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Title: The feeling (Mayuki and others) Chapter 12 Finally UPDATED!
Post by: Haruto Lee on October 09, 2013, 01:11:45 PM
I am a new writer. So if my work is not good enough, I am sorry. Anyway enjoy my new and first fanfic. And pls sorry if my grammar is not good enough

It was just like always an ordinary day. The sky was blue. The bird was chirping. The wind was blowing gently. And I was in the school to study. I was studying in a private high school as I didn't really like government school. So I asked my mum to enroll me to a private school. It was quite big for an ordinary school. Sometimes I would get lost in the school. It was quite frustrated for me because I was a genius after all. Nah... Just kidding. I hoped I can be one too but i wasn't.

'Watanabe-san, are you listening to me?' A girl was asking me. Not an ordinary girl, my class rep. She was quite annoying sometimes.

'Yes.... Yes.... I am listening, Kashiwagi-san. What are u talking about again?' Yes, her name is Kashiwagi Yuki, a super annoying class rep. To my unfortunate, my presentation partner was her.

'Mou.... You didn't listen to me at all. How am I suppose to catch your attention?'
'Don't know.... The thing that I only know is the school is over now. Do u know about it?'

'That is why we are using this time to do our presentation. We are going to present it on this Thursday but we haven't done anything yet. How are we going to present it?'

'First of all, it is just Monday. We have much time to do it. And second, my friend is waiting for me. So, bye. I am going to back now. Just message me what I have to do.'

'Wait!!!! Watanabe-san!!!!! Jeezzzzz......Then he goes again. The teacher is going to kill me if I haven't finish it again.'

I just walked away from her. Finally, my freedom had came. I walked to my locker and took the book that I need to study on that day. After finish packing, I walked to the school gate and I saw two of my friends was there. I bet that they were complaining as I promised them to go to the game center.

'Watanabe Mayu!!!!!!!! Do u know what time is now? We wait for an hour already!!!!' One of my friend, Sasshihara Rino was shouting at me. I think my face had all his saliva already. I had to wipe my face again.

'Mayu, where the hell did you go? Did u lost again? If u lost again, I am quite disappointed because u have studied here for a year and u got lost every time.' Another friend of mine, Matsui Jun was quite angry now. Maybe he forgot to take his happy pill because he was quite easy going. He didn't care anything except for his mark.

'Okay.... Okay...... Easy tiger.... My class rep caught me to have a discussion. I thought two of you saw it. My treat later, okay? And where is Yuko?' Well I supposed to meet three of them but now i could see two of them only. And for your information, Jun, Rino and I are in the same class. As for Yuko, he was senior. Sometimes he would hang out with us.

'Hahahahahahahaha.... Hahahahahahaha....' Rino was laughing until his tears were flowing out. I was quite confused for his sudden laugh.

'Well.... I didn't know we can trick Mayu that easy. By the way, thanks for your treatment. As for your information, I bet Yuko went to do something as he is boring.' What? I didn't know that they were tricking me.

'You two dead meat..... How dare you---'

'Hey! Mayu you are here. What take you so long? And why Sasshi is laughing so hard?' I wasn't able finish my sentence because of Oshima Yuko, my own only oshiri brother turned out of sudden with a ice cream. He must went to the near-by convenient store.

'Yo! Yuko! I was caught by my class rep for a discussion. Guys let's go if u want to go to the center. If not my mum won't let me out again.'

'Eh? The class rep caught u again? I think she has a crush on you. If not why would she always catch you?' Yuko asked me out of sudden when we were going to.... Actually I didn't really know where were we going now because we were not using the same route but I just ignored it. I don't think that they would bring me to an unknown place.

'Crush huh? I hope it is not because she is super annoying. I bet if I ask Jun and Rino, they will not choose her to be their girlfriend.'

'No thanks. I would like to have Lovetan to be my girlfriend. I won't choose her.' As always loyal to his girlfriend. Rino had her girl, Ota Aika. Quite a nice girl actually.

'No thanks I would rather to choose Rena' Jun also had her girl already. Her girlfriend is Matsui Rena. They are not siblings. So don't worry. Rena is also Yuki' best friend. So I think Jun will always hear about her. I think I am the only one don't have girlfriend. Maybe not because Yuko had his crush only. His crush is Kojima Haruna.

'Mayu, you actually asking for hit. Don't you already know they have their girl already. So don't ask them. They will only remind us that they have their girlfriend already. But I heard the Kashiwagi girl is quite popular in your grade. I though you will have a crush on her.' The two of them just ignored him as Yuko always jealous of them because he is a coward.

'No, I am not asking for hit. You are the one asking for hit....'

'Yuko don't you know already the three of us are popular in our grade but we are not playboy. You also know that Mayu will not easily have crush on someone. He likes 2-D girl than 3-D girl.' Yeah Jun is right. I am an otaku after all. But I denied the part that I was popular.

'Anyway, why are we at my house now? Aren't we going to the game center?' As I just realized that I was standing in front of my house.

'Yup!!! We are going after we have our dinner in your house.' The three of them said in the same time. I just thought that they tricked me again as we were not going to any where if I am in my house.

We entered my house and I greeted my mum as she was in the kitchen preparing for the dinner. The three of them were quite happy when they see the dinner was ready. When my mum saw them, she was quite happy. She even prepared more food for them. I thought the ordinary one will be angry if she see that many guest in the house. I just went back my room. It was quite ordinary but a lot of manga and action figures. I even had a specific shelf just for them. As usual, I went to have a nice and warm bath. After bathing, I went to the kitchen to have dinner. I saw my mum was still preparing food. So I thought she would not know that I am going out to have fun. When I was thinking, she suddenly came out from the kitchen. When she saw my clothes, she asked where I am going. I just told her and she just let it go this time because the boys were here. So I was save but I was sure I would be dead when I am back. After having our dinner, we went to the game center and had some fun. Around 9, we decided that we have to go back home. So I just bid my goodbye. When I was going home, I heard some loud argument. So I decided to check it out.

'Go out now!!!! You haven't pay the rent for four months. How am I suppose to help you?' The woman was scolding the young teen girl. I think the girl is around my age. So I decided to ignore but the girl is catching my attention. She looked familiar to me. So I just continued watching the scene.

'Pls aunt..... My mum is going to pay you. She just forget to pay for me. Pls let me stay here. You can't kick me out.' The young teen girl is begging the woman. I think the woman is the girl's aunt as she was calling her aunt.

'Stop begging me, Kashiwagi Yuki!!!! Your mum didn't even want you to live or study in Tokyo. Why would she pay for you?' What the girl is my class rep? That was why the girl looked familiar to me. I didn't know she is living by herself. By the way, where did she come from?

When I was in my own thought, a sudden loud thud took me back to the scene. I saw the woman just closed her door and left Yuki outside. Yuki just stood up and wiped her face as she was crying for a while. As a gentleman, I can't ignore her. So I just went to her and help her to keep her things back to the luggage. She didn't even bother to look who am I. After keeping all the things, she just said thanks and went away.

'Kashiwagi-san....' I called her out of sudden. I didn't really know why I did. She just turned to me with an emotionless face. It is unusual to see her like that. I just went to her and embraced her. She just let me hug but she didn't do anything.

'It is okay to cry.' As soon as I finished my sentence, I felt warm liquid on my chest as my shirt was covered with her tears. She just cried silently on my chest.
Title: Re: The feeling (Mayuki)
Post by: Terragen on October 09, 2013, 02:51:09 PM
errrr is there's chapter 2 then~

sweet mayu is a gentleman...just how far he will help yuki... will he let yuki live with him together? sweet

please update soon

Title: Re: The feeling (Mayuki)
Post by: chiqinna on October 09, 2013, 03:58:45 PM
next update please!!  :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: The feeling (Mayuki)
Post by: mayuki_daisuki on October 09, 2013, 05:42:40 PM
that stupid aunt! who in their right minds kicks a child out onto the street and is their niece! :angry:
mayuyu such a sweet guy :cathappy:
thanx for this :cow: :bow:
Title: The feeling (Mayuki) Chapter 2 & 3
Post by: Haruto Lee on October 11, 2013, 11:54:17 AM
Thanks for your all comment.

Chapter 2
After a while, she stopped crying and I brought her to a nearby park to have some rest as we were standing for..... I didn't really knew how many hours we were standing. The only things that I knew is my shirt was wet now and a girl who didn't have a place to stay was sitting beside me. After a while, I decided to break the silence.

'Kashiwagi-san, are u okay now?' She just nodded. 'What are u going to do after this?' This time was worse. She didn't even answer just like a statue sitting beside me.

Then, I only realized that she was only wearing a thin shirt and a blue jean. It is quite cold now. So, I just lent her my jacket but she didn't take it. I didn't have many choice. I just insist her to wear it. After wearing, I just realized how late was it but I couldn't let a girl sitting in a park. I couldn't guarantee her safety.

'You can go home if you want. I am okay now.' She realized that I keep watching the time.

'Sorry. For your information, you are a girl and I can't let you stay at here. I can't guarantee you are safe in here.'

'Don't worry I will find some place to sleep. Now you go home.'

Instead of arguing with her, I just dragged her with me. I also took the luggage along. She kept on shouting to let her go but after a while, she stopped shouting as she just realized we get some weird stare from the passenger. I just dragged her to my house as I remembered that my house have a spare room. My mum is going to rent to earn some money. I thought she could stay at there. As for the rent, I would try to beg my mum to decrease for her. After a long journey, I finally reached my home. I unlocked the door. And saw my brother was grinning at me. I knew what was the grin meant but I didn't bother much.

'Yuuta, is your brother come back?' My mum shouted from the living room as she was watching her favorite show that I didn't bother to know what was it about. Yuuta was my younger brother. He was 16 as he was younger than me one year. He studied in another high school as he wanted to follow his friend. It was not a problem for him at all as he was a genius after all.


'Yes, I am home' as I interrupted him from saying something nonsense.

'And he brought back a girl.' As soon as the last word finished, both of my parents came out from the living room.

'I didn't know Mayu. You have a girlfriend. And you are dare enough to bring her back.' My mum was really angry now.

'Mayu.... My son you don't have to have a girlfriend that early. And why did u bring her back?' Okay I didn't know my dad was home. He was quite busy everyday. I only saw him at home twice a day.

'Uno...... Hello uncle and aunty. Nice to meet you. I am Kashiwagi Yuki. I am not Watanabe-san's girlfriend. I am just Watanabe-san's classmate. I don't really know him and he just dragged me here out of sudden.' How could she say that I drag her here out of sudden? But thanks to her both of my parents were relieved from the tension. My brother just signed disappointedly.

'I dragged her here because she didn't have a place to stay as her aunt just kicked her out. I was thinking that she can use the room that mum want to rent. So it is okay?' As soon as I finished my sentence, I saw Yuki's expression turned into a shocked one. The ordinary and annoying class rep was back. My dad and my brother just went away after I explained the situation.

'Uhm...... Mayu, I think it is okay for her to stay but I don't think that she can pay for the rent. Except you want to help her pay.'

'No, I am not going to pay for her but mum can you decrease the rent just for her sake. If you want a reason that why should you decrease the price, I can give you one perfect reason. Because she is a student and you are kind to help her right?' After I finished, my mum was still in dilemma.

'Aunty, if u can't let me rent, I will try to sleep in other place.'

'Okay I have decided. You can stay here and the price is free but you have to do something in return.' Yuki and I were shocked. I didn't know my mum was that kind.

'What.... What was it?' She shuttered. I think she got the wrong idea. I bet she was thinking that my mum wanted her to sell some organ.

'Oh you can help my son Mayu to revise his work in return. As you know Mayu's result is not good enough. So please help him.' I stunned as I was going to have someone to interrupt my moment. And took away my precious freedom.

'Okay deal. I can help you with that.' No..... My precious freedom. I lost now. I am going to have a good time with this annoying girl. Now I started to regret to help her.

'Okay. Mayu bring her to her room. After that, u are going to get your punishment.' My mum said and left us there. My brother was grinning at me.

I just did what my mum order. After finish helping her, I went to my mum room to get my punishment and went to sleep as it was quite late already.

Chapter 3
The next day
'Mayu, let's go. Stop doing your homework.' Jun said. He wanted me to stop doing my homework. Normally we would not meet at lunch because they were having their lunch with their girlfriend. I was the lone guy. So I ate alone. It was unusual for me that Jun and Rena were hanging around with me in lunch break.

'Wait..... Just one more question. I will go. You can go to the roof top with Rena if you don't want to wait. You also can have some lone time with her. Isn't this one stone kill two bird?' I was doing my math homework as I didn't want to do it at home. I knew that I would not have enough time to do because my mum gave me a load of revision books to do for my punishment.

