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hi there...
reading almost every single fanfic here makes me want to write my own...so after a while i decided to write and post it here...
i write this story based on one of MMORPG's lore i've been played.
and here you go


WARNING : Might Contain Mild Language and Violence

PROLOG

My lungs scream for fresh air. I struggle to fill it needs. But the it feels so heavy. With the smell of death hang around me, every breath I take makes my body lost its power. Each seconds passes I become weaker and weaker. I think I’m gonna die here.

But, the war still continued. I can hear it clearly though my eyes couldn’t see it.

I can hear the battle cry from each soldier as they try to take down the enemies. Commands from the Generals to their soldiers to keep charging or to defend the base. Desperate calls for medic from those who severely wounded. Those are the sounds that already familiar with my ears for these couple of years.

I can't just lying here. I must go back there. To the place where my comrades putting their lives on the line. I MUST HELP THEM. I MUST FIGHT WITH THEM.

Gathering my strengh, I try to get back on my feet. But it’s no use. My body refuse to follow my command.

We must hold on until reinforcement come

Several times trying, I finaly gave up. I let my body win. I’m so tired. Slowly I closed my eyes…

Silence…

Is it over?

Am I dead already?

I think I am...

So, this is what death feels like…

Not as bad I thought before…

I…

Kinda like it…


But then…

KABOOM

A big quake shoke the ground. Throwing my already weak body high up to the air. I can feel as the gravity pulls my body back to the ground and the pain that followed.

ITTTAAAIII...

Huh?! I’m not dead?

I open my eyes. Dust covered my sight.

“Still alive soldier?” a strange harsh voice comes to my ears.

“Get up. Don’t just lying like that. We still have a war to win.” A hand reach my body. Lift me back to my feet.
Sudden movement like that makes my head dizzy. I shoke my head to clear it.

“What was that?” my head still trying to process what just happened.

“Sorry to wake you up from your beauty sleep, but worry no more. Reinforcement are here.”
With that words, more people landed around me. Shoke the ground once again. Makes me fell on my butt.

“Daijoubu ka? You looks bad.” Another voice comes to my ears. This time softer than before. A woman’s voice. She bent infront me. Smiling. Her face was so close.

Gasp… what a beautiful woman.

“Here, take this. It will makes you feel better.” She handed me a bottle of purple liquid.

Still mesmerized by her beauty, I take the bottle and drink it.

“Blearghh… What the heck is this?”

That liquid tastes really bad. Hot and bitter. I think I just burnt my throat with it. But then as soon as the liquid reach my stomach, I feel heat rises and spread through my body. Slowly I can feel my strengh back. I try to stand up.

“Feeling better?” she asked me. I just noded.

“Good. Now prepare yourself. We’re gonna crush those pigeons.”

“Umm… Ano… Do you see my bow? I think I lost it.”

“Your bow? Do you mean the one that on your left hand?” she giggled.

I turned my head to my left hand. And there it is. My bow. Sitting nicely on my grip.

Damn…

I can feel my face turn red. I can hear she giggled again.

“Since you already found your bow, I think you will need this too. Here.” She tossed me a small box. She smile at me then turn away.
I can only watch her walk away from me. Her movement are so smooth, as if she was floating. At that time I just realize that she wear a white wedding gown.

EHH?! A WEDDING GOWN?! WEARING A WEDDING GOWN TO BATTLE FIELD? IS SHE CRAZY OR WHAT…

I looked at the box she tossed me before, I open it. Inside the box I see few bottle purple liquid like before, a pack of scrolls with various colours, a bag of seed for traps, and a kisk-portable obelisk to bind your soul. I know what it is.  It’s a standard pack battle supply. I took everything from the box then place it on my supply bag. I also checked my arrow. Good, I still have enough arrow.

“ALRIGHT!!! BUFF UP… SCROLL UP… ”

A commotion started. Various incantation heared. Lights covered the area. Summons comes out and stand right before their masters. Some blended into shadow, tricking the eyes with illusions.

“SPREAD YOUR WINGS!!! LET’S BURN THOSE PIGEONS DOWN!!!”

Every one spread their wings. Black wings filled the entire area. With a light jump we fly. I followed the pack from behind.

“MOVE TO THE CORE!!!”

Just right when we passed Core’s barier, I saw something came from the island above us.

There they are. Right before our eyes. A pack of white wings fly toward us. Blocking our way. It’s the welcoming party. Long time ago we were one, but something happened and now we become enemy. Hatred filled our heart. It’s their fault that we become like this. It’s their fault that we have to survive and live under the shadow for millennium.

“PREPARE FOR CONTACT… BLOOD FOR BLOOD!!!”

With that, the battle begin. Two mighty forces clashed. Try to bring the others to oblivion.

I make my ways through the chaos. Shooting my arrow to every White-wings I met. Evaded every attacks that comes.

I must find a place to landed. I hate aerials battle. There… That will be fit for me to cover the other. I hope I don’t meet any White-wings there.

I rushed my way to a floating mountain. It a perfect place. It have lots of pointy edge which I can use for sniping and cover. And it near with the battlefield –but not too close so that I can easily spotted. As I landed on it, I set up my kisk inside a small cave –hidden from sight- and binding my soul to it. From where I standing now, I can hear the battle getting heated. I move out from the cave. I stand on the edge of the mountain, choosing my prey.

I took my arrow, put it on my bow, aim it to my target.

Lord give me strength as I , Your child fight for you…

I release my arrow. Sent it flew straight to my target and lodge right between my target’s back. Leave it to my fellow Gladiator to finish him up.

I took another arrow, aim it to my next target.

Guide my arrow to my enemy…

Another White-wing down. Set my comrade free from the aerial-binding.
Show them Your wrath through me…

Another arrow hit nicely on one of my target’s wing. Makes her lost her altitude.

Let them tremble before Your eyes

Magical chain strangled my target, a huge meteor hit him. Turn him into floating roast pigeon before finally vanish into dust.

Open my eyes to see what hidden beyond the shadow…

An Assassin died with my shot as she try to sneak behind my fellow Mage who still cast his spell.

With this blood… I send them to You…

I bite my finger to bleed and wipe my blood on my bow and arrows. My arrows transform into a big-black phoenix that flew into five different directions and search its own targets.

One flew through my next target, leaves her with new hole on her body and hit her comrade. The other hit my target right between his eyes. While the other fly smoothly through my target’s wings. Cut them off her body. The other two hit a Summoner and her summon. Makes them stick and vanish into oblivion together.
As I prepared for my next shot, someone strike me from behind. Pushed my body to the ground.

“ARGHHH!!!” I screamed as I slide on the ground. My bow slipped from my hand and fall from the edge. As soon as my body stop sliding, I stand up and draw my swords, prepared for close range combat. I turned around. No one behind me.

Another strike landed on my back. Leaves another stingy wound. I turn around and another strike landed. But this time it landed on my blades as I had predicted. My Swords locked into my opponent’s swords. I look at my opponent’s eyes. I grined at her. She giggled.

“I won’t fall to your cheap trick again.”
She smile, hit my feet with her heels. Then she jumped away to the shadow.

Shit…That hurt.

“Oh no you can’t. I won’t let you hide again. ALL SEEING EYES!”

My vision enhanced. I scan the area and found her walked around, try to sneak behind my back again. She strike. Her sword slashed to my neck. I ducked and spring back to her with my swords pointing her defenseless chest. She evaded my counter attack by jumping over me. And melt on the shadow again.

I rolled sideways. Her sword hit the ground where my body before then back on the shadow again. I crouch, my All Seeing Eyes effect almost over, so I reach my belt, took out the seed bag and spread it around me. Only took a second for the seed to grow into invisible trap.

She strike again. This time her surprise attack failed. My trap explode and bind her mid-air. I need to finish her as soon as possible. She have the upper hand on close range combat like this. I use this chance to return her favor before. I hit her as hard and as fast as I can. And slamed her on the ground.

She’s not moving. Her body stay still. I jump back away from her. I’m not that stupid to fall on her trick again.

“I said I won’t fall on your cheap trick again so how long are you gonna sleep there? C’mon let’s finish this up.”

She moved. Like there’s nothing happened before she stand and wipe dust from her body. Checking on her clothes and pout when she saw some part of it torned.

“Do you want me to wait you finished your make-up too” I try to provoke her. She didn’t respond. Still checking her cloths only to find more torned part.

“Well… I’m sorry for your cloths, but I think this fits you more. It shows the real of you. A SLUT!!!” I provoke her again.

And it works. She tilt her head to me. She stare me with her cold eyes. Her smile gone. With split second she already stand infront me. She hold my wrist and twist it. Forced me to release my swords. With an evilish grin she hit my chest with her knee. Blown air from my lungs.

“BITCH!!! THAT’S HURT.” I yelled. Spit blood on her face. She continued hitting me. I can do nothing but stand still. She then lift me up and slamed me to the ground

“Who do you call BITCH? BITCH!!!” She yelled while kick me as hard as she can. Her kick made me slide on the ground. Sweeping the rocky ground with my body. It slide until finally I hit a rock.

Gasping for air, I saw her walking slowly towards me. Draw her swords with that evilish grin on her face.

Ok... I’m dead now.

I’m defenseless. I have nothing to defend myself. Then my eyes caught something shiny. I tilt my head then smile. It’s my bow. Thanks to a pointy rock edges, my bow stuck there with its arrow still attached.

Seeing hope, I draged my body there.

“Are~ Give up already? After what you did to my cloths… After calling me BITCH –I’m not a bitch…but you are- now you want to end your life like that? Jump off from here? Oh no you can’t do that. I won’t let you.” She smirked at me.

I ignored her. I keep crawling to my target. As I reach my destination, she already stand on top me with both her swords pointed at my head. I can feel its sharp tip on the back of my head.

“I won’t let you die easily… We haven’t finish playing. I will… ”

“Who said I’m gonna end my own life? I just want to get this…”

I reached my bow, turned my body over, and pointed her face with my arrow. She starled. Her words stuck on her throat. Her eyes widened.

“LORD… WITH THIS BLOOD,  I SEND HER TO YOU!!!”

I spit blood to my bow and arrow, then release it.

Once again, my arrow transform into a big-black phoenix and flew through her shocked face. At this point blank, the impact was multipled. Blown her head into pieces. Her headless body shaked before fell into me with her sword still pointing. I rolled to the side just right at the time.

Whoah… That was close.

It’s a relief I’m still alive. It would be sucks to have a double death.

I stand back on my feet. Now after that adrenaline rush, I start feeling the pain. my chest hurt, her kick must have break some of my ribs. And the wound on my back start to stings. Her sword must be poisoned. Quickly I reach my belt. Took out the purple liquid and drink it. It tastes as bad as before. If it’s not for the healing effect it has, I won’t bother drink it.

“We’re done playing.” I said to headless corps on the ground.

“By the way, you’re right. You’re not a bitch, you’re an old hag. BABA…”

The corps shake a little. As if it still alive. It shock me a while before I kick it away to the bottomless pit below.

I ran back to the cave where I put my kisk. Checking is it still there.

“Great… She destroy it. It’s my only kisk.” I kicked the remaining piece of my kisk.

Still upset, I walk out the cave. I just realize that the battle has over. Or not.

The battle haven’t over yet. It just moved to another place. It seems my comrades manage to push those pigeon back to their fortress.

“Yosh… Forget about the kisk, it’s time to help my comrades.”

Spread my wings again, I fly to the fortress across.

As I getting near, I felt something bad gonna happen. I stop. Floating mid-air I scan the area. Then I saw it. Far ahead, right above the fortress a vortex opened. Something big came out off it.

My body tremble for fear. My mind suddenly thinking of everything bad that could come out from a vortex. And that ‘Thing’ is the worst on the list.

