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Re: Why Do I Get This Unnatural Feeling...? [MARIRIN X AKICHA] [12|16|10]
« Reply #20 on: October 28, 2012, 06:24:22 AM »
CHAPTER 3 PART 2: ON-PROGRESS

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Re: Why Do I Get This Unnatural Feeling...? [MARIRIN X AKICHA] [12|16|10]
« Reply #21 on: October 28, 2012, 11:29:18 AM »
yaaayyyy  :ptam-glow: can't wait... ganbatte ne  :gmon peakaboo:

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Re: Why Do I Get This Unnatural Feeling...? [MARIRIN X AKICHA] [CH.4]
« Reply #22 on: October 30, 2012, 04:16:34 PM »

DO JI WON!!
HAD FUN USING AMAKUCHI'S IPAD~

LSS MODE: OMOIDE IJOU - AMAKUCHI'S FAULT.


Chapter 4: Sleep Overpt.2, Amusement Park and WHO THE HECK IS DO JI WON?!
Maki's POV

It was blazing hot today, my back isn't fully healed yet. Because of what hapenned to me the other day. I saved Aki's face from being destroyed. I don't really know what will happen today, but I wish that Aki's confession to Sae will be successful. I WISH FOR AKI'S VICTORY!

Anyway, back to the point, today is Sunday and I have nothing to do. I was really bored. And it looks like Aki, Yuki and Sae are just hanging out in my house--- erm.. Scratch that, my apartment-- no I mean Me and my Sister's apartment.

"Haruna.. Do you know somewhere we could hang out to? I'm getting bored here." Sae said, she was reading a magazine about 'yankee style' or so. But she seemed to become more weird since she received her 'motorcycle'.

That is Sae. One of my SUPER FRIENDS. Always helping me. So I love her as much as I love my lil' sissy~ AND THE MOUTH OF GLORY SPEAKS. HURRAY. Well, wanna know who is the 'Mouth of Glory' that I was talking about? Well, it's MY SISTER! HARUNA!

"Hmm... I know there's an amusement park nearby. That's all I know." Haruna crossed her arms... LIKE A BOSS.
"Do you want to enter that AMUSEMENT PARK for free?" Aki stood from the sofa she was sitting earlier. Oh nana. I know that this is one of her plans to get Sae from Yuki. But I have to help her... Damn that VOLK-SOMETHING BATH HOUSE.

"Aniki~ do you want to go there?" Haruna asked me. I don't know how should I reply but... Aki is staring at me TO DEATH. Looks like 'YES' is the lucky answer of the day. And yeah. I answered Haruna a nod.

Hmmm... Aki is missing. Oh... She's in the kitchen talking to the 'so-called' Kitahara-girl. So I went closer to hear their conversation.

"Kitahara, let me and this people enter Daddy's Amusement Park."
"As You wish. May I ask who are these 'people' you were talking about?"
"Take note. Shinoda Maki."
"Noted."
"Shinoda Haruna."
"Noted."
"Miyazawa Sae."
"Noted."
"Kashiwagi Yuki."
"Noted."
"Oshima Yuko. She suddenly appeared a while ago."
"And lastly, Me."

Ooohhh... It's real. I was hiding on the opened refridgerator for so long. Listening to Aki's conversation with 'Kitahara-Girl' but oh my gosh. I feel like someone is staring at me from above. It's Aki... Melting me since October 3, 1991. Guys. I'll tell something serious about Yuki. I heard it last night, she said she wa-----
"Now what are you doing there hiding behind an open fridge's door? Would you like to explain it to me? Shinoda Maki?" Aki's voice suddenly barged in the door of my ear, in my surprise, I accidentally entered the cold fridge because of the embarrassment.

"Oi! Maki! Get out of the fridge!" she was forcing me to get out of the fridge, but I heard Haruna's voice, I can't be mistaken, SHE OPENED THE FRIDGE!
"Ohohohohohohohoho." this is the only word I can say, though it's not really a word.
"And what are you doing inside the fridge, Aniki?" Haruna is now satring at me TO DEATH. I didn't answer, I just stared at her too. A few moments have passed someone knocked on our door.
"Haruna-chan, this is Ohori Megumi, the night janitress. I received a package from your grandmother." well, that's what she said. And... Haruna replied, "JUST LEAVE IT ON MY MAILBOX."

