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Veterinarian [UPDATED!] Chap 1.1 :Moving In
« on: February 17, 2013, 02:35:24 PM »
Veterinarian



Prologue

This is a story about a 32 years old Veterinarian. He’s not the best in Japan. But he catches many people’s interest. His charming look, ability when his caring his patient, and of course his motto also. He works for animals. He don’t mind if his patient don’t pay for his service. Not for that person that he helps, but for his/her pet.

He already travels around the world. He also be good friend with the president of the world’s animal foundation. Oh yeah he also often appears on tv shows. Like Animal planet and Nat Geo.. Or something like that.
He often explore wild lives. Exploring some new creature and got many appreciation already.
He is…..

“Aniki, want some Juice?” said a guy from the other room. Or should I call Kitchen

“Ohohohoho it tickles, Ginro-chan~ stop it already! Gyaahahahaha” An old man playing around, ROFL’ ing with his dog

Suddenly that guy from the kitchen walk to the table and put the glasses on it. “Aniki, here’s your Juice” he said looking to the older guy. He still ROFL ‘ing with his dog. “Ahahahaha huhuhuhuhu”

The younger guy came closer to the old man with deadly aura surrounded him. The two (old man and the dog) suddenly silent and look at the deadly person that keep closer to them. They gulped. “WATANABE MARU!!” He yells and keep closer to the two

“GYAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!” The old man screams in horror, it makes the house is shaking from outside. It seems the younger guy give him a lesson for not listening to him.


-Back Inside the house-

“Rabuo! Please be gentle! Ouch my head” Maru said in pain, rubbing the lump on his head

“It’s your fault not listening to me! Here your Juice!” He said hands a glass of apple juice.

“Err…. Why apple?” Maru complains

“Just drink it already!” Rabuo begins to yelling again

“Hey easy, easy!” Maru said calming Rabuo. Ginro the dog just sit there and watching his master. “Hey, what are you doing there, Ginro-chan?? Come here, boy!”  he asked. Then Ginro walk to his master. Maru give him a rub belly. “Good boy” he said, stroking his fur gently.

Rabuo just smiled at his brother and sat beside him. “How’s your work anyway?” Maru asked to his brother that gulping his grape juice. “Uh..? All fine, how’s yours?” he put his glass to the table and turns at his brother. “Urmm.. some of our neighbor are coming, like baba and her cats” he giggles.

“Ah… I see, good for you, Aniki” Rabuo said. He moving closer and begins to stroke Ginro’s hair as well.  They smiled, and continue their chit-chat


[Rabuo’s POV]

”My name is Oota Rabuo. Why do I got a different sure name as my big brother? You will know it later, but we’re siblings, really!”

We see Rabuo and Maru and Ginro are still having some family chat.

“This is my brother, Watanabe Maru. The best Vet that I know in my entire life.”
“He is 32, 6 years older than me. That means I’m 26 right now.”
“It seems that I have a fine life right now. But I’m not! You know… He and I should’ve married in this age.”
“If you asked me, I already have a girlfriend. She’s cute and beautiful… her name is Nakagawa Haruka. Will be turning into ‘Oota’ soon! Hehe… well I guess”


Rabuo stands up and bring the dirty glasses to the kitchen and wash them

“We’ve been a couple for 2 years. Do you think we should marry at this time? I knew we should! But I think it’s bad if I stepping my brother. YES, HE’S STILL A SINGLE!”
“Of course he had been in a relationship with a woman before, but no one went smoothly...”


We see Rabuo already done with the dishes and glasses. Saying goodnight to his brother and walking to his room.

“From what have I heard from his ex. Mostly said that they breaking up because he rarely spent time with them (his ex) and more attention to his work. I guess you’ve heard about his Animal maniac disease.”
“Yes, he really loves them. He will do anything for them. Being a Vet is been his dream since we were kids. I couldn’t do anything with it.”

We see Rabuo is lying on his bed.

“I already tried my best to find a girl for him. But their relationship always won’t work smoothly. I think I should give up already, and tell Gon that I’m going to marry her soon. But it’s just… I think I should wait for a little longer…”

“AHAHAHAHAHA GYAGAGAGAGAHAHAHAHAHA you’re so funny, AHAHAHAHA ITALY, YOU’RE KILLING ME!! GYAHAHAHAHAHA” Suddenly… A big laughing voice interrupted… and goes more and more loud. *We know it’s the old man*

“Geez, what is he thinking?!” Rabuo looks at the clock “Heck, it’s 11 already” Rabuo slowly gets up “PASTAAA GYAHAHAHAHA” and walking to Maru’s room.