My comrades didn’t realize what happen. They’re too focus to take over the fortress. The victory is right there. All we need to do just reach it. But with this interruption, I don’t dare to think about it.

As if everything haven’t bad enough, another rift opened. And then another one, then another one. Total six rifts opened on the same time. And from each of them came out the thing that makes your worst nightmare seems like a sweet dream.

Six Dredgion came out from the rifts. Dredgion, Balaur’s high rank Battle Ship. Each one of them can carry atleast 1000 Balaur’s Soldiers. Not to mention their big-fat-ugly Generals. Last time a Dredgion appear, it tooks half our race to bring it down. But that time we have our Lords fight with us.

I must warn them…

I rushed to the fortress. Ingnored my exhausted wings.

Please hold on for a while… At least until I can reach the ground.

“EVERYONE!!! FALL BACK!!! RETREAT TO BASE!!!” I yelled at my comrades. But it’s no use, I’m too far for them to hear. I flapped my wings faster. Try to speeded up my flight when I finally saw it.

Green light glowing from Dredgion. Not only one, but all six of them. They’re charging their weapons. As I remember, I only have 5 seconds before it finished charging.

“OH LORD… PLEASE DON’T LET IT HAPPEN… NOT NOW…”

I desperately speeded my flight while counting on my head. My wings already reached its limit.

5…

“I MUST WARN THEM…”

4…

“PLEASE HANG ON A LITTLE MORE…”

3…

“ALMOST THERE… JUST A LITTLE MORE…”

2…

“SOMEONE PLEASE LOOK ABOVE…”

1…

“NOOOOO…”

Six green light balls reach its maximum size. On a blink of eyes, it release its destructive force multipled by six.

BOOOMMM

Six green pillars of light hit the ground at the same time. Leaves path of destruction on its track as it moves on the ground.

“NOOOOO…”

My tears fell as I saw my comrades vanishes under those green pillars along with our enemy –or I should say our lost brothers and sisters.

Finally all six green pillars meet at one spot. The Fortress. It destroy the fortress into pieces. Like what I did to my opponent’s head before. A big shock wave emerge and hit me directly.

That hit really took all my strength. I fall from my position. My wings already reach its limit, it hung weakly behind my back.

It’s over…

My tears fell…

Lord… Into Your Arms I Commend My Spirit…

I hug my bow with my left arm. I put my right palm on my face. My fingers spread wide covering my face, forming Death Mark.

Even In Death May You Be Triumphat… BLOOD FOR BLOOD!!!

With tears on it, I close my eyes.

I let my body fell deep down into the bottomless abyss…

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soo...what do you think guys?

sorry for my bad english :kneelbow: i'm open to any critics and suggestion...so feel free to comment


« Last Edit: June 10, 2012, 09:51:19 AM by bunny_rabbit »

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Re: 1st Fic of Mine
« Reply #1 on: June 02, 2012, 03:58:27 PM »
O....
O.o

#jawdropped

It's good!
but i didn't understand every bit of it. LOL

so the main char is an archer/hunter? Since she/he can use traps. It reminds me of the Job Ranger/Sniper in Ragnarok Online which i used to play. I used to be a formidable trap Sniper for my guild in war of emperium. with traps everywhere and silence arrow, i can stopped all others guild player to sneak into the emeprium room. kekeke :3 Ah the good ol' days. LOL

And she also have wings? and can use magic? LOL what kind of MMORPG is this?
It's quite interesting! no, it's interesting! but i think you should gives us more information about the story. or the realm. LOL
what is a white-wing? dredgion, and etc. :3

i hope it will be answered in the next chapter~ :D

and it's good! :D
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Re: 1st Fic of Mine
« Reply #2 on: June 02, 2012, 08:12:19 PM »
Finally you start writing here, Skyle-san... :D I've been waiting for this. :yep:

I'm sorry, I'm not familiar with MMORPG in general since I don't play them, so many of the terms sound greek to me? :nervous I even tried googling some. :grin:
Well, perhaps a mini glossary would help a lot.

But the descriptions in the story, so game-like (of course) and adventurous! This, I like. :thumbsup I would like to see more of these adventures.

Oh, and one more, you better find a specific title for the fic. Or maybe you've thought about this too? :?
Because the prologue was very long, yet no members' names were mentioned, plus no exact title was there, so the prologue felt quite random.

However like I said before, I would like to see more of these adventures, so updates are awaited.
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Re: 48 Family-Tower Of Eternity (un-orthodox multi pairing)
« Reply #3 on: June 03, 2012, 05:06:48 PM »
ahh...

thank you for aruka-san and bochang-san for your comments :kneelbow:
and thank you for your insight too...i really apreciate them.
it's my bad not to think that not everyone here are/were a gamer like me... gomen ne :kneelbow:

To pay for my mistakes before, i'll present you a small tour to the realm where this story take place...just to make all the reader more familiar with my story and to answer few question from aruka-san and bochang-san

so here we go

Special Chapter: The Tour

First of all, like I said before, this story was based on one of MMORPG's lore i've been played, that is AION Online.

This story took place on a world named ATREIA... and this is how Atreia looks like


Some or even all of you might wonder what the heck is that world???

I must tell you, once Atreia was a beautiful world. But *The Cataclysm had change it into what you see now.
Since The Cataclysm, Atreia was torned into four parts.
-The Outer part belongs to The *Balaur (Balaurea),
-The Upper part Belong to The Asmodian (Asmodae),
-The Lower part belong to the Elyos (Elysia), and
-The Middle part, the unknown part was the neutral part (The Abyss).

Okey... let's move on. For next part of the tour, you all will be guided by my beloved assistant, Annabelle



Hi everyone...I'm Annabelle. I'm an Asmodian *Daeva, and like what Skyle-sama had told you, i'll be your guide for the next part of the tour

yoroshiku onegaishimasu :kneelbow:

Oops...Sorry for my appereance. It's summer now, and i just get back from a date with my love one.Let me change with the formal one first...while i get change...

Let me welcome you to The Capital City of Asmodae : PANDAEMONIUM



What you see now is the front part of Pandaemonium's Temple Of Knowledge a.k.a The Great Library. You can find lots of books about everything here. It even have the restricted section (don't tell Skyle-sama i've told you about this ok )

Okey... let's continue. The Asmodae consist of four big fortress and one countryside. They are Altgart, Heiron, Beluslan, Brusthonin, and Ishalgen (this is the countryside what i mention before.).

I would love to take you to each fortress, but Skyle-sama had warned me not to do that. So let's just move to the next place shall we...


Now I'll take you to the Abyss a.k.a Reshanta. Let's use the Abyss Teleport Stone that Skyle-sama had give.

Yosh... We're here. Welcome to Asmodian's Abyss Base The Primum Landing



If you look at behind you, you'll see a big-red-orb like Sun

That's The Core.

That was the place where the Prolog of Skyle-sama's Story took place. It's beautifull right?

The Abyss have three layer.
-The Bottom, where we are now
-The Upper, and
-The Core.


Everyone please follow me... I'll take you to the Upper part of the abyss. Before that we'll stoped by at the Western Shard of Lartesan.

Oh, I almost forget. The Elyos also have a base here. It called The Terminon Landing but i'm really sorry i'cant take you there. It's Elyos' Teritory, so it's too dangerous for you all. I don't want Skyle-sama's reader get hurt by them. But I have the picture of it. Here you go


Terminon Landing


Too bright isn't it? It hurt my eyes alot. Skyle-sama and his friend always called The Terminon Landing with TL or Taman Lawang (I don't know what Taman Lawang mean maybe aruka-sama or bochang-sama can explain what Taman Lawang is)

Ok... let's move to Upper part of the core. Please hang on tight. We're gonna take off now... and please don't peek under my skirt :shifty:



Since this flight will take some time, let me explain about the colorfull things I brought. Please pay you attentin to the colorfull perkamen. Those are the buff scroll. We used it to enhance our ability for a while. There are various scrolls. Like Critical Scroll, Running Scroll, Awakening Scroll, etc. Each scroll have their on effect. You can use it all together or one at a time. But some of them can't be stacked (can't be used together at the same time). For further details please asked Skyle-sama. Below the scrolls you can see another colorfull things. From left Chippo Aether Jelly (i love the taste), next to it is the Revival Stone (from the name I bet you can guess what it purpose), then the orange thing, it's Life Elixir (if you get cought by debuff drink it...it'll cure you). Next the purple thing, it's Life Serum (it can heal your wounds and restore your energy.). Then the last one, the white one it's the Flight Serum (drink it, and you will able fly longer. It recover your wings from fatigue-most important things that you must bring if you are in Reshanta.)

Alright... here's the Upper part of the abyss. And i presents The Krotan's Fortress


Right now this fortress is in its vulnerable state. If I'm not wrong right now The Krotan's belong to Balaurs by default. This will happened if a fortress turned into its vulnerable state and no one came to defend and/ar attack it. For example: Elyos conquer Krotan(Invul)>>Vulnerable but the Asmodian decided not to attack it, and the Elyos decided not to defend it so by the time it turned into invulnerable state again, The Balaurs will have it by default. That mean either Asmodian or Elyos can conquer it. Once a fortress conquered, it will turned into invulnerable state. That mean, the other faction's will get attacked by the Fortress' Guardians.

Again... for further details please ask Skyle-sama :knellbow:

Now, let's move to The Core and see what's in it


Once again I must reminds you : Dont try to peek on my skirt :shifty:

Yosh... Here we are. Inside The Core. And I proudly present to you Divine Fortress


This is the fortress that get destroyed into pieces in the Prolog. And the one that destroy it are these

The Dredgion


SKYLE-SAMA...YOU'RE EVIL...YOU SPAWN SIX DREDGION TO DESTROY THE FORTRESS

Thanks God i'm not there when you spawn those Dredgions... If i was there, i'll be back and haunted you for the rest of your life


I wish i can show you the inside of the Dredgion, but the files are Classified (don't worry, i'll try to get it for Skyle-sama's reader )

That's a wrap guys... I hope you like this short tour to Atreia. And I hope you like Skyle-sama's Story

I'm Annabelle... And I'm sign off :byebye: Now back to Skyle-sama


......

Finally... I want to take a bathhh... :onionshower:

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So how is it guys? i hope you like this special chapter :kneelbow:

feel free to leaves comment :kneelbow:

Sorry for the way i wrote it...i just don't know why i write it like this

oh and for the one with * on it, i'll explained in the further chapter as the part of the story.

and i'll post the next chapter as soon as I finished edit it (can't belive i wrote 20++ pages on MS Word for the first chapter only :depressed:)...

and once again thanks for everyone who had came visit here... :kneelbow: please don't shy to leave any comment :kneelbow:

PS: can anyone tech me how to put spoiler for picture :dunno: I feel bad have to post with lot of BW Killer pictures like this  :depressed:

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Re: 48 Family-Tower Of Eternity (un-orthodox multi pairing)
« Reply #4 on: June 04, 2012, 02:43:51 AM »
Thank your this... emmm.. tour anabelle san. LOL
Don't tell me that you're a hode bunny-rabbit-san. Hahahaha

I just looked at the writer profile and found out that you're also an indonesian. And what's more.. a FREUDIAN!!! LOL

It's just epic when i saw taman lawang term LOL
It's almost the same as red light district i think.. well but.. it's full of transexual, ladyboy, sissyboy, etc.. eeewwwww...

