstriped suit as every. "Ohayou Gozaimasu, Reina. How did you sleep?"
"Eh..."
"Miki was probably trying to seduce her." Yuko laughed from her spot on the counter as Miki walked in.
"Was not!" Miki said from the doorway, nudging Yuko playfully who only repeated the action to Miki.
"Ohayou Yossie." Makoto said, smiling at Hitomi as she put more food onto the table.
"Ohayou, Mako-chan."
"What do you think of us going out with Reina-chan today? Be fun, ne?"
"Going out, huh?" Hitomi said, sitting next to Reina and eating more politely than most of the other girls in the room. "Hm...if a surprise visit doesn't show up. Yuko, you have someone tonight though."
"That Ichizaki guy, right? Yeah, I heard." Yuko said, amazingly finished with her food and stuffing the plate in the dish washer. "I still wanna go with cute little Reina, thought." She hugged Reina from behind and showered her in butterfly kisses along her cheeks and neck, making Reina just squeal in protest.
"Eh? What's this?" A smooth, calm voice said from the door way. Everyone's attention seemed to avert to the mystery speaker, and Reina followed suit. She was met with curious eyes of a dark brunette woman, who seemed to calm the craziness in the room instantly. She didn't have the same aura as say, Makoto or Yuko, Miki or Hitomi. She was definitely different from the other girls in the room.
"Ohayou Rika-san!" Makoto greeted with a grin. "Want some food? Better get some before it's gone."
"Please," Rika said with a smile and sat across from Reina. "Who's this?"
"Meet Reina. She's an attachment. Reina, meet Rika." Hitomi said, though only focusing on finishing off her food.
"Doozo yoroshiku!" Reina greeted, back to her cheery self.
"Dozo yoroshiku," Rika replied with a wide smile. As Makoto set a plate down in front of her, she ate more politely than even Yossie.
"So, what about it Yossie? Come on! For today?" Yuko said, hugging Hitomi from behind.
"All right, then. I'll let you all go out with Reina today. She needs to get used to you crazies anyway." Hitomi sighed, finishing off her plate and standing, bowing also. "I have business to attend to." And she left the room.
"Woohoo! A day off!" Yuko plopped down in Hitomi's seat and laid her head on Reina's lap.
After that, about thirty more minutes were spent at the kitchen table alone before Reina, Maki, Miki, Rika, Yuko, Kaori, Ai, and Makoto left for town. Even Ayappe tagged along, making Reina even more excited. How odd that she was getting excited because of prostitutes...
"Eh, Ayappe, wasn't that one of your clients?" Kaori pointed out as the girls walked through a small part of Tokyo.
"Ah, yes I remember him. I believe he's married now." Aya said, giggling at the thought of being a "client" of a married man.
Somehow everyone ended up laughing while walking into a nearby clothing store.
"Let's dress up Reina-chan!" Yuko said excitedly.
"Is that pink frill?" Miki said in disgust moving as far away from the pink, frilly dress as was possible.
"Mikitty loves frill, Reina, so remember to get it for her next birthday." Maki said, smirking at Miki who glared back at her.
"Why don't you try it on, Maki?" Miki said, now smirking in return as she shoved the dress toward Maki.
"Me?! No way!"
"Put it on Reina-chan!" Yuko said, now pushing it into Reina's arms.
"Ew! I'm not wearing that!" Reina exclaimed, throwing the dress back to Yuko.
"Anyway, I'm going to buy some real clothes." Kaori said, walking away casually.
"I'm with Kaorin. Where should we meet up?" Ai said, looking between the other five girls.
"That cafe over there, kay?" Yuko said, pointing outside and across the street to a small cafe. At that, everyone except for Reina and Rika went in opposite directions.
"Hmm...everyone abandoned us, Reina-chan." Rika said, and giggled a bit. "Would you like to shop together?"
Reina grinned. "Of course! You don't have to be so polite!" She said and entwined her arm with Rika's, who smiled in return.
"Ah~! That's nice," Rika said, stopping and picking out a simple, hot pink tank top that had red lips on the front. Rika held it up to Reina's torso and smile victoriously. "I think you should try it on."
"Really?"
"Yeah, go ahead." Rika said and pointed to the dressing room. When Reina looked at it in the mirror, she felt like it was glue against her skin.
"Ehhh...it's kinda' tight, Rika-san." But nonetheless, she stepped out and twirled around for Rika to see. "What do you think?"
Rika seemed to not have heard Reina as she stared up and down her, so she said, "Rika-san? Are you there?"
"Oh, yes..." Rika said, smiling at Reina again. "It's great. You should buy it."
Reina smiled in return and went to undress until she heard. "Oh...and these." Suddenly Rika was behind her and holding up a pair of, at least what looked like, very, very tight pants...
"EH?! You bought that, Reina-chan?" Yuko exclaimed, clearly amused by Reina's new outfit, which Rika had actually picked out for her.
"She's suiting up for the job, I see." Miki said jokingly.
"Ah, her and Rika-san spent all that time together. I wonder..." Maki trailed off, smirking.
"Getting in some early practice eh, Tanakacchi? Hehe!" And it seemed even Ai was amused by Reina's choice of clothing.
"What are you all talking about?! Stop teasing me!" Reina said, hitting the closest person, who was Yuko, in the arm playfully.
"I think we should get back to the house. We don't know about any unexpected appointments..." Kaori said, standing up.
"Ah, right. We should get going." Rika agreed.
"Hmph," Yuko said in disappointment. "We need more days off..."
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...I was forcing myself to write this chapter. It was hard without jumping into some problems so early :scratch
Hmm...well, I'll have to think hard about the next chapter.
Ta ta for now!
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I lol'd.
I love all fanfics that include Yuko, of course <3
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Why is it that I have a strange feeling that their job is in a bakery?
:lol:
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When I first read this story, the quote that came in my mind was "Pimps up, Hoes down". This is different.
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OMFreaking LORD, I love it...
Im loving these new story ideas that are coming out ^^
Yossui the Pimp...lol.
I eargly await the next chapters!!
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I wonder if she has an official pimp name and pimp cup.
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haha when Tanaka yelled at Ai and spit breakfast in her face, it sorta remdinded me of this Korean movie I watched not too long ago ("Sex is Zero").
It doesnt surprise me that Yossui is the pimp :D It was obvious when she wore that black hat during H!M in March (when she did the chocolate samba dance).
Like I say, Yossui is the pimp, Miki is the playa, and Rika is the heartbraker.
^_- nice story.
-Owaranai_sLaVe
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*cries* I want my update!!
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Plot plot prostitutes plot! I like that!
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hmmmm Reina in pink.....................well it certainly is different and well that is a sexy image.
Yes this will be interesting, i can see many drama's popping up in this story with the way they act, yes yes keep up the good work.
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Very good plot indeed!
This could lead the girls to... anywhere! ^^
hummm... if Yossie is the pimp... I wonder what Kei is like in this! xD~~~~
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Since I'll be going on vacation starting this Wednesday, I'll try to get the second chapter up tomorrow if not tonight. :)
...I still have to think of what will happen though XD ...
P.S. thank you for all the reviews!!
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Here's chapter two, because I doubt I'll be writing on my vacation :P
Nii: ...some girls touch?
Reina yawned as she sat, bored on the couch, flipping through TV channels, though there wasn't anything catching her interest.
I haven't had a client yet... She thought. It's not like I'm disappointed though. The less, the better, I guess.
"Bored, Tanakacchi?" Before Reina could turn around to see who was speaking to her, a pair of soft...things pressed against her back. She blushed furiously as she had a clear idea of exactly what she was feeling...
"Eh...just a little, Maki-san." Reina gulped.
"Hm...we could... do something." Maki purred, hugging Reina from behind.
"Uh...like...what?" I'm ready to run for my life...
"Like..." Reina stiffened as she felt Maki pressing herself against the teen even more, but before she knew it something unexpectedly hit against her head.
"A pillow fight!" Maki yelled, jumping over the couch and grabbing as many pillows as she could.
"What the hell is wrong with you?! You can't go around hitting peop-" Before Reina could finish her sentence, she was attacked with three more pillows before she came to her senses and tackled Maki, hitting her across the face with one of her own pillows.
"Eh? What are you two doing?" Both Maki and Reina's heads shot up to look at Yuko, who was looking down at them curiously with a drink her hand. "Don't mind me. I'm just walking." And she whistled while walking back up the stairs.
Reina stood up off of Maki, blushing, but sticking to her childish nature and sticking her tongue out at the older prostitute.
Maki smirked and pushed Reina down on the couch, deciding to straddle her waist for fun.
"What are you doing?! Get off of ME!" Reina yelled trying to push the stronger woman off of her.
"Aw...but why, Reina-chan? That was mean to say,"
"Hmph," Reina turned her head and crossed her arms, ignoring Maki.
"Hm..so mean," Maki said playfully. "You shouldn't ignore your superiors!"
This never ends! Reina inwardly yelled as her head was suddenly pressed between Maki's cleavege.
"Why are your boobs so big?!" She screamed, though it was muffled.
"What a compliment. For that, I'll let you go!" Maki said, getting off of Reina and sitting next to her instead. "Well, I'm bored too so let's do something."
"What you had in mind wasn't very pleasant." Reina grumbled, focusing on the TV screen once again.
"Eh, that was just for fun. I was bored. Don't blame me."
How weird...it's like she jsut had a personality make over.
"Pfff...right, and having a personal mental image of your cleavage isn't your fault."
"Who got an image of Maki's cleavage?" Makoto plopped down on Reina's other side, looking at the TV screen with little interest.
"What are you up to, Mako-chan?" Reina asked.
"Nothing apparantly." Makoto replied, smiling at the teen. "But I heard Maki's cleavage was being shown so..." She winked at the Maki, who just crossed her arms and looked away. "How could I resist, eh Gocchin?"
Reina sighed as she saw the last rays of sun set, and darkness shrowded around the house. She had done nothing to do that day, and instead took to watching TV and being bugged by either Maki and Yuko.
"Kon ban wa, Reina-chan." Hitomi greeted as she saw Reina sitting at the kitchen table, looking rather bored.
"Kon ban wa, Hitomi-san." Reina replied, perking up a bit at the sight of someone. "What are you doing?"
"There is a client waiting. I suggested you to him..."
Reina froze. It had been at least a week since she'd taken lodge under the pimp's roof, so she should've expected it sooner. But she still felt uneasy about it.
"O-oh? Okay then...well..."
Hitomi nodded, gesturing for Reina to follow her to a different room. When they both entered the living room, Reina was greeted with a smile by a man who looked about in his late 20's, who was wearing a tan business suit and held a leather brief case in his right hand.
"Reina, this is Mr. Yaguchi. Mr. Yaguchi, this is Tanaka Reina-chan. Reina, this will be your client for the night." Hitomi gave Reina a warning look, basically saying, "Don't screw this up."
"You two may use the second room. The first is currently in use." Hitomi stepped into the kitchen once again as Reina gulped, smiling at Mr. Yaguchi and began walking toward the room which they would use, it being the first room she would use for her new job.
"Hitomi tells me you're new," Mr. Yaguchi said.
Reina nodded. "That's right," She would rather not have a conversation with someone she was about to sleep with, really, and she hoped he understood that without her having to say anything
As the two entered the room, Mr. Yaguchi began to remove his clad suit and Reina was taking off her *purple yankee wear.
"I could imagine you feel uncomfortable," Mr. Yaguchi began as he crawled into bed. "So I'll just lead you through it."
Reina nodded, following suit beside him as she felt a sense of dread and disgust rise in her stomach. The last thing she wanted to be doing at the moment was crawling into bed with some random guy, especially some older guy.
It was an odd chain of events that lead Reina to regretting her meeting with Hitomi Yoshizawa in the first place, and that she'd even thought of signing that contract.
At first, she'd sucked it up. She just tried to keep things off of her mind, and tried to fill up the spaces with blanks, but then Mr. Yaguchi was getting closer and closer to doing exactly what Reina didn't want him to do, and before he would've done what he went to Reina for, she began screaming.
"Stop it! STOP! Get off of me! Get off!" She used all of her might, though she was a small girl, and shoved Mr. Yaguchi off of her, running out of the room as fast as she could possibly go before she ran into Hitomi, who's brow was furrowed as she stared down at Reina.
"What happened?" Hitomi asked, her voice sounding stern and angry.
"I...just..." Reina muttered, heaving. How was she to tell Hitomi that she'd had a freak-attack and probably made Mr. Yaguchi regret buying her for the night?
"Hitomi," Mr. Yaguchi suddenly appeared fully dressed and calm looking beside Reina. He smiled down at the teen before speaking again. "I believe she's not ready yet, for this sort of job."
Hitomi gave a charming smile to Yaguchi-san, and bid him good-bye before focusing on Reina again.
"I'm warning you, Reina..." Hitomi began, giving a stern look to the younger girl. "When you agreed that you could handle this, you agreed. Pull yourself together." At that, the pimp walked away leaving a very dishevled Reina in her room.
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So this is short, but I'm sorta not sure of how to make this fic happen XD (as I've said before.) But anyway, since I'll be on vacation I'll see you guys later! Jaa ne!!
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Hey! Nice farewell gift:panda_love:
Ow... poor reina.... what in the world lead her to this...:ONfainted:
but at least the Maki part was priceless!:ONxD:
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well well, Reina blushing over Maki cleavage, and runs away from her first client, which I find somewhat funny because I always think of Reina being the most likely to do something like this, just because its fun for her, atleast he didn't seem to upset by it.
Reina just needs someone to "break" her in, maybe one of the other girls, or something.
Yes thank you now i'm in perv mode and thinking of all sorts of naughty things, weeeee what fun.
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00HB is right. I love the departing gift. God, the title made me laugh out loud. Some girls touch, ha~
Its cool to see instead of "Nacchi said" and "Sayumi said" the different words we can use in place. Other combos are generations or descriptions. But Sempai and Kohai are the most common kinds of words used. My friend, you have taken it to a new level. I snort/giggled at "Older prostitute". Saying something like that really brings me back to the reality of the plot here...actually this entire chapter did. I loved it.
Have fun where ever you are~
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Hmm, maybe the other girls should "teach" her a thing or two first.
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Maybe Ms. Yaguchi will break her in:drool: .
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Yes, have Maki teach her a few things :]
Some girls! Touch! Catch! Come on, together~<3~!
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Hello again!! :heart: :D I'm back from my Thanksgiving Vacation again, and plan to put up Chap. 3 soon.
:heart: :heart: :heart: Good to be on again even though it's only been a week :P
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WELCOME BACK ^^
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welcome back! I'm excited for Chapter 3 ^_^. I wonder if Reina will be able to go through with it...*insert suspenseful music here*
I agree with everyone with the idea of having the other girls break her in ;)
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Just please remember to keep any chapters that have sexual content in the Perv Fanfics Section (http://forum.jphip.com/forumdisplay.php?f=35) of the forum. Just post it there and then post a link to it here.
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All right! Some info before you read the third chapter:
One. Since I started this story off completely impulsively, don't be surprised if everything isn't really...organized or anything, and if the writing is really crappy, it's because of that too. There will be mroe characters coming in since I basically just chose the MM members I knew most at the time.
Two. As of Chapter 3, I'm starting a series of Christmas specials. I'm in the holidy mood :D I don't have any idea if they celebrate Xmas in Japan, but I'm doing it anyway.