Rabuo is right in front his bro—“GYAAAHAHAHAHAHA ah~ French-san AHAHAH” “What’s with that sound?!” Rabuo opens the door and scold his brother “JUST WHAT THE HECK ARE YOU THINKING AT THIS HOUR?! KEEP DOWN YOUR VOICE! YOU’RE DISTURBING THE NEIGHBOURS!!”

“UAAAAAA” Maru jumped to his bed and hugging… errr… a pillow with sexy Akiyama Mio’s picture…
We see many posters and manga shelves besides his work shelves. And many anime and tokusatsu figure…

“Sorry, I will keep my voice down… ahahahaha Oyashumi, Rabuo-kun!” He smiling sheepishly and closed the door.

“Uggh…” Rabuo walk back to his room.



“Oh… He’s also an Otaku…”


[End of Rabuo's POV]






Extra: Oota Rabuo’s face   

http://s1310.beta.photobucket.com/user/Ricchan_Sawa/media/2013-02-16143420_zps8caafd48.jpg.html?state=replace

It will be hard imagining Rabuo’s face… so I help you with this~
Sorry, don’t have time to go outside and scan it… so I just take a picture of it.
So... Should I continue posting this one?
« Last Edit: July 01, 2013, 05:09:03 PM by Ricchan_Sawa »

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Re: Veterinarian (Prologue)
« Reply #1 on: February 18, 2013, 04:57:38 AM »
Wohohoho xD rabuo and harugon! Me love it :heart: me found it so funny xD please do continue xD

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Re: Veterinarian (Prologue)
« Reply #2 on: February 18, 2013, 06:29:45 PM »
@fuu_kun: glad you like it. Thanks for commented ^_^ of course, I will continue. please wait for the update <(_ _)>


And thank you for reading~

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Re: Veterinarian (Prologue)
« Reply #3 on: February 20, 2013, 07:11:45 AM »
Interesting, I like it!  :thumbsup


Please update soon, I wanna read more

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Re: Veterinarian (Prologue)
« Reply #4 on: February 20, 2013, 08:27:32 AM »
It has potential to be a great fic
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Re: Veterinarian (Prologue)
« Reply #5 on: July 01, 2013, 04:48:13 PM »
Veterinarian




Chapter 1.1: Moving In

Passes the road, under the beautiful sky in the afternoon. Sometimes he stole sights to the beautiful sky while driving.

[Watanabe’s Introduction]


“Hell’o there, minna, my name is Watanabe Yuuma. You must be wondered why Rabuo calls me ‘Maru’ in the prologue? HA HA HA it’s simple. Well, I was a cosplayer long time ago… during my high school days or middle school or whatever, Maybe? And you know, almost of every cosplayer has their own performance name…and well, he misheard my performance name as ‘Maru’ or when I’m crossdressing as a… girl… I won’t tell you what it is. You will know it by yourself.”


[End of Introduction]


He stole some sights through the window again as he drives his car. He keeps doing that until he arrives at one spot beside the holds many part of his story. His story while he’s still on the way to catch his dream. And those part of his story is what makes him become the number one veterinarian in Japan.

“It’s been so long…” he smirks.

He parks his car to the side of the road. There is… a small shack that just fit for a cat. A domestic cat.

“I wonder where he go”


-FLASHBACK-


10 years old Watanabe Yuuma is inside the school bus. On the way back from field trip with the other 6th grade students. Yuuma is already lonely since he’s young. He likes to be alone, he hates the other people at his age or you can say it all of the human being you can say it... well, don’t know what to say…

He sits alone with a headphone is on his head. Do you know why? Well, he also has a scary side of him. Kinda like a dog in that time. He hates when someone steps in his territory. That makes the other student that sit on seat that just fit for two people have to share their seat with a student that doesn’t get a seat because of Yuuma’s bad attitude. I don’t really know what actually happened, but maybe… it was like this,

Random Kid: “May I sit with yoo----“
Yuuma: “tch whatever you want *Death glare*” he said as he gritted his teeth
Random Kid: “umm… I-I think… I-It’s o-oka-ay, Imma go-oing t-to se-eat w-with the othe-rs… *Goes back sobbing*

Makes sense doesn’t it? If it’s about the teacher, maybe…

Teacher: “Yuuma, stop doing that, and let your friend sit beside you, okay?”
Yuuma: “But sensei, I didn’t say anything like ‘you can’t sit with me, find another empty seat’ or something like that… Right, Miyabi-san? *death glare*”
Random Kid: “Umm… Y-yes, sensei. He’s right, I-I just want to sit with Sanma, Gin and Tamaki…”

Kishishishishishishi that’s just what I think.

