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Madoromi no Yakusoku [WMatsui][Chapter 1][05|21|13]
« on: May 19, 2013, 12:07:56 PM »
So, Yeah..

Got Inspired by Hyouka's first Ending theme, I was re-watching it.

LOL.

So, a 5 Chapter Story~


Prologue

I Started to walk in the Streets, It's spring, It was a bit cold but In Don't affect me.



I Still can remember the Face of the Young Girl in my Dreams. "Who is she?"



I ask my Self, As I walk, My Mind Unconsciously thinks about that Girl.



I Actually forgot that I was walking in the Streets, and more specifically, AT NIGHT.



As my mind continuous to think, I didn't realize that I already bumped in to someone.



"Ah! Sorry!" I apologized, The girl ran away, But I Managed to see her face, She looks like that girl from my Dream.



My Mind is still thinking, But it was Stopped when Someone Called my Name. "Rena!! How Long will you keep us Waiting?!"



"Coming!" I Shouted back.

[End of Prologue]

ACTUALLY THIS PROLOGUE... IS NOT~ FINISHED~  :cool2:

Joke. Daz' Finished.


How was it? Tell me what you think!!

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I'll Update this Later or Maybe Tomorrow.

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Re: Madoromi no Yakusoku [WMatsui][05|19|13]
« Reply #1 on: May 19, 2013, 12:19:21 PM »
I hope It is Wmatsui

and I havent forgott your other Sayamilky fic please update both soon I will be waiting
Love AKB
             ~TakaYuu~
                           ~AtsuMina~
                                          ~KojiYuu~
                                                      ~TomoTomo~
                                           ~MariMii~
                           ~Wmatsui~
             ~MaYuki~

Love this Pairing
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Re: Madoromi no Yakusoku [WMatsui][05|19|13]
« Reply #2 on: May 19, 2013, 12:48:36 PM »
Interesting prologue there...

Can't wait for the start of the fic

WMatsui... Yeah...

Thank you...

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Re: Madoromi no Yakusoku [WMatsui][05|19|13]
« Reply #3 on: May 19, 2013, 01:04:08 PM »
yeayyyy!!!
another Wmatsui Fic
i love it
update soon
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Re: Madoromi no Yakusoku [WMatsui][05|19|13]
« Reply #4 on: May 19, 2013, 01:21:31 PM »
Greaaaaat~
RENA-SAMA!!!

YUKI-SAMA!!!

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Madoromi no Yakusoku [WMatsui][Chapter 1][05|21|13]
« Reply #5 on: May 21, 2013, 11:19:50 AM »
Chapter
~ 1 ~

The Sky slowly Darkens, As a Young Girl continuous to walk in the Lonely Dark Night. Today was really tiring for the Normal Girl, Named Matsui Rena. She works as a Waitress in the Café near a School in the City, The Café is called ‘La Prostitucionés’ No One knows why it was Named Like that, But all the Information from the Gallery says that it was Owned by ‘Watanabe Miyuki I’ The Ancestor of the Café’s Owner, ‘Watanabe Miyuki 600th ‘ What an Anniversary.
Away with the Café, Rena was invited to go to a Buffet with her Friends, and it was Akane, who invited them all.

“The Night is fast.” She continued walking.

As she walked alone in the Darkness, She kept thinking about her dream last night, It was about a Short-haired girl who’s been with her in a dream many times. The First time she saw her in her dream; it was clearly fine for her, since it was just a dream, not in the Reality. Countless times, she try to find this girl, But she see nothing but other people.

“I should stop searching for that girl; I’ll never find anything by just looking for her.” She tries to fix her bangs as she continued to walk, she didn’t pay much attention as she was walking, She accidentally bumped in to someone.

“Ah! Sorry!” Rena kneeled to see the face of the girl she bumped. She saw it, It was the girl in her dream, Same face.

“AHH! GHOST!!” The girl stood up and ran away, She didn’t notice that she dropped her Student Handbook, and inside that handbook, is her Identification Card. “Wait! Miss! You dropped… this…”Rena opened it to see inside, she saw the name and Picture, It was really her. “Matsui Jurina… Seto Public School…”She read it silently. “WHY DID SHE CALL ME A GHOST?!” She exclaimed. Rena hid the Handbook on her bag, and she continued walking, again, Her Mind was thinking about that girl. “Why is she appearing on my dream…”She continues to ask herself.