Three. There are going to be a lot of Reina parings in this, but so far I'm into RikaxReina...BUT there will be a sixth generationxReina pairing also...probably, soon too. Oh, and a graduated member who's not been introduced yet.
Four. Just so you know, in future chapter there will be some "teaching".
"Cover" for the first Christmas special:
(http://i112.photobucket.com/albums/n164/Shiner_01/Hello%20Project/PGDxmasspec1cover.jpg)
I know...very plain -_- Pardon my horrible skills at this sort of thing.
Anyway, putting all that aside, here's chapter 3!
Han: Christmas Special 1 Seasonal Shopping
Reina had locked herself in the bathroom she shared with Miki since the "incident" the previous night. Before she realized it, morning had arrived and an angry Mikitty was banging her fists on the door.
"Open up, Reina! Damnit! I have to go!" Miki yelled, the pounding sound becoming more furious.
"All right, all right, I'm out. Geez..." Reina said, unlocking the door. Almost instantly, Miki had pushed her out and slammed the door shut.
Reina rolled her eyes before picking up the little courage she had left since entering this prostitute house, and made her way down for breakfast. It seemed that everyone in the room froze and stared at Reina, as if expecting some spaztic reaction.
"Would you all stop staring?!" Reina yelled, plopping down beside Ai, who instantly began scarfing down her almost non-existant food.
"Are you all right, Tanakacchi?" Kaori asked softly, looking at Reina sympathetically.
Reina nodded. She was all ready frustrated, but yelling at Kaori, who was only trying to be kind, would only make her feel worse.
"We heard about your little...incident last night, Reina-chan." Makoto said, showing that she had a mature side of herself, which Reina hadn't yet seen.
"I didn't notice, really..." Reina responded sarcastically, stuffing a large amount of breakfast food into her mouth.
"Don't be so angry, Tanakacchi!" Yuko said, enthusastically as ever. "We're just trying to help you."
"Help me?" Reina gazed at her superior suspiciously. "How so?"
"How do you think?" Ai said, nudging Reina playfully.
"But, in the mean time, do you know what day it is?" Makoto said, more enthusiastically than was expected.
"Eh? Friday?" Reina replied, almost in an oblivious fashion.
"Friday what?"
"Err..."
"It's December first, Tanakacchi." Miki said, smacking her lightly against the back of her head.
"Ah - Really?"
"Such an airhead..."
"Shut up!"
Fifteen minutes later, Reina was grumpily washing all of the egg out of her hair and jam off of every inch of skin that was showing during breakfast. She had to make a mental note to make sure she never yelled at Miki Fujimoto again...
Damn her, steeling the bedroom's bathroom first. Now I have to use Maki and her roommate's.
Just as Reina was stepping out, fresh and clean from her shower, she heard a rythm of furious knocking on the bathroom door.
"Whoever's in there better get out, quick!"
That doesn't sound like Maki... Reina thought. Curiosity got the best of her and she peaked through the door to see a rather angry girl with her hair up in a short (ish) high pony tail, and she was looking darkly at Reina.
"Who the hell are you?" She said rudely, pushing Reina out of the way and moved to the sink, patting powder on her face.
"Geez...who are you, Miki's even more evil sister?"
"What did you just say to me?" The girl said, looking at Reina with wide-eyes as if she'd just been slapped across the face.
"You heard me," Reina said. Being attacked with every scrap of food on the table was not a good way to start off her morning, and as if she needed some girl pushing her around (other than Miki) right after a shower.
The older looking girl gazed at Reina curiously, putting her make up down and leaning against the counter, her arms crossed as she said, "What's your name?"
"Reina," The young prostitute sighed out.
"Tsuji Nozomi...I haven't seen you around,"
"I'm new...ish..."
"Well, Reina..." Tsuji said in a quiet voice, inching toward Reina until their faces were only inches apart and Tsuji's arm was uuncomfortably close to the side of Reina's head. "Don't ever talk like that to me again, got it?" At that, the older girl walked off coolly, leaving Reina standing against the bathroom wall feeling as if she'd just been slapped.
Even as Reina stepped out of the bathroom, clothed in her newly bought outfit (which she hadn't dared to take from her closet until that day), she saw Tsuji laying on her bed with a magazine covering her face. But at the sound of Reina's foot steps, she lowered said magazine and arched an eyebrow at her *kouhai.
"Took long enough..." Tsuji said, pushing past Reina and toward the bathroom.
As much as it kills me to do this...I know it's only polite...
"Thank you." Reina said quietly. Tsuji stopped at the words and looked at Reina, shocked as she was when she first spoke to the teen.
"Wha?"
"Thank you for letting me use your bathroom," Reina bowed, despite how she would've liked to just run out of the bedroom and slam the door out of how angry she was at her superior. After that she only walked out, feeling satisfied that she'd gotten Tsuji Nozomi to freeze in her tracks.
"Ah, Reina. Are you ready? Oh, you look nice." Rika complimented, smiling down at Reina and keeping her calm demeanor as always.
"Thanks. Uhm...am I ready for what?" Reina asked nervously, afraid her "training" would start so soon.
"We're going shopping for things for this season,"
"Oh! Okay, let's go."
Rika and Reina were in the same shopping area where Reina bought the outfit she was currently wearing. Rika seemed to know where she was going, so Reina only followed quietly behind her sempai (something she usually was accustomed to).
"Here we are," Rika announced, opening the door to a very...eccentric looking store. It was more than covered in Christmas lights and other decorations, with a large reeth placed on the front of the door.
After stepping inside with Rika following close behind her, Reina looked around the shop, which thankfully looked much less unattractive than the outside. It seemed to have everything that was needed for decorations during the Christmas season...all except a tree.
"So I'm guessing we'll get the tree last?" Reina asked, looking up at Rika who smiled down at her.
"Actually, Yuko and Kaori will be getting that. We're getting the smaller things,"
"Ah, all right. So...shall we start?"
Reina seemed far more enthusiastic about picking out what she thought looked best at the house, and what would go in each different room, like the kitchen and living room, and bathrooms and bedrooms. However, she took notice of Rika's less than excited and more than down attitude, as if she was almost sad to see Christmas approaching...
"What do you think of this ornament, Rika-sama? It would look good in the living room, ne? On the Christmas tree,"
Rika smiled. "You probably have better taste than I do when it comes to Christmas decorations, Tanakacchi."
"Oh...right..." Reina murmured, looking down at the dark blue ornament that had large snow flakes with different Japanese characters on them. "Uhm...Rika-sama?"
"Yes?"
"...are you all right?"
"Eh?"
"You just look kind of...down, is all." Normally, Reina wasn't so shy, but ever since she began her new job, she'd become less and less enthused about things than she was when her parents were still alive...
"Ah, so you noticed..."
"Huh?" Reina said in a surprised tone, and finally looked up to Rika Ishikawa, who was now closer to her than she expected.
"Well, obviously Reina-chan, you've finally noticed my undying love for you," Rika purred, inching closer and closer to Reina's face.
Reina's heart skipped beat after beat after beat as she felt herself tense, her eyes widen and her mouth fall open just slightly. "W-what?" Is she...? Does she...? Reina's head was spinning with all kinds of thoughts of Rika, and her and Rika...and then more Rika...that is, until the said object of attention stood up straight again and began laughing.
"Eh? What are you laughing at, Ishikawa-san?"
"I'm sorry, Reina...I just couldn't resist!"
Have I ever seen her laugh? I must have forgotten or something...
"Rika, you're so mean!"
"Me? Mean?" Rika heaved out a sigh. "You haven't seen mean quite yet, Tanakacchi...not until you meet Tsuji-san."
"Tsuji-san? Oh, right..."
"Wha...? You've met Nono?"
"If Nono is a reincarted-even-more-evil-Miki, then yes."
Rika chuckled. "That would be right,"
"Well, I think we have everything. Shall we go?"
"Yeah, let's start decorating."
I wonder what Rika's problem with Christmas is? Reina thought, and continued to contemplate the subject even as they checked out and walked home.
Finally, though, as she and Rika walked through the door, Reina was greeted by a tall, full Christmas tree, which seemed to brighten her mood.
Just as Yuko and Kaori finished putting it up, she exclaimed, "That's great!" Even Kaori jumped in surprise. "Ah~~it'll look great will all of the decorations we bought! ...Or would that be, the decorations we bought will look great with it?"
Both Yuko and Kaori let out dog-like roars of laughter. Or at least, Yuko did...Reina wasn't sure if she could hear Kaori through the loud Yuu-san.
"Reina, you're such a goo-"
Yuko was interrupted by the sudden sound of the doorbell ringing.
"Oh, I'll get it." Rika said, who was still standing next to the door. She sat down the bags before looking through the key hole of the door.
"Who is it?" Kaori asked, looking at Rika curiously.
"I've never seen her before," Rika stated before opening the door and greeting a somewhat boyish looking girl with pitch-black hair that reached just a little above her shoulders.
"Uhmm...hello..." The girl said shyly, looking down and away from Rika.
"May I ask-"
"Ah! You must be Eri Kamei,"
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Dun dun dun!
Short and with a cliffhanger. I really should try making these longer...
Well, I hope you enjoyed :D Much love:heart: :heart: :heart:
*Kouhai = lower classman
Teasers:
"You shouldn't be worried about Rika's well-being,"
"Prostitution is just taking sex and calling it a job,"
"I guess I'd like to think everyone likes me..."
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SWISH!! Im so releaved to have an update. I dropped everything I was doing to read this ^^
My heart skipped a few beats at the Ishikawa confessions. I was thinking "wow, this girl really gets down to business".
Hurray!! Christmas time!!
Time for Japanese Christmas facts.
-Christmas isnt very popular in Japan but shops to put a few things. I mean come on, it brings the money to con the population into believing they HAVE TO buy things for others
-The one thing that is really popular at Christmas is couples. I mean meccha meccha loving. Love hotels are booked for the season. On Christmas eve and day romantics happenings are a happening. Sex of course is definately on the menu.
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LOL Rika's so mean to toy with Reina's feelings! XD
(btw you missed a "g" and a "c" in your poster, which looks very nice I must say! Such a dramatic yet christmassy feel!)
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Wow, you made my Nono mean. That's a first, usually she's dumb as a nail. I give you the thumbs up and my Nono approval.
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Rika x Reina eh? And an eventual Reina x Eri?
Wow, there's been lots of Reina x ??? couplings lately, haha, nice to see :3
Looking forward to the Rika x Reina <3 Since the teasers implied it XD
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My heart skipped a few beats at the Ishikawa confessions. I was thinking "wow, this girl really gets down to business".
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-The one thing that is really popular at Christmas is couples. I mean meccha meccha loving. Love hotels are booked for the season. On Christmas eve and day romantics happenings are a happening. Sex of course is definately on the menu.
Same here! I thought it was either that, or Rasberry's writing was declining. But of course, I bumped that last one out because the Rika teasing made me laugh... Now if only Rika would do that in real life and stop being the one who is picked on...
Is that so? I would have thought Japan to be one of those prude countries. Then again, times are changing, and from the mangas I read, sex is a LOT more popular.
Yay for some R&R (Rika and Reina). It seems like Jphip likes the idea of Riena being the pimp *wait thats Yossui..* err, the playa *wait thats miki*... Oh well, either way, Reina seems to get more girls!
~R&J play writing break finished~
-Owaranai_sLaVe
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awesomely interesting fic! what other pairings will there be? looking forward to the Reina x Kame coupling, sooo glad it's not Reina x Sayu for some reason...
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This part came quickly, but I'm feeling inspired all of a sudden XD Here's the "cover" for this part (pardon the bad graphics):
(http://i112.photobucket.com/albums/n164/Shiner_01/Hello%20Project/PGDxmasspecver3.jpg)
I couldn't find a winter-themed picture of Eri so I just did stamped snow flakes :sweatdrop: The next one will be happier-looking (and the chap. will be happier too...can't make the fic too depressing:ksad:
In the mean time, though, enjoy all the fun angst in this chapter :P (actually, there really isn't that much angst, but enojy anyway)
*Yon: Bitter White Snow
"Ah, you must be Eri Kamei," Hitomi greeted in a charming-fashion, clad in a pin-striped and black suit topped off with stiletto boots. "Please come in. It's cold outside."
Rika stepped aside for the young, shy girl to walk in, shivering with her head hung.
"Follow me," Yossie continued, gesturing for Eri Kamei to follow behind her. Reina felt like she was having deja vu. The same thing happened the night she had first seen Hitomi Yoshizawa, which meant only one thing...
Even as they disappeared from the living room, everything stayed silent. Reina wondered if this was what it was like every time Hitomi got an addition.
"How old do you think she is?" Yuko asked, breaking the akward silence first.
"Reina's age, maybe." Kaori replied, sitting down and staring at the tree, which was still unlit.
"She was so shy," Reina said still looking at the place the young new prostitute stood with Hitomi.
"Neee, reminds me of Tanakacchi!" Yuko grinned, obviously trying to lighten the mood.
"I'm not that shy."
"Sure you are!"
"Pfff! Yeah right..." Everyone's head popped to the side at the sound of a familiar voice, and they were all greeted by a moody-looking Tsuji Nozomi.
"Kon ban wa, Nono," Yuko greeted, though obviously not pleased with the other girls presence.
And then again, everyone fell silent. Reina once again went about thinking of things like why Tsuji bothered to show up if she was only going to be silent the entire time, and why she was always so moody...she'd never seen someone that pissy when it's that time of the month, so...
"Reinana-chan, won't you help me in the kitchen to make dinner?" Kaori asked politely, smiling at Reina as she stood.
"Oh, yeah..." Reina replied, smiling lastly at Rika and following Kaori into the kitchen. "So, what are you making?"
"Ah, just some Tsukimi Soba and some salad," Kaori replied casually, getting out pots and other preperations for the soup. "Will you get some noodles out, and the eggs, please?"
"Yeah, no problem..."
"Is something bothering you?" Kaori said, but didn't stop her current activities. "You don't seem like the type to be brooding,"
"Who said I'm brooding?"
"You look like you are."
Reina sat the noodles and eggs on the counter and proceeded to pour water in one of the pots Kaori'd brought out. "...Has something happened to Rika? She seemed unhappy today while we were shopping."
Kaori paused to look at Reina, as if contemplating what she'd said. In the mean time, both girls heard a shout from the living room, "Christmas music!!"
Kaori smiled, rolling her eyes. "You shouldn't be worried about Rika's well-being," She said so calmly Reina thought she sounded a little bitter. "She can handle herself. But you know something you should worry about is that you're letting that pot overrun with water."
After everyone had sat down for dinner (Tsuji took a bowl before walking out coolly), the mood seemed to rise a bit. It had been at least 45 minutes since everyone had seen Hitomi and Eri Kamei, making Reina wonder what was taking them so long. It only took at least ten minutes for Reina.
"Everyone," All heads shifted to Hitomi and Eri Kamei, who's eyes were red and puffy while she was twiddling her fingers in front of her. "Please welcome Eri Kamei, the new addition."
So Reina was no longer the new girl...
"You're hungry, right?" Makoto asked gently, gesturing to a spot beside Reina.
"Come on, kid, the food's gonna' get cold!" Yuko said enthusiastically, standing and pushing her from behind to sit next to Reina. Yuko's solution to everything seemed to be force, most of the time anyway.
