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Re: More Than One Story... [Guardian Angel: Chap 2 - Between Then and Now]
« Reply #100 on: June 22, 2008, 10:57:49 AM »
DUDE!!!!!!!!!!

That was beyond good.... why do you leave me with such a cliff hanger  :cry: srsly though... that was a wickedly good chapter. Simple, seamless, and well written. I want chapter 3 now...NOW!!!  :(
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Re: More Than One Story... [Guardian Angel: Chap 2 - Between Then and Now]
« Reply #101 on: June 22, 2008, 01:15:09 PM »
damn you. Killing your fav idols again?! What the hell is wrong with you?!?!?!?!

So Sayu died first? Please let there NOT be a part 3... haha.

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Re: More Than One Story... [Guardian Angel: Chap 2 - Between Then and Now]
« Reply #102 on: June 22, 2008, 02:07:55 PM »
I think I'm gonna faint now! :imdead:
That was sooo intense, many tears tried to escape my eyes but alas, they shall wait till I know MOAR!!!
You just knocked the wind out of me!
I'm mad at Gaki but also feel for her so much... Poor Ai, she must be hurting a lot inside right now, she's the leader, in her eyes (and heart) she should always be able to help them and she may have just failed them all (not that any of it's her fault) :cry:
As soon as you mentioned how cold Sayu's hand was I started freaking out. Internal bleeding?

Oh please don't leave as hanging for too long!
I hate you right now, but I also love you so very much coz you are incredible :heart: :wub:

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Re: More Than One Story... [Guardian Angel: Chap 2 - Between Then and Now]
« Reply #103 on: June 23, 2008, 09:22:21 AM »
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"Sayumi, I don't know if I should be asking you this at such a juncture, but did something happen between you and Eri? It's not like you at all to leave her behind."
It was pretty obvious, wasn't it?  :sweatdrop:



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"Life is one time Ai-chan. Stop running away."

....

"What do you mean by that? I'm not running away from anything."

Sighing, Sayumi in a manner as if she were speaking to a small child, persevered with a pained and resigned voice.

"You are running away from Gaki-san and your relationship with her."

"Nonsense! There isn't any relationship between us at all."
Best of intentions, but still denser than a 3-year old Xmas fruitcake.  :oops:



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"Look! A car's coming!"

Highly excited that they might soon be rescued,

...

Ai released her hand from Sayumi's arm and climbed on all fours to reach the top.

"Hurry Sayumi. We have to get up there before the car passes us."

...

"Miss, there seems to be a girl on the road."

The astonished voice of the driver jolted Reina out of her daydream and she jabbed at the button to wind the passenger window down. Sticking her head out only to be met by the rush of wind whizzing pass the speeding automobile, Reina squinted hard to locate the figure on the highway. Not daring to believe her eyes, she blinked as the shadowy outline of Ai became clearer.

"Ai-chan!"
:w00t:

Now get the taxi driver to pull over! :muffin:



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The howling winds that suddenly picked up carried Reina's voice away into the distance and Ai did not manage to detect the sound of a friendly and familiar friend. Although the voice of another member of their closely knit group found its way into her ears.

"Ai-chan, tell Eri I love her!"

"Did you say something Sayumi?"
Oh I've got a bad feeling about this. Please don't say that Sayu fell back down the hill when Aichan let go of her arm, or worse.
:scared: :cry:



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Risa tired to keep the injured girl warm and as comfortable as she could with the limited resources available. Eri was considerably quieter than before and her sobs were sounding weaker as time passed. Seeing her fragile state, Risa began to grow frantic with worry.

"Stay with me Kame, don't close your eyes."

"Gaki-san, I'm tired."

Struggling to keep her eyes open, Eri's eyelids felt heavy as they threatened to close, slipping her into a state of unconsciousness.
Oh shit, Eri has a concussion!
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"Kame! I like you, I LIKE YOU!"

Resorting to shaking her weary confidante, Risa was desperate. Where was Ai? Where was Sayumi? She couldn't handle this alone. She couldn't watch Eri die. She didn't want to.

"I'm not staying here by myself Kame. I won't let you leave alone!"
DOUBLE OH SHIT!  :shocked:




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"Calm down Ai-chan. Speak slowly."

...