Then our Adventure of Walking to go to Amusement Park has began. Walking too long sure is boring, remembering my Job, I moved closer to Aki, and I asked her, "When will you confess to Sae?" it's really a quiet job.
"Later, when I have the time." Aki answered, she really HAS THE MIND!
"So time is what you Need? I'll but you time later." I just smiled at her, now, I am puzzled on how could I buy her that much of time. I don't even have that much MONEY. ON ACTION DRAMAS, HOW THE HECK CAN THEY BUY TIME? IT'S NOT EVEN ON SALE.

And so, we arrived on the Place where we must go. THE AMUSEMENT PARK!

[9:50 am, TAKAJO Amusement Park.]

"Ohohohohoho."I Laughed, REALLY HARD.  Then, I Received a Message, Its from Aki.

-Maki Phone-

____________________________
Subject: [NONE]
From: [Aki Takajo-chan]
Time Received: [9:55am]
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You Know what to Do! ( >  o <)/

-Message Ends-
____________________________

I Sighed and smiled at her after Reading her Message. I'm feeling strange today, I wonder why. I Can't stop Glancing at Aki. But I Should Concentrate on my Job. And There,  THE MOUTH OF GLORY SPEAKS AGAIN!, Its Haruna, Told you.

"Why Don't we Go Around the Amusement Park in Pairs? "HAAA.. SHE REALLY IS THE MOUTH OF GLORY. But wait, Lets Go back to the Reason why Me and my 'FRIENDS' are here. First, It's Aki's Fault why I Am here. Second, Aki's confession to Sae, and Third, TO ENJOY. But HOW COULD WE GO IN PAIRS? WHAT WILL WE DO? JANKEN TAIKAI!---no, really and SERIOUSLY no. LET THE MOUTH OF GLORY SPEAK!----- This is a YES.

"Hmm.. I Think We'll Arrange it as This. Draw Lots!"Haruna declared. But, She doesn't know how will we DO HER DRAW LOTS. But Yeah, She did have a Plan, a Very strange Plan. "Just wait here Guys, I'll Buy Something We Need."The  Mouth of Glory added. Well, Wanna know where she went? She went to the Nearest Mug shop. and the Mug Shop's Name is... NM-MUGS. I Have Many friends working There, Like Sayaka Yamamoto, Miyuki Watanabe, Nana Yamada, Mayu Ogasawara and Lastly their Shop Owner, Rina Kondo. Also, The Employees, Sayaka. Miyuki, Nana and Mayu are sometimes Singing on The Amusement Park's Stage. Singing 'Zetsumetsu Kurokami Shoujo'. They're Good at Singing but Why are they Getting Poor Sales? I Think its because THEY'RE ALL POOR. Well, I Don't Know why is that but.... I DON'T REALLY CARE! HOHOHOHOHO!  HARUNA IS BACK! She was holding a Box of Mug. from NM-MUGS of Course. Yeah. And also, About the 'NM-MUGS', I Don't Know who is the One who gave that Name in their Mug Shop but... The One who gave that name is a TOTAL IDIOT. NOT AS IDIOT AS ME OF COURSE. The Moment Came, Haruna Opened the Box and Placed the Box on a Random Table, With The Mug on Her Hands. Wait. Pause. I'll describe the Mug.

The Structure of the Mug is This:
A Normal Mug with 'I Love Milky' Printed on the front.
Instead of putting this picture beside the 'I Love Milky'...

they accidentally placed THIS PICTURE INSTEAD!


ITS DO JI WON! FROM SMILE DONGHAE, AS ANNA LAKER. Oh My Gosh, I Freakin' Love That Show! But Yeah. Play Button. And it All happened... Haruna held the Mug like a Baseball player, a Pitcher, to be Specific... and... LOL.... She threw The Mug like a Professional Pitcher. With the Matching background Music from her Phone. We Used to play Baseball when we were still Young, she always plays as the Pitcher and me as The Batter. Well Back to Reality, She really threw the Mug, LIKE A BOSS. Let me tell you the Adventures of the Mug with 'Milky' and 'Do Ji Won'.

When Haruna threw the Mug, The 'NM-MUGS' Shop Owner, was crying inside the Shop, Because she gave the wrong Mug, specifically, the 'Errored' Mug. Haruna felt the wind blowing on her face, even if its Just her Imagination, Remember what I Said Earlier? IT WAS BLAZING HOT. As the Mug is 'flying' in the Sky, when it fell, It accidentally hit a Performer's Head, The Performer is MILKY or Miyuki. Fortunately, The Mug didn't Break. Miyuki picked up the Mug and saw the DESIGN. The 'I Love Milky' and 'Do Ji Won' Design, She stared deeply on the Mug... Her face was... 'Who in the effin' World is this?!' a Korean passerby saw Milky and he thought that 'Milky' is 'Do Ji Won' "WAIT! I KNOW HER! IT'S DO JI WON!"The Passerby moved closer to Milky and offered to shake hands. Milky Refused, Because of her Anger, She Threw the mug on the Korean Passerby's Face and Said, "THERE! EAT YOUR DO JI WON! I EFFIN' DON'T NEED IT!" Because of the Massive throwing of The Mug, It broke.