Eri blushed as Reina smiled at her, her head still hanging down so that her short black hair covered her face.
"Yossi, sit down," Makoto grinned. There was a place next to her which was always empty, so Reina assumed it was Hitomi's spot.
"Ah, sorry Mako-chan," Makoto frowned. "I have business to attend to." Nonetheless, she grabbed a bowl of Tsukimi Soba and giving her underlings one last smile.
"So, Eri, right?" Ai began, trying to make the atmosphere a bit more friendly. Eri nodded in response. "Well, I'm Ai Takahashi!" She continued, maybe a little over-enthusiastically. "Call me Takitty! This is Yuko...you might want to watch out for her,"
"Hey!"
"That's Makoto, or Mako-chan, Maki or Gocchin, Kaori, Miki, watch out for her too," Ai had broth spit at her, though luckily she dodged it. and that's Reina, or Reinana or Tanakacchi. Ah, she just came not too long before you, actually."
Eri seemed slightly surprised at that, and her eyes, which were slowly beginning to get back to normal, went to Reina, who grinned.
"Hm...I wonder..." Yuko said, looking between Eri and Reina. "How old are you, Eri?"
"Eighteen on the 23rd," Eri replied so quietly Reina wasn't sure anyone else heard her.
"Would it be easier for Reina and Eri to share a room, seeing as they're closer in age? And who wouldn't like to escape Miki, anyway." More broth-spitting accured before Kaori stopped them both.
"I can talk to Hitomi about it. I think Reina's room is almost finished,"
"Good! Now let's eat! I'm starving,"
"You're gonna' get fat, Mikitty." Makoto teased, making Miki stick her tongue out at her, to which she only copied.
Reina suddenly felt like she couldn't wait to share a room with Eri, because quite frankly, she was tired of being woken by Miki's constant groping, and if it wasn't groping it was slapping or punching or kicking. What did this girl dream about, anyway?
Even as she made it out of the bedroom (easily that morning, because it usually difficult to leave the bed because of the great Mikitty, but the older prostitute wasn't in bed when Reina woke) and down to the kitchen, it seemed she would never find peace in this blasted house.
"You bitch!"
"Don't call me bitch, whore!"
"If you haven't checked recently, you're a whore too,"
Reina rushed into the kitchen, looking between the two fighting prostitutes who happened to only be the two famous vixens in the house.
"Don't take your fucking issues out on me!"
"My issues? It could be considered your issue too,"
"You need to get over your problem with prostitution all ready! It's been over two years!"
Tsuji scoffed. "Prostitution is just taking sex and calling it a job. Why wouldn't I have a problem with it?"
"What the hell is going on?!" Reina yelled, stepping between Miki and Tsuji.
"Stay out of this, yankee," Tsuji said coldly, glaring down at Reina.
"What did you call me?!" Reina yelled, clenching her fists. Before she even thought of getting in a fight with Tsuji, though, she heaved out a sigh and rolled her eyes. "Look, what are you guys fighting about? Won't you just stop?"
"Ugh!" Miki flew her hands up in the air and stormed out of the room, and soon after a slamming door sounded throughout the house.
Reina plopped down in a kitchen chair, heaving out another sigh. Things didn't seem to be forming well in this place...
"You're pretty bold, you know that?" Tsuji said, though it hardly sounded like a compliment.
"Well I'd rather not wake up to a pair of prostitutes fighting," Reina grumbled, lying her head on the table and shutting her eyes.
"Well don't do it again,"
Reina scoffed. "Like I'll listen to you."
"And why wouldn't you?"
Reina's head shot up, red with fury and glaring at her sempai. "You're not my fucking boss, all right? Who the hell do you think you are, anyway? You can't just go around behind pissed at everyone especially people who haven't done a damned thing to you!"
Before Reina barely realized what she'd said, Tsuji was stomping toward her with her hand raised, palm ready to hurt the younger girls' baby-doll skin...
Oh, shit...
She was ready to take it, though. As if dealing with Miki wasn't enough, Tsuji was just ten times worse, if not more. But just as her palm was quickly inching closer and closer to Reina's cheek, her wrist was caught firmly, and Reina looked up to see a more than pissed Rika glaring daggers at Tsuji.
"I dare you, Nozomi." Rika growled. Reina had barely seen her come out of her calm shell, so seeing her as angry as she was, was a bit of a shocker.
Tsuji roughly pulled away from her superior, sending one last look to bother Rika and Reina before stomping out, and another door slammed.
"Are you okay, Reina?" Rika asked, kneeling beside the still-scared teen, who nodded in response. "Please excuse her. You'll get used to her attitude. I would just suggest that you don't be so bold next time, all right?" Rika smiled before standing up.
"I'm not that bold," Reina finally said. "But, I don't like being pushed around. She just makes me tick,"
Rika chuckled. "She'll tend to do that. But still, she can be a dangerous person. Just try to stay away from her." Reina nodded in agreement. She was in no place to disobey Rika, after all. "...Reinana?"
"Hm?"
"Do you...want her to like you, or something?"
Reina shook her head quickly. She didn't want Rika thinking that. "I guess I'd like to think everyone likes me, though."
Rika sighed. "Tsuji doesn't like anyone. Especially not a prostitute. (Reina nodded her head again) Now, I'm going to go shopping for groceries. See you later,"
"Hmph," She grumbled as Rika left. "Now I'm pulling Rika into my own mess...damnit..."
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First of all, I know Rika's not as calm as she is in reality, but I like writing about her that way. Second, maybe if I update often it won't matter if they're short:sweatdrop:
*I'm not entirely sure Yon means four...maybe it's "Yung"...sorry if it's wrong XD
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Evil Nono is hot, but her story confuses me. Maybe all will eventually become clear?
And I'm pretty sure it's yon.
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That was great. And Yes Yon means four.
Quick romaji revision! remember the ones in brackets are the alternate pronouciation!(sometimes prefered pronounciation)
ichi, nii, san, shi(yon), go, roku, shichi(nana), hachi, kyuu, jyuu
Jyuu ichi, jyuu nii ....blah blah blah, nii jyuu!
Muhaha. Its gonna get really really REALLY long. So maybe writing the kanji would be an option...
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Wow.......... Not only did that make me chuckle, but it was quite dramatic. Miki is still the most awesome person in each fic. Acting like a child, yellin' at the youngin', having violent reactions to dreams ... All this I can imagine!~
Rika is the heroine here, that makes things happy for some reason *well to me it does*.
Owaranai_sLaVe
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I luv yov youre story ^.^
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oops I mean 'youre' lolz
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Maybe Tsuji is a b***h because Kago was busted by the cops for something she did. Maybe.
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Teasers, anyone?
"Why do you want Tsuji to come, Reinana?"
"What the hell are you doing? Get off of me you little brat!"
"Don't worry Tanakacchi, I'll make sure you'll enjoy it."
Bwahahahaha!! Hope you likey :)
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Ebil!
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Wooooooooooooooooooop woop woop!!
Sorry, that was just my imagination running wild...
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I just reviewed your story. Its not very long as neither is your story
http://forum.jphip.com/showpost.php?p=256672&postcount=4
Writing the review made me think....What is the name of the company the girls work for. Hello!Whores? (*cracks up and own stupid joke*)
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*cracks up a Mikan's stupid joke*
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*wipes sweat* Thank god, someone thought it was funny! I was getting worried :P
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I just reviewed your story. Its not very long as neither is your story
http://forum.jphip.com/showpost.php?p=256672&postcount=4
Writing the review made me think....What is the name of the company the girls work for. Hello!Whores? (*cracks up and own stupid joke*)
Funny, but I think it would be called something more like Hello!Hookers or even Hello!Pros.
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I just realized that the last teaser was from chapter five, not four :doh: so I changed it. Speaking of which, part four will be up tomorrow! Please be patient :)
P.S. LMAO! Hello!Whores, Hello!Hookers XD I actually hadn't thought of "naming" them anything yet. Maybe I'll think about it now.
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LOL@glcorps2002
I just had to ask some questions -
1 - Will there be any heavy Miki/?? Pairings?
2 - Will Aya, Melon Kinenbi or other groups feature?
3 - Will you have a perv :D
Just curious...
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To Mikan's questions:
1 - Not necessarily. Toward the end their will probably be a chapter dedicated to Mikix???. I all ready know who it will be but I dun wanna spoil it!
2 - I plan to have more groups featured later on, but understand that I only got into H!P at the beginning of November/end of October. I still need to look up other groups and such :P
3 - I am HORRIBLE at writing that sort of stuff. Maybe I'll decide to write one or two (or three?) near the end...XD
I told you this one would look happier:
(http://i112.photobucket.com/albums/n164/Shiner_01/Hello%20Project/PGDxmasspec3.jpg)
Enjoy :)
Gou: Winter Games
Why was it that Reina could never wake up and go through the morning peacefully and properly? Her room would be finished soon, and she could move in with Eri. At least Reina was certain Eri wouldn't jump on the bed at the crack of dawn and yell, "Reina, get up!! We're leaving in forty minutes!"
Reina groaned, grabbing Miki's pillow and throwing it at the agressive prostitute, but only being hit two times harder with the same pillow not too long afterward. "Ughhh...whaddya' want, Fujimoto?"
"You've gotta get up! You're gonna lag if you don't start getting ready,"
"Gedeadyfowad?" Reina slurred out, sitting up in the bed and rubbing the sleep out of her eyes.
"It'll be a two hour drive so you can sleep on the way." At that, Miki shut the door behind her and left a very confused Reina to stare at the brown wood. She grumbled again and again as she fell out of the bed, and internally screamed, in need of more sleep. What time was it anyway?
Looking at the clock on the night stand next to her bed, she started a morning fit: throwing pillows at the walls, thrashing the blankets and sheets on to the floors and kicking everything in sight. Why was she awake at six o'clock?
After taking her anger out on her bedroom, she trudged into the bathroom and made herself up before yawning as she walked out of the bedroom.
"Ready, Tanakacchi?" Rika asked with a smile. What a sight she was for sore eyes...waking up to Miki, after all, was never a pleasant thing.
"Ohayou, Rika-sam-" Reina interrupted herself as she stared intently at Rika. Well, there was definitely something different about her senpai...but what was it? Rika only seemed to be amused as Reina tried to put her finger on it.
"......I got it! Have you cut your hair?"
Rika grinned happily. "I'm glad to see you've noticed Tanakacchi." Her hair before was dark brown and just a bit above her breasts, but now, though it was the same color, it was mostly cut off, ending just passed her ears, and the color was near a reddish blonde color. The older prostitute now had a more mature look which seemed to fit her personality more, Reina thought.
"It looks great! Now...where exactly are we going?" Reina asked as she was handed an apple by Rika and they made their way down the steps to the living room, and out the door to see a silver van waiting for everyone.
"There's a place that we always go to for the winter season. We'll just spend a day there, but it will be nice anyway. I won't tell you what it's like. It's supposed to be a surprise,"
"Oh...I see...all right, well," Reina yawned again as she crawled in. "As long as I get to sleep on the way then that's fine."
She barely realized Eri squeezed in the corner by the window, smiling shyly at Reina. "Ohayou, Tanaka-san."
"There's no need to be so polite, Eririn," Reina said, plopping down beside her and throwing her head back, closing her eyes. "Just call me Reinana or Tanakacchi."
"All right...Tanakacchi."
"That's better. Now all that's left is some more sleep." Reina yawned once more before resting her head gently on Eri's shoulder, not noticing the blush rising on the other girls' face.
"We're all going to have to squeeze in," Yuko announced as she sat in the drivers' seat. There were two rows of long seats that could fit three people each, maybe four tightly, and a drivers seat and passengers' seat like most vans had. Yuko was driving and Kaori was in the passengers' seat, while Eri, Reina, and Rika sat in the very back seat. Ai, Maki, and Makoto sat in the seat in front of them and all that was left was Miki.
"Damn you all," The vixen growled as she squeezed beside Ai.
"All right, let's go!"
"Wait!" Reina said, shooting her head up. There was another certain vixen missing, after all. "Where's Tsuji-san?"
Everyone cocked an eyebrow at the wonky-eyed prostitute, staring at her as if she just lost her mind. "Eh...Tsuji doesn't come." Kaori answered, trying to be as sincere as possible.
"So, now are we ready?"
"Well, let me get her."
"No!" Everyone shouted in unison.
"Why do you want Tsuji to come, Reinana?" Rika asked curiously.
"Well, we're all friends so why not?" Reina replied, crawling over Rika as she rushed out of the van and into the prostitute's house, running up the stairs and trying her hardest to remember the day she first met Tsuji in the bathroom. She opened and slammed shut every door that she saw, but each was empty, either messy or spotless. When she came to a door at the very end of the hall which contained all of the bedrooms, she was suddenly met with a heavy swoosh of air and a very pissed looking Nono stepping outside of her room.
"What the hell is going on?! Stop causing so much-Tanaka?"
"Are you ready, Nono?"
"R-ready?" Despite her cruel appearance, Nozomi Tsuji was sure easy to surprise.
"We're going to some winter place. You guys go there every year, right?" Reina was trying to be as sincere as possible. Maybe if she was kind, Tsuji wouldn't act so rough toward her.
But still, Tsuji glared at her. "I'm not going." She went to shut the door, but Reina quickly stopped her.
"Please?" She asked, pouting at the older prostitute who twitched several times uncomfortably. "I'd really like it if you'd come. It'll be fun," Reina grinned, seeing that Tsuji was beginning to reconsider.
"Leave me alone, Tanakacchi." And Tsuji instantly realized her mistake. After all, who would call Reina by one of her nicknames unless she was her friend?
"All right! Let's go!" Reina grabbed Tsuji's hand and began running as quickly as she could down the hallway and stairs, until she was outside and trying to squeeze Tsuji in the van.
"Goddamnit, Tanaka, leave me alone! I said I'm not going!" Tsuji complained, putting her hands against the outside of the van, trying to make sure she wasn't at all close to the other women inside.
"Pleaaassee? I really want you to come!" All of the other prostitutes just stared in shock as Reina tried pushing Tsuji into the van.
"Come on, Nono." Rika said, pulling Tsuji into the care beside her. Reina grinned in satisfaction.
"Thanks, Rika-sama!" She crawled in beside her, deciding to sit next to the very pissed Tsuji, no matter how much disdain the older prostitute had for the teen.
About fifteen minutes into the ride, Reina yawned again and stretched in the little space she had. "I'm still tired," Before she probably realized what she was doing, her head was suddenly in Tsuji's lap, leaving Tsuji to yelled, "What the hell are you doing? Get off of me you little brat!" But Reina didn't hear much more, for she fell asleep not long after falling into the bitter woman's lap.
"Get up, you wonky-eyed litte-"
"Be gentle, Tsuji. She probably didn't get much sleep. I bet she's sensitive to that sort of thing."
Tsuji snorted. "She's gonne be sensitive in a minute if she doesn't get off of me. She's lucky I even let her lay on me through this entire ride!"
"Well, we'll just leave waking her up to you, Nono. Come in whenever you two are ready!" Bursts of dog-like laughter sounded, and eventually faded as Reina found herself gaining conciousness again.
"Eh? Nono?" Reina said groggily.
"It's about damned time!" And suddenly Reina's head collided with the car seat as Tsuji squirmed as fast as she could out of the van. Reina pouted as she crawled out soon after.
