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Re: Fool Like Me [MariHaru] CHAPTER III Still Unsure
« Reply #20 on: April 21, 2013, 05:23:21 PM »
Ah so Mariko seems to like Haruna...

AH... Takamina is not very happy with that piece of news...

Haruna seems to like Mariko too...

What's going to happen next

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the update

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Re: Fool Like Me [MariHaru] CHAPTER III Still Unsure
« Reply #21 on: April 21, 2013, 06:40:43 PM »
Mariko is quite the opposite from what they were saying to her.  However the past probably wont rid of what she might do later.

Yuko's excuse XD
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Re: Fool Like Me [MariHaru] CHAPTER III Still Unsure
« Reply #22 on: April 21, 2013, 06:46:59 PM »
Thanks for the update, hehe :D don't worry, so far so good ;3

You know, somehow I imagine Haruna will be the one who makes Takamina understand the goodness of Mariko XD
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Re: Fool Like Me [MariHaru] CHAPTER III Still Unsure
« Reply #23 on: April 22, 2013, 08:18:06 AM »
Aahh its getting interesting here....as Mariko wants to know/meet Haruna again...

Mariko's smile melts Haruna's heart.... :P, don't show it too much Mariko.... :lol:

i like at the end both of them thinking of each other...XD...

Doing great Aoi-san.... :twothumbs

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Re: Fool Like Me [MariHaru] CHAPTER III Still Unsure
« Reply #24 on: April 23, 2013, 03:52:09 PM »
Yes its the first time for me! ^^ and you're very welcome! I really love it! <3

I'm glad that its finally updated but I still want more MariHaru :D this chapter is short enough but overall its so great! Hehe and I cant wait for the chapter 4!

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Re: Fool Like Me [MariHaru] CHAPTER III Still Unsure
« Reply #25 on: May 12, 2013, 08:38:27 PM »
Hi there  :)
I'm sorry it took me a while to update  :nervous
But I'm 100% better now. No more headaches  :)

Let me make it up with this long chapter (this has to be the longest thing I have ever written so far) and I hope you'll enjoy it.

It still need a few modification with the grammars and stuff. Sorry about that  :nervous
I'll fix it later cause right now I'm sleepy.

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lovemariharu Yeah, again, I'm sorry  :) but thanks for the tip. And by the way, I've read your fanfic and was actually wondering when you'll update hehehe  :). Anyhow, thank you for reading and hope you like it  :)

cisda83 I'm trying to make them notice each other for a while and not really talk about it. But something might happen, well I still don't know what's going to happen next.  :) I hope I can think of something fast hehehe. Anyway, thank you for reading. Hope you like it.

kurosawa87 Mariko's role is kinda like a happy-go-lucky type of person but Takamina is not really fond with it. Anyway, thank you for reading. Hope you like it.  :)

Yuki88 Really? It doesn't sound lame or anything?  :) Thank you for boosting my confidence  up  and encouraging me :) It means a lot. I thought so too, Haruna will probably defend her somehow  :). Thank you for reading and hope you enjoy this.

yanouchi Mariko has one killer smile hehehe  :wub: Thank you so much for the support yanouchi-san  It really means a lot :) Thank you for reading it.

michiyo48 Wow. A first time Mariharu reader. Somehow that makes me nervous hehehe  :nervous I really hope you like it and I'll make up lots of Mariharu moments on the next one. Don't worry, I'm building up to it  :) Thank you for reading.

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CHAPTER IV Meet the Crazies

Another day has gone by. You could say that it was a pretty good for a first day in a new school. Considering the fact that Haruna’s family just moves in a new town three days ago and classes start a week before. Being in an unfamiliar environment can make everyone anxious, especially for Haruna. She has been always the reserved type and this can be a hindrance for her. It’s not that she’s a snob but she can’t fully express herself or even start a conversation.

Luckily, she met some nice people. But still, she can still be shy and awkward around them. Haruna did promise to her father that she will do her best to like the new place and so she hopes she’ll fit in with everyone else.

“Welcome to Chemistry lab Miss Kojima.” A man in his mid-forties said to Haruna. “I’m Mizumoto-sensei, your professor.”

Haruna stands near the door and looks around the lab. The class is on the process of lesson 2 so everyone is busy with the exercise. Everyone is now in their respective stations and is paired into two. The pairs have their own workplace and equipments to work on.

She can see that Takamina and Rena are paired together. They are working seriously with Rena instructing Takamina in lighting the Bunsen burner. Takamina notice Haruna in front and waved to her and she waves back.

During her first day, Takamina and Rena have been real nice to her. They joined her for lunch, showing that they want to be friends. She feels truly blessed by it but she can’t help to still feel lonely inside.

 “You will need a lab partner but it seems that everyone is almost paired out except for one.” The professor scans every station and spotted one with only one student in it. The student appears to be having a hard time as she flips her textbook back and forth.

“Pair with her and go to your station.” He smiled and pointed at the direction.

Haruna nodded and walks towards the station. As she walks, she can’t see the students face because the student is holding the books in her face and franticly moves around but she can see her wavy brown hair.

Haruna stands in front the table, waiting for her new partner to notice her.

“Ummm, excuse me.” Haruna said quietly but the other girl heard it and puts her book down.

“Ohh hi. I didn’t see you there.”

“The professor asked me if I can be paired with you.”

“Yeah sure. I’m the only one who doesn’t have a partner yet.” The girl said with full smiles.

Haruna then joins her partner and put her white laboratory coat.

“Let me introduce myself. The name’s Yuko.” The girl said, showing her dimple smile.

“Nice to meet you. My name is Haruna.” Haruna said in a small voice.

“Glad that someone is my lab partner. To be honest, I don’t know what I’m doing.” Yuko starts the conversation as she can feel that Haruna is a shy person.

“Why you don’t have a partner?” Haruna asked in curiosity.

“Oh well you see… the old man said we can pick our partner and well… the class has an odd number and I don’t know anyone here so that leaves me the odd man out. Hehe” Yuko chuckle nervously.

