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[AKB48] Lucky Idol (Update-ChapterIII)
« on: April 18, 2010, 10:29:58 AM »
I suggest you don't read this....onegai! I want to remove this badly since there's a lot of errors!  :nervous :nervous :nervous but i can't remove it  :cry:

“LUCKY IDOL?!”

Chapter I
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Sighed. I hate Tokyo. Its buzzing with people and everybody is in a rushed. It’s like they’re on a race for their life. But its not like I don’t know why they’re like this. I’m just not used to seeing it again after a year not visiting the so-called one of the most expensive city in the world.

You’re asking why I’m here? Simple. Because of my mother. Ever since my Aunt Saeko happily told my mom that her daughter got accepted in an audition to become an idol, mom started to convince me (pester) to do the same. Meaning, following my cousin’s footsteps of the sort. At first I ignored it, passing as my mom’s joking around with me, but then she became serious and played the guilt trip on me. Saying it was her greatest dream once, tried every audition but failed each one of them. She even showed pictures of each audition she joined and with that, and not to mention my mother’s poor attempt of imitating a cute puppy  begging to be pet, I gave in.

“Beep! Beep!”

I flipped up the phone I was holding and read the message I’ve been waiting for ages. I sighed in relief. I’ve been standing in this corner for 30 minutes already, waiting for my cousin to pick me up.

‘I’m around the corner, near the ticket booth’ I typed back and closed my phone, smiling lightly and all of the sudden, all that can see was the clean ceiling of the train station. I groaned, my head hurts a little from hitting the floor.

“Gomen!” I heard a female voice.

Slowly sitting up from my laying position and turning towards her direction to regard her for bumping into me, I only saw the side of her face as she was in the process of turning her back to me and started to run, dodging the people in her way, her long honey-haired hair flowing behind her.

Still in my sitting position I looked at her retreating back as she disappeared from the mass of people milling around the station. And I’ve decided, pretty girls in Tokyo are rude and impolite, no manners at all.

“Acchan!”  My head snapped back at the familiar voice. I saw my cousin’s worried face running towards my direction and I almost cried when she hugged me.

“What happened? Why are you sprawled on the floor?” she asked, still hugging me. She’s worried but I can sense some mirth in her voice. I pulled back from the hug and noticed the people started to look at us weirdly, so I stand up and dusted my skirt.

“Some girl bumped into me and didn’t even bother to help.” I replied, picking up my traveling bag but my cousin snatched it away from me.

“Let me.” She gestured to my bag she was now holding, smiling softly at me.

“And here, it must’ve slipped from your pocket when you fell.” She handed me my phone back and I received it without looking as I immediately stuffed it inside my pocket.

“Thank you, Minami, and it actually slipped from my hand.” I corrected while smiling at her, and I noticed her cheeks color a little when I mentioned her name without any honorifics. Thinking about it, its been awhile since we last saw each other, and if remember correctly I was still calling her Minami-chan then. Now I'm wondering why I don't feel like calling her with a 'chan' anymore.

“Whatever…” she rolled her eyes at me.

“But please be careful next time, Acchan?” Minami said, her face softened at what she said and I nodded in return. She's always so caring, a very kind person. I'm lucky to be her cousin but...the guy Minami will choose will be luckiest person. That thought saddens me for no reason.

“Good.” She said and finally smiled at me while grabbing my free hand, guiding me towards our destination. Her home, my new home.

“By the way…” Minami looked at me as we were walking hand in hand, her smile becoming wide it almost blinding.

“Welcome to Tokyo, Maeda Atsuko”.




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Re: [AKB48] Lucky Idol
« Reply #1 on: April 18, 2010, 06:34:52 PM »
[...] her long honey-haired hair flowing behind her.
:O Tomochin!?!

Looking forward to seeing more! :)

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Re: [AKB48] Lucky Idol
« Reply #2 on: May 02, 2010, 04:54:47 AM »
short but pls do continue since ive noticed no one really bothers to write fics about akb48.... :( :( :(




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Re: [AKB48] Lucky Idol
« Reply #3 on: May 11, 2010, 03:04:19 PM »
ah...thanks to those who bothered to read this very short fic of mine especially ayase909 and jafeijai....