So, there are 4 races? :3

I think the first chapter will enlighted us, the readers. LOL

Thank you toki-san. LOL

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Re: 48 Family-Tower Of Eternity (un-orthodox multi pairing)
« Reply #5 on: June 04, 2012, 12:29:53 PM »
wow..this is so interesting..it's different from any other fic here..i really enjoy reading this fic

update please~


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Re: 48 Family-Tower Of Eternity (un-orthodox multi pairing)
« Reply #6 on: June 04, 2012, 02:16:08 PM »
@bochang-san
Me being Hode :dunno: Nahh... Even i must admit, on every MMORPG the armors looks much better on female characters than on male characters. I bet you know what i mean :kekeke:
But Annabelle was my ex's char. She's the one who dragged me to play AION. My own char was a Sorcerer (I'll also put him on this story later)

@yukofan
Thank you. I'm glad you find my story interesting :kneelbow:
I hope you will keep following this story :kneelbow:

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Ok... Here's the first chapter. I had to break it into several parts because like i said before it's waaay too long (20++ pages on MS Word :depressed:)
but even after I edited, it still too long to put it in one post. Please bear with it

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WARNING : Might Contain Mild Language and Violence
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Chapter 1
ASCENSION

part 1 The Hunt



My eyes snapped open. I wanted to scream, but there was a hand over my mouth, soft and tender.

Fear gripped me. I lashed out at my attacker. Then my senses returned and I realized it was just her, holding my screams so that I didn't disturb anyone on the house.

I relaxed and tapped her hand to show that I was alright. She released me and stepped back, her eyes filled with concern. She handed me a mug of water. I drank deeply from it, then wiped a shaking hand across my lips and smiled weakly.

"Did I wake you?"

"I haven’t sleep yet," She said. She took the mug from me and set it down.

"It was a bad one this time. You started screaming five or six minutes ago, and only stopped now. The same nightmare?"

"Isn't it always?" I muttered.

I swung my legs out of my hammock and sat up. From the darkness outside, I know it’s still long time until the dawn breaking. But I knew I wouldn't be able to sleep any more. The nightmare always left me shaken and awake.

“Nee… It’s just a nightmare. Don’t let it bugging you.”

She hugged me from behind. Her arms circled my waist. She put her chin on my right shoulder and kissed my cheek.

I turned my face, I saw her smile at me. Her smile calmed me a little.

“Thank you.” I smiled back and kissed her forehead.
 
“Now… Since you are wake up and not shaking anymore, why don’t you help me with my work. I need to check the supply and make a list of it.”

“Well… Why not. I surely can’t back to sleep again. And I think I some fresh air.”

We went to the warehouse in the back. Actually it’s not a real warehouse. It’s just a room which full with unused items. But she decided to cleaned it up and put all her supply there.

As we came inside, the scent of herbs and other medical ingredients tickled my nose. I saw lots of sacks stacked on every part of the warehouse. There only small part left for a table, two small chairs and a cabinet at the other side of the warehouse. At first I hate those smells. But now like it. Somehow it feels refreshing. I took a deep breath, filling my nose with them.

She smiled at me as she walked to her chair. She pulled out a perkamen and start writing.

“So, what should I do?”

“Umm… Can you bring me the file over there? I need to cross checked it with my list.” She pointed at a bundle of old perkamens above a sack of Dry Roots.

I took the perkamens and put it on the table then sit infront her.

“Here,”

“Thank you.”

She took the perkamens, open it, hold it in her left hand and back to her writing. Her eyes move back and forth from the perkamen on her hand and her writing. Sometimes she stoped to check is there something she missed or not. And sometimes she makes those funny faces when she found any mistakes.

Damn. I love those funny faces she made. They always makes me smile.

So I just sat there and watched her doing her job. Somehow I managed to forget about my nightmare by seeing her doing her job seriously.

“Hey… Why are you staring me like that?” She waved her hand before my face.

“Uh… Nothing.”

“Something wrong with my face?”

“Nope. Your face just as cute as always.” I smiled, seeing her blushed.

“Mou… You just tease me.” She pouted. Makes her face even cuter.

“I thought you will help me.”

“Well… I will. I just don’t know what to do. I see everything already organized as usual.”

I spread my arms around, showing her what I mean. That’s another thing I like from her. She loved to make everything in order. Not like me who never bother with ‘chaos’. Sometimes I think it’s a miracle we could get along each other. I mean we are way too different. Is this what people called as ‘Opposite Attraction’? Or is this destiny? Well I don’t know.

“Why don’t you tell me what should I do now?” I asked her.

She tapped her chin with the back of her pen, thinking.

“Hmm… Can you count Agrint’s Dry Roots and Azhpha for me? According my note, we only have few of them.”

“Aye Ma’am.” I stood up and  salute her. She rolled her eyes at me.

I steped back and turn around. After few steps I stoped and turn to her again.

“Anyway, where do you put those things?” I smiled foolishly. Scrathcing my head.

“You can find them on the second rack near the window on the upstair.” She sighed.

“Wokey…”

“And don’t forget to put them back to their place after you finished.” She added.

“Yes Ma’am. Your wish is my command.” I bowed to her. I heard she chuckled.

I went to 2nd floor and found the rack she said. Actually it’s not hard to find everything here. Like I said before, she loved to make everything in order. She arranged all the ingredients based on name and even put label on each rack.

I start counting the Agrint Dry Roots. There are many kinds of Dry Roots. And these Agrint’s Dry Roots are one of rare ingredient that came from Frost Agrint, monsters that only can found on the far side of the Frozen City of Beluslan – I don’t know how she managed to get these. Even though Frost Agrints are common on that area, it still hard to get the dry root from them. Not only because they are agro but also because not every of them have decent root to take. Not to mention there are lots of other agro monsters around them.

These roots are versatile. You can make various things from it, depends on how you cooked and mixed them. It can become a very nice medicine or even a deadly poison. If you like spicy food, just add a slice of it and it will rise the Spicy Meter from your meal. Just remember don't add it too much or you'll have fire breath like a dragon. literally. 

It took some time for me to count it. I must treat them carefully since it’s rare and fragile. I don’t want to get scolded for break it.

Yup still enough stock until next season.

After finished counting the dry roots, I moved to the Azphas. Like the Agrint’s Dry Root, Azpha also a versatile ingredient. And luckily it’s not as rare the other one. You can find Azpha almost in every part of the land. And our village was blessed with lots of wild Azphas.

When I checked, the jar almost empty. Only few bundle left. It takes no time for me to count it.

It’s done.

I put the jar back on the rack and headed down stairs.

As my foot landed on the ground. I saw her already fall asleep on the table with hands still holding pen and perkamen. I shoke my head and smiling. I walked toward her slowly. I remove the pen and perkamen from her hands, lift her up and take her back to the house.

I lay her on her bed and pulled the blanket. I heard she mumbled something.

Ah…She must be dreaming.

I remove few strands from her face so I can clearly see her sleeping face. Anoher thing I like from her is her sleeping face. So beautiful. So cute. I kissed her forehead then leave.

As I’m about turn around, I felt her hand holding mine.

“Where’re you going?” she asked with sleepy voice.

“Back to my room.”

“Please don’t. Stay with me tonight, will you?”

She pulled my hand. Moved her body away a little, give me space to lay beside her.

“It’s been a while since the last time,” She whispered. Her breath tickled my ear, makes me shiver a bit.

Before I know, she already kissed my neck. I can feel her soft lips running through my neck upward to my ears. She rubbed back of my ear with her nose. Her hand circled on my waist. Her fingers moving around my mid section.

“I missed you,” She whispered again, licking my ear lobe. Makes me moan a bit.

I turned my face to her. Our eyes met.

“I missed you too.”

She closed her eyes as I bring my face closer to hers. I kissed her eyes gently. Put my arm around her. Hugged her. My lips move to her cheek, down to her chin, tracking her jaw line and stoped at her lips. I can hear her soft moan as I run my fingers along her arm,

She opened her eyes and smile.

“I love you,” She kissed my lips softy.

She’s right. It’s been a while since last time I feel her soft sweet lips on mine. I returned her kiss.

Slowly, our kiss become more passionate as when our tounge take part on the game. I let her tounge sliped into my mouth. I sucked it a little before touch it with mine. My tounge lead hers dancing inside my mouth.

She sliped her hand under my shirt and rub my bare skin. With her nails, she draw a line over my back. She moved it up and down along my spine slowly. Teased me. I huged her tightly. And moved her body under mine.

She broke our kiss and turned me over.

“I want you tonight,”

“I want you too...”

This is gonna be fun 


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“MINA… WAKE UP!!!WE GOT PROBLEM!!!”

I heard someone yelling and knocking the door like crazy.

Who the heck is that…

I open my eyes and slowly walked to the door.

I saw a familiar face standing in front of me. Her mouth wide open. Her eyes filled with shock.

“Why are so noisy Haruu? And what’s wrong with your face?”

“I’m the one who should asking question here WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU DOING NAKED LIKE THAT IN MINA’S ROOM?!” she yelled at me.

EEH?!

Her words shocked me. Made me completely wake up. I turned my eyes down. Looking at my body.

Oops!!!

I looked at her again and smiled foolishly.

“Jeez… You guys. Don’t tell me you two were…” Haruu facepalmed herself.

“You better get yourself dressed Yui. And tell Mina we got a serious problem.” She continued.

“What’s wrong Haruu?” I asked her while I put my clothes on.

“You’ll know when you see it. Just hurry up. I’ll be wait you two at warehouse.” She turned around and leave

I shook Mina’s body, try to wake her up.

“Mina… Wake up.”

“Morning~” she open her eyes and yawning.

“Morning.” I smiled at her. She smiled back at me. Kissed my cheek.

“Harru is looking for you. She said we got problem.”

“Haruu? Problem? What problem?” I shruged my shoulder.

“She said we’ll know when we see it. She wait us at warehouse.”

Hearing me said about warehouse, Minna suddenly jumped up and run outside. I chased her and catch her hand.

“I think you better put your clothes on. I don’t want everybody turned on because of your hot body.” I smiled and put her clothes on her hand. I saw her face blushed. She quickly put her clothes on and run to the warehouse.

It still dark outside, the sun just about to rise. But when we arrived at the warehouse, we can saw what the problem is.

WE HAS BEEN RAIDED

Seeing what happened to her precious warehouse and herbs, Mina fainted.

“Mina…” I yelled, catch her body before she hit the ground.

Hearing me scream and seeing Mina fainted, everybody rushed toward us.

“Mina-nee… Are you alright?” Miyu calling her sister, shaking Mina’s body. Her eyes start watery.

“Calm down Miyu-chan. Your sister is alright. She just shocked.” I tried to calmed Miyu down.

“Why don’t you help your Onee-chan back to her room?” I asked her. She noded.

“Paruru, Yagi, please help Miyu.” I handed Mina’s body to them.

As they took Mina back to her room I walked to the warehouse checking the damage.

It was a total chaos. The door was opened by force. It now lay on the ground. Sacks of herbs scattered all over the place. Some of them were torned apart, spilled its content out. There were also a big hole on the side wall of the warehouse. And the roof almost collapsed.
   
I kneel down, checking the ground.

“Found something?” Harru asked me. She kneel beside me.

“I can’t belive the dare came this far to village,” I muttered.

“Who?”

“The Lepharists and Maus.”

“What?! No way. I thought we have sent them away far to the north. Are they working together now?”

“Well, these foot prints surely belongs to them. And I don’t know are they working together or not.” I pointed at the traces on the ground. Haruu put her eyes to the ground where I pointed. She touch the soil, took a pinch of it. She sniffed it.

“It still fresh. Less than an hour I guess.” She threw the dirt and wiped her hand.

“Less than an hour? I wonder why I don’t hear anything.”

“You were ‘busy’ with Mina I guess,” Haruu chuckled.

“Hey… What do you mean with that?” I can feel my blood rushed to my head. Making my face red.

“C’mon Yui… You know what I mean.” She smirked at me.

“I…I don’t know what are you talking about,”

Ohh… Yui... Please stop teasing mee… I can’t hold it anymore… Please do it now… Does that ring a bell?”

“Ho… Ho… How you… Don’t tell me you were…”

My jaw droped hearing Haruu’s words, I belive my face start getting red. I can’t finish my words. She laugh her ass hard seeing me like that.