“Oh I see.”

“Can’t wait to work with you.” Yuko cheerfully said. “So let’s get started.”

Yuko took the lead, taking out a beaker with a liquid and a bunch of other stuff while Haruna looks at the book, figuring out the exercise.

“I know this question has been asked to you a dozen times now but…um… How’s the school treating you?” The small girl asked.

“Umm I-it’s fine.” The tall girl said stuttering.

“Hey don’t be shy. Just be yourself. I am your lab partner after all. We’re going to work together from now on so you can tell me everything.” Yuko said smiling.

The sincerity in Yuko’s voice manages to make her a bit relax. It was unusual for someone she just met can make her feel… comfortable. Somehow.

“Ok. In order to get to know each other, How about you ask me questions and I’ll answer all of them? And after I answer your question, I’ll ask you too but you have the option to not answer it. Kinda like a question game. What do you say? Yuko took out his hand.

“Deal? Chemistry sessions are long so we still have a lot of time to do the exercise.”

“Uhhh.” The tall girl was a still unsure about it but it might help. What could possibly go wrong, right?

“Deal.” She shook her partner’s hand, smiling.

“Ok. You go first. Ask me anything?”

Coming up with a question was harder than Haruna thought. She doesn’t want to ask the wrong question and say something bad. And yesterday’s conversation with Acchan, Takamina and Rena was the first thing that pops to her head and they mention that her partner is part of some group called ‘The Prankster’. How about she’ll ask about that? It’s ok, right?

She doesn’t want to judge someone not knowing them first. It just doesn’t seem right to her. And maybe she doesn’t like to be with a stranger but at least she’s doing something about it.

“So how long have you been here?” She decided to ask a basic question.

“Since chemistry class start.” Yuko smiled to her. “Oh you mean in this town. I thought you’re referring to this spot. Since I was born. I grew up here.”
The little joke the small girl give did earn a small smile from Haruna.

“Ok my turn. Umm let’s see. What to ask you?” Yuko glances around the room, trying to come up a question.

“Are you single?” Yuko said, grinning at Haruna.

The question shock Haruna for it was pretty straight forward. She never thought she would ask something like that but she’ll have to keep her end of the bargain.

“Y-Y-Yeah.” Haruna said, a bit stuttering.

“I never thought you’ll answer that. I was just joking.” Yuko was laughing with how her partner answered it directly. She was expecting she will ignore that.

“Remember you don’t have to answer if you don’t want to.”

Haruna was a bit embarrassed with her answer but she just wants it to be fair.

“It’s your turn again.”

She begins to think again a new question and remembers that Yuko said that she doesn’t know anyone here.

“Where are your friends? You said you don’t know anyone here.”

“Well, my friends and I are separated. The principal puts us in different class and makes sure that we’ll never be put in the same class together. So, I end up here”

Her answer might confirm what Takamina said but she doesn’t want to jump to conclusions. In the other hand, curiosity kicks in.

“Why?”

“Well…” Yuko pauses and scratches the back of her head. “Let’s just say that the principal hates us hehehe.”

It was still vague but she doesn’t want to push it. She’s afraid she might say something bad.

“My turn.” Yuko already thought of a question. “Why did you move here?”

It was a quite an innocent question compare to the last one. Haruna was relieve it was an easy one.

“My dad’s company moved him in a new warehouse and he decided to move us here.”

“Oh, the newly built warehouse? A friend of mine’s sister works there.” Yuko said in a matter of fact tone. “Ok, ask me a new one.”

Haruna was running out of question to ask. But then, she remembers the girl in the roof. The girl asked her about Yuko and she wants to know who the girl truly is.

“Do you have a friend that’s in detention yesterday?”

Yuko was surprised by that question. How could she possibly know about Mariko’s suspension?

“I think I know it is. Why’d you ask?”

“While I was going to the guidance office, I happen to bump someone in the roof and she helped me but I forgot to ask for her name. The guidance counselor did say she might be someone that’s in detention.”

The small girl was surprised again. Mariko didn’t mention about that. Why wouldn’t she tell that? It was clearly important to… something… well whatever, it was still an important detail.

“That’s a friend of mine. Did she say something?” Yuko said, trying to figure out why Mariko would not tell her.

“Not really. She asked if I knew you.”

“Oh is that so?”Yuko said. “Well, it’s my turn now.”

“What does she look like?” Yuko asked, curious what would Haruna thinks about her friend.

“Well…” She remembers about the girl’s appearance. She has to admit that the girl’s appearance was really beautiful, with a tall figure that compliments her short brown hair, with pink lips that matches with her beautiful eyes… but she doesn’t want to say that out loud. It’s embarrassing.

“She’s very tall and has brown hair.”

“Ahh I see. What you think of her?” Yuko asked again.

“She seems…” Haruna pauses, still thinking about the girl. “… nice.”

“Oh…” It surprises Yuko that her first impression of Mariko is nice. People would be intimidated by her friend and would try to avoid her, but it’s good to hear that someone thinks otherwise.

“We’ve been friends since grade school and if you see her again, remember that she’s a really good person.” Yuko said, giving her a comforting smile. “I believe it’s your turn to ask.”

Haruna was running out of question and decided to ask her a last question. She did enjoy this little game, it made her a bit comfortable working now.

“How about we finish this exercise?”

Yuko chucked at the question and decided to follow it.

“Ok. We better finish this.” Yuko said, giving Haruna the book. “You give me instruction on what to do for I don’t know anything about it.”

Seeing the look of Yuko, she nods and read the instruction for her.

“It says here we need to put 70 mL of this liquid into the beaker.”

“Ok.” Yuko took the beaker and the flask that contains the liquid, pouring in aimlessly.

Haruna notice the mess her partner did and puts down the book.

“W-wait Yuko.” The tall girl places her hand in her partner’s arm. “You have to put it down the table.”

