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Re: More Than One Story... [16/7 Midnight: Chapter 2]
« Reply #520 on: July 17, 2009, 04:54:49 AM »
I haz to love Reina here..  :P

oh crud..can i have Kamei? XD

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Re: More Than One Story... [16/7 Midnight: Chapter 2]
« Reply #521 on: July 17, 2009, 11:51:36 AM »
Ah...I almost forgot about this story...except I remember two things very well.  1. Sayu couldn't speak and 2. Eri was a man XD  lol okay..I made the last part up since Eri wasn't in part 1 =P but it came true anyways so teehee~  :tama-laff:

lol a jealous kitten and devil bunny in the land of kelp  :lol:

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She only knew that she couldn't bear to see Ai so petrified. Curse her heart of compassion, why did she have to be both beautiful and kind?

Gotta love that girl!  narcissism at it's finest  :lol:  

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I will make you my woman.

wah Eric.  so possessive or obsessive or something...it's rather hot  :mon mischief:

Now I'm really curious to know who the prince is.  I know you like the kiddo but it's not Koharu is it?! XD  Koharu x Ai is wrong wrong wrong! XD

*goes back to read chapter 1 now*

it's so funny after having read GA and GS.  Sayu and her speech problems XD and lol...linlin's been a servant since medieval times XD

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Re: More Than One Story... [16/7 Midnight: Chapter 2]
« Reply #522 on: July 17, 2009, 03:40:14 PM »
lol, I just took a look at my guesses from the previous chapter of this story. At least I got the two that showed up to tend to injured Gaki right even if I had their roles reversed and Reina is indeed royalty though she isn't King/Prince. :3 Lol, not a bad track record so far but we still have the enemy clan that is yet to be revealed! Of MM, only Junjun and Koharu are yet to appear... hm... interesting. You've sure kept us on our toes with this one, Hammy.

You know, in regards to my comment on H!O about King Arthur, the Lancelot-Guinevere affair brought down the kingdom and then Sayu makes that comment about that information being useful so I'm pretty worried about TakaGaki being used as some sort of weapon here. :(  Gaki is one of their best soldiers, right? But if something happens between him and Ai, he'd probably be sentenced to death or banished. ;o; Do not want! This would give Sayu's side an advantage as well. Then she has the OTHER best soldier falling for her. She's pretty much poised for victory here.

Fufu... I was super amused by Sayu's 'beautiful and kind' comment. That's definitely the bunny we know and love.
Oh and being a kitchen helper, how easy would it be for her to just poison them all? =_=;

Also, this whole betrothal thing. It's clear that Ai doesn't love her future husband, does the Prince actually love her or is he just satisfied with the situation and so doesn't mind? ._. It probably wouldn't be too bad if he didn't feel strongly about her either. Ai's father would probably be pretty mad that she'd pick being a soldier's wife to being queen though.

Haha... I've seen a couple of 'creepy Eri' remarks but I thought her I'll make you my woman remark was pretty cool~ :oops:
Plus it seems to suit the mentality of the time. =x  lol, Reina is just ahead of her time in regards to attitude it seems. I can't wait to see what he does to try make her his.

Of course I want... MOAR TAKAGAKI<333 Oh Ai, just grab your Gaki and betray your country. You can run away to Sayu's side and since she's so beautiful and KIND, she'll take you in.

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Re: More Than One Story... [07/08 Guardian Angel: Chapter 10]
« Reply #523 on: August 07, 2009, 03:40:49 PM »
Guardian Angel
Chapter 10 - The Card of Fate

"Da dum da dum da dum..."

Humming audibly a random tune that she had thought up in her head whilst she stuck one leg out from behind the bathroom door, Lin Lin smirked and wriggled her toes. She could envision Koharu's eager expression as she sat on the bed with her legs curled outwards awaiting this moment.

A few seconds passed but Lin Lin didn't hear the easily excitable miracle cheer for more. This was highly unusual as in the time that they had spent living together, the Chinese girl had discovered Koharu’s unusual fondness for clapping her hands excitedly while watching Lin Lin fool around. Deciding that something was definitely wrong, Lin Lin put her feet back firmly on the floor and exited the tiny washroom.

"Koharu-chan?"