The young Yuuma is looking outside the window. Enjoying the music he listen to, enjoying the view…..

"Same road, same view, same people…. BOOORIIING"

Oh.. I think he’s not. He keeps looking outside the window. Then suddenly, his homeroom teacher approached him. She bent slightly towards Yuuma, “You really loves music aren’t you, Yuuma-kun?”

Yuuma didn’t say anything

“Yuuma-kun~” the teacher said playfully as she holds Yuuma’s shoulder

Little Yuuma removes his headphone and turns to his teacher “Ah, it’s you, sensei” Yuuma said in monotone.

His homeroom teacher slowly straightened up again and put her hands on her waist “Hummn… It’s okay to listen for some music, but not so loud okay? It may damage your hearing system” she advised

“Oh.. okay sensei, thank you for your advice” Yuuma said giving his angelic(demon) smile to his teacher, and lower his music volume.

“You’re so cute” She said as she pinched Yuuma’s cheek “Okay then, keep that in mind nee, Yuuma-kun~” then she leaves him
Yuuma just sits there waiting for his teacher to go away further from his seat. Wait for it… wait for it…

………….
………….

He raises his music volume again (note on his phone : MAX VOLUME) he smirks and puts his headphone again.

“If I play it with low volume, I still can hear some sh*ts out there you BABA.” He said in his mind

He’s still looking through the window. He thought that he will just got some regular sight seeing until he saw something…
There’s a cat running on the road that has many car passes on it. Wait… not a cat… but a kitten that’s just 5… no, he’s JUST 3 MONTS OLD!

Yuuma’s face gets red and more redden. He wants to save the kitten. At least just by puts the kitten on the right side of the road that’s save from those car.

“I… I want to save him… b-but… arrgh!” he keeps saying that word inside his mind. And it makes him more and more angry troughs himself. He can’t do it because… he afraid they see it. He afraid they found his soft point. His soft point towards the animal.

“Calm down, Yuuma…….. You can do it at the other time….. w-wait but what if a car crushed him before I could save him?! Kuso… stop thinking about it, stop being so paranoid! Stop, stop, STOP!” he tilts his head to the window without realizing it.
Now everybody is looked at him. He stopped. And cool down his self.


-At Watanabe Residence-

Finally, Yuuma arrives at his house. He enters then puts his shoes on the shoe rack

“Tadaima…” He said with his usual ‘emotionless’ tone.

You can hear his mother’s voice (Watanabe Aika) from Inside. “Okaerinasai~”

His mother approached him with a big smile on her face. Of course she missed her big boy ‘A LOT’. He left for 4 days and 3 nights to Tokyo. (Yuuma lives in Saitama prefecture when he was young)

“How’s Tokyo, Yuuma-kun?” his mother asked cheerfully as she hug him

“Usual.”

Still holding her son, she asks in confusion “Eeeh? Is that so?”

“Put me down!” Yells Yuuma

“Ah, okay, okay…” She put him down and pats his head.

“I often go there with daddy and all of you remember?” He pouted

Aika couldn’t help it but just smiles at her son’s way of talking “I wonder why he grew up this fast… tehehehehehe”

“Aaaaaa oniichan is home! Mom is he real?” 4 years old Rabuo-kun asked his mother innocently

Hearing this thing comes from his own little brother, he crosses his arm as he takes a kuchisake onna mask from his bag “NOOOEEE I’M NOT REALLL I’M KUCHI-CHAN~ AM I BEAUTIFUL~?”

Rabuo nods even that he don’t know what the hell ‘Kuchi-chan’ Ask that thing

Inside the mask, Yuuma smirks and say “Oh~ Is that sooooo??” he quickly removes his “Kuchi-chan’s” mask that makes her ‘real look’ could be seen by young Rabuo.

Of course, seeing this “Kuchi-chan’s” true face…. “UWAAAAAAAAAAAA KUCHI-CHAN IS SCARY….. UWAAAAA MOMMY… UWAAAAA” He runs to his mother, crying, hug his mother tightly…
And…. Then Aika’s dark side appears ‘again’

“eek..” Yuuma gulps

His mother approaches him while holding Rabuo. With her dark aura surrounding her “Want me to show my true face?”
“eek…. No no no no no no of course not! Rabuo I’m sorr---“

*SMACK*

“UWAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA”
Now both of Yuuma and Rabuo are crying together.

“Come on, it’s time for nap, kids!”

------

Aika puts Rabuo smoothly on his bed while she locked Yuuma inside his bedroom.

-Inside Yuuma’s bedroom-

“Unfair… This is just don’t fair”

“Wait…. It’s….. totally FAIR!”