“Putting it down the table.” Yuko followed Haruna’s order.

“Get down to eye level.”

“Getting down.” Yuko kneel down to get to eye level.

“Now, slowly pour it.” Haruna took a closer look on what Yuko’s doing. “See that circular disk, wait for it to get to the line.”

As she slowly pouring it down, she notice that Haruna’s face is near hers and was startle by the close contact that she loses focus on the flask and accidentally spill the liquid into the table and into her pants.

“Oh shit.” Yuko quickly stands and looks at her wet pants.

“What is this? Is it acid? What do I do?” Yuko panics as she shook Haruna’s shoulder. “Tell me it isn’t acid.”

“Aww, I can feel it burning in my pants” Yuko jumps up and down, trying to endure the pain.

“You can feel it?” Haruna was smiling to her.

“Yes and it hurts.” Yuko really looks in pain as she closes her eyes and clutches her shirt.

“Cause that’s Sodium Chloride.”

“Ahhh it burns, it burns. Ahhh”

“Sodium Chloride is commonly known as sea water.”
“Oh.” Yuko stops jumping and looks dumbfound. “I um… knew that.”

“Now, it just looks like I wet my pants.” Yuko looks the mess she just made.

“I was just trying to make you laugh hehehe.” Yuko nervously chuckle, making an unbelievable excuse to save her from embarrassment. “I was playing along.”

“Oh really?”  Haruna is now grinning widely to her partner’s excuse.

They both laugh loudly, loud enough that the entire class can hear them.

“Oshima-san and Kojima-san, get back to work.” Mizumoto-sensei angrily said as she looks at the two.

“Sorry about that.” Yuko slightly bows and Haruna follows.

Haruna glances at Yuko and they continue to laugh.



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“Man, I’m hungry.” Miichan said as they walk from the hallway.

“When’s the time you’re not hungry?” Jurina said, bumping her fist lightly to Miichan’s arm.

“Hey!” Miichan replied with punch in the arm while Jurina tries to hold Miichan.

Mariko gave a small chuckle as her friends continue to mess with each other.

“Cut it out you two.” Mariko said, being like a big sister to the two. “We’ll go to cafeteria but we have to wait for Yuko.”

A small girl then comes running towards the trio and jumps at the back of Jurina while still holding Miichan’s back.

“Ahhhh. You’re heavy. Get off!” Miichan struggles, almost losing her balance.

“What the- Why is your pants cold Yuko?” Jurina lets go of Miichan’s to look at Yuko. Then the small girl dismounts herself from Jurina’s back.

 “Oh it’s nothing.”

“Did you pee all over yourself?” Mariko asked, looking at the small girl’s pants.

“No, just ignore it.” Yuko sheepishly smiled. “Let’s grab something to eat. I’m starving.”

“Finally!” Miichan cheerfully agreed.

The group keeps walking in the busy hallway, with every student heading somewhere for their break time.

“Hey Mariko, guess what?” Yuko grabs Mariko’s shoulder.

“What?” Mariko waits for Yuko’s answer. Knowing Yuko, she’s expecting some kind of weird and small news that might impress Yuko. Just like last time, she excitingly told her about the new paint on the street that’s very boring and unrelated at all.

This kind of topics is not really interesting for Mariko but something tells her it might be good. Maybe it’s about the principal so they can set another prank, or about the upcoming sports meet.

“It’s about the new student.”Yuko said, grinning widely.

Mariko was stun to hear that. It was definitely the last thing she expected to hear but she managed to keep her cool.

“What about her?” Mariko calmly said.

“Oh I thought you’ll be excited…”Yuko continues to wear a wide grin on her face. “…maybe I’ll just NOT talk about it.”

Mariko was taken back to Yuko’s teasing, mad by not telling her. Then Yuko suddenly climbs on Miichan’s back.

“Ahh give a piggyback ride Miichan.” Yuko wraps her arms on Miichan’s neck, totally looking like a kid as she makes a weird horsey sound.

Mariko saw this as an opportunity and stands behind Yuko. She then proceeds to do an unexpected act.

“Ahhhhhh Mariko, stop poking my butt. Ahh!” Yuko struggles but Miichan grab her hands, cooperating with Mariko’s plan.

“Hold her Miichan.” Mariko said laughing.

Jurina then joins in the fun and tickles the tortured girl from the side. They continue to be in that position as they cruise in the hallway.

“Ok ok ok.” Yuko then signs defeat. “Fine, I’ll tell you. Put me down.”

Miichan puts her down gently and Jurina stops with the tickling. The group then settles down.

“I was just going to say that she’s my lab partner.”

‘Yuko’s her lab partner?’ Mariko’s thought begins to process. She isn’t sure if this would be a bad thing or a good thing. Yuko can help her to get to know her but in the other hand, something tells her it might be a bad idea.



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“Finally, food!” Miichan said loudly as they entered the double doors of the cafeteria.

Only students nearby notice it but after that they just continue to do their own thing. The cafeteria is huge with a lot of students are busy eating and talking that the place is a little loud.

They soon headed to get their food and luckily, no one’s in line. Miichan continues to put every food available on her tray while Jurina and Mariko looks at her like she’s crazy.

“What? I’m starving.” Miichan replied to her friends.

“You can feed 10 people with that.” Mariko deadpan.

“Why can’t you get fat?” Jurina ask as she took her appropriate amount of food. “I always wonder about that.”

After they finish raiding the food, well actually, it was actually Miichan that raided it, they scan the cafeteria for a place to seat. The whole place is crowded with a lot of people and all of the tables are occupied.

But then, Yuko saw something near the huge glass windows.

“I think I saw a table.”

“Where? It’s a full house here.” Jurina stated, looking around for an empty table.

“There. Follow me.” Yuko suddenly walk away and the rest of the group followed her. As they near a table, they immediately recognize the people seated.

“Hi there Haruna.” Yuko greeted the tall girl who is seating with Acchan, Takamina and Rena respectively. The four of them is seating in a one long bench altogether.