She started the tale with their journey to the supermarket at the outskirts of the town, how a rumbling ten ton truck wandered onto the same path as their taxi, the dangerous tumble down the steep ravine, Risa staying behind to take care of Eri and at the end concluded the story with how Sayumi chose to follow her to find help.

"She was with me Reina, Sayumi was with me the whole time."
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEHHH?!?!?!?
:stunned:

But then...how did Eri "see" Sayu there when "she" and Aichan went for help??? :O




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"You are so beautiful Kame, more beautiful than what the eye can see. I can't let you leave alone, because I can't survive without seeing your smile."

Bringing a shard of broken glass up to her flawless skin and pressing it down, Risa watched dazed as a thin red line formed on her left wrist. Applying more pressure, she made the cut deeper until the scarlet blood flowed freely and dripped with steady rhythm from her elbow.

I'm sorry Ai-chan but Kame needs me more.
RISA NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!
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Re: More Than One Story... [Guardian Angel: Chap 2 - Between Then and Now]
« Reply #104 on: July 11, 2008, 04:28:43 PM »
Is this story stupid? I hope it's not too stupid *spazzes out* I wrote it in a rush and yes, I know it really isn't too long. I hope it's still okay though *worried*



Prince Charming


Once upon a time, in a busy part of Tokyo city lived a long raven-haired maiden with silky white complexion and ebony black eyes. Blessed with a beautiful face and striking features, she was constantly enveloped by approving looks and was never short of faithful admirers. Nevertheless, the young female never wavered in her belief that her prince charming would one day arrive on a handsome white steed and sweep her off her feet to complete the magical experience. She had set her heart on a certain prince back in 2007 as she watched mesmerized by the tall and lanky figure rendering a farewell song to the fans in appreciation of their support for the last seven years. The chosen one was none other than Yoshizawa Hitomi, ex-leader of Morning Musume and current captain of Hello! Project’s futsal team.

Now, as she sat in front of her dresser, with her pretty head propped up by her hands, she felt her spirits soar as she dreamt once again of that prince gliding in through her room door and wrapping her safe and snug in her strong and secure arms. Sayumi closed her eyes to replay the scene countless times within her mind although the nagging thought of Hitomi being so far away from her now and being regularly surrounded in the company of Ishikawa Rika and Satoda Mai made her feel depressed yet again.

Pushing herself up from the matching low stool of the white pine dresser, Sayumi heaved a resigned sigh at the thought of possibly never meeting a prince that could truly belong to her and her alone. Deciding to cheer herself up by taking a nice warm bath, Sayumi walked over to her enormous wardrobe and absentmindedly picked out a t-shirt from the top of the pile closest to her hand. Spinning around, she headed for her bathroom with the intention of keeping herself there until she could wash away all of the fatigue that had accumulated from the entire day of tedious rehearsals for the Cinderella musical. Alas the sharp and rapid knocking on her door disrupted her perfect plan.

“Gaki-san?”

Her eyes widening as she looked up at the face staring down at her, Sayumi gulped at the surprising attractiveness of her sub-leader at the new angle.

“The one and only. So, what time do you want that morning call tomorrow?”

Still dressed in her practice outfit of light khaki t-shirt and dark track pants, Niigaki Risa had released her long brownish hair from the loose ponytail she had hastily tied during practice. Nonetheless the white leather boots that were a part of the prince’s costume were still on her feet and hence Risa stood at a height remarkably taller than what she usually was.

“Huh?”

Stunned at how boyishly handsome Risa looked, Sayumi could only gawk open-mouthed as her brain refused to process the string of words leaving Risa’s mouth.

“I’m glad Ai-chan and I decided to implement the morning call idea. You clearly need it.”

Giving her a teasing smirk, Risa didn’t realize her little action only made Sayumi brain shut down further and the girl felt so weak in the knees she almost collapsed if not for how hard she was gripping onto the wooden door frame.

Cocking an eyebrow at her kouhai’s strange reaction, Risa shrugged her shoulders and decided to let the matter go. She figured the stress and weariness of their tight rehearsal schedule was probably getting to all of them and causing Sayumi’s bizarre behavior. Glancing further down, she noticed the pink shirt that was hanging on Sayumi’s arm.

“Are you planning to wear that?”

“Huh?”

Weakly repeating the solitary word that she had uttered for the past minutes, Sayumi could only dumbly nod in reply to the question posed. However, she didn’t expect Risa to abruptly push past her and make her way into her bedroom. Sauntering straight to her wardrobe, Risa flung open both doors and her head vanished for a second as she peered in at the endless mounds of clothing. In the subsequent moment, her head reappeared and she came up to Sayumi for a second time.

