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Offline veforveranda

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[jkt48]believe in me (venal) part 1 of 3
« Reply #60 on: January 07, 2014, 08:03:42 PM »
this is VeNal fanfic.. request by FairyNyan  :love:
please enjoy  :)



#no one pov#
It  have been more than  a  year since we meet and become JKT48 member and for many times too we drawing ahead many moment. Moment when we get conflict, moment when we down, moment when we lost our members one by one until moment of happinest. I still remember when management announced team J members, in that time we can’t hide our fidgetiness if there are any member can’t be a part of team but in the same time  we really deserve it. How happiness we are when all of first generation get into a same team and Kinal become our captain, I still remember we holding hand, hug each other, crying for happiness and be grateful. Almost more than a year too you and me become best friend, I still remember how we support each other, how hard we work to grab our dream, and always do our best so that we can still side by side in this idol world. We always spend time together when we have a break time from our activity, like this time I am waiting here patiently because we would grab some food after practicing. But something get wrong because you are not coming yet, it’s unusual because you are an on time person. I still waiting you in changing room when  the other already go home, but never mind I am enjoying a moment like this. After 15 minute I hear foot step approaching when the door open a beautiful young lady appear.
“VE....!!! hosh,,hosh.. hosh...so..sorry.. I.. I am late hosh..hosh..” said that girl with out of breath.
“You late Capt!! How you can be  a good Captain if you can’t fulfill your promise.” She said with serious tone and with her pocker face.
“are you mad with me?? Ah.. I am so sorry Ve... Because suddenly Kak Angga ask me to deal with some stuff.”
(Kak Angga= team J manager)
“at least you can send me a message, you know how lonely I am waiting for you here.”
She still not change the tone yet her face, although in fact she never get mad to Kinal.but It make Kinal worry and face palmed her self.
“I really..really sorry about this, for repay it I will treat you meal but please don’t get mad..Ok!! ya.. ya.. ya.. Ve~chan.” While she holding Ve hand and set her puppy eye.
“Oh no.. don’t set that face again”said Ve in her mind “hemh.. Ok!! I wouldn’t mad at you”
“really.. you are not mad anymore, hah.. thank God.. can you smile for me now?? It so scary when you set your emotionless face like that.”
“ah..don’t worry  about what happen a while ago, come on.. lets grab some food.” In this time she give her warm smile to Kinal and drag her out.
“see.. you look more pretty when you smile.” She said it as reply for Ve warm smile, in other side Ve blushing when her best friend said it.
It’s a late nite so not a lot of people walking around in Fx Sudirman, so they can walk calmly without pull attention from fans. As usual Kinal always tell story about anyting and sometimes make Ve lough, she is so friendly and easy get along with the other when Veranda is opposite type of Kinal, she realy calm, not much talk and introvert person. When Kinal busy with her story, there is something that bothering Ve though she holding Kinal hand tightly
ah.. how happy I am, have a good friend like you. You really attend to me never let me sad or feel lonely. How long we can spend time together like this Kinal.. I am afraid some day I lost you as my friend. We getting busy time by time, especially you.. how big your responsibility as a Captain and as 3’rd grade high school student and will do National examination.” Said Ve in her mind, realize that her friend not pay attention for her story Kinal stop her walk and it make Ve stop her walk too.
“eh.. what’s wrong Nay???” ask Ve because the sudden stopping. She didn’t reply Ve question but just examine Ve face and it make Veranda bloomer.
“if you have a problem or something bother you, you can share it to me. Because you are my best friend.” Hear Kinal bold statement make her shock, if she reply  she is fine it mean she lie to her and wouldn’t make Kinal stop her worry. So she decide tell the truth.
“um.. Nay.. how if some day we can’t talk each other, or we can’t see each other again and can’t spend time together like this, are you still be my friend.”
“what do you mean Ve.. you talk like the world will end tomorrow.”
“I just afraid if some day I lost you and you are not become my friend again.”
“Hey.. Hey.. Hey.. don’t tell like that, I wouldn’t leave you or ignoring you.”
“promise me if no mather what happen latter, when we mad  or how worst that condition can  be latter, we still can be best friend.”
This time Kinal hold Ve face and observe intenly in her eyes.
“I am promise even we get  into worst time, I will always in your side and be your best friend, you can hold my promise”
See her honest feeling from Kinal make Ve insensibly drip her tear and hug her best friend.
“thank.. to become my friend Nay.”
“Me too, Ve...”