“Rena! How long will you keep us waiting!?” three girls from the Park Shouted at Rena, It was Yuria, Akane, and Airi.

“Coming!!” She ran to them, in the Lighted plaza.

When she arrived, They were pulled by Akane to get inside the Buffet Restaurant. “C’mon~ Let’s eat~” Akane insisted. The Other three, agreed. Rena didn’t noticed that the Girl she bumped  a while ago is also in the Buffet. As the 4 Girls enjoyed eating foods, Rena needed to go to the Restroom. So she walked a few steps to enter it, Inside, She saw the Girl Again. “Ah! You dropped this awhi—“ Her voice was cut when The Girl grabbed Rena’s hands and Told something to her.

“I was Searching for you in the Twinkling Stars…” She whispers.

“What’re you?!---”

“believing that we'd be able to meet very soon…” She continues, Rena was shocked on what she is seeing.

“Someday we'll fall in love.” She adds.

“Even if a new morning arrives, please make sure that you would not fade away.” She kissed Rena on the Lips, Rena’s eyes widened. 
“. . . .” Rena was left frozen. Then The Girl named Jurina whispered something to her, after the whisper, She walked away as if nothing happened. Rena dropped and collapsed on the floor, She was discovered by a School Girl and Akane and friends rushed in the Restroom to Wake Rena. “Uhm… I just went inside and… I saw her…” The Schoolgirl said.

“Hey… Wait… Aren’t you Kimoto Kanon? A Student of Seto Public school?” Yuria asked her.

“Ah… Yes.. I’m a student of that School. How do you know…?” Kanon looked at Yuria in the Eyes.

“It’s because… I’m your classmate.” Yuria answered Kanon with this face. (-__- )/

“Quit talking, Our Big Problem is Rena, and what happened to her, Not the fact that the two of you are classmates.” Akane scolded the two girls. “Uhm… You work for the Café near our school right? Is there a vacant work?” Kanon asked Akane. “Uh. Yes. We’re short on waitresses.” Akane answered. “Can I apply?” Kanon asked again. “Yes, Why not.” This time, Yuria answered it.

“Uhh… What Happened…?” Rena woke up, Her head was Aching. She Remembered what happened, That she was Kissed by a stranger. She kept on touching her Lips.

“Hey Rena! What’s your Problem!?” Airi asked Rena, She was shocked on the Way Rena acts.

“N-Nothing…” She tried to look away but, She can’t deny what happened.

“Ah. Is that Jurina’s Student Handbook?” Kanon pointed at the Handbook which was in Rena’s hands.

“Yes. I saw it drop when I was on my way here.” Rena said to Kanon.

“Ah, Kanon-chan, We have to get going, We still have work tomorrow.” Rena stood up and Pulled Akane and the others away from Kanon. There was clearly a reason why Rena did this. It’s because of Jurina. Rena didn’t expect that Jurina would do that to her, and also, she couldn’t understand the things Jurina told her. She is annoyed of Jurina, because she took her first kiss. Rena kept on touching her lips; she just can’t believe that someone got her first kiss already.

“Rena, Tell us the truth, what happened before you collapsed?” Akane pulled her hand from Rena.

“L-Let’s talk about it in the Café… I’m sure, Boss is still there…” Rena walked quietly until she reached the café, She’s correct, their boss is still there, with a couple of friends. I know you already know who the Owner and the Boss of ‘La Prostituciones’. Yup, you’re right. It’s Watanabe Miyuki 600th.

“Oh! Rena-chan~ Why did you come back? Do you want to join our game? It’s Hide n’ Seek~” Miyuki looked at them with a cheerful face.

“Ugh… No thanks…” Rena and the others answered, After that they decided to go to the café’s Second floor. And there, They talked about what happened to Rena.

 “Guys… I think I know what happened to Rena…” Yuria was caressing her front middle bangs with her thumb. 

“Huh? Tell us!” Akane and the others said.

“Someone made her recite the MULTIPLICATION TABLE OF 7!”After Yuria said that, It eventually turned Silent.