"Ooopss..."Haruna face palmed, She was Disappointed, While Mayu, Sayaka and Nana are Laughing at her on her back. They can't stop their laughter.
"Its Your Fault"I Lol'd at my Horrible Sister's Face. She was feeling sorry. but, We Just Ran to Escape the 'NM-MUGS'. When we Arrived on the place where no one can recognize us from the past place, We Started the Draw Lots.

"NOW! Me, Yuki, and Aki, Let US NOW DRAW."Haruna started the draw.

This is What Happened, Yuki drew Sae's Name, The Mouth of Glory drew Yuko's Name and lastly, Aki drew MY NAME. SO UNFORTUNATE. Then, a Couple of Minutes after the Draw, I Received a Message, AGAIN. FROM THE SAME PERSON.

-Maki Phone-

____________________________
Subject: [WHY YOU?!]
From: [Aki Takajo-chan]
Time Received: [10:15am]
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WHY! IT ISN'T SAE!! WHY!!!

I HATE IT!!!

ITS ALL YOUR FAULT!!!

:angry:

-Message Ends-
____________________________

Then I Replied.

-Aki Phone-

____________________________
Subject: [Hohohoho]
From: [Shinoda Maki ]
Time Received: [10:15am]
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hohohohoho.

-Message Ends-
____________________________

Then Our Conversation Continued, So we have decided that we'll just Deal with it. But... My Money was Lowered. Haruna started doing another draw lots, this time for the Places that the pairs would go, the time has come, it was FINSHED. I was the first on to draw, and I Picked 'Horror House' The Next One who will draw is Sae, now she picked 'Roller Coaster' that means she and Yuki will ride it. While Haruna and Yuko will go to the 'Fun House'.

[Inside the Horror House|10:20am]

"HARRGGH!! I HATE IT. IT SHOULD BE SAE NOT YOU!"And... The Princess was Being stubborn, She wants Sae. but Instead, Another Unwanted Happening, Like what Happened to The 'I Love Milky' Mug. LOL. Its Not My Fault its HER FAULT FOR DRAWING MY NAME. While she is being stubborn, I Just Kept Quiet. Then another Unwanted Happening Arrived, a Haunted House worker scared Aki, she suddenly Hugged me Tightly, She didn't stop until we got out of The Horror House, she was Crying. I Just Wiped her Tears using my FLORAL Handkerchief. I, Again, Received a Message.

-Maki Phone-

____________________________
Subject: [We Will Meet at..]
From: [Yuko Le Oshiri.]
Time Received: [10:28am]
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We will Meet infront of the
NM-MUGS. Be There at 10:30!

-Sincerely,
     Yuko~

-Message Ends-
____________________________

"We will Meet at the NM-MUGS, Aki, Lets Go." I pulled her hand LIKE A BOSS and hurried to NM-MUGS, When we Arrived there, Yuko and friends are Being lectured by Kondo, not to throw the Mug anywhere again.

"GOT THAT?!"Kondo-minium said, she tapped the table really loud.
"Yes Ma'am."Yuko with friends, Including Milky responded, while I Whispered to Aki.

"Aki, I'll Lure Yuki first, After we walk to a place far from where you are, Pull Sae on the Forbidden Place and Confess."That's what I Whispered to her, I Have to do this because of Work. And yeah, It Really happened, I Lured Yuki to a Far Place, the 'Ferris Wheel'. And I Went to the place where Aki will confess to Sae, Of Course When I Arrived, I Hid at the back of a Rectangular Trash bin, No One can see Me, And there, I Watched the intense Confession.

"Sae, I Really Liked you Since I First saw You. Last Night, I Cried Silently because I Saw you Kissing Kashiwagi-san. It Really Made my Heart Broke. It was Still Bleeding."Tears were flowing on Aki's Eyes, She can't stop it. I Really don't Know Why... But.. Why is My Heart Breaking? Why?...

"Sorry Takajo-san... But I Already like Someone."Replied Sae. The part where Sae said 'I Already like Someone' Pierced through Aki's Heart, Aki cried really hard, Tears burst in her Eyes While Sae, Doesn't Care.

'What is This Feeling Anyways?'