“Hi Acchan, Hi Takamina,Hi Rena.” Yuko also greeted the girls seated, nodding to each and every one of them.

Mariko stood frozen on her spot as she saw Haruna. Her last encounter wasn’t exactly great and now, she’s here again. Unknowingly, a small smile forms on her face but soon disappears as a shout stops her train of thoughts.

“What is THAT doing here?” Takamina said.

“Whoa whoa. We just needed a place to eat and beside, it’s been a long time since we eaten with all of us.” Yuko said, defending her friend.

“Yuko’s right. It’s nice we can be together again.” Acchan lean forward to Takamina side. “Come right in.”

“But-“ Before Takamina can finish her sentence. Miichan immediately sat down in front of Rena, Yuko in front of Acchan and Mariko was the last one, sat in front of Haruna. Jurina took a vacant chair and sat in the middle of Rena and Miichan. Then Miichan immediately start eating before Takamina can say anything else.

“Wait. I can see some tables over there.” Takamina desperately stated.

“Don’t just kick them out, Takamina. We’re all friends here.” Acchan charmingly smiled to her friend.

“She’s right. I’m your classmate, Acchan and Miichan are classmates and I’m Haruna’s lab partner. That gives us a reason to be here.” Yuko took a bite at her clubhouse sandwich and looks at Haruna. “Isn’t it right partner?”

“H-Hai.” Haruna shyly nodded, not exactly comfortable with a lot of unknown people in the table. Miichan notice this, stood up and introduce herself
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“Hi there, I’m Miichan and that’s Jurina and Mariko. Nice to meet you.” She gave an enthusiastic wave and sat back down to eat again. Jurina also greeted her while Mariko just stares.

“N-Nice to meet you.” Haruna replied.

“I’m still not ok with this. Someone here owns me a LOT.” Takamina said, exaggerating with the ‘lot’ part. Then, she gave a deadly look to Mariko.

“Like what?” Mariko returns the glance.

“Last year’s car wash event.” Takamina quickly said.

“The hose suddenly burst.”

“The school fair’s fashion show.”

“I did nothing. You wore your banana parka.”

“The gym incident.”

“You ran out of clothes, I just gave you one.”

“Freshman’s photo day.”

“It was the photographer’s fault.”

“You paid him”

“No, I didn’t.”

“Yes you did”

“Did not.”

“Did too.”

They both continue to bicker like children, but on the other side of the table, Jurina watches the scene unfold. She noticed that Rena is silently eating her melon pan but Rena observed that Jurina is looking at her and turns her attention to her.

 Jurina smiles at her but Rena looks away and continued eating. Then, Jurina took a piece of paper and quietly wrote something in it. As soon as she notice that Mariko and Takamina is still arguing and nobody is looking at them, she folds the paper and reaches for Rena’s hand under the table.

Rena slightly twitches by the contact of their hands but accepts the paper, putting it quickly in her pocket. Unknown to them, Miichan saw the whole thing and pretends she didn’t see it by turning her attention on her food.

“I know you did it.” Takamina said with a dismayed look.

“No, I did not.” Mariko said with a grin on her face.

“You know what, let’s just talk about something else. Right, Yuko?” Acchan quickly said, not liking the whole argument.

“Right. My head’s starting to hurt with all this shouting and fighting.” Yuko agrees.

Yuko then starts a normal conversation with Acchan while Takamina and Mariko just kept quiet. Miichan and Rena occasionally join in the talk while the rest listen.

Mariko ignores the talk and Takamina’s glare at her, begins to eat her food in silence. But then, she notices the person seating across her. She caught that person staring at her but as soon Mariko looks back, she avert her gave and bows her head real low.

It’s been bugging Mariko about their last encounter and she wanted to say something to her but right now, it’s not the best time to talk. She’ll have to find another chance for that.



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With break time almost up, the two groups parted ways. Gladly, nobody got hurt with the crazy argument that happened but they parted peacefully.

The pranksters decided to escort Jurina back to her room, heading towards the first floor of the building because Jurina is still a freshman and the entire freshman is in the first floor.

“Thanks guys. I’ll see you later.” Jurina happily waves at them and enters her room.

As soon Jurina is out of their sight, they now head towards their own rooms. They decided to hand around in hallways for a while, noticing that they still have a few minutes to kill before class start.

“Hey, I notice something with Jurina and Rena in lunch.” Miichan said, leaning in one of the lockers.

“What?” Yuko was leaning right next to her with Mariko standing in front of them.

“I saw her handling a note to Rena.” The black haired girl informed them.

“Aha, I knew it that there’s something going on with them.” Mariko said. It’s not that she doesn’t agree with their relation, if there is something really going on, she just wants Jurina to be honest with it.

Knowing Jurina since she was a kid, she practically treats her as a younger sister and she wants the best for Jurina.

“Everyone already knows it.” Yuko said, smiling at Mariko. “Even Acchan notices it.”

Then suddenly, an idea pops in Mariko’s head.

“I have a plan.” Mariko said, smiling widely.

“Ohh this is going to be good.” Yuko knew that smile, it’s one of Mariko trademarks when something is going to happen. “What are your orders, boss.”

“Miichan, talk to Acchan and tell her to bring Takamina.” The tall girl instructed, pointing at Miichan.

“Can we bring Haruna as well? She is their classmate after all.” Yuko suggested to their ‘boss’.

“Umm… sure. Whatever. The more the merrier.” Mariko was unsure about it but she sees no reason why not.

“Tell them to meet up after class and do not tell Jurina and Rena about this. We’re going to need both sides into this so tell them that this is something that concern about Rena.”

“Ok, I’m going to talk to Acchan during class. Consider it done, boss.” Miichan salutes, happy with another plan from the great Mariko-sama.