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Chapter II
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A day had passed since I arrived at Tokyo. Aunt Saeko fussed all over me when Minami told her about the incident. She was spouting about Tokyo not a safe place anymore because of people like bullies and yankiis milling around. But I assured her I was not bullied and it was just a little accident. So today I’m sitting in a chair like a nervous wreck. Why? Because Minami just gave me the most terrifying surprised I ever had in my entire life.

Flashback

“Ne Acchan, what can you say about auditioning in AKB48?” My cousin asked me while both of us were lying on the bed. We’re going to share her room from now on. Though it feels like I was only having a sleepover, you can blame me if I miss my own room back at Chiba.

“Your group? You’re the captain right?” I asked back. I didn’t mention it but I’m really proud of my cousin, even with her small stature and all, she’s the captain of the said famous group. Not that her height has something to do with her talent though, but still it amazes me how she managed them especially those who were older than her.

“Yah but I shared the title with Yukirin and Sayaka.” She replied while reaching something invisible into the air. She looks so cute while doing it, I almost to hug her.

“Ah, you guys are really good at what you’re doing.” A little compliment wouldn’t hurt, right? Oh! but I didn't expect for her to blush like that. Minami was making it difficult for me, I really want to hug her now. Her cheeks were quite red, though it was already recovering from blushing, she looks like a little girl.

“I love what I’m doing. It’s not just a work to me ‘cause I enjoyed every moment I spend with my friends.” She suddenly looked at me and I quickly averted my gaze. I don't want  her to think I was staring at her or worse, well, caught me staring at her. But hey, she's my cousin and I'm allowed to stare at her.

“I’ve noticed.” I smiled back, hugging a pillow to cover my act i did awhile ago.

“So, wanna join me in AKB48?" She asked again but this time with a glint on her eyes. Something's telling me I'm treading on a thin ice here.

“Sure, I guess. That’s the reason I’m here after all.” Her smile widened at my response. Now, I'm pretty sure my cousin was hiding something from me.

“Great!" She clapped her hands like a child, bouncing up and down slightly while still lying on the bed. Her behavior confuses me sometimes. One moment she's the serious Minami and now she was the childish Minami. I'm not complaining, just saying how much I didn't know well the cousin I claimed.

“So, Acchan, tomorrow come with me and give your best in the audition.”

Silence…

“Eh?!” I suddenly bolted up in a sitting position that I felt a head rush. Ow, dizzy. Orthostatic hypotension, I noted. My movement caused Minami to stumble back a little but I caught her hand, preventing her from plummeting face first on the floor.

“Tomorrow? But it’s so sudden, I’m not ready yet. And besides I have to pass my profile to the agency with a complete body and close up pictures.” I said too quickly which made Minami chuckled at my tirade.

“I already did and you can thank me later.” She also sat up, grinning at me. Kami-sama, this is not happening, right? I just set foot in Tokyo and my cousin already wants me to feed in sharks?

“Relax and breathe. I know you can do it. You’re my cousin after all.” She added while putting a comforting hand on my shoulder. Her cousin? Yes, I am but it doesn't mean anything. I'm not like her who's talented enough to become a captain. I mean, look at me. I'm so plain and I'm not really a good singer.

“Can’t I skip it and just audition to another company? After all, I just settled here in Tokyo, like few hours ago.” I pointed out at her, hoping to escape dooms day tomorrow. But she just smiled knowingly at me. That smile tells me I can't escape this audition thing, which is tomorrow.

“Another company? Like what?” Her eyebrows arched at my suggestion.

“Uhm…like HelloPro! Momusu is down with one member since that highly energetic girl graduated.” I awkwardly smiled at my cousin. Hoping, really hoping she would just take the bait.

“Right! Last time I heard Morning Musume can manage with just 8 members, so forget about it.” She snorted and crossed her arms over her chest.

“How about Berryz Koubou?” I insisted, sliding much closer to her.

My cousin sighed. “With Sugaya, Natsuyaki, Tsugunaga and that freaking tall girl as the lead singers, there’s no line left for you to sing, Acchan.” Minami countered, her brows furrowing more.

“Hmm…how about C-ute then?” I still insisted and she frowned. Not really liking any of my suggestions. Hello!Project wasn't that bad, that other Takahashi was a very good singer and dancer, though if a person would ask me which Takahashi is better I wouldn't think twice picking Minami in a hearbeat.

“Worst Acchan. Suzuki Airi doesn’t need back up dancers anymore, if you know what I mean.” She nodded at me while gesturing with her hands.