"Huh? So...this is "the winter place", hm?" The teenager murmured to herself as she observed her surroundings, which was a place with practically no civilization present besides the moderately sized cabin the van was parked beside. Other than that, there was only trees and snow.
"Reinana," Reina twisted her head to a smiling Rika. "You aren't wearing much, I don't want you to get a cold. Come inside...there's hot cocoa!"
Reina's face lit up after hearing that anything close to sweet would be in the cabin, so while grinning, she ran passed Rika and into the room everyone was currently gathered in, which was the kitchen. "Hot chocolate?!" She all but yelled as she plopped down beside Eri, though thoroughly ignoring her, and quickly grabbed the closest cup of coco.
"Geez...don't ever take a breather do you, kid?" Miki said, cocking an annoyed eyebrow at her kouhai.
"Later today," Kaori began in a loud voice, obviously not wanting to hear more bickering from Miki and Reina. "We'll drive out further so you can see the scenery, Reina."
"Eh? Scenery?"
"In a place like this, you do expect to see scenery, don't you?" Makoto said, seeming to get a burst of energy from the idea. "It's gorgeous! Too bad we only get to spend a day."
"We can come up another time," Kaori tried to assure her fellow prostitute.
"Spring is a nice time to come as well," Ai interrupted. "The summer's are too hot, though, definitely."
"It's only nine o' clock. We have until ten o' clock tomorrow, since some of us have appointments. This season sure is busy," Yuko said, gulping down some hot chocolate. "So first of all, what about sleeping arrangements?"
"Make sure the young ones are away from Yuko," Tsuji murmured, staring coldly at her superior.
"Awww...that's not nice, taking all of my fun away from me so soon!"
"Pedafile..."
"Hardly! I'd like to call it a senpai's love," Yuko said jokingly and smirked at the girl sitting next to her.
"Shut the hell up!" It seemed even Tsuji couldn't beat Yuko at a verbal war.
"I think things are tensing up just a bit too much." Rika smiled as she said so. "How about this; Eri and Reina share a room, Maki and Ai with share the room like they usually do, and then Yuko and Mako, and Miki and Kaori and Tusji and I."
"You'll deal with Nono for an entire night?" Miki stated bluntly. "Pfff! I'll be looking forward to see who has the most bruises in the morning."
"I have a feeling this is going to be a less relaxing trip than I first expected," Reina sighed out as she tried to ignore Miki and Tsuji bickering...again.
"Don't worry, Tanakacchi," Rika said kindly. "I'll make sure you enjoy yourself."
Instantly, Reina really wished that Rika hadn't said that. Or more so, that she hadn't reacted like she did to it. Reina was sure Rika noticed her blush, but she was just glad that she couldn't see the far-too-kinky thoughts running through her mind, involving none other than Rika herself.
"Are you all right, Tanakacchi? You weren't out in the snow that long..."
"Fine!" Reina squealed before jumping up, rubbing the back of her neck nervously as she laugh loudly. "Sowho'stoupforscenerygoing? I mean...who's up for going to check out the scenery...or whatever?"
"All ready? We just got here..." Makoto said and looked at Reina with a furrowed brow.
"Day lights burning, let's go!"
"Sugoi! I didn't know there was a place like this in Japan,"
"Thank Yossie. She introduced it to us first. No one's entirely sure how she found it though." Yuko explained as everyone stepped out of the van in their winter wear and into the snow-covered land.
"So what should we do first?" Eri murmured to herself, looking around the pretty much deserted area.
Reina, being the little mischief-maker she is, smirked and picked up two hand fulls of snow and shoved them together. But, just as she was about to through it straight at the back of Eri's head, she instead felt a menacing cold on the back of her neck.
"What the hell?!" The yankee yelled, spinning around to see Miki in a fit of laughter. "You bitch!" Taking advantage of the red-faced, rolling on the ground Miki, Reina threw her snow ball twice as hard.
"Did you seriously just attack the Great Mikitty!" Miki yelled, her face now red with anger rather than laughter.
"Okay, break it up kiddies." Yuko interrupted the fighting pair. "At least apply some rules to the situation."
"....Eh?"
"All right! Kaori and Rika, Eri and Reina, Miki and Maki, Makoto and Ai, and me and Tsuji! Rules are, if you're hit you're out. Winner gets...uhm...free sex!"
"No!!"
"Hmph...fine. Winner gets their own room for the night. Now hurry up and spread out! What? No one has any sense of subtlety anymore?" At that, everyone "paired up" according to Yuko's directions and started going into what Reina hadn't noticed before: A very dark-looking, large forest.
"Eh? Hey, Eririn, let's go!"
"Ah...right." Reina grabbed the shy girls hand as she began running into the forest, again unaware of Eri blushing like she had when Reina laid her head on her shoulder. "Where should we hide?" Eri asked, slowly slipping her hand out of Reina's. The last thing she needed was to tear herself up inside just because she was holding someone's hand.
"Over there!" Reina whispered and grabbed Eri's hand yet again and ran toward a row of four trees closely near each other. She was sure no one would see them there.
"Uhmm..."
"What is it?"
"Well...why are we so close to each other?" Eri murmured shyly, making sure she made absolutely no eye contact with her fellow prostitute.
"Do you want to get caught?" Reina replied as if it were the most obvious thing in the world. "Well I don't, so-" Suddenly, a loud scream sounded through the snowy forest, interrupting Reina.
"What the-"
"Ha! I found them!"
"You dipshit! You just blew our-"
Reina picked up as much snow as she could (as quickly as she could) and threw it without reluctance at the expecting pair made of Miki and Maki.
"Damn it all..." Miki grumbled as she followed Maki out of the forest, where Reina saw Makoto and Ai leaning against the silver van.
"All right, let's go over there." For the next five minutes, Reina made sure that she and Eri moved quietly in the forest so that they weren't spotted by any more competetors. Now, both teenaged girls were leaning against a tree. Or more so Reina was pressing herself a little to closely against Eri on said tree.
"Reina..." Eri whined, clearly uncomfortable due to their current position.
"Shh! It's not like I want to be in this freezing forest either,"
"That's not it-"
"What was that?"
"What was what?"
"I think I just heard something...we have to be qui-" Reina froze as she now noticed exactly how close she was to the shy girl she was unpleasantly (or pleasantly, however you look at it) leaning against. Not only was there less than an inch of space seperating their bodies, but their faces were so close their noses were all ready touching...
"Uhmm...Reina..."
..even considering how awkward the situation was, Reina found that she couldn't move a single muscle, and it wasn't because she didn't want to "blow their cover".
Why?
"Is something wrong Reina?"
Why can't I look away from you? Your eyes are very pretty...maybe that's why.
"Maybe we should get out of this forest. Do you think you're starting to get sick?"
Either way, I can't even get close to willing myself further from you.
"Uhmm...we should definitely go. Are you feeling faint? You're leaning in...."
Your lips are nice too...maybe I could just try them once...just on-
"Aha! Caught in the act! Ooooh...and an act that is too. Do you have a camera, Nono?"
"Damn you, Yuko!" Reina growled, crossing her arms and glaring at her superior coldly. Yuko simply laughed in return.
"We can save you the pain of throwing snow balls and just leave now,"
"Hmph! Fine."
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The next chapter will take place during the night they spend there.
Teasers:
"I thought it would make you happy, Reina, so I did it,"
"Reina was ready to grab that sweet ass!"
"Makoto has always admired Hitomi, whether Yossie recognizes her in return or not."
Thanks for all of the reviews guys :bowing: Love you all!
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congrats on getting Fic of the Month, so it made me check out your story. Pretty funny and interesting job the girls have, even though we haven't really read about them "working" yet :lol:
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awesome update! Congrats on fic of the month. You deserve it ^_^. I'm lovin the Reina/Eri action you got goin on. I'm just wondering if it's going to stay that way hmm...
I'm also wondering about why Tsuji is such a bitch...hopefully you'll reveal that later on cuz Im curious
I like how u give us teasers to the next chapter...gets me thinkin
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Aww! The Reina x Eri is so cute :]
And congradulations on being fic of the month, the first one really since I'm guessing this fic of the month thing is kinda new XD
The teasers imply that someone (Probably Eri or Rika) puts some moves on Reina, and that Reina's probably getting teased on being caught with Eri in a position like that (From this chapter I mean XD which was pretty hawt by the way). Also, we get some words on Makoto's character, yes? Pretty inevitable XD
Anywho, write more~! <3
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Hey~ congratulations for getting 'Fic of the Month' :cheers :cheers :cheers
Just wondering, do I missed some polls going around?
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. . . Miki saying "dipshit" at Maki was not as hot as it was hehlarious.
Thanks for a great chapter and congrats on Fic of the month. I haven't been here that long, so I'm guessing this is new as well (am I wrong?)
I really like how you just paired everyone up randomly, it seems like there is no specific reason (except Eri and Reina since they are the newbies). Which is pretty cool, I guess it's much easier if people paired them up like that XD
-Owaranai_sLaVe
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Fic of da month!
Lol, you know Nono loves Reina. And shy little Eri, not realizing what was going to happen. Okay, sleep now...
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truely deserve the fic of the month!! I LOVE the Reina x Eri pairing!! I was quite suprised at how u made tsuji's character soo fierce tho.. but still it rawks! there HAS to be at least one though/fierce character in there... Great job!
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Woah fic of da month! Definitely yours for the taking :) :tfr9a7wg:
I reread this cuz I kinda forgot the details of the first 2 chapters and I'm really glad I did. It's awesome in every way. I love Eri X Reina like everyone else. Also special mention goes to Rika and Nono's characters. It's nice seeing Rika not as the bitch XD and Tsuji so different. I'm pretty sure she'll warm up to Tanakachi soon right?
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looooooooooooool love this last one.
Yay a kiss!! that was unexpected...ishh
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:) !! Reina x Eri! Love it!
"Reina was ready to grab that sweet ass!" - Holy cow. There are SO many thoughts running through my mind about that teaser.
And, Congrats on being Fanfic of the Month! ^_^ Can't wait to read more!
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Don't expect a lot out of this chapter, I had writers' block and just threw a bunch of crap into it...sorry, everyone :sweatdrop:
I'll make the next chapter more eventful :)
On another note, I want to finish PGD around May because I want to start a new story in the summer. I'm not sure how many chapters, but I don't want to drag it out for too long. Maybe 30-40. I think my next story will be more satsfying to me...and readers, hopefully.
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Do you know how hard it is to find a mean-looking wintery picture of Tsuji? HARD! So you get to stick with nice Tsuji for now...
Enjoy! :D
Roku: By the Burning Fire
"Hahahahaha! I bet Reina was ready to grab that sweet ass!" Yuko burst into her usual dog-like laughter before filling her mouth again and again with sake. "They both need practice anyway, so-"
"Would you shut up about it all ready?!" Reina yelled through her food-stuffed mouth.
"Still...what were you two doing?" Ai asked curiously as she held a cup of hot chocolate in between her hands. "It's sort of odd..."
"We were just trying to be subtle about the game, as Yuko said earlier. Geez...stop exaggerating everything. It's not like we were about to get it on or anything."
"Get it on? I hope we aren't talking about my two new girls..." All of the womens' (and young womens') heads snapped toward the doorway where Yossie stood with a charming smile spread across her lips.
A loud gasp was heard throughout the small living room and suddenly a very excited Makoto pounced out of her cushioned seat and onto Yossie. "You actually came!"
Hitomi chuckled good-naturedly. "I said I'd try, didn't I?"
"Come, come! Have hot chocolate!"
As Reina watched this scene unravel, her mind couldn't help but fill with strange ideas of why Makoto was so energized at the sight of her pimp, Hitomi Yoshizawa.
"Uhmm...Rika..." Reina whispered, looking at her superior who smiled back at her.
"What is it, Reinana?"
"Is there something going on between Mako-chan and Yo-chan?"
Rika fell silent, cocking an amused eyebrow at Reina. "Hmm...well...let me put it simply like this: Makoto has always admired Hitomi, whether Yossie recognizes her in return or not."
Reina looked away from Rika as a brooding expression crossed her face. She wasn't usually one to think too deeply about other people, but even so...seeing anyone reacting so intimately toward a pimp could make the dumbest knob start thinking.
Soon though, Reina was brought of her deep thoughts by one of her objects of attention. "Speaking of which, how are you two doing?" Hitomi asked with the same charming smile as she walked in with and wrapped either of her arms around Reina and Eri (who were sitting next to each other).
"It's great up here," Reina chimed optimisticly. "How'd you find such a place?"
"Ah...long story...maybe I'll tell you one day though."
"Oh, come on! Just tell her (hiccup) all ready, Yossi!" Yuko shouted, gulping down more sake. "It's not that-"
"Shut it, Nakazawa." Tsuji said coldly as she glared at her senpai.
"Awwww...Nono has a temper temper...(hiccup)."
Tsuji growled and clenched her fist around her glass of sake, her glare only becoming colder.
"Ermm...uh...Tsuji! Eh...help me in the kitchen, please!" Reina all but yelled and grabbed the older prosititutes' hand.
"Wha-?...what do you think you're doing, yanki?"
"Yanki?!"
"Yes...yanki. Now let go of me...I don't want a purple-loving, quick-tempered yanki touching me."
Reina fumed, meeting Tsuji glare. "What the hell is your problem?! It's not like I ever did anything to you, damnit! Why don't you stop being such a bitch for now reason? I can't beli-"
"All right, both of you stop it!" Hitomi scolded her two underlings who only continued to send bitter glances to each other. "You two need to stop acting like a bunch of kids. Now sit down,"
So it seems, Hitomi thought as she took a seat by Makoto and watched as Reina sat across from Tsuji, and the two young women looked away from each other. Even Reina can't warm up to Tsuji...but what should I expect from a yankee like her? She's almost as quick-tempered as Tsuji sometimes...
"What shall we do for our night here?" Kaori asked, almost to herself as a spacey expression crossed her face.
"My plan always works." Yuko said in a sing-song voice, smirking widely.
"No one's screwing you, Yuko." Miki responded bluntly and sipped on her hot chocolate casually.
"We could play another game..." Reina suggested.
"I have an ide-"
"Shut it, Yuko."
"Why don't we just relax for now? Everyone's been so busy lately..." Hitomi mused, sighing out as if she was relieved to just be sitting there.
Reina sighed as she dried dishes which were repeatedly being handed to her by Rika who was standing next to her, as calm as ever...Like she always is... Reina thought, another brooding expression crossing her face. When did she become so easily melancholic?
"I hate to ask you the same question twice," Rika began slowly, easily catching Reina's attention. "But...is there something wrong, Reina?"
"Eh? Why do you ask?"
"You look upset, that's all." Rika said simply, still washing dishes. This reminded Reina oddly of the time she was in the same position with Kaorin...
"Ah, I'm just..." Truthfully, Reina wasn't sure how to answer that question. Should she say honestly that she was just feeling down for no specific reason? Or should she lie and say that her senpai was completely wrong?
Deny the whole thing?
"Thank you for making Tsuji come,"
Or dodge the subject?
"Even though...though we don't get on well...I'm thankful."
Rika smiled sweetly as she handed Reina another plate. "I thought it would make you happy, Reina, so I did it."
Reina chuckled. "You make it sound so simple,"
"But it is...I would like to view you as a happy person."
For some unknown reason, Reina was taken aback by that comment, and just stared at Rika while a dripping wet plate still rest comfortably in her hand.
