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"Please....Take me! Not........Nezumi. To me...She's more than just..... a toy!" the young detective yelled whilst stuttering. His face covered with a scarlet red substance and not taking any notice of it he quickly stood, scaring the masked man.

"Please leave me be. I know what I'm doing! I'm more worried about you," the girl whom was named Nezumi pleaded with him, scared for his live more then her own.

"Nezumi please," he retaliated.

"Black please. I'm worried more about you more than anything. Sukidayo," Nezumi confessed to the detective using his codename and Black was surprised by the sudden statement that his partner made towards him. His head started to play tricks on him and suddenly *THUD* His body lay there lifelessly and it wasn't discovered until Nezumi came back and the masked man was on his/her own in a separate room.

"Black! Please wake up! I want to be your girlfriend! I don't want you to die before that happens," Nezumi yelled, a lonely echo erupted throughout.
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A/N Hey guys! I know I have a collab to do and a couple of OS (Please check the respective threads out :D) but I started writing this and got inspired something so this happened. This is only gonna be 5-10 chapters long :D So enjoy it while it lasts! Please comment and friend me ! I am a good person! You guys should know who the detective 'Black' is and who Nezumi is~ It's kinda obvious by the codenames~
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Re: The Painful Truth About Ones Past (GBender MaYuki) Prolouge 11/3/14
« Reply #1 on: March 12, 2014, 09:44:31 AM »
Hoho nezumixblack

This is interesting

Please update
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Re: The Painful Truth About Ones Past (GBender MaYuki) Prolouge 11/3/14
« Reply #2 on: March 12, 2014, 10:51:06 AM »
hmm so black is a detective.. really interesting !!
please update soon !!

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The Painful Truth About Ones Past (GBender MaYuki) Prolouge 11/3/14
« Reply #3 on: March 12, 2014, 05:27:52 PM »
Interesting... Update please?



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Interesting... Update please?




I have it here~

hmm so black is a detective.. really interesting !!
please update soon !!

I had inspiration from those suit CMs that they did~

Hoho nezumixblack

This is interesting

Please update

Hehe~ Arigatou~ I have the update!

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"Please....Take me! Not........Nezumi. To me...She's more than just..... a toy!" the young detective yelled whilst stuttering. His face covered with a scarlet red substance and not taking any notice of it he quickly stood, scaring the masked man.

"Please leave me be. I know what I'm doing! I'm more worried about you," the girl whom was named Nezumi pleaded with him, scared for his live more then her own.

"Nezumi please," he retaliated.

"Black please. I'm worried more about you more than anything. Sukidayo," Nezumi confessed to the detective using his codename and Black was surprised by the sudden statement that his partner made towards him. His head started to play tricks on him and suddenly *THUD* His body lay there lifelessly and it wasn't discovered until Nezumi came back and the masked man was on his/her own in a separate room.

"Black! Please wake up! I want to be your girlfriend! I don't want you to die before that happens," Nezumi yelled, a lonely echo erupted throughout.

"Nee Watanabe! Your boyfriend sure is weak! I wanted to give him a formal goodbye~ That ba***rd~ Trying to pick a fight with a notorious gang leader like me," the masked man said once again whilst walking towards her and the unconcious Black, " This pisses me off! Nee Mayuyu~ If your 'Yukirin' does wake up tell him his worst nightmare is upon him." She then felt uneasy and unsure when and where Black was gonna wake up and if the masked man was gonna kill him in due course. Maybe it was the right decision to fight with him here and now. Instantaneously charging towards him, Mayu felt a rush of adrenaline flow through her veins and the sudden urge to back out came to her. Something clasped her leg as if she was tied to a chain which was Black.

"Mayuyu......Please let...... Me help........You. Your........my girlfriend......I'm supposed to be the....... one protecting you remember?" Black asked pleading with Nezumi or Mayu(yu) once again

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Hey guys once again! This chapter is a two part one~ As you can tell Black is Kashiwagi and Nezumi is Watanabe (Mayu)! Black aka Yuki aka Yukirin is the guy (Rare right?) and got inspiration to do Detective Kashiwagi because of the Haruyama suit pictures!



Yes~

 

Anyway I'mma head out~

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hey yo hey yo....
you post it here too hahaha..
its me.. hwangjei from aff..

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hey yo hey yo....
you post it here too hahaha..
its me.. hwangjei from aff..

Hi ^_^ Unexpected but hi :D

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ahh,I think that suits yuki.. yuki is absolutely kakoii in that CMs !

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The Painful Truth About Ones Past (GBender MaYuki) Announcement~ 14/3/14
« Reply #8 on: March 14, 2014, 08:42:15 PM »
Hey guys~ For this fanfic I'mma be using LoyalFlutist's fanart from their Tumblr http://animefans12.tumblr.com/drawing throughout the fanfic Happy Pi Day!!