'I can't have my lone time with her if I didn't take u there.' He said desperately as I just finished my last question.

'Okay.... Okay.... Let's go. I just finished the question. So we can go now.' I put down my pencil and didn't bother to arrange the books.

We went to the rooftop together. I saw Rena sat there peacefully. The rooftop didn't have any bench. So we just can have our lunch by sitting on the floor. It is quite cool today. So I don't think it is a problem to have lunch here. When Jun saw his girlfriend, he just went to her and hugged her. As I told Jun, he should come here earlier to have their lone time.

'Mayu, why are you standing there? Aren't you going to have lunch with us.' He said while intertwining their fingers. I just walked to them and sat down to have my lunch.  They also sat down to have their lunch too.

'Waiting for you two done you business.' I just finished my sentence and I could see Rena blushed hardly. 'Anyway, why did two of you want to have lunch with me?'

'Mayu-kun, I am here to thanks for helping Yuki.' As expected, Rena would be the first one to know about this.

'What did you do, Mayu? Why must Rena thank you?' I was quite surprised that Rena hadn't told Jun about anything yet.

'Eh? Mayu didn't tell you about Yuki is living in Mayu's house now?' Jun looked like a lost puppy. It was funny to see him like that.

'It is okay. You don't have to thank me. You should thank my mum. But I have some question that I want to ask. Can I ask you?' I couldn't answer my question, I decided that I should ask Rena since she was Yuki's best friend.

 'Yes, you can.'

'Where did Yuki come from? Why is she living alone with her aunt?'

'Okay I can tell you what I know only. Yuki came from Kagoshima. She came to Tokyo to study but her mum didn't want her to come. So she decided to take the enroll exam secretly. She didn't think that she can enroll into our school by scholarship. She told her mum about this and her mum was quite angry after knowing Yuki took the enroll test secretly. Her mum didn't have any choice and let her come here. That is all I know.' After she finish explaining, I started to understand Yuki situation. I started have a pity feeling.

'Mayu, you just broke the record. This is the first time that I see Rena talk to my friend this long. Congratulation Mayu.' Suddenly, Jun talked. After he finish his sentence, he just got hit right on his face from Rena.

'Thanks for the information and the hit, Rena. I think we should go back to our class now. The bell is going to ring. Bye, I will go first!' I just left the couple because I think they should have their lone time. I also wanted to have some lone time to think something.

To be continued
Title: Re: The feeling (Mayuki)
Post by: Terragen on October 11, 2013, 12:17:18 PM
kyaaa you update this
mayu mom's were so kind...letting yuki living there free paid...just need to help with mayu's study...
and maybe somday in the future,mayu;s mom want yuki paid more...maybe she want yuki to marry her son hahahahaha
Title: Re: The feeling (Mayuki)
Post by: Archer1992 on October 14, 2013, 04:36:45 AM
nice Mayuki

please continue ASAP

Title: The feeling (Mayuki) Chapter 4
Post by: Haruto Lee on October 15, 2013, 03:57:33 PM
@Terragen: Hahaha..... Thx for the idea.

@Archer1992: thx for reading.

Okay maybe this chapter will be short......

Chapter 4
The same day
After school ended, I went back home as fast as I could because I  have a bunch of homework need to give back to my mum by tomorrow evening. After arriving, knowing that my mum would not at home. I went to my room and took a bath. Then, started to do the work. I paid all of my concentration on the work and didn't realize what time it was. Finally, I finished my burden homework or should I say punishment and I felt very tired. So, I just decided to sleep but.....

'Watanabe Mayu! Come down now. You have to eat your dinner.' My mum shouted. Seriously when did she come back if she didn't come back home, I would have some nice sleep. Having no choice. I just went down to have my dinner. When I went to the dining room. The first person I saw was my little bothersome brother. Again the irritated grinning face.

'Yo! Mayu! Where is your girlfriend?'

'She is not my girlfriend. Didn't you hear yesterday? Or are u deaf?' Feeling quite irritated with his words.

'Oh really? You took her back out of sudden. And why did you care her so much?' He was firing back. I should control my emotion better next time.

'Enough, Yuuta! Go back to your room if you have finished your dinner. You didn't improve in this semester. I hope you can improve in next term.' I smirked at him. He just went back to his room with a disapproving face.

'Mayu, Yuuta is right. Yuki didn't come back until now. Do you know where did she go?' I just realized what time is it. It was 8 at night.

'Okay. I will go and find her later. Can I have my dinner now?' After saying that, I quickly finished my dinner and went out to find her.

I went all over the place that she might be. I even called Jun to ask Rena where could she possible at as I didn't have Rena's phone number. I went all over the places but still couldn't find her. Then, I realized that I haven't go to the school to check. I went to the school. The school gate was closed. I couldn't go into the school because the guard was there and I had to know the school gate password. When I was thinking for an idea, the guard came to me and asked me why I was there. Having no choice. I told him that I just took a night walk. Then I walked away. I walked and walked. Then, I remembered there was a hole around the back of the school. So I went there and hoped that I could pass through. And finally I was in the school. I have a few wounds on my elbow which created when I was trying to crawl into the school. I didn't mind it and just walked to my classroom to check it out. Finally found her in my classroom.

'Kashi----' when I wanted to call her, I realized she was sleeping peacefully on her desk. 'How can you sleep peacefully when I was worrying about you?' I uttered out of blue but luckily she didn't wake up. I wanted to wake her up but seeing her in this  state, I just let her sleep. 'You are cute when you are sleeping, but when you are awake you are annoying. Do u know that?' I uttered as I bend forward to look carefully at her. I patted her hair smoothly as I don't want to wake her up. Then I noticed a paper underneath her. I took it out carefully and read it. 'Didn't I tell you? Just let me know what I have to do. You stupid class rep.' I just uttered out again.

Then, I decided that I should help her to finish the presentation. After finishing the presentation, I realized that it was one in the morning. I didn't expect that I would only take 3 hours to finish it. I should have help her earlier. I stretched myself and decided to go home. So I cleaned up the things and pig-backed her.After arriving home, I placed her at her own bed and covered the blanket on her. I took the presentation away because I still need to do something to the presentation. I decided to pass it up on the next day. So I stay awake whole night to do the it perfect
Title: The feeling (Mayuki) Chapter 5
Post by: Haruto Lee on October 16, 2013, 03:40:44 PM
Since I happen to have more free time so I decided to post one more chapter.

Chapter 5
'Okay, class. I have some announcement to make.' Our class teacher sudden told us in our lunch break before the class start.

'The highest mark of the presentation in our class is not Matsui Jun and Rena already. It is Watanabe Mayu and Kashiwagi Yuki. I know you must--'

'Eh??? How can come we pass up? I thought that I lost all of the information. I also can't do it finish in two days. So, I just decided to tell teacher the truth later.' Kashiwagi sudden outburst in our class and showing off her reaction. I forgot to tell her that I passed it up on Thursday. That was meant yesterday. That was why she looked surprised.

'Kashiwagi-san, can you low down your voice? The project is passed up by Watanabe-kun yesterday. Didn't you know it?' The teacher was quite mad now.

'I am sorry! I didn't inform her that I will hang up to you yesterday. So she was surprised. I am really sorry, sir.' Having no other choice. I have to apologize to the teacher.

'It is okay Watanabe. Anyway the result is changed because Watanabe and Kashiwagi's project is better and more detail than anyone here. So, I decided to change the position.' After that, the teacher went out and we continued our studies.

'Ring......' The school bell finally rang. I cleaned up my notes and prepared to go home. I was thinking that maybe I should have some fun since it was Friday.

'Hey, Mayu! Are u going home now?' Jun suddenly asked me. Looked like he wanted to invite me to somewhere.

'Yup.... Do you have a problem with that?'

'No. I thought you will go somewhere with us today. So do you want to come along?'

'Mayu! Come with us. We are going to karaoke and game center. Your mum won't scold you since today is Friday.' Rino suddenly talked. It was surprised me because I didn't realize he was there. I thought he went to look for his girlfriend.

'Who do you mean by we? Two of you? I knew Yuko have something to do today. So he is not going with you two for sure.' I asked

'No, we are going to bring our girlfriends to go.' Jun exclaimed.

'What? You are going to bring your girlfriend? Then, no thanks. Have fun with your girlfriend.' With that, I went out from the classroom. It was very embarrassing when the two of them were with their girlfriends and I am alone. But suddenly, Rino grabbed my hand. I turned to him and suddenly got hit from behind.

'Ouch.... Who the hell just hit me?' I asked furiously.

'What the hell with this scene? Do you realize two of you are doing a scene like a boyfriend is leaving his girlfriend?' Lovetan shouted madly after hitting my head. Seriously did she realize where did she hit.

'Is that so? If it is. You don't have to damage my head and brain.'

'Aika, I am sorry about the scene. Jun and I just wanted to invite Mayu to go with us. And I am absolutely not gay.' He should be apologize to me not his girlfriend. I am the one didn't do anything and got hit because of her jealousy.

'Anyway, Mayu are you going with us?' Rena asked me. She didn't fail to surprise me. I just got heart attack because of her little question.

'Aren't you guys having fun with each other?' I asked.

'Yes, we are but you can come too.' Jun said

'No thanks. I am not going if you guys are going to have your double date. Okay bye. And pls don't hit my head again. I will get brain damage.' I walked away again but this time, they didn't come and chase me back. I bet Rino was doing his explanation and Jun was too lazy or flirting with Rena.

Since I didn't have anything to do and I wanted to hang out for a while. So I decided to go to the cosmic store. I didn't go there for a whole week because of non- stop punishment. After arriving, I saw a lot of new manga. I quickly got inside and read the manga. The shopkeeper and I were friends. So, the shopkeeper don't mind me to read manga at there. When I was reading and didn't bother to know anything, the shopkeeper suddenly talked.

'Hey, Mayu! When are you going back?' The manager asked.

'Later, I want to finish this chapter.' I replied. My eye still looking at the cosmic.

'Do you know what time is now? I have to go home now. My wife is waiting for me.'

I just realized that it was 9 at night. I quickly bought the manga and rushed out. I would get scolded again. When I was sprinting, I heard someone was shouting. So, I slowed down and looked around. I realized that I was in the park that near my house. I caught sight of a drunk man was attacking a girl. I walked towards them. The drunk man didn't aware of me.

'Hey! What are you doing old man?' I shouted at the drunk man

'Go away kid! None of your business!' Still doing what he was doing.

'Too bad. I am not a kid, old man....' I smirked and kicked the man away from the girl and I realized that I knew the girl.

'How dare you touch her!' I shouted madly while kept kicking the man. The girl was still shivering. So, I decided to kick one last kick on the old man to make sure he could not move. The old man groaned out loudly after I kicked him.

I took off my jacket and I wrapped around her. I hugged the girl and tried to sooth the girl. After a long time, the girl finally recovered from the fright.

'What are you doing here, Yuki? Do you know that it is night now?' She didn't reply but just kept her head down.

'I asked one more time. What are doing in this hour?' Still didn't reply.

'Answer me. Yuki.' Suddenly I saw something dropped from her face. She was crying. I think I overdid. We could not stay at there for a long time. So I brought her home.

'Mayu! You are back? Where do you go?' My mum asked me from kitchen as she was watching the plate. I didn't bother to answer her as I was helping Yuki. She was too weak to even walk.

'I told Yuki to go out and find you. Do you see her?' She continued.

'Why did u tell her to go and find me? I have my legs to come back. If you scared that I am not safe, I am a 17-year-old guy already. So don't worry.' I stopped and shouted back at my mum. I was quite upset after knowing the reason.

'I just worried about you. What is wrong with you? How dare you shout back at me?' She came out from the kitchen angrily. She prepared to punish me but she stopped as she saw Yuki's condition.

'Did something happen to Yuki?' I didn't answer her and continued to help Yuki to her room. I am quite worried about her because she didn't say a single word.

I placed her on her bed. She still have the blank facial. After that, I came out from the room. My mum still worried about her.

'Mayu, tell me what happened!' Seeing my mum in this state was the first time that I saw. So I decided to tell her about the whole accident. When I was telling her about the accident, she was quite shocked. After telling the truth, she regretted that she let Yuki went out alone. I tried to comfort her. After a long time, she decided to have some sleep. She also told me to take care her properly.

To be continued
Title: Re: The feeling (Mayuki)
Post by: kuro808 on October 16, 2013, 05:57:20 PM
Mayu taking care of business to save Yuki :thumbsup
Title: Re: The feeling (Mayuki)
Post by: Archer1992 on October 17, 2013, 06:19:31 AM
aw!! hope they fall in love soon!!


update soon please!!
Title: Re: The feeling (Mayuki)
Post by: Wmatsui22 on October 17, 2013, 09:10:39 AM
~Hi HarutoLee-san...

