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Won't you hold me?(Majisuka Gakuen 3)(Peace)(3-shot?)
« on: November 15, 2012, 08:43:00 PM »
Hey all! This has just been stirring around in my head for a while. I just had to get it down. The cleaner concept seems to be igniting certain ideas in my head. So you might see another fic if all goes well. With that said, I'd like to know what you all think.  :)

Part 1

She remembered the times when her mother used to smile.

A smile of pure joy, not evil, nor scheming like it is now.

But that was a long time ago.

Even then, it was never directed at her.

Never.

Instead, her elder brother was the object of all her mother's affections.

Not that Peace could blame her of course.

He was smart and polite.

He was kind and gentle.

He was obedient and cheerful.

But most of all......

He was everything she wasn't.

Isn't.

Even after all this time, she still could not measure to his level.

Could not make her mother proud.

Could not make her mother love her.

Yuichi would always get praised for his achievements and kind deeds.

While little incompetent Yuria was cast aside.

Oh, don't get the wrong idea.

Her every need was catered for.

She was given an education, fed, clothed and stayed with her family.

But what she really wanted, needed, was denied from her.

Her mother's love.

Even so, no matter how much she may have wanted to, she could never hate her brother.

He was always kind to her, such as remembering her birthdays and getting her gifts.

He seemed to understand her situation, and comforted her about it.

"Don't worry," he said

"Okaa-san loves you very much, she just doesn't show it."

"But she always treats you better. She SHOWERS you with her love. Admit it, she loves you more than me." Yuria retorted.

For that, her brother had no answer.

Yuria looked down in silence, pain clouding her eyes.

"Here," Yuichi held something out to her.

She accepted the candy, and looked questioningly at him.

"Sweet things always help people feel better." He answered with a smile.

She popped it into her mouth when he looked encouragingly at her.

"How is it? Oishii?" He asked.

"Uhn! Oishii desu." She felt herself smile a little.

Perhaps it was then that it started.

She didn't mean to really.

It was a series of events which eventually led up to that moment.

Ever since she was young, she had no friends and was always bullied.

Being the peaceful person that she is, she ignored her bullies and got used to being alone.

But puberty was taking it's toll on her, and things were already hard enough without her mother's care to guide her.

Yuichi, being the understanding brother that he is, tried to ease her through it.

He knew that the depression and stress from peer pressure were the norm in this period of self discovery.

She was 13, maybe 14 when it happened.

She was on her way home from school, using the route she usually takes.

As she was walking through an empty park, two girls appeared and dragged her into the bushes.

It all happened so fast, she didn't have time to react properly.

When she regained her bearings, she found herself in a secluded area, surrounded by yankees.

They jeered at her and crowded in.

She was used to this, it was a normal occurence.

They jostled and pushed her around in the circle.

One of them wrestled her bag from her and searched through her stuff.

"Ehhhh? There's only books in here. Such a boring person."

The others laughed at her statement.

"Where's the money?!" Someone shouted.

Yuria hesitated, her allowance was set monthly.

If she lost it all now, she wouldn't be able to buy lunch for two more weeks.

Her mother would not give her more if she asked, but if she didn't give the money, the yankees would hurt her.

Deciding that she was taking too long, the leader, a short haired high-schooler with red highlights, signaled to one of the girls.

Poor Yuria was surprised as someone restrained her from behind, this had never happened before.

Fear flashed through her eyes as the leader approached.

After a quick search through her pockets, the leader finally found her wallet.

The leader held her chin with her free hand and looked into her eyes.

Yuria trembled when faced with the fierce yankee.

"Next time don't be so slow when giving us your money." The leader spoke dangerously.

She added a slap for good measure.

She smirked when she saw the fear on Yuria's face.

As she walked away to examine the wallet's contents, Yuria was thrown to the ground where she was kicked repeatedly.

She could do nothing but curl up into a ball, her arms trying to protect her head.