“How about-”

“How about AKB48 then?” She cut me off, her frowning face gone in exchange of a smiling face beaming at me. I groaned. I guess there’s really no escape facing dooms day tomorrow. But, I already said that awhile ago, right?

End of Flashback
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“Maeda, you’re up next.” Those words made me want to run away as I’ve heard them. I looked at the man who was about to hand me the microphone.

“H-hai!.” I replied nervously.

“Goodluck!” A random girl said 3 seats away from me. Is she really concern about me or just want to check her competitions? Either way I'm going to choke Minami later if I make a mess out there.

“Thank you.” I smiled and bowed politely.

Standing up using my somewhat shaking legs I moved towards the room where the audition was taking place. Right now, I really need Minami's encouraging words but no one is allowed here even the AKB48 members, just the participants only. And besides I don’t want the others think I’ve got connections, which somewhat true but it's not like that, really. They don't even know I am Minami's cousin.

As I step inside the room, I noticed I’m already standing in a makeshift stage. The place was littered with bright lights that focus on me, making it harder to look at the 3 jurors.

“Maeda Atsuko desu.” I bowed at them and they nodded. And the music starts...

ikiisogu hitotachi
kugurinukete ieji ni tsuku
mukaeireru saki wa
mugon no hako hieta kuuki


This is bad, I’m really nervous I think I’m seeing shadows lurking at the further back of the room. I gripped the microphone hard, hoping to stop my hands from shaking. It would be bad if the jurors will notice I'm not confident enough in what I am doing.

TEREBI wo tsuke tameiki
kurai heya de POTSURI to
fuan no tane tsunorase
yume ni yori shizumeru no


Relax. Relax, relax. I chanted inside my head as I sang my piece. Trying to composed myself as I looked at the jurors in front of me. They look like scary persons, almost like monsters ready to devour me any moment.

koboreochiso na hoshi no BARE-DO
yureru mahou ni hi wo fuku
itetsuita kokoro tokashite
tamaru shizuku wa toumei


Good. I guess I can make a come back with a bad start. I closed my eyes as I felt the music flow through me, making me relax more. Now, I remember why I chose this song. It was the song Minami and I sang the first time we went to karaoke. It was our song.

kirari kagayaku kono yoru…

As the song ended I noticed I’m still gripping the microphone hard, looking dumbly at the three jurors. My nervousness back again as I saw one of them shaking his head as if disapproving me, the other one touching his chin, contemplating while the only woman in the group nodded. They seem discussing for my doom, no good. It made me more nervous. When they look at me I thought my heart was going to explode.

“Nice choice of song.” The one who’s shaking his head said. Is that how they say I'll come back next time after I perfected the song?

“Thank you for your time.” Said the other man, not even looking at my direction as he continued to scribble something on the paper, probably putting a big X on my profile. I bowed at them, exiting the suffocating room. The same man approached me before I entered the doom room. I guess it can't be help then. Being an idol was tough after all.

“Maeda-chan, good job.” He smiled at me while gesturing for the microphone, I handed it back to him.

“Um…thanks, I guess.” I awkwardly smiled, walking passed him as I picked up my bag up and headed towards the exit.
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I know this is just too good to be true and it clearly states how unfit I am to become an idol. Low self-esteem much? I guess. I need some fresh air right now.

Walking to a nearby park lessens the remorse I felt towards myself. I felt I betrayed Minami's trust to me. I could’ve done better. If only I didn't messed up at first. I looked around the park and saw few families under a tree, having a picnic making me felt homesick. So I averted my gaze and it landed on a vending machine. Fetching some yen on my pocket, I bought myself a water.

“Now, what to do?” I asked myself as I settled on one of the benches scattered in the park when…

‘Ring’


‘Ring’

I jumped a little upon hearing my phone ring and I prayed to all Kami-sama that it wasn’t my cousin the one who’s calling me right now. I love Minami but I don’t know what to tell her. Wait! When did I change my ringing tone? I looked at the ringing phone but it only displayed an unknown number but looks familiar to me, so I hesitantly answered it.

“Hello?”

“You have a great voice, Maeda. Looking forward to working with you.” The voice said from the other line and it went dead.

“Eh?” I abruptly stand up from my comfortable sitting position and looked at the phone I was holding for the nth time and just finally realized it wasn’t mine after all. How come I didn't noticed it? Am I that nervous about the audition thing I failed to recognize the phone wasn't mine? I guess I am.

