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Re: ~Love @ Risk~ (Takamina, Atsuko, Yuko)- Chapter 2 (18 October 2013)
« Reply #20 on: October 18, 2013, 06:16:52 PM »
Oh. Finally an update.
Something's weird. And Yuko and Atsuko are suspicious. Maybe Acchan is a vampire??? And Yuko's a werewolf??? Nah, can't be XD

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Re: ~Love @ Risk~ (Takamina, Atsuko, Yuko)- Chapter 2 (18 October 2013)
« Reply #21 on: October 19, 2013, 02:29:54 AM »
ah... so Yuko is a werewolf and Atsuko is a vampire?

And Takamina is the human...

Well whatever it is... it's going to be interesting...

Can't wait to see the next

Thank you for the update

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Re: ~Love @ Risk~ (Takamina, Atsuko, Yuko)- Chapter 2 (18 October 2013)
« Reply #22 on: October 21, 2013, 07:05:33 PM »
Is that fanfiction type as rosarie+vampire? 
Ta being great, it please continues. 
Hopefully it will be ATSUMINA.

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~Love @ Risk~ (Takamina, Atsuko, Yuko)- Chapter 3 (27 October 2013)
« Reply #23 on: October 27, 2013, 12:02:24 PM »
@olive29: Thank you for finding it interesting! I hope you will like this chapter too!  :)2
@AshuraX: Why not?!  :P2
@cisda83: Maybe or maybe not!  :P2
@Mina: Nani?! Hahaha! Maybe it's Atsumina or not!  :)2

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  There are scratches on her hand and those scratches look fresh.
"Yuko, why are there scratches on your hand?!"
Yuko quickly pull back her hand.
"I-It's nothing, I accidentally scratched myself I think."
After I dry myself, I exit the toilet.
"Yuko, are you okay?"
But there's no reply from her.
I went forward and patted her.
"Yuko?"
She jumped a bit from my action.
"E-Eh? Huh?"
"What are you thinking about?"
"N-Nothing! Anyway, let's go eat now!"
I nodded and followed her out of the room.

~Canteen~
"Wow, this place is packed..."
"What do you want to eat?"
"Mmmmm..."
I looked at the menu.
'Raw Chicken Meat'
"Raw Chicken Meat?! Who were eat this?!"
"Takamina?"
"I will use take bread!"
"Okay! You go and sit down first!"
I went towards an empty table and settle down.
I turned my head to the right, wanting to greet my neighbor.
But instead I stare at his plate.
"W-What was that?! I-It looked gross..."
"I'm back! And here's your bread!"
"Thank you!"
Yuko place her dish in front of her.
"Yuko, what's that?"
"Oh! Roasted Chicken! You want some?"
"Hahaha, no, thank you! But it's so big, can you finish everything?!"
"Sure! I'm hungry you know?"
"Anyway, Yuko, can I ask you something?"
"Sure, what is it?"
I lean towards her and whisper.
"What is that guy eating?"
She turned to the right and take a look.
"Oh! It's just some organs! Nothing special!"
"Organs?! I feel like puking now!"
"Y-Yuko, I-I'm not feeling well, I will be going back first!"
"Okie! See you later!"

  "What is wrong with this school? Nothing look normal to me at all!"
I looked at the sign in front of me.
'Library'
"Since I'm here, I guess I will take a look inside!"
I gently push the door and enter.
"It's huge!"
Suddenly there's a shadow passed by in front of me.
"There's someone?"
I followed the shadow and saw two person in front of the window.
I hide myself behind the huge bookshelf.
"What are they doing?"
Suddenly the taller person bite the girl.
"EH?! I-I must get out of here!"
I stepped back but accidentally hit the chair.
The taller person turned towards here.
She dropped the person that she was holding and walked towards me.
I couldn't move at all.
She was wearing a mask and blood was on the edge on her mouth.
"I-I'm going to die!"
I closed my eyes prepared for the worst.
"Takamina! There you are! I can't find you in the room!"
I opened my eyes and looked at the voice owner.
"Y-Yuko?!"
I stood up and hugged her.
"Are you okay?"
"Yuko! Did you saw anyone when you come in?"
"Nope, I only saw you sitting on the floor closing your eyes."
I turned around and scan through the room.
"Yuko's right, there's no one in the room except for us. Even the girl on the floor disappeared."
"Let's go back to our room Yuko!"

  The window of our room flew opened.
I sit up on my bed and stared at the window.
But there's nothing.
"It must be the wind."
I get off my bed and close the window.
I returned to my bed and close my eyes.
I can feel that something is touching my face.
I opened my eyes and saw the mask girl.
I wanted to push her away but my body just lie straight, letting her do whatever she want.
Her mouth moving but I can't figure out what she's trying to say.
Above her chest that's something that was very familiar.
A bat marking.

                                                                                            To Be Continued!
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Re: ~Love @ Risk~ (Takamina, Atsuko, Yuko)- Chapter 3 (27 October 2013)
« Reply #24 on: October 27, 2013, 07:51:12 PM »
Yeah... as I thought... Takamina is a human here...

And she did not know that she enrolled to a supernatural school

Who is the mask girl?

Atsuko?

What's going to happen to Minami next?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the update

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Re: ~Love @ Risk~ (Takamina, Atsuko, Yuko)- Chapter 3 (27 October 2013)
« Reply #25 on: October 28, 2013, 05:29:59 AM »
Thank you, for the updating.  :twothumbs  :twothumbs

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Re: ~Love @ Risk~ (Takamina, Atsuko, Yuko)- Chapter 3 (27 October 2013)
« Reply #26 on: October 31, 2013, 06:09:57 PM »
Yeah . another supernatural fic. I love yokai... especially anime call nura rise of the yokai clan.. :thumbsup
 So basically takamina is human in yokai school?? :shocked
I love the the story flow.... :cow:
Waaa~ waiting for updates. . :yossi:

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Re: ~Love @ Risk~ (Takamina, Atsuko, Yuko)- Chapter 3 (27 October 2013)
« Reply #27 on: November 04, 2013, 05:16:32 PM »
Thank you, for the updating  :twothumbs

Acchan will be a vampire?

Please continue

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Re: ~Love @ Risk~ (Takamina, Atsuko, Yuko)- Chapter 3 (27 October 2013)
« Reply #28 on: April 20, 2014, 03:08:02 AM »
Interesting! Update soon pls :cow:

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