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Re: To Victory or Bust (Chapter 3, Part 1 :: Iroppoi Jirettai)
« Reply #20 on: May 18, 2007, 04:26:24 PM »
Hmm, Maki? as a groping demon? Who else has beautiful eyes? But you know who else is a groper? Miyoshi.

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Re: To Victory or Bust (Chapter 3, Part 2 :: Yoshite, Yoshite)
« Reply #21 on: May 21, 2007, 03:02:54 AM »
You all are wrong! But you get cookies anyways! *throws cookies*.

Yes, there is a teensy bit of fluff showing through, but it shows up later why she's like that... *cackles Miki-style*


Chapter 3, Part 2 :: Yoshite, Yoshite

She let out a sigh. They had been fighting for hours, Niigaki and Chikorita, and Kamei was beginning to think about leaving them behind, and leaving Naetoru with them. He was no help either.

And neither was this strange woman, who had, since the fighting had started, commenced on hitting on a few passers by, mainly of the female persuasion, and getting slapped in return.

If she believed in a god, Kamei probably would have thought he/she/it was watching and dying of laughter, or something of the like.

Good for her, she had no religious belief. Maybe she should have gotten one.

“No! I’m not going to do that for you either!” Niigaki stated angrily. What a good time to tune in, when angry negotiations had started. Kamei tuned out again, and eyed Naetoru, who was commencing in some quite similar actions.

“They’re silly, aren’t they?”

Naetoru nodded in agreement, which produced a smile from the girl’s lips.

“We’ll never be like that… alright Naetoru, while we’ve got a chance, let’s call a truce. It’s obvious we didn’t get off on the right foot, but maybe we can be friends the more we travel along? Hmm, how’s that sound?”

Kamei held out her hand, in a sort of peace offering. Blinking, Naetoru nodded, and held up a paw. After a moment of hand shaking, they glanced over at their new ‘friends.’

“Let’s get something to eat. Maybe when we return they’ll have found out which one gets to use make up more than the other.”

“Not without me you aren’t!”

It was then that the strange woman had finally wrenched herself away from flirting with others to acknowledge the Kamei’s presence.

“… Uhm… okay.”

“Good. My treat!”

Free food! Kamei liked the sound of that. Grinning, the girl rubbed the back of her neck and let out a nervous laugh.

“Okay. Name’s Kamei by the way. Kamei Eri.”

“Eri? Kamei… hmmm… No wonder Niigaki calls you Turtle Girl…”

Kamei sighed.

“Yeah…”

“Well let’s change that.”

The woman started to pace around Kamei, before stopping just behind her.

“Let’s see…”

Grabbing Kamei by the waist, the woman turned her around, and, holding her rather close, gave the girl a small kiss on the cheek.

Kamei blushed.

“Uhm… erge….”

“Mei-mei’ll do!”

Releasing her grip, the woman took a step back, but slid her arms up onto Kamei’s shoulders.

“It’s a cute name. Besides, you look more like a panda than a turtle…”

Words found themselves migrating south for winter as Kamei just stared at the woman. After a moment, the woman gave Kamei’s shoulders a firm pat.

“I forgot to introduce myself! How silly of me! Name’s Yoshizawa… Hitomi. You can call me whatever ya want.”

Kamei was still speechless, as the woman, Yoshizawa, eyed Niigaki.

“Hey! Ri-Nii! I’m taking Mei-mei someplace to eat. Hope ya don’t mind!”

“Chikorita, you’re a horrid pile of- NO! GO AWAY YOU FREAK!”

“Alright! Have fun!”

Keeping an arm around Kamei, Yoshizawa stuffed a hand into her pocket and led the girl away from the fight. Blinking, Kamei stared up at the woman, finally finding words.

“Is she gonna be okay?”

“Who, Ri-Nii? Yeah. She might be a little strange in the head, but she can take care of herself.”

Kamei smiled. This woman knew what she was talking about, and, though she seemed a little bit on the weird side, Kamei would have gotten over Niigaki’s existence if it meant traveling with someone this cool.

“So… you’re Niigaki’s friend?”

“Sorda. Our fathers were friends when they were Pokemon trainers, so I only thought it right that we at least attempt to travel around some. At least until I figured out what a blabbermouth she has for a friend.”

“Chikorita?”

“What? No!”