“My room is next to Mina if you forget. Of course I can hear it. Beside, you two were too loud.” She start laughing again.

Shit… I totally forget that we were not alone in this house. I mentally facepalmed myself.

Feeling embarrassed I ran back to the house.

“Hey… Yui… Where are you going?” Haruu chased me.

“I’ll get my weapons.”

“Hey… Hey… I was joking you know. Don’t be so serious.” She blocked my way.

“Move away Haruu…” I give her my ‘deadly glare’. She shook her head.

“I… I’m sorry Yui. I don’t mean to make you angry. I… I just…” tears start filling her eyes. I sighed.

“You know, I never be able get mad on you when you put that face.”

“Really? You forgive me then?” I nodded. Wiped her tears away and smile.

“Now please let me in. I need to get my weapons now.”

“What for? You said you already forgive me?”

We looked at each other with confused face.

“Ehh?! What are you talking about? Wait… Don’t tell me that I will kill you because you making fun of me?” she nodded. Her confused face was really funny. I can’t hold myself not to laugh until I run out of breath. Watching me laugh like that Haruu getting more confuse.

“You are funny Haruu… What makes you think I will kill you because of that?”

“I don’t know. It just crossed my mind. ” she smiled foolishly.

“I want to chase those bastards who raided Mina’s warehouse. That’s why I need my weapons.” I explained.

“Ooo… I thought… Hehehehe…” Haruu laugh awkwardly.

“Now you know my reason. Will you let me in?”

Haruu moved aside. Letting me walk inside. She followed behind me.

“Umm… Yui. Can I ask you something?”

“What? You want to come with me chased those bastards?”

“No… Not that.”

“So…”

“But promise me first you wont get angry if I ask you this.”

“I promise. Now tell me what you want to know.”

“Umm… Err… I just curious, how do you two… Doing ‘that’? I mean you both are girls and girls don’t have what boys have… so how?”

“Ehh? Is that what you want to know? Well…How do I explain it…”

I saw her face start blushed.

“It’s okay if you don’t want to answer it. Just forget I have asking you this.” She try to run away from me. But I catch her before she able run.

I hold her and pushed her to the wall. I looked at her eyes.

“Do you really want to know?” she noded. I can see fear and curiosity inside her eyes. Her body start shaking. Her breath become faster

“I don’t know how to put it on words. So why don’t I just show you how?”

I leaned forward. Getting close to her. I put my fingers in her face. Run it along her jaw line to her chin. Went down to her neck, her breast, her belly, then up again to her neck. I put my thigh between her legs and rubed it. My left hand start playing on her thigh along with my thigh. While my right hand holding her shoulder.  Haruu’s body start shivering. Her breath getting heavier than before.

“Are you alright?” I whispered on her left ear. Kissed her ear lobe. Haruu let out a moan as I start to lick her ear. Her eyes were closed.

“Do you feel good? Do you want me to continue?” I kept whispered at her.

“Ye… Yes… Please…”

“Are you sure~?”

“Yes please…”

I took two steps back and release her. She was shocked. Her body fell to the floor.

“What’s wrong?” she asked. I can’t stand it anymore. I burst my laugh out lout.

“HAHAHAHAHA… I’m sorry Haruu… I can’t stand tease you any longer… You should see your face when I tease you… HAHAHAHAHA…”

“YUI… YOU MEANIEEEE!!! HOW DARE YOU DO THAT TO ME!!!“ Haruu yelled at me. Her face now as red as tomato. She turned her face away.     

“That’s for making fun of me before.” I smirked.

“You liar… You said you forgive me. How dare you do this to me…”

“No I’m not. I do forgive you. But I don’t say I wont pay you back.” I smirked.

“Now I must go. Watch Mina and the others while I’m gone. Bye…”

I run back to my room and took my swords. When I walked to front door, Miyu called me.

“Yui-nee. Where are you going?”

“I’m gonna chase those raiders. How’s your sister?”

“She’s fine. She’s sleeping now. Yui-nee...” Miyu hugged me.

“I love you... Please be carefull”

“I love you too Miyu-chan. Now go back to your sister. And promise me you wont tell her I’m chasing the raiders. It will make her worry.” She noded.

“Good girl.” She let off her hug.

“Come home soon will you.”

“I will.”

I start running to village gate. Along the way I saw the chaos. It seems not only our place who got raided. Every house in this village was.

Those bastards…

When I arrived at the gate, I saw lot of villagers already gathered there. I even saw our chief, Ulgorn and some elders among them.

“Ah Yui… I’m glad you come.” He greeted me. I nod my head to him and to other elders.

“How is your place?” One of the elders asked me

“Chaos.”

“And the girls?”

“They are alright. No one hurt. But Mina a little shocked. After seeing what happened to our warehouse.”

“Is it bad?” Chief Ulgorn asked.

“Well, not really. With a little work it will be as good as before.”

“Don’t you think you better stay with them? Just incase they come back again.” Asked another elder.

“Haruu stay with them. She’ll protect them while I’m gone. Anyway, any idea who did this?”

“Rae thinks it was The Leparists. But Dermot said he saw a bunch of Maus running away from here. I don’t know which one we should follow. But I’ve sent few scouts to tracked them. They should be back soon.” Chief Ulgorn explained.

“Do you think they working together?”

“I’m not sure, But it might be happened. Who knows what they thinking.”

“So… Which should we chase? Leparists? Maus? Or both of them?” I asked.

“Searching some action I huh?” Chief Ulgorn grined at me. I smiled back at him. He put his arm around my shoulder. Hugged me tight.

“That’s the spirit. I like it. Too bad you are a girl… If you were boy I’ll ask Rae to marry you.”

“Well Chief, you can still make them married. Yui is quite handsome for a girl. She and Rae would become perfect couple,.” One of the villager shouted.

“But I want to have grandchildren. They both are girl. If they married, they can’t have kids.” Chief Ulgorn pouted. Everyone laugh seeing it. I also laugh with them

I must admit, Chief Ulgorn quite unique. He’s huge and harsh. A bit stubborn sometimes. But he also funny and he have a good voice. Not just good, but GREAT. Anyone who never heard him singing wont belive if this mountain troll-look alike man is a GREAT SINGER. I like him. He and his wife are like my second parents to me. After my parents died several years ago.

Anyway, back to our problem. When the scouts back they told us that those Leparist and Maus really working together. And the raiders that came to aur village were only a small part of them. Around 60-100 people, and now they are heading north to Bubu village.

As we know where they headed, we decided to chase them right away before they reach their next target. We was splited into three forces. One will stright followed their track. While the other two will flank and intercept them. We will force them to run to Aegha Field and finish them there before we continued to their base-where ever it will be.

We gathered all hunters from our village – men and women – for the chase.We prepared everything we need. When all set, we marched in silent as we don’t want our prey know we’re tailing them. I move to the east side of the village along with my group, leaded by one of most experienced scout Kamiya. He lead us through the forest to the hill at the other side,

We move in scattered formation ready to ambush and surrounded our prey. We ran in fast and steady pace. During this time suddenly I noticed something. Our prey – The Leparists and Maus – acted little bit awkward. They attacked our village, destroyed and stealed our belonging but not hurting anyone. This is weird. Because those tribes are famous for their barbaric behavior. Every time they raid a village, they never leave any villagers alive. They always slaughter their target. But what happened tonight was the opposite. I can’t stop thinking what motives behind it.

Stop thinking Yui… Keep focused on the hunt.

That’s right. I’m in the middle of a hunt now. I must think nothing but my prey. I must focused on them. A great hunter never get distracted by anything. When I finally get my focused back I realized that my fellow hunters were stop. I looked at Kamiya. He’s crouching behind a tree.

“What's wrong?” I whispered.

He didn’t answer, just shook his head to the left. I turned my sight to his left side. What I saw really shocked me. Around 200m from our place I saw the whole Leparist and Maus tribe on a big camp. I make a quick count. There are atleast 500-1000 of them. While we only 50.

“Is this their base?” Kamiya nodded, he called the others to come at us.

“I think we found their base.” He said. Pointing his thumb behind his back. Everyone turned their head to where he pointed.

“That’s a lot of them.” Said one of my team mate.

“Yeah… You said it. Their numbers increased very fast since last time we sent them out to the north. No wonder they dare to raid our village.” Said the other.

“How dare they build their base inside our forest.” Said Ranran. She is Kamiya’s sister and another female hunter on my group.

“Not only that. Don’t you guys think it’s weird for them to raid a village without hurting anyone in the village. It’s just not like them. I smell something fishy behind this.” I added.

“So what should we do now?” Everyone looking at Kamiya.

“I have several option. One, we move to other group and tell them about what we found here. Two, we give them little surprise attack then retreat. Three …”

“… Or we split into smaller team. One team will stay here and find out what their plans are while the others will inform others group about this thing.” I cutted Kamiya’s line.

"What do you guys think?” Kamiya asked us back.

“I agree with Yui. I do think they are planning something. I would save lot of time if we know what their plan so when we back to village we can think about how to face them.” Ranran said. Everyone nodded.

“It’s decided. So, who will stay here?”

“Me.” Ranran and I said in unison. We looked at each other. Then smile.

“It’s my idea so I will take the responsibility.”

“And I’m the smallest among you guys. It’s easier for me to sneak around.”

“Alright, who else?”

“I think just the two of us enough. Beside, we’re just gonna scouting. To find out their plan. And for scouting job the lesser the better. We can move around freely.” Ranran speak before anyone answer.

“Are you sure?” Kamiya looked at his sister then me. We nodded together.

“Well then, good luck to you girls.” He tapped our shoulder.

“And for you, you better come home safe. Or I’ll be mad at you.” He said to his little sister.

“I’ll be just fine. Now go.” RAnran said to her brother. Kamiya nodded then lead the rest of the group away.

“Now just the two of us left Yui.” She said to me

“Yeah. Just the two of us. Are you nervous?” I asked.

“Nervous? NO. Exited Yes.” She smirked.

“Me too.” I smirked back.

I looked back at the camp then to the sky. Sun already rise. It still early in the morning and that camp still silent. I only saw few patrol guard doing their job.

“So here’s the plan…”
 
“… We sneak in, search for the officer tent, looking for anything that looks like a plan, sneak out, meet here again then headed back to the village. Am I right?” Alma finished my words.

“Uh..Huh… That’s exactly what I’m gonna said. Sometimes I think you can read my mind. And it creep me out.” I smiled at her. She just grinned at me.

“Jeez… You flatered me Yui.”

“Let’s get moving. You take that way I take this way. Remember, we’re here to find out what they planned. Don’t start any fight unless for defend yourself.” I reminded her.

“Isn’t you the one who always started the fight Yui?” she smirked. I rolled my eyes as she sticked out her tongue.


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so... how is it :dunno:

boring? failed? 

please comment :kneelbow:

hope not make you guys feel bored

and sorry for my bad english :kneelbow:

PS: I'll try to post the next part tomorrow after I finished edited it.

« Last Edit: June 05, 2012, 12:57:48 PM by bunny_rabbit »

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Re: 48 Family-Tower Of Eternity (un-orthodox multi pairing)
« Reply #7 on: June 05, 2012, 05:38:40 AM »
Firstly, thanks a lot for the special tour Annabelle-san. Geez, you're like a fusion of Mayu and Paruru. Cute, but hot! :grin:
(and I'm gonna be chased down by your master because of trying to flirt with you :lol:)

So that's the kind of the world this story is set. I see.. * rubbing chin * the tour is helping. :yep:
About TL, it's like what bochang-san described. Interested? XD

PS: can anyone tech me how to put spoiler for picture. I feel bad have to post with lot of BW Killer pictures like this
Spoilers are unavailable here, but in exchange you can set the height of the uploaded picture manually by tweaking the img code a bit. For example...
You can set height tags by using: [img height=400] link [/ img] (without space in the last tag)

And 20++ pages?! Wow, you're really on fire, aren't you? I like that... :D Keep the fire burning!