Tears flowed from her eyes as she tried to endure the pain.

"Enough!" The leader's order rang out.

The yankees obediently stepped back, making way for their leader.

She threw the empty wallet at Yuria, and said.

"Thanks for the money, we'll be back for more later."

One of the girls spoke up.

"That'll take a while, I heard she has problems with her mother."

Other's joined in, laughing at Yuria.

"That's right! Apparently her brother's really talented while she's just a good-for-nothing."

"Haha! No wonder your mother doesn't really like you. Compared to him, you're nothing!"

"Ne...does she even care?"

"I'm not surprised, who would love someone like you?"

As they made to leave, something snapped in Yuria.

She clenched her fists and stared angrily at their retreating backs.

Red hot fury, unlike anything she'd ever felt before burned within her.

She leaped towards one of them, who was caught completely unprepared.

For the first time ever, Yuria punched someone.

And it felt good.

The next thing she knew, she was fighting them.

Peaceful, lonely Yuria was fighting her bullies.

She then realised that she had a knack for this.

Her body ducked and weaved through their attacks naturally.

Evertime she was hit, she would return the favour.

Yuria was surprised that she'd last this long.

But of course the moment she thought that, someone's punch knocked her to the ground.

The yankees immediately kicked at her, not giving her the opportunity to rise.

When they were done, she couldn't move an inch.

She finally managed to roll onto her back, and groaned as her body protested.

She lay there until her brother phoned her.

He was worried since she wasn't home yet, asking her where she was.

She hung up once she reiterated what happened to him, ommitting the fact that she got into a fight.

She didn't want him to worry after all.

But as she stared at the night sky, Yuria smiled.

She had finally found something she was good at.
« Last Edit: November 19, 2012, 01:32:07 PM by kuronekosan »

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Re: Won't you hold me?(Majisuka Gakuen 3)(Peace)(2-shot?)
« Reply #1 on: November 15, 2012, 09:13:34 PM »
*after reading stares at awe*

this was very good and very well written..

poor Yuria... Ah, but she found her strength nee?

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Re: Won't you hold me?(Majisuka Gakuen 3)(Peace)(2-shot?)
« Reply #2 on: November 16, 2012, 02:23:05 AM »
Poor Peace T_T but I like it

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« Reply #3 on: November 16, 2012, 11:30:26 AM »
Yuria-chan! T ^ T I wanna kill those bastards... DX

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Re: Won't you hold me?(Majisuka Gakuen 3)(Peace)(2-shot?)
« Reply #4 on: November 16, 2012, 09:59:12 PM »
Ohhh, poor yuria..it's like that I want to punch her mom for abandoning yuria..

Can't wait for next part..hopefully yuria will find someone that care to her..


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Re: Won't you hold me?(Majisuka Gakuen 3)(Peace)(2-shot?)
« Reply #5 on: November 17, 2012, 05:48:10 AM »
 ; ^ ; You probably could not see it, but I'm actually crying a few tears. Excuse me for a bit.

*currently on mobile with a few bandaged fingers* *this is taking very long. I don't like this.*

-refreshing sigh- I loved it. No really, I did. It's just the family part and.. Esksndbfnmoxidhen... When I was little, I used to see as myself the same thing as Yuria is seen because my parents couldn't brag about me like they did with my brother. Additionally, my brother hated me for nothing. And I was a depressed loner at school. Go figure. *shrug*

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Re: Won't you hold me?(Majisuka Gakuen 3)(Peace)(2-shot?)
« Reply #6 on: November 17, 2012, 08:48:25 PM »
Awesome start!

When They showed Peace's real reason for what she did what she did, I couldn't hate her for it >< now I have other reason to not to.