TBC


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Re: Fool Like Me [MariHaru] CHAPTER IV Meet the Crazies
« Reply #26 on: May 12, 2013, 09:36:37 PM »
Well Yuko and Haruna are doing well together but Mariko has her suspicions so she may make a play soon enough to open up the game
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Re: Fool Like Me [MariHaru] CHAPTER IV Meet the Crazies
« Reply #27 on: May 12, 2013, 09:56:42 PM »
 Whoopsie, be careful Mariko, it seems that Yuuko is attracted to Haruna too. 8D
It's an interesting development! And ofc we need Mariko vs Takamino bickering ;P

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Re: Fool Like Me [MariHaru] CHAPTER IV Meet the Crazies
« Reply #28 on: May 13, 2013, 06:26:10 AM »
Interesting here... Yuko seems to be friendless... except couple of her naughty friends

But she is so nice to Haruna... and she can make Haruna comfortable....  :love:

Ah... Haruna is curious about Mariko...

Eh... Yuko is jumpy when Haruna get near her... she wet herself... with NaCl  :lol:

Ah... Mariko is also curious about Haruna, want Yuko to find out more about her but scared to get teased  :wub:

I think Mariko indeed do everything that Minami upset about....

Poor Minami for getting pranks   :sweatdrop:

Ah... Jurina and Rena together... exchanging things without wanting to tell their group of friends...

What Mariko and friends are planning about?

What Mariko want with Atsuko and friends?

Can't wait to find out more

Thank you for the update

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Re: Fool Like Me [MariHaru] CHAPTER IV Meet the Crazies
« Reply #29 on: May 13, 2013, 08:00:30 AM »
Aww I'm so glad that its updated!! :) thanks for the update! ^^

But feel a bit sad cause yeah its lack of MariHaru moment :( well then I think its okay since you promise us to make more MariHaru moments in the next chapter hehe

Why I have a feeling that Yuko seems interested in Haruna too? >< Oh poor Mariko... Mariko also seems jealous to know that Haruna is Yuko's partner.. Well fighting Mariko!! You can get Haruna!

And how sweet you are, Mariko, by making a plan for Jurina and Rena :D

~~And I'm glad that I make you nervous lol *evil laugh
Well actually, although its my first time reading MariHaru fic doesnt mean that I've never read fanfics about either Mariko or Haruna.. Its just that I think uhm its a bit hard to find MariHaru..
Cause whenever I read a fic about AtsuMina (it was my top pairing) I used to find KojiYuu and MariMii as the support pairings in that fic..
But I'm not interested in these pairings (MariMii and KojiYuu) I dont know why, seems like I just dont get the feeling :D

Once again, thank you for the update! And please update the next chapter soon! ^^
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Re: Fool Like Me [MariHaru] CHAPTER IV Meet the Crazies
« Reply #30 on: May 25, 2013, 08:31:11 AM »
Aaaahh, Yuko is one step ahead closer to Haruna and Mariko a step behind.....come on Mariko get on to it!! XD

will her plan also a chance get closer to Haruna? and show some killer smile, Mariko!!! :on asmo:

can't wait for next update for MariHaru moment...XD


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Re: Fool Like Me [MariHaru] CHAPTER V: Truce?
« Reply #31 on: July 01, 2013, 07:22:38 PM »
hi there again  :)
It's been a while since my last update and I'm truly sorry. I was suppose to update it on June 3 but one thing lead to another and....... tada I wrote another fan fic on another account (It's a long story on why I had another account). I was not suppose to write it but my friend liked my idea so she asked me to do it but I will never forget about my first fic.

Enought with the rumbling, onwards to the replies:
@kurosawa87 Well you know Mariko, she'll will ALWAYS find a way hahaha  :) And the games for Haruna's heart is now open   :) hahaha Thanks for reading and hope you like it  :)

@Yuki88 Of course, this fic needs more Mariko and Takamina's silly fights hahaha  :) I always love their semi love-hate relationship  :) Anyways, thank you for reading and hope you like it  :)

@cisda83 I really like the part where she accidentally 'wet' herself (No pun intended :)) hahaha But of course, Mariko will definately not lose. And I'm going to put a few Wmatsui if you don't mind  :) Anyway, thank you for reading and hope you like it  :)

@michiyo48 I'm really sorry for the lack of Mariharu in the last chapter (even though this is a MariHaru fanfic hehehe  :nervous) but just as promise, I made up for it and there's more to come  :) Thank you for reading and I really hope you like it  :)

@yanouchi Yuko might be one step ahead but Mariko will probably take one huge leap toward Haruna's heart hahhaha  :) And thank you for worrying about me and for your support  :) Thank you for reading  :)



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CHAPTER V: Truce?





 “WHAT?!” A small girl half screamed from the empty hallways. The class was over and only a few students were still in school.

“We’re going to do what?!” The small girl stands in front of Acchan with a question look.

“Miichan told me to meet up with them. It’s about Rena.”  Acchan told her friend in hopes she’ll calm down. “She said that Mariko has a plan and she wants us to be in it.”

“There’s no way in hell I’ll team up with that… that… person.” Takamina said in disgust.

“I figure you’ll say that.” Suddenly a voice from the end of the hallway walks up to them. The owner of that voice is accompanied by with two other girls.

“We need your help.” The tall girl said as she walked up in front of Takamina.

“You need OUR help? Why?” Takamina asked, cautious of the tall girl. She knows what she might do when she left her guard down and she’s not going to be fool again.

“Yes. This concerns about Jurina and Rena so we need both sides on this.” Mariko said, trying to be reasonable with the small girl.

“All of us know that something is going on with them but they keep denying it…. All of us want to help them, right?” Miichan added, hoping she will reconsider.

Takamina went silent as though real hard about it. This maybe a perfect solution in order to help her friend. Ever since Rena met Jurina, she has been really cautious to talk about it. The fact that Rena hadn’t date anyone might be hard to open up especially if she’s dating way younger than her.

All she wanted was for Rena to be open about and stop with the lies. This will help her be more herself with them.