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Chapter 1
This Yui is not so innocent, eh? :twisted: I snickered a lot when reading her antics here, and I love imagining it. :lol:

You're going to pair her with Minarun only?
Because after teasing Haruu I kind of thought that she's 'open' to any one. :grin:

Btw, I'm still going with the mini glossary advice from my previous comment, since new terms also appear here. (Leparists? Maus?)
Doesn't have to be a full-fledged glossary chapter, instead short descriptions at the end or beginning of the chapter would suffice. :yep:

The rest of the 20++ pages are awaited. :D Bring more Yui and Team 4!
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@aruka-san
I want to make my sweet innocent Yui more 'Spicy' :kekeke:
the pairing... we'll see :kekeke:
as for the mini glossary I'll make it on the next chapter...i don't put any explanation about the Lepatists and Maus because at this point Yui and the other villagers don't know anything about those two tribes exept for their barbaric behavior. beside, those two tribes don't play much role on the rest of the story. But there will be more explanation later.

and thank you for the tips aruka-san. :kneelbow:

other readers
thank you for drop by :kneelbow:

as i promised before here is the next part...enjoy




WARNING : Might Contain Mild Language and Violence
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Chapter 1
ASCENSION

part 2 The Run


I move out from the wood. Silently draw my sword. I run to the nearest tent and hide behind it. I took a hand of dirt and wiped it along my blades to prevent it from reflecting the sun light. When I’m about move out from my hide out, I saw four patrol guards coming at me, two from each side.. I quickly back to my hide out.

I followed the guard’s movement and make a mental note about how long they they need to move from one point to the another. And it took about 10 mintues for them to move. Judging by the time they needed, I just realized how big this camp was. And suddenly I regretted my decision.

But it’s too late to retreat now. I take a look at the guards again and I saw Ranran had reached to one of seems-like-officer’s tent and sneak in. I decided to keep forward. I don’t want to lose from her.

So, when the guards finally passed me. I sneak out from my hide and run to another nearest tent. Based on size, I knew it’s just soldier’s tent, so I moved to another tent. This time bigger than before. I hold my swords tightly and sneak in. I was ready to killed anyone who occupy this tent. But luckily this tent was empty. No one here.

Fiyuh… lucky me its empty.

As I predicted before, this is really an officer’s tent. Or more presicely Strategic Tent. I saw a big map with lots of marks on it laid open on a table. On top of it I saw rolls of perkamen. I checked them, it’s just an ordinary letters. Written in foreign language. Either it’s Leparst or Mau I don’t know. Eventhough we lived under the same sky, but our languages are different. And I don’t even bother to learn their language.

I kept searching until I saw it. A roll of perkamen with its seal still intact. From the seal I think it’s an important letter. I open it.

Ah crap… Another alien’s language.

I fold it and put it inside my bag. I search for another information again when suddenly I heard loud noise from outside.

RANRAN!!!

I ran out and looked around. Searching the source of the noise.

There! There she is. Surrounded by dozens of Leparists and Maus guard. And lots of them still come at her. She looked wounded. Her right arm hang weakly on the side of her body. She use her left hand only to defend herself. It must be hard for her since she is not a lefty.

I rushed to helped her. I jump at one of the guard that blocked my way, stabbed him on the neck with my sword. And pushed him down with my momentum. I pulled my sword from his neck while blocked an attack with my another sword. And kicked him right on his balls. Make him bent in pain. I swing my right sword to his neck. It sliced through his neck smoothly like hot knife on butter.

I use his headless body as spring board then do a summer-sault over the other guard. I landed right behind Ranran. The guards were stuned watching me come. We stand back to back.

“What a grand enterance…” Ranran mumbled.

“Hi… Long time no see.” I said to her.

“Got something?” she asked.

“Got one, on my bag. How about you?”

“Yup. Four heads, one arms, three fingers, one left ear, half nose…”

“Not that… The info.” I mentally facepalmed myself.

“Oh that. Safe on my bag.” she tapped her bag.

“Good. So now we can continue our plan.”

“What plan?” She asked me

“The sneak in-sneak out thing.” Again I mentally facepalmed myself.

“Oh that. What was the plan again?”

“We sneak in, search for the officer tent, looking for anything that looks like a plan, sneak out, meet again at the forest then headed back to the village.” While blocking a spear from creating another hole on my body.

“Oh yeah. Since we’re already meet here, I think we should skipped the sneak out and meeting at the forest part and just headed back to the village. What do you think?” Ranran ducked, evading a great sword that try to split her body into two.

“Actually I prefer our original plan. But thanks to you we should do the new improvised one.” I stabbed two guards at a time.

“Hey… What do you mean by that?!” Ranran turn around and yelled at me. She spun her sword and stabbed the guard behind her.

“It’s because of you we are now stuck here, fighting against these stupid guards and their-soon-will-come friends!!” I yelled back at her. Stepped at a guard’s
right on his groin. Make him scream in pain before I sliced his throat with my sword.

“So you mean this is all my fault?!”

“Yeah. I don’t see where I take part to start this chaos.”

“Give one reason why I must take the blame.”

“You want one reason? I’ll give you thousands!”

“Spill it out!” She challenge me.

“Alright. I’ll tell you. First, you were the one who surrounded by the guards. Second, I’m the one who come to save your ass. Third…”

“STEP BACK!!! DON’T EVEN TRY TO COME CLOSE!!!” We shouted at a guard that come to us. We point him with our sword and gave him our deadly glare. He jumped back and fell on his ass. Frightened.

“You ruining my count bastard!” I yelled at that poor guard.

“Where was I before…” I saw him pointed out three of his fingers.

“Oh yeah, I was on third reason. Thank you” I said to him. He nodded silently

“Third, look at your hand. It’s a mess. Fourth, which part of my word ‘DON’T START A FIGHT UNLESS FOR DEFEND YOURSELF’ that you don’t understand?! Fifth…”

“OK…OK…I GET IT… But it’s not totally my fault. I just defend myself like what you told me. It’s that stupid Officers’s fault. He’s the one who provoke me.”
Ranran pouted.

“Which one?”

“That one.” Ranran pointed at an Officer with one arm. Lying miserably on the side of a tent.

“What did he done to you?”

“He… He… HE TOUCH MY BUTT… HUAAAAA….” Ranran started crying. Making all the guards looking at their wounded officer with disgust. The said officer try to defend himself by waving his remaining hand. Signaling he’s innocent.

“Nee~ Stop crying. You had make him  pay what he did to you right?” I huged her.

“Hiks… Hiks… I did… I cut his arm… Hiks…”

“Good girl. Now we better get our ass out of here while they still busy blaming their officer. Can you run?” I whispered. Ranran nodded

“Now get ready. We’ll run on three.”

“One…”

“Two…”

“Threee…”

Both, Ranran and I run like crazy. We run as fast as our life depends on it –well it does.

We run to the nearest wooden fench that separate the camp and the forest. We jumped the fench and run through the forest. I pushed Ranran to stay infront me. But her wound slowed her. She tripped on roots several times. And her wound kept bleeding.

This is bad. If we continued like this she’ll lost more blood. We should stop the bleed first.

I remembered about an abandoned cave near hear. I looked around searching for that cave.

Gothca.

I grab Ranran’s left arm and pulled her to the cave.

“We’ll rest here a while.” I said to her. Ranran jus nodded weakly. Her face already pale because of blood loss.

“Let me see your arm.” Ranran gritted her teeth when I checked her wound. I took my bottle and use the water inside to cleaned the blood from the wound.

It’s just a small cut. But why it bleed this much.

“Who gave you this cut?”

“A… hunchback… geezer… scratch me… with… his…finger nails” Ranran answered. She struggle to said each word. Her body start shivering. Her breath getting heavier and fast.

Hunchback geezer with finger nails?A SHAMAN!!! She has been poisoned.

Quickly I took my dagger out. I make a bigger cut on her wound. I sucked the poisonous blood and spit it. I do that several times.

“Hei… why…are you…sucking my blood? You’re not…trying to…drink my blood…don’t you?”

“It’s not time to joking around you stupid girl. I try to sucked out the poison from your blood.” 

“Poison? What poison?”

“Ahh… Just shut up will you.”

I kept sucking the poisonus blood out. But it seems the poison already spread too far. She need to get the antidote soon or she’ll die.

I search on my bag for anything that I can use to prevent the poison spreading. If can’t stop it at least I can slowed it down.

Got it… Thank you Mina.
I found a pack dried Azpha, Sprigg Grain, Subbela Leaves, and Agrint’s Dry Roots. I put those herbs out and start crushed them then mixed it. I tried to remember the composition that Mina had told me long time ago about the antidote for Shaman’s poisons.

I hope I got it right.

Once it done, I split it into two part. One I mixed with water and forced Ranran to drink it.

“Here. Drink it.”

“What is this?”

“It’s a medicine.”

“Yuck… I .. don’t…want it…”

She closed her mouth tightly.

“Drink it or you’ll die…” She shook her head.

“I’m sorry. But you’re the one who forcded me to do this. You have to drink it.” I pinced her nose. Forced her to breath from mouth. When she open her mouth to take a breath, I pour the medicine and sealed her lips with mine. With my lips sealed her lips, Ranran have no other choice but to swallow the medicine I gave. Once she had done it. I release her lips.

“What… the heck… you just... done? You… steal… my… first kiss!!!”

“Oh please. It’s your own fault not to take the medicine.”

“I… hate… the taste… you know…”

“So you prefer to die poisoned than to drink the medicine?”

“But… I’m… still alive…”

“That’s because I’ve forced you to drink it. If I was a second late, you’ll be dead now.”

“But… you…you… YOU STEAL MY FIRST KISS!!!”

KRACKKK

By reflexes I grab my swords. I put my index finger on my lips, told Ranran to quiet. Give her stay-quiet-while-I-check-outside look. Slowly steped out the cave. I walked along cave’s wall with my sword pointed. I saw shadow from the right side. Came out from the cave, I swung my swords, One get blocked while the other manage to landed inches away from the intruder’s neck.

“Whoa… Chill out.” Kamiya told me.

“I thought those bastards that come. Why’re you here?”

“I’m worried about you two. It’s almost noon and you haven’t back to village. So I decided to tracked you down. I just about to get to their base when I saw you
dragging Ranran into this cave. How is she?”

“She’s hurt. Some old Shaman put his nails on her. Poisoned her.”

“What?! Where is she? Is she inside?” Kamiya rushed into the cave without waiting me answer his questions. I let out a sigh. Then followed him back.

“Ranran! Are you alright?” he shook her cousin’s body.

“Easy Kamiya. You’ll hurt her more if you shake her like that. Beside she’s alright. I just give her the first aid.”

“But…but you said she got poisoned…” I can heard his panicked voice.

“She was poisoned. Like I told you I already give her first aid. She’ll be fine for now.”

“But she’s not moving…”

“That’s good. The less she move the better. It will prevent the poison spread faster. Now help me finished this. Hold her still.”

I took the rest of the crushed herb and put it on Ranran’s wound.

“ARGHHH… IT’S BURNT!!!” She screamed. Her body shaking wildly. Then fall silent, unconscious. 

Dark-purple smoke rose up from her wound. It smells bad, makes us cough hard.

“What kind of poison is this?” Kamiya asked, faning the smoke away from his nose..

“Don’t know. But it’s bad for sure. Maybe Mina will tell you better. She’s the doctor after all.”

Saying her name makes me remember, we gotta back to village soon. Quickly I wrap Ranran’s wound with the bandages and tighten it with a shred of my shirt.

“We must get back to village now.” Kamiya reminds me. I nodded

Putting all my stuffs back to my bag. I handed the letter to Kamiya.

