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Title: The chaser (atsumina fanfic)
Post by: Takamina_Captain on July 04, 2012, 05:44:24 PM
Hi,i'm new here...
Like to read atsumina fanfics, so i try to write one.. :twothumbs
I really like takamina,don't like acchan,but really like atsumina  :heart:.. don't know why...?? hehe

i don't really can use english,so forgive if there are any writing mistake...please correct me immediately if i wrong   :hand:
I hope you can enjoy this~
ps. The title, i take it from infinite the chaser...i really like the lyrics,maybe you can check it if you free :thumbup


The Chaser


Prologue


I can do anything for the person I love .. ..

"Not unexpectedly we will soon live outside the country .."
"Mom, I'm sorry .. I can’t stay in America." Atsuko out of the lounge and ran toward the exit of the airport.
"Acchan,where are you going? Soon the plane was leaving! "
~

It has been six years have passed ... Do you still remember me? Minami ...
Title: Re: The chaser [atsumina] [prologue]
Post by: Flean on July 04, 2012, 05:49:25 PM
Welcome here Takamina_Captain-san...  :jphip:

You like infinite as well?? I really like the song.. :twothumbs

and why no like Acchan!!! :bleed eyes: you need Acchan and Takamina to be AtsuMina~ :heart: :heart:

looking forward to the chasing scenes...lol..  XD
Title: Re: The chaser [atsumina] [prologue]
Post by: Keisthename on July 04, 2012, 06:04:44 PM
and why no like Acchan!!! :bleed eyes: you need Acchan and Takamina to be AtsuMina~ :heart: :heart:

Hahaha Flean is right.. no Acchan means no Takamina.. and no Takamina means no Acchan.. if there is one missing there would be no Atsumina!  :on speedy:

Welcome here Takamina_Captain!!
we'll be waiting for your updates!! :D :thumbup
Title: Re: The chaser [atsumina] [prologue]
Post by: miayaka on July 04, 2012, 06:52:04 PM
hmm looking forward on this..
me myself and I is an atsumina shipper..
Oh no.. you don't like atsuko.. don't be pwease.. takamina will get mad at you if you don't like her wifey  :lol:
btw welcome here  :jphip:
Title: Re: The chaser [atsumina] [prologue]
Post by: mo-chan on July 04, 2012, 10:30:11 PM
wow
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I like it please cantinue
Title: Re: The chaser [atsumina] [prologue]
Post by: aruka on July 04, 2012, 10:38:45 PM
Hehe.. it's a quite similar case as I had in the past: only like Acchan when she's with Takamina. :grin:
Well, not anymore now.. as my likeness towards Acchan rises from time to time. :D
Perhaps later you'll be in the same condition as I am now? :D Let the time answer...

So, another reader waiting for you to continue too :thumbsup , and :welcome
Title: Re: The chaser [atsumina] [prologue]
Post by: Sara-chan on July 05, 2012, 03:26:40 AM
we have a new writer!  :welcome
i like the prologue  :panic: please continue the fic!  :cow:
Title: Re: The chaser [atsumina] [prologue]
Post by: XD_Monster_XD on July 05, 2012, 05:14:15 AM
I  :heart: the prologue~
Guess 6 years time will mean Acchan and Taka 27 yrs old :wub:
Hehe.. it's a quite similar case as I had in the past: only like Acchan when she's with Takamina. :grin:
In my case I liked Acchan more first but then I changed oshimen to Taka~
But Acchan will always be my 2-oshi :)
Title: Re: The chaser [atsumina] [prologue]
Post by: Tanchan on July 05, 2012, 06:38:46 AM
I'm curious, please update.
Hehe.. it's a quite similar case as I had in the past: only like Acchan when she's with Takamina. :grin:
Well, not anymore now.. as my likeness towards Acchan rises from time to time. :D

That's what happened to me at the beginning too, only liked Acchan when she was with Takamina but now I start to like her by herself. I admit that shipping Atsumina does help somewhat but the big part being Acchan herself.
Title: Re: The chaser [atsumina] [prologue]
Post by: Haruko on July 05, 2012, 07:10:12 AM
I'm curious, please update.
Hehe.. it's a quite similar case as I had in the past: only like Acchan when she's with Takamina. :grin:
Well, not anymore now.. as my likeness towards Acchan rises from time to time. :D

That's what happened to me at the beginning too, only liked Acchan when she was with Takamina but now I start to like her by herself. I admit that shipping Atsumina does help somewhat but the big part being Acchan herself.

The same ;D.. I hip so hard atsumina but acchan is not un my KAmi7 ..yet :D
Title: Re: The chaser [atsumina] [prologue]
Post by: moekare on July 05, 2012, 07:50:19 AM
Welcome here  :jphip: :welcome

IN THE NAME OF NEPTUNE! HOW COME YOU DONT LIKE ACCHAN  :grr:
unbelievable lol me in deep love with Acchan  :mon inluv: and Acchan only for Taka  :wub:

btw continue this story  :grin:
Title: Re: The chaser [atsumina] [prologue]
Post by: Tanchan on July 05, 2012, 08:06:26 AM
Should we rally and chase down those atsumina shippers who don't like Acchan :lol: lol? I'm totally kidding don't take it to heart.
Title: Re: The chaser [atsumina] [prologue]
Post by: Flean on July 05, 2012, 08:16:50 AM
Should we rally and chase down those atsumina shippers who don't like Acchan :lol: lol? I'm totally kidding don't take it to heart.