“Acchan!” I looked up and saw my cousin charging towards me in a full speed. And…you already know what happen next.

“Oof!”[

Both I and Minami tumbled at the trimmed green grass with her on top of me. My head colliding on the ground lightly as I groaned.

“Acchan! Omedetou!” My cousin shouted with our faces just inches away, a full blown smile planted on her face and all I can say was

“Eh?!”
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ano.....its not my intention to offend any hello pro fans out there! this is just a silly fic from me.... :sweatdrop:
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Re: [AKB48] Lucky Idol (Update-ChapterII)
« Reply #4 on: July 10, 2010, 04:19:29 PM »
Chapter III

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I’m late, really really late. What’s the use of the alarm clock if it isn’t going to wake you up the time you want. Argh! And my mom didn’t even bother to wake me up even she already heard the darn clock buzzing off.

I hate it when I’m rambling like this when I knew all along it’s entirely my fault. I stayed up late last night talking with Tomo~mi-chan on the phone. We we're just so excited about working together in a new project we forgot about the time. And now here I am, running as fast as I can like my life depend on it.

When I say run I was just kidding. I was half walking half jogging while looking at my phone I was holding, that I didn’t noticed this lone girl standing meters away from me and BAM!. We collided but more like I bumped into her. My phone flew out of my hand and I fell into my butt while the said girl sprawled on the floor. Her reaction was priceless but no time to either laugh nor help her. Picking up my phone and dusting my skirt I managed to say a simple “Gomen” before dashing off again. And I’m sure that girl would practically yell at me when we meet again. I snorted at the thought, if we’ll ever meet again.

When I reached the training room I was greeted by a grinning Harunyan and Yuko with Tomo~mi wearing an apologetic smile, and I noticed that there were only few members present.

“Yo! Did you have a nice jog?” Yuko asked, slinging her arms around my shoulder in a friendly manner.

“Yes, thank you for asking.” I replied sarcastically to which Yuko laughed loudly, earning the Team K’s captain Akimoto Sayaka and Miyazawa Sae’s attention who looked at our direction.

“Tomochin, you’re sweating a lot, here.” I removed Yuko’s arm around me and received the tissue from Tomo~mi. I smiled at my counterpart, she’s really thoughtful.

“Tomochin, you’re late.” Sae said while smiling jubilantly at me and my brows furrowed in response. How can this girl be so energetic at this hour? I mean, I only woke up few hours ago.

“Hmm…be glad that practice got canceled today, Tomochin.” My captain said, patting my head playfully. Wait…what?

“What?!” I said out loud which made Yuko laughed again at my reaction. Now that I think about it, Team A’s captain Takamina and Team B’s captain Yukirin were not around. I should've seen it coming.

“Gomen ne, Tomochin. Yuko here wants to play a prank on you.” Haruna said, giving the aforementioned girl a playful glare. The latter stop laughing now but still giggling. She really likes it when Haruna's attention was to her.

“Yuko doesn’t want me to send you an email.” Tomo~mi explained, stepping beside me while I swiped all the sweat on my face.

“Whatever…” I rolled my yes, irritated about this prank on me. Come on I wake up early…alright, not so early then rushed to the train station and not to mention I didn’t even eat breakfast.

“Tomochin…” Tomo~mi nudged me lightly as I finally finished getting rid of the sweat on my face.

“Tomochin…” She nudged me again but I ignored her as I arranged my somewhat disheveled hair. The others were just observing me.

“Yuko, this is all your fault.” Tomo~mi whined at the mastermind of this ‘lets play a prank on Tomochin’.

“What?" The culprit just feigned innocence. I growled. Haruna pinched her at the cheek while Sae and Sayaka were amused at the antics of the so-called married couple Kojiyuu.

“Alright! Alright! Gomen ne.” Yuko smiled at me, her dimples showing in the process while her hands clasped together as if she was praying. I frowned, I don't buy that half-hearted apology at all.

“I’ll buy you a food.” She added. Did I say I don't buy her apology? If I did, you just heard me incorrectly. How can I not forgive her with those cute dimples showing? Right? And she said she's going to buy me food.

“Alright…” I replied, my smile widening at the mention of food while Yuko looked flabbergasted at my fast recovery.

“And Tomo…I’m not mad just hungry.” I also smiled at her and she returned it with her megawatt smile that made all wotas gaga on her.