Please, post second part soon *.*


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Re: Won't you hold me?(Majisuka Gakuen 3)(Peace)(2-shot?)
« Reply #7 on: November 17, 2012, 09:00:37 PM »
Poor Yuria...  :cry:
We'll get a second part, right? I'm looking forward to it! I love the way you write! :bow:

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Re: Won't you hold me?(Majisuka Gakuen 3)(Peace)(3-shot?)
« Reply #8 on: November 19, 2012, 01:25:21 PM »
Tadaa!! As promised, here's the 2nd part! :mon fyeah: As you might have guessed from the title, it looks like this is gonna have 3 chapters instead. Thanks to everyone who took the time to read this. I'm glad you're liking it so far. Your support is greatly appreciated!  :gyaaah:
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@fffff : Here's the 2nd part! I hope it lives up to your expectations. :P If not, just tell me so that I can improve? And I'm flattered that you like my writing style it makes me happy to know that people enjoy my work. :D

And without further ado....

Part 2

Shouts filled the air.

Yuria spotted someone approaching quickly on her right.

She spun around to smoothly deliver a left hook.

A fist to her face soon followed, but she ducked in time and gave a jab to the stomach in return.

The gang of yankees had returned as promised.

But this time, Yuria was prepared.

Since that day, she had never backed down from a fight.

By some coincidence or luck, all of her previous brawls were either one-on-ones or against a group of no more than 3 to 6 people.

It provided the perfect opportunity for her to discover her potential and hone her skills.

She had some trouble at first, as to be expected.

But Yuria actually has a sharp mind and picked things up quickly.

Such as timing her movements and understanding the enemy's own.

She had a good instinct and soon learned to best ways to deliver a punch or kick.

A few more skirmishes here and there later taught her to recognise how someone was going to attack her beforehand.

From there, it was all about becoming stronger physically and having a fast reaction rate.

All her training led to this day.

This particular gang of yankees had heard about her sudden battle prowess.

With them being the yankees that once beat her up, they were filled with confidence and decided to put her in her place.

Which was actually just what she was waiting for.

She had welcomed the challenge with a smirk, eager to test herself.

This would be the first time since acquiring her new skills that she would be up against such a large number of people.

If likened to a game, this would be the boss battle.

To her it was a test to measure herself.

To prove to everyone that she wasn't weak.

That she was worth something.

That she was here, and proud of it.

It took longer than usual, what with the large amount of people to beat.

All at once, might I add.

Yuria delivered the final punch, and the leader collapsed, out cold before she even hit the ground.

She was exhausted, and worse for wear, but in the end, she was the last one standing.

Yuria straightened and looked at the evening sky, it seemed like the sun would set soon.

A breeze swept by and she closed her eyes to enjoy it.

Inhaling deeply, she felt a sense of fulfillment.

A smile graced her features.

She had finally beaten her tormentors.

She had fought back and won.

She was strong.

She was free.

No longer will she have to put up with bullies.

No longer will they make fun of incompetent little Yuria.

She opened her eyes as a voice called her name.

It was Yuichi.

He ran up to her, and paused at the scene.

Her brother seemed shocked at what he found.

But he disregarded it for now to check on his sister.

Her placed his hands on her arms, looking at her injuries.

"You're hurt!" He exclaimed.

"It's okay." She answered.

"Nii-chan, I won. See?" Yuria gestured to the unconscious girls lying scattered around them.

Instead of praising her, Yuichi shook her by the shoulders.

"What were you thinking?! You could have gotten yourself killed!"

Yuria brushed his hands off and pouted.

"They would have done so if I didn't fight back anyway. At least this way, I'm safe and they're the ones who should be scared."

Her brother frowned.

"Yuria, stop this. It's not like you. Getting into fights? Beating up yankees? You have no idea how shocked I was when I heard what you've been doing."

This time it was Yuria's turn to frown.

"How did you find out?"

"Don't you know? Rumours about you streetfighting is flying all around the neighbourhood lately."

Yuria was taken aback by that news. Apparently, her reputation has already grown faster than she expected.

And it will only continue once people find out about today's events.

Yuichi continued speaking.

"But that's besides the point. Enough of this, I don't want you to fight anymore."

