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Offline abcari

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Re: Re: Clueless guy ever!!! (KAIXACCHAN) DOUBLE UPDATE^^
« Reply #120 on: September 05, 2013, 03:21:13 AM »
yey! two chapters! *A*

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Re: Clueless guy ever!!! (KAIXACCHAN) DOUBLE UPDATE^^
« Reply #121 on: September 05, 2013, 04:55:38 PM »
The story's so nice. I can't wait to read more.   :inlove:

BUT,

I can't read that part. That link.  :banghead: I'm curious to what happened to them.  :(

Can you send me a copy Fausto-san? :cry: If that's okay with you. :)


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Re: Re: Clueless guy ever!!! (KAIXACCHAN) DOUBLE UPDATE^^
« Reply #122 on: September 05, 2013, 05:30:48 PM »
Wow two chapter thank you very much !!!!
This two chapter are awesome :)
Please update soon ;)

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Re: Clueless guy ever!!! (KAIXACCHAN) DOUBLE UPDATE^^
« Reply #123 on: September 06, 2013, 02:59:40 AM »
great updates!!
now they're official ^^

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Re: Clueless guy ever!!! (KAIXACCHAN) UPDATE!!
« Reply #124 on: September 06, 2013, 09:38:48 PM »
Yes, I know, it's a short update, but it's to make you wait a little more, I have to write everything on the computer, and it takes time... :nervous :nervous Enjoy!


I stop right then. I have blood everywhere, my body is killing me and all I think about is killing that guy but this voice brings me back to reason.
« Atsuko ? » I run to her and look at her. « Atsuko ? How are you ? Are you hurt ? »
« ...Kai... ? Is it you ? »
« Yes, it's me. Don't worry, it's okay. » I whisper, touching slowly her cheeks.
« Where am I ? »
« You're fine, don't worry. »
« I... I want to sleep... »

I quickly take off my hoodie and cover her arms and chest with it.
« Don't worry Aachan, sleep, I'm with you. »
 
She closes her eyes and I reach my pocket to call Kuu so he can pick us up. But, there is nothing in it. It's not in my hoodie neither. Shit, I left it at home... !
Suddenly my eyes go weird, I feel dizzy and I need to sit on the floor for a few minutes. My shirt is wet and I still feel a huge pain on my chest. I feel like I'm gonna faintin one second, but I can't. I need to carry Atsuko to an hospital. The nearest must be already far away from here but I don't know if she's seriously hurt or not so I need to go now.

She already asleep when I raise and carry her in my arms. I can't take the motorcycle, it's too dangerous for her, she could fall and I can't hold her and drive at the same time, especially on this meanders road. I'm gonna have to walk...

I can't think about nothing else than walk, it's taking me so much concentration and strenght to do it. Maybe I lost too much blood because I don't feel anything Atsuko is not a weight in my arms. I can't feel my arms anymore...
The silent is really heavy... I wish I could walk like this forever with Atsuko in my arms...
But... I don't have strenght anymore... I have to carry on... What if I can't... ?
She's so beautiful, sleeping like this... This is all my fault... I will never break into her life anymore for her sake. It's all my fault...



« Mister... ? Mister ? »
« ... »
« What happened ? You're hurt ! »
« Take Atsuko. Take care of her... »

I can't even see who's talking to me. I think we arrived at the hospital. Feel like it's been ages...
« Call Kuu... You need to call Kuu, from PERSONA... »
« Mister, we have to... »


BLACK OUT

can u pm me the part  I couldn't access? Arigatou!


2 weeks later


My... My head. It's killing me... Fuck, what happened... ?
Atsuko...
« A-Atsuko ? » I whisper. I'm thirsty.
« Kai ? Riku, Kai is awake ! Kai ? »
« Shut up Kuu... »
I hear Riku's laught and I slowly open my eyes.
« Oh man, it's about time, I almost thought you were dead ! »
« Shut up Kuu ! » says Riku.
« Atsuko... ? »
« Already taking about her ? You're really into her^^ She's fine »
« Great... « I try to smile « Where is she ? What room ? »
« She's at home Kai, it's been 2 weeks since »
« 2 weeks ? Why am I here then ? »
« Look at your chest man » sighs Kuu.
I lift my shirt and see a huge scar on my chest, starting from my pecs until my abs, like a / .
« What is this ??! »
« ...You fought with the psycho, he attacked you with his kife and tadaa... It was really bad Kai, you walked until here with your chest deeply cut. The doctors don't even know you could have stay on your feet and carry her. You lost a lot of blood, you could have died. »
« ... »
« I didn't think it was that bad. I mean it hurted but... I had to save her, bring her here so I tried to ignore the pain... » I frown.
« See why I am jealous ? » says Kuu looking at Riku. « Kai is a hero, there is no way we could be better than him now... »
« H-How did it go ? With the media ? »
« Good. Akimoto-san told them she was kidnapped by a psycho and that he succeed in finding her. You're not in it. And for the record, they found the psycho half dead. You must be really angry to punch him like that. »
« He tried... to rape her ... »
« … You did the right thing man » says Riku with a gentle smile. « And by the way, next time, call me. It's an order. »