Hitomi gave the younger girl a small poke in the cheek, before shrugging.

“There was a third person who went around with our fathers. Her daughter and Ri-Nii are best friends. I think her name’s Takahashi… Heard of ‘er?”

Kamei’s eyes went wide. Did Yoshizawa mean who she thought she meant?

“You… you mean…”

“Yes, Lovely Ai of the Traveling Kinamoto 8 League. Ri-Nii’s father’s another of the 8, I’m surprised you haven’t noticed yet.”

Lovely Ai. Every little girl in Hyori idolized Lovely Ai, and every teenage boy worshipped her. Whenever the woman came to Hyori, it was an event that had everyone closing down their shops to watch as she blew away every challenger that demanded they battle her.

Kamei thought a moment, about Niigaki. If Lovely Ai was a member of the Traveling 8, and Niigaki’s father was a member of the Traveling 8, then Niigaki’s father was…

“You mean Mighty Fukkie?!”

“Yep. He trained any up and coming trainer who wanted to be one, except his daughter. He was always away so much, traveling and teaching, that he wasn’t aware that Ri-Nii had obtained a Chikorita and was waiting for him to come back to tell him she was gonna leave. Took me telling him to get him to run back do Delia.”

Yoshizawa grinned, and shrugged.

“Eh, it’s not that big of a deal really. Ai’s kinda a gossipmonger, spread rumors that I groped little girls while people weren’t looking, all because I wouldn’t leave Ri-Nii alone.”

So that explained why Niigaki thought she groped.

“… You don’t seem like someone who’d grope people… let alone little girls…”

Yoshizawa didn’t respond to this, only looking at where she was taking Kamei. Kamei tilted her head to one side before jumping.

Someone had touched her butt.

“Hey! That wasn’t nice!”

“No, it wasn’t, but it happens every now and then… s’what I get for hanging around Fujimoto so much…”

Kamei blinked at the woman, eyes narrowing.

“…. You know, if you keep mentioning the 8 so much, I’m gonna start thinking you’re one of them…”

“Or I’m lying. I know kid, I know. I’ll stop now…”

Yoshizawa grinned at Kamei again, pulling the girl close.

“What about you Mei-Mei? What’s your niche? Where do you fit in in the grand scheme of things?”

That was a good question. Kamei just wanted to train Pokemon, she didn’t think about it that much.

“I… I don’t know yet.”

Yoshizawa’s grin faded, replaced by a slightly grim look.

“You’ve got a Naetoru kid. There are a lot of nature buffs out there… Ai n’ Ri-Nii are two of ‘em. You wanna be a nature buff, or you wanna be different?”

Kamei blinked.

“I… I don’t know, I just started…”

Just as quickly as Yoshizawa’s grin faded, it returned.

“Oh! Good, young, impressionable. Perfect! First, food, then we can talk about what you know about Pokemon!”

“Uhm… okay.”

“Don’t sound so excited about it Mei-Mei. It’s like you think I’ll bite or something.”

Yoshizawa gave the girl a playful bump of her hip, causing Kamei to stumble slightly. Taking a small advantage of the moment, the older woman ‘caught’ her, and held her for a moment.

“Falling for my charm already?”

“I… it… you… two feet… left…”

Yoshizawa winked, but not before planting another kiss on the girl’s cheek. It honestly started to irritate Kamei, and it showed in her face.

“What was that for?! Why do you keep doing that!? You mislead me into thinking that you want my babies or something?!”

Yoshizawa winked, before sliding the girl out of her embrace and walking off, backwards, to watch the girl’s reaction.

“What says I don’t want your babies?”

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Re: To Victory or Bust (Chapter 3, Part 2 :: Yoshite, Yoshite)
« Reply #22 on: May 21, 2007, 03:51:45 AM »
ahhh u did fool us..(highlight to see) yossie's the gropper!!!!!!!!! still good still good  :kekeke:



“What was that for?! Why do you keep doing that!? You mislead me into thinking that you want my babies or something?!”

take a deep breath......................

OMG, ROTFLOL :lol: Eri's babies!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!...who wouldnt want her babies anyway  :luvluv1:

oy..good chapter

...hmm the 8 league uh? wonder who else's in that group ( starts thinking about names)

oh and fujimoto was mentioned :ding: yay!