'Why is My Heart feeling Pierced too, while seeing Aki Cry?'

Those Questions was like, walking in my Head, After that, I Walked to Aki and Confronted her, She was still crying, When she stopped Crying, We came back to The Group and Began Eating the Pizza that Kondo-san Ordered.

They Later Realized That Yuki is Missing. And after The Adventures of Finding Yuki. NOT THE MUG ANYMORE!

[Ferris Wheel]

"Uhm! GUYS!! HELP ME! ITS SO HIGH!" Yuki pleaded for help and she was staring terribly at me.

"DON'T WORRY YUKI! I'LL SAVE YOU!"Sae rushed to the Control Room of the Amusement Park.

Because Milky Thought that Yuki is the One who threw the Mug on Her, She also Threw another 'Errored' Mug. Featuring Her Face and 'I Love Do Ji Won' design.

"I HATE YOU!"Milky said as She threw the Mug on the Ferris Wheel.

'Could it Be? I'm..'

-CHAPTER ENDED-




HAHH!! AFTER THE LONG WAIT!!

   
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Re: Why Do I Get This Unnatural Feeling...? [MARIRIN X AKICHA] [CH.4]
« Reply #23 on: October 30, 2012, 10:21:42 PM »
Poor Yuki~!!
Aki was hearts breaking,
I wonder is that anything happen on Haruna & Yuko?
Maki was so caring,
after I saw this fiction.
I still wondering which pair better, due there are different author with different pair,
like MariMii, MariHaru and MariAki.
which will better.

Looking forward for the next update.

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Re: Why Do I Get This Unnatural Feeling...? [MARIRIN X AKICHA] [CH.4]
« Reply #24 on: October 31, 2012, 02:05:14 PM »
yaayy finaly you update \ (^o^) /
sorry aki :( but sae is yuki's x)
yaddaa mario fall in love to aki XD haruna is really2 like a boss ! i think it's suit to her real personality :D i like it <3
i wonders who is do ji won? :? i think i must google it :grin: thankyouu for the update :bow:
looking forward to the next chapter ^-^

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Re: Why Do I Get This Unnatural Feeling...? [MARIRIN X AKICHA] [CH.4.2]
« Reply #25 on: November 01, 2012, 04:47:03 AM »
Chapter 4.2 [Another's View]: The Annoying, Crazy Little Squirrel.

Haruna POV.

It was Another Sunday Morning, I Was really happy because Yuko or Mayu didn't Join the Sleep Over. It was really a Relief!, This Morning, I Was the first One to wake up, AGAIN. Well, This isn't Really something to Brag about. I'M ALWAYS WAKING UP EARLY, NO DOUBT. As I Glanced to The floor, My Sister---scratch that, I Mean My Brother's Friend, Takajo-san, Sae-chan, Yukirin, were sleeping soundly on the floor, of course, on the FUTON. I Decided to take a Morning Walk to Relax myself, It became my Habit already. As I Walked beside the River Nearby, I Looked at my Phone, It's Just 5:00 am. Not Much people are walking outside. and, I wasn't looking on My way, so I Accidentally stumbled on One or actually Two People, Its Minegishi Minami, With a Small Kid... OH WAIT... ITS TAKAHASHI MINAMI! A Friend from high school.

"Haruna! Long Time no See! Since Graduation!"Takamina Started the Conversation, Of Course, I was being shy to start it.
"Yeah.. Uhm.. Why are the Two of You here in Sakurami City?"I Asked them, I was being curious.
"I-I uh.. Didn't Really leave this Town. Haruna."Miichan, said, I was really shocked and I remembered when the last time I saw Her, She was on the Airport, with her Parents.
"Eh?! Seriously?!"Takamina and My Eyes Widened. Because it was the two of us who brought her to the airport at that time.
"Its Been 6 years Since our High School days. Right?" I Tried to Divert our Conversation, and Hopefully, It worked.
"Oh! Shoot! Minami! We're Going to be late for Our Work!"Miichan said, She really changed. She's not the Miichan I Met in Middle School.
"Ha?! Majisuka?!"The Two ran to the Nearest train Station.
"Bye."I Just gave them a silent farewell.