~I really like this MaYuki fan fiction of yours..

~It's so cute  :inlove:

~Please do continue  :bow:
Title: Re: The feeling (Mayuki)
Post by: Konoe on October 17, 2013, 02:47:19 PM
A very reliable Mayuboy. Always helping Yuki. Hehe Yuki will definitely fall for Mayu faster if he keeps helping her.  :ding:
Title: The feeling (Mayuki) Chapter 6
Post by: Haruto Lee on October 20, 2013, 07:04:13 PM
@Archer1992: maybe they will fall in love soon

@ Wmatsui22: thanks for reading and liking this story... I still scared that I am writing something lame.  :sweatdrop:

@konoe & kuro_808: Mayu is reliable but still need Mayu to like Yuki too. It is hard to make Mayu fall.  :sweatdrop:

Sorry to make you wait. Anyway this is the next chapter.

Chapter 6
It had been a week after the accident. Yuki didn't come out from her room at all. Sometimes, I would check on her but when I went in she still the same, cuddled up on her bed. I tried to touch her but she would get scared and started to panic. It pained my heart a lot to see her in this state although I don't know why. I just knew that the more day had been the more worried I was.

'Yuki.... It is time for eating. We had porridge for you today.' I went into the her room with a tray. She was still the same sitting like a statue. I put down the tray on her table. I picked up the another tray on the table which I placed on the morning. She didn't touch the food at all. I took the tray out and went to the kitchen to wash the plate.

'Yuki still didn't eat anything?' My mum asked as she saw the full bowl of food was threw again.

'Yup.' After saying that, I left the kitchen. My mum and I were in a cold war. I still couldn't forgive her for what she had done.  Suddenly, the door bell rang. I went to open the door and checked who were there. As expected, Rena and Jun would visit Yuki as Yuki didn't go to school for a week but they haven't known anything yet as I didn't tell them.

'Hi! Mayu! We came to visit Yuki.' Jun shouted out loud which made my mum came out from the kitchen to welcome her guest.

'Jun please don't shout too loud.' Rena felt embarrassed.

'It is okay. He always like that. By the way, Yuki is not feeling not well so can you visit her in other time?' As soon as, I finished my sentence, the two of them were not in front of me anymore.

'Yo! Yuki how are you?' I heard Jun said that. I ran as fast as I could to reach Yuki's room. When I was about to reach, Jun was about to touch her

'Don't, Ju----'

'Kyaaaa..... Pls don't.... Pls don't.... Someone pls help me..... Please help me!' Yuki was shouting like there was no tomorrow. Of course, Jun and Rena were shocked who would not shock when they saw the healthy class rep became like that.

I went up to Yuki and tried to comfort her. Fortunately, this time she let me to touch her. I was quite surprised.  After a long time, she stopped crying but she still hugging me tightly. So, I told Jun and Rena who still had shock look on their faces to wait for me at the living room. They listened to me and went away.

'Yuki.... It is okay now. No one is here.' I tried to break the hug but she was hugging me even tighter. Having no choice. I just let her hug. Because of the hug, I could smell the nice scent from Yuki. It made me bush madly. My heart was thumping loudly looks like it was going to jump out of my chest. I kept on telling myself to calm down but it was useless. After a long time, Yuki started to break the hug which made me calm down a bit.

'I.... I.... Hun.... Hungry....' She was trying to tell it out properly but her throat was too dried. I went to take the food that l left on the table and gave her. I wanted to give her and ate it by herself but she was too weak to take it properly. So I had to spoon fed her.

After finishing her meal, she slept peacefully but still grabbing my hand. I tried to free myself from her grip but it was useless. After a long time, I finally freed my hand from her grip. I went out from her room and went to the living room. I saw Jun and Rena had their concerned face.

'Mayu, why you didn't tell us about it?' Jun started to ask. It seems like my mum had told them about the accident.

'Ya.... At least, we can help a bit.' Rena said

'I know..... But do you think it is okay to spread this kind of news all around? What will they see Yuki after I telling all the truth?' I explained

'At least, you can tell us what happened to Yuki. We are friends.' Jun said.

'Whatever. I just want to help Yuki. I don't want anyone to look at her with a dirty look.' I said.

'So how is Yuki now? I heard that she didn't eat at all.' Rena stated.

'Don't worry. She just had her meal. She is sleeping now. So pls don't disturb her.' I told Rena.

'Okay, we will take our leave now but we will visit Yuki again when she is stable.' With this, they left. I signed out loud but I was quite happy that Yuki started to let me touch her again. She didn't feel me as a stranger anymore. I went back to her room as I don't want her to be scared again.

Title: Re: The feeling (Mayuki)
Post by: Archer1992 on October 20, 2013, 10:57:01 PM
aw! they slowly fall in love


it was great

continue soon !!
Title: Re: The feeling (Mayuki and others) Chapter 6
Post by: Konoe on October 21, 2013, 11:29:48 AM
It caused Yuki a trauma but I'm glad she's starting to get better. Mayu is really doing a great job taking care of her.
Title: Re: The feeling (Mayuki and others) Chapter 6
Post by: chroumia on October 21, 2013, 11:43:56 AM
awesome, Mayu's finally starting to like yuki~ :heart: :heart:
thanks for updating,  it was great   XD :twothumbs
Title: Re: The feeling (Mayuki and others) Chapter 6
Post by: chiqinna on October 21, 2013, 12:01:34 PM
Hi Haruto Lee!  :)
I've been reading your fics...
simple, short but it's great story!  :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
I see that Yuki is slowly feeling comfortable with Mayu..
hope she would be better soon!
and their love started to grow~  :wub:
nice update!  :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: The feeling (Mayuki and others) Chapter 7
Post by: Haruto Lee on October 23, 2013, 05:04:19 PM
@chiqinna: I am glad that you like my sorry. I am so worried about it. Anyway thanks for reading.

@chromia & archer1992: yup Mayu is falling..... Maybe he will fall even more in the future. Anyway thx for reading.

@konoe: yup it caused trauma for Yuki. Maybe because of this something bad will happen. Lol just kidding..... Maybe she will get better with the help of Mayu. Anyway thanks for reading.

In the next few chapter, maybe I will take quite long.... So I am sorry if I am taking too long to update....

Chapter 7
'Lets go, Yuki!' Yuki backed to school after Jun and Rena's visit on that day. I was quite surprised when she finally came out from her cave but still she couldn't communicate with the others properly. Because of this, the class rep job was given to Jun.

'Uh.....' She nodded. We walked to our locker as I have to take some book to revise. When we were about to go home, Jun suddenly blocked our way.

'Hey, are you two going back already?' He asked. We just nodded in agreement as we didn't plan to go anywhere.

'Eh? Mayu didn't go anywhere on Friday. It is rare.' Rino came out of sudden. Seriously, I will get heart attack if this continued. And about the statement, it was true. I didn't go anywhere after the accident as I learnt my lesson not to go out late again or else someone would get hurt because of me.

'We are going to have fun today too. So do you want to come? Of course! Yuki can come too. I bet Rena must be very happy if you come along.' Jun said.

'Double date again? If double date, we won't go.' I said. It would feel awkward when they are doing something that couple will only do as I experienced before. I am so embarrassed.

'No! Is triple date.....' Rino smirked.

'Triple? There are another couple going with you?' I was quite confused. I thought it would be Jun, Rena, Rino and Lovetan only. When did we have the third couple in our gang?

'If you two are going, then we will have the third couple.' Jun smirked and Rino laughed. The two of us just stunned as we were trying to process what they said. Seeing this, Jun and Rino laughed even louder. Then I only realized what they meant. I smacked the two head hard. Yuki just blushed hard on her spot.

'So are you two coming with us?' Jun said while trying to catch his breath after the long laugh. But Rino still laughing and rolling on the floor as the floor was very clean. Maybe he tried to help the workers to clean the floor with his uniform.

'Hey, what did you two take so long?' I was going to say something but Lovetan suddenly interrupted and Rena was walking beside her. After saying this, Lovetan went to help Rino who was still rolling on the floor to stand up and scolded him for rolling on the floor.

'Oh hi! Yuki.' Rena said as she only saw Yuki. 'Also Mayu. Did Jun do something?' She asked as she saw Yuki's tomato red face. She still blushing the statement that the two made.

'No, I didn't say anything. I just asked them to join us but Yuki just blushed when we said about couple things.' Jun said. I wondered when did he get a drama class. He could lie to his own girlfriend without blinking.

'Yuki is joining us? Yeah! Yuki is joining us.' Rena just shouted out loud. She was really happy when she heard Yuki's name. She didn't even care her surrounding as all the passerby looked at us.

When we were seeing the excited Rena, Jun just made a sudden eye contact with me as he was trying to say something with eyes but I understand what did it mean. He really wanted us to go with them. I didn't have a choice and said yes to their invitation. Yuki seemed like it was okay with the sudden event but I still worried about her as she still in unhealthy state.

After a long time, we finally decided to go to the arcade that we usually go. We went to the school gate to wait for Jun as he had to do his class rep's job. While waiting for Jun, we saw a familiar couple passed by us.

'Isn't that Yuko?' Rino asked.  We just nodded in agreement. It was rare to see Yuko in this hour. He should be gone to somewhere.

'And why is he with a girl? Doesn't Yuko like Kojima Haruna?' Lovetan asked as she saw a girl walking beside Yuko. They looked like they were having fun.

'Don't care! just call him. YUKO!' Rino shouted at Yuko. Then, Yuko and the girl turned to face us. When we saw the girl's face, we stunned except Yuki as she didn't know who is Yuko.

'Hi! Guys!' Yuko said. He intertwined her hand with the Haruna's hand but he quickly took it off. We just smirked when we realized it.

'Guys, any problem? Who is this girl standing beside Mayu and she is grabbing Mayu's arm? Is she Mayu's girlfriend?' Yuko asked us. God! Why did they like to ask the same question in a same day. I just face palmed but Yuki 's grip was getting stronger and it was hurt.

When I looked at her, she was breaking in cold sweat. Seeing this situation. I told the others that we were going to the park that near the school and dragged her with me. After arriving the park, I just let her sit down to calm down. I even hugged her to told her that everything was fine. It became normal for me to hug her as I have to cool her down. After a long time, she finally calmed down. Just when I wanted to asked what happened, the others came.

'Yo! Mayu! And Yuki!' Looked like the others has told Yuko about Yuki. Yuki seemed like having an uneasy feeling as she backed away from Yuko and started to hold my arm again. I finally understood why Yuki was breaking in cold sweat.

'Yuki, don't worry! He won't do anything. He is my best friend, Oshima Yuko. So don't worry.' I told her. After that, she relaxed. She also loosed her grip on my arm. 'Oh yeah this is Haruna. I bet you know her already as she is a class rep too.'

'Ya.... I know Haruna senpai already. It is nice to meet you, Haruna-senpai. And also Oshima-senpai.' Yuki said.

'You can call my first name. I don't mind it at all.' Yuko said and Yuki just nodded.

'So guys can we go now?' Jun asked. We just nodded. This was going to have a lot of fun. Yuki also could relax for a while

To be continued
Title: Re: The feeling (Mayuki and others) Chapter 7
Post by: Konoe on October 24, 2013, 12:56:59 PM
I wonder for how long Yuki's trauma lasts. I don't really mind because it only means she can only cling to Mayu and spend more quality time with Mayu :D 
Title: Re: The feeling (Mayuki and others) Chapter 7
Post by: gek geki on October 25, 2013, 03:25:12 AM
More more mayuki
Title: Re: The feeling (Mayuki and others) Chapter 7
Post by: imteedee on October 25, 2013, 09:22:15 AM
wow Mayu baby is so sweet here  :wub: Yuki's so lucky having him and he's quite a geek actually LOL it's okay if they're so taking time realizing their feelings, it's worth the wait anyway  :lol:

I like it! Waiting for your updates Haruto Lee  :) I'm still quite shocked I missed 6 chapters without realizing it.... errm  :nervous
Title: Re: The feeling (Mayuki and others) Chapter 7 (reply)
Post by: Haruto Lee on October 27, 2013, 04:48:04 PM
@ konoe: maybe long enough for them to be together. This is just a maybe. Anyway, thx for reading

@ geki geki: don't worry there will be a lot of mayuki scene. Thx for reading

@ imteedee: imteedee you just scared me with your post about you are leaving. I am glad that you are still around. Uhm...... You didn't realize my post? Maybe I should do something for you to know about it. And about Mayu being a geek.... I didn't even realize that :nervous and thx for reading

Sorry I am just going to reply for this time. And if I made you wait, I am sorry. I will post next chapter in Wednesday. So be patience with me
Title: Re: The feeling (Mayuki and others) Chapter 7 (reply)
Post by: Haruto Lee on October 30, 2013, 04:31:45 PM
Okay.... As promised, I will post today.....