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Re: To Victory or Bust (Chapter 3, Part 2 :: Yoshite, Yoshite)
« Reply #23 on: May 21, 2007, 02:31:58 PM »
Yossui comes up with interesting nicknames... Are you just going to have the Musume's or will more groups be showing up?

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Re: To Victory or Bust (Chapter 3, Part 2 :: Yoshite, Yoshite)
« Reply #24 on: May 21, 2007, 07:43:05 PM »
Now I would have never have thought of Yossie being the gropper in this story, but when you hang out with Miki for so long something is bound to rub off.

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Re: To Victory or Bust (Chapter 3, Part 2 :: Yoshite, Yoshite)
« Reply #25 on: May 21, 2007, 08:24:45 PM »
There will be others than the Momusu girls... You'll see ^^ In a world where there's too many Pokemon to count, I need another world where it's bordering too many to count. I'm going to end up using a good most of them. Promise ^^

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Re: To Victory or Bust (Chapter 4 :: Enter Wonkified China?)
« Reply #26 on: May 25, 2007, 03:50:02 AM »
Sorry if double posts are taboo here, didn't mean to do that. I'll be better next time if they are. Just... not sure at all.

However, the person that a good half of you are going 'WHA!?' on in the paragraphs below does in fact exist in the H!P world. She's just Very. Obscure.

And yes, that is Reina. I'm not going to keep you in suspense for this one ^^


Chapter 4 :: Enter Wonkified China?

The restaurant smelled sweetly of fresh fruit and pastries when they walked in, Kamei first, followed by Yoshizawa, who was warily eyeing anyone that dared look.

“This place smells beautiful!” Kamei said happily, grinning at Yoshizawa. The older woman grinned right back at her, before glaring at people some more. Kamei paid no heed. In her arms was Naetoru, who was drooling the moment he spotted a small bowl of fruit in the display case.

As trainer and pokemon stared, their stomachs grumbled. Yoshizawa burst into laughter as they rubbed their tummies in unison.

“You two are so cute!” the woman pointed out, leading Kamei to the counter, where a young man beamed at them.

“Ah! Yoshizawa-san, I see you brought a date with you this time!”

Blush made its way to Kamei’s cheeks, but the elder woman just waved it off.

“Nah. Kid’s just hungry, and we’re just gonna talk shop…”

“Sure you are.”

The young man eyed Kamei suspiciously, but got a rather angry glare from Naetoru in return.

“I mean… so, what’ll you have today? The specials are … uhm…”

He faltered, as Naetoru hopped out of Kamei’s arms and onto the counter, still glaring, which was strange for the creature to do.

“Erg… Fresh… cantelope… and… strawberry… bowl… and… uhm…”

“Can I get something sweet and sugary?” Kamei finally blurted, paying absolutely no heed to her pokemon. Yoshizawa had not seemed to pay attention either.

“Huh? Oh… sweet, sugary… what do you want?” the man asked. After a moment, Yoshizawa finally glanced down at Naetoru, and grinned again.

“Ah, and your fear of turtles resurfaces! You thought you got rid of those, didn't you?”

She let out a laugh, as the boy gave her a pout.

“That is NOT funny Yoshizawa-san!”

“No, I think it’s hilarious… kid, go for something with chocolate. Always does the body good…”

Kamei blinked, quickly picking Naetoru up and edging over to the display case, hopefully to find something good and chocolate-y, while Yoshizawa teased the boy.

-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-

“Where’d they go!?”

Niigaki let out a whine as she whirled around in place for the fifth or sixth time. They left her! How dare they!?

Chikorita looked just as heartbroken.

“Chiko…”

“I know! They’re so mean!”

She snorted angrily, and, with her arms crossed against her chest, she started walking in a random direction. Her cheeks were puffed out, and Chikorita, who followed behind, looked like a small, four legged version of her trainer, complete with angered look on her face and all.

It was not long before Niigaki randomly turned a corner and ran into someone.

“OH! I’m so sorry!” she said, anger suddenly fleeing, “I didn’t mean to! Are you alright?”

The woman sighed, holding what appeared to be a small Squirtle in her arms. She didn’t look like much. The woman was Yoshizawa’s height, with long, black hair, and piercing, dark eyes. She was real slender too, but not like Yoshizawa, who looked more stick and muscle than this woman. This woman could be on the cover of a magazine in a simple bathing suit and still look beautiful.