The nurses are agree to let me go after I showed her that my scar was perfectly illed, since 2 weeks. Riku is driving us home with his car.
« Akimoto-san wants you to call him ASAP »
« He's gonna kill me. Can we go to the theater ? I want to see him now. »
Riku nods and 15 linutes later he parks the car in front of it.
« Wait for me here. Thanks. »
I quickly run into the theater, hoping that there is no girls at this time. The corridors are empty, my hands are shaking when I get to his office.
I knock.
« Come in »
I do so and see an hint of surprise on his face.
« Kai, come in »
I close the door and sit in front of him.
« ... »
« ... »
« Kai. What were you thinking of ? »
« ...Sir. This was my fault. I don't know how he got my number, probably by Atsuko's phone. I couldn't tell the police or it would have become a scoop, a scandal. I wasn't to disrespect you but it would have taken too much time to explain...
« And you against someone who has a knife ? »
« I-I...Sir, he was taking pictures of her, and he tried to...he... »
« I know. She told me. »
« I couldn't let him to do it... Listen, I know you must be angry but I had to protect her... »
« ... »
« ... »
« Thank you, Kai »
« Eh ? »
« You saved Atsuko. She's like my daughter. And you avoid a scandal by putting your life in danger. It was silly. But thank you. »
« You're...welcome »
« I guess I need to show you my gratitude »
I frown.
« What do you say about a date with Atsuko ? »
« What ??! But dates are not... »
« Allowed, I know. This is an execption. »
« T-Thank you sir... »
« But remember, she's like my daughter »
I blush and quickly run out of his office.

« So, you're not a dead man?^^ » asks Riku when I got into the car.
« ...I have a date »
« What ? With him ?! »
« No ! He offered me a date with Atsuko »
« What ?! Oh okay, you're the favourite one now... ! »
He starts the car groaning and drive till home but just stop the car without turning off the contact.
« Go ! »
« And you ? »
« Later ! Enjoy ! »

I don't get it, they're weird. But I don't care, I want an hot shower and eat something big. I come in the flat and sigh, it's good to be home.


I was about to go to the kitchen when I see Atsuko asleep on my sofa.
« A-Atsuko ? Atsuko ? »
What is she doing here ?
« Hm ? » she opens her eyes, sees me and jumps on me.
«KAI ! Kai, you're back ! How are you ?! »
« Atsuko... » she smells so good... I was so afraid to lose her...
« Kai... You're back... » she starts crying on my neck.
« Are you okay ? Are you hurt ? »
« No... I was so afraid ! You could have died ! You are so stupid... »
« Atsuko » I say raising his shin so she looks at me. « I'm sorry, it was my fault »
« What ? NO ! You saved me ! Kai, you carried me, you fought for me... » YOU COULD HAVE DIED !! » she screams before weakly punch me.
« Atsuko » I whisper » I'm here...I'm here... »
She stops punching me, big tears on her cheeks
« Baka... »
I embrace her.
« How are you, Atsuko ? »
« I'm fine. I don't remember much... And I wasn't hurt, just drugged »
« Good. I'm relieved »
« ...Show me. »
« It's okay Atsuko, forget about this »
« Show me please »
I sigh and take my shirt off. She looks at the car.
« It's so big... and you carried me all this way... »
She touches it with her fingers, it makes me shiver.
« Atsuko ? »
« Hm ? »
« Would you...go on a date with me ? »
« Eh ?! » she openswild eyes.
« I have the permission to have a date with you. Akimoto-san allowed me to... I'm sorry if you think it's too soon or inappropriate... »

She begins to smile through her tears, she's so beautiful... My heart bleed imagining what thi guy could have done to her. Such a great girl...

« Kai ? »
« Hm ? »
« What are you thinking of ? »
« ...I was just... I couldn't have forgive myself if this guy... How could he think this about you, about you all, this is insane...§ »
« Kai... »
« I was so angry, I was hitting him, I couldn't stop... I could have kill him if you... »
« Kai » she says touching my cheeks. This is not your fault, you did the right thing. »
« I could have kill him... »
« I know. I'm not afraid of you » she smiles gently. « You saved my life. So yes, I want to go on a date with you!^^ »

I close my eyes listening to those words, her hand on my cheek... This feels so good.
« Thank you, Atsuko. » I sigh.