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Re: The Painful Truth About Ones Past (GBender MaYuki) Teaser 15/3/14
« Reply #9 on: March 15, 2014, 11:38:49 PM »
???'s POV

I scouted most of the station in search of the Superintendent. I searched his office, my office, the IT department. I think the only place I haven't looked yet is the office next to the IT department. Many people do work in that department so I have to look out for a midget in a suit..... I think that'll be harder than I expected because he is shorter than most guys but I'm as tall as a freaking street pole... Maybe half or a quarter of it. Anyway I rush over there to find my good friend and sempai Takahashi Kai.... My goodness, he's older than me by 4 months and a week yet I loom over him like he's a giant xD He was with a hooded woman talking about something so I walked over to investigate~
   

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Re: The Painful Truth About Ones Past (GBender MaYuki) Teaser 15/3/14
« Reply #10 on: March 20, 2014, 07:46:39 PM »
hey yo hey yo....
you post it here too hahaha..
its me.. hwangjei from aff..

Hey~ So Yuu-chan biased xD Yuko will be making 'her' appearance soon~

ahh,I think that suits yuki.. yuki is absolutely kakoii in that CMs !


Ty for reading this  :wub: Oh yeah she does look kakkoi in suits~

Will update after these comment replies <3 Keep the AKB love going!

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I scouted most of the station in search of the Superintendent. I searched his office, my office, the IT department. I think the only place I haven't looked yet is the office next to the IT department. Many people do work in that department so I have to look out for a midget in a suit..... I think that'll be harder than I expected because he is shorter than most guys but I'm as tall as a freaking street pole... Maybe half or a quarter of it. Anyway I rush over there to find my good friend and sempai Takahashi Kai.... My goodness, he's older than me by 4 months and a week yet I loom over him like he's a giant xD He was with a hooded woman talking about something so I walked over to investigate~
 “Takahashi-sempai,” I said, “May I have a word with you quickly.”
   “What might the problem be Yuki,” Kai said in an interesting (Screw that) a fail voice., “Oh and there’s a new colleague joining us here soon, her name’s Watanabe Mayu, since Jun’s moving to the medical department with his girlfriend Rena. Medicine is his strong point. Anyway more about Mayu, her IQ is 180 and she is a prodigy in IT so she will be very capable on the computer.”
   “That’s just what I was going to ask,” I answered.  Watanabe Mayu huh? Interesting~ I thought make sure I wasn’t talking to myself.
“Mayu,” Kai bellowed from across the hall, “Meet Kashiwagi Yuki, one of our senior detectives and will be your partner in the next assignment he has.”
 “Nice to meet you Mayu,” I politely said. She removed her hood to reveal silky black hair.
     “Nice to meet you too Kashiwagi-sempai,” Mayu replied energetically, “Yoroshiku onegaishimasu!”
         “Yoroshiku!” Was all I happened to say to her. Kai you douchebag why didn’t you say that to me but to her! Kai seemed enthusiastic but he noticed the dark aura around me. As I glared at him with a dark, spooky glance, he smiled at Mayu and said:
  “Don’t worry about him. He’s notorious for being ‘black’ hearted. Just make sure you don’t get him angry. Okay I’ll be going now you guys get along.” He rushed off and we were left alone like one of those romance scenes in a film where they get stranded and they need to kiss. This feels awkward.
“So, how old are you anyway,” I asked her.
   “19,” she replied back awkwardly, “You?”
      “22,” I replied to her question.
            “Isn’t that a bit too young to be a senior detective?”

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Great chapter !
Even know yuki is a 'black' hearted,actualy she's (or he's) a kind person :3

Please update soon !

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omfg a black nezumi fic!!  :drool:
I fall in love with MaYuki cuz of blackxnezumi *which i don't know why
anyway, I love it !  :yep:

oh yeah, hi  :cathappy:
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MaYuki!

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omfg a black nezumi fic!!  :drool:
I fall in love with MaYuki cuz of blackxnezumi *which i don't know why
anyway, I love it !  :yep:

oh yeah, hi  :cathappy:

Hi  XD When will you be updating your fanfic? :cathappy:

Might be updating today actually~

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Re: The Painful Truth About Ones Past (GBender MaYuki) Sometimes OS 31/3/14
« Reply #15 on: March 31, 2014, 07:56:29 PM »
Long time no see guys ^_^ Based off of the song Sometimes by Britney Spears but I suggest listening to this version
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Sometimes I run,  sometimes I hide from the truth I see inside. Sometimes I'm scared that I might lose you because of my own stupidity. Kashiwagi Yuki, I don't know what I'm going to do without you, that one night when I was kidnapped by your enemies. I was scared but your strength was beyond anything I've seen. The blood all over your face. The scars on your arms. I was worried to the extent that you were going to die.