Was I supposed to be expecting that? Maybe I'm just overreacting. I've been rather off lately, after all. But still, any trace of Rika-sama showing some sort of kindess to me, especially when it's unneeded, seems odd to my.
"Reinana," Rika giggled. "Are you that surprised?"
"A-ah, no! I mean, thank you for being so concerned with me, Rika-sama."
"Call me Charmy, no problem."
And charming you are...
"Right, Rika-sa-I mean, Charmy."
"Is everyone ready for bed? It's twelve o' clock!" Kaori shouted into the kitchen. Through her words, though, both Rika and Reina could hear Tsuji and Yuko fighting over who got a room to themself. They were almost as bad as Reina and Tsuji when they fought.
I don't know why...
Reina thought as she sat down on the top bunk, waiting for Eri to come take the bottom.
but I get so upset during the winter. Even though I often think of people as cheerful during this time of year, I feel like I'm a black sheep in the white snow.
Not long after Reina sat, Eri walked in with a shy smile and greeted the yankee.
"What's up, Eririn?"
"Just getting ready for bed..." Eri mumbled as she blushed, taking out a pair of PJ's from her suitcase. "Did you get angry when Rika packed your bag for you?"
"Huh?!"
Things speed up even faster for everyone else, but in the same sense they seem to slow down, as if no one has time for anything anymore.
"Rika packed my suitcase?! I was wondering about that..."
"Yes, she did it while you were sleeping."
And Rika...she has such a dedication to me, for some reason. Would I have expected that? I didn't even think of my parents in that sense, I just always thought of it as their job or something, but it seems Rika does it from her heart...or am I just lying to myself?
"She's something like your mother, isn't she?" Eri asked shyly. She didn't dare look at Reina while she spoke, however.
Reina didn't even mind the somewhat personal questions though. She felt as if Eri was opening up to her just a little bit. "I guess you could say so. She's probably like that with everyone, though. I mean...I don't feel that special.
Do I really want attention that badly? Am I really so desperate for love?
"Even so...she seems to favor you."
"Huh? When did you become so bold?"
"Eh? I'm sorry! Please forgive me...I guess I was just trying to a find a desperate way of starting conversation."
Reina grinned in response and jumped down from her bunk, toppling the bashful Eririn onto the floor and straddled her hips while laughing. "Eri-chan's so shy!"
"Reina, what are you doing?!"
"What are you sighing for?"
"I always sigh before I go to sleep."
Rika closed her eyes, though she felt sleep was so far away. It was true that she always sighed before she went to sleep, but that was far from the truth at the moment. She wished she didn't feel so upset...usually she wasn't so affected by someone else's well-being, however when it came to Reina, everything was somehow different.
She was probably just angry at Tsuji still, though she thanked me for bringing her along anyway. I wish she wasn't so grateful.
"What are you thinking about? I know you're not asleep."
"How do you known I'm thinking at all?"
Tsuji scoffed. "That's a good question. Maybe I can just tell."
Rika chuckled in return. "Psychic Nono?"
"Pfff! You're so obvious with your feelings...it's almost sickening."
Rika froze at that comment. It was because of Tsuji's usual attitude, though. "Am I really?"
"Well I just said it, didn't I?"
Rika was silent after that. Hearing that, for some odd reason, made her uncomfortable. Maybe it's because I like to be portrayed as a certain person?
Either way, I don't like it. I wish she hadn't said that...it's a lie.
Or maybe I would just like to think that.
"I'm not a fool,"
"Do you honestly think that? Or is it that you feel so uncertain that you're trying to convince not just me, but yourself of that?"
"I always saw you as insightful."
Tsuji snorted. "Hardly..."
Rika let out another sigh before closing her eyes again as she felt sleep approaching her finally.
"Are you going to sleep this time?"
She's always so bold...
"It's just friendly fun, Eririn!" Reina said loudly, hints of enthusiasm present within each syllable.
Why can't I be like that?
"Uh...friendly?" Eri thought as she was stiff under her fellow prostitute, who obviously actually saw it as just "friendly fun".
"Hehe!" Reina giggled. "Are you ticklish?"
Eri gasped as she was met with digits attacking sensitive spots on her stomach.
I want to be like that...
Eri laughed to the point where it was beginning to become painful, and small tears were rolling down her red face. "R-R-Reina! T-Tanakacchi!" She shouted in between laughs. "P-p-p-please, st-stop!"
Reina, after tickling her new friend just a couple mroe times, finally rolled off of Eririn, laughing her head off all the while. "You look so funny when you're laughing Eri!"
"...do I?" Eri said, looking away as yet another blush creeped onto her pale cheeks.
"Aw, don't be so shy!"
Because Reina's an admirable person, and I'm not...
"I think it's time to go to bed," Reina said after letting out a loud yawn. Suddenly, she seemed to have no energy left. "G'night, Eririn!"
I can't help but be jealous.
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Even though I tried using other characters' POV's, I still think it's crap :evil:
Thanks for all the reviews, btw :) :) :)
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Awww~! It's not crap~! It's good to experiment with things until you find a particular writing style you like :]
Woo~! Reina and Rika are questioning their feelings~! <3 And apparently, Nono got nicer (Not as bitchy as before that is) :] I can't help but wonder if Eri and Reina are going to end up like Mako and Yossie, seems like a foreshadow, the whole admiration-but-ignored kind of relationship :<
Nonetheless, keep writing~! <3
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i was wondering where this fic go till i realise it was sticky-ed :D
good writing, good stuff, worth the fic of the month !!!!
But i had trouble reading which thoughts belong to whose, or were they all reina's? maybe it's just me :D
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i was wondering where this fic go till i realise it was sticky-ed :D
good writing, good stuff, worth the fic of the month !!!!
But i had trouble reading which thoughts belong to whose, or were they all reina's? maybe it's just me :D
At first they were Reina's [the ReinaxRika kitchen scene and first ReinaxEri bedroom scene] and then the RikaxTsuji bedroom scene was Rika's thoughts, the second ReinaxEri bedroom scene had Eri's thoughts.
I hope that's not too confusing XD
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^ Thanks for the explanation, i'll read it thru 1 more time. :D
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Ah the plot thickens.
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being the fic of the month surely deservs here!:panda_love:
very nice winter chapter!
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Eri and Reina now?! That hoe ¬__¬
Just kidding!
I really wanted to see Rika and Reina though :T
-Owaranai_sLaVe
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Yay Eri x Reina!!!! :D It gives me the warm fuzzies :P
And yay a new addiction!!!
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Argh! Damn you! I'd read the first few chapters when you first put them out, but it's been a while since I've been back here... and I came here at work today and your story wouldn't let me go to do the work I wanted to. :( Haha, well, at least that's not really a problem. Like I wanted to do a whole lot of work anyway... it'll still get done. Seeing Reina in a brothel house is something unusual. ;) Along with everything else... damn. So much Reina lately. So much :heart:. Keep it up... when I started catching up with it again I thought it would have progressed more by now... Merry Xmas ^_^
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this is definitely.....different, H!P as a brothel...never expected it to happen, but it's definitely a nice twist :) Keep it up!
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Hmm...I like where this is going. Love triangles r forming it looks like :P Im kinda hoping it ends up Eri/Reina...but then Im kinda hoping it somehow ends up Rika/Reina...ugh >.O I'm torn lol...but i wanna read more
^_^ gooood job
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Here are Teasers!
"Why does everyone assume something is always wrong with me?"
"Nono has never liked selling her body,"
"It was around Christmas time when Rika was dropped on Hitomi's doorstep..."
I should be putting up the last Xmas special tonight or tomorrow. Enjoy!
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WOO~! Rika's past :]
Can't wait for it ~<3
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Goddamn it Raspberry!! Write some more DAMN chapters!!! It boils my nuts when someone writes something so darn catchy and doesnt keep up with it!! :(
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yoo hoo if this fic still alive?
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@stefy: we all hope it is! But Raspberry is probably in vacation now...
[she is not posting anywhere this month]
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OK, I have a perfectly good explanation! At first, I was telling myself that I was going to get this up on Christmas day, but then I just said "screw it, I'll get it up at the end of December." And then I was going to put it up on the 30th, but my internet was down for the whole damned week!! So, even though it's no longer December, here's the last Xmas special. Enjoy :)
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Nana: Meri Kurisumasu
To Reina, since everyone had visited the snowy wonderland and stayed over night, the weeks had just passed so quickly she didn't bother to keep track anymore. It was Christmas Eve now, and she was sitting on the black clad leather couch in the living room and looking out the snow-covered window, which she could barely see out of.
She'd done all of her Christmas Shopping the day after they'd gotten back from the cabin, after getting tips from her pimp, and had them all wrapped and under the tree the night she bought them, much to her friends' surprise. Reina smiled to herself as she thought of Yuko's reaction and seeing her try to shake the presents to death just to figure out what was in them.
"Hmmm...I haven't tried a job since I screwed everything up with Mr. Yaguchi...maybe I should ask Yossui-"
"Good Afternoon, Reinana."
"Eh? Oh...Afternoon, Hitomi-sama."
"You just called me Yossui a minute ago," Hitomi said and sat down in a tanned leather chair next to the teen prostitute, looking at her with her usual small, charming smile. "Why call me Hitomi-sama?"
"When did I call you Yossui?" Reina asked curiously, obviously not ever remembering saying the nickname aloud.
"Just a minute ago. You were probably thinking out loud."
"Oh, I see..."
"So are you going to tell me what's wrong?"
"Why does everyone assume something is always wrong with me?" Reina replied, angry that she was being treated like a helpless little girl who couldn't take care of herself at all.
"Well, there usually is something wrong with new prostitutes. Unless your talking of Tsuji, who always has something wrong with her." Hitomi explained, a thoughtfull expression now crossing her thin, fair face.
"Hmm..." Reina looked down at her hands with her eyebrows slightly furrowed as she thought about the rude, cold-hearted girl. Somehow, even though she seemed to have such disdain for Reina, the wonky-eyed teen was drawn to her anyway. Reina stood up to her probably more than anyone else in the house...other than Miki, anyway.
I could have a chance at being close to her
"'Hmm' what?"
"What?"
"What are you thinking about?"
"Ah...nothing."
"Nothing, huh? Strange..." Yossi murmured.
"What's strange?"
"You look like you're thinking," Hitomi grinned good-naturedly. "I'd hate to think you're lying to me."
"Hn...if anythiing I should be saying you're strange, Hitomi." Reina snapped back. Somehow she had become very short-tempered lately, like the yankee she was.
"Is that so? Why's that?"
Reina snorted and rolled her eyes, looking back up to her pimp. "Well, you are a pimp, you know."
"Ah! True...but still, I would like to know what you're thinking about."
Reina sighed, contemplating how she wanted to speak to Yossui. It was almost difficult for her to talk to her superior at all, though it hadn't seemed that way before she'd entered prostitution. She supposed anyone would feel like that, though. "...well, why is Tsuji so angry? I mean, I don't expect to be like that for a very long even if I have to sleep with people for money. I guess I shouldn't compare myself to Nono of all people, though."
"Ah...the famous "Nono question". Everyone seems to be so interested in her bitchyness when they first meet her. Usually, after a while, they just start disliking her. I wouldn't doubt that will happen with you too."
"Are you avoiding my question?"
"Hardly. Having to explain Tsuji's...disfunction, becomes a bit of a pain after a while, however."
"So are you going to answer me?"
"To put it bluntly," Hitomi continued, pretty much ignoring Reina all together. "Nono has never liked selling her body. Then again, I can't imagine anyone really does. The other girls have just gotten used to doing it, and feel comfortable with their job. Tsuji, however, has never come to accept it."
"How long has she been here anyway?"
"Hitomi!" Both Yossui and Reina snapped their heads toward Tsuji who had her arms crossed against her chest and her eyes narrowed at her pimp. "Takahashi-san wants to speak with you."
Hitomi nodded, sending Reina once last smile before she walked out of the room, leaving Reina to shrink under Tsuji's glare.
"Good afternoon, Non-"
"You should stay in your own business!" Tsuji growled, her glare unwavering.
"Wha-"
"Deal with your own problems and keep out of mine, all right?" With that, Tsuji stomped off back up the stairs leaving Reina to stare after her.
Sighing again, the young yankee ran a hand through her black hair. It wasn't easy pissing Tsuji Nozomi off every day. So, instead of staying in the house for the rest of the day Reina decided to grab her jacket and a red scarf and slammed the door behind her.
I'm so sick of her...
She emerged into the fluffy white *snow outside of the house, hugging herself as she walked down the streets of Shibuya. Even though she had her tanned fleece jacket tightly covering her torso, with another sweater under that (and not to mention the scarf) Reina somehow still felt cold. There were multiple clubs she could go into to keep warm, but Reina passed every single one of them.
Normally I would probably be jumping into one of them. Being cold seems to satisfy me at the moment, though.
Seeing all sorts of couples walking down the streets and entering and leaving cafes wasn't helping her mood either. Girls and boys, girls and girls, boys and boys...either way, I just don't like seeing them. It just reminds me that I'll probably never have that.
"Reina! Hey, Reina!" Reina arched a curious eyebrow as she peeked behind her to see Eri running up to her with two to-go cups of hot chocolate in her gloved hands. She was running toward her fellow prostitute as fast as she could, huffing out white air as she did so.
"At first," She gasped out a she finally reached Reina. "I thought it was Tsuji who slammed the door, but then I saw that you were gone. I was looking for you."
"Looking for me?" Reina looked at her new friend curiously. Eri was usually to shy to say even a few small words to Reina. "Ah, you've brightened my day, Eririn!"
"Eh? Really?"
"Is that for me?" Reina ignored her and pointed to one of the hot chocolates.
"Oh, yeah." Eri pushed it into her arms quickly. "Drink it. I don't want you to catch cold."
"Thank you for being so worried about me."
Eri blushed. "I just want to help,"
"Don't worry, you have." Reina chuckled. "Why don't we walk together?"
"Sure," Eri smiled a little as she walked beside Reina, who slowly sipped on her hot drink.
"Why were you looking for me, Eririn?"
"Huh? Oh, just 'cause..."
"'Cause why?"
"I...just because I hadn't seen you all morning."
"You saw me at breakfast..."
"Oh, well..."
Reina smiled. "It's all right if you don't want to talk about it. Everyone has things they don't want to say."
"Coming from you that seems odd."
"Ha! I told you you're becoming bolder! I'm proud of you, Eririn."
"Eh...you're so weird sometimes, Reinana."
"Huh?!"
Eri giggled, covering her mouth with her gloved hand, her eyes squinched together as she grinned.
She really is kind of cute. She'll probably do well in this line of work.
"Jeez, it's so cold out here. Why don't we head back?" Eri said, smiling at Reina.
"You found me just so you could say that, didn't you?"
"I thought you would figure that out eventually..."
"Reina! Where have you been?" Rika almost seemed angry as she stomped toward Reina in a motherly fashion with her hands on her hips and a stern look in her eyes.
"Wha...? I was just-"
"Never mind that, get in the kitchen!"
"Eh? Why are you so mad, Rika?" Reina asked curiously as she was all but shoved into the kitchen by her usually charming superior.
"It's noon, freezing cold outside and snowing and you're nowhere to be found! Why shouldn't I be angry?"
"I just went for a walk. Besides, I've been around Shibuya before. I know my way around."
