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Offline deguchi

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Cruel (atsumina)
« on: March 19, 2015, 03:52:08 PM »
Her back was pressing by the wall of her own living room, she could feel the cold wall but soon its replaced by the hotness because of the person in front of her, so close that she can feel its hot breaths on her skin. A person of a girl that shorter than her but having so much power over her that she could pinned her body to the wall sends shiver and electricity through her body can't do nothing but stand still. Makes her trembling in the feeling.

In the oh so painfully slow moves, the short girl finally run her delicate fingers on her exposed skin, ah she's didn't even know that the shorter girl had taken her shirt off  that now she's just in her bra on and black jeans. with a hand on her  waist and other one moving  start from her exposed waist.

"Ahn..."

Can't help but let out a single moan when those fingers running its self through her belly made a single circle, then move it up below her bra and ghostly caressing around there before it move again toward her collar bone through her neck and sliding it smoothly behind her head, stroke the sensitive place there before grabbed her nape and in one go smashing their lips together.

"Ahnn..mmhmm..." sounds after sounds come out from her closing mouth that have been 'eating up' by the shorter girl. Can't stand to let out another loud moan when the shorter girl acting her other hand that has been holding her waist, quickly she circled her arms around the shorter girl's neck, holding it tightly and brought their body even more closer, deepening their kiss if it even possible.

Never once she think that this shorter girl of her could doing this to her. Even after a one year of their relationship, the one that always initiative to make move was her, by its holding hand or kissing due to the shorter girl's shyness. But this time not that she's didn't like it, just surprised that the girl could do this first.

"Hnn..ahh..."

Another moans escaped, leaving the sweet lip she move it down kissing inch by inch of her skin through her neck, sucking there and here, leaving some marks. Not just her skillful lip that playing on her neck and collar bone, but also her other hand that caressing her body.

"Naa...did enjoy it? Hmm...you're so tasty, bet that down there are tastier," whispering on her ear, her hot breath sent shiver and the caress on her sensitive place behind her ear only makes her trembling even more under the shorter girl's oh so awesome touch.

"Hnn..haahh..arhh.." couldn't even give reply due to the overwhelming feels. Just moans she could utter for the shorter girl.

"Of course you DID enjoying this, huh...enjoying so much like when you've done to me before, like ALL of you have DONE to me years ago."

'Wh..what?' Shit she's couldn't think clearly, what was she talking about? What she've done to her? All of you? Who? Her mind was in chaos, couldn't focus between the touching and the thought the shorter girl voiced out.

"Finally I could avenge my revenge."

"Revenge for wha-"couldn't even finished her sentence, her breath stopped itself when a sharp cold metal met her fairly skin.

"Wh...what..?"

"How dummy fool I can be for not realizing it sooner. Y'all so close yet I can't feel it."

She's drop into confusion, didn't even understand single bit of what she's talking about.

"I don't understand, what are you talking about Mi-"

"Don't you call my name, bitch!"

Shiver run through her spin, not because the hot feeling seconds before but the cold hatred the shorter girl shot her. She could feel the sharp thing pressing on her neck.

"In just single move, just one fucking single move and I can free from these shitty dream and feeling that I've been carrying since that shit day."

She's doesn't know what to do, what to say, just stand still with hands that circled on the short girl's neck, now limping by her sides. Staring blankly on the girl's darkness.

"Good bye...my love."




I've heard it many times that "Live is cruel" and I didn't give a damn 'bout it before but when 'they're all' took the lives of the people I love and by the time I realize that I'm the one that taking the player to take the live of the people I love. Surely Live is Cruel, huh.




starring atsumina TY kojiyuu saeyaka mayuki wmatsui





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« Last Edit: March 24, 2015, 08:33:37 AM by deguchi »
just love to read alot of fiction story

Offline ryu201

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Re: Cruel (atsumina)
« Reply #1 on: March 19, 2015, 05:11:35 PM »
Its so HOT! :on bleed:
But wait!
The shorter one must be minami but who the taller one?
Its acchan?  :grr:
And who is the all of u?
What they do to minami?
Wah~ im curious!
Please continue author-san  :kneelbow:

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Re: Cruel (atsumina)
« Reply #2 on: March 19, 2015, 07:36:52 PM »
Please, please continue this author-san..  :bow:
I want to know what really is happening there.. and why that hot moment turned like that..!?!  :shocked


Can't wait for update..  :)
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Re: Cruel (atsumina)
« Reply #3 on: March 19, 2015, 10:24:14 PM »
Woah... so CRUEL...

Who is the short and the tall ones?

Minami and Atsuko???

What did the tall one do to the short one long time ago?

Can't wait to see what's going to happen next

Thank you for the start of a new story

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