Which reminded Niigaki she needed to get Yoshizawa to eat more food. Woman was too busy flirting and training and training and flirting to pay attention to her unhealthy habits.

“I’m fine, just utterly quiet these days.”

She had a beautiful voice too. It was on level, not to high, or too low, and it was full of the beauty that Niigaki expeted.

The woman noted the Chikorita, who glared at the woman’s Squirtle menacingly.

“Oh! Are you a trainer?” the woman queried. Niigaki grinned.

“Yep! Niigaki Risa of Delia Town! I’m gonna be better than my dad someday!”

The woman smiled broadly, shaking the outstretched hand that Niigaki offered and shaking it.

“It’s nice to meet you Niigaki. I’m Chinatsu Miyoshi.”

Niigaki let out a squeal before hugging the woman, Squirtle squeezed between them. Chikorita snickered.

“Ooo! Chiatsu-sama!”

Parting, Niigaki bounced on her two feet, as Chinatsu stared at her, wide-eyed, mainly in the ‘What the hell was up with this girl’ kind of look.

“You lead the gym here! I’ve been looking for you too!”

Part of Chinatsu wondered who else Niigaki was looking for, and if she should forewarn them before Niigaki met up with them too. Whoever they were, she felt eternally sorry for them, but immediately took it back, mentally cursing them for not finding her first.

“Ah, yes… I do. Lead the gym I mean. Are you looking for a battle?”

Nodding furiously, Niigaki smiled broadly.

“Yeah! Oh… I have to find my friends… before we do… so that Yoshizawa can watch me stomp you flat!”

What an ego on this one… but then, Chinatsu wondered. Yoshizawa? She had heard that name before.

Shrugging it off, she dismissed it as a coincidence and smiled at the girl again.

“I wouldn’t count eggs before they hatch,” she said, “But… I’m sure we can find this Yoshizawa, but first, how about some sweets?”

Niigaki thought a moment, and shook her head.

“Nuh uh, I’m strictly on a no sweet diet…”

She paused, her stomach basically negating the comment she made. Grinning, Chinatsu gave Niigaki a pat on the back.

“Let’s go. We’ll have a gym battle right outside too…”

-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-

“One Pile High to the Sky Death by Chocolate Chocolate Cake ready for pickup!”

And, a few seconds later, Kamei was digging into a rather large pile of cake, ice cream, fudge sauce, sprinkles, and whipped cream, with a large spoon. Yoshizawa sat on the other side, swinging her own spoon back and forth. It was definitely a ‘meal for two,’ if one could call a chocolate cake like that a meal, but it seemed the elder woman was not hungry.

Kamei paused in her re-enacting of the Cookie Monster to give her an innocent look.

“You don’t want any? You paid for it.”

Smiling warmly at the girl, Yoshizawa shook her head.

“Nah. It’s alright. I’m good.”

If Kamei had known any better, she would have pinned the woman down and tried to get her to eat something, even if it was from the bowl of fruit that Naetoru was munching on.

However, Kamei was obliviously aware that Yoshizawa had other things on her mind on a near to all the time basis, and went back to being Cookie Monster again. Yoshizawa smiled at the girl warmly.

“You know who you remind me of?”

Kamei stopped again, a few crumbs of cake falling from her lips. Snickering, Yoshizawa reached over with a napkin and wiped some ice cream off of the corner of the girl’s lip.

“You remind me of Risa when she was younger…”

What a comforting thought. Kamei’s face contorted into a half ‘You’ve been into some hallucinogens,’ and ‘Are you STUPID?!’ Yoshizawa gave Kamei a pat on the cheek, in a sort of motherly gesture.

If one could call Yoshizawa motherly.

“Still got a lot to learn to by the looks of it Mei-Mei.”

Settling a hand on Kamei’s cheek, the older woman paused a moment, and smiled, in the same manner as she gave the girl a cute little cheek pat. Kamei was unsure of what to do, beyond ‘Uhm… can I have my cheek back? You won’t rip that off, will you?’ that came to mind.

She refrained from that though, and settled for staring at the eyes that were staring at her. Opening her mouth, she tried to find the words ‘Are you sure you don’t want my babies?’ when a rather rude girl burst into the shop.