After that, I Hurried to the Nearest Breakfast shop that is Open, The NM-BUTTER, Kondo Rina is the One who owns this Shop, She also owns a Mug Store on Takajo Amusement Park, The NM-MUGS. They Make Really good Breakfast here, In Fact, The Store Has its Own Enemy, The SK-EATERY. The Both Owners don't have Good Naming Sense. So, I Entered The 'NM-BUTTER' Because they Have delicious Foods here, and the SK-EATERY is Only open in the Midday to Evening while the NMBUTTER is Opened the Whole Day, 24 hours. As I Entered the Air-conditioned Breakfast Shop. I Sat on one of the Empty Tables. I Was the first Person to Enter the Shop. Then, A Waitress Walked to me and Asked for My Order, I Don't Know who it was, But when I Looked at her name plate, It was One of My Former Sister's Friends from the International School where she Graduated. The Waitress is Yamada Nana-san. My Brother always tells Me about her when I Was still in Middle School. Aniki will always Tell me that 'She Excels in Studies and she was Accelerated. So they became classmates on his Last year of High School.' Yeah. Lets Go Back to Reality.

[NMBUTTER-5:30]
"Ano... Miss, What is Your Order?"She Asked Me. handing the Menu to Me.
"Uhm.. Chicken Soup and Darjeeling."I Answered, I Didn't accept The Menu Either. Because I Already Knew what I want.
"Noted. Just Wait here, and your Order Will be Delivered in a Few minutes."She Left My table walked to the counter to place my order.

A few minutes  passed, and One of The Old Workers There, Yamamoto Sayaka, made her way from the 'Authorized personnel' Room. And she sat beside Me.

"Oh! Haruna, You don't have to pay for what you ordered. You've been a Customer since this Shop has been Built. So Order to your Hearts Content."Sayaka Smiled.
"YAY!"I forgot check the time. Yeah. Whatever. I Opened My Phone, SLOWLY.... AND CHECKED THE TIME. IT WAS 5:59am.. So, My Order Arrived and  I Sipped the tea and carefully tasted the hot soup. It was delicious as always. And curiosity again, Attacked me. I Asked Sayaka.

"Sayaka, Could you show me the kitchen? and the workers?"The words came out from my mouth. It was Curiosity's fault.
"Eh? Sure."Sayaka stood from her chair and escorted me to their Kitchen. I Saw how clean they were working, The Cook, wearing plastic gloves and changing it every time she holds another spice or food. while the one who arranges the food is wearing gloves too. Its really clean. Not even showing an inch of DIRTINESS. "We'll be closing this shop Later after the current customers after they eat."Kondo Rina suddenly appeared. Crossing her arms.
"Why?"I Asked Kondo, I Was REALLY Shocked.
"The Workers of NM-MUGS became sick because of the Expired food from The SK-EATERY. Mita Mao called Me Last Night. An Idiot ordered a Food from that Damn Eatery."And We Go back to where I was sitting earlier, and there, We Chatted and Chatted, As The Time Passed, It was already 7:30 am.

So I have taken my leave and walked back to Our Apartment. When I Arrived, they're already awake, Only Aniki is the One who is not awake even if its already 7:30. Not an Inch of his Existence is Being shown on the whole leaving room. Its Only Sae-chan, Takajo-san and Yukirin playing spin the bottle. So, I Entered the Apartment to wake the Slacker and a few minutes have passed and Yuko Arrived Surprisingly, with the word 'Yaho!'written on her face. There, We Have Embarked on an Adventure to the Takajo Amusement Park. We Needed a Box when we arrived, so I Entered the shop called 'NM-MUGS' the shop I was talking about this Morning. And bought a Mug, a Random Error-ed mug. Kondo gave me the Mug with a Smile. She didn't realized that it has an error. After I Bought the Mug, I Walked outside. I was supposed to keep the Mug, but the picture placed in the mug that I Bought Isn't Right. Because of the disgusted feeling of Seeing My Hatest Korean Actress' picture on an 'I LOVE MILKY' Mug, I Threw the mug Like a Professional Pitcher of Japan's baseball team. I Didn't know that the Mug is bound to fall on a performers head on the stage. So, The Mug Didn't break when accidentally thrown on the Performer's head, The Performer is Milky, Who was Performing 'Zetsumetsu Kurokami Shoujo' on-stage with Sayaka and Other Employees of the 'NM---' Like that. She Got Disgusted, And when a Korean Passerby said that SHE IS DO JI WON. She threw the Mug on The Korean's Face and Voila. It Broke. So we ran to a Safe place to escape the 'NM'S'.

I Started the Draw Lots. With the Use of the Mug box. I Unfortunately drew Yuko's Name. GOSH. Really Unfortunate. When Yuko drew the The place where we would go. ITS THE FUN HOUSE. So, Yeah. I and Yuko went to the Fun House, Its Full of Kids.