(-___- ) (_ _  ) (=__= )

“Eh? Did I get that wrong?” Yuria looked at them with a dumb face.

“Yes. REALLY wrong.” Rena looked away, She got annoyed by Yuria’s answer.

“Just tell it.” Akane gave Rena a cold glare.

“Yeah. Yeah.” Rena was in doubt if will she tell it or not, It’s an Embarrassment if they knew that she was kissed by the same gender, they might think that she swayed on the wrong direction. She was really angry of what happened, What about the ‘Twinkling-something’ she’s talking about?!’ Rena slowly becomes irritated and starts to scratch her head. “Uhm…” She can’t really speak of something, so she decided to just go home. “Oi! Rena!!” Akane continued to call unto Rena but she just ignores her. “Bad mood, huh?” Airi crossed her arms.

“ Just leave her alone, She’s just annoyed of what happened, I think.” Yuria smiled as she sipped her Milk tea on their table.

“Rena… What happened to you…?” Akane stared at the sky that was visible on the Window.

“Then, Why don’t we join Boss and her friends on their Hide n’ Seek?” Airi stood up, She seemed to be very bored, Akane and Yuria agreed so they started to play with Miyuki and her friends.

In the dark streets, Rena was walking to reach her Apartment.  It was really unusual for her to go home this late, As she continued walking, The memory of being kissed came back to her. She suddenly slapped herself to get back to reality. “Rena! Nothing happened, It was just your imagination!” She walked again, and then she shouted “YES! IT WAS JUST MY IMAGINATION!!” She was the center of attraction after she shouted, Then, Jurina reappears again.

“No, It wasn’t your imagination.” Jurina walked out of the dark alley, cross armed.

“Geh!?” Rena was shocked, She accidentally dropped her bag because of Jurina. “Leave me alone!!” She ran to the train station very fast. When she got on the train, It didn’t took a while for her to find a seat, The Train isn’t fully occupied, and Only few people are inside. When Rena was already seated, she sighed, Because she saw the annoying girl again. There were 5 stations to be passed before she arrives on her apartment; She watched the Beautiful night scenery as she waits for the 6th station. Then, someone called her name. “Ah, Rena-chan.” Rena was too afraid to look at who called her name, When she turned her back to see who it is, It was actually Yuria.

“Why do you look so scared? Did something happen?” Yuria sat beside Rena.

“Let’s see… How do I put this…”Rena’s sweats are slowly dropping.

“Hmm?” Yuria continued to stare at Rena.

“Y-You know… I was kissed…” Rena looks away.

“By your boyfriend!? Ahh~ How sweet—“ It was cut by Rena.

“By My Boyfriend!? Don’t you know that I am an NBSB!? No Boyfriend since birth. Got that?!” Rena shouted at Yuria angrily.

“Then, You were kissed by a what?” – Yuria (-__- )

“B-By… this Girl…” Rena pulled the Student handbook from her bag.

“W-WHAT?!” Yuria was frozen…

“Ah, The 6th Station. Time to go out. Bye~” Rena exited the train. While Yuria was left inside, still frozen. “ By a girl…?”

When Rena arrived at her apartment, She saw Jurina again. Rena’s face slowly becomes irritated. “grr…” her fist clenches and her eyebrows marks that she’s already angry. “You know, You’re annoying me…” Her eyes becomes fierce, a fiery maiden is in front of Jurina’s eyes right now. “What do you really want!? Why are you following me!?” Rena shouted at Jurina, The fiery maiden stares her to death, Her Eyes meant nothing but to kill her.

“I-I Just want to…” Jurina ran away.

Rena walked away to go back to her apartment. She’s still angry, On her way, She bumped in to Shinoda Mariko, One of her Neighbors. “Ah. If it isn’t Rena~” There is it again, her trollish face. But she was ignored by Rena. “Eh?”

She ignores anyone who tries to talk to her.  Rena entered her apartment, she was blushing and she can’t help herself but to look at Jurina’s Picture in her student Handbook. She doesn’t know what kind of feeling she is feeling right now; she doesn’t know why she wants to see and not to see the girl on the picture. The Long Haired Girl leaned on the door and later banged the table near her. “Haa! Mou!” She shouted very loud from her room, All of her neighbors got disturbed.  Then, Her roommate came out of her room. “Rena. What happened? Why are you like that?” Atsuko came out of her room, She was wearing some outdoor clothes.