“Yo! I’m looking for the gym leader, what’s her name… China something.”

The girl sniffed, her one wonky eye catching Kamei and Yoshizawa sitting at the table, Yoshizawa still spacing into Kamei’s eyes, and Kamei trying to politely get Yoshizawa’s attention. The girl grinned broadly, and made her way over.

“Hey, you lovebirds know where the gym leader is?”

“The who?” Kamei squeaked. Snorting, the girl rolled her eyes.

“The gym leader. God, what are you, some sort of idiot newb trainer or something?”

She took offense to that, Kamei did, but decided that saying nothing was better than getting her butt handed to her. Though the girl was a little on the petit side, she wore some pretty outlandish clothing, mainly in the shade of dark purple. It all matched though, and went perfectly with the large, golden necklaces she wore around her neck.

“God, you are!”

However, before she could say anything else, the girl found herself face to face with Yoshizawa, who was livid red with anger.

“If you’re going to insult her honor, prove that you’re better. Battle me.”

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Dude! When I said Miyoshi I didn't even think about Chinatsu. I worship 'Unchain My Heart.'

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Re: To Victory or Bust (Chapter 5 :: Flaming Lizards of DOOM!)
« Reply #28 on: May 29, 2007, 10:35:29 PM »
I'm gonna get to the action next chapter. No worries ^^. I just wanted to get a bit more random out of this before I went on. And I to set up the plot properly... Or else you'd all be like 'wha huh!?' by Chapter 7.

Though, with your luck... you might end up doing that.

And I'm glad to see someone knows Chinatsu-san!


Chapter 5 :: Flaming Lizards of DOOM!

“Kid must feel like a princess.”

The girl sniffed and rubbed her nose again, grinning at Yoshizawa.

“Fine. Whatcha gonna battle with, that puny little Naetoru? That thing can’t even scratch a Magikarp!”

Naetoru went to lunge for the girl, to defend his own honor and dignity, but Kamei had her hands around him and was holding him close.

“I know, she’s just a bitch,” she whispered lightly, patting the turtle Pokemon on the head. This seemed to calm Naetoru down a bit, as Yoshizawa and the girl exchanged angered glares.

“You’ll see. Let’s take this out back though. We don’t wanna ruin anyone else’s fun.”

Yoshizawa was rather calm about the whole ordeal. The girl seemed overly confident, whereas Yoshizawa was just there.

Kamei had no idea what to make of it.

“Fine. My Pokemon’ll chew your’s up and spit it out.”

-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-

Squirtle had started making faces at the green creature sitting atop Niigaki’s shoulder. Grunting, Chikorita kept herself from strangling the turtle, whether it have been because she had no idea how to use ‘Vine Whip’ or not was beyond her.

She wasn’t entirely sure what Vine Whip was.

“This must be exciting for you,” Chinatsu said, smiling at the girl, who grinned and nodded.

“Yeah.”

“First time away from home, all independent. Your father must have been devastated to hear that you were leaving to do this…”

Niigaki had thought about that, a lot. Maybe a little too much. Ah well.

Chinatsu smiled at the girl, stopping in front of a little café, waiting for Niigaki to say something.

And indeed the younger girl did.

“Wooaaah… is this where the gym is?” she asked in awe. The woman nodded.

“Yep. Kyuari Town Gym. I’ve been getting a lot of hassle to maintain lately, so I opened up a bakery too. My nephew’s inside… he’s a fan of your father’s.”

Grinning, Niigaki nodded, and, without another word, she went right inside, where there was a boy nervously standing behind the counter, talking to someone.

Or, trying to.

“Ma’am… might I suggest something in the fruit area?” he suggested. The tall girl thought a moment, and grinned broadly.

“Strawberries!” she said happily. The boy smiled.

“Strawberries, great! You want some?”

“Ahhhhh…”

The girl looked over at the display case and pointed at a small bowl of cherries.

“You wanted cherries?” he ventured. The girl paused, looked at the cherries, then grinned at him broadly.

All the while, there was a small bear on the counter, trying to get the girl’s attention.

“Oh, Ryouji, what seems to be the problem?” Chinatsu asked, setting Squirtle down on the table. Immediately, the boy jumped back.

“Auntie Chi Chi!”

“Huh? Oh! I’m so sorry, I forgot… Niigaki, would you mind holding Squirtle while I straighten this out?”