Chapter 8
The same day
After we arrived the arcade, we were separated in two groups. One was boys and the another one was girls. The girls went to..... I didn't really know where they went because they just went away and had fun by themselves when we arrived here. The boys, our group didn't bother to know so we just went to have some fun by ourselves.

'Wow.... Mayu where is your power? How can you lose this easy?' Rino asked.

'Excuse me..... How many weeks I didn't come here? How am I suppose to keep my record?' I asked him back.

'You didn't come here for only three weeks not three decades. And your record is 14 mins. This is getting the world rec----'

'Wow... Yuki is good in this game.' Haruna sudden interrupt Rino. The others also had a same look as Haruna except Rena. We were quite curious what was about. So we went to see what happened. When we arrived, we just let our jaw dropped off.

'This is not ordinary good.... You can win the world record although I didn't know how much is it. Right Mayu?' Asked Rino. I didn't answer him as I still starring at the screen. Who can play such a high score in this music rhythm game?

'Mayu???' Yuki said. She looked at me as I still didn't answer Rino. 'Did anything happen?' This time I didn't stare at the screen. I stared at her. So she felt uneasy from my stare.

'Hey, Yuko! You must pay back. You lost the bet. Pay me!' Jun suddenly shouted.

'Wait! I didn't promise anything. You are the one made the bet.' Yuko said. We paid our attention to them as they were walking towards us. I just realized the two of them went away while Rino and I were playing the racing game.

'No, you bet that I can't get the girl attention but I got the girl's attention. You are the one didn't get the girl attention. So play fair. Pay back!' As soon as Jun finished his sentences. We could feel very dark and scary aura from two girls, Rena and Haruna. The four of us were sweat dropping but Jun and Yuko didn't realize or should I say didn't bother to notice about it. We backed away slowly from them as we scared the explosion of the girls. When Jun and Yuko finally aware that they were in trouble, it was too late as the girls started to attack the boys. They were shouting for help but we just shrugged our shoulder and wanted to go away as soon as possible. When we wanted to going off, we realized something......

'Wait.... Why is Haruna jealous? She is not Yuko's girlfriend or something.' Lovetan asked.

'Are you guys stupid? Nyannyan and I became couple few weeks ago!' Yuko answered while still running away from Haruna. After saying his statement, we went to them and congratulated them. Well, the two jealous girlfriend seem to forget their own boyfriends's deed. Jun and Yuko were lucky for this time or else..... I also couldn't imagine what would be.

'Why don't we celebrate Yuko's success?' Jun asked us. We agreed with the idea immediately as we didn't have any celebration for a long time.

'Wait.... Who will pay the bill?' Yuko asked.

'Of course! The one who just has his own girlfriend few weeks ago.' Jun answered.

'What!? I will bankrupt.... Pls spare me.' Yuko begged.

'No one will. Do you remember what did you do to us when we have our girlfriends. You made us pay the bill. It costed over hundred dollar. So you have to do the same thing.' Jun said. Still remember his own past.

'Not fair. Mayu also just had his girlfriend. Why didn't he pay too?' Yuko said. I just realized that I didn't introduced Yuki properly to Yuko. That was why he confused.

'When did he has a girlfriend? Who is his girlfriend?' Jun, Rena, Lovetan and Rino asked at the same time. As for Yuki, she was dumbfounded standing there. As for me, I didn't bother to reply anything. I just felt tired to answer the same question.

'Isn't Yuki? Yuki always hold Mayu. Mayu also always care for Yuki. So I thought they are couple. And one more, they look like a perfect couple. It is hard to believe they are not couple.' Haruna said. As soon as Haruna finish, Yuki blushed. Sometimes I wondered why she could blush that easily.

'They are not couple. Mayu just like a protection for Yuki when something happen. Although they look perfect, they are not couple.' Jun explained.

'Then, why is Yuki blushing?' Yuko asked. Suddenly silence kicked in. No one knew how to answer this question including me and Yuki.

'Anyway aren't we going to celebrate?' I asked them. I decided to ignore the question since no one know how to answer. They also didn't bother to answer it. Maybe later we will know the answer.

Then, we started to walk to our destination. I saw Rena and Jun's smirk out of sudden in our way to the restaurant that Rino recommended. Seem like they understand something about the question. I was curious but Yuki was beside me. I didn't want to make her worry. So I have to let it go for once. We finally arrived the restaurant. It was a maid cafe. Still expected from our wota friend. We celebrated Yuko's success in one of the room. Of course, Yuko was crying but not because of happiness because he was going to bankrupt.

'Hey! Yuko! How did you confess? I remembered that we helped you before but you ruined it.' Jun asked. I just remembered that how we helped him to confess and how he ruined in one second. He was a coward after all. He didn't confess in the last second and just ran away from the scene, such a waste.

'Well! It was an incident. I accidentally blurted out my feelings when she was helping me to treat my wound.' Yuko said. We mentally face palmed to his stupidity. Luckily, the girls didn't hear it if not they would laugh at him.

Then, we continued enjoyed ourselves with the girls. Of course, sometimes they would do something lovey dovey in front of me and Yuki. They just couldn't control themselves for a single second. In one time, they overdid. So, I just dragged Yuki out of the room. After we were out of the restaurant, we realized that it was 7 at night. I suddenly remembered something or should I said a place that I wanted to show Yuki. I dragged her there. It was a park that near the school but no one knew about it. I just lie at there. She was sitting beside me.

'Ano..... Mayu? Why did you bring me to this park? Aren't we suppose to go home?' Yuki asked. I just gave her my jacket as I realized it was colder right now. 'Why are you giving me your jacket?'

'Just lie down beside me. And for the jacket, wear it. You will get cold if you don't wear it.' I answered her. She still hesitated to take my jacket but after a while, she took it. Then she lie down beside me.

'Wow.....' She said as she saw the night sky was beautiful. We could see the star properly too. I even start to compete with her about the star name.

'Amazed? This park is quite beautiful but no one came here. It is still a good thing that no one came. If not, this scenery is going to damage.' I said. She still amazed. 'I come here when I have some problems. This place can help me to relax. Of course I will come here when I was free as I can take photos although I am not good on taking pictures. Anyway I hope you will like it.'

'Thanks for bringing me to this place. It is really relaxing. Thanks Mayu!' She said. She smiled while looking at the sky. The smile was beautiful. I could even feel my heartbeat. It feel like starting to skip a beat. I didn't know why but I started to like her smile.

'Yuki.... You should smile like that more often. It is beautiful.' I whispered while intertwining our hands. She just blushed. I could feel warm from her hand. After a long time, we realized that we had to go home. When I was about to stand up, I suddenly felt a wet and yet warm feelings on my cheek. Then, I realized that it was her lips. She kissed my cheek. I could feel that all the heat went to my face and my heart was thumping loud again. After a few second, she broke the kiss and went ahead. I quickly followed her. Now I started to wonder what was the feeling that I always felt when I was with her. It felt like I wanted to protect everything of her no matter what.
To be continued
Title: Re: The feeling (Mayuki and others) Chapter 8
Post by: Konoe on November 02, 2013, 08:14:46 AM
Ehehehe. The last part is the best. :shy1: :shy2: :luvluv2:
Title: Re: The feeling (Mayuki and others) Chapter 8
Post by: FairyNyan on November 02, 2013, 01:39:02 PM
Finally update  :cow:

i can sense love i sense it (?) .. nevermind..

update ASAP  :twothumbs
Title: Re: The feeling (Mayuki and others) Chapter 8
Post by: Archer1992 on November 02, 2013, 02:39:15 PM
omg!! i have diabetes!! after i read this chapter

but i dont care is so cute!!!

thanks and continue soon!
Title: Re: The feeling (Mayuki and others) Chapter 8
Post by: imteedee on November 02, 2013, 10:36:06 PM
I was blushing hard cause of Mayu and suddenly I saw FairNyan's avatar HAHAHAHAHA OMG!  :lol: OH  SH*T!  XD Haruto, sorry for that  :bow: thought of finishing all my fics first if ever I decide to retire for good  :nervous Anyway, there're already plenty of MaYuki writers nowadays so I can sitback oredi  :jphip:

great chapter! Mayu fell already!  :twisted: all we need is just for Yuki to grab him  :lol:
Title: Re: The feeling (Mayuki and others) Chapter 9
Post by: Haruto Lee on November 07, 2013, 03:17:13 PM
@ FairyNyan: love? Yes... There is but Mayu is too dumb to realize it....  :nervous And thx for reading...

@ Archer1992: diabetes?! Maybe I should put less sweet..... Lol anyway thx for reading

@ Konoe: only the last part? :cry: :cry: just kidding...... Anyway thx for reading

@ imteedee: don't you dare to retire..... You are a great writer..... So pls don't retire. Back to story, Lol....

Sorry for keeping you guys wait. I planned to post earlier but because of Kate's new story attracted me and I forgot to post.... I am such a failure..... It is really nice the story.... I couldn't stop reading.... Anyway, here is the new update...

Chapter 9
'Acchoo......' The sneezing suddenly sounded in a dead silent room. And the dead silent room was my room. I got cold after that night. It was not a problem for me as I just had to lie on my bed and my mom would help me to buy the medicine. But....... She was not at home. My parents went to a business trip on that night. Now, the only people in the house were Yuki and me. Yuuta would live the school dorm until my parents came back. It didn't a matter if he lived here or not. He wouldn't help me too. So, this was a totally nightmare...... 'Achooooooo.......' Again.....

'Mayu..... Are you okay?' Yuki asked. She was standing beside the door. I didn't answer her. I just thought that she didn't knock again. 'Mayu..... When are you going to be better. It had been four days. You didn't go to school too. It is hard for me.....' She said while walking toward me.

'You know.... You are getting better... You should go back to class rep job. You are annoying as before.' I said while trying to sit up.

'No.... I am not going... Finally I could take off the burdens.... It is really annoying for me.' She said while trying to let me lie down back. I just followed her instruction. 

'Aren't you going to late for school? Still standing here. Quick.' Although I said it, she still didn't move. 'Don't worry. I can take care of myself.' Then, I just pushed her out of the room. I knew that she didn't get better from the trauma but I still wanted her to try to take care of herself as I want the lively Yuki not this one. After she left, I went back to sleep.

After a long time, I woke up from the sleep. I checked the time from my watch. It was just noon. Yuki wouldn't back until 3 today. I had to prepared my lunch by myself today. If not, she would get scolded again as she tried to come out from school and delivered lunch for me. I just chuckled when I thought about the scene. Such a stupid girl. I went to kitchen as I couldn't sleep whole day and die of hungers. I prepared porridge and ate it. After finishing, I realized that it was 2.30. So I went out to have a surprise for Yuki.

When I was at the school gate, it was time that the school ended. A lot of student rushed out from the gate. It was quite chaos. Then I saw Yuki. She was rushing out too. Maybe she thought that I wouldn't eat if she was not around. But it was funny to see her like that. After a while, I decided to call her. When I was about to call her, she bumped into someone. The person didn't even help her and just walked away. I just felt my blood was boiling in anger but no point to angry. So, I walked towards Yuki.

'How clumsy can you be?' I said while helping her to pick up her books. She just starred at me with wide eyes. 'Are you going to stare at me for the whole day? Or am I too handsome so you can't stop?' After saying that, I gave her books back and help her to stand back up.

'Why are you doing here? You are still sick.' She was still blushing but she tried to ignored it and asked me random question. She touched my forehead. She retracted her hand quickly as my forehead was as hot as a boiling water. I think I am that sick.

'Can't I have a walk? I am sick of house. How about go to somewhere with me again?'

'Again? But you are still si-----' I didn't let her finish her sentence and dragged her to the park that I had showed her. 'Hey! You had to go home. You are a patient but still that energetic. How can you have that much energy? Aren't you sick?' She shouted. I didn't bother to answer her but dragged her until I reached there.

Then, I just laid done under a tree. It was quite refreshing. The gentle wind hit my face. Yuki just sat down beside me. Her back was leaning against the tree trunk. Her hair would flow with the wind. It was quite beautiful.

'Mayu??? Why are your face so red? Does the fever get higher?' She asked and touched my forehead again. I just realized that I was starring at her and blushing. What's wrong with me? This didn't happen before. 'Mayu.... Let's go... Your fever seemed like getting higher. We should go home now.' She said and tried to pull me up but I didn't want to move so I just stay at the position. 'Mayu..... Please.... Let's go..... I don't want you to faint here. If you faint, how am I suppose to do?' She said with her worried face. I didn't do anything but just kissed her forehead told her that I am okay. Then, I laid down again but this time I put my head on her lap. I didn't know why am I doing this but I just followed my heart. I could see her blushing but I didn't care.