Good idea.. then we should brain wash them, make them fall in love with Acchan~  :heart: :heart: To be a true AtsuMina shipper!! LOL.. :lol:
Title: Re: The chaser [atsumina] [prologue]
Post by: Tanchan on July 05, 2012, 08:42:33 AM
WE should not scare away the author :ph43r:
Title: Re: The chaser [atsumina] [prologue]
Post by: Flean on July 05, 2012, 08:58:42 AM
LOL.. I was just kidding about that..  XD  I don't like Acchan as well in beginning.. And I'm starting to like her just because of Taka..lol.. but now, Acchan and Taka are my Kami-oshis..  :deco:
Title: Re: The chaser [atsumina] [prologue]
Post by: ichikawa on July 05, 2012, 01:28:22 PM
LOL I think author-san got scared away  :lol:
Author-san, don't get away. I am waiting for your update  :) :)

(fact: I'm starting to like Acchan because of Taka, so you'll be starting to like Acchan too if you're Atsumina shipper. because no Acchan no Atsumina~)
Title: Re: The chaser [atsumina] [UPDATED : Chapter 1]
Post by: Takamina_Captain on July 05, 2012, 09:05:48 PM
Wooww.. thank you minna...
I've read all the replies and it make me happy... :heart:
about acchan... please dont't missunderstad... :nervous
don't like doesn't mean hate... i'm just not into her,not her fans...??
But i agreed,i'm starting to like acchan...maybe it'll increase... :fap
Hope u'll enjoy this story...



The Chaser


Chapter 1


I can do anything for the person I love .. ..

"Not unexpectedly we will soon live outside the country .."
"Mom, I'm sorry .. I can’t stay in America."   Atsuko out of the lounge and ran toward the exit of the airport.
"Acchan,where are you going? Soon the plane was leaving! "
~

* Atsuko POV *

/ / In front of the house Takahashi / /


It has been six years have passed ... Do you still remember me? Minami ...


When I was about to ring the bell ..

"Can I help you?"


She stood behind me ... I finally saw her again ... I must be calm ...

"Konnichiwa, Takahashi Minami-san."
"Eh? How do you know my name? Have we met before? '
"I heard from uncle Takahashi. My name is Atsuko Maeda. I came to meet uncle. "
"Maeda? Ah, your father was a friend of my father's fishing,right?
"Yes. Takahashi-san,did you forget it? Six years ago your family come to our house once .. "
 "Oh really? Sorry I really forgot .. Come inside ... "

So she didn’t remember me ...


/ / In Takahashi’s house / /

"Acchan,right? How are you? "
"Konnichiwa, Uncle."
"Long time no see.You grows beautifully. It's kinda sad when your father went to America, there are no friends to go fishing together again. Didn’t you and your mother was asked by your father to go to America? When it plans ... "

I glanced at the Minami who was delivering the tea into the living room.
Time to start my plan ...

"Huaaaaaaa .... huhuhuhu ..."
"Eh Acchan? Why are you crying? "
"Please help me uncle. I want to stay here. I'm here because I thought you could help me ... huhuhuhuhu ... "
"Calm down Acchan, I’ll help you as much as I can."
"Really?"

= The door suddenly opened =

"Sorry, I'm not polite. Acchan! "
"Mom!"
"What are you doing? We miss the plane! "
"I'm not going to America!"
"Don’t be selfish! Let's go! Sorry to interrupt, Takahashi-san. "

When the mother pulled me away, I heard Minami said ..

"I'm sorry if I intervened,Maeda-san. But is not good if parents impose its will on their children? Would not it be nice if your child choose his own path and which is best for parents to support their children? "
"That's right Minami-chan ... But I can’t leave my child alone in Japan .."
"Maeda-san, what if acchan stay here?"  Takahashi-san said.
"I can’t bother your family Takahashi-san ..."
"It's okay. Acchan sweet and obedient. I guess acchan won’t be a burden here. What do you think, Mina-chan? "
"If father want to, I don’t mind .."
"How Maeda-san?
"But I haven’t talked to my husband ..."
"It's okay, I'll help you talk to him."
"All right. Thank you very much Takahashi-san. Tomorrow I will bring acchan here before leaving for America. "

-The next day-

"Acchan, once you create a problem, i'll bring you to America. Understand? Don’t bother Takahashi-san and Minami-chan. You've register in the same school with the Minami-chan. Study well,okay? "
"Okay, mom."

Acchan drove her mother to the airport, after that she returned to Takahashi’s house.

* Atsuko POV *

"Acchan, from now on you're going to stay here. In this house there will be only mina-chan. I’ll follow my wife went to the village, because her parents was sick.I will be back in a few weeks. "
"What? But father? I just heard this ... "
"Of course, because I had to say it now, Mina-chan. Keep acchan well. Regarding achan room ... You'll sleep with Mina-chan, because the guest room haven’t been cleaned. We will clean it after I get home. "

Whaaat? Yeaaayyyy…

"It's okay, Uncle. Don’t worry about me .Please be careful. "
"Thank you acchan. Mina-chan, acchan I go first. "

= After Takahashi's father left =

I didn’t think things will turn out like this. But it's much better hehe. I have to say something.

"Takahashi-san, thank you for your help yesterday. Your words yesterday make my mom changed her mind. "
"No need to thank, Maeda-san. Yesterday, you look so sad, and these words just out. Let me help you clean up your things in my room. "
"Don’t call me Maeda-san. Just call me Atsuko, Takahashi-san. "
"All right. Then you also call me Takamina. "
"Taka .... Minami? Minami? Ah, sorry .. surely you're not comfortable when I called you Minami .. "
"Hahaha ... It's okay, you can call me like that. I don’t mind. "
"Well, okay. I’ll call you Minami."

As we packed up, we talked about many things. Minami is very friendly, even to strangers, like me. She doesn’t remember me at all. Even so, can talk like this to Minami makes me happy.

"Finally finished .. Yokatta .."
"Yeah, really tired."
"Tomorrow you will go to my school right?  why did you move into my school? What about your old school? "
"Because your school has a well-known drama club .. so I decided to move .."

It is all a lie, simply because you were there Minami ..

