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You are Mine (JuriMayu)
« on: July 31, 2014, 09:34:52 AM »
hi,i'm new hear! yoroshiku nee~ this is my first fanfic,sorry about my grammar! ok for the first time i'll post a prologue :D :D

PROLOGOUE
I was one of the students at Aki High School, I was someone who only has a few friends only. Now, I hiad a big crush with Jun, one of the most popular student with his flirt that makes all the girls in this school falls in love with him.

Sorry for the bad grammar,oh i'm so bad in there :cry: :cry:


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Re: You are Mine (JuriMayu)
« Reply #1 on: July 31, 2014, 11:19:56 AM »
Just give me the 1st chapter XD

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Re: You are Mine (JuriMayu)
« Reply #2 on: July 31, 2014, 02:18:29 PM »
Jurimayu~

Give the first chapter muwahahah

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Re: You are Mine (JuriMayu)
« Reply #3 on: August 02, 2014, 07:22:23 AM »
Gomen, I have not made ​​the first chapter :(. because I'm very busy, maybe later tonight I'll make it :twothumbs :twothumbs. i'm promise!:D

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Re: You are Mine (JuriMayu)
« Reply #4 on: August 02, 2014, 12:30:06 PM »
CHAPTER I
In a gloomy day, I woke up from my sleep that well because my alarm clock goes off. I turned off the alarm and see the clock, it was 7 o'clock.
"Damn! Half an hour, I have to go to school! This is all because of school work such as trash, "I said.
I immediately went bath and wearing uniforms. He ran as fast as possible to the school, there was her good fortune, she has not been late to school. Thank God, I'm not too late. I went to class and meet with Yuki, yes yuki is my "friend".
--FLASHBACK--
Yuki POV
It's been 2 years since I liked in high school. Yes, I have a crush on Mayu. One day, I confess my love to her
"Mayu ..." i said
"Yes, Yuki?" She said with a smile
"Mayu, i like you! Please be my girlfriend! "I said, it's crazy.
"Eh ?!" she said with shocked expression
"I had a crush on you for a long time! I love you more than anything! "I blushed
"But .. we're both girls. I can not Yuki, I love just limited to friends! "She said. yeah, i got rejected. Hiks ..
"It's okay if you love me just limited to friends." I said, but remember i will not give up, Mayu! I thought
--END OF FLASHBACK-
Yeah, until now, I'm still have a crush on Mayu. I do not know about her. I hope Mayu have the same feelings with me.
YUKI END POV

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Re: You are Mine (JuriMayu)
« Reply #5 on: August 02, 2014, 12:32:24 PM »
Gomen,it's short chapter :( but it will have a part! I'm promise guys,i'll post it later :twothumbs :twothumbs. Btw,sorry for the grammar :doh: :banghead:

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Re: You are Mine (JuriMayu)
« Reply #6 on: August 02, 2014, 02:00:38 PM »
Mayuki ? Jurimayu ? whooaaa.. love quarrel !

nice story !! update ! update ! :twothumbs

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Re: You are Mine (JuriMayu)
« Reply #7 on: August 02, 2014, 02:43:25 PM »
@mayura48: whoaa! Reallly? Thankyou! :D :D