“Here. I got this from the camp. Ranran also got something on her bag. Put this together.” Kamiya followed my instruction. When I’m about to take Ranran up, he hold me.

“No. You’ve done enough. Let me take over from here.” He smile at me. Put Ranran on her back, give her a piggyback.

“She always ask me to give her a piggyback before. What a troublesome girl.” He sighed and smile.

“That’s your sister.” I laugh.

“And Yui. I’m sorry for the trouble she always give you. I don’t know what will happened to this brat if you not always help her.”

“Nahh… Don’t mention it. You’re my friend, and she’s your sister. I always think her as my sister. Another sister to take care wont kill me.” I pated his shoulder.

“Let’s get back home. I’m hungry. I haven’t eat since yesterday.”

We walked out the cave, heading back to our village. We walked on silence. It’s been a while since the last time I take a walk in this forest. Enjoying the smell of nature.

ZIIINGGG

An arrow hit the tree in fornt us. We turned. We saw a bunch of Maus running toward us.

“Those bastards had tracked us. Must be from the blood” I draw my swords.and start running.

I let Kamiya take the lead while I cover her back.

ZIIINGGG

Another arrow passed by. Missed by an inch from me. I turn around, facing our chaser.

ZIINGGG… ZIIINGGG…

More arrows come. Using my swords I blocked them all.

“Run Kamiya run!! I’ll take care of these.”

“But..”

“Just run. Safe Ranran.” Another arrow coming. I managed to toss it aside before it hit my face.

“OK. I’ll be back with more men.” He shouted.

“Yeah. You better. And tell the girls I’m sorry, I’ll be late for lunch.”

Jeez… Why I said something like that. It’s just like I’ll never back again.

Shaking my head hard. I gained my focus back. I saw them put their bow away and draw their sword.

One of the Mau jumped at me. Swinging his boomerang-like sword, aiming for my head. I ducked, rolled over to the side and sliced his joint. He triped off, Before he stand, I cut his head off. Another one comes, he thrust his sword forward, I took a small step to his right and swung my sword up, aiming his right arm pit. My sword cut his arm off. With my other sword I stabbed his neck.

Watching me take down their friend, the rest of them start attacking me together. Their sword slashing simultaneously, forced me into defensive mode. I kept dodging and blocking, looking an opening to strike back. When that chance come, I take three of them in a single shot.

They outnumbered me. Must find a way to escape.

While kept dodging and blocking their attack, slowly I make my way to escape. I pull them to the east side of the forest.

After take down another one, I decided to run away. I ran straight to the east, heading to Anturoon’s Crossings. They start shooting arrows again. I ran zigzagged to avoid the incoming arrows. This way of running drained my energy faster than ever. My legs start shaking. I forced my legs to kept running.

I must shake them off before I ran out of energy.

I kept on running and running and running. I don’t even bother to check my surrounding. All I think is to escape from those bastards.
My body finally reach its limit. I fell on the ground. I try to pushed my body up, but I have to energy left. I even don’t know where am I right now. I feel so tired… hungry… and sleepy…

*****

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still too long?boring?cheesy?

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PS: I'll try to post the last part for this chapter tomorrow
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here's the update...last part of chapter 1

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WARNING : Might Contain Mild Language and Violence
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Chapter 1
ASCENSION

part 3 The Paths



Timelessness. Eternal gloom. Drifting in slow, never-ending circles.

Where am I?

I felt alone, yet at the same time I know there are others around me. Surrounded me. I try to touch ‘them’ but I can’t. No sense of sight, hearing, taste, smell, touch.

What place is this? 

Images flashes before my eyes –or in my mind. People’s face, smiling, laughing, crying.

Who are they?

Another images comes. Scenery. Vast snow field, endless desert, villages, a city –with a huge tower in the middle– standing under a transparent dome in the middle of nowhere.

I missed my home… I missed Mina and the other girls.

Dragon-like creatures raiding a villages. Destroying everything on their way. Killing people.

SOMEBODY TELL ME WHAT THE HECK IS GOING ON NOW!!!

I try to scream. No voice come from my mouth.

A big fortress stand on a floating island. People fighting in front it. Black wings, White wings. The sky above the fortress start shaking. Six holes opened. Something big came out from those holes. Circling the fortress.

Green light start glowing from those things, getting bigger and bigger then turned into a pillars of light. Hitting the ground, destroyed everything it touched. The ground and people near the fortress vanished. The fortress explode into pieces when those six lights hit it.

An after-shock from the explosion hit me. Pushed me away.

“NOOOOO!!!!”

Snapped my eyes open. Panting so hard until I think my lungs will explode. My heart beated faster than ever. Blood rushed to my head, makes me dizzy. My body shivering. I hugged my knee, buried my face on it.

“Wake up already?” a man speak from behind.

Turned my head around, I saw him. Standing –floating– inside a crystal like cage, smiling at me.

“Who are you? What place is this?” I asked him. I tried to stand up, but my feet feels so weak.

“Sit still Young Daeva.” He said..

“Who are you? What place is this?” I repeated my question.

“My name is Munin. I’m a Daeva. You are now in my home, The Ishalgen Prison Camp.” He moved his hands in a glorious way as he speaks.

“Prison Camp? You’re a prisoners? What had you done? Who sent you here?”

“Easy there Young Daeva. There will be time for your question. But for now, how do you feel?”

“Tired, weak, and hungry.” My stomach growled. Munin smiled, he waves his hand. A bowl came out of nowhere. He moved his hand again and the bowl fly toward me. Landed softly on my skahing hands.

“You’ll feel better after you drink it.”

“No thanks.” I shake my head. Put the bowl on the ground.

“Why?” He asked. Looked confused.

“I can’t take anything from a stranger. I don’t know you and I don’t know what your intention on me. You might try to kill me, putting poison or something in it.”

“And why would I do that?”

“Umm… I don’t know. Maybe because you’re a bad guy?”

“A bad guy? Me? We just met, and you already called me a bad guy. That hurt my feeling Young Daeva ” He put his right hand on her left chest than make a theatrical move ripping his heart out.

“Well, I’m sorry for hurting your feeling. It might happened right? And you said  you ARE a prisoner. As far as I remember, only bad guy who got sent to prison.”

“Never let your guard down huh. I Like it Young Daeva.” He smiled.
“You’re right. I am a prisoner. But not every prisoners are bad. Besides, if I want to kill you why would I waited you to wake up. I can just kill you while you were sleeping. It much easier.”

“Well… That makes sense.” I nodded. I looked at the bowl before me. I don’t know what in it. Well, it looks like a soup and it smells good. My stomach start growled again.

I took the bowl and try a sip of it. And it taste good. Before I know, I already finished it.

“How is it? Is it poisonous?” Munin asked. I nodded.

“No. It’s good. Can I have more?”

“Sure. You can have as much as you want.” He moved his hand. The bowl suddenly filled itself again.

Without any delay, I start my second bowl. This soup really something. I can feel my energy back. I feel refreshed with every sip I take.

“Anyway, how long I’ve been sleep?” I asked. I just realized it already dark now. I can’t see anything more than few yards infront. And the only light came from the crystal-like cage.

“It’s almost half a day since I found you and brought you here.”

“Ehh?! You brought me here? The guards didn’t stop you?”

“There is no guards around.”

“A prison camp without guards? That’s weird. But, if there is no guard, why don’t you just run away?”

“Unfortunately I can’t. This cage is special. It designed to hold me from going anywhere.” He explained.

“Wait… I think I missed something here. You said you brought me here, but just now you said you can’t get out from there. So how is that possible?”

“Sure it possible. Like I said, this cage designed to hold me from going anywhere. But that restriction limited only to my body, not my mind. And they who sent me here don’t know about this thing.” He smirked.

“I still don’t get what you try to tell me.”

Munin didn’t answer. He just closed his eyes. Her body start glowing in sync with his cage. Then he stepped out through the cage. Now there are two of them. One, still standing –floating– inside the cage with eyes closed, while the other stepped out and walk toward me. My eyes widened in shock.

“Ho… How did you do that? Thi… This is impossible.”

“There’s nothing impossible for a Daeva and a Spirit Master like me. And this is how I took you here Young Daeva.” Said the one who walk toward me. He then touch my head lightly.

“Getting the memories back I guess.” He said, vanished into thin air. Leaving only the one inside the cage.

“What do you mean by that?”

“The Wheels of Time never stop. It always move. Once the cycle complete, it will start all over again. The past become present which leads to the future. Come close, I’ll show you.”

Munin pointed his index finger near my head and it start glowing. A light strike my head, brings the images from my dreams back.

"What you are about to see are your memories from your previous life.” I heard Munin's voise inside my head.

I saw myself standing inside the city, with the thick fortress’ wall all around. . A gigantic tower stand in the middle of it. Spreading its glorious light around. Creating transparent dome which covered the city as well as the the fortress. The Tower of Eternity.

The images move faster. Now I see the dome was gone. Five dragon-like creatures walked in. I can felt the pressure. Everyone stand still, petrified by their appearance. Those five walk into the tower.

Silence.

Then... There was shouting, confusion, a rout. One of the Dragon had fallen. A Warior was standing ready to fight, his eyes blazing.

The Dragons attacked. Voices screamed for Tower Guardians to raise the Dome once again, but they failed us. Lost in the tumult, they could not act in concert to defend the Tower. Under the Dragons' raging claws and weapons, the Tower began to splinter and fragment.

The Tower collapse.

Atreia shattered into two halves. The lower half had been engulfed in a fierce and bright light, while the upper half had been plunged into cold, desolate darkness.

The images changed again. Showing A big fortress stand on a floating island. People fighting in front it. Black wings, White wings. The sky above the fortress start shaking. Six holes opened. Something big came out from those holes. Circling the fortress.

I know this scene...

Green light start glowing from those things, getting bigger and bigger then turned into a pillars of light. Hitting the ground, destroyed everything it touched. The ground and people near the fortress vanished. The fortress explode into pieces when those six lights hit it.

An after-shock from the explosion hit me. Pushed me away.

The images gone. Everything back to normal.

"Im... Impossible... That was just a dream... A nightmare..." I stutered. Falling on my knees, hugging myself tight. Try to stop my shaking body.

"No Young Daeva. That's not a dream. That was your memories. The memories which sealed inside your soul."

"No... No... ".I lost my words. My voice stucked on my throat.

"Now, I'll show you the present."

Munin rise his hand. Lift me up to the air.

Another images comes. I recognize the scenery. It was one of our big fortress', Morheim Ice Fortress.

A bunch White-wings try to raid the fortress. The guards were fighting back, but they got pushed back into the the fortress.

Elyos

I don't know where that word come from. I just said it when I saw those White-wings.

"I see you recognize them." again, I heard Munin's voice inside my head.

The images then change again, showed a bright vast landscape. A group of Asmodians fighting against a group of Elyos in a fierce battle. They pushed the Elyos back to their city.

"The New Gate Of Heironopolis." Munin said.

"Since the Tower collapsed, we never stop batling each other. Sometimes we win, sometimes we lost. But the battle itself never ended. No one know when it will ended." Munin keep talking, showing another battle scene. After that, he put me back on the ground.

"That is the present time Young Daeva. The Asmodians need you. Will you answer the call? Will you join the battle?"

"Why? Why should I answer the call? Why should I join the never ending battle like this?"

"Because it is your destiny Young Daeva. To fight, to take back what had taken from us. To return the pain they gave us by their cowardice. Because of their cowardice the Tower collapsed. Because of their cowardice Atreia shatered into pieces. Because of their cowardice we have to suffer, live under the shadow. And yet, they put all the blame on us. The called us The Damned."

"What if I refuse?"

"Then the only thing that we have in the future are these..."

He shows me an images of total destruction. Fortress fell into rubbles, dead bodies everywhere. No living things are sighted, not a single animals ar plants.