"Yes, my school has quite a famous school drama club. I have a friend in the drama club. Tomorrow I'll introduce you to her, so you can get in to the drama club. "
"All right. Minami,thanks. " I smiled.
"It was nothing ... It was late, let's sleep." Minami blushed, very cute ..

Minami’s rooms have only one bed, so I figured I'd sleep with Minami. But Minami insists to put a futon on the floor and sleep there.

"Why are you sleeping on a futon,minami?"
"Because there's only one bed .. You are a guest, of course you have to sleep on the bed ..
"We can sleep together, you know?"
"It's okay, I'll just sleep on the futon."
"No, I'd rather sleep on the futon. This room yours, Minami. I may not sleep in your bed while you're sleeping on a futon. "
"Don’t be stupid, Atsuko. I can’t let you sleep on the futon. "

I was speechless. I know Minami stubborn, so I just stay quiet. Whatever I say won'tt change her decision. I'd better give in, I don't want us to fight on the first day.

"Well, today I'll sleep on the bed. Tomorrow you are sleeping on the bed. How Minami? "
"Agreed. Go to sleep. "  Minami said, as she lays a futon next to the bed.

When I finished shower, Minami was asleep.
I watched her face for a long time. Minami is very sweet, even when she asleep.
She sleep very well, didn’t even notice my presence at her side. I also got into bed and tried to sleep.

-Middle of the night-

Bruuk ..
"... oouch ..."  Minami said.
"Atsuko?"  Minami found Atsuko at her futon and now hugged her tightly.



To be continued ...


Title: Re: The chaser [atsumina] [prologue]
Post by: Flean on July 05, 2012, 09:37:38 PM
Hahaha... Acchan so sneaky...  :twisted: with all the acting to get herself into Taka's house.. :lol:

and on the first night already made her move..  :inlove: way to go Acchan!!! :twothumbs

Acchan need do more sneaky stuff!!!  :P
Title: Re: The chaser [atsumina] [prologue]
Post by: chibi-nyao-chan on July 05, 2012, 11:14:39 PM
Wahh Captain this is good  :tama-heart:
Acchan is really in love with Minami ! It's good Acchan, make everything for your love  :k-wink:

I want more atsumina lovey-dovey scene !!
Please continue  :luvuluvu:

See you~
Title: Re: The chaser [atsumina] [prologue]
Post by: Haruko on July 06, 2012, 06:42:39 AM
Good move acchan! :D

but be careful when you arrive to school many girls love your husband too :D
Title: Re: The chaser [atsumina] [prologue]
Post by: Keisthename on July 06, 2012, 07:02:18 AM
Acchan great moves there!!  :wahaha:

Go on make Takamina remember you or own her. hihihi I wonder what was behind their past.. hmmm..

Looking forward to the next update!!
Title: Re: The chaser [atsumina] [prologue]
Post by: moekare on July 06, 2012, 07:48:52 AM
@ichikawa  :pig red: me too~ ahaha Taka was my 1st love, then I came to love Acchan. Both are my daisuki members  :heart:

Back to the story :
Acchan what are you doing in the mid nite?  :twisted:  :twisted:

to author : don't mean to scare you, lol me nice person  :gmon hot:
Title: Re: The chaser [atsumina] [prologue]
Post by: XD_Monster_XD on July 06, 2012, 10:04:42 AM

tbh I like anyone thats shipped with Takamini.. And I don't/won't change oshimen :)
I used to dislike some members but I like them because I saw them.. with Taka.. <--- My bad habit XD

The story's awesome ;) I'm cheering for you~~ :cow:
Title: Re: The chaser [atsumina] [prologue]
Post by: kahem on July 06, 2012, 10:13:54 AM
How sad Takamina doesn't remember Acchan...
They are so cute~
Title: Re: The chaser [atsumina] [prologue]
Post by: ichikawa on July 06, 2012, 02:44:06 PM
Way to go Acchan~  :mon misch: trying all way to get into Takamina's house~  :mon trudge:
And what are you doing in the middle of night? *suspicious*  :mon lol:
Title: Re: The chaser [atsumina] [prologue]
Post by: saeyu on July 06, 2012, 02:56:49 PM


Whaaat? Yeaaayyyy…



LOL...sounds like our usual naughty Acchan...I wonder why Takamina can't remember anything about her because it seems there's much more to meeting once 6 years ago...

 :thumbsup
Title: Re: The chaser [atsumina] [UPDATED : Chapter 2 part 1]
Post by: Takamina_Captain on July 07, 2012, 09:10:07 PM
next update~
I want to know if the story was fine...?
hehe... enjoy~


Chapter 2

Part 1

* Minami POV *

Bruuk ...

"Ouuuch ... What is that? Atsuko?? "

What she was doing in my futon... Maybe she just fell off the bed ..
I tried to let go her grip of my body, but she held me so strongly.
Maybe she was lonely? Because she lived alone in Japan, with no family?
Before leaving, her mother had told me that in Japan they don’t have other relatives. Therefore, she was strongly opposed to Atsuko lived in Japan alone. Both our parents were close friends, because it then her mother agreed Atsuko lived in my house. I don’t know her reason, why she was desperate to stay in Japan alone.
Unconsciously I looked at her sleeping face, somehow it feels comfortable with her. It felt like I knew her from before. Maybe it's just my reasoning, but I let her, and continue to sleep.



* Atsuko POV *

I heard the alarm from my phone. The voice was very loud so I decided to wake up.
When I opened my eyes, I see the face of Minami right in front of me. Of course I was shocked, and automatically push it.

"Oouuch .. What are you doing Atsuko? " Minami woke up and rubbed her eyes.
"What are you doing here?"
"I could ask the same thing to you..Last night you fell off the bed. When I want to return you to the bed, you held me strong. I can’t let it go. Because of that, I just let you sleep. When I woke up,I got treated like this ..... "
"Sorry sorry .. Does it hurt,Minami?