Anger boiled within Yuria.

She shoved her brother backwards, shocking him.

What happened to his gentle little sister?

"Urusai!! You're just jealous because I'm finally better than you at something."

"Yuria-chan, that's not..."

"You don't understand how it feels!" She interrupted.

"Always being ignored, and being pushed around by bullies that do notice you..."

"Yuria..."

"I'm finally good at something! I even beat them! I'm finally free. Is that so bad?"

She broke down into sobs, all her pent up feelings breaking through.

Yuichi embraced her, holding her tight and stroking her hair.

She didn't fight back, and accepted his hug.

"Yuria, gomen ne." He whispered.

"I know it's been tough for you, but I just don't want anything bad to happen because you've been picking fights."

Yuria broke free from his hold and wiped away her tears.

"Nii-chan, you don't understand. I never started any of them. I've only been defending myself."

"What?" Her brother was confused.

"I mean...I HAVE been fighting. But that was only to defend myself. I don't do it unless they attack first."

"Hontou ni?" He looked searchingly at her.

"Uhn!" Yuria nodded in affirmation.

He sighed, somewhat relieved.

"Well, I guess that's okay then. Even if I'm still worried about you."

Yuria beamed at him and enveloped him in another tight hug.

"Come on, let's get you cleaned up."

He steered in the direction of their home, just glad that she was still in one piece.

A thought struck him whilst walking.

He looked at her and voiced it out loud.

"Ne, since you've already built a reputation for yourself, does that mean you have a street name?"

Yuria looked quizzically back at him.

"A street name?"

"You know, like the ones that yankees or street fighters have. An alias."

"Oh...No, I don't have one.

Yuichi looked at the orange sky, as if the answer was somehow hidden there.

"Hmmmm...then from now on, I'll call you Peace."

"Peace?" Yuria was perplexed by the odd choice of name.

"Mhm!" He nodded. Immensely pleased with his choice.

Her brother looked meaningfully at her.

"Because from now on, if you have to fight, I want you to do it only for peace. Okay?"

Yuria blinked in response. She was surprised by his deep answer.

Warmth filled her as she realised just how much he cared for her.

This wonderful, kind brother of hers.

"Wakarimashita, Nii-chan."

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Re: Won't you hold me?(Majisuka Gakuen 3)(Peace)(3-shot?)
« Reply #9 on: November 19, 2012, 01:33:32 PM »
Just Joining

Keep up the good work and looking forward to the next chapter

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« Reply #10 on: November 19, 2012, 04:46:57 PM »
When Yuria said "Jealous" I was like "Ahhhh~ nuuu~" Yes. Only for peace, not to murder someone Yuria. ; - ; LOL.

Ahhh but what one would do for a mother's love. God, there needs to be another season for MG... or MP. I really want to see Peace's reaction to knowing that her mom suicided. (Haha! You never know what you've really got until you've lost it, lady!) Rejecting your daughter for 16 or so years (well no one knows MG3 casts' exact age in the drama) has come to an end. Negatively on your note~
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Re: Won't you hold me?(Majisuka Gakuen 3)(Peace)(3-shot?)
« Reply #11 on: November 20, 2012, 10:22:51 AM »
Yuicbi was a good brother T_T

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« Reply #12 on: November 26, 2012, 08:41:52 PM »
He was such a nice brother ;.; why nice people always have to die? :cry:

You know, it is still bit sad to read and know he is going to die soon ><

Anxiously waiting next part o/

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« Reply #13 on: December 16, 2012, 09:17:51 AM »
very interesting story about peace before MG3  :heart: :yep: :love:

Great work.... looking forward to the next chapter.  :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs

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Heyyy everyone!!!! Guess who's back!!!!! Finally, here's chapter 3~!!!

Part 3

"Yuria!"

Upon hearing her name, she stopped by the landing of the staircase. Her mother approached from the living room with a disproving look on her face.