 “How about this? To ease your mind, Mariko will promise she won’t do anything, won’t she?”  Acchan placed her hands on the small girl’s shoulder as she looks over at Mariko. That one last bit put the nail in the coffin and the small girl was actually thinking to take the offer.

But Mariko was hesitant at first. To tell the truth, she was actually planning a few things but in order this plan will work, she’ll have to agree to it.

“I promise.” Mariko said with a smile on her face. Well maybe not. “So…. Truce?” She held a hand in front, waiting for Takamina to take it.

“Fine… but no funny business.” Takamina finally gave up and firmly shake the hand.

“Now that’s settle, where’s Haruna?” Yuko immediately asked to Acchan and Takamina.

“Oh she’s talking to her dad in the phone. I think she went…oh never mind, she’s here.” Acchan quickly spotted her walking towards them. Then Yuko suddenly walks up to her to meet her halfway.

“Let me help you with those books.” Yuko swiftly snatched the books out of her hands and they made their way towards the others.

“Um W-Wait Yuko-san.” Yuko was quick and she already took the heavy books away from her hands, preventing her from objecting. She was a little ahead of Haruna and she stopped and looks at her.

“Come on Haruna-chan, their waiting.” The brown haired girl gave her a warm welcome smile. They both slowly walked over to the group where three pair of eyes are locked into them.

“So, do you want to join us in Mariko’s plan?” Yuko asked, hoping she’ll say yes.

“Too bad, Haruna’s father always picks her up. Right Haruna?” Takamina quickly said, not liking where the conversation headed.

“Umm actually, he called earlier saying he’ll be stuck on work and he can’t pick me up. He said I can go home with you guys.” Haruna softly said.

“Great. You can join us then.” Yuko said excitedly. Haruna was about to say something when Yuko place an arm around her shoulder and was smiling widely.

“Great! Haruna’s in.” Yuko said as bump her fist up in the air. “Soooo…. What’s the plan?”

Mariko was seemingly silent as she stare into randomness for a second but was brought back to reality when Miichan suddenly nudge her. The rest look at her weirdly as they wait for the great Mariko-sama to say something.

“Ohh sorry. I didn’t realize that I was spacing out.” Mariko reasoned out.

“Wait a minute, are you thinking something you might do later?” Takamina raised her suspicious as she directly look at Mariko. “Aha I knew it. You were going to do something.”

“Hold on Takamina. Mariko just didn’t get enough sleep last night. Right Mariko?” Miichan quickly defended her friend which Mariko silently appreciates.

“Yeah. Ok moving on.” Trying to change the topic, the tall girl began telling them the plan.





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“Why am I wearing a bald cup?” Takamina said as she looks at her blue huge overalls, huge gray fake beard, worn out sneakers and the ridiculous hair piece.

“Don’t complain. Yuko’s also wearing the janitors outfit.” Acchan said as she step outside of the dressing room, revealing an old knitted sweater, a long brown skirt that ends above the knees and a grayish wig that is tied up in a bun.

They are currently at the drama club’s theater rummaging through thousand of costumes the drama club had. Thanks to Yuko and Acchan who are members of the group, they easily gain access to the theater and to the costumes.

“This itches.” Takamina wildly scratches the fake beard and she accidentally knocked a rack of clothes.

“Ahhh! don’t make a mess in here or else we’re dead.” Yuko, who also have the same outfit as Takamina, took the clothes from the floor and placed it back to the rack.

“Sorry.” The fail girl said as she helped Yuko with the mess she made. She then took notice of Mariko with a gray business suit with a purple tie, square glasses and a slightly messy black wig.

“How come Mariko gets to wear that and we have to wear this bald cup?” Takamina complained.

“Because we need disguises in order for this plan to work. Acchan as the librarian, Haruna and me as the teachers and you and Yuko as the janitors.” Mariko replied smiling, amused in Takamina’s outfit. The tall girl didn’t intend for this to happen but it happens to be the only thing that fits on the small girl. What a lucky coincidence.

“Speaking of which, where’s Haruna?” Reconsidering the truce, Takamina ignored Mariko’s grinning as she looks around the room.

“She’s still in the dressing room.” Acchan said as she fixes her makeup. Then, the dressing room opened, revealing Haruna with a red blouse with brown slacks under a long laboratory gown and glasses. Her long brown hair is neatly tied into a ponytail.

Her disguise really suits her well as the four look at her in awe while she shyly stands.

“I-i-is this ok?” Haruna softly said as they continue to stare at her.

“Are you kidding? You look absolutely stunning.” Acchan took hold of her arms and push her down on a stool. “Here, let me do your makeup.”

As Acchan was busy applying makeup to Haruna, the rest resume to manage their respective outfits, well except for a certain someone. Mariko tries to fix her messy wig but was always distracted by the sight in front of her.

The tall girl sighed in frustration as she can’t concentrate on her hair. Luckily no one heard her as Yuko and Takamina loudly argue about their outfit. Then Miichan suddenly entered the room, pushing a cart full of electronics.

“What took you so long?” Mariko quickly helped Miichan push the cart into place, glad that someone can distract her from her distraction.

“Sorry, it took a while for Sashi to give me the keys to the AVR room. She made a hard bargain.” Miichan said as she set up the equipment.

“I know you Miichan. You were busy flirting with her that’s why you’re late.” Yuko pinched Miichan’s face. “You little pimp.”

“Itai itai itai, leet mee go!” Miichan screamed in pain as Yuko pinched harder before letting go. “Is this payback for the piggyback ride?”

“You got that right.” Yuko gave Miichan an evil look.

“Stop it you two. Now, what did you got?” Breaking the insuring fight between the two, Mariko glances at the contents of the cart. The cart is currently full of everything related with electronics. It got twisted wires that seems to be connected to something, circuit boards, a huge TV and some other things that they can’t identify.

“This here is perfect for this stakeout mission. I even got us these high tech video cameras.” Miichan held the small cameras in her hand. “It’s so small, you can just pin it in your clothes but it still need a small battery to operate so it needs a wire that runs up in a small compact battery that’s in the back of your pants.”