Sitting on the edge of the bed with a dazed expression on her face, Koharu was visibly affected. The plastic cordless phone lay on its side in her lap while her arms dangled limply on either side of her body.

"Don't scare me Koharu-chan, speak to me!"

Rushing up to kneel down on the carpet floor beside the bed, Lin Lin scooped up Koharu's hands and shook at them worriedly.

"Did someone call?"

Transferring her gaze from the far corner of the bedroom to focus on Lin Lin, Koharu replied.

"I told her everything."

"Told who what?"

Stroking at the back of Koharu’s hand with her thumb, Lin Lin asked as she tried to stop her girlfriend from trembling.

"Niigaki-san. She seemed to have remembered something. And she made me tell. Kamei-san is going to be so mad when she finds out. She specifically told us to not talk about the accident again."

As images of an irate Eri appeared in her mind, the current sub-leader of Morning Musume pulled away from Lin Lin and began sobbing into her hands.

In the entire duration of their relationship, Lin Lin had never seen Koharu weep. Although it tugged at her heart to see her significant other cry so sorrowfully, another part of her felt happy that she was the one by Koharu’s side when she was at her most vulnerable.

Without saying a word, Lin Lin removed the telephone and proceeded to lay her head on Koharu's lap. Despite her obvious flippant ways, Lin Lin knew Koharu was a strong person and she would be able to sort things out on her own. As her partner, all Lin Lin had to do was to be there for her in her time of need.

When she was convinced Koharu had calmed down enough to speak, she would assure her that no matter what happened, she would be there with her every step of the way. If Koharu had to explain things to Kamei-san, she would accompany her. If their senpai wanted someone to blame for the state of affairs, Lin Lin too would be there to share the responsibility.

We will face everything that life throws at us together.

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Their hands were tightly clasped as the shorter woman pulled her companion along. They had begun their journey from the second Risa put her hand in Ai's and the pair had not stopped running ever since. Their current location was in a deserted park devoid of any souls except for a lone passer-by who had bumped into them roughly. The impact from the collision broke apart their entwined hands and similarly, it tore Ai out of her reverie.

"I'm...sorry. I didn't know what I was doing."

Shaking her head stiffly from side to side, Ai glanced at Risa for a split second before looking away hastily. Even though she tried to conceal her pained expression by slinking further back into the shadows that were being cast by the streetlamp they were standing under, her action failed to impede Risa’s observation of the lone tear which had slipped from the corner of her eye.

"It's alright...I.."

"No, it's not alright."

Turning her body away from Risa, Ai retorted desolately as she tilted her face skywards and squeezed her eyes shut. She didn't know what possessed her to grab Risa and escape from the crowded restaurant. What could she have achieved with her deed? It wasn’t as if she could take Risa with her back to New York, away from a person who had become so cold and distant that she could no longer recognize her as the once warm and innocent turtle.

Feeling the ends of her eyes grow increasingly moist, Ai wiped at them with her fingers to discontinue their descent. She didn't want to cry, not in front of Risa who would probably find her outburst strange. The younger wasn't her best friend anymore, she was nothing more than an acquaintance without the recollections of all their years together.

“There are so many stars tonight.”

At hearing her comment, Ai stole a peek at Risa, expecting her to be looking up at the heavens admiring one of natural’s most beautiful sights. Instead, her companion was staring back at her, her gaze resolute and unwavering as she closed the distance between them.

Thinking that she might never see her again after Ai returned to America, Risa decided to etch forever in her memory the feeling of tasting Ai’s lips. Nevertheless, she couldn’t do it with the other girl watching her. Lifting her hand and cupping it over the doe-like eyes of the woman she had forgotten she loved until recently, Risa whispered gently.

"Thank you for the memories."

Shocked to hear the exact same sentence that her best friend had uttered two years ago when she appeared at the airport to see her off, Ai blinked behind Risa’s hand and gulped down the lump that had formed in her throat.

What did Risa mean? Did she recall something about their past? Before she could turn her jumbled thoughts into a verbal and coherent statement, soft, tender kisses found their way onto her lips and prevented Ai from speaking.

Allowing herself to melt into Risa’s embrace as the younger’s arm snaked around her waist, Ai pulled at the lapel of Risa’s jacket and drew her in, eliminating any inch of space that had previously existed between them. Something out of the ordinary was stirring within Ai and this bizarre but wonderful sensation was making her heart beat more rapidly.