"Where have you been? Look at you! Have you been fighting again?!"

Yuria kept her eyes trained on the floor, she always hated this part of the day.

"It's late, and you're a mess. What on earth are you thinking? Getting into fights? Haven't you shamed us enough?!"

She bit her lip, and clenched her fists, trying to bear through her mother's lecture. Really, if she was so tired of it, then why did it still hurt so much?

'Just a little longer, it's almost over.' She thought to herself.

'You can deal with it, just don't break down.'

"Look at me when I'm talking to you! Honestly, try learning some manners from your brother. I don't understand why he can be such a good child while you're the complete opposite."

Yuria, to her own disdain, flinched at those words. Knowing that she struck a nerve, her mother continued.

"Do you know what happens to girls like you? They get thrown into prison! And then what will you do?

Wait.

Yuria looked up, surprised. Hope shone in her eyes. Was her mother actually worried about her?

"And what about me? I deal with yankee girls everyday, what will my employers think if my own daughter gets thrown into prison?!

Oh.....

Of course, she should have known. Yuria lowered her gaze and held back a sigh.

"You will stop with this nonsense immediately. If you're really in need of a hobby, go do something useful for once. But I will not have my daughter running around soiling the family name. This is your final warning. Am I clear?!"

Managing a small nod, it was all Yuria could do to keep herself together. Once her mother's back was turned she took this chance to run to her room. Making sure the door was locked, she took a moment to scoff at herself for not slamming it, since she knew her mother disliked the action.

Throwing herself onto the bed, the tears that were held back burst past her control as she buried her face into her pillow.

Why can't she amount to something?

Why was nothing that she did ever good enough?

Why did she even care what her mother thought?

As these thoughts ran amok in her mind, Yuria tried to hold back her screams of frustration.

She was angry at her mother for not loving her, for not understanding.

And she was angry at herself for caring. She should have been used to it by now, she should have accepted that she'd never amount to anything in her mother's eyes.

So why? WHY?!

And Yuichi, why did he have to be so perfect? Of all people, why did HE have to be her brother?

No.

Yuria berated herself, how could she think that? He was nothing but kind to her. It wasn't his fault that things turned out this way. If anything, she's grateful that he
was there for her. The one anchor that kept her from drifting into a sea of depression and oblivion. It was wrong to be angry at him.

*Knock knock.*

"Peace? It's me, can I come in?"

Not wanting to deal with anyone at the moment, she kept silent, and tried to ignore his pleas.

"I heard what happened downstairs. Could you please let me in?"

Heaving a sigh, Yuria wiped her tears away and pulled herself together before opening the door.

Once Yuichi entered, he ushered her to sit on the bed after locking the door behind him. Settling down next to her, he noticed how downcast she was, refusing to look
up at him. Without any hesitation, he drew her into his arms, surprising her with the sudden act.

Firmly, he told her,

"I'm always here if you need me."

Her guilt ate away at her. Once again, this selfless brother of hers was being so kind. As if her guilt were some sort of key, it unlocked the dam of emotions she had been trying to keep under control. Tears sprang forth again, she cried into his shoulder.

Yuichi patiently kept her company, stroking her hair while whispering again and again that it was going to be alright. Once she had quieted down, he pulled back to find that Yuria had cried herself to sleep. Giving a sad smile, he tucked her into bed and sat there for a while. He liked how peaceful she looked as she slept. A moment when she could forget all about her pain and troubles. Brushing her hair from her eyes, he wished her sweet dreams before planting a kiss on her temple.

Right before he turned out the lights, he looked back at his little sister, and earnestly prayed for her to live a happy life, with or without him.

Two days later, Yuria was keeping true to her word. Even though she never instigated any fights, she also made sure to give no oppurtunity for others to start one with her. So right now, she was watching the clouds drift by, wondering just why she was still trying to please her mother. This was her favourite spot, a little hill hidden from the world, yet not too far from home.