He runs to his bag, and took up his new….. *speechless* (You can see Yuuma took out 2 packs of his GUNDAM models that he just bought from Tokyo)

“Shishishishishi”


-Next Day-

“Yawnnnn”

“Oh, you’re awake! Good morning, son!” greets a tall man

“Dad! You’re here!” Yuuma hugs his father tightly

His father, Watanabe Mashima hugs back “Where’s my souvenir?”

“Ah!” He puts his hand deep inside his pocket to reach something “Here!” He gives his father a ‘Kamen Rider’ Keychain.
“………” Mashima is speechless… still looking at the gift his son gives to him “come on! Just accept it…! Take it! Thank you, Yuuma! You’re so kind!” Yuuma smiles happily to get a compliment from his father.

Aika heard all of the conversation that Yuuma had with his father from the kitchen “He gave a souvenir to his father, what about me?” she sighed, “Come on everyone, your breakfast is ready!”

“Haaaiii” Mashima and Yuuma said together


-After breakfast-

“Gotsuosamadeshita!” Yuuma said as he finished his food

His father smiles at him “Gotsuosama”

Yuuma just sit there, silent. Thinking about the kitten he just saw yesterday. Seeing him like this, his mother asks him about what happened. (hopes that she can get a souvenir too after asking)

“What’s up, darling?” she asked softly with a cheerful smile

“You want a souvenir too right, mom?” he said with his legendary monotone

“Ara…..”

“I want it too! I want it too!” Rabuo said jumping on his seat

Yuuma looks down to his pocket “Unfortunately, I just got one left…” Yuuma said

“Ah… It’s okay with me, just give it to Rabuo-kun” she smiles

“You sure, Mom?”

“Unn” His mother said as she nods weakly

Yuuma smirks and give the souvenir to Rabuo “Here you are, Bro…”

“Whoaaa fluffy~ Thank you, oniichan”

Yuuma just give him an OK sign then leaves the dinning room. Aika’s frozen

“Isn’t that my…. Phone’s chain?” she keep questioning to herself about it “It can’t be true ahahahaha”

*RING RING RING*

“A massage!”

From: Mashima-kun~~
Subject: Souvenir
“Look at your phone~”

“EEH?!”

She turns at her husband.  Mashima is trying to hold his laugh, he points at his wife’s phone. She checks it
“My son is grown even scarier than his father in our old days”





TBC~
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Re: Veterinarian [UPDATED!] Chap 1.1 :Moving In
« Reply #6 on: July 01, 2013, 05:18:04 PM »
Everyone... I'm really really really really really really really sorry for not updating this fic. for a very long time..

please forgive me for that *BOWS RESPECTFULLY*


Hope you enjoy this chapter~

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Re: Veterinarian [UPDATED!] Chap 1.1 :Moving In
« Reply #7 on: July 01, 2013, 05:32:01 PM »
YOU UPDATED AFTER 28934732987429374823793287 YEARS!!!!!


*throws confetti* WOHOOOOOOOOOOO~!!!! Yuuma is creeping me out D:

Rabuo-kun is cute~
Anyway! Thank you for the update I enjoyed it :)
 
P.S Be glad I didn't kill you O.O

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Re: Veterinarian [UPDATED!] Chap 1.1 :Moving In
« Reply #8 on: July 01, 2013, 06:16:19 PM »
Well Yuuma was caring towards the animals rather than people XD
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Re: Veterinarian [UPDATED!] Chap 1.1 :Moving In
« Reply #9 on: July 01, 2013, 07:11:57 PM »
@RenAi.... Oops, I mean JujuAirin-san: 28934732987429374823793287 years?! what the heck!?
About Yuuma.... should I make him more scarier or something like that? =) gyahahahaha you don't need to kill me, I'm already dead anyway *grins*.
Glad you enjoyed it anyway.  :)
39~

@Kurosawa87-san: Whoaa, yes yes, true, so true, it's true kishishi thank you for reading my fic~ 39

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Re: Veterinarian [UPDATED!] Chap 1.1 :Moving In
« Reply #10 on: July 01, 2013, 08:03:07 PM »
@RenAi.... Oops, I mean JujuAirin-san:

I see what you did there   :glasses:

28934732987429374823793287 years?! what the heck!?

I didn't know I wrote that number....I just typed something....
Oi! I can see the copy + paste thing there  :mon blblbl:

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Re: Veterinarian [UPDATED!] Chap 1.1 :Moving In
« Reply #11 on: July 01, 2013, 08:24:46 PM »
@JujuAirin-san: damn... kishishishi but I actually memorized the half last one. there's 48 in it.. *straight face* come on! I couldn't help it gahahaha those two's name just popped up from my mind XD

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