“Atsuko… Where are you going?” Rena asked Atsuko while looking down.

“I’m going out with Takahashi-kun next door.” Atsuko walked towards Rena and told her to… “Excuse me~ I’m Going out~" Atsuko added, Her face was in ‘derp’ mode.

“Haai, Douzo.” Rena Opened the Door, and when Atsuko got out, She continued her Drama. “Why me?! Of all people!” She continuously banged the table near her, after a while, she calmed down. Later she entered the Bathroom and took a bath. As she sulked herself in the hot bath, she accidentally remembered the kiss again. Then tears fell down on her eyes. “What should I do…” She covered her face with both of her hands. She also remembered the words that Jurina said. “What does she mean… anyway…?” Rena touches her lips once again, and she accepts the fact that she was kissed by the same gender. “It already happened, and I can’t do anything to change it. I’ll just bear with it and Enjoy my Life, Ignoring that Jurina-girl.” She continued to take a bath and her frowns, became smiles.

Chapter
~ 1 ~
END

Spoiler:
“Matsui Jurina! The New Waitress in this Café!” – Matsui Jurina to the Workers of ‘La Prostitucionés’

“I think we should change our café’s name. It seems so Erotic..” –Watanabe Miyuki to Yamamoto Sayaka and the Waitresses.

“Yay~! Rena-chan!!~ Minami-kun is my Boyfriend now~” Maeda Atsuko to Matsui Rena.

“WHAT DID I DO TO DESERVE THIS!?” – Matsui Rena

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Re: Madoromi no Yakusoku [WMatsui][Chapter 1][05|21|13]
« Reply #6 on: May 21, 2013, 11:27:47 AM »
Poor Rena is in dilemma with everything that going on with her...  :nervous

From being screamed at as a ghost, being predicted to be Jurina's future lover, being stolen her 1st kiss, and being stalked by Jurina  :panic:

Yeah... Atsumina is there too....  :thumbsup

Can't wait to find out what's going to happen next

Thank you for the update

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Re: Madoromi no Yakusoku [WMatsui][Chapter 1][05|21|13]
« Reply #7 on: May 21, 2013, 06:17:31 PM »
lol really hard at everything :lol:
especially rena behaviour on the last paragraph
nice update
can't wait to see ur next update
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Re: Madoromi no Yakusoku [WMatsui][Chapter 1][05|21|13]
« Reply #8 on: May 21, 2013, 06:25:07 PM »
 :lol: really entertaining chapter I imagine Jurina becoming a waitress based on you spoiler XD
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Re: Madoromi no Yakusoku [WMatsui][Chapter 1][05|21|13]
« Reply #9 on: May 31, 2013, 07:25:27 PM »
your story is so amazing and i love it :twothumbs

i wonder that jurina had the same dream with rena :?

please update fast, i can't wait to know what happen next :bow:

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Re: Madoromi no Yakusoku [WMatsui][Chapter 1][05|21|13]
« Reply #10 on: June 01, 2013, 12:04:23 AM »
Well, since this was pushed up anyways~~~
interesting... lol, poor Rena...
Takaboy?
Maritroll?
Yuria... baka? 7 times mult table... hrm... I guess that was hard when learning it, but...
I don't feel like searching up french or whatever,
but I get the vague idea of what it would translate to...
wow, your preview is epic...

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Re: Madoromi no Yakusoku [WMatsui][Chapter 1][05|21|13]
« Reply #11 on: August 27, 2013, 05:23:14 PM »
Great fic

Wmatsui fics aways great  :ding:

please continue  :onioncheer:

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Re: Madoromi no Yakusoku [WMatsui][Chapter 1][05|21|13]
« Reply #12 on: August 27, 2013, 05:43:53 PM »
This is a really interesting fic! Pl update the next chapter soon!
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Re: Madoromi no Yakusoku [WMatsui][Chapter 1][05|21|13]
« Reply #13 on: August 29, 2013, 05:43:08 AM »
hahahahahahaha

Takahashi-kun...pff my minami is a boy???

that rena is really something hahahaha

thanks, update soon!!!

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