“Suggoi~” Acchan said in awe.

“Next, I got another video camera. It’s a little big than the other one but it has the same resolution. This will be place at the librarian’s cart aka Acchan’s cart.” Miichan stated.

“Your job is to roam around Jurina and Rena in the library. Make sure you won’t be detected.” Mariko said as she looks at disguised librarian.

“All of the cameras that you will be wearing will be transmitted here in this TV. I’m going to stay here and observe you.” Miichan then proceed to give them their individual camera.

“You just have to attach the wire here and then place it right over here and you’re done.” The so called gadget expert vaguely demonstrated how to attach the cameras leaving them confused.

Luckily Yuko, Takamina and Acchan easily set up the gadgets in their clothes while Haruna and Mariko are having a hard time to put it on. Miichan went over to them as she shows them again how to put it on.

“You just have to run the wire under and over here and place it over here. And then you’re done.” Miichan said as she took the wire from Mariko’s hands.

“Thanks that was very helpful.” The tall girl sarcastically said.

It took a few minutes but finally Mariko secures it. She glances at Haruna who still can’t place it as the wires are a bit tangled. Taking pity, Mariko went over to her and tries to fix the messed up wire.

“Here, let me.” Mariko went behind her as she unplugged the compact battery so she can properly untangle the wires. Haruna then tries to remove the wires that are now entangled in her waist but as she struggles, she gets more and more tangled.

“Hold still.” Mariko grinned, seemingly entertain by the clumsiness of the girl.

“S-Sorry.” The tangled girl said as she again tries to fix the wire but to no avail.

Mariko then took the loose wire in Haruna’s shoulder and followed it. The wire then continued from her left shoulder down to her right waist and as Mariko tries to pull it off, she unknowingly wraps her arms to Haruna’s back.

Mariko was about to retract back when she notice the close proximity. She stopped and took notice of Haruna’s eyes looking back at her. Suddenly heat rush to her face and her heart began beating 100 miles per hour. Sweat drops from her temples as those brown orbs looks back at her. Then, she notice her face that’s slightly tainted with pink. A thought pops up her mind, is that only make up or is she blushing?

Waking up from reality, Mariko took a step back as she tries to look away.

“Um H-Here.” The tall girl mumbled as she hides her beetroot face.

“T-T-Thanks.”  Haruna said as the tall girl quickly left her which left her confuse.




In the other side of the room, Takamina and Acchan watch the whole thing as they in the corner of the room.

“Something’s up.” Takamina warily said as she looks at the tall girl.

“You say that all the time whenever Mariko’s near.”Acchan said as she rearranges her gray wig.

“But this time it’s different.” The short girl placed her hand to her chin, as if she’s thinking something deep.

“Maybe you shouldn’t focus too much about Mariko and focus on the things that are in front of you.” Acchan clearly adds emphasis on the last part.

“In front of me? Huh? What’s that?” The oblivious girl looked hard in front of her as she takes it literally what Acchan said.

“Just forget it Bakamina.” Acchan stomp her feet on the ground before marching away from the short girl.

It took a few seconds before the so called Bakamina react and let out a loud “Ehhhh! What did I do?”

“Don’t ask me that. And I think you’re asking the wrong question.” Miichan said as she arranged her equipments nearby.

“What question are you talking about?” Miichan was about to facepalm herself but manage to keep her cool.

“What I meant is, you should be asking what you didn’t do? Do you get it now?”

“Oh I get it…” The short girl nodded as she thinks she understand what’s going on. “I forgot it was Acchan’s time of month. That’s why she’s so moody.”

I didn’t help at all as Miichan literally facepalm herself and shakes her head in disappointment.

“Stupid.”




Acchan angrily mumbled out about Takamina being stupid and marches over to Yuko who was busy applying the “old man” make up.

“Stupid Bakamidget.”

“What happen to you? You look like someone ate your favorite cake.” Yuko grinned as she looks at Acchan’s reflection in the mirror. As fellow members of the theater
club, Acchan is really close to Yuko. Beside from Takamina, Acchan can really tell Yuko all of her problems, well especially this one.

“That insensitive Bakamina.” Acchan grunted.

“Ohhh that” Yuko turned around the troubled girl. “Don’t worry. Just wait for it ok”

Her co-member placed her hand on her shoulder as she smiles while Acchan pouted like a little girl who looks like who lost her lollipop as she slumped her shoulders.

“Well how about you?” A quick change of topic might help her forget about it.

“What about me?” Yuko still has the smile on her face.

“You and Nyan nyan.” The disguised librarian happily teased.

 “Nyan nyan? ”Intrigued by the given name, she silently waits for Acchan to continue.

“That’s my nickname for Haruna. She looks like those really cute cats. A really cute neko.”

“Nyan nyan huh.” Liking the nickname, she glances at Haruna who was busy arranging her things. “You’re right, she is cute.”






 As Miichan is finally finished with the installation of her equipments, she grabs a box under the cart and places it for everyone to see.

“Oh I almost forgot. There are also four small wireless earphones and four small mic which I will use to communicate with you all.” The three girls look was amaze with
the gadgets that Miichan showed. These kinds of gadgets kinda remind them a mission from Mission Impossible.

“Does the AVR room really have this? It looks really high-tech.” Takamina asked as she looks around the cart.

“Actually, Miichan’s parent donated these to the school.” Mariko then stands next to Miichan as she patted her shoulder.

“Really? That’s awesome Miichan.”Impressed, Acchan cheerful clings on Miichan’s arm.

Yuko gave the actress a knowing look as she mouths ‘What are you doing?’. The actress then just smiled and nodded to her friend. Understanding her partner’s action, she
smiled back and gave a thumbs up.

 “And also, a friend of mine taught me how to hack into the school’s server and now I can tap into the library surveillance cameras.” Miichan showed them her laptop that
has now a live stream of the library.