As the breathing of both girls shortened and became progressively more erratic, Ai’s cardigan was slid off her shoulders and the garment fell to the ground around her feet, wholly forgotten as the kisses deepened. Tonight, she finally realized why she hadn't been happy despite finding success in her career. The missing piece from the puzzle had been standing in front of her all along.

“It’s you.”

Breaking apart reluctantly for some desperately needed air, Ai disregarded the mixture of regret and confusion evident in those brownish eyes and declared.

“Give me another chance.”

Ai wasn’t going to relinquish the happiness that fate was generously handing her once more.  This time, the Fukui native was determined to cherish Risa with every fiber of her being.

“Let us love again.”

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Her arms were wrapped protectively around her body as she waited impatiently for the person she had arranged to meet. Before long, a figure emerged through the mist and coughed a few times into his clenched fist. Recognizing his behavior as the agreed manner to distinguish each other, she held up the hand griping tightly onto a brown envelope.

The man, whose face she could not see, made sure his features were well concealed by his hat before walking up to her. Grabbing the paper packet from her hand, he shoved a small parcel into her arms in exchange and subsequently proceeded to rip apart the paper material. Peering into the bag, he smirked, apparently very satisfied by its contents.

With quivering hands, she opened the bundle and gaped open mouthed at the single item. Did she really purchase such an article? Somewhat astounded by her own unexpected act, she slipped the cold metal into her coat pocket before folding the wrapper into small sections and discarding it in the narrow alley.

The transaction was complete and the looming stature of the male party turned on his heel about to leave. Prior to departing, he remarked.

“Hell hath no fury like a woman scorned.”

Somewhere in the distance, thunder rumbled and lightening flashed, streaking across the midnight dark sky. Several lamps illuminating the street in this dreary part of town failed at the same instant plunging the entire road into pitch black dimness.

Before this they never knew,  
The extent of their intricately intertwined lives.

Yet they would soon discover,
Providence’s penchant to make a fool of man.

And it would be too late to realize,
The fleetingness and fragility of life.


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*CRASH!*

“Let me see your hand! Did you hurt yourself?!”

Grasping nervously onto Sayumi with clammy hands, Reina studied the raven-haired woman carefully in search of any wounds that the sightless girl might have endured. Pleased that she didn’t seem to have any cuts on her body, Reina heaved a sigh of relief and steered the taller in the direction of their shared queen-sized bed.

“I’m perfectly fine Reina. You don’t have to fuss over me.”

“Nonsense, it’s only right that I take good care of my goddess.”

A bright scarlet shade colored her milky-white cheeks when Sayumi heard the audacious comment. She was embarrassed yet extremely flattered by the open adoration. As Reina busied with sweeping up the broken pieces of glass, Sayumi sat obediently on the springy mattress and waited for her girlfriend to finish cleaning up.

Being with Reina was an entirely different experience from hanging around Eri. The wonky eyed one was much more meticulous and thoughtful, her true personality vastly dissimilar from what she typically portrayed on screen. In addition, she wasn’t someone who played down her affections for others, especially towards someone as important as the bunny. How she failed to notice Reina’s excellent qualities before their getting together baffled her.

It was clear from her insistence in escorting Sayumi for her regular checkups at the hospital to the occasional trips that they made together to the convenience store in the vicinity that the ex-yankii treasured every moment of the time they spent together. When she felt the bed sink down beside her, Sayumi knew Reina had accomplished the chore and had come to sit with her. Leaning her head sideways to rest on Reina's shoulder, Sayumi breathed out contentedly.

"I love you, R-kun."
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Re: More Than One Story... [07/08 Guardian Angel: Chapter 10]
« Reply #524 on: August 07, 2009, 05:53:14 PM »
You are making me love TanaShige from this story of yours  :wub: Reina calling Sayu her Goddess makes me go fluff up inside

Ai-Risa-Eri triangle... :shocked

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Re: More Than One Story... [07/08 Guardian Angel: Chapter 10]
« Reply #525 on: August 07, 2009, 06:11:54 PM »
Eri bought a gun. Wtf.