I went over to check Minami, but Minami suddenly stood up.

"What this time is it? We're late for school !!! "

I had completely forgotten to school ... Actually, I don’t mind skipping school as long as can continue to embrace you like that ....

We quickly changed into uniforms. Because I was transfer student, I'm still wearing my old school uniform.
Minami change clothes in the bathroom. She takes a long time, so I knocked on the bathroom door.

"Minami,are you alright? What take you so long? ”
"Wait a minute, I'm just not used to change clothes in the bathroom."
"Then why did you change clothes in the bathroom? You can do it here. "
"You're changing clothes, of course I shouldn’t see it."
"Why not? We are both girls.. Or maybe actually ..... you were a man? "
"Baka, what did you say? Of course I'm a woman! "

I laughed, Minami really fun to teased. Suddenly an idea run in my head.

"Don't laugh Atsuko. We're already late. "
"Hey, I'm didn't take a long time to change clothes. By the way, you need help? I can help change your clothes if you like. Unless you were really a man? " 
The last sentence I spoke with a whisper, but it turns out Minami can hear it.
Minami opened the bathroom door and said, "Hey, I can hear that!"
I can not help but laugh out loud...
~

We came out and ran toward the school. Actually I prefer to walk leisurely to school, enjoy time together with Minami. But Minami seems disagree and start running.

"Atsuko, we could be late! Let's run! "

I've run out of breath, and began to slow down my running.

"I don't mind late, let's just walk Minami."
"You're a new student, shouldn't be late..Let's run.. "
"I don't want to.."

See Atsuko stopped running, Minami also stopped running.

"What? Are you tired? "

I said nothing, hoping Minami would stop running and start walking with me. I don't care about coming to school late or not.
But what surprised me, Minami suddenly took my hand.

"Come on, school was not far away. A little more up. "  Minami said, holding my hand and started pulling me to run.

I didn't mind running again. I don't care about my breath runs out or not. Now I can't think of anything, except to see my hand being held by Minami. I wanted to run on like this with Minami, forever ...

To be continued..

Title: Re: The chaser [atsumina] [prologue]
Post by: chibi-nyao-chan on July 07, 2012, 09:48:54 PM
Wahhh Acchan is sweeeeeet  :k-inlove: except when she tease Minami  :tama-apeshit:
Minami takes Acchan's hand !! It's cute  :tama-yeeaah:

Captain make more Atsumina moment please  :vv:
I wait for the next update~

See you  :luvuluvu:
Title: Re: The chaser [atsumina] [prologue]
Post by: Haruko on July 08, 2012, 04:27:03 AM
JAJAJa acchan love teasing minami and we love it too ;D..

Acchan prepare forfight agains takaboy`s fans :D
Title: Re: The chaser [atsumina] [prologue]
Post by: moekare on July 08, 2012, 07:41:32 AM
Haha Taka otoko da  :wahaha: They should change uniforms together  :shy2:
I hope at school later will be a lot of problems so that your fic would be interesting!  :mon suspect:

Waiting the next chappie  :mon inluv:
Title: Re: The chaser [atsumina] [UPDATED : Chapter 2 part 1]
Post by: Wmatsui22 on July 08, 2012, 10:57:54 AM
please continue your fanfic...

when will be your next update?

update soon...
Title: Re: The chaser [atsumina] [UPDATED : Chapter 2 part 1]
Post by: chiqinna on July 08, 2012, 11:10:43 AM
wahhhhh~~~ can't wait for next chapter!!!!!  XD atsumina!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  :thumbup  :ding:
Title: Re: The chaser [atsumina] [UPDATED : Chapter 2 part 1]
Post by: TakaminaBG on July 08, 2012, 11:11:54 AM
Ahhh.. I really like the story.
The scene when Atsuko hugged Takamina.. KYAAA!! Kawaii!!!
Update soon!!! :thumbup
Title: Re: The chaser [atsumina] [UPDATED : Chapter 2 part 1]
Post by: saeyukilover on July 10, 2012, 08:20:57 PM
Ehhhh??  :? What did takamina forgot !!  I want to know update pls.....
Title: Re: The chaser [atsumina] [UPDATED : Chapter 2 part 1]
Post by: axel0048 on July 11, 2012, 01:56:50 AM
waaaaaaahhhhh  atsumina!!! the best!!! :mon thumb:
acchan tease takamina more!!! :mon yeah:

please update soon !!!!
Title: Re: The chaser [atsumina] [UPDATED : Chapter 2 part 2]
Post by: Takamina_Captain on July 12, 2012, 04:09:36 PM
Hey.. sorry i'm late...hehehe
Next update!!!



Chapter 2

Part 2


Atsuko and Minami finally arrived at the school, although almost late. Minami take atsuko to the teacher's room and she back to her class room. Minami entered the classroom and immediately welcomed by the other.

"Hey takamina,its really rare you came late.." The woman with long hair reddish, has a face and body like a model, greeted  Minami. Her name is Kojima Haruna, commonly called nyan-nyan.

" I guess you didn’t come today." Miichan said.

Minami, Miichan, and Nyan-nyan became friends since junior high school. They were always together, even when the lesson or break. Minami just sat in her chair. Tomochin,who sat in front Minami,turned toward her.

"Takamina, I heard today there is a transfer student? You know who it is? "

Before Minami can answer, Mariko-sama have spoken, "Mayu-chan just peep the new student on the teachers' room, and she is beauty."

Minami wonder, so quickly news about Atsuko spread to the class. She just already leave Atsuko to the teacher's room, and her classmates already know her face?

"Speaking about the new student, I saw a takamina run while holding an unknown person. " Yuko said, with wicked smile on her face.
"WHAT? You're holding who’s hand,takamina?? "  Miichan asked with really LOUD voice.

