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Offline Reikian

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Chapter 1 初め
« on: October 10, 2012, 05:34:26 AM »
Chapter 1 初め

"Mayu I am sorry and サヨナラ."(goodbye)

"You promise you would be with me baka!"

"I can't stay with you Mayu"

Mayu eyes started watering with tears flowing out,she mumbled "Yukirin バカ(baka) why can't you be with me..."

"I..."

Mayu pulled me towards her and kissed me,my first kiss was with Mayu,I pushed her away and ran away from her crying.

"Mayu I am really sorry I just can't be with you..." Yuki said to herself softly while running away

Mayu watched as Yuki ran away

"I hope to see you tomorrow but I will not give up on you Yuki."

Mayu sadly walked away back home.
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"Rena I always love you but you wouldn't take me seriously because of our age gap and サヨナラ. " Jurina said sounding like she was joking.

Rena mumbled "Jurina..."

"I have to go now see ya!"Jurina smiled

Rena felt sad seeing Jurina smiling but faking it,inside Rena know she is hurting but before she said anything Jurina was ran away from the dressing room.

"Jurina...."

Jurina ran home and tears started to form and drip below her,she wiped away the tears and whispered to herself everything is going to be fine...

"This is what being heartbroken feels like" Jurina sadly laugh.

"Knock Knock"

Jurina wondered who was knocking on her door,she wiped away her tears and open the door to see Yuki standing there crying.

"Yuki what happened?"

"I..just..sorry to bother you Jurina but can I stay here for tonight?"

Jurina smiled softly "sure Yuki."

They went in Jurina's room

Jurina handed her tissues to stop her tears.

"Thank you Jurina.." Yuki smiled

Yuki looked at Jurina and thought she was an angel but she knew she was called a kissing monster in SKE48.Yuki forgot about Mayu that moment and said.

"Hey Jurina?"

"Yes?"

"um can I kiss you?" Yuki blushed

"umm..I..uh.." Jurina hesitated

Yuki pushed Jurina gently down her bed, leaned towards her and stole Jurina's first kiss and kissed passionately but stopped for air and both of them blushed.

"sorry Jurina." Yuki started tearing up

".....Yuki..uh..it's okay." Jurina said stuttering so the other girl won't cry. 

Yuki hugged Jurina and Yuki mumbled "Thank you" and they both calmly went to sleep after a sad day they had today.

A blue rose started to growing slowly from the ground.

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Thank you for reading the first chapter.
the pairing will change depending on my mood or if I want to change the pairings.

First fanfic I ever written sorry for poor punctuation and grammar.
I hope you enjoy it! Please don't get mad at me for the pairing but the pairing will change throughout the chapter.


 





« Last Edit: October 10, 2012, 05:45:43 AM by Reikian »

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Re: Chapter 1 初め
« Reply #1 on: October 10, 2012, 05:47:27 AM »
jurixrenaxmayuxyuki?? Woaaa

please continue i'm curious about the pairing
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Re: Chapter 1 初め
« Reply #2 on: October 10, 2012, 05:53:15 AM »
eh?! ehhhhhhhhhh?!

You broke Mayuki and Wmatsui....? :cry:

Well, I hope you will put them together again, but thats your chooise~

Welcome to the AKB fiction~ :welcome

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Your first kiss isnt always the first person you kiss, or the first person you date.Your first love is the person that you will always compare everyone to.The person that you will never truly get over, even when you have convinced yourself that you have moved on.

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Re: Chapter 1 初め
« Reply #3 on: October 10, 2012, 07:11:00 AM »
Welcome to the Paradise of AKB lovers and writers :3

It's interesting so far. I'm quite curious about how things will develop on the famous love square Mayuki and Wmatsui. I'm not asking for Mayuki and Wmatsui though cuz I'm fine with Jurimayu, RenaYuki or even MayuRena and Juriyuki. I'm weird right? LOL

Although I'm a loyal shipper of Wmatsui and Mayuki so I still want a happy ending for the two pairings but it all depends on you ;)

Thanks for the hard work. I'm looking forward to your next update.

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Re: Chapter 1 初め
« Reply #4 on: October 10, 2012, 09:14:56 AM »
I've got many questions while reading your fic, and i hope i will get anwers with the next chapters. In other words please continue..haha  :twothumbs

 :welcome Reikian-san, you've got an interesting story.  :thumbsup

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Re: Chapter 1 初め
« Reply #5 on: October 10, 2012, 03:14:49 PM »
I love this fic   :heart:
I really like most stories with these 4 characters since they can end up in any sort of pairing (wMatsui, RenaYuki etc.) and your fics gone straight to JuriYuki meaning another possible pairing at the end :w00t:
Huge potential to this story and I really hope you continue it  :thumbsup

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Re:Chapter 1 初め
« Reply #6 on: October 10, 2012, 07:48:48 PM »
Don't worry I will put them back at some point.~
My main shipping I like is Mayuki and Wmatsui
I was really sick when writing it,I think something was wrong with me yesterday that I thought of weird things.  :lol:
Thank you for those who read it.

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Re: Chapter 1 初め
« Reply #7 on: October 10, 2012, 07:57:41 PM »
Eeeeeeh? Yuki and Jurina, kissed! Wow! Interesting! Please update!! but my WMatsui........ Ah, please update!! Oood job hehe (^^)

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Re: Chapter 1 初め
« Reply #8 on: October 12, 2012, 10:54:27 AM »
 :shocked Interesting!

Can't wait for next update!
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Re: Chapter 1 初め
« Reply #9 on: October 14, 2012, 06:46:12 AM »
Nice Story,
This SAD opening make interest,
so this fic will have need couple huh~
get a try on it,
keep it up,

Looking forward for the next update.

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