Day by day change so fast and their relation is still in good condition but can it be everlasting like their promise

In practice room

“huah.. finaly we can rest for a while. I am so exhausting” Said Kinal happily and sit beside Ve.
“I am not suppose if today we would get physical training, huft...” like usual Ve always puff her cheek if she feel boring or little bit upset.
She take a mineral botle from her bag after drink it she lend it to Kinal.
“Thank!!! hahahaha but it’s good for our stamina and performance. ”
“it’s good but it’s like drain my life  <(@____@)>”
“maybe because you getting old like unty.. unty... wakakakakak.” While she drink the water.
“aaaa...ah... Nay!!” she unrealize punch Kinal soulder quite hard
“ya.. don’t punch me to hard, how if I choke.”
“ah.. sorry.. sorry.. but you are the one who teasing first”
Not for so long some one appear and lean her hed in Ve thigh.
“Kak Ve... I am tired.. I want to sleep here fo a while please”
“oi.. Anaya.. if you come and want to sleep at least ask permission first”
“uu..uh.. my name is Ayana Kak Kinal not Anaya, but I want to sleep here you don’t mind right Kak Ve?”
“I don’t mind Ayana” she patting Ayana head lovely.
“Kak Ve is so tired, let her rest fo a while.”
“is that true Kak Ve??” Ve just  shake her head for the answer and thenAyana turn arroun and now face Kinal “see.. Kak Ve didn’t complain obout it, I thing Kak Kinal got jelous because she can’t doing this.” She put tounge out for tesing Kinal.
“yah.. you start to moking me, little kid.” Kinal start come close to Ayana.
“but.. but.. it’s true right?? Ahhahahahahaha”
Kinal start tickling her, and make Ayana laugh out loud. They start teasing each other, in otherside Ve just enjoy this moment and giggling for this two behaviour. Just sound of their stomach can stop their fighting and it’s a code for Veranda to do something.
“I thing some one getting hungry, wait a minute... I will give you two something” she open her bag and take a box of strowberry jam bread. “ here.. I made it this morning.. at least it can make us sated until lunch”
“woah.. it look so delicious.” Said Kinal and Ayana occasionly. They start eat that bread together hunggrily. The moment like this is so valuable for them.
“hey.. slow down girls for eat this.” Said Veranda look their friends behaviour.
“cih.. ayane eat so messy, see.. like a little kid.”
“really??”
“don’t be so messy, here wipe your mouth whit this” she trow a pack of tissu to Ayana.
“Ih.. Kak Kinal so cruel to me.. hiks..”
Once again Ve just loughing
“please come close Ay...” When Ayana close with her,  Veranda take a tissue and start to wipe the messy. Ayana so happy with Ve kindness because she doing this like Ayana is her own sister.
 
“thank you Kak Ve.”
“you are welcome (^.~)”

Time going so far so good, but can it be last long... or it just a beginning for their true story.

In this year JKT48 got many onair and off air job, they must dirrect selling their first album and it mean a hand shake event will held, fortunetly second generation can fill theater space when team J can’t perform.

After RKJ theater they make an appointment to eat noddles together.
“come on.. let get the food Nay..”
“um.. Ve.. I am so sorry, because I can’t accompany you to eat noddles. It’s too late nigh I would miss the travel going to Bandung. May be next time we can go out together”
“never mind but let me carry you until travel station because I bring my car.”
“no.no.no.no.. you wouldn’t do this because Dhike and Beby accompany me, beside that you are so tired and also must drive car by your self.”
“but Nay....”
“it’s ok Ve.. Your condition is more importan to me, don’t worry tomorrow we can meet again.”
“okey.. if you decide for that, be carefull because it too late”
Honestly she little bit dissapointed but she wan’t Kinal get trouble because of her.
“you too Ve..”
End then they go to their own destination.

Today is JKT48 prees conference  for they fisrt album heavy rotation, members look so nervous especialy the center and ofcourse our captain but they try hard to stay strong.
“Nay.. are you nervous?? Ask feranda to her best friend.
“a little bit..  but I am fine.. I hope we can do it well”.
“ofcourse you can Nay.. be strong like Kinal I ever know this time, if you strong so do us.”
“thanks.. you are the one who know me better.”With holding hand each other...“hem.. Ve hand is always warm..”
“Kinal.. Kinal.. Please come here, I need your help..” shout Melody in far away, and make them release their grasp.
“Ve-chan.. I.. “ before Kinal continue her words, Ve cut it immediately
“she need your help, so.. you got to go now”
Kinal walk away and approach Melody, she accompany Melody where ever she go, she stay in Melody side from start until end of the prees conference. During that time Ve and Kinal sit separate, Kinal and Melody in middle whe she sit in left corner. Ve just observing them from her place  “sometimes they look so suitable when they together.”