Minami want to hit miichan's head, but the classroom door is already open. The teacher came in with a new student so the conversation had been end. All eyes on Atsuko, she's really attracted the attention.

"Today you will get a new friends, introduce yourself." Teacher said.
"My name is Atsuko Maeda. I’m from Hanakimi Gakuen.Yoroshiku onegaishimasu."

The class becames noisy. Minami concerned about atsuko,because akihabara gakuen is a girl’s school,maybe atsuko not used to. Akihabara Gakuen is a school known for its beautiful students, therefore beautiful new student is always attracted the attention of the whole school.

"Please calm down. For some reason, Maeda lived in Takahashi house. Takahashi, you are the head of this class, you are responsible for introducing our school and explain the school rules to Maeda. For seating, you'd better sit next to Takahashi, so you'll be easier to ask if there are difficulties. We’ll start the lesson. "

Atsuko walked straight to her seat, which is located next to Minami. Atsuko immediately smiled when she saw Minami, Minami also smile back to her.
Because the lesson begins, the class was quiet immediately. But after the class ends, all the student immediately surrounding Atsuko. Minami even forced to step aside from her seat, and sat in a corner of the classroom with nyan-nyan and miichan.
Not long afterward, nyan-nyan and miichan go first because they have to follow the club’s activities. Minami continue to see atsuko who were questioned non stop by the students.

"Maeda-san, you're moving from Hanakimi Gakuen? "
"Maeda-san, you're beautiful. Already have a boyfriend? "
"Maeda-san, why you live with takahashi-san?”
"It must be really happy  to stay with Takahashi-san, like what Takahashi-san at home?"

Atsuko confused to answer questions that have no end. Atsuko can’t even see Minami, because the view was blocked by many people around her. Can’t take it any longer, Minami approached atsuko’s table.

"You all don’t keep asking non stop like that. I’ll take atsuko to look around the school. " Minami quickly took atsuko’s hand.

"You see, takahashi-san hold Maeda's hand!"
"I also wanted kidnapped like that by Takahashi-san!"

Ignoring the screams of the students, Minami immediately pull atsuko out of the classroom.
~

"You're really popular, isn’t it?"
"You are more popular, just now many students are looking at you. "

Atsuko looked around. Many people are looking at them. Perhaps because she was wearing the uniform of the old school. It may also be due to her appearance. But Atsuko feel a lot of people who see them precisely because she was walking along with Minami.
Minami brings her to the gym. The gym is really big and there is also the stage. Many students are doing club activities. Minami walk with atsuko toward the stage and introduced her friend.

"Atsuko,this is Oshima yuko. She was leader of the drama club. Although this person behavior is strange, but her acting is not in doubt. "
"Takamina, don’t introduce me that way. Hey Maeda, we hadn’t had time to get know each other, right ? I was in the same class with you..Please call me yuko. " Yuko showed her trademark smile.
"Just call me acchan. Minami told me about you last night. "
"Minami?  You guys seem so close, calling each other front names and holding hands from this morning until now? "

Atsuko’s face blushed, as well as Minami. They realized, until now they continue to hold hands. Minami quickly released her hand. Atsuko disappointed that minami immediately released her hands like that, but she didn’t show it.

"Her family is in America, so she live at my house. Yuko, I forgot to say, Atsuko interested in joining the drama club. "
"Really? Nice, this club need new members because of the third grade students are not participating anymore in club’s activities....So second-graders like me who now serves as leader of the drama club,sometimes I forced takamina to participate because lack of members. If you're interested, you can join ... "

"Hey takamina, don’t  monopolize the new kid. We also want to know her. "

Mariko-sama suddenly appeared next to Minami. Not only Mariko-sama, but nyan-nyan, miichan, tomochin, Tomomi~, yukirin and Mayu are also there. Looks like they had been eavesdropping of conversations. They immediately introduce themselves and ask Atsuko to call them by nicknames.

"You all joined what club?" Said acchan.

Minami explained that her, nyan-nyan, Mariko-sama, tomochin, and Tomomi~ joined the cheerleader club. While yuko, miichan, Mayu, and yukirin included in the drama club. The gym used by the three clubs together.  Stage used by the club's drama, while the use of a field divided for the cheerleader club and basketball club. Since the activities of clubs and classes are same, they are all so familiar with each other and often play together.

"Acchan, you're interested in joining cheerleader?"  nyan-nyan asked.
"Yes, appearance is an important element to be a cheerleader. You pass in a matter of appearance, chiyuuu~. "
"Although takamina is an exception ... she is our captain and mascot’s club." Mariko-sama added, the others just laughed.

"Sorry to ruin your hopes, but acchan belonged to our club." Said miichan, hugging atsuko from behind.

Although only a moment, but Atsuko saw Minami face became tense. But Atsuko didn’t know what causes that, because Minami’s face turns back to normal.

"Miichan is right. Atsuko has decided to join the drama club, so I took her straight to yuko. We better start training. Yuko, please help Atsuko .. "  after said that, Minami pat on atsuko shoulder and walked to the members of the cheerleader in the middle of the field.

"Okay, if the captain had said so, let's practice. Good luck acchan . " Tomochin smiled to atsuko and walk follow Minami.

Mariko-sama, nyan-nyan, and Tomomi~ also walk to the center of the field.
Yuko introduced the other members of the drama club and they began to practice saying the dialogue correctly. During practice, Atsuko and miichan quickly became close. When taking a break, Atsuko saw Minami and nyan nyan walked together toward the stage. Atsuko was glad to see Minami, but Minami was just answering miichan’s call. Three of them stood in a corner of the stage and seemed to discuss something.