Okay,i'll continue the story. Hope you like it!! :twothumbs :twothumbs

CHAPTER I (PART I)
I met with Yuki, and she greeted me "Mayu-chan! Good morning ~~ "she said, smiling at me. I greeted back with a little smile "Oh, good morning, Yuki-chan ~` "" Why are you so lethargic? Are you unwell? "she asked with worry." Yuki-chan I'm good. I just sleep too late last night . "I said wearily. Suddenly I heard a conversation one of the disciples, "I have heard, there will be a new student! It said he will be in this class! I hope it is the boy! "With an enthusiastic expression. New students? Hm .. may be he/she wants to be friends with me and Yuki-chan. Bell was sounded, I saw Mariko-sensei came to class, and bring a man. Hm, maybe the new student? God, he is so cool! I said to myself with a feeling of enthusiasm. I sat in my place and Mariko-sensei came. "Good morning all! Today, we are the arrival of new students. Now introduce yourself in Jun "Mariko-sensei said to the boys was," Hi, guys! My name is Matsui Jun, the do call me Jun! I'm from Nagoya. I moved to Tokyo because my parents are no jobs here. Please be nice to me! ^^ "He said. "Omg! He is so cool! Marry me now !!!! "said the other girls." Okay, guys! Please calm down! Jun, you can sit next to Mayu, "said Mariko-sensei. Eh ?! I ?! God, why am I excited like this ?! Mayu said. Jun also went to his seat, beside Mayu. "Hi, Mayu-chan! You are so cute! Nice to know you, my Mayu-chan ~~ "he said with a wink to me. Omg! He is ... king of flirt! Damn it! Oh Lord, strengthen me !! I said to myself. "Okay! let's start our lesson! "Mariko-sensei said.
Jun POV
Damn, today I came to my new school! I hate this! But it's okay, I'm going to make all the girls fall in love with me there! HAHAHA! When I walked into the school, I was widely seen by everyone, at the same time I heard the words of a female student, "Omg! Who is he ?! New students ?! Oh no, he is so cool! I can not help !! "I approached the woman," Hey! What is your name? You're so beautiful "I wink to her." E..eh ?! M..my name Matsui Rena, "" Oh! Hi rena-chan, nice to know you! Maybe i will in love with you, "i said. Rena cheeks flushed, "Rena-chan, I will not like you. I will make you hurt! HAHAHA "I said to myself with laughter devil. I also met with my teacher, Shinoda Mariko-sensei. Shee took me to the class and I was told to introduce myself, "Hi, guys! My name is Matsui Jun, the do call me Jun! I'm from Nagoya. I moved to Tokyo because my parents are no jobs here. Please be nice to me! ^^ "I said. After introducing ourselves, a lot of girls who look at me. I was told to sit down by Mariko-sensei next to Mayu,yes her complete name is  Mayu Watanabe, when I walked to sit next to Mayu, I seen a woman with a keen eye. I do not know why she made like that, but I ignored it and did not consider it important. I sat next to Mayu and seeing her face, "she's going to be my next targets! HAHAHA "I told myself. . "Hi, Mayu-chan! You are so cute! Nice to know you, my Mayu-chan ~~ "i said with a wink to her. Mayu's cheeks looked flushed.
END OF JUN POV
YUKI POV
This morning, I went to school earlier than before. Yes, because I want to cheat homework lol, forgive me. After I cheated homework, I looked at the clock in class, "Gosh! 15 minutes longer school bell rang! Where Mayu? She does not usually come this late, "a few minutes later, Mayu came" Mayu-chan! Good morning ~~ "I smiled at Mayu," Oh, good morning, Yuki-chan ~ `" "Why are you so lethargic? Are you unwell? "I asked with worry." Yuki-chan I'm good, I'm not okay. I just sleep too late last night. "Mayu said wearily. Yes, I'm worried about her, because she's never been like this, and also because I had a big crush on her. Bell was rang, I sat at my place. Mariko-sensei came up with a new student. "Good morning all! Today, we are the arrival of new students. Now introduce yourself in Jun"Mariko-sensei said to the boys was," Hi, guys! My name is Matsui Jun, the do call me June! I'm from Nagoya. I moved to Tokyo because my parents are no jobs here. Please be nice to me! ^^ "He said. "Omg! He is so cool! Marry me now !!!! "said the other girls." Okay, guys! Please calm down! Jun,you can sit next to Mayu, "said Mariko-sensei. Instantly I was shocked! I can not say anything, this feeling became ill and jealous. I saw it with a sharp, but he ignored me.
END OF YUKI POV
* ring ** ring *
"Okay, guys. We will continue our lesson later. See you later! "
"Finally ~ ~~ break too!" Mayu said as she stretches the hand.
"Jun! Let's have breakfast with us! "Said the female students who surround Jun
"Oh, sorry guys. I want to have breakfast with Mayu-chan ~~ "said Jun. Mayu very surprised to hear, "Eh ?! Me? !! "Jun pulled my hand to avoid the women around him, almost immediately, the female gang saw with cynical.
END OF CHAPTER I PART I

What do you think guys? XD :lol: i hope you like it! Hehe,sorry for the grammar :( :cry:

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Re: You are Mine (JuriMayu)
« Reply #8 on: August 02, 2014, 03:24:28 PM »
Is this really JuriMayu...   :grin:
somehow it feels like MaYuki and WMatsui :lol:


update more.... :thumbsup

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Re: You are Mine (JuriMayu)
« Reply #9 on: August 02, 2014, 03:34:07 PM »
@mayukixjurena: you will know the truth :) :twothumbs. thank you for reading :D

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Re: You are Mine (JuriMayu) CHAPTER I PART II UPDATED! 251014
« Reply #10 on: October 25, 2014, 05:33:57 AM »
Hiiii,i'm back~~ Sorry not update for a month. i've so many task in school m(__)m
But now i'll post the part II of chapter I. Hehe :D
And sorry about the grammar  :( :banghead:


CHAPTER I PART II
 Jun brings Mayu out , " What are you doing this ?! We just met , and you're doing this ! loser ! "Said Mayu to June with angry face . " Hey , calm down , Mayu - chan ! I just want to avoid the hordes of strange girl , " " Mou .. " " Oh yes , Mayu - chan , do you have time today ? " Said Jun " No. I do not have time for a player like you , " Mayu said sarcastically , " I ? A player ? Are you kidding me , Mayu - chan ? I do not play you , right? I just want to know you more , let's go after school  ! " " Sorry , I can not go out with you , Because I 've dating with someone , " said Mayu . Eh ? Dating someone ? Indeed, I want to date anyone ?! God , please help me !! , " Dating ? With whom did you go out ? " Said Jun with a full face asked , " Er ... With ... " Mayu confusion , in the midst of confusion , Yuki came here to see Mayu , Aha ! I said only if I'm going on a date with Yuki , Mayu said to myself . " With Yuki ! Yes , with Yuki ! Yuki- chan ~~ come here !! " Mayu said with passion .