“I’ve said it once and I’ll say it again. I forbid you to wear the shirts of any band other than our own. Is that understood Sayumin?”

Snatching away the said ‘Idoling’ shirt, Risa tossed it carelessly onto the bed then inched closer until their noses almost met. Risa’s steady gaze captured Sayumi’s vision and the younger found herself filled with giddy excitement and the indubitable feeling of breathlessness. Her trance was only broken when Risa brought a hand up and flicked lightly at her nose with her thumb and second finger.

“Stop having that expression on your face. Or I might find it hard to resist how cute you look.”

Flashing her a final smile, Risa stuffed the shirt she had picked out into Sayumi’s arms before exiting the small but cozy room.

“Good night Sayumin.”

Looking down at the green shirt she held in her hands, a wide smile emerged on Sayumi’s face as her brain started to kick in again.

Gaki-san’s so charming and suave! The way she ordered me around was so manly!

Burying her face in the shirt, Sayumi squealed with elated joy.

“I’ve found my Nii prince charming!”
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Re: More Than One Story... [Prince Charming]
« Reply #105 on: July 11, 2008, 05:01:12 PM »
Aww that was so sweet, Sayu's got a new Prince Charming :oops:

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Re: More Than One Story... [Prince Charming]
« Reply #106 on: July 12, 2008, 04:23:31 AM »
(lol good god I actually tired to understand KonaKaga's comment on Guardian Angel...oww...my poor brain XD )

Prince Charming  :wub:

hehe Hammy san you worry too much :lol:  The story wasn't stupid and it was more than just okay!  It was all kinds of satisfying  :inlove:  I loved how you mixed in fairytale writing into the story...for the first bit there I thought it was going to be AU...I also thought her prince charming would be Prince Eric  XD.  lol I think I had this stupid grin on my face all the way throughout the story once bishi Gaki showed up..or maybe my expression was more like this  :wriggly:   I'm liking this GakiSayuness <3  That was a good read!   :stuffed:

now having said that, I can join KonaKaga in saying more Guardian Angel~~~~~~~ hehe no pressure of course..I'm sure you'll update when you get inspired  :luvuluvu:

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Re: More Than One Story... [Prince Charming]
« Reply #107 on: July 12, 2008, 04:59:11 AM »
xDDDDDD I was waiting for someone to write about Gaki-san's recent manliness.

This story was insanely adorable :3 With Gaki-san being obliviously manly, roffle x3. She should do it more often, send more minds reeling xDDD... Starstruck Sayu is hilarious xDDDD Gaki-san doesn't even know she makes people speechless with her princeliness... xDD

Write moar of obliviously manly Gaki-san~ :3 A certain lil angsty leader needs it! -whistles when Aichan walks by-

But I also look forward to the other story too. Hmm. Choices...

xD Just update something soon, already~  :heart: :heart: :heart:

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Re: More Than One Story... [Prince Charming]
« Reply #108 on: July 12, 2008, 10:30:33 AM »
*squeals with Sayumi* :heart: :heart:
OMG! Nii Prince Charming!!  :wub: :wub:

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Re: More Than One Story... [Prince Charming]
« Reply #109 on: July 12, 2008, 05:11:37 PM »
Loved how you started the story <3

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Risa tossed it carelessly onto the bed then inched closer until their noses almost met. Risa’s steady gaze captured Sayumi’s vision and the younger found herself filled with giddy excitement and the indubitable feeling of breathlessness.

I was dying here   :mon lovelaff: ... this was awesomely all doki-doki

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Her trance was only broken when Risa brought a hand up and flicked lightly at her nose with her thumb and second finger.
But theeeeen Gaki killed

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“I’ve found my Nii prince charming!”
thankfully Sayu saved it  :oops: :oops: :oops: :oops: :oops: :oops: :oops: :oops: :oops: :oops:

Again... GREAT story.... sayuXgaki :rockon:  you're getting me addicted to them XD


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You know I love GakiKame! I MUST KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!! UPDATE!!!!!!! Please don't say that Risa killed herself and Eri didn't really die! Either way let them be together!  :bleed eyes: :OMG: :frustrated: :k-crazy: :gyaaah:
I shall be waiting in a dark corner for your update... :fainted:

QFT! I completely understand you! *brings cookies and joins KonaKaga in the dark corner*
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Re: More Than One Story... [Prince Charming]
« Reply #110 on: July 13, 2008, 06:34:08 AM »
At first I thought this was going to be a YossiShige shot, but then you brought in Risa in her Cinderella outfit. :lol:

Can't help but giggle at Sayu's giddyness. :lol:

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Re: More Than One Story... [Prince Charming]
« Reply #111 on: July 15, 2008, 06:48:36 AM »
I got confused at first.. I thought it was during Yossi's grad concert.