"Sit down! I don't want you out of my sight, OK?"
"Is that your perverted way of telling me to stay inside?" Reina purred playfully as she smirked at the short-haired woman.
Rika seemed taken aback by those words, and blushed at her kouhai. "You just had me worried is all." She murmured as a small blushe creeped onto her tanned cheeks.
"Well, I'm flattered Charmy! But I'm fine, honestly. I just needed some fresh air."
Rika gave the raven-haired girl a smile. "I'm sorry, I just overreact sometimes. But...I honestly was worried about you."
Reina smiled. "Thanks...I'll tell you when I go out next, OK? In the mean time, it looks like you dyed your hair again!"
"Yes, the blonde was a bit much for me."
"Blonde-brown now, eh? Suits you more."
"All right, love birds, if you're done having your lovers brawl now then it'd be nice if Charmy would stop yelling." Miki mumbled, rubbing the inside of her ear with her pinky. "Maybe we can start cooking the dinner now, hm?"
Rika and Reina gave each other knowing smiles before Reina left the room while all the older prostitutes entered to start cooking the Christmas Eve dinner. For some reason that Reina didn't know, in the house everyone had a big dinner on Christmas Eve instead of on Christmas Day.
"Jeez..." Reina murmured to herself as she walked up the stairs toward the hall which contained all the prostitute's bedrooms, not including work ones. "I didn't know Rika could be so protective."
"You'd be surprised," A feminine voice echoed from behind Reina. The teen looked behind her to see a tired, unfamiliar face of a woman who had a fresh bottle of sake in her hands.
"Eh? Uhmm...do I know you?"
"There was a time when I thought she'd be like that to someone she knows better than you, though." The woman continued, completely ignoring Reina's question. "Well, she is full of surprises." The brunette smiled kind-heartedly to her kouhai and filled in some of the space between them. "I suppose you wouldn't remember me...I've been away for quite some time."
"Uh..."
"Ishiguro Aya...and you're one of the new ones, Tanaka Reina, correct?"
Reina's eyebrows crunched together in thought as she studied her superiors' features. She never thought she'd be so forgetful at times. "Oh, right! You've retired, yeah?"
"That's right."
"They say you're close to Hitomi. I didn't think you knew so much about Rika though..." Reina thought aloud, frowning as she did so. Rika seems hard to get to know, so I wonder how long Ishiguro-san has known her.
"Ah, it is something like that. Honestly, though, they're both hard to get to know well. You should consider yourself lucky! Rika doesn't show a soft side of herself too often."
"Huh? Did you say "soft side"?"
"Surely you've noticed," Aya put on an almost mischievous smile. "How many times have you honestly seen her come out of her calm shell, hm?"
Reina looked at Aya almost worriedly. But she was somewhat right...today had probably been the only time that Reina had honestly seen Rika show some sort of weakness. Of course, there was also that time when they were shopping for Christmas decorations.
Rika looked so sad then, but Kaori told me not to worry about it, so I didn't. I thought Rika could take care of herself. There have been signs of something troubling her, though. How could I have honestly forgotten about that day completely?
"Ah, so you have noticed." Aya chimed, breaking Reina's worried thoughts.
"People are different from each other. So Rika likes keeping to herself, big deal. I don't mind."
"Oh, but don't you?"
"I'm starting to not like the way you're talking about things." Reina said, her voice becoming just a little more aggressive.
"Kaori told me you'd noticed Rika was upset that first day of December. You know, she has quite a past..." Aya said, arching an amused eyebrow at the teen and having the same disturbing smile as before.
"A...past...?"
Suddenly, the retired prostitute broke out into a loud laugh. "You're more uninformed than I thought!"
"What the hell are you laughing for?!" Reina yelled, clenching her fists and glaring at her superior, who calmed down almost instantly.
"Would you like to know why she hates this season so much?" Aya asked quietly, leaning into Reina just a little more, adding to her mysterious aura even more.
Reina huffed and crossed her arms as she shoved passed Ishiguro Aya. "Not from you!" She all but yelled out as she slammed her bedroom door behind her. "Ugh! I don't like her all ready! At least I can be thankful for my own room right now."
"What's got you talking to yourself this time, Tanaka?"
"WHA-?!"
"You really are quite blind." Miki murmured from her bed, where she lied and read some fashion magazine.
"I am not!"
"Surprisingly enough, I don't feel like getting in a fight with you today, Tanakacchi."
"Well it's not like I enjoy fighting with you, Fujimoto." Reina huffed out and plopped down on her own bed which was across from Miki's. She raised her arms behind her head as she glared up at the ceiling. Apparently, Aya had really gotten on her nerves.
"So...going to answer my question?" Miki asked nonchalantly, flipping a page of her magazine.
"What?"
"What's on your nerves?"
"Oh..." Reina mumbled, not changing her gaze from the ceiling.
"You know, Aya just likes to scare newbies. Chances are Eri will come crying to you soon because Aya scared her."
"She didn't scare me, she pissed me off!"
"Same thing."
"No it's not!"
"You're right, but I still think she scared you."
"Shut up, Fujimoto. I don't need your bullshit too. Jeez...why aren't you down there cooking dinner with the others anyway?"
"Are you kidding me? There's no way I'm cooking my own food...or any other food for that matter."
"But you're the one who said the adults needed to start the dinner."
"And?"
"Ugh, whatever. I'm out of here."
"Suit yourself, wonky eyes."
Instead of getting in another fight with the great Mikitty, Reina decided to slam the door behind her and stomped down the hall...or at least, half way down the hall.
"...Hitomi's office is right there...it's not that big of a deal anyway." Reina murmured to herself. So, she spinned around and forced herself to try and casually walk to the very end of the hall, where her pimp's office sat. After knocking and not even getting a small response, she peeked in to see Makoto leaning over stacks of papers at Hitomi's desk.
"Mako-chan?" Reina said quietly, fully stepping into the dark office.
"Huh? Oh, hey Reinana! What's up?" Makoto asked energetically, grinning at the teen prostitute. "Take a seat!"
"Thanks." The wonky-eyed teen mumbled as she sat down in front of the desk. Makoto's attention was pulled from the piles of paper before her as she intwined her fingers together, the same grin on her face.
"Uhmm...what are you doing?"
"Huh? Oh, this pile of junk? It's Hitomi's paperwork. She's so busy nowadays, I figured I could be of some assistance." Somehow, Makoto seemed a bit too happy about that.
Of course. Rika said Makoto admires Hitomi greatly, it only seems natural that she'd want to help her out.
"So what can I do you for my friend?"
"I actually have a question for you."
"I figured."
"Concerning Rika..."
Makoto's smile dropped, though she continued to stare at Reina. However, her frown didn't stay for long. "Ah...I was wondering when you'd ask one of us about her."
"So you know what I want to know?"
"Maybe. Continue anyway."
"I've just...well, Rika seems...I mean," Reina stuttered as she looked around the dim office. She was too nervous to look Makoto in the eye.
"Spit it out!"
"I noticed when me and Rika went shopping that she seemed upset about something. I aksed Kaori about it, but she just told me to brush it off. But...Rika still seems to be bothered about something. Just now, Ishiguro-san was acting kind of weird...as in, she knows something I don't. I was just wondering why Rika seems to be so unhappy right now."
Makoto let out a quiet sigh as she leaned back in Hitomi's chair. "Normally I'd like Rika to tell this to you. She seems to trust you, after all. However, I feel you have the right to know, seeing as you and Rika are rather close."
"But we aren't-"
"Please, Reina. Just let me explain. You see, Rika dislikes winter a lot, but she dislikes Christmas more."
"And? Why?"
"It was around Christmas time when Rika was dropped on Hitomi's door step..."
Suddenly, it felt as if someone had just socked Reina in the gut unexpectedly, and so hard that she felt tears jerking at her eyes. Of course! Why didn't I think of that? All this time, I haven't even thought of it! She was angry with herself. Angry that she hadn't noticed, angry that she couldn't help. Though she wasn't sure why, she felt as if something was ripping at her inside.
"Reina?"
"By who?" Reina choked out. Before she would start crying, she wanted to get as far away as Makoto as possible. But still, she had to ask.
"Wh-what?"
"Who left her here?" Reina growled out. I was under the impression that Rika came her optionally. But for someone to just drop her off, heartlessly as they did...
Makoto let out another sigh as she leaned forward. "I don't think I should tell you that. Rika will tell you eventually. It was a while ago after all...she was probably around your age, actually. It really did break her hear-"
"Don't."
"What?"
"Don't tell me anymore." Reina stood and spinned around as fast as she could. "Thank you for telling me, Makoto." Reina left the room as quickly as she could. Even after she cried her eyes out in the bathroom, after various people asked her what was wrong, even during dinner she felt she still had to shed tears for Rika, a woman she thought she was close to, yet she knew so little about.
"Please, Reina, tell me what's wrong." Rika asked calmly, yet kindly.
"It's nothing, really. Why does everyone keep asking me that?" Reina forced a grin as she sat on her bed. Right after dinner, Rika had asked Reina to join her in her room, and instantly began asking her why she looked upset.
Rika kneeled down beside her while a sweet, yet somewhat worried smile spread across her face. "Yuko told me she saw you in the hall earlier."
Oh shit...
"She said you looked as if you'd just been crying. I know something's wrong. Please tell me...please tell me. I want to help you, Reina."
"Honestly," Reina lied. "Yuko must have been imagining things! I'm completely fine!" Reina realized that she'd said that far too chipperly, and a wave of fear washed over her. She didn't want Rika knowing she'd actually been crying, and over her.
Calm Rika...she'd probably laugh at me.
Suddenly, Rika's face became red with anger and her eyebrows crunched together in frustration. She stood with her fists clenched as she glared down at Reina. "Goddamnit, Reina! Stop lying to me! I know you're lying! Why won't you tell me what's wrong? Why? Please, I want to help you!" Reina noticed Rika's eyes beginning to moisten, and her shoulders started shaking. "Do you seriously not trust me at all? Why won't you-?"
Reina, despite her better judgement, jumped up and faced Rika in the same pose. "I could ask you the same question! Why didn't you tell me, huh? You never even hinted that you were dropped off here, like a damned doll! I should ask you why you don't trust me, Rika!"
Rika looked as if she was frozen with fear. Her tanned skin was paling, her eyes wide with shock and nearly dripping with tears, and her body relaxed out of it's aggressive state. "Wh-who told you about that?" She whispered.
"It doesn't matter!" Apparently, Reina was still angry, even though Rika was practically shrinking under her gaze. "You could've told me, I trust you! You should be able to trust me..." Reina calmed as she sat down on the bed again. Though she had the intention of not having Rika find out she knew about her past now, it ended up slipping out anyway. "I really thought..." She trailed off as she looked down at her hands which were once again scrunching into fists.
I didn't notice...not at all! I'm so sorry, Rika. I really am...
"I really want to understand," Reina mumbled, still looking away from Rika. "Please tell me."
Rika kneeled down beside Reina again, who finally looked at her tear-stained face. "I'm sorry, Reina."
"Sorry?"
"I thought that maybe if I waited a while, you would ask me about it but I didn't think...I didn't think you were so..." Rika sighed and leaned against her bed. "It was on Christmas Eve. I was dropped off on the doorstep when I was seventeen."
"So I've heard." Reina said softly. "But...by who?"
Rika's eyes closed as she leaned her head on top of the matress. Her fingers were biting into her hands roughly, and Reina was almost worried they would start bleeding. That is until she said, "My parents. My parents were the ones who left me here."
Reina looked at Rika wide eyed. Her eyes were beginning to dry, but Reina had no idea how. It must have been painful to say that, right? "Wh-what? Why?"
Rika opened her eyes and smiled at her teen friend. "I suppose I was just a burden to them."
"That can't be right. Parents don't just leave the child to become a prostitute because they're a burden."
"I thought that too, but why else would they do it?"
Reina sighed. Hearing it from Rika's mouth was more heart-breaking than Makoto telling her. "I'm...I'm so sorry, Rika. So, so sorry."
Rika shrugged, regaining her calm composure once again. "That was a long time ago. I'm honestly over it."
"Honestly?"
"I am. I'm probably better off here." Rika let out a small laugh before her eyes began drooping shut. "I'm glad you asked me, Reinana. Now I can trust you completely..."
Before Reina even realized it, the exhausted prostitute had fallen asleep. So, the teen raised her into the bed and instead of leaving her there by herself, she decided to lie under the covers with her friend and wrapped her two arms around her waist.
I'm glad too.
"Mommy, why are the lights so bright?"
"They're supposed to be happy, Reina." Reina's mother grinned down at her.
I never understood that. They never made me feel happy, did they? But now, I'd probably kill to have Mommy say that to me again.
"Ah, so you're awake." Reina rubbed the sleep out of her eyes as she yawned and sat up in Rika's bed.
"What time is it?" She grumbled out as she smiled at Rika, who was still clad in her rabbit-covered pajamas.
Rabbits, huh?
"It's Christmas morning! Come on, you have presents to open!" Rika seemed to get a burst of energy and pulled Reina out of the bed and all the way downstairs where everyone was sitting on the ground (other than Kaori, who was in a chair by the tree) in their pajamas and looking tired-eyed yet still energetic. Even Eri seemed to be anticipating what she would be opening, and to Reina's surprise even Hitomi was sitting there in her silky purple pajamas.
"It's about time, sleepy head!" Yuko yelled, pulling Reina away from Rika and pushed her down on the ground next to Tsuji, who only grumbled and looked away from her. "All right, we're all ready! I say we start with the oldest first-"
"Don't be rude." Yossi said as she smiled at Reina and Eri. "Let the youngest ones' go first."
The rest of the day went casually. Reina had recieved basically a lot of purple clothes, crosses, and shoes. But considering she had a lack of things to wear lately, she was grateful. She had gotten three bottles of sake for Yuko (having Yossi actually buy it) because she wasn't entirely sure what else to get her, for Kaori she'd gotten French learning CDs because she'd talked to Reina about wanting to learn the language, for Ai she got a pink dress, a "best friend" necklace for Yossi and Mako-chan (those heart things that have "best" on one part and "friend" on the other), a small dog for Miki, a push up bra for Maki, chocolate cigarettes for Tsuji, a best friends necklace for her and Eri like Yossi's and Mako's, and a locket for Rika that had a picture of her and Reina together.
"You like it, don't you?" Reina asked Rika nervously. At first, she'd been unsure of what to give her friend because she didn't know what her interests were, but when she saw the locket, she just picked it out impulsively.
"It's from you, isn't it?" Rika replied with a sweet smile. "Then of course it's precious to me."
"You two can just start making out now," Tsuji grumbled.
"You like yours too right Nono?" Reina asked with a pout as she inched closer to the cold young woman.
"Get away from me, yankee!"
"Aw, come on, Nono! Just answer, please?"
"What the hell?! Stop hugging me!"
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For Xmas day I actually got lazy and typed a lot of crap. Most of the presents are just supposed to be jokes, also :rolleyes: I was going to do a New Years' special, but now I probably won't unless I get really motivated (which probably won't happen:P ) Anyway, hope you enjoyed!
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A nice long...hard...chapter...