“yes,Mayu –chan?”
“Yuki-chan,we’re have dating after school right?”
“Eh?! Er... Yes,we’re Mayu-chan!” said Yuki happily. Eh?! Dating?!
Ah,what i said?! Dating with yuki? Oh Goddd... okay may it works. Actually,i want hide my self from Jun. Ya as i said,he is king of flirt! Wtf,i don’t like him anymore. Bell was rang,it means that school has ended. Ah finally~~ i thought. Suddenly,Yuki comes “Mayu~~ isn’t you want dating with me?” she said happily. “er.. sorry yuki,i’m won’t dating with you. I just want hide my self from Jun. Sumimasen! Ah i must go now see you~” i bowed at Yuki and run as fast as i can. I leave Yuki with her blank face

Now,i’m in school field. Huh,it’s so tired i bowed for a while and suddenly someone give me a mineral water. I see him,and he is.... JUN! AH GODDD! “Hi,Watanabe-san,” said Jun. Eh?he calls me watanabe? what’s wrong with him? I thought. “doesn’t you have dating with someone?” asked him. “Not,i’m not have dating yet,” i said. Suddenly he grabbed my hands! OMG! My heart beats so fast than usual. What is it? It is dokidoki???
He brought me to outside school,he released my hand.”WHAT ARE YOU DOING?” i said loud “No,nothing. I just want brought you to outside,” he said. How easy he said like that. “Oh,okay. I’ll leave you. Bye~” “No,i’ll accompany you” “E-eh?” wow,he sudden being nice to me. Wow. “No,thanks. I can go by myself” “No,my house just a few block from your house,” he said. Then,i think it’s okay since his house is near from mine. We walk to my house.  Along the way,we not talk each other until he opens the conversation
“Nee,Mayu.”

“What?”

“Can we do like this tomorrow?”

Eh?? What is his mean?!! My heart beats so fast.  I don’t know,why him said like that. Is he crazy? Aaaaaa,sudden i stop to walk and silent for a while. I don’t know what’s my answer. No or yes? Jun face looks like waiting my answer. I think he too curious with my answer. “should i say yes?” i told myself.
“Mayuyu?” Eh?! Mayuyu? How dare he calls me Mayuyu-_- he is the first person who call me like that.

“O-oh,hai  Matsui-san. Emm... maybe it’s okay if we do like this tomorrow,” i said while my heart beats faster than a few minutes ago

“Oh? Really? Yatta~~” he said happily. Why he so happy? Ah,i think it’s ‘fake’ happy. Lol

We continue our talk. We talk about a lot things. Finally,we arrive at home. Wow,time flies.
“Thank you for walk me to home,Matsui-san” i bowed at him

“My pleasure,Mayuyu. And by the way just call me Jun,it’s to formal you call me Matsui hehe,”

“Oh,h-hai Jun-kun~” i said embarassing.
“Em.. Mayuyu. Can i have your phone number? Er,i mean we can be a close friend maybe?” he said. I so suprise with his said. Yaa i just give him my phone number . after we exchange our phone number. He bow at me and go to his home. I go to inside my house
“Tadaima~” no one answers. Ah i’m forget if my parents go to overseas. Yaa,they are so busy with their work. I have one sister. But we live in diffrent town. Unlucky,she doesn’t come this month. I locked the door house and i go to my room. I change a clothes and lay to my bed. Suddenly,my phone is ring. And it’s message from... MATSUI JUN! Omg,my heart beats...
To: Mayuyu-chan

From: Matsui Jun
Hi Mayuyu~! Don’t forget to lunch you know~ 
Okay,see you at your house. We’ll go to school together,okay?><

Oh man,he is better than what i think. I reply his messages

To: Matsui Jun
From: Mayuyu-chan
Hi,Jun. Oh,thanks for remember me to lunch. Hehe
About tomorrow,sure. No prob :)

I release my phone and go to kitchen to preper for lunch. I think i’ll eat ramen for today. I’m so lazy to cook something healthy~ lol forgive me. I eat a ramen while watching tv. After i finish eat remen. I go to my bedroom. And take a nap for a while. I’m so tired.

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Re: You are Mine (JuriMayu)
« Reply #11 on: October 25, 2014, 05:36:49 AM »
Should i continue? :cry: :cry:

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Re: You are Mine (JuriMayu)
« Reply #12 on: October 25, 2014, 08:48:59 AM »
of course you have to continuing this fic... until end  :twothumbs

mayu would be happy if the story could be write down again.. sure !!!

and next chapt please !!! *just hope that mayu was not wrong with her decission to choose jun rather than yuki..

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Re: You are Mine (JuriMayu)
« Reply #13 on: October 25, 2014, 04:58:36 PM »
yeah you need to continue this story for sure! I'll wait for the next part. ganbattene  ;)
Kanon is so cute, but she's only mine! 0.o I mean my sister! ;)
I love SaeYuki, AtsuMina, JuriMayu, and MariHaru :P

You can read my first and only fanfic: What's Wrong With Love? (JuriMayu) - http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=38049.msg1294928#msg1294928

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