'Hey, Yuki.... Do you know? There is a pond in this park. It is beautiful. Do you want to see it?' I asked her.

'Really? Why don't we go and check it out?' She asked. She was just too excited about it. I agreed about the plan and she was so happy. When I was about to stand up, I suddenly felt that the world was spinning so fast. I could not even see properly. Then suddenly, darkness kicked in slowly. I could only hear that Yuki kept shouting my name but I don't have any strength to response her.

Finally, I could open my eyes but I realized that I wasn't at the park anymore. I was in my room. When did I get in? When I was about to move my hands, I felt a weight on my hand. I realized that Yuki was sleeping soundly with her head down on the bed but her hand was grabbing mine. What a way to fall asleep? I stroked her hair softly. Suddenly, someone opened the door without knocking. It freaked me out as I thought no one is in the room. It was Jun. When he saw the situation, he just smirked. I really wondered what did he know but I don't.

'Finally.... You woke up..... Did you know how long you have faint? Yuki was so worried.' He said still keeping his smirk. It was irritated for me. I shifted my lying position to sitting position. So that, I could talk to Jun properly.

'So how long? I don't think I had been sleeping one whole day right?'

'Exactly.... You were sleeping and Yuki was worrying. Yuki had been sleeping in this awkward position for a night. I tried to convince her but she won't listen to me.' He said. Then, I just realized that I really slept for a whole day. But luckily my fever had gone. Because of our noise, Yuki woke up from her slumber. After a while for stretching her sore muscle, she finally looked at my position. In that moment, her sleepy eye shifted to a surprised and shocked eyes. I chuckled at her reaction. It was so funny. Suddenly, she hugged me tightly. Of course I was surprised.

'Mayu.... Mayu..... You really woke up?' She said. Jun just stood at the same position and smirked. Seriously I had to ask why.

'Yup.... I woke up.... Don't worry.....' I hugged her back. It felt so warm when I felt her by my side. My heart started pumping loud again. I really wonder why I had this weird pumping rhythm.

'Ehem......' Jun suddenly broke the atmosphere that had in this room. The both of us were looking at him. Yuki then only realized Jun's presence. She quickly stood back up and blushed. I just chuckled again. 'Ehem..... Yuki, Rena is preparing the dinner. You can go and help her. I have something to tell Mayu.' After saying that, she left the room. The room only had Jun and me.

'So what do you want to say?' I asked him as he said.

'No... I just wanted to know what happened to the cyborg Mayu. You have a lot of emotion when Yuki is around you. Do you know that?' He said and sat at the chair that Yuki sat earlier.

'Really? Sorry I didn't realize. Maybe I should stop having this much of emotions.'

'No..... No.... Is a good thing that you finally opened up to someone although it is quite weird for you.'

'Okay..... Actually what is the point?'

'Nothing....' He paused for a while. Then, continued again where he left off. 'Mayu, can I ask one more question again?' I just nodded. 'What do you feel when Yuki is around you?' Wow.... This was quite straight to the point but I think I could answer it.

'Uhm.... Not sure. Sometimes annoying...... But most of the time, I felt relaxed. And very happy when she was around. I don't know how to explain but it is quite weird. This happiness that I felt is different from the others. Anyway why do you ask?' It was quite weird to ask this type of question. What did jun want to know?

'Nothing... Just felt like to ask.' He said. 'Lets go. I bet the dinner is ready. Oh.... Before I forget, Rena and I are going to have our dinner here until your parents are back. And don't ask why.' As soon as he finished his sentence, he disappeared to the dining room. I think my mum had an order for him already. I stood up from the bed and went to bath. After finishing, I went to the dining room. When I was about to enter......

'No! No...... It is not what you think.' Yuki suddenly shouted. I startled up a bit as the sudden loud voice.

'Oh.... Really? Don't you feel it?' Jun asked. Although I didn't see Jun, I can feel his smirk.

'Feel about?' I asked them as I finally entered the dining room. I just saw Yuki was blushing madly when she saw me. And for the couple, they laughed when they saw Yuki's reaction. 'So feel about?'

'Nothing..... Nothing..... Hahaha......' Jun answered but still laughing like there isn't going to have tomorrow. I just starred at the laughing couple with 'what the heck are you two laughing about?' face. 'Okay.... Okay... Let's eat our dinner....' Jun said, still trying to catch his breath.

After our dinner, Jun and Rena took their leave. Before they went away, they whispered something to Yuki and made her blushed again. When I asked what happened, the couple just laughed and went away. Yuki was blushing and went away to her room and left me on the doorway. Seriously what were they talking about. I think I had to ask Jun personally one day.

Sorry I just find out that this chapter is not that sweet. But I think it is okay as I don't hope some of you get diabetes.....

Title: Re: The feeling (Mayuki and others) Chapter 9 NEW UPDATE
Post by: imteedee on November 07, 2013, 07:49:23 PM
MAYU! YOU'RE DOOMED!  :lol: c'mon spill it!  XD almost there~
Title: Re: The feeling (Mayuki and others) Chapter 9
Post by: Konoe on November 09, 2013, 01:08:47 PM
@ Konoe: only the last part? :cry: :cry: just kidding...... Anyway thx for reading

The scene at the park is very cute but Yuki finally making a move made a bigger impact on me. XD

Anyway, chapter 9  :ding: It's Mayu's turn to be taken care of.

Did Yuki already realized she loves Mayu? :hehehe: She is easily teased by the Wmatsui couple, I hope so.
Title: Re: The feeling (Mayuki and others) Chapter 9 NEW UPDATE
Post by: Chanaline on November 09, 2013, 01:38:50 PM
Mayu!!! :angry: Don't you feel something to Yuki???

Aw Yuki is so cute :D
Title: Re: The feeling (Mayuki and others) Chapter 9 NEW UPDATE
Post by: MayuxMatsuixMusic on November 10, 2013, 04:35:26 PM
mayuki is the best!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
this is amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Title: Re: The feeling (Mayuki and others) Chapter 10
Post by: Haruto Lee on November 15, 2013, 04:27:43 PM
@ MayuxMatsuixMusic: thank god that you like it. And mayuki always is the best! Thx for reading.

@ Chanaline: finally you wrote some comment. I did see you thank you but I was waiting for you to write something. And about Mayu, he is dumb that he haven't realize yet. And thx for reading.

@ Konoe: I thought the park scene is not that good but thx for liking it. I wanted to make Yuki take care of Mayu as I found out that Mayu always take care Yuki. It is Yuki's turn to take care.And this is the result. I don't know whether it is good or not. I still hope you like it. About Yuki realized her feeling. You will see in this chapter. And lastly and as always, thx for reading.

@ imteedee: ummmm..... About that, I don't want to let Mayu to realize first but he will realize later. And thx for reading.

Chapter 10
'Okay class remember to revise this chapter. This chapter is very important for the upcoming test. And remem-------' 'Ring............' The school bell interrupted our chemistry teacher. 'And remember TO BE CAREFUL IN YOUR EXAM!!!!!!' He shouted the last part as some of my classmate rushed out already. After he went out, I packed my things and walked to Yuki's seat which was in front of me.

'Yuki! Let's go! I have to go to the market today.' I called her, still putting some books into my backpack properly. After some times, I realized that she didn't reply or move. Then, I walked in front of her. The moment I saw her face, I was shocked. Her jaw dropped off to the floor. Her face was pure white. She was completely in her shock mode. After some times, she recovered from her shock mode and started to scream.

'Ah!!!!!! Ah!!!! When is the exam? No one told me about it. I am going to fail. I am going to fail. Ah!!!!!' She was screaming and jumping around. Of course not because of excitement, she was afraid. Luckily, no one was in the classroom except us or else the others would laugh at her.

'Can you stop screaming? The others will think that I rape you!' After I shouted, she finally stopped shouting but shivering. Having no choice. I went up to her and hugged her. 'Why? Why do you scare of exams?' I asked her. I could feel her hugging me back. She didn't answer. She just let her head rested on my shoulder. I just hugged her and waiting for her reply. After a long times, someone opened the classroom door.

'Oppps..... Looks like a couple is here. Rena, I think we should go to somewhere else.' Jun said and he was smirking. I also could hear Rena's giggles. I could feel Yuki jumped up a bit.

'Uhmmm..... The classroom is a good place to study but there is a couple in. I guess we have no choice. We have to choose another place. What a waste.' Rena said. After that, she and Jun walked out of the room. 'Oh ya..... Before I forget, good luck in your exam, Yuki!' she looked back at us and said before they went away.

'Wait..... Rena!!!!!' I shouted at them before they went off as I have something to ask.

'Yes??????' Jun and her turned and looked at us.

'Do you know why Yuki is acting like this?' I asked them.

'Yes.... I know but before I tell you. Can you just let Yuki go?' She said and walking back to us and sat on one of the chair while Jun was standing beside her. I tried to let go but I couldn't. If I tried to separate us, Yuki will hold tighter.

'Oh.... Looks like Yuki don't want to let go. I think we have to face the situation, Rena. I think you should just tell Mayu.' Jun suddenly said. I felt irritated as Jun was smirking again. As for Rena, she was giggling.

'HOW CAN I LET GO? THE TWO OF YOU MUST BE LAUGHING AGAIN!' Yuki suddenly shouted. I jumped up a bit when she suddenly shouted. I think I should find a doctor or a specialist to check my ear if there is a problem. Before I realized it, the couple were laughing like maniac.

'Hahaha..... How can we stop....... laughing when you are..... Are acting like this? It is so funny! Hahahahaha!!!!!' Jun said while laughing. I just sweat-dropped with their reaction.

'Hahahaha...... Seriously this is so funny. Especially when we know about your feeling towards..... Nothing!!!!! Hahahahaha!!!!!!' Rena said

'Mou..... Stop laughing!' She finally let go of me and turned to Rena. I finally knew why she didn't want to let go. She was blushing deeply. 'Rena stop blabbering about the nonsense. I can't let him know about it.' She whispered the last part. So I could barely hear about it. As for the couple, they heard Yuki, so they laughed even more. After a long time, they finally stopped laughing and sat on a chair.

'Sorry for the laughing. I will explain why does Yuki scared of exam now. As you know, Yuki took the scholarship to enroll in. Wha------' 'Wait...... How did Mayu know about it? And why did I need you to help me to explain the situation? I can explain to Mayu by myself.' Yuki suddenly interrupted Rena. She was still blushing but trying to fight it off. I just realized that Yuki didn't know that I knew a bit about her family and history. Because of some information that Rena gave. I was able to cope the situation of Yuki. So, she was scared to fail her result and couldn't get a scholarship. If she couldn't get a scholarship, she would back to Kagoshima. After thinking about Yuki's situation, i looked at them. I just realized that they didn't even bother to explain. They were just arguing about their own stuff. Instead of saying arguing, I should say teasing. The couple was teasing Yuki and made her blushed badly. I just had my bored look at them but it was still fun to see this Yuki. After a long time, they finally finished their teasing.

'Wow..... It is 6 already. We had been teasing Yuki for 3 hours. Rena, we had broke the record.' Jun said happily. 'And Mayu is going to fall asleep.'

'Yup! I am going to fall asleep. Thanks to your teasing. I am so bored here and I can't go to the market. How are we going to have our dinner?'

'Easy.... We will just have our dinner in a random restaurant or cafe.' Jun said. The other two girls also agreed with the idea. So I just followed the crowd and agreed with the idea. After arriving the restaurant, we ordered our dinner and we had some discussion about the exam. Yuki was busy to take the important part down. After eating our dinner, Jun and Rena had something to do so they decided to go off earlier. Before they left, Rena whispered something to me.

'Take care of Yuki.... She will overwork when the exam come. I will leave her to you. So pls take care of her.' She whispered. I just nodded. Then she went away with Jun. After a while, we also left the restaurant. We went back home as Yuki said that she wanted to have some revise before the exam come and for god sake, we will only have our exam after a month. She was too worried about the exam.

After that day, Yuki always revise her studies until late midnight. This was going on two weeks already. So everyday, I would see a half dead zombies is standing in front of me. I had told her about it but she was too stubborn and didn't listen to my advise. The most annoying part was Rena would keep telling me to take care of Yuki, almost everyday.

'Yuki, let's go! We will only have 15 mins to have our lunch.' Rena said but Yuki didn't move an inch again. I felt something was wrong as Yuki would not ignore her friend like that. So, I walked towards her and touched her shoulder a bit. When I touched her, she just fell down from her chair. I was surprised. The others who were in our class were surprised or shocked too. I bent down and hold her. Then I only realized that she was having high fever. Her body was hot as boiling water. I didn't think much and I carried her in my arms. I rushed out to the infirmary room. After the nurse checked on her, she told me that she over stressed herself and this was not the first time that she was sent here in that situation. She also told me that she will wake up in no time. After that, she went away and left us in the room. I sat down beside of the bed which had a chair.