I laughed at Fujimoto a lot this time round. All her comments made me laugh. It just seemed her..kinda...lazy and rude :D tehe "wonky eyes" tehehe
I still love reading about Reina cause I dont think she gets enough light in fictions. Im still trying to second guess what pairings you are going to have with her though...and what is to become of Tsuji~
There was a mention of Rika as a doll and I wondered if you put it in there as a link back to the title...just a thought :D
Well, till next time! I shall dream of pimping these gorgeous dolls
Boo yeah!!
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o man im so taken by this fan fic! PLEASE MAKE MORE!!!
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wow... It sure was a good thing to say you were in vacation! :panda_love:
very nice chapter indeed...
And now we ask you: What is needed to get you motivated? >_<
Anything to get more gorgeous dolls!
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a push up bra for Maki, chocolate cigarettes for Tsuji
I roffled immensely. Can't wait for the next chapter and more insight into the Hello!Whores.
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weeee~ its alive!!!! but seriously 1 week without interent? what wonderful luck you have... must have been hell! I know I would have killed myself if that ever happened to me.
The presents part was funny, push-up bra for maki?! that got me LOL-ing, other than that.. lovely chapter! sweet moment between rika and reina
and you know what this fic is making me like the real reina more and more
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lol at the presents;; (push-up bra, ha;; ) Nice job with the Reina/Yossie interaction. Rika's part was nice, but I wouldn't mind a bit more explaining on Tsuji's past XD; And yay for a bolder Eri XD; Can't wait to see what comes next~
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I thought the presents were really well suited for each girl :)
I was going to do a New Years' special, but now I probably won't unless I get really motivated (which probably won't happen ) Anyway, hope you enjoyed!
That doesn't translate to "you will have to wait very long for the next update" right? :p
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@Mikan - I'll probably describe them all as dolls eventually, even if I don't realize it XD That is the whole point of the story, though, yes? Well...besides the pimping part.
@00HB - Eheheheh :sweatdrop: Isn't that the question of the year?
@Kitara - Tsuji's story won't come for a while, mostly because her's is more complex and, referring to the story, she isn't as easy to "break" as Rika was...for Reina anyway.
@lil_hamz - That might actually be the case XD I'm going to give in and write a New Years' Special...now all I have to do is look up New Years in Japan (this translates to "I haven't started writing the next chapter yet")!
edit: I just read there are three days to a Japanese new year :o ...:doh: So, I'll have three new years specials...how lucky am I :evil:
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edit: I just read there are three days to a Japanese new year :o ...:doh: So, I'll have three new years specials...how lucky am I :evil:
That translates to... lucky for us :p
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Teasers [I know this is taking forever :sweatdrop: ]
"You can kiss my ass, Yossie. You better get me my own damned room or I'm going to-"
"Jealous? Pfff! Oh, please!"
"Well, seeing as Tsuji's been clinging onto Reina all day, I see no reason why we shouldn't follow."
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o_O Ooh, conflict;; (...Tsuji's clinging? To Reina? ...o_o)This should be an interesting chapter;;
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From what I gathered, I think Nono's stuck living in Reina's room, perhaps, and hates it? Thus demanding her room back or something o___O;
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my my this story is really interesting..yes, I'm a late comer >_>
W/E Better late than nothing right?
Post the chapter soon...or ELSE!! XDXDXD
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"You look like you're thinking," Hitomi grinned good-naturedly. "I'd hate to think you're lying to me."
Ho snap, that really made Yossui sound like a pimp, sounding all owning and such xDsilky purple pajamas.
how much more pimp can you be?!
I put two and two together and I thought maybe the reason Rika was overprotective and she hated the Christmas season ( as I do, because its so damn busy) was because she lost her sister during Christmas season or something xD
The hugging part with Tsuji and Reina reminds me of a typical day of school XD
And of course the push up bra had me on the floor too.
crap, after finding out theres three new years, its a good thing i already made a chapter after my new year special... i saved myself XD Good luck!
-owaranai_slave
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Ow...... rasp...... How long will it take?
post, pleeeeeeeeeeeeease!
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MY GOD! That took forever! I'm so slooooow :evil: And for taking so long, it's not that lengthy of a chapter. I wonder where all of my inspiration went :(
The last spoiler is for the next chapter, btw. Enjoy :)
Hachi: Begin the New Year
"It's almost New Years all ready, Reinana. Time is going by so fast." Rika said, smiling at the 17-year-old, who was excitedly looking out the window with a grin on her face.
"I love New Years!" Reina exclaimed as she tore her eyes away from the window and finally turned to look at Rika. "Even though shrines are always so crowded. Don't you like it too, Charmy?"
"Charmy's all ready gotten bored with everything. Try exciting her and you'll fail miserable, Tanakacchi." Hitomi said from the driver's seat, and Reina could practically feel the smirk across her lips.
"Keep quiet, Yossie." Rika said, narrowing her eyes at her pimp.
"Don't get feisty now," Kaori interrupted the two calmly. "That's Tsuji's job."
"Shut up..." The grumpy brunette grumbled, crossing her arms and slouching in her seat.
This is my chance... Reina thought as she leaned over so she could see her superior more clearly. If I want to get close to her, this is the first step. "Tsuji..." Reina mumbled, all ready worrying about being rejected.
"Yeah, what?" Tsuji mumbled, looking at Reina with a cocked eyebrow.
"I-uh-I mean...when we get to the hotel, do you want to-"
"Look, we're here!" Yossie announced, interrupting her prostitute. "Let's go, everyone! We got the closest hotel for a reason."
Reina sighed as she filed out of the van, disappointed.
"It's good we came a day early," Kaori said as they all walked into the hotel. "It'll surely be crowded tomorrow, as always."
"Under Yoshizawa," Hitomi told the woman at the front desk.
"Ah! You're suites are on the fifth floor. Your luggage will be up in a moment. Please enjoy."
"Seeing as we're only staying for a day," Yossi explained as they all squeezed into an elevator. "I figured getting six rooms would be enough. As for who's sleeping in the same room together..."
"You can kiss my ass, Yossie. You better get me my own damned room or I'm going to-"
"Oh look, fifth floor!" Hitomi all but shouted as she rushed out of the crowded elevator.
"Damnit, Hitomi!" Tsuji moved to run after her, but Reina caught her wrist, pulling her back while everyone else walked out.
"What the-? You better let go of me, Tanaka!"
"Actually, Nono, Iwaswonderingifyou'dsharearoomwithme." Reina said so quickly she wasn't sure if Tsuji heard her properly.
"Wh-what?" Tsuji mumbled, wide-eyed as she stiffened under the oher girls' grip.
"Since we have to share rooms, I thought we could share one." Reina mumbled out. "I know you don't like me that much...but, I just thought if you don't want to be around someone else then-"
"I never said I don't like you..." Tsuji mumbled, pulling away from the brunette girl and walking away from the elevator. "Yeah, sure, whatever..."
Reina brightened. "Really? You're su-"
"Let's go before I change my mind, Tanaka!"
"Right!"
"Hey, hurry it up! We're deciding who's sharing rooms." Miki yelled to the two brunette prostitutes.
"Tsuji and I will share one," Reina responded with a grin.
Miki arched an amused eyebrow. "Is that so? Since when have you two been getting along?"
"Ah, Tanakacchi must be being nice enough to take Tsuji off our hands. How kind..." Hitomi stated, passing keys to everyone.
"That's not true," Reina responded as she grabbed the key from her temporary roommate. "I want to share a room with Tsuji."
"EH?!"
"You don't all have to act so suprised." Tsuji mumbled, taking the keys from Reina again and unlocking the door it went to.
"This just means that Reina is trying to bond with Nono, it's not a crime." Rika said calmly with a small smile as she squeezed Reina's shoulder.
Tsuji rolled her eyes. "We aren't trying to bond, I just don't want to be bothered with any one else. Why don't you stop squeezing her shoulder now?"
For the first time, Reina witnessed Rika's almost mischievous smirk. "What's wrong, Tsuji? Jealous?"
"Jealous? Pff! Oh, Please!" Tsuji snorted before slamming the door behind her, leaving Reina to pout.
"You guys don't have to be so mean!" The wonky-eyed teen whined as she followed after her moody friend.
"OK, what's that all about?" Miki said, crossing her eyes and arching an eyebrow. It seemed no one noticed the worried expression crossing Rika's face.
"Are you OK, Nono?"
"Why wouldn't I be OK?" Tsuji snapped, all but throwing her clothes on the bed. "Why is there only one damned bed? What the hell is wrong with Hitomi? Has she lost her fucking mind?"
"I-I can sleep on the floor, if you want..."
"You aren't sleeping on the floor!" Tsuji yelled, throwing her suitcase to the ground.
"Did I do something?" Reina mumbled. Normally she would probably be in Tsuji's face because she was angry, but somehow she found patience to deal with the older prostitute. But, either Tsuji didn't here her, or she was just ignoring her.
I guess she's more upset than I thought. Reina thought as she sighed and, though she was reluctant, pushed herself toward the angry girl and hugged her from behind. I loud gasp sounded through the room as Reina felt Tsuji's body tense. Despite that, she only gripped the 19-year-old tighter.
"I'm sorry they pick on you so much. If there was something I could do, I would definitely do it in as quickly as a second." Reina said quietly, resting her head against the stunned girls' back. "I'm sorry that...I mean, I know I can't do anything, though."
Tsuji relaxed, breathing out a sigh as she somehow found her breath again. "You aren't the one who should be apologizing." She murmured in response. Pulling herself away from the chubby teen, she resumed to putting her clothes away in the currently empty drawers.
No one bothered even coming out of their rooms for the rest of the day. Either it was because of the scene when they first arrived, or simply because everyone was resting for the going-to-be hectic events of tomorrow. Thankfully, the next morning everyone was up early and ready to go visit the Meiji Shrine.
"I hate lines." Reina grumbled impatiently as she crossed her arms in a child-like manner once they'd finally entered the shrine after waiting in the line for at least forty five minutes.
"Lines are part of the event, Tankacchi." Hitomi said with a smile.
"But still...anyway, where should we go first?" The wonky-eyed teen said excitedly as she looked around at the various
"Don't burt a blood vessel, Tanaka. We just barely got here." Tsuji snapped, pushing her way passed her fellow prostitute.
Oh great, I'm just making her angry. Reina thought as she ran up to her grumpy friend and entwined their arms. "Why don't we go get some charms first? Come on!"
In the crowd with the rest of the prostitutes, Rika frowned as she watched Reina run off somewhere with Tsuji. She refrained from sighing as she followed everyone absentmindedly.
"Don't worry," Kaori said, putting a hand on her friends' shoulder. "She hasn't forgotten about you."
Rika let a false smile capture her lips as she nodded. "I should be feeling worse for Eririn." She said and glanced at the frowning, raven-haired eighteen-year-old.
"Perhaps she is becoming too fond of our dear Reina." Kaori said thoughtfully as she pulled Rika away from the rest of their friends and toward a dumpling food stand.
"Dumplings?"
"None of us ate breakfast. I don't see why not."
"A Chinese love charm?" Tsuji grumbled out as she gave Reina a blunt stare. The wonky-eyed teen only gave her a thumbs up in response.
"So you can give and receive lots of love this year!"
"Are you sure that's what this is for?"
"Anyway, I'm hungry. Let's get dumplings!"
"Why dumplings?" Tsuji complained as she was once again taken by the arm by Reina and dragged toward the dumpling stand.
"Rika and Kaori are there too. Hey guys!" Reina waved as she sat next to her blonde friend and grinned. "You came straight to the food stands?"
"We didn't eat breakfast because we didn't want to be full before eating the Hatsumode food." Rika explained with her usual smile, showing her happiness that her favorite teen was next to her again.
After looking between Rika and Reina thoughtfully, Kaori quickly stood and said, "Nono, come with me won't you?"
"Come with you where?" Tsuji grumpily asked and crossed her arms.
"I'm going to buy a charm."
"I was just there!" She didn't have time to say anything else before Kaori pulled her by the wrist back to the charm stands.
"Are you OK now?" Reina asked as she observed her friend.
"What do you mean?" Rika asked, confused.
"Now that December is gone, are you feeling any better?" Reina smiled. "Now that it's the New Year?"
"Oh, yes, much better." Rika said cheerily as she stuffed a dumpling in her mouth.
"I think my New Years wish will be," Reina began quietly. "For you to put that time behind you."
Rika's eyes widened as she stopped half way through chewing her food, all but gaping at Reina, who only smiled back at her.
"You have dumplings dropping from your mouth," She stated and giggled. Rika gasped, quickly shutting her mouth while her entire face turned red, making the teen prostitute simply laugh out loud.
"Hn..." Tsuji grumbled as she watched the two from afar. "I don't why she likes her so much."
"They are like sisters," Kaori responded as she took an extra long time to pick out the charm she wanted. "Reina looks up to Rika like an older sister, and Rika wishes to protect her in return."
"Even so..." Tsuji scoffed. "Whatever, just hurry up."
"Don't take your jealousy out on me, Nono."
"I'm not jealous, damnit!"
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T_T I could've put more effort into that...oh well, hopefully the next chapter will be better.
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Nono's jealous? How cute. I'm still dying to know her story
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Awww, that was so sweet! Jealous Nono... It seems like Reina's just coming in there and turning everything on its heel and making everyone love her. That's so awesome. :lol:
showing her happiness that her favorite teen was next to her again.
That was maybe my favorite line, and I'm not sure why. It was just very... cute I think... brought a smile to my face thinking of Rika doing that. :)
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Great update! ReinaXRikaXNono so cute! :D
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Wow! I loved this chapter! ^_^
No one is sad, lotsa love.... Very nice indeed!
Let's see what happens with poor Kamei, now! XD
[I love Makoto and Yossie together... Any chance they will apear again? xD ]
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raspberrygashes! where are you?????:ONdunno:
We want more!!!!!!:ONfrustrated:
:ONsad:
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^Seconded!
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Oh! While we are on this subject.... what about your fics, rndmn? :panda_love:
[sorry rasp, didn't meant to be too much off topic! XP ]
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Oh! While we are on this subject.... what about your fics, rndmn? :panda_love:
[sorry rasp, didn't meant to be too much off topic! XP ]
<.< >.> <.< I was hoping no one would notice...
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Hey nice fic! When's the next update? *looks around curiously* It's interesting to see the H!P girls in this line of work. *cough* Lol.
Hope to see the next chapter soon! :)
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Bump!
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Oh wow, thanks to the bump I found this thread XD.
This fic is so Reina/anyone :heart:.
I hope the next chapter will be soon! :)
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Bumpage!
People, read this fic! It's a great story!
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Give me a new 50cc of a new chapter, stat!
*charges defibrillator*
CLEAR!!
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WOW!! Am I actually continuing this blasted story? I'd completely forgotten it [and JPH!P too :roll:] Well, whatever, I said I did this impulsively. Anyway, no more specials!!! I dropped the New Years thing completely since it's almost June now.
P.S. what's up with the title of this chapter? ;) I really am running out of ideas.
Nine: Weird Girls Who Like Corners
"Huh? Oh, so the room is finally done?" Reina hugged her pimp for the first and probably last time, all but squeezing her until the point of her losing breath. "Yes, sleep! No more groping! No more molesting! No more bruises! I love you, Yossui!"
"R-Reina..." The black-suited pimp wheezed. "Can't breath! Let go!"
"Oh, sorry!"
"Remind me to make sure you never get excited again." Hitomi sent her young prostitute a blunt stare, only receiving a nervous grin from Reina. "Anyway, Eri's all ready unpacked her stuff and I believe she's doing yours too."