Sometimes I find it funny that my life was going to go that split second. But that's basically the life of a detective. Risking your own life for others. Watanabe Mayu, honestly I haven't a single clue what I'm going to do without you, I was terrified that night when you were kidnapped by Shinoda and his gang. You were tied up and gagged, they were waiting for me so they could kill me that night. But I was strong enough to take them all on. Even though blood was running down my face and there were scars all over me I couldn't risk losing you, not when I was in love with you. I'm such a coward. I can't face the truth; I can't face you and tell you that I love you. Your too valuable to lose, not right now anyway.

Sometimes love is in front of me but I can't face the person I love. I can't say "Yuki-kun, I love you" straightforwardly like that. I'm such a coward.  You risked your life for me that night for me and I don't know how to repay you.

Sometimes I'm in love and it ends up being unrequited. I don't have the courage to say "Mayu-chan, I love you" straightforwardly because I'm scared it'll be the same as the time I fell in love with her. I felt so used and cheated on, now I'm scared with you Mayu you'll be like that. Miyuki used me to get Sai. It hurt so much I felt like I wanted to kill myself right there and then.

Sometimes I feel like I'm being cheated on. I know Riku remembers me, he's just covering it up. He's such an asshole.  From the first time I met him again, I knew he was trouble. He gave me a sly smirk after he introduced himself, knowing that he could 'play with' me again. No way jose~ I'm in love with someone else. Someone who doesn't know me properly.


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Hey guys XD Sorry for slow updates but here is the next chapter :D

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Life and Death Situations Only Make Us Closer Pt 1~

Yukirin's POV
 
I was searching for that midget again about some paperwork that I had to do for a recent case. Seemingly enough he hitched out for the day, I went also. Taking a ride in my Ferrari, I drive on when suddenly an oncoming car ran a red light and collided head on towards me. Afterwards, feeling lightheaded and fainthearted, my eyes turned droopy and closed them. Then shouts echoed everywhere signalling that I was in trouble. I felt my head was raised and woke up to find Yuko and Mayu.
 
 "Where..... Am......I," my mouth stuttered every single word.
   
"Me and Mayu are taking you to the hospital, keep tight Yukirin," Yuko reassured me, was I dying or not?
 
"Yuu-kun, don't panic!" I heard Mayu yell.
 
-Mayu's POV-
 
Me and Yuko-chan were out looking for anime shop when... A large crash happened in front of us. That Ferrari seemed familiar and we saw that Yuu-kun... was badly injured after we saw a car ran a red light and hit his car at high speed. So me and Yuko-chan ran up to the scene. I saw Yuu-kun hanging off of the rubble and we quickly try to take him out. So I held his head, resting it on my lap while Yuko-chan examined the collateral damage. He had large scars on his head, torso and legs..
 
"Where..... are...... we," he asked with a croaky voice and pale face.
   
"You're still where you got hit, me and Mayu will get you to the hospital, stay strong Yukirin," Yuko encouraged him to stay alive even with a large scale injury like this.
 
 "Don't panic Yuu-kun, stay strong," I helped Yuko in encouraging him, making sure he wasn't panicking, if he was, more blood would come out. So when the ambulances arrived to the scene, we made sure he was safely taken to the hospital. It was an intense ride, most certainly. We were staring intently at Yuu-kun. His eyes opened and closed from time to time and it made me scared.
 
"Mayuyu, calm down. Yukirin is very strong and I'd expect that his willpower can get him through," Yuko-chan reassured me and I did expect him to stay alive.
 
"Mayuyu......  I hope....." he started, "If I'm still alive....... I'll love someone as beautiful... As you. If I die before then, please tell Miyuki that she deserves Sai." Everything seemed surreal to me right now and I blushed a bright red. I just can't believe such a innocent gentleman like him called me beautiful. But soon he might leave us. I love him so much to let him go this early on in his life. After the ambulance arrived at the hospital, Yuu-kun was quickly rushed into the OR. It was now the time to start praying. Tension and intensity breezed past us. Slowly, as time went by, the tension lowered. After 2 hours, Doctor Watanabe Miyuki, who happens to be the Stations doctor and my sister, walked out of the door with blood on her hands. Instantaneously I rushed towards her with eyes of determination.
 
"Milky-onee-chan, is Yuu-kun alright please tell me," I pleaded with her, signalling worry within me.
 
"Mayuyu, is Yukirin the Yuu-kun you're talking about? Then he's perfectly fine. Just-" She said before I cut her off,
 
"Just what?"
 
"Well currently he has had too many scars and if they keep bleeding then he might die. But currently he's in comatose and we don't know when he might wake up," she replied with a solemn look on her face.
 
"Can I go see him," I asked her.
 
"Sure. Go to room 157," Milky replied and I rushed to where Yuu-kun was.
 