Nothing.

Only emptyness.

"But. these futures are not set in stone. It still can be changed. You can help to change it. Every decision you make will affect to the future."

"Why? Why me? How can I helped to change it?" I asked. The images of the future that Munin had showed me hurt my heart. I can't imagine my loved one among those lifeless bodies. I can't imagine Mina and the other like that.

"Because you are a Daeva and your destiny has linked you from the past to the present and to the future."

"And what should I do?"

"Will you answer the call?" I nodded.

Munin smiled. Looked stisfied with my answer. He waved his hands, creating a mirror like hole in front me.

"Step in. We need to bring your ability as a Daeva back."

I followed his word. I stepped into the hole. It feels like I walked through a waterfall. I can feel the mirror like thing covered my body as i walked through it.

"Welcome to Ataxair. The land between reality and illusion."

This place really similiar with the place on my night mare. I can see the resemblance between them. Both have this heavy air to breath in, floating islands scatered all over the place.

"You see the island over there?" Munin pointed at a floating island. I nodded.

"Go there. I'll be waiting for you."

"Whoaa... Are you kidding? That place is too far. There's no bridge around. How i suppose to go there? Flying?"

"Then do it. Spread your wings and fly there." He smiled. Pushed me on the back.

"WAAAA... I DON't WANNA DIE..." I screamed in panic.

FLAP

A pair big, black wings arised onmy back. Holding my falling body and lifted me up. I can feel this new exciting sensation. My wings took me fly high then droped me down in lighting speed as i folded them close to my body. As I'm about to hiy the ground, I spread them to catch the air. The sudden movement make my body bounced up ward.

WOOHOOO... I LOVE IT.

"Having fun I believe," I heard Munin's voice inside my head. Bring me back to reality.

"Sorry... But yeah, THIS IS FUN!!!" I yelled.

I moved to the island that Munin told before. Doing few simple maneuver while circling the island, looking for a place to landed. I saw Munin standing on the other side of the island. I fly to him and landed beside him.

He must be doing that body-spliting thing again.

"This called Astral Projection." He said as if he can read my mind.

"Whatever... So what's next?" I asked. Rubbing my hands together from the excitement.

"Hoo... Getting heated up huh? Then fight them."

Out of nowhere, four men shows up. With daggers on each hand they came close to me. One of them jumped towards me. His daggers sliced, inches from my nose. By reflexes, I do a back flip, draw my swords as I landed.

"Oii... Is that how you treat your guest?" I yelled. But he didn't answer. He kept moving forward. His friend joined with him. They attaced me simultanously. Give me no room for fight back. I kept dodging and blocking their attack. The pushed me to the edge. One of them try to stab me, I block it with my left sword and slashed his neck. Once my sword went through his neck, he vanished. Make me stuned for a while.

He's just an illusion?

I only lost my focus for a while, but that was enough for the other three to landed their attack on me.

SHIT... I forgot about them...

They might just illusions, but they can give real damage. I saw small cut on my upper arm, thigh, and shoulder.

"That's hurt!!! You bastards!!!"

I jumped over them. Took the initiative to start the fight. I slashed one of them on the neck and stabbed the other one on the chest. Make them vanished like their friend. It leaves me one more bastard to take down. He run over me, I also run over him. He swung his dagger over my neck. I ducked slashed his arm, kicked his balls and cut his head off.

"That's what you got if you messing around with me."

"Interesting." Munin shows up. Clapping his hand.

"Piece of cake. I ate bunch like them for breakfast."

"Oh... Really? Then how about him? Can you handle him?"

A man with a shining heavy armors come up. He hold one big great sword and walked toward me. He smirked to me.

This dude looks tough,

Again, I took the initiative. I run toward him, spinning my swords around, try to confused him. When I'm close enough, I swung my swords as fast as I can, aiming for his neck. I want to finished him quickly. But my sword didn't meet the target. He vanished before my swords can touch him, and showed up behind me. Hit my back with the wide side of his sword. Sent me fly few feet away.

What the heck... With that heavy armors like that how can he move so fast?!

He raised his sword up ward and charged forward to me. He bring that big great sword of him down, try to cut me. I flipped back evading his attack. His sword stuck on the ground. Seeing his sword stuck like that, I charged forward. Using his sword as a spring board, I launch myself to the air. I rolled few times to gain more momentum for my attack then dive right to him.

What the…

I saw him smirked at me. As if he had expecting me to do this. He pull his sword from the ground countering my attack. I crossed my swords to block the attack. Our swords connected. Sparks came out form the friction. With all my strength, I try to hold his sword from cutting my body.

Shit… He tricked me. He let his sword stuck like that to lure me in and use the ground to add mode power on his swing.

I realize that as soon as our swords connected, so instead of keep trying to push him, I loosen my grip and let him pushed me. I let my body follow his movement to minimize the damage.

I flew few yards away and landed behind him.

Whew… This dude is really something. He’s fast, strong, and an experienced one.

He turn around to face me. He spread his wings and jump up. He pointed his sword at me. Lightning came out from the tip of his sword and snaked around my body, locked my arms on the side of my body.

He then snapped his sword up. Pulling me closer to him. As our distance getting closer and closer, I forced my arms to break free and blocked his incoming strike. I made to blocked his attack in the last second. But the impact was too great. My body flew down again.

I hit the ground really hard. My swords slipped away from my hands. Air came out from my lungs, makes me choked. I try to catch my breath when I saw him flipped his wings and dive in to me with his sword pointed at me.

Desperately, I rise my swordless hands up. When suddenly my body start glowing. A bright light came out from my palms and hit him hard.

When the light finally out, I can see him nowhere. I think I got him vanished just like the other guys before.

“Well… Well… Nice show there.” Munin walked to me. He helped me stand back on my feet.

“How was that?” he asked.

“Who the hell he was?”

“That was Hallion. One of Elyos’ Great Generals.” He smiled

“Now, how do you feel?”

“Weird. I can feel like something warm flowing inside my body.”

“The seal has been broken, Aether now flow inside you.” He added the last right before I asked about what Aether is.

“While your body adapted with the flowing Aether, I have one important question for you.”

“Which path will you choose?” Munin asked. He draw a circle with lots of symbols on the ground.



“What are those?”

“These are the paths which you have to choose.” He pointed at his drawing on the ground.

“Gladiators. Manifestation of brute force and strength. Natural born warriors, masters of all weapons.” One of the symbols glowing.

“Templars. Hard as steel, solid as mountain. Their shield is their pride.” another one start glowing.

“Assassins. Killers from the shadow. Master of poisons. Work in silence, agile and deadly.” he continued

“Rangers. Bow, arrows, and traps are their friends. Attack from distance. Rappid and fierce are their mark.”

"Sorcerers. Master of Elements. Earth, Wind, Fire, Water followed their command."

"Spirit Masters. Messenger of two worlds. Bring the Spirits of all elements under control."

"Chanters. Commandment and conviction. The ultimate support ever."

"Clerics. Follower of Healing Star. Devoted their life to protect others."

I got amazed by the images before my eyes. My hand move by its own. Touching one of the symbol.

"So, it's the Ranger you choose."

"Huh? What?" I snapped back to reallity.

"You have choose your path. From now on you'll be a Ranger."

"What?! I haven't choose anything."

"Yes you have. You have choose the path of Ranger. Now you must report yourself to Pandaemonium."

"Should I go now?"

"Yes. Unless you still have something to do."

"Well..." at first I was about to tell Munin I want to say goodbye to people from the village, but somehow I can't say it. My lips were sealed.

"Show me the way then." I said to him.

"Take this," Munin handed a letter to me.

"Give this to Heimdall. He'll tell you what to do next." He moved his hands, a portal appear in front me.

"This gate will lead you straight to Pandaemonium. Farewell Young Daeva. We'll meet again sometime. Blood For Blood."

I took a deep breath. Saying goodbye to the others inside my head. And took my first step to Pandaemonium.

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WARNING : Might Contain Mild Language and Violence
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Chapter 2
The BEGINNING

part 1 New Life




I walked out the portal. A big gate welcomed me. I was amazed by its size. It makes me feel small.

“Need help young lady?.” A man greeted me.

“Umm… Munin sent me. He told me to find Heimdall.”

“Munin eh? How was that sly old fox doin’?”

“He’s fine. I guess.” I awkwardly answer. “For a man who lived inside a crystal-like cage in the prison camp he looks just fine.” I mutterly added.

“And why does he sent you to find Heimdall?”

“Well… He told me to give him this letter.” I showed him the letter I got from Munin. “So, where can I meet this Heimdall guy?”

“You want to see Heimdall?” I nodded. “Well… You’re looking at him right now.” He smiled.

What the… What’s wrong with this man?!

“May I have the letter then?” He stretched his hand to me.

I give him the letter. After he read it. He smiled at me.

“Young Daeva, I welcome you to The Capital City of Pandaemonium.” He bowed to me.

“STOP THERE!!! WHAT DO YOU WANT HERE?”

Two guards coming at me. Their swords already on their hands. Reflex, I reach my hands to my back to draw my sword. But my swords was not there.

Shit… I must be dropped them.

“Easy men.” Heimdall said to those guards. “Is this how you treat a Daeva?”

“Oh… I’m sorry sir. We don’t know.” One of the guard said. He bowed to us. They both put their swords back bowed to us once more then back to their post when Heimdall waved his hands.

“I’m sorry for that,” He said. “Our guards sometimes acted a little bit, you know.” He smiled.

“So… How was your Ascension?”

“My what?”

“Your ascension. Your transformation into Daeva. How was it?”

“Oh that. Kinda weird I guess.”

“Hope you can adapt well. You’ll find more weird experience later.” He chuckled.
“Now please follow me. As a Young Daeva, you must present yourself to High Priest Balder. He’s the leader here.” He walked before me. I followed him.

We walked to a bridge ahead, turn right at the end of the bridge and followed a steep path to a huge closing door. Two guards stand on each side of the door.

Heimdall nodded his head at the guards as we approach. The guards bowed a little and opened the door for us..

He leads me into a big hall inside. A fountain with waterfall laid in the middle of the hall. We took a right turn at the fountain and headed forward.

I saw a man standing back facing us in front of five giant human statues.

“Well Heimdall, what bring you here this time? Not another bad news again I hope.” The man said.

“Nope. It’s not a bad news this time. A Daeva has born.”

“A Daeva has born you said?” The man asked. Turned around to face us.

“Yes.” Heimdall answered. He stepped forward, handed Munin’s letter to the other man.

“Now… It’s been a while since the last Daeva was born,” he said after reading the letter.

“What’s your name Young Daeva?” he asked me. Looked me straight in the eyes.

“Yui.”

“Well Yui, Munin said he had guided you through your Ascension, is that right?” he waved the letter on his hand. I nodded.

“Then prove your divinity to me.” He raised his hand towards me. A ray of light came out of his palm and hit me.

Just before the impact, I jumped up and spread my wings. A halo created, covered my body from head to toe. I landed back and closed my wings. I saw that man smiled at me.

“You have proven yourself.” He took his staff from his back and raise it high.

“I, Balder. The High Priest of Asmodian. In the name of Azphel, I recognize you as a Daeva.” I bowed down on my knee as he spoke his words. He tapped my shoulder with his staff and continued.

“As a Daeva, it’s your destiny to protect our land and our people. It also your duty to bring back the glorius of Asmodian. Will you accept that?”

“I will.”

“Now rise. Prepare yourself for the future. Blood for blood.”

“Blood for blood.” I replied. Stand back on my feet again.

“As a new Daeva, she’ll need a mentor to guide her. Can you find someone for me Heimdall?”

“Sure. I’ll take her right now.”

“Very well. You may leave now.” Balder said while turning his back on us.

Heimdall took my hand and lead me out.

“What was that about?” I asked him while we move away from the High Priest.

“That was your initiation. The High Priest must acknowledge every new born Daeva.”

“And what does he mean with ‘It’s been a while since the last Daeva was born’?”

“To tell the truth, we’re in a pinch right now. Those Elyos already grow in number for few centuries while we kept decreasing in number. And you are the first new born Daeva I’ve met over these centuries.”

“Eeh?! ‘Few centuries’ you said?! How old are you?”

“Hmm… I was born nearly the end of Millennium War, and being ascended by the time of Cataclysm happened. Counting the time until now it should be around two thousands or so.”

“WHAT?! TW… TWO THOUSANDS YEARS OLD?!”

“Why are you shocked?”

“I never thought you are that old. I thought you are about fourty or fourty five years old.”

“Wow… Did I look that young?” he grinned.

“And how old are you?”

“I’m about twenty this winter.”

“Ahh… Lucky you. Got ascended on early age.”

“What do you mean by lucky?”

“Didn’t Munin tell you? Once you are ascended, the time has stopped for you. You’ll never get old. And you’ll live almost forever. You become immortal.”

“Y… You mean I can’t age and die?”

“I said immortal young lady, not invincible. Of course you still can die.” He laugh. “If your head leave your body you’ll dead, got stabbed on your heart you’ll dead, your skull got crushed badly you’ll dead, fall from high ground –over 1000 feet– you’ll dead. Drowned under water for too long you’ll dead,”

“Jeez… There are no different than ordinary people then.” I mumbled.

“Of course we’re different. We have obelisks.” He pointed a big stone monument. “Show me your hands.”

I stretch my hands. Heimdall took it and flipped it upside down, palms face up. With his finger nails, he make a small cut on the tip of my fingers. He squeeze it a little makes the blood out.

“OUCH!!! Why you do that?!” I tried to suck the blood from my fingers.

“Let them out,” Heimdall said. “Now put your hands here.” He pointed at a big red orb on the center of the monument.

I touch the orb with my blooded fingers. At first I thought I will touch something hard and cold, but this orb was soft and warm. It glow a little when my hands touch it. Suddenly I felt my blood got sucked into the orb. I almost move my hand away but Heimdall hold my hands stay for another few seconds.

“It’s done.” He said while removed my hands from the orb.

“What was done? And what is that thing?” I asked confused. Looking at my fingers. The blood had stopped only leave ten tiny scars on tip of my fingers.

“Your blood has been recognized by the obelisk. Now you can bind your soul at any obelisk that exist. This thing here will save your life every time you got seriously injured.”

“Eh?”

“Ahh… This will make you understand.” He said while looking at the obelisk. The orb on the center start glowing again, this time brighter than before. Then something appear. It looked like someone crouching with his/her wings covered his/her body. For few second there was no movement. When I was about asking what is that, the person in front me standing and closed his wings.

“Damn… He’s tougher than I thought.” The man speak to himself and walked away.

“That what will happen if you got seriously injured during battle. The obelisk will teleport your wounded body to the last place you bind your soul. Prevent you from getting more damage that can lead you to your death. Just don’t let your body receive too much damage during the battle. Or the obelisk wont be able to called you back.” Heimdall explained. “Alright, now let’s meet your mentor.”

Heimdall lead me to the exit.

“So, how much is this ‘too much damage’ you mean?”

“Just keep your head attached to your body and your heart keep on beating. Other than that everything will be just fine.” He smiled.

“I’ll remember that,” I said.

“I bet you will.” He laugh.

We walked out the door and make a left turn to a bridge and make another left turn at the end of the bridge. Heimdall stopped in front a message board and checking on the notes for a while.

“You’re lucky. Your future mentor is available. And we’ll meet her soon.”

I wonder, what my mentor will look like

Both of us walked through series of shops on each side the road. This was just like an ordinary stand that sell various things.

“What is that?” I asked, pointing at one of the shop.


“That is the Shugos.” Heimdall said at the mouse like creature that caught my attention.

“They are the Black Cloud Traders.” He continued. “They are one of few races that can deal with both Asmodian and Elyos. They stand on neutral side. The provide lots of good items for both sides. From weapons to armors. Pots and other supplies. Or even simply accessories to make you just look nice for a party.” He einked his eyes. “They don’t care about our battle. What they care is how to keep their business alive. They are a reliable merchants. But be caution, some of them can be tricky. Sell low quality items with normal or even higher prices. Always make sure you don’t get tricked. They were born as merchant after all.”

We arrive at a place that looks like a training ground. Lot of people gather here. Some of them do one on one match while the other just playing with the training dummy.

“Ahh… Annabelle. Still do the basic training huh?” Heimdall yelled at one female that busy shooting the training dummy with her arrow. His voice draw attention from all people there. They all stopped their activities and turned their head to Heimdall.

“Master Heimdall. Welcome back” They all said and bow together.

“Please… please don’t let me disturb your training.” He said to the crowd while walking toward the female he called before which also walked toward him.

“Master Heimdall,” the female bow. “It’s been a while you visit us here.” She said.

“Stop the formality Anna. I’m not your trainer anymore.” He laugh.

“For me you will always be.” Anna said.

“Are you busy now?” Heimdall asked. Anna shook her head. “Good. I want you to meet someone.” Heimdall called me to come close.

“Annabelle, this is Yui. Yui, this is Annabelle.” He introduce us. We both nodded our head.

“From now on, Annabelle will be your mentor Yui.” He continued, earning a shocked face from Annabelle.

“Ma… Master Heimdall. What are you talking about? Me? Being a mentor? No… No… I’m still not good enough to teach other.”

“Cut it off Anna. You know you’re good. I’ve been following your progress ever since. And what you have been showed are amazing. Rank up from rank 9 to Star Officer in just one year and be able to stay on top 100 soldiers this long just show how good you are.”

“But that was long time ago. And I haven’t rank up again since then.” Anna said while looking on the ground. Kicking some dirt with her foot.

“Hei. Don’t be so negative. One of the Generation of Miracle said something negative is not so fit with your images. What will happen if your friends from the Akiba hear you said something like that. Do you still remember what you guys always said back then?”

“Aiming for the top. Always aiming higher and higher.”

“That’s right. ‘Aiming for the top’ that is your generation’s spirit. Now, will you keep that spirit alive? Will you take my offer? Be Yui’s mentor?”

“I’ll give a try.” She nodded.

“Well done, I’ll leave you both then. And Yui, don’t get fooled by her appearance. She might look sweet, but she can be very harsh.” Heimdall winked at me as he make his leaving.

“So, Yui. Have you ever use weapons before?” I nodded my head. “Good. What kind?”

“Almost everything I think. But mostly I use swords or dagger.”
“How about bow? Have you ever use it?”

“Nope.” I shook my head. “From all kinds of weapons I’ve ever use, I never use bow.”

“And what was the reason?”

“I think, because no one ever teach me how to use a bow.” I smiled sheepishly

“Wow… That shock me. You said can use almost every weapons, but not a bow. And yet you choose to become a Ranger. With those kind experience you had don’t you think it’s better for you to become a Gladiator instead of Ranger?”

“Well I guess so. But I think this is my destiny. Besides, I don’t like the idea standing in the front line with heavy armor and huge weapons. I prefer sneaking around and took the enemies down quickly.”

“I think you’re right. You got the Scout’s soul inside.” Annabelle smiled. “Ok then. Why don’t you try to shoot that target.” Anna tossed her bow to me. I try to catch it, but get pushed away and fall to the ground.

“A… Annabelle Sensei… This… is… too… heavy.”

“Ahh… Gomen-gomen. I forget. You’re not ready with that bow.” She come at me and took away the bow with ease.

“Try this one.” She gave me another bow, smaller than before. “How is it? Still too heavy?”

“This fine.”

“Good. Now try to shoot that target.” She pointed to one of the training dummy.

I took one arrow from the tube, put it on the bow, aiming for the dummy, and release it.

ZWIIFT

The arrow flew away and lodged on the dummy’s head.

“Sugoi… That’s what we called clean head shoot.”

“Beginner’s luck?” I shyly smile.

“Try again. But faster this time and use all the remaining arrow.”

I followed her order and do fast shoot without even think how in the world I can do that. By the time I finished, I saw her stand beside me with her eyes widened in shock.

“Umm… Annabelle sensei, is there something wrong?”

“Yui, are you sure you never use bow before?” She asked.

“You don’t belive me?” I asked back. She didn’t answer. She just turned my face to the dummy. What I saw also shocked me. The dummy’s head was filled with the arrows from my shoot.

“Eeh?! Another beginner’s luck I guess.”

“That’s not a beginner’s luck. That’s talent.” She smiled at me. “I think I have a very talented student here.” She tapped my back. Makes me blushed by her compliment.

“You will make my job easier then.” She laugh. “And by the way, can you stop calling me sensei?”

“Why? You’re my mentor. So it’s normal for me to call you sensei right?”

“That’s true, but it makes me feel old. And I personally don’t like this master-student’s gap thing.”

“So what should I call you then? Senpai? Onee-chan?”

“Hmm… Onee-chan will be nice.” She said.

“If that is your wish Annabelle-nee.”

“Just Anna please.” She smiled.

“Oh… Ok Anna-nee,” I smiled back.

We continued with the basic training. Even though she said I’m talented, Anna-ne insist me to do the basic training. Just to make me more comfortable with the bow, because she said the way I hold the bow still look awkward.

“Oi Anna. I see you still do that basic things huh?” someone called from a far. I don’t know who it was.

“Oh Yuko. Long time no see. How’ve you been.” Anna-nee greeted the newcomer.

“I’m fine. Who’s this? A newbee?”

“Yup. This newborn Daeva here is Yui,” Anna-nee called me to come closer. “Yui, this is my old friend Yuko.” She introduced us. We nodded our head.

“Whoaa… A newborn Daeva?! What a surprise to see a newborn Daeva.” She smiled, showing her dimples and squirrel-like teeth

“It’s been a while since the last one got ascended from our generation. And what are you doing with her? Are you trained her?” Anna-nee nodded.

“Wogh… Another surprise you finally become a mentor? I thought you will never be a mentor. What changed your mind?” Yuko asked.

“Well… Master Heimdall came and asked me personally.”

“What?! That old fart came here? Where is he now? He still owe me some money.” Yuko asked while put her sight around.

“He already gone. And please watch your language. He’s our master afterall.”

“Not for me.” Yuko said. “Not until he paid the money he owed me.”

“Jeez Yuko… You still not change. That bet was so long ago.”

“Hey… A bet is a bet you know. The loser must pay. That’s the rule.”

“By the way, what take you here Yuko? It’s a rare sight to see the great Sorceress Yuko on training ground.”

“Nahh… Nothing special. I just take a walk when I saw you here, So I decided to drop by. Oh yeah,are you busy tomorrow? The girls are gonna have a party next week. Care to join? You can take her if you want.” Yuko said.

“Party? Next week? I think I’ll pass. I already have a plan for tomorrow night.” Anna-nee replied, I saw her face a little blushed.

“Owh… You have a date next week?” Yuko grinned, making Anna-nee more blushed.

“Well, good luck with your date then.” She said. “This kid kinda handsome for a girl, just like Gakuran. I thought that was the reason why you take that old fart’s offer,” Yuko whispered to Anna-nee, loud enough for me to hear it.

“YUKOO!!! Why you have to bring up that old stories again.” Anna-nee yelled. Her face now totally red.

“Hahahaha… You still not change Anna.” She smirked. “I’m off then. See you two again sometimes.” She smiled at us and turn away.

“What a weird person your friend is,” I sighed.

“Not only her, all of them are weird,” Anna-nee mumbled.

“What?”

“Oh nothing. It’s getting late. I think we better continued tomorrow. Come, you will stay on my house.” Anna-nee took her stuffs and walked away.

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