Hmm... you seem to be having a mini ShigeGaki addiction huh?

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Re: More Than One Story... [Prince Charming]
« Reply #112 on: July 15, 2008, 09:43:59 AM »
I got a few requests for the next chapter of "Guardian Angel." I'm really surprised that this fic is popular, well kinda popular :D I'll work on that soon. I just need to get the Cinderella inspired fics outta my system first :P


Fairytale



"But father!"
 
"No more buts. The ball has been decided upon and you will find your bride among the ladies that will be attending."
 
The old king was adamant and nothing seemed to be able to persuade him otherwise. Yet the young prince wasn't about to give up so easily. If there was one thing he knew could influence his father's mind, it was through the words of his kind and loving mother.
 
"Mother, please convince father..."
 
"I'm afraid your father is right this time. You are of marriageable age and a ball would be the best option for all the maidens in the land to make an appearance. I'm sure one of them would be worthy enough for you my son."
 
The couple at the helm of the safe and prosperous kingdom could not be blamed for wanting their son and only heir to the empire to settle down quickly. After all, he was to be king one day and needed to find an apposite queen of his own to stay by his side and assist him in ruling the country.
 
"Yes mother."
 
The handsome prince knew it was futile to try and resist the orders that his father had so determinedly decided on. It appears that the grand ball was going to materialize eventually and he could only dutifully attend it like a filial son should. Whether he was to really pick a bride, now that was another matter all together.
 
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"Prince, prince, come dance with me!"
 
A somewhat petite girl trapped me in a corner and subsequently pulled me to the dance floor. Seizing my hands and resting them on her waist, she gripped me in a deadlock by wrapping her arms around my neck. The position we were in was uncomfortable and rather comical to bystanders since she was obviously finding it tricky to dance on tiptoe.
 
"We would be able to dance better if you don't hang on to my neck?"
 
The maiden didn't seem to understand, or didn't want to, my subtle hint to liberate me from her persistent stronghold.
 
"Oh it's alright. I like dancing this way my prince."
 
My prince? Since when did I become her prince?
 
Trying to regain some feeling to my numb neck, which had by now threatened to lose all sensation due to the interruption of blood circulation, I moved my head to the right and caught sight of my herald standing by the refreshment table. There was the unmistakable grin on his face at seeing my predicament. So much for being my loyal aid.
 
Koharu! Drat it Koharu, get over her and get this girl off of me!
 
He caught my gaze and understood my message except that he made no move to come to my rescue and instead gradually bowed his head in shame. Apparently my trusty messenger wasn't going to save me from this abyss of torture. As my childhood friend and playmate, he was under strict orders by the king to not partake in any of my ruses to escape from participating in the dance this time. I sighed, understanding his dilemma. This was going to be a long night.
 
The break in the music permitted me a little breather as the lady, whose name was Reina, as she had so eagerly offered, at last let go of my hand for us to dance in a circle around each other. Something told me she wouldn't have done it if not for the enquiring looks the other noblemen in the hall cast her when she remained latched on to my arm even after the music had ended. She was no doubt greatly embarrassed, nevertheless I could not in the slightest way feel for her position.
 
As I moved like clockwork in tune to the next song, I glanced to the side casually and it was in this instant when I forgot to breathe. There, standing among a crowd of many other ladies, was a single girl dressed in a simple long gown. The dress was pure white and accented by pink ribbons. Her hair was done up in curls and framed her delicate face beautifully. But the one thing that attracted me to her immediately was the piercing intensity of her eyes and I found myself unable to look away. It's her, the only girl I wanted to know tonight was she. As if in a trance, my legs started moving by themselves towards where she stood. Regrettably my body failed to proceed forward as a hand fixated itself on my wrist and pulled me firmly backwards.
 