'Haizzzzz.... Why don't you listen to me for a while?' I asked while stroking her hair. 'You really have a beautiful features. Do you kn----?'

'Mayu!!!!!!! How is Yu-----' Rena suddenly banged into the infirmary room. 'I am sorry if I interrupted.' She said. I was quite confused. Then I only aware that my face  was only a few centimeter in front of Yuki's. I quickly sat back properly and blushed.

'Mayu, can I ask you something?' Rena asked again. I just nodded. Then she continued to ask. 'What do you feel when Yuki is around you?' I just starred at her. Why did she ask the same question that Jun asked? I didn't want to answer her but when I looked back at her, she was waiting for my answer. So, I just gave her the same answer that I gave Jun. After hearing my answer, she was shocked. 'What? You are in---- mmmph.... Mmm...' Jun suddenly closed her mouth with his hand.

'Yo! Mayu! How is Yuki?' Jun asked. Rena was struggling to break the grip. I could see that Jun couldn't hold her for a long time anymore. 'Sorry! I just remember that I have something to do. Bye!' With that, they rushed out of the room. After some times, Yuki woke up from her sleep. She rubbed her eyes and let her eye adjust the light. I just chuckled at the sight because it was so cute.

'What are you laughing at?' She asked, still rubbing her eyes but I didn't answer. 'How long did I faint again?' She finally sat properly and talked to me.

'Again? I am surprised that you can say that easily. Looks like you are a famous patient here.' I answered her.

'I knew that I would faint anytime.....' She said like there is no problem for her faint like that.

'You know? Then why don't you stop with that behavior?'

'I can't sleep when the exam come. And how could I sleep well after the accident?' She said while her voice slowly faded. She just gave me a sad smile. I suddenly felt guilt. I didn't know that she couldn't sleep well after the accident. 'Anyway, let's go home now. I still have to study.' She said. I just nodded and went back with her. On the way of going home, I remembered that a place could help her to release her stress. So I just dragged her with me. She was surprised when I suddenly dragged her. She also asked where are we going but I didn't answer her. Finally I reached there.

'Amusement park? Why are we coming here? Mayu..... Don't play! I still have to study!' She said angrily. I didn't care about her question and bought us tickets. 'Hey answer me!' Still angry with my behavior. I didn't bother to answer and I just dragged her in. Suddenly, she broke the grip and slapped me. 'Mayu! I already had enough with your strange behavior today. I didn't mind you to drag me anywhere but can you at least tell me where or why....' She said while sobbing.

'I am sorry..... But can you let me do something for you? This is only place that I can think to help you. Sorry.... Sometimes I will have my strange behavior. Pls bear it.....' I said while walking towards her and hugged her to soothe her cries. Seeing her like this is the last thing I would do. After for a while, she finally stopped crying. 'So what do you want to play first?' She didn't say anything. So I just brought her there. When I brought her there, her eyes were as wide as a mirror. I wanted to hold my laugh but I couldn't. So I giggled a bit.

'Are we going to play that?' She said and pointed at the roller coster with her wide eyes. Seeing her like this, I laughed out loud and she pouted. I didn't aware the worker approached until Yuki tugged my sleeves. I stopped laughing and wiped my tears away to have a look in front of me. I saw the worker. The worker asked us whether we were going to ride. I realized that we were blocking the way. We gave our apologies to the others which had their irritated faces and sat on the seats. After fasten the safety belt, Yuki suddenly grabbed my hand tightly.

'Are you really that scare of this?' She just nodded. 'Don't worry..... Just shout out when you are scared. I am here.' I said and smiled to her. She just blushed. I was quite happy that I could see her relaxed again. As we were too focusing on each other, we didn't realize that the car was on the high part. When we realized, it was too late. Yuki and I were screaming. Why was I screaming?  I am not scare of roller coaster. But why? It was because of Yuki. She grabbed my hand until it was bleeding. My mind only registered the pain not the fun. After the ride was over, we went to have seats on a bench. I couldn't believe it. She could grabbed hand until it was bleeding continuously. When she saw it, she apologized continuously. I took out my handkerchief and wrapped it.

'So what do you want to play now?' I asked her. I couldn't let the wound to ruin the fun. She was quite surprised. 'Don't worry....' After I saying this, she dragged me to somewhere. When we arrived, my face just went pale. This is the last game. I would even had. It was haunted house.

'Can I? I want to visit this for a long time. So can I?' She asked. I still couldn't answer her. I was afraid of haunted house. Why? Why she had to choose this? 'Don't tell me that you are scare?' She suddenly said and smirked.

'Of course not! Why was I afraid of something like this?' Trying to act brave. She just smirked and dragged me in. In the way, I just shouted and cried. She just laughed. What a kind-hearted woman? After we came out, my face was as pale as a paper. She still laughing.

'Haha.... I know..... Mayu's weakness! Haha.....' She said while laughing. I just pouted at her. 'Cute...' She whispered while clearing her tears. I just blushed heavily when I heard her word. After seeing my reaction, she was quite confused. Then she only realized what she said, she also blushed. It was quite awkward but we decided to ignore it and continued have fun. We played until evening. Then I brought her to a park in the amusement park to have some rest. It was located on the highest location and it was quite secluded when came to evening.

'Wow.... It is beautiful here. The sunset is beautiful.' She said while watching the sunset.

'That's why.... I brought you here. I wouldn't bring you to a place that is useless.'

'No you just brought.' I was confused. 'I meant here. Why would you take me to an amusement park when the exam is coming?' She asked.

'Don't you feel relax?' I asked her. Then she realized that she just took out the huge burden after all the screaming and fun.

'Thanks.....' She said and smiled. We didn't say anything until the sun was completely lost and the nights came. I was about to call her to tell her that we had to go home before Jun and Rena scold but when I turned, I felt something on my lips. Then I only realized that her lip was on mine. I could see her face properly in this state. She was really a beauty. She opened her eyes as she felt something weird. When she realized, she was shocked but didn't move. We stayed at position for a long time. After that, we broke the kiss. We were blushing as red as a tomato.

'I am sorry... I didn't mean it. I just planned to kiss your cheek.' She bowed and apologized.

'It is okay.....' I said while looking at other way and scratching my head.

'Let... Let's go home.' With that, she walked away. Seeing her back, I felt something weird in me. A part of me didn't want to break the kiss, wanted to kiss her even more. I didn't know why but I just felt that way.
Title: Re: The feeling (Mayuki and others) Chapter 10 NEW UPDATE
Post by: olive29 on November 15, 2013, 04:52:23 PM
Mayuki's accidental kiss...  :inlove: :inlove:
Title: Re: The feeling (Mayuki and others) Chapter 10 NEW UPDATE
Post by: mikaellitsa on November 15, 2013, 06:45:55 PM
ya ya ya mayuki kiss  :love: somone fall in love here  8)
Title: Re: The feeling (Mayuki and others) Chapter 10 NEW UPDATE
Post by: Konoe on November 16, 2013, 07:45:00 AM
Wmatsui is totally having fun teasing Yuki. :lol:

Mayu is giving Yuki too many hugs. :heart: Yuki is obviously enjoying and cherishing that. :D

Fluffy~ :nya:
Title: Re: The feeling (Mayuki and others) Chapter 10 NEW UPDATE
Post by: chroumia on November 19, 2013, 12:03:13 PM
OMG this is just so .!! Fuwa fuwaaa !  :inlove:  :inlove:  :inlove:
Title: Re: The feeling (Mayuki and others) Chapter 10 NEW UPDATE
Post by: MayuxMatsuixMusic on November 20, 2013, 01:02:45 PM
 my heart exploded because of this!!!!!!!!!! :farofflook: :gyaaah: :frustrated: :farofflook: :hee: :hehehe:
i love this!!!!!!!!!!!!!
oh yeah!!!!!!!!!!
arigatou gozaimashita for this wonderful story!! :kneelbow: :kneelbow:
Title: Re: The feeling (Mayuki and others) Chapter 10 NEW UPDATE
Post by: Chanaline on November 20, 2013, 05:34:29 PM
Oh  :O !!!!

Want the next!!!

An accident kiss  :wub:

More Mayuki moment like that youhouuuuuu!!!

And sorry for not commenting before XD I thought I would bother you  :sweatdrop:
Title: Re: The feeling (Mayuki and others) Chapter 12 finally UPDATED!
Post by: Haruto Lee on November 25, 2013, 11:05:24 AM
@ Chanaline: no.... You are not bothering me.... I hope u can comment like the others. About Mayuki moment..... :nervous in this chapter I can't guarantee about that....  :nervous and thx for reading

@ MayuxMatsuixMusic: heart exploded?  :shocked: I think I should make mayuki moment lesser.... Just kidding! Thx for reading and thx for liking my fanfic although it is lame  :nervous

@ chroumia: hahaha... Thx for reading...

@ Konoe: Wmatsui wanted to push Yuki harder but they forgot about Mayu. They wanted Yuki to confess but Yuki is afraid. Can't help.... Mayu gave too many hugs? Because I only can think the way to calm Yuki down. Sorry  :nervous and thx for reading.

@ Mikaellitsa: hahaha.... They sure will fall in love and thx for reading.

@ olive29: is it your first comment in this fanfic? I forgot....  :nervous looks like the kiss caught a lot of attention. Haha.... Maybe they will kiss more often later. And thx for reading.

Sorry for taking so long to post a new update. I didn't feel like post this.... :nervous actually I planned to post an one-shot first since this is ready first. Then I will post this first. Maybe later I will post the one shot. Oh.... And I have a new tumblr account. Took me long enough to know how to use... I am technology failure... And thx for waiting....


Chapter 11
It was a peaceful morning. No sound, no movement and more importantly NO school. This was a rare situation for me. I was sleeping on my bed and the sun already rose for a long time. I didn't care it as I only want was sleeping. 'Ding dong........' The doorbell suddenly rang. I didn't plan to wake up as I knew the person would go in no time or Yuki would get the bell. 'Ding dong.....' The person rang the bell again. I covered my ears with my pillow to block the sound from disturbing my sleep. 'Ding dong..... Ding dong..... Ding dong......' Where is Yuki? I woke up from my bed as I couldn't stand of the noise and went to open the door. I slightly cursed the person as she or he still rang the bell non-stop.

'What?!' I shouted at the person as he disturbed my sleep. I hated the one who disturb my sleep. 'Yui...... Don't you know today is the first day of summer vacation?' In front of me was a person in his butler suit, Yokoyama Yui. He is Kai's own butler. Very loyal and clever. Most importantly he was my senpai but graduated last year with his master. That meant he is 19 now.

'Good afternoon, Watanabe-sama. Long time we didn't meet. I didn't know you can change that much in a year. Looks like you have grown well as I can see some muscles here.' Then I only realized that I was only in my pants. I took off my shirt as I couldn't stand the heat in my room last night. 'And I do know that today is holiday for students but not for adults. And this is the reason. I came here.' He handed me a letter. It was a wedding invitation card.
To Watanabe Mayu,

You are invited to Takahashi Kai and Maeda Atsuko's wedding.

From Takahashi Kai.
After reading, I realized that he was not at the door entrance anymore and I could see some of the passerby were trying to take pictures especially girls. I slammed the door and went to living room as he was watching television there.

'You know.... You don't have to slam the door. And pls wear some shirt back. I don't plan to have some rumor for being with a shirtless guy in an empty house.' He said.

'The house is not empty as you said. The-------'

'Mayu...... Who the hell is that? For ringing the doorbell in the early morning.' Yuki interrupted me and said while she was still in her half awake and half asleep mode. We just stared at her until she was completely awake. The first thing that she said after she was completely awoke was 'Mayu? Where is your shirt?' She didnt even greet a person properly.

'Looks like Kashiwagi-sama is here. Paruru will be here in no time.' Yui said while still keeping his eye on Yuki. 'Mayu..... How dare are you to kidnap a girl and having 'that'?' Luckily, Yuki left the living room while he was talking halfway. Or else she would blushing madly again.

'She lived here. I didn't kidnap her and more importantly I didn't do anything to her. I think you should phone Paruru now as Yuki's aunt doesn't know Yuki live here.' I said. When I finished my words, Yuki came back with my t-shirt and Yui was busy to phone her lovely girlfriend. I meant Paruru. Paruru, Shimazaki Haruka is Yui's girlfriend and younger than Yui one year but graduated with Yui. What a clever girlfriend he has. I am not sure what is she doing now as I didn't hear much from her after she graduated. After gave me my sleeveless t-shirt, Yuki went to bath. So I decided to make us lunch as we haven't have our breakfast nor lunch. When I was about to go.......