...this is not gonna be good. >_>

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Re: More Than One Story... [07/08 Guardian Angel: Chapter 10]
« Reply #526 on: August 07, 2009, 07:25:05 PM »
You know, Hammy, I would be commenting on the amazingness that is this fic and the chapter you wrote, but...

...

Eri bought a gun. A GUN.


Shit. >_>

[bgcolor=#000000]I have a feeling that Eri isn't going to survive this fic, along with one other girl...[/bgcolor]

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Re: More Than One Story... [07/08 Guardian Angel: Chapter 10]
« Reply #527 on: August 07, 2009, 07:26:44 PM »
Ah, you finally updated this! :D (I know, I should have said that a month ago after chapter 9, but well... I've been outta it :P)

Anyway, wooo~ Risa got her memories back, eh? And Koharu filled in the holes? Between that and Sayu (which apparently some time has passed since she and Reina are now living together... I take it TakaGaki are together now too? If so, I wonder at Eri's situation aside from buying the *gulp* gun...), Eri must totally be breaking. She's just lost basically everything... So who's she gonna target? On a different subject, did she actually give the guy cash for it? He seemed to react rather strange if so... They weren't like naked pictures of her, were they?? :shocked ...ok, so I'm letting my mind run away with itself there.

Also, knowing you, I echo Essy: this is not gonna end well. >.>

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Re: More Than One Story... [07/08 Guardian Angel: Chapter 10]
« Reply #528 on: August 08, 2009, 12:10:52 PM »
Wah even koharu is scared of Eri.  Hammy san you've created a monster! XD

Hmmm if Gaki is well enough to make the phone call...that means she still hasn't taken the pills!  YAY for Gaki!  oh wait..this seems before the restaurant...well then nevermind :sweat:  at least she's still alive and well and even clued in!  YAY for Gaki! :k-thrilled:

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The impact from the collision broke apart their entwined hands and similarly, it tore Ai out of her reverie.

Nooooooooo! don't stop running~~~!!   :OMG:

Eri (or a crazed fangirl) is dealing with a drug dealer?!?!?!  *reads on*  wait...gun dealer?!  That's even worse!!!  :OMG: :OMG: :OMG:

Geh!  I can see it now~~  Eri buys the gun in hopes of scaring off Ai chan!  but her plan fails when she comes face to face with Ai chan, whose in determined love-love mode, unwilling to give Risa up even at the cost of her own life.  Thus overtime, perhaps during a reunion on tv, Eririn finally snaps and hires the drug dealer turned gun dealer to finish the job!  but the guy that she hires turns out to be the crazed guy that stabs Gaki in Last Thing On My Mind.  NOOOOOO!!  :OMG: :OMG: :OMG:

the future looks bleak!  don't stop running girls!!!!  :OMG:

sorry my mind got a little carried away  :sweat:

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Leaning her head sideways to rest on Reina's shoulder, Sayumi breathed out contentedly.  "I love you, R-kun."

kyaaaaa~ I love R-kun too  :luvluv2:

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Re: More Than One Story... [07/08 Guardian Angel: Chapter 10]
« Reply #529 on: August 08, 2009, 08:15:47 PM »
Midnight

Me loves it



Guardian Angel


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We will face everything that life throws at us together.

sweet



TakaGaki's ouches



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he slipped the cold metal into her coat pocket

Eri bought a gun.?.



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"I love you, R-kun."

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Re: More Than One Story... [07/08 Guardian Angel: Chapter 10]
« Reply #530 on: August 08, 2009, 08:39:29 PM »
Guardian Angel
Chapter 10 - The Card of Fate


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This was highly unusual as in the time that they had spent living together, the Chinese girl had discovered Koharu’s unusual fondness for clapping her hands excitedly while watching Lin Lin fool around.
That's so cute.  :oops:



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"I told her everything."

"Told who what?"

Stroking at the back of Koharu’s hand with her thumb, Lin Lin asked as she tried to stop her girlfriend from trembling.

"Niigaki-san. She seemed to have remembered something. And she made me tell. Kamei-san is going to be so mad when she finds out. She specifically told us to not talk about the accident again."
Oshit.
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When she was convinced Koharu had calmed down enough to speak, she would assure her that no matter what happened, she would be there with her every step of the way. If Koharu had to explain things to Kamei-san, she would accompany her. If their senpai wanted someone to blame for the state of affairs, Lin Lin too would be there to share the responsibility.