"Prince, you've danced with my sister for so long. Please dance with me too."
 
Snuggling up to me, she clutched onto the front of my clothes and placed her head on my chest. I was taken aback by her bold actions for a girl in our time. Curiously, I looked down just as she gazed up at me. Smiling bashfully, she told me her name.
 
"I'm Eri and I feel so lucky to be in your embrace Prince."
 
She hurriedly looked down again, visibly self-conscious after uttering the words she did. Still clinging onto me, she timidly snaked one arm around my waist. I had to admit, Eri astounded me once more. Eri, I even remember her name, unlike the other girl before. What was it? Rainee? Raymia? Rei... Oh whatever. It might have been possible for me to take things a step further with Eri if I hadn't see her first. Yes, the girl who I saw only briefly before. She had captivated me then and will fully captivate my entire being in the future. I could feel it within me. And I knew I needed to find her again. Looking down at Eri for a second time, I gently slid her hand off my arm and pushed her away.
 
"If I had met you first then maybe...But now my heart has been stolen by another and I know she is the only girl for me. I'm sorry Eri."
 
I could see the shock in her eyes and the heartbreaking sadness within the windows to her soul. I knew she was hurt by my words and I knew she would cry. Even so I had to remain heartless now or risk being cruel to another - the girl of my dreams. I was resolute as I turned back, leaving Eri behind to scan the hall for her. Panning the length of one side of the hall, I saw Koharu with a fork in his hand with a piece of meat dangling from it. Gesturing animatedly to one corner of the room, he pointed and flailed, spluttering as best as he could with half chew food in his mouth. Following his vague directions, I walked to the far corner of the room and once again laid eyes on the most ravishing girl that night.
 
Walking up to her, I bowed deeply and raised my hand palm up facing the sky. It was the action that any gentleman would perform to request for a dance. In my heart, I prayed that she would consent to my invitation. I had to be given the chance to dance with this angelic and mysterious girl. As if amazed that she would be approached, she smiled shyly and nodded her head in agreement before placing one small hand in mine. Enveloping her hand in my own as I closed my fingers around hers, the jolt of electricity I felt upon that first contact with her sealed everything for me. Even before the dance I knew she was going to be the one, she was going to be my destiny.
 
Leading her to the middle of the dance floor, I put one hand on her exquisite waist and grasped her right hand with my left. The music started on cue and the two of us swayed along with the melodious music. We waltzed and glided across the magnificent hall and twisted and twirled as one with an elegance matched by no other couple. Before long, everyone else stopped their own dancing and moved to the side to make room for us. It was evident that we were a fitting pair. Suitably matched in both presence and grace. Within those mere moments, I felt my heart inflate with joy at being able to hold her in my arms. I think this is what it feels like to fall in love with someone at first sight and recognizing when a person is your destined soul mate. Tonight, I had found both in one individual.
 
"May I know your name my fair lady?"
 
I tightened my hold on both her hands and she mine to extend our arms and twirl simultaneously for the final portion of the dance, all the time never breaking away from each other's gaze. The moment froze and I could only see her and she only me. The area seemed void of all people except the two of us. We were alone, in our own world. We were in love.
 
"Ai. My name in Ai."
 
And so I knew, my one and only love, my queen, her name was Ai.
 
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"I think that is enough for today. It was a good rehearsal. You should be proud of yourselves."
 
The director of the musical thanked us for our hard work before releasing us for the day. Everyone scattered across the practice room to pick up their bags and pack up their belongings. But I stayed where I last was, in the middle of the room. Only now I was alone, my partner already at the opposite end of the room speaking to one of the Takarazuka actresses. No doubt asking for comments and how to further improve her performance like always. I continued watching her every move, her smile, her actions and the way she spoke. I knew it was a stupid situation to be in and I wanted to stop myself from falling further into that obsession called love. Despite the fact that a part of me knew it was already too late.
 
Do I love you because you are beautiful or are you beautiful because I love you?
 
"Gaki-san, are you okay? You look like you're a million miles away."
 
"Kame, I was just thinking about something."

I was only half listening to Eri speak as I maintained my vision on Ai, my sight lingering on her perfect silhouette.
 
"Uh huh."
 
She seemed unconvinced and looked as if she wanted to say something else but pursed her lips instead after a moment's thought.
 
"The dancing was fun! We should do it again…only this time, I'll be Cinderella.”
 