[FUN HOUSE - 10:20am]

"O-oi... Yuko why are the clowns here so scary?"Still, I Got Curious. This Amusement park holds Many secrets, the fun house suddenly became a Horror house. It was very scary. BUT YEAH. YUKO CONFESSED. That it IS HER PLAN AFTER ALL TO DIVERT ME TO THE SECOND HORROR HOUSE. My Body was shaking as the two of us were walking to the Dark path of the 'Horror house'. I Was really scared. When we Got out, Yuko Pulled her phone and sent a Message to the Group. I Don't Know whats inside of the Message but, We continued to walk through the Amusement park and Yuko pulled me to a Crepe shop and Treated me. "I'm Sorry?"Yuko handed me the crepe. I Just Nodded to her simply and Smiled at her. She smiled back. Before the clock's hands move to '10:30' She insisted to ride the 'SPACE SHUTTLE' there, I Froze before meeting with other Group Members. When Yuko brought me to the NM-MUGS, I'm still frozen. and even when Kondo-san hit our heads with a newspaper, I'M STILL FROZEN, BECAUSE OF YUKO. It's that Crazy Little Squirrels fault why my Fear of heights came back at me. LIKE A GHOST. Until the Day Ended, With Yuki on the FERRIS WHEEL. And seeing Milky throwing another Mug of Error to Yuki. Because Milky thought that it was Yuki who threw the 'DO JI WON' Mug to her. Yeah, Well We don't know what Yuki is doing there but, She said that it was ANIKI'S FAULT WHY SHE IS THERE. And so, We Go back to the Shop to eat the Pizza that Kondo-san Ordered.

-END-



THEN THE NEXT 4.3 is for YUKI or SAE? PICK ONE.
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Re: Why Do I Get This Unnatural Feeling...? [MARIRIN X AKICHA] [CH.4.2]
« Reply #26 on: November 01, 2012, 05:43:11 AM »
I dunno. xDD

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whoaa yuko confess already xd good job yuko!! XD
i want yuki next~ i wanna know what yuki did while aki confess to sae x)
thankyou for the update :bow: looking 4ward for d'next update ^-^

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so this have happen on that day,
with Haruna POV,
Next I would like to know Yuki,
I wanted to know how she feel when she stuck,

Looking for the next update.

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ANNOUNCEMENT:

I KNOW THAT NO ONE CARES BUT...

HIATUS.

I WILL BE CONTINUING THIS FIC WHEN I FINISHED THE NEXT CHAPTERS, IT WILL BE LONGER.

SORRY.

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Re: Why Do I Get This Unnatural Feeling...? [MARIRIN X AKICHA][HIATUS]
« Reply #30 on: November 11, 2012, 01:32:31 PM »
whaay?? whaaay?? T^T i don't like hiatus T^T :cry: pleasee continue this interesting fic.. plisss *puppy look* :bow:

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Re: Why Do I Get This Unnatural Feeling...? [MARIRIN X AKICHA][CH.4.3]
« Reply #31 on: December 21, 2012, 12:57:52 AM »
O-HA!~

I'm Back from the Depts of ZENONIA!~

SOrry if its a Bit Boring. ( = , = )



Chapter 4.3 [Another's View]: A Diet

Yuki POV

It was still dark when I Woke up, I stood up from the Futon where I was Lying a while ago and checked on Haruna's Room, She wasn't there. I Started to Jog By Myself because that is my Morning Habit. I Was Really fascinated by the Beautiful Scene in the Streets, When I was the only one there, Jogging. I can feel the Strong Air Breeze as I was jogging, Until I Stumbled on a Friend. It was Mayu.

"Aww... My Butt..." Mayu accidentally sat on the ground

"Ah! Oh... Sorry Mayu!" I Apologized to her. I Didn't Mean it.

"No, No. Mom. It's Fine."She Stood up from the ground. I'm Sorry Baby Mayu!! ( TT 0 TT )

"By The Way. Mom, Why are you Up This Early?" Mayu stared at me coldly.

"Eh-Ermmhh..... I'm Jogging! Y-Yes!! I'm Jogging"I Replied to her, I Need to hide the reason why I'm Jogging. I Need to burn Fats.

"Liar. It's True that you're jogging, But to jog with those.... Weights, and Very Thick Clothing, The Secret of you, Burning Fats... Is UNVEILED!"She Pointed at me accusingly. Yes!! I Mean it!! I'm Burning my fats for Sae!!

"Yeah Right. Yes. Yes. I'm Burning Fats. Is Anything Wrong With that?----"In a Blinding flash of light, Some Wild Yuihan Appeared.