We will face everything that life throws at us together.
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!  :wub:



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Ai retorted desolately as she tilted her face skywards and squeezed her eyes shut. She didn't know what possessed her to grab Risa and escape from the crowded restaurant.
:stunned:



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She didn't want to cry, not in front of Risa who would probably find her outburst strange. The younger wasn't her best friend anymore, she was nothing more than an acquaintance without the recollections of all their years together.
She still doesn't know...that Risa KNOWS! :o



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"Thank you for the memories."

Shocked to hear the exact same sentence that her best friend had uttered two years ago when she appeared at the airport to see her off, Ai blinked behind Risa’s hand and gulped down the lump that had formed in her throat.

*TAKAGAKI CHU*
Well...she knows now.

...

Oh why do I feel like this just got more complicated?



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“Give me another chance.”

Ai wasn’t going to relinquish the happiness that fate was generously handing her once more.  This time, the Fukui native was determined to cherish Risa with every fiber of her being.

“Let us love again.”
:mon cute:



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Her arms were wrapped protectively around her body as she waited impatiently for the person she had arranged to meet. Before long, a figure emerged through the mist and coughed a few times into his clenched fist. Recognizing his behavior as the agreed manner to distinguish each other, she held up the hand griping tightly onto a brown envelope.

...

With quivering hands, she opened the bundle and gaped open mouthed at the single item. Did she really purchase such an article? Somewhat astounded by her own unexpected act, she slipped the cold metal into her coat pocket before folding the wrapper into small sections and discarding it in the narrow alley.
Oh shit...Eri? :O

Please say it isn't so! Please say she's not buying a gun here.
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It was clear from her insistence in escorting Sayumi for her regular checkups at the hospital to the occasional trips that they made together to the convenience store in the vicinity that the ex-yankii treasured every moment of the time they spent together. When she felt the bed sink down beside her, Sayumi knew Reina had accomplished the chore and had come to sit with her. Leaning her head sideways to rest on Reina's shoulder, Sayumi breathed out contentedly.

"I love you, R-kun."
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Re: More Than One Story... [07/08 Guardian Angel: Chapter 10]
« Reply #531 on: August 10, 2009, 12:52:05 AM »
Well, I finally decided to sit down and read this whole thread. And the only thing I can think to say is, "What is wrong with you child?!"

Jesus H. Christ on a stick! Do you have to kill everyone!?

I mean, it's not like your stories aren't wonderful, oh no. And there are plenty of stories that made me teeth fall out from sweetness, but can't you leave the others alive? The first story it happened in, I was like  :shocked OMG! And then the next couple of stories after that I couldn't help but laugh, even though you keep killing off my favorite members. And then after that I just got frustrated.

Hence, my rant.

Now, that being said, please, keep killing off the girls. I like what it does to a story, to have to have the characters deal with the death of a close friend and it also adds a certain depth of character to a person to have to work with a tragedy. After all, life goes on and you just have to deal with it, for good or bad.

The Guardian Angel story is really being to take solid shape and I think I sense the climax coming. Right? Or am I totally off? Anyway, I'm really looking forward to whatever you post next, whether it be fluff, angst, or otherwise.


P.S. I really liked the Glass Slipper story, though when Jun announced that Qian Lin was his mother, the paradox made me hit my self repeatedly in the head, despite the extreme AU circumstances. 
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Re: More Than One Story... [07/08 Guardian Angel: Chapter 10]
« Reply #532 on: August 11, 2009, 07:37:22 AM »
I'm afraid for everyone at this point - Koharu, Ai, Gaki, LinLin - because of Eri's new purchase. The fact that she even bought it in the first place proves that she's "unstable" and therefore dangerous to be around. :cry: KohaLin, TakaGaki and TanaShige are cute though~ :wub:

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Re: More Than One Story... [07/08 Guardian Angel: Chapter 10]
« Reply #533 on: August 19, 2009, 02:44:04 PM »
Midnight
Chapter 3
 

Dinner was a long and arduous event and Sayumi would have been bored to tears if the meal had gone on for another second. Thankfully the prince had been called away abruptly to attend to an urgent matter and Kamei had to leave with him.
 