Eventually, after much brooding, she concluded that no matter how much she hated the way she was treated, she still loved her mother. Why? Yuria guessed that because she never really felt her love, it only fueled her yearning for it. After all, no matter what, she was still her mother. She had nurtured and raised her since birth. Huffing at her sense of loyalty and fidelity, she lamented over the fact that her mother didn't even realise it.

'Sweet things always make people feel better.'

Ah, that's right. For some reason, her brother's words sprang into her mind. Shrugging and thinking to herself why not, she decided to pay a visit to a favourite dessert store of hers. She could definitely use some chocolate right now.

Her trip to the store was uneventful, unfortunately, the same could not be said as she was returning home.

Yuria was taking her usual route, happily munching on the last of her chocolate bar, when a couple of girls emerged from the corner and blocked her way.

"Look at you, all smiles with not a care in the world."

'That's not true.' Yuria thought.

But she recognised who was speaking, it was a girl who she defeated last week. Apparently, she was the teppen of her school, though Yuria couldn't exactly remember
her name

The girl continued.

"I hate it when little nobody's get all cocky thinking they own the place."

"I never thought that at all, and you were the one who started attacking me." Yuria retorted.

"Urusai!" A vein could be seen popping from her temple.

"We're gonna make you disappear!"

"Gomen, I'd rather not."

Yuria instantly turned around to flee, but found that her escape route was blocked by three more girls.

'Darn it, I was so close.' She felt irritated that these prideful girls had to hinder her promise to Yuichi.

A girl to Yuria's right sprang forward with her fist raised. She blocked the punch and retaliated with a menacing left hook.

Later, Yuria cautiously opened the front door and tip-toed up the stairs. The last thing she wanted was to be caught by her mother yet again. Of course, with her luck,

she was almost home-free when a voice rang out.

"Peace!"

'Yabai,' she thought.

She sheepishly descended the steps, sporting a nervous smile from being caught.

"Tadaima, onii-chan."

Yuichi frowned instead.

"You're hurt,"

"A-ah....it's not as bad as it looks..."

"Even so. Come on, let's get you cleaned up."

He gently tended to her cut lip and other injuries, telling her that their mother would be back late that night, and kept prodding her on what happened earlier.

Once she had explained, the only thing Yuichi did was tell her that dinner was waiting for them.

And that's how they ended up having dinner together, an unnatural silence between the two. Yuichi's face was pensive but did not give Yuria any hints on what was plaguing her brother so much. She knew that it would have something to do with her. After all, his silence only began after she had spun her tale.

She was curious and anxious, but she held herself back, knowing that Yuichi would tell her when he was ready. And she was right. He only spoke up later, once the dishes were cleaned, and gently led her to sit on the sofa.

"Peace," he started, not unkindly, his eyes serious and unyielding.

"We both know that this current situation is not working out. Instead of people avoiding you, they're now drawn to the prospects of defeating a well known streetfighter."

"But onii-chan!" Yuria interrupted,

"It's not like I get in trouble on purpose!"

"I know," Yuichi said, he placed both arms on her shoulders, calming her down.

"You do it to protect yourself, because you refused to be bullied anymore. It's admirable, and praiseworthy, but at a price. People are attracted to power Peace, and you're caught in the middle of it."

"But I'm not a yankee!" Yuria protested, grasping one of Yuichi's arms at her shoulder.

"That's exactly it!" He deadpanned.

"To them, you're no rebellious school delinquent, or some fearsome street gangster, you're a meek, quiet, lonely goody two-shoes! Don't you see? You're the perfect target."

Yuria kept quiet, her gaze downcast, she knew that her brother's words rang true.

"Those that don't know you challenge you, and those you've beaten, come back for more after licking their wounds. They're relentless! That's why you keep getting into fights despite trying to avoid them. And as long as this continues, you'll always be at odds with mother."