'Where are you going?' Looked like Yui just ended the call with Paruru as he tugged his phone into his pocket.

'Prepare lunch.' I just answered shortly and prepare to go again.

'Oh.... You don't need to do that. You will have later.'

'Why?' I turned around and looked at him confusedly.

'Didn't you read the letter just now?' Asked he. I nodded and he continued where he left off. 'And we will bring you there later as Takahashi-sama asked us to do. Of course, we will make lunch for the------'

The doorbell rang and interrupted Yui. I went to open the door for the guest. When I opened the door, the first thing that I received was a slap. Because of the slap, Yui came out of the living room.

'Yo, Paruru....... What are you doing?' He asked his girlfriend and walked towards her.

'Who told you that you can kidnap an innocent girl?' Innocent girl? Did I kidnap one? When I was about to ask her, Yuki came out from the bathroom. When Paruru saw that, I just got another slap from her. 'How dare you?' She shouted angrily. I just gave her 'what the hell are you doing' face to her. She ignored it. Yui just giggled there.

'Did anything wrong?' Yuki asked surprisedly.

'Yuki-chan.... I am sorry.... I didn't know Mayu-kun will do something like that.' She said and walked toward Yuki. I closed the door. Yui didn't care about it and went back to the living room.

'Do something? What did he do?' Yuki asked confusedly. Paruru just gave her a sad face and suddenly hugged her friend. Yuki was surprised and looked at me with surprised. I just shrugged my shoulder.

'Ano...... Paruru.... Did anything just happen? Why did you act this way?' Yuki asked.

'What did you mean by did anything happen? Didn't Mayu do something to you?' 

'Something?' Yuki and I asked in the same time.

'Yes, something....' She said and made a eye contact with Yuki as she was trying to make Yuki understand what she was talking about. Suddenly, Yuki blushed madly.

'No... No.... I didn't have sex with Mayu. And Mayu didn't kidnap me. I lived here.' Yuki shouted while blushing and I could feel my cheek was hot.

'Eh??? But Yui said that he did.' She said. Yui laughed out loud in the living room. The three of us went to the living room and caught him and punished him. After a while, we got tired. We laid down on the floor and get some rest. Suddenly, Yui's phone rang. He picked up and answered the call. After ended the call, he told us to prepare some clothes and we were going out to the destination. When we arrived, we could only see a private luxury yacht standing in front of us.

'Eh? Why are we here?' Yuki asked confusedly. 'Don't tell me Acchan's wedding is here.'

'Of course not... We are going the island where Takahashi-sama's wedding will hold by this yacht.' Yui answered and guided us to get up to the boat. The first thing we saw was Rena, Jun, Yuko, Haruna, Rino and Lovetan chatting at the living room.

'Eh??? Really? I don't believe it.' Yuko stated out loud. The others except Rena and Jun were shaking their hand and denying the.... What are they deny again? When they saw us, they just greeted us and changed their subject. Why did I know? As it was too obvious.

'Yo.... Mayu and Yuki. Why did you take so long to come here?' Yuko asked, eye still on his phone as his phone just rang.

'Yup... Especially two of you stayed in the same house.' Jun said and walked towards me. When he was about to put his hand over my neck, he realized something. 'Mayu..... Why is your cheek bruised?'

'Hi guys.... Some drama just happened in my house. And I get two slap from someone.' I said calmly while Paruru just acted like she didn't know anything.

'Anyway guys..... Why are your bags still here? Didn't I tell you that you can choose any bedroom which is located at the second floor and put your stuff in?' Yui said while he was pointing at the bags on the dinning table.

'Well... You just have four rooms.' The three couples said in the same time.

'Then any problems?' Paruru asked and stood beside Yui.

'Yes we at least need five room as we have five couples here.' Rino said while still playing with his PSP while Haruna was watching him playing the game.

'Don't worry about Paruru and me as we are going to sleep in the sailing room. There is a couch in the sailing room.' Yui said.

'And the other problem is you only have a master bed in each room. You at least need a separate bed for one room.' Rena stated.

'Why?' Yui and Paruru stopped their work and looked at them confusedly.

'Or else Yuki and Mayu will have to share the same bedroom. And BED.' Lovetan said while emphasizing the last word. Yuki and I just blushed heavily. I couldn't even imagine that Yuki and I would sleep on the same bed. It would just made me nosebleed.

'Any problem? They could even have sexual intercourse without us knowing....' Yui said. With that, it was completely let my brain broke down.

'Mayu? Mayu? Mayu? MAYU!!!!!!!' Yuko shouted my name while my brain still couldn't help me to interpret. 'Are you okay? Did anything happen? Why are you having nose bleeding?' Then I only realized that I was nose bleeding while having some dirty thoughts. Yuki kept her eye wide and kept hitting me.

'What are you thinking? Watanabe Mayu!' Yuki shouted and embarrassed at the fact. While the others had their confused looks as this was the first time I was having this kind of reaction. From hitting me changed to tickle me. I couldn't help and laughed out loud. I shouted for help but I just received silence and stare. After a long time.....

'Okay... Yuki aren't you feel tired already? Tickling him for half an hour.' Yuki stopped as she also felt exhausted. 'Okay.... Now just took your bag and go to your room. Mayu and Yuki are going to sleep in the same room as no one want to change. No complain. Go now!' With that, we took our bags and went to our room. When we were unpacking our beg, the ship started to sail. After finish prepared, we went to have our lunch and started to swim. I didn't join them as I couldn't stand the heat and sun. I stayed at the living room. It was so boring. When Yui passed by, I asked him for some manga. He gave me some but shoujo manga. Mostly would about love. I don't really like it as it was boring. But I still read them.

At night, the others except Yui, Paruru and I were cleaning themselves while I was still reading the manga as I still hadn't finish yet. I didn't know that there were a lots of volume. Yui was in the sailing room which located at the the highest floor while Paruru was preparing dinner in the kitchen.

'Hey! The dinner is ready.' Paruru shouted while she was placing the last dish on the dining table. Feeling lazy, I still stayed at the same position. The others went to the dinning room already except Yui.

'Where is Mayu?' Yuki asked. 'Still laying on the couch in the living room? I will go and get him.' With that, she went to the living room and dragged me to the dining room. I sat beside her and started eating.

'Yuki.... How is your exam?' Haruna asked.

'Ummm.... I improved.... I am in the forth place in this exam.' Yuki said

'And you were worried about your exam.... I don't understand why.' Rena said.

'But you are in the third place. Last exam, I got the place. Shouldn't I worry about my result?' Yuki asked. Rena just ignored her and continued her meal.

'How about you, Mayu, Jun?' Yuko asked. I didn't reply as I knew Jun will boast his mark again.

'I got the first place and Mayu second.' Jun answered while pouting. 'But just 0.5% difference. Mayu, you really improved a lot.' I just smirked at him. He just gave me -_- look.

'Cute!' Rena suddenly said it out loud while poking Jun's cheek. The scene sudden remind me that Yuki also said the same word when she saw my pouting face. I blushed. While I was in my thought, Rena suddenly said something. 'Shouldn't the two of you be happy. Your result and our are 350 marks difference. How can the third place and the second place have some much difference?'

'How about you, Rino and Lovetan?' Yuko asked again.

'Tenth place.' Rino said and Lovetan just shrugged. Lovetan didn't really care her result and because of this, some of Rino's fans were angry at her. They think that Rino should have a clever girlfriend. But they didn't know that Lovetan was actually smart but lazy.

'Anyway, what are you doing this afternoon, Mayu?' Jun suddenly asked.

'Reading the shoujo manga that Yui recommend.' I answered.

'Shoujo manga? You read? Did I hear wrong?' Rino asked.

'No you didn't. It is quite boring at first but getting interesting now. I can tell why girls like it so much now. It is really addictive. Uhmmmm.... This vegetable is bad.' I said while I was munching my food.

'So do you feel the way that the character's feel now?' Jun asked while smirking.

'Sorry then. I didn't feel anything.' I said with my poker face.

'Didn't feel the way to someone?' Rino asked.

'Lol.... How can I feel something like that. I am not you. Can fall in love easily.' I said.

'Sorry... I have to go now. Sorry....' Yuki suddenly stood up and walked away. I asked her what happened but she just ignored me. After she went away, I could feel the girls' glare . It was really creep me out. I gave them an awkward smile. Suddenly Rena stood up and shouted: 'How can you smile that easily!?' And I received a slap again. After slapping me, she went out and the other girls also gave me a slap and went out with her. I think they were going to find Yuki. Then, I went back to continue eating my dinner. I thought I would have a peaceful dinner but I was wrong. The guys started to complain.

'Mayu! How can you eat here peacefully? Shouldn't you go out and chase Yuki back? ' Jun asked and sat beside me. I didn't answer him and continued to finish my dinner.

'Hey.... Mayu.... Did you hear Jun?' Yuko said and forced me to turn to him. 'Don't tell me that you don't like Yuki!' He shouted but I just gave him a confused look. Then he continued when he left off. 'You didn't know that Yuki love you?' I just gave him a shocked look.

'Lol.... Mayu don't play..... We are serious here.' Rino said.

'And I am serious too. What do you mean by Yuki love me?' I asked them. They just gave me a confused and shocked looks.

'You didn't know? I thought you knew about it.' Jun said with a surprise tone.

'And it is obvious that you have the same interest towards Yuki.' Rino said.

'Very funny. I didn't like Yuki. I thought Yuki as a friend. And I don't know that Yuki loves me at all.' I said out loud. I didn't aware that the girls were standing at the entrance. When I saw them, I only realized how my words hurt Yuki. I could also see the tears dropping down from her eyes. When I was about to move but I just received a slap from her.

'Watanabe Mayu! Who told you that you can play with my feelings like that? Who will like you! No one!' She said and her tears fell down continuously. And after that, she ran back to our room. I wanted to grab her hand and pulled her into a hug. But I just couldn't do it. The girls just gave me a glare and walked away. After the girls walked away, I could feel my cheek in pain again as Yuko punched me right on my face.

'I didn't know that you.... You are like this.... Watanabe Mayu. I am disappointed.' Yuko said with a disbelieved eyes and walked back to his room.

'I didn't think that the kiss between you and Yuki.... You could feel nothing. I thought you were smart but I am wrong. You are more denser than Yuki!' Jun shouted.

'I am sorry..... I did------' I didn't even finished my sentence as I got punch from Jun but this was different. He kept punching me.

'Sorry? You told me sorry after you hurt a girl. What are you thinking? Watanabe Mayu!' He shouted angrily. Rino tried to stop him but he failed. Suddenly, Yui came and stopped Jun, calmed Jun down. Yui was stronger and smarter after all. After that, Jun went back to his room. Rino just gave me a disgust look and walked away. I slowly removed myself from the floor as I could feel the pain around me. And sat on the couch. Yui went to the kitchen and brought our some ice and put them on the bruised spot. After helping me to put the last bandage on my cheek, he asked me what happened. Then I only realized that he and Paruru were not at there when the fight happened. I told him and he just face palmed.

'Are you that dense? You couldn't even realize your love to Yuki.' He said

'Are you kidding? How can I love her? When I don't know and more importantly I just thought her as a friend.'

'You really are dense.' He signed before he continued. 'Don't you feel jealous when someone is trying to flirt with her or something? Don't you feel warm and happy when she is around? Don't you feel hurt when she is flirting with someone else? Don't you feel reckless when she is not around? Don't you feel that you want her beside you all the time?' 

'I didn't feel jealous or anything because she didn't even see some other guys as she has trauma. I did feel warm and happy when she was around. I always wonder why did I feel something difference when I am around her. It felt like butterfly in my stomach. About when she is not around, I did feel something in my heart is empty and lonely. Why I feel that way? Did I really fall in love just like you guys said?' Yui just smirked and walked away. Before he went back to his room, he stopped and said.

'I can't help you. Neither of them can help you. You must figure out what you feel by yourself. And you are really like Takahashi-sama when come to love. As dense as him.' I just stared at his back until he completely lost of sight. I started to think all again and imagined what if one day, Yuki really went to see someone. Can I stand it? Can I accept the fact that she actually has a boyfriend? The answer is I can't even imagined her not beside me. It really messed up my mind.

To be continued

Sorry for making them fight... I have to let Mayu to realize his feeling. I am sorry.

Title: Re: The feeling (Mayuki and others) Chapter 11 UPDATED!
Post by: olive29 on November 25, 2013, 11:34:48 AM
Mayu is really a BAKA !!!  :smhid

Go get your Yuki, Mayu !!!