Glad that the soldier who persisted in casting her odd looks throughout the unbearable ninety minutes was gone for now, Sayumi could at last exhale the breath which she had been unconsciously holding in at intermittent times. At first, the intruder to the peaceful kingdom panicked, afraid that the prince's right hand man had recognized her as a member of a rival nation. Fortunately, her fears proved to be unfounded, at least for now.
 
After walking Takahashi back to her room, Sayumi had intended to return to her own chamber and turn in for the night. Nevertheless, she didn't count on her feet taking her someplace other than her original destination. Currently standing outside a particular door, her midnight dark eyes lingered on the rough oak material as she struggled internally. Should she or shouldn't she knock?
 
Extremely curious about the cause of his absence from the dinner that evening and not entirely convinced by Kamei's half-hearted reply when Ai made the query, Sayumi decided to seek for the true answer herself. Rapping her knuckles on the well worn wood, she tried to think up a believable excuse for her visit so late in the night. Now that she knew about the steadfast adoration they held for each other, she could always claim that Ai had sent her.  
 
*Knock knock*
 
After waiting for an undisclosed period of time, there appeared to be a lack of movement in the room. Finding it somewhat peculiar, Sayumi pressed one ear against the heavy entry. It was then when she heard it. The faint but unmistakable sound of footsteps headed for the door.
 
Unexpectedly, the sound of something heavy smashing into the floor was heard. This was followed by a muffled thump and then there was silence. Before she knew what she was doing, Sayumi was pounding frantically on the door, trying to push it open. Miraculously, the door gave way and swung inwards, revealing the dim interior of a simply furnished chamber. Stepping inside hesitantly, the visitor scanned the small area for the source of the strange noise.  
 
Someone was twisted in an uncomfortable heap on the floor and an overturned chair laid a short distance away which Sayumi presumable had been tilted over when he collapsed. Rushing to his side and dropping onto her hand and knees, she noticed blood oozing out in a trail from underneath his left side.

Due to the poor illumination, she could not immediately locate the wound or the source of the blood. It took a while for her eyes to adjust to the darkness and when they were accustomed, she placed a hand on his shoulder and rolled him over onto his back. The cotton material of his shirt was drenched through and she had to peel open the garment to access the injury. Even in the dim light, she could see the severe slash which had sliced across his body. It ran across his side and ended a few inches above his waist.
 
Despite having been trained in healing by her mother from a young age, Sayumi had to swallow hard to prevent the food she had just ingested from rising again. The splayed open gash was still raw, its edges crusted with thick globs of blood and tissue. Touching his face with one hand, she heaved a sigh of relief when she felt the faint warmth of his breath.
 
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His hair was slicked back and water droplets dripped freely from the edge of his strong jaw line. Studying his handsome face with a contented smile on her face, she felt safe in his arms which encircled her slim body protectively.
 
“When will you tell father? I can’t wait to be your bride.”
 
The cool draft of the night air brushed against her face and the thin white gown she wore was completely transparent as it clung to her body like second skin.
 
“When I become a knight worthy of your hand. Promise to wait for me?”
 
The dark mossy green water of the lake glistened as the moonlight reflected off its surface like a giant polished mirror. This was their meeting place, a secret lagoon that they had stumbled upon as children exploring the forest.
 
“Forever.”
 
She was caught in a dream, a beautiful one which she didn't want to wake up from. Nonetheless, the insistent tapping from afar threatened to pull her back from the wonderful haven. Startled awake by the racket, she cracked open her eyes to darkness and her body sagged with disappointment when she realized it was only a dream. A delusion of the world she once lived in, a life which she possessed a long time ago.
 
Groggy with sleep, she slid from the bed and dragged her tired body to the door reluctantly. Grabbing onto the handle, she released the latch and came face to face with Sayumi who standing in the hallway holding onto a lighted candlestick. Even though she did not speak, Sayumi’s grim expression shot a stab of crippling fear through her heart.
 
It’s Niigaki…
 
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The room was hot, so stifling and suffocating that Ai found it hard to breathe. Yet, only a single candle burned in the corner. It was evident that the heat was coming from him. Wholly frozen at the threshold of the bedroom, Ai could not take a single step forwards despite willing herself to do so.
 
