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Love Confusions Chapter 0 [Prologue] 3/10/13
« on: March 11, 2013, 04:47:24 AM »
HI everyone  :hee:

Minatsu / Mintsu here, and this is my first fanfic in the process.
I am just such a huge fan of YuiParu and I rarely see fanfics written about them so I decided to write one of own and see how it goes.
As far as any other pairing in this fic, I would you guys to comment what other pairings you wanna see in this fic.
I am sorry for this short snippet of my overall fanfic, I just decided to post this up to see if I get good feedback and introduce some of the characters and a pairing.
Also please excuse my grammar & English, as I am not best at that

Chapter 0 (Prologue)

Paru Point of View


Did you ever wish your friends were mute? Or that they would have a delete button in their brain, so that whenever you wanted them to forget something you said you could just press that button and kabam! problem solved? Well those two things I just listed are my two greatest wishes at the moment.

“Coooooome on Paru! Just confess to her!”

“For the billionth time, NO!” I groaned as I threw a pillow at one of my good friends, Shimada Haruka whose nickname is Haruu. Huh, funny that we share the same name cause that’s about the only thing that we have in common cause we’re exact opposites. She’s really loud and outgoing, while me I’m way more reserved, which is way I can not and will not confess.

“Hmp,” Haruu huffed and crossed her arms in a childish manner while looking at me with narrow eyes.

“I swear, with your actions no one would ever guess that you’re actually older than me.”

“Hey! I wouldn’t be acting like this if you’d just go and confess.”

“Hey Haruu, maybe you should just leave Paruru alone and let her confess when she’s ready.” I smiled brightly at what my other good friend, Abe Maria just said. She’s one of the more calmer and less hyper type of girl in our group. I always knew I liked her. She’s sensible.

“Yeah,” I looked over and saw Oba Mina nodding, while agreeing with Maria. “It must of taken Paru-chan lot’s of courage for her to tell us that she has a crush on someone, let’s not pressure her into anything.”

Heck yeah it did! It took tons of courage for me to say anything.

“Fine...” Haruu nodded slowly with a defeated expression on her face. “But you have to confess sometime, and when you do! Contact us immediately! I must witness such a scene.”

I smiled, nodded and offered a thumbs up as my response to her silly statement. Sometimes Haruu can be super silly but that’s what I find so entertaining and interesting about her.

“So...what should we do now?” Maria asked, when it got too quiet.

“Hm,” Haruu smiled a sly smile which made me think she was going to suggest something involving my crush. Gosh... Maybe I should have waited a bit more to tell them? Too late now. “How about we make a plan.”

“What type of plan?”

Haruu’s smile widened, “A How-To-Make-Yokoyama-Yui-Fall-in-Love-With-Paru Plan.”

I facepalmed. You gotta be kidding me...

-TBC-

Thank you for reaching the end of the prologue of my fic! Thanks to all those who read this, and please let me know if I should continue or not?
I would also like to know what characters and pairings you would like to see in this fanfic of mine and I will try my best to squeeze them in.
See you all next time  :byebye:

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Re: Love Confusions Chapter 0 [Prologue] 3/10/13
« Reply #1 on: March 11, 2013, 05:49:27 AM »
I like the start and if you can push the pairing it be great for others

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Re: Love Confusions Chapter 0 [Prologue] 3/10/13
« Reply #2 on: March 11, 2013, 07:25:34 AM »
Ahhh YUIPARU!!! I actually kind of ship this pair (beside of the triangle love of YagiRan and Yui XD)

Go go go! Please continue :D
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Re: Love Confusions Chapter 0 [Prologue] 3/10/13
« Reply #3 on: March 11, 2013, 08:57:20 AM »
wohooooo yuiparu    :on woohoo:  :on woohoo: my ship lately   :grin:

please continue, i really looking forward this    :cow:
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Re: Love Confusions Chapter 0 [Prologue] 3/10/13
« Reply #4 on: March 11, 2013, 11:36:30 AM »
At first, a huge thank you for listing me as one of your fav writers, it means a lot to me  :bow:

and congratulations on a nice prologue! I'm not a huge fan of Paru but Yui is someone I recently started to like a lot. This pairing might not be my favorite one, but this storyline seems interesting. I hope you will post first chapter soon!

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Re: Love Confusions Chapter 0 [Prologue] 3/10/13
« Reply #5 on: March 11, 2013, 12:06:06 PM »
YUIPARUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU

Woohoo  :twothumbs ~

lol I was thinking about Paru would be the husband in their relationship after confession... oh make Yui fall in love with her

plz update soon
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Re: Love Confusions Chapter 0 [Prologue] 3/10/13
« Reply #6 on: March 11, 2013, 01:42:07 PM »
Yuiparu! Yuiparu! Yeaay! XD ME love it! Please do continue.. :bow:

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Re: Love Confusions Chapter 0 [Prologue] 3/10/13
« Reply #7 on: March 12, 2013, 12:14:28 AM »
I don't remember if there was a YuiParu fic with YuiParu as the main pairing yet. I shall eagerly wait for your next chapter. :3 ~
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Re: Love Confusions Chapter 0 [Prologue] 3/10/13
« Reply #8 on: March 13, 2013, 08:32:40 PM »
Recently my shipping heart sparks a constantly growing interest of YuiParu along with the growing appearance of their content in the forum. :love:

Thanks for the initiation of this YuiParu-based fic. :D Please make me ship YuiParu harder with your updates later.
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Re: Love Confusions Chapter 0 [Prologue] 3/10/13
« Reply #9 on: March 13, 2013, 09:33:52 PM »
Yessss!!

We beed more YuiParu fanfics
(and JuRicchan but anyway!)

Haruu lol xD

I can't wait!

Update soon!!

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Re: Love Confusions Chapter 0 [Prologue] 3/10/13
« Reply #10 on: April 17, 2013, 12:25:04 AM »
please continue writing this. I've just started shipping these two and I already can't get enough of them. haha!

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