-In Yuki's Hospital Ward-
 
I looked at his sleeping figure, with a mask on his face and tubes that were stuck on all over his body, I was scared to think that I could live without him.

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Re: The Painful Truth About Ones Past (GBender MaYuki) Sometimes OS 31/3/14
« Reply #17 on: April 06, 2014, 01:54:16 PM »
whooaa,yuki is on dangerrr !!
stay strong yukiii !!

anyway,your signature pic is great,yukirin's flying kissuu~~~

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I will double update today~ I'm so sorry because the time that I took to do this I was overseas, now I'm back so :) I'm planning the next part of the chapter 4 and when I finish it I will update ^_^
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Life and Death Situations Only Make Us Closer Pt 2~

His pale face illuminated my heart and then with a stroke of luck I felt something twitch. I heard him grunt and woken up. A smile of relief became apparent on my face.

"Mayuyu, am I dead," he asked.

" Baka, if you were talking to me now, would you be dead," I replied. Afterwards I took out my phone, tried to call someone I knew from Korea. My cousin Kim Taeyeon. He knows a lot about criminology and I was meaning to ask him if he knew Yuu-chan.

-Phone Call-

"Yeoboseyo," the caller asked.

"Taengoo, don't worry it's me your cousin, Mayuyu," I reassured him. " In your databases do you have anyone by the name of Kashiwagi Yuki?"

"Oh hi Mayuyu, let me check in the database," he replied becoming more cheerful, "Wait are you with him in the hospital where Miyuki works? I just managed to get some information that, apparently he's Fany's younger cousin." Wait Fany...... Tiffany Hwang!?

"Yeah I'm in Kagoshima Central Hospital, he's badly injured and he's barely alive," I said worried for Yuu-kun, " If you want you can call her now." I hung up on him knowing that he'll probably call Tiffany.

-End of Phone Call-

-Yuki's POV-

"Mayuyu, can you get my phone," I asked her, wondering if Fany-oneechan is worried about me.She passed me my phone and then *Ring* *Ring* *Ring* I saw that the caller id was name "Tiffany "Fany" Hwang". I wonder what Fany-oneechan wants from me.

-Phone Call-

"Yukirin daijoubu desu ka? I heard you were in a car crash,"  I heard her panic a little, "Was it Shinoda?"

"Fany, please don't. I don't know who it was bu-" I was cut off.

"Me and Taeyeon will meet you at your room," she burst in the middle of my sentence, "157 right?"

"Yeah," I muttered.

"I have to go bye," she said.

-Call end-

"Kashiwagi-kun, may I come in? You need an injection," a nurse shouted from outside.

"Hai," I said whilst taking off my shirt. Mayu just stared at me whilst drool came out of her mouth. Okay now I think I look too hot with all these scars and a 6-pack....

"Mayu," I started to say things, "If you think I'm too hot turn around and wipe that drool off your face.

"Wait I have drool on my face? Why would....." she asked and said another part, "I get it now." The nurse then came in. She had done injections on my back, arms and legs. After she left, Taeyeon and Tiffany came in.

"Yuki, dude. Put a shirt on! Or did we interrupt something between our two cousins, Fany," Taeyeon then asked suspiciously.

"Pretty sure he wasn't doing anything when I called."

Chapter 4

A Dark History Pt 1~

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"Shinoda-sama, we managed to hit your target, yet he's still alive," a person began to speak, "Oshima Yuko and a new girl named Watanabe Mayu saved him before he could die."

"We'll just have to kill all three of them before we could get to the main two we're looking for," Shinoda Mariko said, annoyed at the fact that her main target seemed to have gained bodyguards, making her mission harder.

"Hai."

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"Yukirin!/Yuu-kun!" both Tiffany and Mayu yelled simultaneously.

"Hey! Both of you! Just shut up," Yuki said, with migraines encircling him inch by inch.

"Fany, your three years older than me and 6 years older than Mayu. Please do not act like her age," he said bluntly, "And Mayu, your 20, please act mature. Now each of you tell me what you want." Yuki then groaned and pointed towards a small pot of coloured pills.

"Yuu-kun you need your migraine pills," Mayu then asked Yuki before the latter nodded with a pained expression on his face.

"Onegaishimasu," he then said. Passing the pot to the injured detective, she then wondered why his face turned solemn.

"Yuu-kun, is your father really alive," Mayu then asked a really heartbreaking question to Yuki.

"I didn't want to tell you but he's in a better place," Yuki then replaced his solemn face with a seemingly innocent face, "And it's all because of me... Your father is Watanabe Shiro? Am I right?"

"Yeah it is. Your father's name is Kashiwagi Tetsuya, right?" She asked him back.

"Yep. I wanted to protect you because I don't want your father the same way mine did. I didn't have him growing up, he honestly was one of those figures who never gave up on his loved ones. He died trying to save me and your dad," Yuki said with remorse.

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