“I can’t do this.”
 
You have to. Unless you want to see him die.
 
Steering Ai to the bed, Sayumi squeezed the older woman’s clammy hands in a bid to reassure her.  
 
Hold him down while I stitch the wound close. The tissue around it is tender and it will be very painful.
 
Choking back what would have been a shriek, Ai tried to focus on keeping a damp cloth pressed on his forehead as Niigaki writhed back and forth from a combination of the fever and pain. A steady stream of blood trickled down his side, soaking her hands as Sayumi worked with a needle and fine thread. Finally after what seemed like an interminable amount of time, Sayumi was done with the painstaking process.
 
Are you alright?
 
Noticing that Ai hadn’t spoken a word since the beginning of the procedure, Sayumi asked concerned.
 
“W-will..will..he survive?”
 
Resting her gaze on the sickly telltale flush staining his cheeks and his chapped lips, Sayumi contemplated. Before she could mouth a reply, Ai exclaimed suddenly.
 
“I have to go! Day is breaking and I can’t be seen here.”
 
Gathering the soft fabric of her night gown in her hands, Ai fled the room in a hurry, but not before leaving behind instructions for her newfound friend.
 
“Please take care of him Sayumi. I beg you.”
 
Left suddenly alone with an injured man, Sayumi gasped at her predicament. What had she gotten herself into? She was not a maid. Her real identity was the middle child and oldest daughter of the deceased king and queen of Mikakuto. Indignant at being ordered about like a servant, Sayumi decided to rebel against the command given by the future queen of Sukonbu.
 
Leaning over the patient’s upper body to retrieve her medical pouch, Sayumi jumped when Niigaki’s body seized and he cried out, the demons of the fever clutching him in their fiery hold.
 
“How could you agree to marry him?”
 
Astonished by the hand that had clamped onto her wrist, Sayumi glanced down and locked gazes with the brown eyes which had fluttered open. Recognizing that they were blinded by the haze of the fever, Sayumi knew he had probably mistaken her for someone else. And she had a feeling that the woman in question was none other than one Takahashi Ai.
 
"How could you break our promise?"
 
Dunking the cloth Ai had used previously into the bowl of cool water sitting by the bedside, Sayumi placed it on Niigaki's brow, hoping that her action would sooth his restless state. Surely enough, the delirious mutterings ceased and he fell still, his eyes closing once again. In spite of that, his grip on her wrist did not loosen and he drew her nearer, linking his fingers with hers.

Rising her finely plucked brows at the turn of events, Sayumi bit onto her lower lip lightly as a bizarre sensation welled up in her chest. An explosion of butterflies seemed to have erupted in her tummy and her heart felt as if it was about to burst. Shaking her head quickly to chase away the thoughts which she knew she should not have, Sayumi became aware of the heat which burnt her hand like a fiery inferno. Niigaki’s condition seemed severe and she wondered if he would live through this. If he died, it would mean one less warrior for her brother to fight against in battle. Except that, the beautiful princess of Mikakuto wouldn't be happy if this did happen.


 
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Re: More Than One Story... [19/08 Midnight: Chapter 3]
« Reply #534 on: August 19, 2009, 04:29:41 PM »
*gasp* S-someone tried to kill Gaki?! :shocked (Dammit Hammy!!! Why must you do this to us?! :lol: ) Ai-chan's dream was pretty cute~ Hopefully, Gaki will live and be able to really marry Ai-chan...if Sayu doesn't let him die. :sweatdrop:

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« Reply #535 on: August 19, 2009, 04:50:34 PM »
Holy crap, I guess I should be used to it though I hope Gaki lives. The whole Takagaki plot line is terribly romantic and I further love Sayu's moral quandary. I mean, these people have been nothing but kind to her (except Reina, but, well, it's Reina) and there's no way she has the constitution to betray someone anyway. Well, maybe, but I sorely doubt it.