"Then tell me, what should I do?!" Yuria pleaded, tears prickling at her eyes. She was sick of this, there was no pleasing anyone. If she did not fight back, she'd be bullied aggresively like before. But if she retaliated, she suffered the wrath of her mother. It was one or the other. Yuria was angry, just so frustrated that she had run into another brick wall.

Why was it so hard just for her to be happy? Wasn't it bad enough to have no friends? Like her brother had said, she was lonely. Oh so lonely.

"Listen, I did some research, and may have found a solution. Before you decide, I want you to think it over carefully ok?" Yuichi gingerly handed her a pamphlet, his eyes watching her closely as she examined it.

Yuria was shocked, she didn't know how to react.

It was a pamphlet for an all girl's boarding school. It's pages displayed information and images of smiling high school girls, with modern school facilities and picturesque surroundings. In another prefecture.

"It's in another prefecture, I know. But that's the point, it's far enough for you not to be recognised and has a low crime rate, so there's less risk of you getting in trouble with yankees. You could have a fresh start, make friends, and live without mother breathing down your neck."

Yuria didn't answer, she could barely breathe. Yuichi's words struck deep. She could live the life she always wanted. Finally be happy. It seemed too good to be true.

And then she remembered, it was.

"But onii-chan, that far? What about you? I can't do it without you....." And it was true. Her brother was the only support she had ever known, she depended on him emotionally and mentally, she can't leave someone that important behind. To leave to an unknown school, in an unknown town, located in a faraway prefecture, all without her one comfort and anchor to this world? Unthinkable.

Knowing what she was thinking, Yuichi enveloped her into a hug. A long, warm, comforting hug, that allowed Yuria to wrap her arms around such an important figure in her life, and thank whichever powers that may be for granting her at least this one piece of happiness.

They both savoured the moment, knowing that their time left together was limited. The world keeps spinning, and it just so happened that it was spinning Yuria in a different direction than her beloved brother.

When they finally separated, Yuichi grasped his sister by the shoulders and looked her seriously in the eye.

"You are stronger than you think you are, Peace. Both physically and mentally. You fought back against the bullies that have tormented you for so long. Not many have the strength to do so. You endured for so long....." Yuichi took a deep breath, saddened by the thought that he could not do much more for Yuria. That he could not protect her from harm, forcing her to fend for herself.

"Onii-chan...." Yuria stared up at her brother, not knowing where this was going, and at a loss for words.

"But remember that being strong comes with a price. Even if you move, there might still be chances for you to somehow get into fights. I know you've been struggling with the promise to not fight, and I hate seeing you hurt. But if it is better than the alternative....well, at least mother won't be there to find out. My only wish is that you wield that strength responsibly, for peace, ne?" Yuichi gave a small encouraging smile.

Yuria blinked uncomprehendingly for a while. A wide smile slowly grew on her face, and she tackled Yuichi into another tight hug.

"Hai!"

Things were looking up. Maybe, just maybe, she will finally be happy.


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Re: Won't you hold me?(Majisuka Gakuen 3)(Peace)(3-shot?)
« Reply #15 on: April 11, 2013, 04:25:36 AM »
It will end up being a fic when you're done :lol:

Yuria and her brother have a really strong bond despite Yuria's attempts to avoid all fights.  Maybe a boarding school will help or only induce the spirit within her just for protection
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Re: Won't you hold me?(Majisuka Gakuen 3)(Peace)(3-shot?)
« Reply #16 on: April 11, 2013, 04:57:49 AM »
Thank you for the update

Can't wait to see what's going to happen next to Peace

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Re: Won't you hold me?(Majisuka Gakuen 3)(Peace)(3-shot?)
« Reply #17 on: April 12, 2013, 04:48:09 AM »
This 3-shot is awesome! \o/
Finally! A fict worthy of Yuuko-san's eyes! XD
LOL. I want more of this. But it has ended. OTL

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Thanks for reading~! I'm glad you like it. But it's not over yet! It should end in the next chapter......

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