“So Yuko, let’s go and buy me my food.” I announced brightly, grabbing her hand and led her to my favorite cafeteria while she yelled in protest, asking help to her Nyan-Nyan. Don’t get me wrong, I’m just easily bribed with food right now just because I skipped breakfast.

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Yesterday’s practiced got canceled, what a relief and annoying thing to happen. I’ve heard there’s going to be an audition for new members…..again. So today, practiced also got canceled and I decided to have a sleepover in Tomo~mi's house.

When I got hold of my phone to call Mom I almost freaked out. This is not my phone and oh…cute wallpaper. It’s a picture of a girl holding a very cute dog, it was like my coco-tan…..Now that I looked closely to the picture, I recognized it was the girl I bumped yesterday. Well, she’s pretty.

“Tomochin.” I was snapped out of my thoughts. The taxi we were on stopped in front of a very familiar building, the AKB48 theater in Akiba. We paid the taxi driver and proceed inside.

Both I and Tomo~mi decided to take a look at the audition a bit then we’ll go shopping later. That’s our plan for today, a shopping date according to her. Though I don't understand her why she wants to go here, I mean we'll eventually meet the lucky girl who ever she is if she'll become a member in our group. So, yeah, I was thinking it was just a waste of time coming here.

“Don’t think too much about your phone you’ll get it back for sure.” Tomo~mi smiled at me. She really knows when I’m down and when to cheer me up. You can’t blame me, I love that phone. I worked hard on it, I didn't have decent sleep for few nights designing my phone and what? I just lost it like that?

“I hope so…” I smiled back and took her hand on mine and for a moment I thought I saw her blush.

When we reached our destination, we saw Takamina about to sneak in to the room where the audition was taking place.

“Takamina” Tomo~mi called the unsuspecting girl and she jumped a little. She looked at us and motioned for us to come forward.

“Shh…..keep quiet you two.” She said in a whisper while looking around, then suddenly she grabbed us both, me and my bestfriend. When I finally got my senses back, I found myself at the further back of the room, the lights were dimmed and I noticed three persons, the so-called jurors. One of them is Goto-P. They were listening to the girl who’s introducing herself.

“Why do we have to sneak in?” I heard my bestfriend asked, her voice low as to not disturb the ongoing audition.

“Because we’re not allowed here.” Takamina replied while looking at the girl who’s now singing. She winced lightly when the girl reached a high note.

“If that’s the case then why are you here?” I asked her, she looked at me incredulously while her brows furrowed.

“Okay…let me rephrase that. Why are we here if we’re not allowed to be here?” She sighed and fidgeted a little.

“Definitely different reason from you guys.” Minami said as she took a deep breath when another girl entered. It’s so off to see my former captain act like not so herself, you know the confident one.

“Ah!” I totally recognized the girl standing on the makeshift stage. I know Tomo~mi did too ‘coz she squeezed my hand lightly. And I realized one thing, she didn’t let go of my hand even when Takamina dragged us both here inside.

“Maeda Atsuko desu.” She introduced herself and bowed.

“You can do it, Acchan.” I heard Takamina mumbled as the girl named Maeda begun to sing. I noticed she’s really nervous coz she somewhat messed up at the beginning and when I looked at Minami, her worried face greeted me. Does she know that girl?

“Glitter…” Chiyuu said beside me, and I looked at her confusingly.

“It’s the title of the song.” She answered my unvoiced question and I nodded. I continue to listen to the song and I was captivated by the one who is singing the song. EH? Matte….I was supposed to say, I was captivated by the song not the one who's singing it.

“You did it, Acchan. I’m so proud of you.” Takamina said when the song ended, she’s wiping the tear that slipped from her right eye. Chiyuu smiled and patted Minami’s head affectionately. I looked at her, at Maeda, as she walked out of the room solemnly. I wonder why, she did great after all.

“She’s amazing…” I blurted out before I stop myself.

“Of course she is.” Minami replied with same loud voice, smiling brightly at me.

“Ahem! What are you three doing in here?” We heard a voice in front of us, the  jurors.

“Ano…we’re actually leaving, right guys?” I laughed awkwardly, pulling both my comrades but I meet resistance from no other than Team A’s proud captain, Takahashi.

“Sumimasen….” She bowed and looked at the jurors with intense gaze. Crap, Takamina. What are you doing?

“Is Acchan….Maeda Atsuko got in or not?” She asked seriously which made Goto-P smiled. Acchan? So the girl's nickname was Acchan? I smiled inwardly.

