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運命の悪戯 A Prank by Fate

What if fate has played a prank on you...

What if things were not what it seems...

What if the one you love turned out to be your worst nightmare...

A story that spans 2 generations, whose destiny has being twisted by fate.

Cast:

The Maedas:

Maeda Mitsuki, 16 - Youngest daughter of the Maeda Family. Student in Class 2-B of Yassui High School. Tall and Lanky, and prefer things to be prim and proper. Believes that by working hard, you can achieve every thing. Hates lazy people the most. Eats Katsudon when she is feeling sad

Maeda Atsuko, 32 - Eldest daughter of the Maeda Family. Personal Assistant in the Food Republic. Always taking things seriously. Doesn't believe in love.
Likes doing things her own pace and way but is highly efficient. Loves to cook and eat.

Maeda Ami - 48 - Mother of both Atsuko and Mitsuki. Firm and Fierce but has a playful streak. Have a huge distrust of males and hates people with the surname of Takahashi. Years of working hard to bring up her two children had given her bushy eyebrows.
 

Prologue –


“Push Maeda! You can do it!”

“Ah… but I can’t! It’s too painful…”

“You can! You have to! Come on! Don’t lose focus! Just follow me… 1… 2.. Push”

“Ah… Ha… ARG….Itai!”

“She’s coming! Come on! Don’t give up! The harder you push, the faster it will be over!”

“Ah… Ah… Ha… Ha… ARG… Oh Kai… Why… Me… Oh… “

“Congratulations! You are now a proud mother of a lovely daughter!”

******

“Okaasan…”

“Oh child… why must we be cursed… I was silly when I was young, why must you follow my footsteps too?”

“But she’s my child… I couldn’t abandon her… besides her father didn’t knew that I was expecting…”

“Her father? You still want her to call that scumbag, father?”

“But… he really didn’t knew. I didn’t want to tie him down too. Not when he had a chance for overseas scholarship…”

“It’s always about him! What about you? How are you going to take care of your child? My granddaughter…”

“Okaasan…”

“You don’t know right? Nevermind… Okaasan will take care of it all. We will leave this town once you are better. Just the 3 of us to start refresh… But her name… Had you thought of her name yet? “

“Mitsuki… Her name will be Mitsuki…”
« Last Edit: January 06, 2013, 02:31:49 PM by Prataz »

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Re: 運命の悪戯 A Prank by Fate - Prologue
« Reply #1 on: January 01, 2013, 05:09:00 PM »
Whoah.. this is interesting! I wonder if that Takahashi Ju.... is Minami/Kai's brother or son!!

please continue! looking forward to it

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Re: 運命の悪戯 A Prank by Fate - Prologue
« Reply #2 on: January 01, 2013, 05:52:20 PM »
Wow! This is really interesting!  :ding:
I wanna know who that Takahashi Ju is!!  :frustrated:
Please update soon!  :mon XD:
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Re: 運命の悪戯 A Prank by Fate - Prologue
« Reply #3 on: January 01, 2013, 09:54:03 PM »
First thing's first, I LOVE how you're using the newer gens as the main characters here! And the add-on of Miyuki and Sayanee (who is Saya) too! The story seems promising so far, and I really like the reference you've done and how you connected the lower gens as daughters/sons/siblings of the upper gens. xD

Serously, I really love this! It's not everyday that you see a fic about them, so I hope you update and continue this fic soon! ;D

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Re: 運命の悪戯 A Prank by Fate - Prologue
« Reply #4 on: January 02, 2013, 02:21:47 PM »
Hi guys! Thanx for the comments!

The former Prologue is now Chapter 1...which means Chapter 2 will be up tml!

@chemicalstar - You will soon know! Chapter 2 is in the works and the complicated relationship will soon be revealed!

@correnereyes - Just wait awhile more! I promise to update this fic and make sure I don't abandon it =)

@itadakimasu - Thanx alot! There's just too much Atsumina, Kojiyuu, Mayuki etc that I might as well create a new generation of love and hate! Do pm me if there's any offsprings or new generation you like to be featured so that I can put them in =)

I'm still trying to understand the new generations and this fanfic is a tribute to the 2nd chapter of AKB48 =)

Chapter 1 –

Maeda Mitsuki was never a morning person as she snuggles in her bed, resisting the attempts by her mobile phone and the alarm clock to get her up from bed.

But in life, things don’t always go your way as the biggest nemesis against her sleeping habits, also known as the Mother, pulls the comfortable blanket from her.

 “MAEDA MITSUKI! YOU BETTER WAKE UP NOW! OR ELSE…”

******

Mitsuki brushes her teeth sleepily while grumbling complains about her name.

“You shouldn’t had called me ‘Beautiful Moon’... How could you expect the moon to wake up in the morning?  Grrr….”

Nevertheless, despite her whines, Mitsuki understands that waking up on time is the duty of a prim and proper lady.

And waking up on time does have it’s benefits like enjoying the awesome breakfast that her elder sister, Astuko is making and the free ride to school that Uncle “Cool” will be giving.