"HONMAYAN! YUKI-SAN FROM AK-BURN IS BURNING HER FASTS IN THE MORNING!"Arrghh.. Damn... It's Honmayan. This Makes alot of trouble. Yes, Yes. The Three Eating Shops has These Bad Names. Only One is Named Beautifully. The 'Hakata Ramen Store' Such favoritism. But... WHY NAME IT 'HAKATA' THOUGH WE'RE NOT EVEN LOCATED THERE?!

"Honmayan. Stop. GO HOME AND STUDY." I Look at her Angrily. Then, She's Out with this reply again. Honmayan... When will you be a Normal Child?. Haahh...

"Go Home and Study? If I Do that You'll definitely Laugh at me Right?"Oh My Gah. What's Happening to the Children These days...

"DO THAT NOW! NO MORE EXCUSES!!" I Shouted at Honmayan's Cute Face.

".... Honmayan Be-----"It was stopped by me.

"I'm Going to tell your Parents." ( = u = )

"'kay. I'm Going Home." She walked to the direction from where she is from.

"Ooohhh~! So Fast!!" Mayu was Amazed. Was that really Amazing?? I Just Ignored Mayu and Continued on the Path where I Would run to burn my Fats. Until I Got hungry and Stopped over to Hakata Ramen Store.

"Irrashai! Oh! Yuki-san!---Desu ne~"It was when Sashihara Rino, Opened the Door to the Ramen Shop. By The Way, What is she doing here. Isn't she a Rich Girl Studying at Watanabe All Girls School?

"Oi! Don't 'Desu ne~' Me!. Moreover, What are you Doing Here?!"I Sat on an Empty Chair and Gazed at the Menu.

"I am Working here for my Tuition. Shall I Tell you my story" The Mood became sad, and Here enters the ramen that I ordered. It was Sakura-san who delivered the food to me. I've been talking to this girl ever since this Ramen Shop was built.

"Ohayo Gozaimasu. Kashiwagi-san. Still Burning Fats eh?"Sakura smirked. Where did she get the information that I was burning my Fats?!

"E-Eh... Yeah..." ( _ _) And Sashihara's Story Continues.

"My Mom was Sick! And My Dad is outside the cou----"I Didn't want her story to continue so I Just talked to Sakura. Until the ramen on my Bowl Ran Out and I had to go back to Shinoda Residence. I Made my Way Again, I Ran back to the Apartment and I Bumped into someone again. Never-ending Bump. The Person I Bumped was 'Mita' (I'm Not Even Sure if thats really her name), One of my Neighbors, Honmayan's Twin, I Think..

"Mita-san! Gomen!!" I Apologized to the Person Named 'Mita' or So, I Think.

"Iie, Sanda desu."I Was defeated by her Stare.

"D-Do demo ii!!" Ignoring her Name, I ran faster than I Could, Until I Stopped to the Apartment where Haruna and his Bro lives.

Back to the 'Crazy' House

"I'm Back."I Was really tired when I got back. I Saw Sae and Takajo Playing Spin the Bottle, As if they Already Know Each Other for a long time. Yeah. That's True, They Really Know each other. Even Though When I Entered, I Showed an 'Ohayo~'Face, I Was still ignored. Why!!?? Until a Minute came and I was Noticed by Sae.

"Oh! Yuki! Ohayo!~ Wanna Join us?" An Invitation? Lol. Yuki, That's not in a Paper. It is Called 'They're Inviting you to Play with them.' When did I Transformed to being an Idiot? Harhhhahaha!!

"I'll Change My Clothes First." I Dashed to the Bathroom as fast as the Lightning. When I am Taking a Shower, A Thing came into my Mind.... Does Aki Like Sae?? Does She Like My Sae?? If She Does.... Then.... I Should Stop them now... Stopping them without clothes?! Yuki! Get a Hold of your Self! You're a Decent Girl! Super CLEEAAANN~~ Girl! Fudge Yuki, Take a Bath faster. to stop them in the Right Time. But... What the Effin' Day.... The Door broke.... and I Can't get out.... FUUUUUU!!!

As I Try to open the door, The More the Door Locks.... How Can I Get out??? The Condition Left is... That I Transform to Black and Destroy the Door. Okay... Black... Here we Go... BAKLABAKLAFLYFLYINTHESKY!!

After 5 Minutes.....

"Atsuki Chishio no yawa hada yo... Ashita wa... Mou Nai...." I Destroyed the Door, After a Few Minutes, I'm back to my Normal Self. The sound of the breaking door became a disturbance to the whole apartment. It suddenly became noisy. And When Sae Opened the Door She Shouted...

