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SaeYuki
« on: August 10, 2016, 05:45:49 AM »
Hey guys. I am new here. I don't really know where I can post my writing so I decided to post here. (it's shitty. sorry) Without further ado, here it is.



It’s raining again. It’s summer yet it’s always raining. I once heard that when you have no more tears to shed, heaven will cry for you. Maybe that’s why. Nah. Why would it cry for me? I am nobody. Even to you…..
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It’s currently lunch time and even though it’s raining, people are rushing here and there to get where they want to be. There in the middle of the side walk stood a woman, walking lifelessly getting drenched from the rain. Some people give her looks but nobody talked to her. People rushed past her and occasionally bumping into her but the woman didn’t care. She continued to walk aimlessly, not caring where she’s going until somebody stopped her. She turned around to see who the person was but broke down the second she laid her eyes on the person.
“She left me Sayaka. I begged her to stay. I…I….”
“Shhhh… I’m here Sae. It’s going to be alright.” The one named Sayaka enveloped her in a hug not caring if she’ll get wet herself. With an umbrella on her left hand, she pat Sae’s back trying to calm the sobbing girl.
After what seemed like an hour, Sae stopped crying though still as lifeless as she was before. Sayaka then brought Sae home and tended to her. She knows that with her friend’s current mental state, Sae would not even bother to shower nor change her wet clothes. She practically had to force her to eat the soup she had prepared for her friend. Putting Sae to sleep was the hardest though. Sae was very adamant on not sleeping. She even made horrible excuse just not to sleep. In the end, she was knocked out without Sayaka doing anything. And with that, Sayaka left Sae in her sleep. She didn’t go home though; she has someone to talk to.  Making her way out of Sae’s apartment building, she hailed a cab.
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Sayaka POV
After I was done with Sae, I requested to meet her girl friend in a café downtown. I can’t let this happen. They love each other so much. I don’t know if she’s going to arrive though. After all, I haven’t really received a reply from her. Ah well, I’ll just wait for her here.
I ordered myself a coffee and decided to get comfortable. I might be here for a long time. I hope they won’t kick me out.
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Mulling over what happened earlier, Sayaka didn’t notice the person who sat down in front of her.
“Ehemm..” The person who just arrived cleared her throat to get Sayaka’s attention.
“Ah. Yuki. Glad you came. Sorry, I didn’t notice you arrive. I was just.. well, thinking over things.”
“It’s okay. What did you want to talk about?” Yuki answered.
“Order something to drink first. It’s kinda cold. Also when did you last sleep?” Looking over Yuki, Sayaka noticed the bags under her eyes. Clearly, the girl is in need of much sleep. From what she knows with Yuki’s personality, the girl would never go out without dolling her self up and would never wear a hoodie and jogging pants outside her house. She’s always the skinny jeans, dress, or skirt type of a person. At this moment though, Yuki is wearing no make up and wearing a black hoodie and gray jogging pants. This is the first time Sayaka has seen her looking so haggard.
“I’m okay. I have just been busy.” A short answer. Sayaka just sighed. Might as well get to the point then.
“Is there really nothing to save your relationship?” She knows they are hurting. She just witnessed Sae broke down in front of her in public which rarely happen and now she’s looking at haggard looking Yuki.
“There is nothing to save. We’re done.” Yuki said with a cold tone. Another sigh came from Sayaka.
“You’re both hurting. You know she loves you still and I know you still love her.”
“Well, love is not enough to hold a relationship.” Yuki stood up. Her tears now falling, she walked out of the café. Sayaka didn’t know wat to say. She kept her mouth shut and let her walk away. Perhaps what she said is true. After all, even though her last girlfriend and her were very much in love with each other, they still broke up. Maybe that's why she felt like she can't let it happen. But what can she do anyway. It's going to be up to them to decide.


I have recently fallen in love with this pairing (and akb) and I know I am so late. Sae and Takamina were the ones that drew me in AKB but found out they've already graduated. And then fell also in love with this couple. I searched for fics of them but there's not much really. So i decided why not make one for them (it's more of an unfinished one really)(sorry). So there's this. welps, that's all. Thank you.

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Re: SaeYuki
« Reply #1 on: August 10, 2016, 10:40:20 AM »
Hello there :welcome
Hey you weren’t that late, but yeah both takamina and Sae already grad this year.

It's not shitty story ._. (Okay not to me, I can tell you that)
But its too short..... :(

Is it only OS? Or are you planning to make it series?

I'm glad you love this pairing as well ^^
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Offline Thisishard

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Re: SaeYuki
« Reply #2 on: August 10, 2016, 09:29:44 PM »
Hey!

Just too bad though. I got into them just after they graduated. I did also like Sayaka but she's also out. T.T

I actually read your fanfics recently. They're good. Still waiting for your updates. hahaha.

I actually don't know if I'm going to continue this. I do have another idea for a story and I'm somewhat experimenting with it.

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Re: SaeYuki
« Reply #3 on: August 11, 2016, 05:41:21 AM »
Dont worry about that, Welcome to this ship!! Saeyuki shipper are not the most active but we love thi pair :D..

im waiting for the next chapter :D, I recommened to post this story in tumblr too

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Re: SaeYuki
« Reply #4 on: August 11, 2016, 09:22:57 AM »
Dont worry about that, Welcome to this ship!! Saeyuki shipper are not the most active but we love thi pair :D..

im waiting for the next chapter :D, I recommened to post this story in tumblr too

Yap our ship still going on strong hahahaha
Just continue and write what you want ^^
Once again welcome aboard~
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Offline love angel

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Re: SaeYuki
« Reply #5 on: August 11, 2016, 01:07:59 PM »
 
 AUTHOR SANN I LOVE UUUU  :inlove: :inlove: :inlove:
 Sae n takamina also my oshii but still love them even already graduate
 And im saeyuki n atsumina fan  :deco:
 Thanks for the story  :twothumbs :twothumbs
 Please update bcuz i need more  :bow: :bow:

Offline Thisishard

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Re: SaeYuki
« Reply #6 on: August 11, 2016, 06:33:25 PM »
@Haruko: I actually don't know if this have a continuation. I'm pretty much a beginner in writing fanfics and this would be my first fanfic ever so I am really sorry if it feels unfinished and too short. Hopefully I will get better though. :D
I don't have an account on tumblr and I don't think I'll be creating one soon.

@buiq: Thanks. Hope I can write one again soon and hopefully it would be a more longer story.

@love angel: Heeeeey! Thanks for liking this. Not really sure if this have a cont. If my brain permits, I will write one again soon. It's my first ever fic so sorry if it feels unfinished.

Offline Rufy SaeYuki

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« Reply #7 on: August 30, 2016, 10:22:56 AM »
Why, sad story... Can you please make it happy ending?
They're so lovely to see. Prince and princess, they're my favourite couple anyway.

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