Therefore, waking up early in the morning isn’t that much of a bad idea after all.

*****

After a customary goodbye kiss to the mom, she hops into the backseat of Uncle Cool’s car and buckles up in preparation for the ride to school.

Who’s Uncle Cool? Uncle Cool is a family friend that had knew her family ever since she was born. His real name was Minegishi Kuu, but since he was much older than her and always telling her cool stories about his travels and giving in her little wants and needs, the nickname Uncle Cool was born.

Now Uncle Cool is the CEO of several food franchises and her sister, Maeda Atsuko, is helping him as his Personal Assistant. Although Uncle Cool always calls her sister, his Waifu, her sister has always rejected this one-sided love, preferring to burry herself with work and more work, much to his chagrin.

“I guess Uncle Cool needs to be more serious before onee-chan will take his love much more seriously…” sighs Mitsuki internally as the complications of adult relationship worries her.

Love is scary isn’t it?

*****

“Ohayou Gozaimasu!” greets her friends as she enters the classroom.  It’s her 2nd year in High School now as she walks towards her seat by the window.

Her class, 2-B comprises of a mixture of interesting people like:

Oshima Ryo, the hyper active, always smiling bundle of energy that is the Class Monitor. The son of the Award Winning Actor Oshima Yuu and the acclaimed international model Kojima Haruna, Ryo-kun was the personification of charisma.

Watanabe Miyuki, the pretty but clueless best friend of hers.  The daughter of the neighborhood clinic’s Doctor Watanabe Yuma and Nurse Kashiwagi Yuki, she has broken too many hearts unintentionally without her knowing it.

Yamamoto Saya, the musician in the class. A serious boy with the sharpest chin, Saya-kun was an orphan adopted by Mariko Mario, the class form teacher. Although his cool, aloof persona has gathered a fan club, only his closest friend know how lame and funny he is, except for Watanabe Miyuki, whom he is always having a cool or serious attitude.

Mitsuki smiles to herself at the thoughts of having another fun filled year with this few that she calls friends. The start of the new term will be much interesting.

As the peal of the bell break her train of happy thoughts, Mario-sensei enters the class, bringing a new student with him.

Deck in clothes, perhaps a size too big for him, the petite new comer sprouted a bob hairdo with slight bangs, together with big spectacles, making look like a mixture between a nerd and a clown.

The class starts to clamor at the sight of the new comer before the deathly stares of Mario Sensei quiets them down.

“Alright class! This new chap isn’t somebody you should laugh at! While you guys were struggling with Junior High, he managed to score so high in his IQ tests to warrant a skip in 2 grades. So stop your snickering and start your repenting and ask yourself why aren’t you working as hard as he!”

“Since he is new in town, I will need somebody to guide him. Maeda! You’re the nicest around. He will be your responsibility. Make sure he’s welcomed!” proclaims Mario-sensei as he points the new comer to sit next to Mitsuki.

As the newcomer slowly lumbers his way towards her, Mitsuki gathers her energy to give him her best smile to welcome him, only to receive a cold shoulder.

*****

A smile that could melt any ice is now being brushed off by a rude and aloof grunt of “Ehm…” as the new comer dumps himself into his seat like a sack of potatoes, hugging his bag.

A vein threatens to burst on Mitsuki’s forehead, as she felt angered by such ungentlemanly behavior.

She tries to stare at the newcomer with a little frown, giving him a taste of the infamous Maeda Stare, used by her family to bring even the most rude of all to apologize to them but failed as she lets out a little gasp of her own.

The newcomer’s eyes had no soul in them. Dead and listless, it was as good as staring into the abyss.

A quick scan brought another gasp to her as she realized the name of this newcomer is none other than Takahashi Ju…


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Re: 運命の悪戯 A Prank by Fate - Prologue
« Reply #5 on: January 02, 2013, 02:58:20 PM »
Interesting!
Love their surnames!
Looking forward to this  :bow:

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Re: 運命の悪戯 A Prank by Fate - New Prologue + Chapter 1
« Reply #6 on: January 06, 2013, 02:30:20 PM »
Chapter 2

“Taka… Taka… Hashi!??”

“Takahashi Julius desu…” he replied in a deadpan voice.

“Ju…Ri..A..Shi…?” replied Mitsuki, bewildered that a Japanese will have a foreign sounding name.

“Julius… not Ju…Ri…A..Shi… Oh I forgot that native Japanese pronunciation is limited…” replied Julius with a smirk, earning another busted vein on Mitsuki’s forehead.

“Oh you better pay attention to class… I don’t want any hard working girls blaming me for their slipping grades…” chuckles Julius as he whip up an iPad to surf the net.

Angered by such outrageously rude behavior, Mitsuki could only raise up her hand to seek the attention of her home teacher, only to have him brush away her grievances by saying, “Ah… Maeda… What seem to be the problem? Couldn’t you be nicer to Takahashi-san? Class, Takahashi-san was born and raised overseas and had being travelling with his father. Therefore, he might not be familiar with our customs and culture, so be nice to him!”