“That’s so cool, Miichan.” Acchan tightens her hold on the latter’s arm as leans in real close.

“Wait a minute…” Takamina suddenly said and the rest curiously looks at her. A thousand thoughts run through Acchan’s head as she looks at the small girl. Maybe she’ll say something about her and Miichan. Maybe she’s jealous and she’ll go berserk and take her away from her hold.
The anticipation’s making Acchan very anxious as Takamina opens her mouths and was about to say something.

“Are you using these to set up traps around school?” The small girl asked as she looks at Miichan and Mariko.

The actress then felt dejected for her wasted effort as she bows her head and shakes her head in disappointment.

“Maybe and maybe not.” Mariko teased the small girl. “And please, take the hint.

“It’s so obvious Takamina.” Miichan added as she joined in the teasing.

“Aha! So you do use it for pranks.” The small girl exclaimed loudly and smiles to herself like she just discovered a great mystery.

The four just looks at her dumbfounded as they place their hands on the head in dismay.

“How can she fail this hard?” Mariko whispered to Yuko as the short girl continues to smile in triumph.

“I don’t know anymore.” Yuko answered.

“Even I noticed it.” Miichan added.



After a few minutes, the tension died down as they moved on to their plan.

“Now that’s finished, we should probably move out now. We need to be there before Rena and Jurina.” Mariko instructed.

“Let’s go through this again. First step, Yuko and the fail girl disguised as the old and messy janitors will observe and make sure no one will enter the library but us. Then, Acchan disguised as the librarian will roam around the library with her cart with the camera. Try to be close as possible to them and you should act accordingly so that they will not notice it. Miichan, you’ll be our eyes and hears in this whole operation. Alert us if there’s any trouble.” Their leader said as she supervised her groups. She instructed them one by one, telling them their individual task.

“Wait. How about you and Haruna?” Suddenly, Takamina asked.

“Well since I didn’t expect that this will happen. I guess…. she can join me and help me supervise.” Then, Mariko shyly glances at Haruna. “Is that ok with you?”

“I-i-it’s ok.” Haruna was startled a bit by the sudden attention that she stutters in response. Mariko continues to stare for a moment as they timidly exchange small smiles.

“Uh-hem” Miichan cleared her throat as the two look away. “Are we done here?”

“Y-Yeah. Does anyone have any have any question? Then let’s go.” The tall girl retain her composure as she did one final gussy up on her tie and motion them out the
door.





TBC





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Sorry for my lame writing skills  :nervous I'm still learning but I have to stop because I need to focus on my major subjects this semester. But during vacations, I'm going to try and improve.

I got some bad news and good news.
I'm going to start on the good news. The good news is me and my good friend (Cessy10 ) are collaborating and we're going to do a short Mariharu fanfic in honor of Mariko's graduation. We're still in the process of writing the prologue but it's going to be soon. We decided to post it in my account so when's it's up and if you have the time, please do read it. Advance thank you for that  :)

And for the bad news. The bad news is I'm going to put Fool Like Me on hold for a while due to the new short fanfic. If you'll include the new fanfic, I have 3 fanfic that I simultaneously write and it's really draining  me out. I'm going to continue FLM when the new project is done and don't worry, it is only 6-8 chapters long and won't take long ( I hope) We really wanted to do something before Mariko graduate and so that's why we thought up of this plan. Again sorry and thank you for you're consideration.

I'll see you next time, bye bye  :)

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Re: Fool Like Me [MariHaru] CHAPTER V: Truce?
« Reply #32 on: July 01, 2013, 07:51:02 PM »
I hope they succeed in their plan after going through all that trouble XD
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Re: Fool Like Me [MariHaru] CHAPTER V: Truce?
« Reply #33 on: July 01, 2013, 08:14:23 PM »
Oh wow, Yuuko IS interested in Haruna for sure.  Mariko should act fast and secure her position before Yuuko attracts Haruna hehe.

Takamina fails so hard lol. How can she be so dumb XD

Anyway, it's certainly getting interesting and I can't wait to see the result of their plan :D

As for the 'on-hold' status.... I think I'm used to MariKoji fic having a long period of update, haha, so it's okay! No need to rush  :D
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Re: Fool Like Me [MariHaru] CHAPTER V: Truce?
« Reply #34 on: July 02, 2013, 06:16:59 AM »
Whooa I think Yuko likes Haruna now...
But Mariko also has that feeling for Haruna..  I think she has fallen in love with Haruna.. yeay! XD

Is the mission going to be success? Lol
wether its success or not, I hope there will be the increasing of MariHaru moments in the mission XD

Oh its ok if you're busy and you cant update this fic for a while.. Good luck in focusing your major subjects and writing the other fics for Mariko's graduation! ;)

And thanks for the update of this chapter!
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Re: Fool Like Me [MariHaru] CHAPTER V: Truce?
« Reply #35 on: July 02, 2013, 08:32:56 AM »
Yeah an update!!


Ouuuhhh the tangled scene i really love it...Haruna with stutter mode when shes with Mariko....

i think Mariko have that charmer side when she help the tangled Haruna...and Mariko's hand on Haruna's back  :luvluv1:

owh why theres no details on Harunas feeling at that moment? XD

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In the other side of the room, Takamina and Acchan watch the whole thing as they in the corner of the room.

“Something’s up.” Takamina warily said as she looks at the tall girl.

i can imagine her face when she said that.....


and MariHaru together in this mission....can't wait for this part, who will have doki doki feeling after this...

same as Yuki88-san said i kinda used to long waiting MariHaru update.... :D,

so ganbatte ne for the other MariHaru fanfic..spread the MariHaru love!
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Re: Fool Like Me [MariHaru] CHAPTER V: Truce?
« Reply #36 on: July 02, 2013, 11:07:11 AM »
Minami was clueless as ever... Would she relies her feeling for Atsuko?

Well Mariko and Haruna getting near....

Would their plan work?

What's going to happen next?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the update

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