Day by day they were getting bussy with farious job so it made them rarely meet, some times they can cit chat awhile in break time and before theater rehesal. Slow but surely it made gap between them, something doesn’t work like before and it made one of them start to worry with this condition.
“Kinal.. lets.. get lunch together..” “sorry Ve.. I have meeting with staff and manager after this maybe next time” one of rejection, when break time Ve try to accompany Kinal but she is studying with Dhike and Frieska so she decide do not distrub. when they can’t meet Ve try to send massage to Kinal just for ask Kinal condition or just say hai but she rarely got a repply. “you don’t repply my message last night, and rarely repply my message too, are you ok??” “I am fine, sorry I oversleep last night.. um Ve sorry but I get to go now” another rejection.
Ve start get worried with her sudden change of her best friend but she try hard to positive thinking. Today all members are gathering to do practice together so first generation and second generation can share knowlage and experience. Ve just sit alone in corner of the studio her gaze is empty and a lot of thing in her mind. When she look at Kinal in the same time Kinal look at her too, Kinal smiling at her and made Ve happy, maybe all she tought last time to axcessive. She more happy when Kinal walk over her, she just smiling at Kinal as always but in the middle unexpected thing happen one of second generation stop her walk, she pull Kinal arm and invite Kinal in other place beside that Kinal just follow her without rejection. See what’s going on infront of her make Veranda mad  and dissapointed.
“why.. why you ignoring me again, Nay..”
“she would never do that Ve..”
“Sonya!! Since when you are here.”
“not for so long, but I know you observing our Captain.”
“I... I am.. not.. .”
“you are not a good liar, just admit it.. you really worry about her right.’
“honestly!! Yes... she change Onya.. Kinal not same as before.”
“really?? Hey why you think like that??’
“we rarely meet and she ignoring me lately, when I try to get close to her she deny it and keep a distance but not with the other”.
“she is our Captain rihgt now, so she have a big responsibility and many work to do, and remember she always care with the other and help them when they get trouble”.
“I just worry if some day she broke her promise to me.”
“trust me she wouln’t!! We know how Kinal is, she type of person that wouldn’t break her promise, we trust her so thats why she can be our Captain.” 
“ah.. sorry if I think so immature.. but i realy want her in my side even just a secon.. I just want to make sure if she is fine and not get trouble*
“just remember it if you two are so lucky to become best friend, sometime is easier get foe than get a good friend, when you lost in your path so just get it back”
Ve thinking again about Sonya talk while Sonya busy texting some one. Not for so long Ve,repply Sonya statement.
“I will do my best to keep her as my friend”
“good girl ^_^”

Let’s bet for luck tomorrow...

TBC
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long time no post and finally I write VeNal fanfic again  :cow:
sorry if any mistake.. and I need your review  :)
« Last Edit: January 07, 2014, 08:16:22 PM by veforveranda »

Offline troy

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Re: [jkt48]believe in me (venal) part 1 of 3
« Reply #61 on: January 13, 2014, 11:06:39 AM »
when will you continue the story? can't hardly wait  :lol:
When my delusion feels so real ...

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Offline jurimayu14

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Re: [jkt48]believe in me (venal) part 1 of 3
« Reply #62 on: January 13, 2014, 03:12:45 PM »
Really bad because you can't continue "the beginning" but thanks for venal fic veforveranda-san
and njunab os omg  :shocked i like it kkk~  :D

Please update soon  :)
thanks for always read and waiting my fic :3
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Offline GalenTourigny

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Re: [jkt48] the beginning
« Reply #63 on: February 14, 2014, 08:41:37 AM »
LOL

so everyone in this thread are indonesian?

never thought that i will met another indonesian. Yes, i knew yukofan-san an indonesian earlier, then pwoper48-san, and the last is you aruka-san. LOL

so that's why there's a solar panelon your thread aruka-san.
sorry for not giving a comment. LOL
i will after i read all of them~ :D


Really liked the thread.. Everyone out there have some similarity with me.. Really nice to be part of the community.
« Last Edit: February 15, 2014, 04:06:05 PM by GalenTourigny »

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