“But Sensei! He’s not paying attention to your lessons and playing with his iPad!” whines Mitsuki.

“Oh? Really? Actually, Takahashi-san is a child genius. It’s because he is too young to be enrolled into University that he has to go to the High School for formalities sake. Now, Takahashi-san is also engaged by the Principal as our consultant on digital learning. He will be embarking on the usage of iPads for classroom learning and will hence be creating the apps suitable for all your usage. So now let’s continue with our first day of school, shall we?”

Upon hearing that, Mitsuki could only puff up her cheeks in anger while the class woo and ahh at the intelligence of the newcomer.

Takahashi Julius continues to smirk and even turn to her and did the rude action of Akkanbe, (Pulling down one’s lower eyelid and sticking out one’s tongue) bringing her frustration to another level.

It’s gonna be a bad start of the term for Maeda Mitsuki…

******

The peal of the bell signifies the start of lunch break as the students pour out of their classrooms towards the canteen.

As usual, the girls will gather together with their homemade bentos while the guys will rush towards the canteen stalls, fighting to be the first in the queue.

For Mitsuki, instead of eating with her classmates, she chooses to eat with another group of best friends, the AnRiRe Trio from Class 2A.

AnRiRe, comprises of 3 of the richest girls in the school, namely, the Heart, Kawaei Rina, the Mind, Kato Rena, and lastly, the Soul, Iriyama Anna.

“Oh Mitsuki-chan! We are here!” waves the energetic Rina, attracting the attention of the taller girl.

“Gosh… when will you stop growing? It’s been just a short holiday and you’re getting taller again…” whines the shorter Rena.

“Oh… don’t be jealous Renacchi, we might not be as tall as her but at least we are bustier!” replies Rina with pride as she puffs up her chest.

“Mou… stop that…” replies Mitsuki as she playfully pokes her chest of Rina, resulting in a dramatic display of a inflating balloon with sound effects, involving squeals of laughter from the rest of the girls.

The laugher dies down as the 4 of them look at each other seriously.

“Are you ready…” as the girls proceed to reveal the contents of their bentos.

******

“KATSUDON?!?” exclaims the rest of the girls as they look at Mitsuki’s bento.

“Mitsuki… Don’t you ever get sick of them?” asks Anna as she winces her nose at the offensive box of rice and pork.

“Yah… You had being eating that for the lunch everyday!” complains Rena, her eyes narrowing with displeasure.

“Maybe that’s why she’s as flat as the road…” teases Rina as she pokes Mitsuki’s chest in revenge.

“You girls are EVIL! Leave my Katsudon and my chest alone please!” replies Mitsuki, puffing her cheeks in fake displeasure. 

“Yes.. Yes… Katsudon-Hime…So how’s the start of school? I heard that there’s a new transfer student in your class?” asks Rina.

“Oh! I heard that he’s a Gajin like Annin!” replies Rena cheekily.

“GRRRR! I’m not a Gajin! It’s not my fault that I look like Kim Jaejoong…” sighs Anna, lowering her eyebrows in defeat.

Ever since the Korean Pop Music Boom, many people had asked if she’s the sister of the famous Korean singer, Kim Jaejoong, of Tohoshinki. The student council had even asked her to cosplay as Jaejoong during one of the morning assemblies, creating a huge ruckus with many girls fainting at the sight of their idols. Clearly, she is now hating the resemblance with this famous idol and dislike people questioning her identity as a 100% pure Japanese.

 “So… what kind of person is he?” asks Rina, trying to get back to the original topic.

“Him? He’s the rudest snob!” exclaims Mitsuki in real displeasure.

“Nani!?!” exclaims AnRiRe together in surprise.

“You must be kidding! I heard that he’s a child genius to be able to skip 2 levels!”

“I heard that he’s even smarter than that but the university wont’ accept him till he has completed his high school…”

“I heard that he’s an American citizen and doesn’t have a Japanese name…”

“Hmm… since you girls know so much about him. Why are you still asking me…” asks Mitsuki, her eyes narrowing at them.

“Mou… Mitsuki… We are just curious…” replied AnRiRe in perfect unison again.

“Takahashi Julius-san is just an annoying brat that looks down on people…” huffs Mitsuki as she burries her face into her katsudon, ignoring the barrage of questions from AnRiRe.

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Wait.. so actually Mitsuki is not Acchan's sister but her daughter?? And for God sake, Mitsuki and Julius are siblings? OMG

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So Mitsuki is Atsuko's daughter. That mean, Takahashi Kai is Mitsuki's father. If Julius is Kai's son, meaning, they are siblings!

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And so the plots thicken...

Are they really siblings?

Will this drag to become a Korean Drama?

Lets see during the next update, which will only happen after Wednesday due to work =(

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Eh... which part of the story that said Mitsuki to be Atsuko's daughter...?

If it is... then Atsuko had her when she was 15 years old... is that even legal?

Well anyway... this fic.. full of interesting ideas and mysteries... so thank you for making it.

Anyhow, can't wait to see your next

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