Happy to oblige, the younger girl picked up Squirtle, who clung to her just as happily as she did to him.

Which made Chikorita insanely jealous.

“Auntie… I can’t talk to her… she doesn’t speak our language,” he replied, politely gesturing to the tall girl, who grinned at Chinatsu.

“Strawberries,” she insisted. Blinking, Chinatsu thought a moment.

“Give the girl strawberries then.”

“I tried that a few moments before you walked in and she got all angry at me…” he admitted. Chinatsu let out a laugh.

“Well then… sweetie…”

She turned to the girl.

“What do you want?”

“…. Cake.”

Chinatsu blinked again. Cake… strawberries. She turned to Ryouji.

“Could you pull out a piece of strawberry shortcake?”

After a small pause, the boy pulled out a piece of the aforementioned cake, which made the tall girl clap her hands and nod happily.

“That one!” she said. Letting out a happy sigh, Ryouji grinned.

“That’ll be 100…”

Before he could say anything else, the girl shoved a bill into his hand, took the cake, and turned to walk off, the bear now on her shoulder, eyeing the cake just as happily. Ryouji started to panic.

“Miss, your change!”

Chinatsu snickered lightly, giving him a smile.

“Just give it to her before she leaves. She seems smart… just has a small problem with words she doesn’t get… now, Niigaki here needs something to eat before we go battle out back… how’s that chocolate cake coming along?”

Thinking about this a moment, Ryouji let out a small sigh.

“Uhm… I sold the last one to Yoshizawa-san’s new friend… oh! And Yoshizawa-san’s out back battling some strange girl… all Yankee and wonkified…”

“Aww, that’s depressing,” Chinatsu said with a pout.

“Oh! Don’t worry Auntie Chi chi, I put another cake in the oven! I promise!”

Chinatsu grinned at the boy. He was so gullible sometimes.

“Don’t worry about it… we’ll just have to see who Yoshizawa-san is battling, hmm?”

Niigaki tuned into the conversation at that point, and let out a cry.

“You mean Yossi’s here already!?”

-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-

They were indeed out back, the three of them. The odd girl was glaring at Yoshizawa, who was glaring right back. They both had pokeballs in ther hands.

And Kamei was off to the side, unsure of what exactly was going on beyond ‘Pokemon battle.’

They had spent the last two minutes glaring at each other.

“Alright! I’ll teach you to mess with the honor of young maidens! Go!”

Yoshizawa threw the pokeball out, and, as it hit the ground, out tumbled a Charmander. It was so adorable looking!

Kamei let out a small squeal of delight, but then glared at Yoshizawa.

“HEY! I’m not a maiden!”

“Kid’s a brat too,” the wonky-eyed girl said, grinning, “Fine, whatever. Korinku! Let’s come on out and play!”

Out of the girl’s pokeball came a blue and black lion creature, with a yellow spark at the end for a tail. It was adorable as well.

It just looked grumpy, like it hadn’t been trained right or something. Kamei thought her mother would have loved one of those, but she already hated its existence.

Yoshizawa gave the Pokemon a look, as if she was assessing strengths and weaknesses by the naked eye.

“What, don’t know what attack to use against the awesomeness of Korinku?” the girl asked smugly. Glancing at the girl, Yoshizawa smirked slightly.

“Have you ever won a badge in your life?”

There was a pause, and the girl faltered ever so slightly.

“I’ve never needed one to prove I’m great,” she replied, going right back to her smug look. Yoshizawa’s smirk widened ever so slightly.

No wonder this girl was a bunch of talk. She couldn’t be underestimated though. As angry as that Korinku looked, it also looked like it could take a couple of hits.

“You shouldn’t underestimate your opponents so readily Takanachi.”

“Don’t call me that,” the girl sneered, “Who do you think you are anyways?”

Yoshizawa’s smirk turned full grin as she shook her head.

“Kid… even a Rocket knows better than to mess with a retiree.”

She stopped, before crossing her arms against her chest.

“Yoshizawa Hitomi. Your former boss, Rocket Tanaka.”

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Re: To Victory or Bust (Chapter 5 :: Flaming Lizards of DOOM!)
« Reply #29 on: May 30, 2007, 02:30:00 AM »
Yossui was part of Team Rocket? Cooool....

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