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Re: Clueless guy ever!!! (KAIXACCHAN) DOUBLE UPDATE^^
« Reply #125 on: October 23, 2013, 09:43:38 AM »
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Update please!!!!!

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Re: Re: Clueless guy ever!!! (KAIXACCHAN) DOUBLE UPDATE^^
« Reply #126 on: December 30, 2013, 05:28:12 PM »
Ur story is so sweet ~

It seem like kai is making Acchan mad again oh boy

Please update

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Re: Clueless guy ever!!! (KAIXACCHAN) DOUBLE UPDATE^^
« Reply #127 on: December 30, 2013, 09:34:05 PM »
Update please...

Been a while since I see ur updates

Thank you

Looking forward to the continuous of this story

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Re: Clueless guy ever!!! (KAIXACCHAN) DOUBLE UPDATE^^
« Reply #128 on: February 04, 2014, 01:36:33 PM »
update please  :banghead: :bow: :bow:

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Re: Clueless guy ever!!! (KAIXACCHAN) DOUBLE UPDATE^^
« Reply #129 on: February 04, 2014, 02:48:06 PM »
I can't open it  :cry: :bleed eyes:

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Re: Clueless guy ever!!! (KAIXACCHAN) DOUBLE UPDATE^^
« Reply #130 on: February 26, 2014, 05:57:25 PM »
will kai and atsuko will be able to fight for their relationship since atsuko is akb member and not be allowed to be relationship with any guy
and hopefully kai not being so clueless much after this  :lol:
look forward for ur update  :)

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Re: Clueless guy ever!!! (KAIXACCHAN) DOUBLE UPDATE^^
« Reply #131 on: March 20, 2014, 01:03:45 PM »
NICE FANFICTION!!!!!! GOOD JOOB AUTHOR-SAN :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs

but unfortunely i cant open the link  :hip cry: :ptam-cry: :OMG: :badluck: :fainted: :pleeease:
i really want to know the next of this story,can u give me the copy of the next chapter that i cant open it?  :wriggly:
but if that not distrub u ^^ :mon sweat:
however,i waiting for ur update author-san  ;D
keep the good work  :mon yeah:

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Re: Re: Clueless guy ever!!! (KAIXACCHAN) DOUBLE UPDATE^^
« Reply #132 on: April 02, 2014, 04:11:46 AM »
Great story!!  XD

Really want to read this full story, but I still have no access.  :cry: :cry:

Very good story, please continue. :bow:

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Re: Clueless guy ever!!! (KAIXACCHAN) DOUBLE UPDATE^^
« Reply #133 on: April 15, 2014, 08:22:13 PM »
Oh geez!! I can't open it, mm can you pm me the next chapter becoz I can't acces it  :cry: please poor of me  :( ~~ btw have a wonderful day fausto-san and I hope you can update ASAP heheh  :thumbup :thumbup

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Re: Clueless guy ever!!! (KAIXACCHAN) DOUBLE UPDATE^^
« Reply #134 on: April 16, 2014, 10:41:50 AM »
The same fate with some other readers   :cry:

I can't open the link too  :gyaaah:

Oh geez!! I can't open it, mm can you pm me the next chapter becoz I can't acces it  :cry: please poor of me  :( ~~ btw have a wonderful day fausto-san and I hope you can update ASAP heheh  :thumbup :thumbup

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Re: Re: Clueless guy ever!!! (KAIXACCHAN) DOUBLE UPDATE^^
« Reply #135 on: May 22, 2014, 03:41:51 PM »
I cant open the liiiiiink!!! D‘X 
please author-san can you send me the copy

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Re: Clueless guy ever!!! (KAIXACCHAN) DOUBLE UPDATE^^
« Reply #136 on: May 23, 2014, 02:17:27 PM »
Wait, what? a link? I dont even know. Seriously, I need an update!!  :fainted:
Gimme that!!
Lol

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Re: Clueless guy ever!!! (KAIXACCHAN) DOUBLE UPDATE^^
« Reply #137 on: November 16, 2014, 06:23:24 AM »
Have you already abandoned the story??

Please don't continue!!!

I will wait no matter how much it takes
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Re: Clueless guy ever!!! (KAIXACCHAN) DOUBLE UPDATE^^
« Reply #138 on: November 16, 2014, 11:58:30 AM »
No, I didn't really give up this fic, but I was writing everyday and I was 100% in the story, I was honestly drowing in it. This is weird but I have to be careful and take the time to realize this is just a story, don't get involve too much. So I retired for while, I surely will come back and continue soon. Please be patient and thank you for reading my work. :bow: :nervous

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Re: Clueless guy ever!!! (KAIXACCHAN) DOUBLE UPDATE^^
« Reply #139 on: February 11, 2015, 03:00:04 PM »
 :)

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