"Takamina, you seem close to acchan? Looks like you're more than just friends, see your attitude towards her .. "
"I'm close to her because she'll stay in my house until her parents returned from America,only that..."
"Miichan, you're very curious towards acchan. What’s wrong? " nyan-nyan asked.
"I think I liked acchan ...”



to be continued....
Title: Re: The chaser [atsumina] [UPDATED : Chapter 2 part 2]
Post by: hara on July 12, 2012, 05:00:02 PM
Eh ?! Minami realize her feeling ?   :glasses:




Acchan~ please attacked Minami~
i need a sweet moment of Atsumina,
can you give a sweet moment in next chapter, please   :kneelbow:

Waiting for your next update   :on gay:
Title: Re: The chaser [atsumina] [UPDATED : Chapter 2 part 2]
Post by: axel0048 on July 13, 2012, 12:50:55 AM
i'm not preoccupied at all...  :bigdeal: because i know acchan won't fall for miichan cause she loves takamina...hehehehe :bingo:

please update soon!! :bow: :bow:
Title: Re: The chaser [atsumina] [UPDATED : Chapter 2 part 2]
Post by: Haruko on July 13, 2012, 06:49:48 AM
of course miichan she is your oshii ne?

OMG!! takaboy you are famous in that school :D.. acchan you need to prove that you deserves takaboy :D
Title: Re: The chaser [atsumina] [UPDATED : Chapter 2 part 2]
Post by: kahem on July 13, 2012, 05:20:47 PM
Oh Miichan is interesred. Takamina what will you do hehe
Title: Re: The chaser [atsumina] [UPDATED : Chapter 3 part 1]
Post by: Takamina_Captain on July 18, 2012, 06:19:32 PM
sorry i'm kind of slow to make this kind of story... :nervous   Please let me know if this story interesting or not...

Douzo~

Chapter 3

Part 1

*Atsuko POV

I wonder what happened. Minami face looked very serious. Without knowing it, I kept looking at them, until the break time ends. Minami and nyan nyan return to the field, and Miichan back seat next to me. I really want to know what they are talking about, but I restrained myself for not asking. We returned to practice reading the dialogue. At that time there was a noise from the gym entrance. It came from a group of girls who gathered to see the activities of the club.

"Kyaaa! Takamina senpai was jumping! So sweet! "
"Shinoda-san and kojima-san together look gorgeous in cheerleader uniform .."
"Aaaa ... Takahashi-san was talking to Itano-san! They look cute together!! "

Right then I looked at Minami. She was chatting with tomochin and they look happy. I wonder what they're talking about, but I don’t like to see it.
Aarrrgh, tomochin! Don’t hold Minami hands like that and stay away from her!  I really wanted to shout ..

"Acchan, what going on? You're thinking about something? "
"It's okay michan. I'm just hard to concentrate because the atmosphere is too noisy. What are they doing? "
"Oh…that girls? If the club's cheerleaders are practicing, it is always noisy like this. They have a lot of fans. Especially takamina. From the first she was very famous among girls. Perhaps because she looks a bit tomboyish, but has a cute appearance because of her tiny body. Mariko, nyan-nyan, and tomochin, and Tomomi~ also popular because they  are beautiful and look like a model. If they walk together, they would always draw attention. "
 "I just knew that Minami was really famous here ..."  No wonder when I walk with Minami, many students who see us. In fact, they all look at Minami.
"Only takamina?"
"I mean uh ... I was surprised because they all very famous ..."
"Maybe because these is girl's school. So no wonder many people who idolize them. In our club as well, like Yuko, Mayu and Yukirin. "

Yuko suddenly appear in front of us. "Today's activity club ends~."
"That fast…?"
"Too many students are gathered, the atmosphere is too noisy. Other clubs have also decided to end the activities of the club early. Anyway acchan, there is a message from takamina. She said she will waiting for you at the gate. "
~

I was really happy. Minami waiting for me, I feel like as her girlfriend. I quickly said goodbye to the other members of the drama club and ran towards the school gate. I've seen Minami from a distance and speed my running. When I want to call minami, I saw tomochin approach her.
I stop my step. Why Minami with tomochin again? I don’t understand what was happening, but I don’t like to see them together. But what happened next shocked me.

Tomochin kiss takamina on the cheek ....


to be continued...
Title: Re: The chaser [atsumina] [UPDATED : Chapter 3 part 1]
Post by: TakaminaBG on July 18, 2012, 06:39:19 PM
GREAT!!!!! TakaTomo rocks!!!!!!
AtsuMina too, but TakaTomo!!!!!!
I don't know why but I ship TakaTomo, they look cute together.
Interesting chapter!!!!!! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAa!!! Can't wait!!!!
Update soon!!!! :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart:
Title: Re: The chaser [atsumina] [UPDATED : Chapter 3 part 1]
Post by: axel0048 on July 18, 2012, 06:58:56 PM
nnnnooooooo!!!!! :bleed eyes: :angry:
i want my atsumina!!!!!!! :angry: please :cry: :bow: :bow:

.......
,......
but it's only in the cheek so maybe it doesn't mean anything..... :yep: :yep:
let's have hope!! :)

please update soon!
Title: Re: The chaser [atsumina] [UPDATED : Chapter 3 part 1]
Post by: Haruko on July 19, 2012, 12:28:41 AM
I little noisy in the atsumina relationship its good.. come on acchan fight for you husband... OMG!! she kiss her....
Title: Re: The chaser [atsumina] [UPDATED : Chapter 3 part 1]
Post by: Keisthename on July 19, 2012, 02:08:55 AM
Naah it's only at the cheeks.. if that's ATSUMINA they'll kiss on the lips.. wahahaa  :wahaha: or maybe more than that!!  :on bleed:
wohooo thanks for the update!!! we'll be waiting for more!
Title: Re: The chaser [atsumina] [UPDATED : Chapter 3 part 1]
Post by: Trickster on July 20, 2012, 04:16:19 PM
Quote
I don’t understand what was happening, but I don’t like to see them together.
I don't know why but when I read this I really want to hit my head to the wall  :sweatdrop:

waiting for Atsumina moments here, so please update!! XD
Title: Re: The chaser [atsumina] [UPDATED : Chapter 3 part 1]
Post by: kahem on July 20, 2012, 04:30:16 PM
Ganbatte Acchan don't give up!
Title: Re: The chaser [atsumina] [UPDATED : Chapter 3 part 1]
Post by: Wmatsui22 on August 05, 2012, 05:32:29 AM
FINALLY..