"Guys! Nothing Happened!! shoo! shoo!"She Angrily Closed the Door. Until After an Hour, Haruna Came back and Saw us Playing Spin The Bottle. I Still Can't believe that Aki is that Rich. And Her Family Owns the Newly Built and Popular Amusement Park near here. Just sooo.... Unbelievable. We Later Started The Adventure to The Takajo Amusement Park. They Have decided to Have a Drawlots but we don't have a Box to put the Paper on. So Haruna Entered the Mug Shop And she later Got out with a Box of errored mug. She Later Threw it like a Professional Pitcher and It Landed on Miyuki's Head, Which is Performing on the Stage with Nana and the Others. Miyuki was really angered by the Sudden Throw of the Mug, also saw whats written on the mug... 'I Love Milky' and Do Ji Won's Picture. If I Were Miyuki, I'd Also be Disgusted. Then, A Random Person came ant Told Miyuki that she is 'Do Ji Won' Miyuki Threw the Mug to the Random Person and Walked Out of the Stage because of Guiltiness, While Our Group Ran Until We Escaped the NM-Mugs.

On The Cafe Near the Store, We Begin the Drawlots. Guess What?! I Picked Sae. I'm So HAPPYY!~ But on the Place that we would go, I Was ShitBricked by the Roller Coaster. And Unwanted Events Happened.

[10:20|Roller Coaster|SAEYUKI PAIR]

"Sae!! I Don't Want to Ride it!!"I Hugged Sae Very Tight.

"Don't Worry Yuki, It'll be Fine."She gave me a Smile.

"Oh-Okay..."I Said as we sat on the roller coaster's chair. after 2 minutes, I Froze.

"Oooi! Yuki! You Alright??!!"It was when I Came back to Reality. I Was in the Cafe With Sae.

"Uh.. Yes... I'm Alright.." YATTA! I WAS SAFE!! ( O u O )

"Let's Eat. Here. Hot Dog." Sae handed me the Hot Dog.

"T-Thanks..."I Was Blushing... I Can't even Admit to her that I Already Love her...

"Yuki? Are you Melting me to death?"Her Eyes was in the Power of Curiosity. We Later Received a Group Message from Yuuko that we'll meet in the NM-Mugs.

-Yuki Phone-
____________________________
Subject: [We Will Meet at..]
From: [Oshiruko]
Time Received: [10:28am]
****************************

We will Meet infront of the
NM-MUGS. Be There at 10:30!

-Sincerely,
     Yuuko~

-Message Ends-
____________________________

"Lets Go Back."I Said to Sae. She Replied a Quick Nod.

When We Arrived, Haruna and Yuuko was Getting Lectured by.... the Girl Called Kondo.

"Ahahaha! Yuki-chan! Let's go to the Ferris wheel~"Maki suddenlt Pulled me with him to the Ferriswheel. While We Were walking, I Decided to ask him why are we going to the Ferris Wheel.

"Nee... Maki-san.... Why are we Going to the Ferris Wheel?" I Stared at Him.

"I Have Something to tell you~" He showed his Troll Face.

"Oh---Kay..." ( O 3 O )

And When We Arrived at the Ferris Wheel, Maki quickly Pushed Me inside the Ferris Wheel... as the Doors Closed, He Quickly Left Me with a Smile. Saying...

"Ja~! Bye-Bye~" He Just Look Like and Like Mariko-san. But... Haruna Said that She's Working Overseas.

"Oi! Maki! Get Me Down Here!!" I Shouted to Him. He's Just Smiling.

"Hahahaha!" Those Disgusting Smile....

"When I GOT DOWN HERE! I'LL GET YOUR HEAD RIPPED!"

"Bye~" He Really Left Me.

I lasted there for 30 Minutes. Later, When I Got to the Top, I Heard that the Machine Got Errored. So The Ferris Wheel is Stopped. The group suddenly appeared with the NM's, And..... Sae said that she'll save me!! *blush* Kyaa!~ Eherm.... Someone from the NM's Threw me a Mug written 'I Love Do Ji Won' with Milky's Picture. Whaddaheck is this.? When I Already Got down, I Ignored Maki for the Whole Day.

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Re: Why Do I Get This Unnatural Feeling...? [MARIRIN X AKICHA][Ch.4.3]
« Reply #32 on: December 21, 2012, 02:56:52 PM »
nyahaha XD it's not boring at all XDb keep it up! i like the moment when yuki jogged XD 'for burning fat' she says~~ nyahaha XD
thanks :bow:

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