Yuki belongs to you !!  :angry:
Title: Re: The feeling (Mayuki and others) Chapter 11 UPDATED!
Post by: Konoe on November 25, 2013, 03:03:07 PM
MAYU YOU IDIOT!!! Why are you super dense and stubborn that you don't love Yuki?! :angry:

Poor Yuki. She had to hear that. :cry:

Mayu deserved those punches.
Title: Re: The feeling (Mayuki and others) Chapter 11 UPDATED!
Post by: Kirozoro on November 25, 2013, 03:34:23 PM
Poor Mayu, got slap a lot for one day

Mayu why are u just sit there. Go chase after Yuki

And realize ur love to Yuki already
Title: Re: The feeling (Mayuki and others) Chapter 11 UPDATED!
Post by: Chanaline on November 25, 2013, 04:46:27 PM
Haha... *breaking heart*

Yuki no!!! :cry: Mayu you're so idiot!!

Now Yuki Will make you jealous(maybe)!!!!

Read the shojo manga OMG :angry: the answer is inside :catglare:
Title: Re: The feeling (Mayuki and others) Chapter 11 UPDATED!
Post by: MayuxMatsuixMusic on December 01, 2013, 10:37:31 AM
my heart exploded again!!!

pls call the ambulance!!!

just kidding xD
Title: Re: The feeling (Mayuki and others) Chapter 11 UPDATED!
Post by: imteedee on December 01, 2013, 10:50:17 AM
I thanked the update but didn't read it LOL what happened there?  :nervous okay must read now...
Title: Re: The feeling (Mayuki and others) Chapter 11 UPDATED!
Post by: gek geki on January 13, 2014, 05:13:31 AM
Title: Re: The feeling (Mayuki and others) Chapter 11 UPDATED!
Post by: DKA48 on January 26, 2014, 09:46:54 AM
poor mayu, has received more hits in one day than in all his life  :shocked

please.... updated soon.... thanks
Title: Re: The feeling (Mayuki and others) Chapter 11 UPDATED!
Post by: Zhen on January 26, 2014, 01:56:30 PM
I'm dead due to heart exploded. :imdead:

Jus joking.

My first time comment on ur fic. XD


Pls updated soon.  :bow:
Title: Re: The feeling (Mayuki and others) Chapter 12 Finally UPDATED!
Post by: Haruto Lee on February 20, 2014, 11:13:34 AM
@ Zhen: ambulance! Wait... You just kidding? *signed in relieve* and thx for liking it and think it is awesome. I really appreciate that. Thx for reading and commenting. And pls comment again. I would appreciate it.

@ DKA48: sorry  :bow:I just realized that I let Mayu be everyone's punch bag. But still thx for reading and commenting. If I am not wrong this is your first comment right?

@ geki geki: forgetting?  :cry: it is hurt to know that! hahahaha!!!! Just kidding! I am really sorry for not updating in a long time. Thx for commenting and reading.

@ imteedee: eh?! You haven't read yet!  :cry: then I will only thx you for thanking! Lol! Just kidding! Anyway thx for commenting.

@ MayuxMatsuixMusic: ambulance again! Someone need help! Hahaha! Thx for reading and commenting.

@ Chanaline: hahaha! Mayu is genius but he still will be stupid sometimes! Thx for commenting and reading!

@ kirozoro: yup I agreed! Stupid Mayu! What are you doing! Thx for reading and commenting.

@ Konoe: Mayu deserve for the punch?  :scared:Poor Mayu! Poor Mayu! Then I will let him get hit more often! Hahaha! Just kidding! But Mayu is really super dense! Can't help. I am sorry for letting Yuki hear. Thx for reading and commenting!

@ olive29: olive-chan about the question that you ask in my another fanfic. It would be all of your fanfic! Pls update them soon! 
:bow: okay! Mayu will get his Yuki back but just in a matter of time! Thx for reading and commenting!

I am sorry that I am taking too long to update! Works and studies  :badluck: *running away* anyway pls enjoy it!

Chapter 12
It had been 3 days that we had arrived at the Takahashi's island. The wedding was going to hold tonight. So most of us were quite busy to prepare for the wedding. Beside that, the others still ignored me like I didn't present. Even Acchan, the senpai who I respected the most also ignored me when she heard about the news. I tried everything in order to solve the problem but I got ignored by everyone, especially Yuki. Whenever I talked to Yuki, she would walk away or ignore me like I am the thin air. It was painful to me. Luckily, Yui and Kai would help me to soothe my pain but it still pain when Yuki acted like that.

'Mayu! Kai-sama! The breakfast is ready! You can come now!' Paruru shouted as I was helping Kai to prepare in the garden. I finally knew what Paruru was doing now. She was the maid of Takahashi's family and Acchan's own maid. Why? Because she was going to marry to Yui. I was quite surprised when I heard that. But it is still happy new than mine, right?

 We rushed out to the dining room because we didn't eat our dinner as a punishment for losing the game that they chose. When we arrived, we saw the others were eating already. I sat at an empty seat beside Yuki. As usual, she stood up and walked away. I am really a bad guy, ain't I?

'You can sit here and eat peacefully. I will go to the garden.' I said painfully and walked back to the garden.

This garden was the only place where I only belong because in this few days, I had though about a lot of things in this garden especially Yuki. I found out that I really love her. The feeling that I always had was love but I terrified to get into a relationship. I always though about: Was I able to let her happy? Could I promise that I would only love her? Things could be happen. Fate could bring us together and could make us apart. I was scared to get hurt. When I was in my own world, someone tapped my shoulder. I looked back at the person and saw Kai.

'Why don't you just tell her already? You already found out, didn't you?' He said and sat in front of me. I just smiled sadly at him. 'You are a coward like Yuko when come to love.' He looked at me again and signed again. 'Again the same question?'

'Yup.... I am sorry if I am annoying.... But I just want to figure out this.'

'Fate could bring you to them also could apart you from them. But if you don't give up, nothing could apart you and the one you love. And of course, you must love her deep enough.' After saying that, he went back to the dining room. I just sat at the same position and though about it again.

'So could you understand now?' Someone suddenly said. I startled a bit when someone just came out of sudden and talked. 

'Yui! don't scared me like that?' I asked him.

'So can you understand?' I just silenced. 'You are really a slow learner when come to love. Mayu-sama. Slower than Kai-sama.'

'Yui.... How do you know Paruru is the one that you want?' I blurted out of sudden. He just gave me a weird stare. 'If you don't want to tell, I am okay with it.'

'Sometimes, you should listen to your heart instead your mind.' He ruffled my hair and back to the kitchen. They always left me hanging here. They told me that I should think by myself instead of giving me a full answer. It was a better way to make things clearer. But I think instead of make things clearer, they made it worst. When I was going to my own world again, I saw Yuko standing beside the garden gate and smirked at me but not long after, he went away.

At night, the wedding party started. It was like any other wedding ceremony: vowing with each other, exchanging ring and kissing. It was all the same. It should be a happy moment for all of us but I couldn't help but to watch over Yuki from the starting of the ceremony. She was surrounded by unknown guys. I tried hard to glare at them but they would just ignore me. I wanted to walk towards her but I scared that she would be sad to see me. So, I kept watching her from far away and didn't notice that someone was tapping my shoulder.

'If you scared that much, why don't you just help her to get out of that state?' Suddenly, someone said beside me while looking at Yuki. I was shocked and looked at the person. It was Yuko, Jun and Rino standing beside me crossing their arm around my head except Rino.

'Don't scare me like that! And I though that you guys were angry at me. What happened?' I asked confusedly.

'Yes we did but not now as we knew that you have feelings toward her too.' Yuko said.

'Still haven't confess to her yet?' Jun asked. I just shake my head. 'You are slow like Yuko.'

'Hey! I am here you know!' Yuko said with a bit louder sound.

'That's why! The two of you are brothers because both of you are cowards!' Rino said while giggled a bit. Jun was giggling as we didn't want to disturb the others for having fun. Yuko blushed and hit their head.

'Where are your lovely girlfriends? Don't you scare that the other guys try to flirt with them?' I asked in an annoyed tone.

'There! They are eating there! Don't you worried about Yuki?' Jun said while he was pointing at the direction where their girlfriends were. When I looked back at Yuki, I found out that she was not at there already. I tried to look over the place where she stood before but none of sight. Getting worried, I quickly went to find her. I ran everywhere but still didn't see her. I could feel my heart thumping loudly and cold sweat kept escaping.

'You should listen to your heart instead your mind.' The sentences suddenly hit my head. The sentences that Yui told me. I started running to the place that my heart told me but I was not sure that if she would be there. After running for a long time, I finally reached there. I was panting so hard. But I just couldn't stop there. After catching some breath, I looked around and saw a figure sitting and leaning her back on the tree trunk while seeing the beautiful night sky. I walked towards her and conformed my institution. It was her, Yuki, staring at night sky.

'Yuki!' I called her. She looked back at me. Then I saw her tears escaping from her eyes. Couldn't stand her crying i run towards her and didn't hesitate to hug her. Of course. She tried to push me away but I hugged her even tighter. It had been a long time, I didn't feel her warmth. Now I felt it again. It was really warm and secured. After she sobbing for a while, she finally calmed down. I released her and sat beside her while holding her hand. It really made me relaxed in this kind of atmosphere.

'Mayu... You shouldn't show this much of affection when you don't like the girl. It will make the girl confused.' She said while resting her head on my shoulder.

'And who is the girl who will like me?' Trying to make fun with her but it turned out the atmosphere suddenly turned to heavy. She stood up and stared at the sky.

Before she will leave me alone again, I grabbed her hand and pulled her to me. I kissed her hard on her lip, trying to show her that I love her. I could feel her slightly trembled with the sudden kiss. I caressed her cheek. After for a while, I finally felt that she returned the kiss. I was really happy. We kissed passionately. we broke our kiss due to the lack of air. I closed my eye as I could feel the heat rushed to my cheek while catching some breath.

'What... What is the kiss for?' She asked while catching some breath.

'I... I love you.' I said while blushing without my heart shake. Just like Yui said, maybe I should listen to my heart more often.


'Don't give me 'Eh'! Someone just confessed to you.' I shouted, felt embarrassed, used my hand to cover my face.

'I am sorry.' She said while looking at the grass.

'Why? I am the one who should say sorry. If I am not that dense you will not get hurt with what I said. I am sorry. But if you don't mind, can I ask a question?' I asked and intertwined our hands. She nodded. 'My heart had a room. He is asking you that do you want to stay in that room?'

'What kind of question is that? Isn't it that I am in your heart now? Or do you have a lot of room in your heart?'

'No! No.... I only have one room in my heart and it is always available for you! And only you!'

'But... I don't want to....' I was surprised with her answer. I didn't know that in a short time, her heart will be closed.

'I want to stay in your heart and your side forever. Can I?' I smiled with relief at her answer. She was looking at the ground, don't dare to look at me. I cupped her cheek up and connected our forehead. 

'Yes you can my dear princess.' With that, I leaned in and kissed her on her lip.

Finally they are together! Maybe I should end this already?

Title: Re: The feeling (Mayuki and others) Chapter 11 UPDATED!
Post by: chocholate on February 20, 2014, 11:45:15 AM
Make it longer please !! Wanna see them after being together www :3
Title: Re: The feeling (Mayuki and others) Chapter 12 Finally UPDATED!
Post by: kurogumi on February 20, 2014, 11:55:29 AM
i prefer to finish it maybe on the next 2 chapter LOL
Title: Re: The feeling (Mayuki and others) Chapter 12 Finally UPDATED!
Post by: MayuxMatsuixMusic on February 20, 2014, 12:37:08 PM
finally such a long time

mayuki saikou!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

more kiss!!! XD

no!!!!!!!! continue~~~~~

just continue until they die XD

update :bow:

Title: Re: The feeling (Mayuki and others) Chapter 12 Finally UPDATED!
Post by: Zhen on February 20, 2014, 01:09:32 PM
I think I'm getting diabetes. SO MUCH SWEETNESS.
BUT I LIKE IT.  :nya:  :shy2:

MORE KISS.  :luvluv1:

I want to see them after they get together.  :tama-laff:

Update soon.  :bow:
Title: Re: The feeling (Mayuki and others) Chapter 12 Finally UPDATED!
Post by: Kirozoro on February 20, 2014, 01:34:46 PM
Kya!!! Mayuki are finally together

Title: Re: The feeling (Mayuki and others) Chapter 12 Finally UPDATED!
Post by: Konoe on February 20, 2014, 02:03:44 PM
Yes! What took you so long baka Mayu?

If you are really planning on ending this soon depends if you still have ideas left for Mayuki's life as lovers. But I would love to read that for more fanservice. :D