YOU FINALLY UPDATE..

HEHE..

I'VE WAITED VERY LONG FOR NEW UPDATE..

PLEASE UPDATE SOON..

THANK YOU
Title: Re: The chaser [atsumina] [UPDATED : Chapter 3 part 1]
Post by: Takamina_Captain on August 16, 2012, 09:23:34 PM
I'm sorry .. I was only able to update the story now .. I just finished my exams ..  :banghead:
wish I could update the story more often..Douzo :thumbup  :cow:


Chapter 3

Part 2

Minami waiting for Atsuko at the front gate of the school to go home together. Minami began to think about what happened at school today. See Atsuko embraced by miichan makes her uncomfortable. Moreover miichan suddenly said that she liked Atsuko. Though there are rules prohibiting to dating each other, if only one side is okay. If not, will receive a very severe punishment, because this is not an ordinary school. But still dangerous, what if miichan forget that rules? From the first miichan really likes to flirt with all the girls in the school, but this is the first time miichan say she like someone on the first day she saw Atsuko. Hopefully it does not happen. Too deep in thought, she didn’t see tomochin coming toward her.

"Why are you standing here takamina?"
"Oh ... I'm waiting for Atsuko. I waited for her to go home together. Why are you alone? Don’t go home together with Tomomi ~? "
Tomochi’s face immediately changed ... "No ... I would go home alone.."
Minami thought it was weird with tomochin attitude, "Hey ... what something is going on? Earlier during club activities as well you two didn’t talk at all. "
"There is nothing .."
"If there's anything you can tell me. Don’t keep your problem. From the beginning you always like that. "Minami see tomochin with worried eyes.
"You too. Always be so kind .. "   tomochin replied softly.
Tomochin approached Minami and kissed her cheek.
Minami was surprised with tomochin action and took a step back. That's when Minami saw Atsuko, standing not far from where she stood.
"Atsuko…..since when are you standing there? "
 "I'll go home first, Minami. Bye Minami, tomochin. "
Atsuko ran past Minami and tomochin. Atsuko ran so fast, and in an instant her figure was not seen again. In fact this morning she thought atsuko couldn’t run that fast, thought Minami.
"Sorry tomochin, I also go home. Be careful going home,okay?"  Because of worried, Minami immediately ran chase after Atsuko.
"Bye takamina." Tomochin just looked at Minami’s figure who ran after Atsuko. "Dangerous, I unconsciously do it." Tomochin said to herself.

~

Atsuko POV

I ran as quickly as possible. My tears flow. I can’t stand to look at the scene. Why? What happened? Why tomochin kissed Minami?
Although only on the cheek, but still, it's painful to see Minami kissed by someone else. The thought of it makes my head hurt. At home, I immediately went into the room and lay in Minami’s bed. I immediately smelled Minami’s scent. I increasingly feel sad, and the tears can’t be stopped. Tired of running, crying out continually, unconsciously I fell asleep. Minami’s scent makes me comfortable, just like last night when I hugged her.

When I awoke, it was dark. My head feels pain. My body also felt weak.  Minami has returned home or not? Does she continue with tomochin? Thinking about it makes me get out of bed immediately, but then I heard a knock at the door.

"Atsuko, are you awake?" Minami peek from the door. Seeing me awake, she entered the room and sat on the edge of the bed.
"I chase you, but you're running so fast. When I got home, you were asleep. Are you all right? Do you want to eat something? " Said Minami with worried voice.

Minami chase after me, meaning she wasn’t with tomochin in a long time. It was really a relief. Now I even make Minami worry.

"It's okay, I'm not hungry. I just feel a little pain of my head. " I could only smile weakly.
"Really? " 

Minami approached me, and her face was getting closer. I suddenly recalled that scene,when tomochin kissed minami, making me unconciously pushing her.

"Eh? I just want to measure your temperature? "
"Sorry Minami. I didn’t mean ... "
"It's okay. Maybe you're too tired, just rest in bed. " said Minami standing up, and began to prepare the futon. After the shower, Minami soon asleep.

What have I done .. I pushed Minami, she’ll definitely think I'm strange. Why it keeps pop up in my head ... Actually, how Minami relationship with tomochin? I could not ask  Minami or tomochin. I have to look for information, maybe nyan-nyan or miichan. Now I just need to try to sleep. Whether because of fatigue or because of a sore head, I even dreamed of the past.

~ Flashback ~

I saw myself at the age of 11 years. With short hair, appearance looks like a boy, totally different from me now. I'm more comfortable playing with boys, because girls scares me. I was very shy, and because I just moved schools, making it difficult to talk with girls who are always in groups. Not hard to talk with the boys in my class, and I always play with them.

One day, there was a shocking incident. The most popular boy in my class suddenly confessed his love for me. It surprised me,because my appearance doesn’t like a girl at all. Since then, the girls in my class hate me. They are often pick on me, poured water over my head or even get rid of my desk out of the classroom. Other student can’t defend me, even the boy who expressed his love for me. They fear it will further angered the girls. In fact, disruption of girls getting worse from day to day.

That day, my parents decided that I’ll move the school to a distant city. That's when I met Minami. When walking down the stairs, I was pushed off by someone. When I thought I would die from falls, Minami caught me with her little body. She then shouted to the girls who pushed me,
"What are you doing? he could have died! "

Suddenly many girls appeared around that girl. They even approached Minami and apologize,
"Takahashi-san, will u forgive this girl .. she didn’t intentionally .."