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Re: More Than One Story... [19/08 Midnight: Chapter 3]
« Reply #536 on: August 20, 2009, 01:54:27 PM »
*Sukoshi let's out a long breath*  :stuffed:

Whew!  It's hard holding your breath and your lunch at the same time   :on spit:  ...the blood...and the stitching...how I ever watch medical dramas is a true mystery....though my eyes are closed most of the time...

head still a little faint  :dizzy:  Poor Sukos...I mean poor Gaki :sweat:

Such a romantic dream  :luvluv2:  

Gaki better live...(and don't give him fever induced brain damage either)!  I would hate it if Eric had to hunt down Sayu with his own hands!   :mon scare:

Oh!  and now that Sayu's in love with the wrong man....Eric better not force himself on Sayu!  Eri's already evil enough in GA  :mon whimper:  I'm hoping Eric will win by charm here and to perhaps see more of him in the next chapter...you know...after you let Gaki live that is :sweat:



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Re: More Than One Story... [19/08 Midnight: Chapter 3]
« Reply #537 on: August 21, 2009, 01:02:11 AM »
Midnight
Chapter 3


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Dinner was a long and arduous event and Sayumi would have been bored to tears if the meal had gone on for another second. Thankfully the prince had been called away abruptly to attend to an urgent matter and Kamei had to leave with him.
Hmmmm...so Kamei's been making googly-eyes and/or trying to "woo" Sayu (my guess is badly) throughout the meal?



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At first, the intruder to the peaceful kingdom panicked, afraid that the prince's right hand man had recognized her as a member of a rival nation. Fortunately, her fears proved to be unfounded, at least for now.
Problem for Sayu, is that if Kamei keeps trying to woo her, it increases the chances of him finding out who she really is.



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*SAYU GOES TO GAKI'S ROOM*
:OMG:

Betcha Sayu didn't expect to have to deal with something like this.



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*AICHAN'S DREAM*
Damn, chou raburabu desu yooooooooooooooooooo. :yep:

Shit, that makes this whole being "betrothed" thing even more suxxors for Aichan and Gaki. :(



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*AICHAN-SAYU PERFORM EMERGENCY SURGERY*
Now let's just hope he pulls through. :O



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Ai exclaimed suddenly.
 
“I have to go! Day is breaking and I can’t be seen here.”
 
Gathering the soft fabric of her night gown in her hands, Ai fled the room in a hurry, but not before leaving behind instructions for her newfound friend.
 
“Please take care of him Sayumi. I beg you.”
Yeah, gotta love nosey gossipers.  :-\



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Sayumi gasped at her predicament. What had she gotten herself into? She was not a maid. Her real identity was the middle child and oldest daughter of the deceased king and queen of Mikakuto. Indignant at being ordered about like a servant, Sayumi decided to rebel against the command given by the future queen of Sukonbu.
Uh-oh...don't tell me she's going to ensrue that Gaki doesn't survive? :o



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Sayumi jumped when Niigaki’s body seized and he cried out, the demons of the fever clutching him in their fiery hold.
 
“How could you agree to marry him?”
 
Astonished by the hand that had clamped onto her wrist, Sayumi glanced down and locked gazes with the brown eyes which had fluttered open. Recognizing that they were blinded by the haze of the fever, Sayumi knew he had probably mistaken her for someone else. And she had a feeling that the woman in question was none other than one Takahashi Ai.
 
"How could you break our promise?"
Like I said...the whole being "betrothed" thing majorly suxxors for them. :cry:



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Sayumi bit onto her lower lip lightly as a bizarre sensation welled up in her chest. An explosion of butterflies seemed to have erupted in her tummy and her heart felt as if it was about to burst. Shaking her head quickly to chase away the thoughts which she knew she should not have, Sayumi became aware of the heat which burnt her hand like a fiery inferno. Niigaki’s condition seemed severe and she wondered if he would live through this. If he died, it would mean one less warrior for her brother to fight against in battle. Except that, the beautiful princess of Mikakuto wouldn't be happy if this did happen.
Ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooh boy.  :-X

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Re: More Than One Story... [19/08 Midnight: Chapter 3]
« Reply #538 on: August 21, 2009, 02:07:14 AM »
x____x Oh no. TakaGakiSayu! ;___; Broken TakaGaki, and... Kamei still worries me. >_> I have a feeling he'll find out about Sayu if he follows her enough.

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Re: More Than One Story... [19/08 Midnight: Chapter 3]
« Reply #539 on: August 21, 2009, 03:22:25 PM »
Whoa! Sayu's in big trouble

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