Reina looked at the older brunette curiously. "She's doing that all ready?"
Yossie smiled. "You really don't give our little Eririn the light of day, Tanakacchi."
"I could say the same thing about you for Mako-chan." Hitomi looked at her obliviously.
"What?" She said, and Reina could practically hear the wheels in her head turning.
"A-ah...nothing! Anyway, I can't leave Eri to do my packing! I'm not that young. Gotta' go!" The wonky-eyed teen ran off as fast as she could, making it to her new bedroom in no time. "Aw, Eri, you're a sweetie!"
"Hu-" Eri didn't have time to finish before Reina pulled the same stunt that she had with Hitomi only minutes before. "Ow! Reinana!"
She let go of her, grinning sheepishly before focusing her attention on the two beds set across from each other, each neatly made with either Reina's or Eri's bed set. "Wow...you're quick, Eri."
"Oh...uh..."
"Well, I guess that's good, because if you hadn't then I'd have waited who knows how long before I actually moved all of my stuff in."
"Reina-"
"And of course Miki would be biting my ass because of it. But, I guess I could always just hide in here now-"
"Reina,"
"Unless of course she could just kick down the door, and then I'd be really scre-"
"REINA!" Said yankee all but jumped when the usually soft-spoken Eri shouted.
"Wh-what are you yelling for, Eririn?!"
"I need to ask you something," The raven-haired hooker sat on her own bed, giving Reina a stern look as the blonde-brunette only waited with wide, curious (wonky) eyes. "Reina, why are you here?"
Reina's opened ever so slightly, a bit surprised that Eri would be so bold as to ask something like that, no matter how much more confidant she'd gotten since she'd been in the house. "I...my parents died in an accident not too long ago, so I came here."
Although Eri looked at her sadly, Reina decided to meet her gaze and say, "I think it's all right for me to ask you the same question now."
Eri's usual personality came back, and she nearly shrunk on her bed, looking away with a nervous expression, and Reina faintly saw sweat forming on her forehead. "I..."
"Sorry to break up the moment, but," Tsuji apeared in the doorway, grumpy as ever, making Reina immediately brighten.
"Oh, Tsuji! I haven't seen you all day, what's going on?"
Tsuji only gave her "friend" a blunt look before saying icily, "As much as I'd hate to break up this lovely little chat of yours, if you two would bother shutting your door the next time you speak "heart to heart" that would be lovely seeing as how I can hear you all the way down the hall."
"Oh, sorry! We didn't know." Reina responded a bit nervously. "But since you're here," She stood, intwining her arms with the ice queen's. "I meant to ask you if you wanted to do something, like go to the cinema or something."
"Wh-what? Why!"
"Because it would be fun!" Reina exclaimed, only tightening her grip around the older prostitute's arm. She began to move out of the room, waving at Eri as she did, not taking not of her frown. "See you later, Eririn!"
"Hey, wait! I didn't agree yet!"
"But you were going to, right?"
"No!"
Eri heard the bicker all the way down the stairs while she sat on her bed, arms limp by her sides while she leaned against the wall, eyes looking up at the ceiling. It was an instant attraction, She thought. Once I heard Reina came here just barely before I did, I thought "then she understands how I feel". But maybe I'm just selfish and only want her there for my own sake. Either way, I can't stand that Tsuji and Rika always get her attention and she completely forgets about me.
"Damn it, yankee! I said I don't want to!"
"Come on!" Reina all but whined as they entered the kitchen, immediately getting Rika's and Kaori's attention. "I really want to!"
"So?!"
"Don't be such a hard ass, Tsuji!"
"I'm not a hard ass!"
"I see they're at it again," Kaori grumbled, blankly looking down at the newspaper below her.
Rika smiled. "Reina is stubborn."
Kaori narrowed her eyes at her friend, almost to the point that she was glaring at her, when she saw the smile she gave Reina. You used to, The brunette thought. Smile at me like that.
Her thoughts were interrupted when Reina shouted, "Yay!" leading her to udnerstand that she'd finally gotten Tsuji to agree to go to the cinema with her.
While Tsuji went upstairs to get dressed Rika spoke to her favorite teen, "Don't smother her, Reina."
"Huh?"
"I understand that you want to be friends with her, but if you corner someone like Tsuji with too much love, then eventually she'll just get sick of you."
"That's mean, Rika!"
Rika giggled, making the blonde-brunette pout childishly.
"Just no cheesy romance, and no drama's! Man, I'm so sick of those kinds of movies." Tsuji said as she stomped down the stairs.
"So then...horror?"
"No! Then you'll cling onto me the entire time!"
"I will not!" Reina whined.
"Will too!"
"Not!"
"Too!"
"NOT!"
"TOO!"
"Oh, be quiet all ready and get going." Kaori all but shoved them out the door, sighing as she sat back down and then focused on Rika, who had her glasses on, which she rarely wore, and silently read her book.
"Don't look at me like that." Rika said to her almost bitterly, although she still didn't look up at her.
"Like what?"
"Like that."
"You can at least look at me you're speaking to me."
"I'm reading."
"You usually come up with better excuses than that."
"It's not an excuse." Rika snapped, finally catching her friend's gaze.
"Why her?"
"We've been through this before, Kaorin."
"Don't lie to me. We have been through this before and that's what I'm afraid of."
"It's not like that, Kaori! Leave me alone about it all ready!" Rika slammed her book shut, all but stomping out of the room, leaving a glaring Kaori.
"I told you you'd be clinging onto me the entire time!"
"I was not!"
"Was too!'
"Not!"
"Too!"
"NOT!"
"TO-"
"Oh well looky here," Both Reina and Tsuji stopped on the sidewalk they were on and looked forward at the small group of teenaged boys standing in front of them. "A couple whores?"
"Hey, did you rent that older one?"
"Oh yeah, I remember her!" The leader snickered and advanced on the two prostitutes, making Tsuji push Reina behind her and glare at the three boys. "The "ice queen". She kicked me out right after we finished."
"It's a little something called "quick sex". Now what the hell do you want?"
"Ah, come on baby, we just want a little fun. Is that so much to ask?"
"If you're willing to pay,"
"Sorry, hun, I'm broke!" They all burst out laughing at that. "But if we have to force you, that's all right too. I hear chicks like you like it rough!"
While they were laughing even more, Tsuji whispered to Reina, "Tanakacchi, go back to the house, and get Hitomi, quick!" Reina only nodded before taking off, while Tsuji caught their attention so that they wouldn't run after her.
It might be too far... Reina thought as she ran, still a bit far away from the house. Tsuji, please be all right!
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OK so there's RikaxReina, ReinaxTsuji, ReinaxEri, and now RikaxKaori [does that even exist? ;)] I don't know who I'm going to put with who, so what does everyone else think? Anyway, first update in three or four months. I hope you enjoyed it!
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Aaaah! An update! :w00t:
(I've been lurking on this story for a really long time, but I've never replied. :oops:)
Kaori/Rika? An old customer of Tsuji's? Reina letting the YoMako slip? The plot thickens!
(You won't wait another four months before updating again, will you? D:)
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Aw, poor Eri. Reina's the only one she feels even remotely comfortable with.
I'm scared for Nono. :cry:
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My vote's for Reina/Nono! C'mon Non! Beat 'em up!
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yay new chapter!
Let's just pray Non is as tough as she speaks... if not... Yossi to the rescue~ I hope...
And poor Eri... maybe she could try getting close to Miki, make Reina jealous for once? since so far its Reina who's (unknowingly) making almost everyone jealous...
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I'm pretty interested in Kaori + Rika and the break-up, but I feel Kaori's just too good for her for it to even happen.
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This Story didn't mad me work for today. I didn't remember when was the last time I've read the first chapter but when I saw an update, I read the 1st chapter again up until to the latest update. Dang!! I've never thought that it will be great although I really don't like the kind of living they got themselves into. Nono being a much grumpier than Miki? That's something new :wub:. But the update made me nervous. I hope she'll be alright with those thugs. And also, I curious to what role might be for the other member. Good job raspberrygashes :hee:
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Finally and update! yay! are these gonna be regular things? Cause I wanna find out what happens with Tsuji
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Just a small update while I think of what should happen in the next chapter. Enjoy :heart:
Ten: Where The Sun Doesn't Shine
Reina ran as fast as she possibly could, the voices of Tsuji and the small group of teenaged boys disappearing behind her as she made her way to the house. But, she still couldn't get the thought of being too late out of her mind. There was too much traffic, which meant taking a car back would be completely out of the question, so she would have to run back with Yossie.
"Hitomi!" She shouted after bursting through the front door, much to the other prostitutes' surprise. "Where's Hitomi?!"
"Woah, slow down there, wonky eyes, what's the hurry?" Yuko asked casually, making Reina's temper flare.
"This is a hurry now where the hell is Hitomi?!"
"Reinana, take a breath." Rika said, sending the teenager a stern but caring look. "Now tell us what's wrong."
"These boys..." Reina started, finally taking the time to realize that she had been out of breath. "These boys started bothering Tsuji and I when we got out of the cinema, and she told me to get Hitomi. Come on, we can't just leave her there!"
"Makoto," Rika said in a demanding voice. "Get Hitomi and catch up with us. I'll go with Reina. We don't have time to lose." The blonde nodded obediently before all but bolting off up the stairs and down the hallway while the two brunettes ran out the door and toward the movie theatre again.
"What if we don't make it in time?" Reina asked, still out of breath and struggling to keep up with her friend, making the older prostitute grab onto her wrist so she could pull her beside her.
"We don't have time to think about that." Rika said simply while Reina looked behind them to see their pimp and Makoto catching up with them. "I see them!"
Reina snapped her head forward, but immediately stopped at the image she was greeted with. Two of the boys were completely knocked out while the "leader" was face-forward on the ground, Tsuji's right foot in his spine while she furiously tugged on his ears, emitting cries from the boy.
"Get it free my ass!" The Ice Queen shouted, an all but malicious grin on her face. "What's the matter, big boy? Not that much of a man now, are you?"
The four women all stared at the scene, mouths slightly agape with their eyes narrowed and an eyebrow cocked.
"Now, now, Tsuji." Hitomi said with a sigh. "Give the poor thing a break. It's not his fault he's broke."
"Oh yeah, and I guess it's not his fault he was willing to rape me either?" Tsuji glared, her fun obviously over as she let the boy done, resulting in him running off immediately.
Reina's eye twitched at the word "rape", that always being a sensitive subject for her, but didn't take any longer to run up to Tsuji and throw a half-hearted punch to her arm. "What's wrong with you?" The teen shouted. "You had me worried for nothing?!"
"I only told you to get Hitomi so she could stop me, otherwise I'd be in a big load of crap right now."
"WHAT?!"
"Anyway," Rika interrupted them before it could get out of hand. "Since that little event is over, let's go back all ready. You really had us worried, Nono."
Tsuji only glared at her and crossed her arms, looking away while Reina intwined there arms and they made their way down the street. "Now really, Tsuji, you could've at least told me the reason instead of making me think that those boys were going to-"
They all stopped in the doorway when a rather rough, over-worked man stood in the living room of the house, his raven black hair spiked in all different directions while his tanned face had traces of dirt on it, along withis his clothes.
What the...? Reina thought as she curiously stared at the man. Is he a construction worker or something?
"Ah, Mr. Oto," Hitomi greeted him with one of her usual charming, but all around false smiles. "A pleasure to finally meet you."
Mr. Oto only nodded. "I think you understand if I came here straight from work?"
"It's no problem at all," The pimp said, and then focused on Eri. "Eri, please greet Mr. Oto. He will be-"
"Wait," All of the womens' gaze shifted to Reina, who looked at Hitomi with a calm but stern look. "I'll take him."
Hitomi's eyebrows furrowed, but everyone else just looked surprised. "Excuse me?"
Reina smiled and bowed at the man, going to his side and taking his arm. "Nice to meet you, Mr. Oto. I'll show you to our room for the night." She began walking up the stares, but not without catching one last glance from Hitomi, to which she only nodded, clearly meaning, "I won't screw it up this time".
They made it to the bedroom in no time, and Mr. Oto, despite Reina not really wanting him to, began to undress the young prostitute, and Reina returned the favor. The fell onto the bed, and the rest, Reina would rather choose to not remember.
God...damnit...stupid...stupid man.... Reina mentally swore as she all but limped down the hall, after politely saying good bye to Mr. Oto. That had hurt much more than she'd expected, and sadly for her, the pain between her thighs was stil very apparent. Ugh...hate stupid men...hate, hate, hate, hat-
"Tanakacchi?" Reina stopped in the middle of the hallway, looking behind her grumpily, but regretted it when she saw Eri jump slightly at her cold look.
"Oh, Eririn. What is it?"
"I was...uh...just wondering...are you OK?"
"No!" Reina nearly shouted. "I mean, geez, couldn't that ass have slowed it down a bit? For God's sake, my you-know-what is aching here and there has got to be something wrong with that!"
Eri took a step back, making Reina nervously laugh. "Sorry, Eri. I don't want to take it out on you."
The raven-haired teen smiled in return. "It's OK, Reinana."
"Anyway, I'm gonna' go knock myself out. See you in the morning." Reina smiled one last time for the night before heading to her bedroom while Eri headed back downstairs, probably to "report" to Hitomi.
Where was I? Oh right, stupid, stupid man!
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At first, I was going to have Tsuji not beat the boys up, but I figured not only can the angst be saved for later, but Nono can't just talk tough, she has to be a total badass XD
So there you have it, another short chapter.
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I love badass Nono! Love love love! And poor Reina, didn't even get a chance to get broken in by the other girls. At least she was protecting Eri.
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Two of the boys were completely knocked out while the "leader" was face-forward on the ground, Tsuji's right foot in his spine while she furiously tugged on his ears, emitting cries from the boy.
WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! Go Nono!!! :rockon:
"What's wrong with you?" The teen shouted. "You had me worried for nothing?!"
"I only told you to get Hitomi so she could stop me, otherwise I'd be in a big load of crap right now."
So she wasn't asking for help fighting the boys, she was looking for help to NOT kill the boys! :wahaha:
poor Reina, didn't even get a chance to get broken in by the other girls. At least she was protecting Eri.
QFT.
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OMG.... 'reality check' the fact that they are all prostitutes just struck my mind.. Poor Reina! wonder why she suddenly decided to do it.. out of frustration cuz from the failed first attempt? or she didn't want Eri to go through with it?
And alright Tsuji! I hoped she'd whack the heck out of the guys.. if not she'd probably be the laughing stock infront of the rest since she had such a badass image.. now she's truely badass woo~
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wonder why she suddenly decided to do it.. out of frustration cuz from the failed first attempt? or she didn't want Eri to go through with it?
I thought the same thing. It's hitting 2 bird with one stone. She want to redeem herself and 2nd, She knows what it feels like to do something like that for the first time, that's why she have done it for Eri.
And for Draling Tsuji, AAAWWWOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!! Spartan Men would be proud of her. :D
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RASP!
WHERE ARE YOU?????
*starts singing in a militar beat*
"UPDATE! UPDADE! UPDATE!"
[I just saw you online today!]
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Update please!!!
And I'll offer you my first born as sacrifice XD... man, I'm offering my first born to many people XDDD
Anyway Yankii will be waiting for an update XD