To my surprise, Minami interrupt them and say,
"You all are the one that telling her to push that kid away from stairs right? "
"Not Takahashi-san, we just ..."
"Once again I see you all harass this kid, you will be dealing with me."
The girls were instantly silent, and some even began to cry. Minami then took me to the nurse and take care of my wounds. She's treating my swollen hand that hit the edge of stairs. I just see Minami treat my wounds.

"What's your name? I've never seen you before? "
"My name is Takahashi Minami, you were a transfer student right? of course you've never seen me, my class is located at the end of the corridor. "
"Thank you for helping me, if you're not there I might be dead."
"I just happened to pass by, no need to thank."  Minami said, smiling.

Seeing her smile, my heart pounding. This girl really cute, I thought.

"By the way, I heard Takeru-kun expressed his love to you?"
"Eh? How do you know? "
" it's been a rumor in my class, said Takeru-kun to be gay. He confessed to the boy who had just moved to this school. Though he was really popular at this school. Because feel upset, that boy was directly targeted by the girls, even from another class. "

Wait a minute, she said gay?

Minami continued, "it's ridiculous. Just because Takeru-kun expressed his love to you, you instantly become the target of bullied. I think not wonder if Takeru-kun expressed his love to you, you're too cute for a boy. "

It can’t be…my heart was pounding very fast. She complimented nicely with a very serious face. Although she thinks I'm a boy, I'm still happy. I slowly realized that I liked her. I gather the courage to ask her.

" if there are someone who have just met you today and confess to you, will you receive it?"
"Ehmmm ... I don’t know ..."  she replied with a puzzled look on her face.
"what if a girl who confess to you?"
"Eeehhh girl? Ehmm ... it's a difficult question ... Maybe if she is beautiful and I love her, I will accept? Hehe .. "Answer Minami, her face really red.

I just want to ask again, the bell rang.

"Aaaa the bell. I have to go to class. I'll see you tomorrow. " Minami rush out of the infirmary.

I took a breath. See you tomorrow? Tomorrow I'm not here Minami ... I haven’t say anything to you,I have not even say my name .. But I'll come back to this city. I'll definitely find Minami. I'll become a very beautiful girl and make you fall in love with me, no matter what.


to be continued...
Title: Re: The chaser [atsumina] [UPDATED : Chapter 3 part 2]
Post by: TakaminaBG on August 16, 2012, 09:59:51 PM
Well I think it's obvious that Tomochin likes Takamina.
Like I said I like TakaTomo, BUT I WANT more ATSUMIN!!!!!!!1
UPDATE SOON! :thumbup :thumbup :thumbup
Title: Re: The chaser [atsumina] [UPDATED : Chapter 3 part 2]
Post by: arrow27 on August 16, 2012, 10:31:51 PM
Thanks for the update :) Great chapter ^^
Title: Re: The chaser [atsumina] [UPDATED : Chapter 3 part 2]
Post by: kahem on August 16, 2012, 10:54:41 PM
lol Takmina tought Acchan was a boy hahahah!!!
Title: Re: The chaser [atsumina] [UPDATED : Chapter 3 part 2]
Post by: Haruko on August 18, 2012, 08:51:45 AM
Omg atsumina!!! Come on achan fight for your husband
Title: Re: The chaser [atsumina] [UPDATED : Chapter 3 part 2]
Post by: Megumi on August 18, 2012, 10:39:25 PM
Ohhh this is interesting!

:kneelbow:
Title: Re: The chaser [atsumina] [UPDATED : Chapter 3 part 2]
Post by: den_takacchan on April 02, 2013, 10:41:54 AM
please continue this fic. :D
Title: Re: The chaser [atsumina] [UPDATED : Chapter 3 part 1]
Post by: IamNot_Glad on October 12, 2013, 01:06:15 PM
GREAT!!!!! TakaTomo rocks!!!!!!
AtsuMina too, but TakaTomo!!!!!!
I don't know why but I ship TakaTomo, they look cute together.
Interesting chapter!!!!!! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAa!!! Can't wait!!!!
Update soon!!!! :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart:
FINALLY..

YOU FINALLY UPDATE..

HEHE..

I'VE WAITED VERY LONG FOR NEW UPDATE..

PLEASE UPDATE SOON..

THANK YOU






Please update soon !!  :) :) :) :) :)
Your story is so cool !! :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: The chaser [atsumina] [UPDATED : Chapter 3 part 2]
Post by: noah minami on October 24, 2013, 10:22:38 AM
wa~ interesting story here ... :D
love the titles.. hoping an update soon. :cow: :yossi:
Title: Re: The chaser [atsumina] [UPDATED : Chapter 3 part 2]
Post by: shazrey on January 27, 2014, 08:06:28 PM
update pleasee  :bow:
really wanted to know wht happen next  :panic:  :panic:
Title: Re: The chaser [atsumina] [UPDATED : Chapter 3 part 2]
Post by: noah minami on January 29, 2014, 11:11:40 AM
Author san where are you?
Still waiting for an update. . :cry:
Title: Re: The chaser [atsumina] [UPDATED : Chapter 3 part 2]
Post by: ubulubulbilu on June 11, 2014, 04:31:07 PM
I was a silent reader before, but now Author san, an update pls.  :bow:
Title: Re: The chaser [atsumina] [UPDATED : Chapter 3 part 2]
Post by: Snaux94 on February 21, 2015, 06:42:26 PM
I was a silent reader but I can't take it anymore !! Update please :panic:
Title: Re: The chaser [atsumina] [UPDATED : Chapter 3 part 2]
Post by: Saint0angel on July 30, 2015, 04:02:50 PM
Author-san, hope you update soon :bow: