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Dark Temptations (WTomo) {Updated 4/21}
« on: March 30, 2014, 06:52:38 AM »
Hello, world. This comes from an idea I had about a year or so ago and never could figure out what to do with. I've retooled it a bit since then. Please enjoy.
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Tomomi saw her.
A demon.
She had ashen skin and intense eyes ablaze with the fires of hell; a sly smile that most certainly was hiding sinister plots; nails sharp enough to be talons, and ghastly black bat wings. While she was one of the more humanoid demons, she was no doubt just as malicious as the others.
Reflecting back on that moment, she recalled the grin that was flashed in her direction; the eyes that slowly wandered over her, pouring over every detail.
It made her shiver at the mere thought of it.
"Kowai....."
Yet....she felt something then. Something pulling at her soul. How every passing moment it became harder to resist. She had to stay, she couldn't just abandon the life she was protecting- but the pull frightened her greatly, so she bolted. Shaking her head, she took a deep breath. "Give not unto temptation, but deliver us from evil," Tomomi muttered, feeling a bit more steady afterwards. Sooner or later she would have to go back. But.....

"M-maybe a bit longer...."
\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\
She'd been seen alright. After her close friend gave up because of a "tenacious angel" protecting the soul of a teenage girl, Tomochin decided it was time to see for herself. Despite  men being her preferred targets (after all, she was a succubus), she was curious.

Said tenacious angel was a rare exception to her preference. Her holy radiance, that perfect face, and her delicious curves.....it was......inviting. Tomochin wanted to snatch her out of the air and have her way right then. She absentmindedly licked her lips. What a delectable catch that would be....and once she was cast out of heaven, she'd be hers.....

A wicked grin spread across her features.

This was going to be fun.
« Last Edit: April 22, 2014, 05:15:19 AM by shoukitty »

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Re: Dark Temptations (WTomo)
« Reply #1 on: March 30, 2014, 08:22:24 AM »
Woah~ possessive much.!

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Re: Dark Temptations (WTomo)
« Reply #2 on: March 30, 2014, 02:51:49 PM »
LOL... That is some extreme tsundere from Tomochin...  :depressed:

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Re: Dark Temptations (WTomo)
« Reply #3 on: March 30, 2014, 03:30:31 PM »
Is supernature?

Update soon

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Re: Dark Temptations (WTomo)
« Reply #4 on: March 30, 2014, 08:43:15 PM »
@Kirozero: I'm assuming you mean the show Supernatural? No, not quite. I had a short paragraph that explained the setting a bit but it didn't flow too well into the start so I deleted it. If anything I rooted it in biblical angels....but Tomo~mi wouldn't look human if it was completely biblical, lol.

I'll try and work on a new part sooner or later. I'm still coming up with ideas for the next one, so I'm not sure when I'll post it.

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Re: Dark Temptations (WTomo)
« Reply #5 on: March 31, 2014, 12:17:10 PM »
Thanks for putting your idea into writing. Please continue the FF  :)
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Re: Dark Temptations (WTomo)
« Reply #6 on: March 31, 2014, 02:45:32 PM »
 :shock: You finally make an account here?  :lol: Ah... I'll be waiting for the next chap.  :twothumbs

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Re: Dark Temptations (WTomo)
« Reply #7 on: April 01, 2014, 12:45:18 AM »
Uwaaaaah......this is a better response than I expected!! It makes me feel good that everyone is enjoying this!
@stv_wong: Hehe, yeah, it was kind of an impulse decision but I think I like it so far. 
Anyhow, without further ado, here's part two! Oh hey, that rhymed.

It took a while before Tomomi built up the courage to go back. The way that demoness had looked at her had given her quite the fright- while she wasn't sure exactly why, per se, the longer she thought about it, the more she felt the need to go back. "Okay! Break time's over~"
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"Tenacious? What the hell do you mean by that?" She stared at the hulking beast that loomed in front of her. It's single, large, serrated horn was complimented by razor sharp teeth and the eyes of a predator. It's immense build dwarfed the succubus as the two talked. "You heard me," it said in a gruff voice. "She refuses to give over this girl's soul, but doesn't want to resort to violence. No point in me sticking around."
"Oh? Are you saying one little angel is enough to send big, bad you running away?" The behemoth snorted. "Of course not! I'm not wasting my time if she won't fight. You can try it yourself. Though last time I checked, you've almost never attempted to seduce females."
Tomochin laughed. "And I won't. But I'm still going to go see this tenacious angel anyways."

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"'And I won`t." She scoffed. If anything, this would be the most interesting relationship she would make in a long while....that is, if she didn't scare the angel off. She had a habit of seeming a bit too intense when she started to look over someone. "She better hurry up....."
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She was still there.
Tomomi took a deep breath.
Letting herself float down, the angel landed in front of the succubus. "Oh? Finally get your wits together?" She huffed. "You leave. Right now! I won't let you have this girl's soul!"
For a moment, the demoness was silent. That sly grin she wore last time spread across her face, a gleam evident in her eye as she leaned in. "Who said I wanted that now, hm?"
Tomomi felt her cheeks warm up whilst confusion and astonishment came over. She couldn't really mean that, could she?
Stepping forward, she held Tomomi's face, caressing her cheek with her thumb. "So sweet and innocent....."
/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/
Leaning in, Tomochin stole a kiss from the angel, nipping at her lower lip and letting the kiss linger for a while before pulling away. "You taste pretty good....."
The angel, now blushing furiously, covered her mouth with her hand. "W-what...? I....n-no! This isn't right! I'll say it again! Leave!" She responded by stealing another kiss, this time wrapping her arms around the angel and rubbing her back. It wasn't long before the other gave in, ceasing her struggling and closing her eyes. "Mmmm..."
|~|~|~|~|~|~|~|
This was wrong. This was horribly, horribly wrong! Here she was, an angel, letting a demon kiss her! Yet....it felt so good.....maybe...maybe more wouldn-----
Opening her eyes, Tomomi pushed herself away from the kiss. "N-no! Stop that! I'm serious!" She was met with that same grin- which was starting to become irritating!
"You look pretty cute when you're flustered......" Tomomi huffed.
"I said stop! I want nothing to do with your kind! Just...just leave me alone!" With that, she ran off.

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Re: Dark Temptations (WTomo)
« Reply #8 on: April 01, 2014, 02:36:06 AM »
This is interesting

nice chapter  :on GJ:

waiting for more

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Re: Dark Temptations (WTomo) {Updated 4/2}
« Reply #9 on: April 03, 2014, 04:59:21 AM »
Tomomi brought a hand up to her lips, still a flustered mess. Why was she kissed? Why was she blushing? Why was she still thinking about this? Demons and angels aren't supposed to interact like this, it's unnatural!

Most importantly......
Why does she want more?
/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/
Tomochin sighed, turning around and walking away. Those soft lips were better than she could have ever imagined. She licked her lips, still tasting the angel girl on them.

She had a craving to sate, it seemed.
|~|~|~|~|~|~|~|
After much internal debate, Tomomi decides to return to the spot where the demoness lay in waiting one last time. Though every instinct demanded the contrary, something deep inside her drew her out there. What it was, Tomomi wasn't certain of.

Upon her arrival, she didn't see the succubus anywhere....but she sure felt her. A weight pinned her down to the ground, and she instantly knew who it was. "G-get off me!!" Tomomi squirmed, thrashing about in an attempt to throw off the demon lounging on her back. "No," she purred, "but I will let you roll over...."
Hearing the flapping of leathery wings, Tomomi rolled over and sat up only to be pushed back down. Sure enough, it was the succubus. "Say," she mused, holding her chin. "I don't think we've given each other our names....."
The angel gulped, blushing at the figure straddling her. "T-Tomomi...."
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Smirking, she lay down on the angel. "Tomochin." The demoness quirked a brow as Tomomi's eyes widened. "W-wait a moment! I knew someone named that! Or rather, that was their nickname!"
"Go on....." She knew angels had recollections of their past lives- the important things, at least. Demons lost all of that in their descent to hell, and it was possibly why the two couldn't interact. "Tomomi loved someone named Tomochin," mumbled the angel.

........yes. It was coming back to her now. The two were planning on marriage. How didn't matter simply because it never got that far. Tomomi died in a fatal accident- one that drove her, Tomochin, to suicide. "...and I remember loving someone named Tomomi....."

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The two held each other tightly, tears beginning to roll down the older girl's face. "Tomomi missed you so, so, much...." Tomochin felt the other girl nuzzle her, which only made her cry more. "I couldn't remember until now.....I just wanted you for your body......"

"Ne, I forgive you....." Tomomi kissed Tomochin's lips to quell her tears, hugging her afterwards. "I tried to move on when you died, because I knew that's what you'd have wanted....but I couldn't. You meant the world to me. So I decided to come join you....only to have every memory of you torn away. I'm so, so, sorry....."

"Shhhhh........Tomomi is here now. She'll comfort Tomochin, chiyuu~" A smile creeped across the older girl's face. "You haven't changed in the least....."
Tomomi giggled. "Ne, neither have you!" Sighing, Tomochin pulled Tomomi into a deep kiss. After a while, they broke for air, both girls meeting eyes.

"I love you...."
"I love you too...."

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Re: Dark Temptations (WTomo) {Updated 4/2}
« Reply #10 on: April 03, 2014, 04:36:08 PM »
How sad that they were separated when they were humans! :gyaaah: But now they are finally together!!!!  :ding: Hopefully they being angel and demon won't come between them? Or is this the ending?

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Re: Dark Temptations (WTomo) {Updated 4/2}
« Reply #11 on: April 04, 2014, 03:30:38 AM »
How sad what happen in the past fo their past :gyaaah:

And now they are together again  :on gay: :on woohoo:






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Re: Dark Temptations (WTomo) {Updated 4/2}
« Reply #12 on: April 08, 2014, 05:39:41 PM »
I see all the drama coming hahahaha it's very interesting, thanks ( ´ ▽ ` )

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Re: Dark Temptations (WTomo) {Updated 4/2}
« Reply #13 on: April 22, 2014, 05:14:32 AM »
I'm not dead....not yet at least! Just a small update. Took me long enough, huh? Been working on other projects and...um...not playing video games.....especially not Arkham City. Nope.
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The two lay there for a while, in an embrace that neither wanted to break. After being separated for so long, they were back together again. At this point, Tomochin had rolled over so the other girl could lay atop her, resting her head on her breasts. "Tomomi....do you think it was fate we were brought back together?" The angel thought for a moment before shrugging. "I dunno....I'm just happy I'm with you again...." Tomochin sighed and squeezed Tomomi tightly, who nuzzled her in return. The succubus sighed.
"I want to stay like this....I really do....but you should go. We can meet later....." Tomomi pouted, but then nodded, getting up off her long lost lover.
"I'll....see you whenever." Tomochin pulled Tomomi in for one last kiss, in an effort to give them a little more time together....she had to remind herself this wouldn't be the last time; after all, no one had caught them...yet....
"I have to go now. I've got things to do." Tomomi grabbed Tomochin and hugged her tightly. "Don't go! Please?"
"Tomomi....we can meet here again...."
"Promise?"
"I promise....."

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