“You don’t have to worry about it, I’ll put her under your team Takamina.” Goto-P replied, winking at the shell shocked captain. Team A, huh? And here I was, hoping she would be put at the same time as I was.

“I can assure you I’ll take care of her and teach her everything.” She said when she gained her composure back, grabbing my free hand and Chiyuu’s as she dragged us towards the exit in a wide stride then suddenly stopped and she faced the jurors again.

“Thank you very much!” She said out loud, bowing politely at the them.

When we’re finally out at the audition room Takamina let out a heavy sighed.

“Yosh!” She said out loud, pumping a victory arm in the air which made Tomo~mi and I laughed lightly. Team A's captain surely is too cute.

“Takamina, you sure are happy for your friend.” My bestfriend commented and pinched Takamina's cheek. She was probably too weak to resist her cuteness.

“Of course, Acchan and I will be together again. It’s been so long since we spend time together.” She answered back enthusiastically, not minding her cheek that was being pinched. It's clear now she and that Maeda girl were close.

“Speaking of Acchan, I have to congratulate her.” After saying that, Minami dashed off, waving goodbye to us. Is she allowed to tell her friend about that? Oh well, I guess since Goto-P already confirmed it already.

“Takamina sure is energetic eh?” I said after the aforementioned girl disappeared, shaking my head lightly as a soft smile appeared on my face.

“Hmm…I like how genki she is.” Tomo~mi smiled at me. Lately, I noticed how my bestfriend become so really pretty. Her eyes are sparkling and her smile is...

“Now you can get your phone back.” I snapped out, blinked. Oh my god! Did I just stare at Tomo~mi? I looked away and fake a cough.

“O-oh yeah, right, my phone. Let’s follow Takamina then.” Darn it. I stuttered because I was caught staring at her. I started to walk, leaving my bestfriend pouting.

As I was walking passed the window that overlooks the nearby park, I saw her. Maeda Atsuko. She looks like someone dumps her. Maybe she was thinking she didn’t pass the audition? An idea crossed my mind.

“Oh, Takamina’s friend." Tomo~mi said, now standing beside me. I chuckled at the thought of what I was going to do and my bestfriend looked at me confusingly.

Fetching Maeda’s phone, I dialed my phone number. It rings twice before...

“Hello?”

I thought I heard an angel’s voice. I smiled while looking at her nervous posture from the 7th floor of the building.

“You have a great voice, Maeda. Looking forward to working with you.” I said coolly before pushing the end call button.

I continue to look at her as she suddenly stands up, looking at my phone she was holding. I heard a giggle beside me, my bestfriend was very amused at the stunt I pulled at the new girl.

“Look! It’s Takamina.” My bestfriend pointed at the opposite corner of Maeda. She was running at a full speed, like a bull charging towards the stunned girl and I laughed loudly when both of them tumbled on the ground.

“Omoshiroi ne?” I said while wiping some tears on my eyes for laughing too much.

“Poor Maeda-san.” Chiyuu replied, wiping some of her tears too. I never saw Takamina act like that before. Being relax and and free. She's so different when she's with us.

“Well, it’s Takamina after all, what’d you expect.” I giggled, looking at the still sprawled pair.

“Well, let’s go?” I offered my right hand to my bestfriend, she looked at it and smiled at me. I will never get tired looking at my best friend’s smiling face, she’s really pretty.

“Let’s go shopping then…” she said while taking my offered hand into hers as we left the building hand in hand.
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Re: [AKB48] Lucky Idol (Update-ChapterIII)
« Reply #5 on: January 07, 2011, 12:30:12 PM »
chapter 4 please!
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Re: [AKB48] Lucky Idol (Update-ChapterIII)
« Reply #6 on: January 07, 2011, 10:31:52 PM »
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chapter 4 please!

Agree with aoi_sora~!  :thumbsup

PLEASE CONTINUE~!!  :bow:

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Re: [AKB48] Lucky Idol (Update-ChapterIII)
« Reply #7 on: April 28, 2011, 05:29:41 PM »
yeahh.... i agree too... chapter 4 please....

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Re: [AKB48] Lucky Idol (Update-ChapterIII)
« Reply #8 on: November 06, 2013, 01:20:07 AM »
Do I have because it stopped posting? I want to know of the it remains of the history. 
After all it is atsumina, tomotomo or tomi-acchan?

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