In a manner I deemed as discreet, I ogled my leader and the object of my affections until Eri’s words jerked me out of my reverie. Turning to face her with paramount attention, I gaped stupidly at the young women who had proclaimed her desire to undertake Cinderella's role.

"Run that by me again?"


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KonaKaga: I LOVE KameMame too!! *squeals* Are you gonna write something soon? Cuz I’m experiencing a real bad GakiKame drought. I need your fic to save me soon before I wither and die  :fainted:

Sukoshi: You’re not the only one. I tried understanding that comment too XD Bishi Gaki…hmmmm….. I like  :luvluv1:

Yuuyami: Does this fic count as a TakaGaki one? I hope it does   :mon sweat:

ringo-hime: Doesn’t a squealing Sayumi seem cute  :mon inluv:

poets: Did you get that play with words? Nii Prince Charming = New Prince Charming  :mon misch:

JFC: Well, Yossi was the original prince charming. How could I leave her out  :mon thumb:

stefy: Yes I am, these days I’m going through a little GakiShige phase  :mon lovelaff:
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Re: More Than One Story... [Fairytale]
« Reply #113 on: July 15, 2008, 10:41:57 AM »
You really can't wait till the musical starts, can you now? :P XD

When the Prince first laid eyes on Ai I got goosebumps... and it's just a taste of what's to come :heart: :wub:
You're really make Gaki the Pimp now though :lol: It was GakiShige, then of course a bit of TakaGaki and then at the end (grrr!!!) GakiKame... Make up your mind Risa coz its all fun and games till someone gets hurt :cry:

About Guardian Angel, of course everyone (incl. me) are begging for an update, but that's coz you just had to go and make it so damn addictive and heartbreaking... We need to know what happened to Sayu, Eri and if help gets to Gaki in time :(
You have one crazy imagination there my dear, but I'm glad I enjoy it :D :heart:

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Re: More Than One Story... [Fairytale]
« Reply #114 on: July 15, 2008, 11:44:12 AM »
X3 That was so cute :wub: Lol it looks like Eri might want some Gaki lovin' :twisted:
I propose you a deal. If you write the next chapter of GA then I shall write you a KameMame story. How does that sound? You cannot resist the power of turtles and beans!
TURTLES!
BEANS!
Muahaha
I can make it mushy if you want as well, or angst.
:O I'm leaving for a 9-11 car journey soon! Ugh, the first out of 4 of them. So yeah 600 miles each time -_-'
I shall still have internet while I'm gone though (not while I'm driving XD)
Oh! I have a new therory of how GA might turn out :O
Eri and Sayu die but Ai and Risa survive. So basically it ends up KameShige and TakaGaki...?
:(
I shall still be waiting in that dark corner with poets.... :fainted:
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You better save me before I die so that I can write you that story :P
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Re: More Than One Story... [Fairytale]
« Reply #115 on: July 15, 2008, 11:56:08 AM »
Oh! I have a new therory of how GA might turn out :O
Eri and Sayu die but Ai and Risa survive. So basically it ends up KameShige and TakaGaki...?
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Oooh I like that idea :w00t: It may be sadistic of me, but at least I would get what I want in the end :twisted:
Although it would make Ai sloppy seconds for Risa seeing Kame is gone, and that really sucks :(
Maybe Ai should go almost die and Gaki will feel she has to love her the most too :D
I have a feeling I'm not gonna like Risa too much in GA :o
Why am I still typing, I've already commented here recently... I should be off make Hammy-sama a present :oops:
Oh well, this ranting is more fun... or more annoying? XD

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I shall still be waiting in that dark corner with poets.... :fainted:
Wait what!? There is a dark corner with poets AND KonaKaga? I am sooo there  :w00t:
It's dark so they won't be able to see whose hand is touching them in inappropriate areas :twisted:
WTF?!?! why haven't I shut up yet :roll:

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Re: More Than One Story... [Fairytale]
« Reply #116 on: July 15, 2008, 12:10:23 PM »
GakiKame~ XD in the last part. but awesome. moar Cinderella inspi' fics XD
ganbare~  :cow:

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Re: More Than One Story... [Fairytale]
« Reply #117 on: July 15, 2008, 12:19:29 PM »
I'm so glad the musical has inspired at least one person to write.. well i guess there's more, just no one else posted...
What else can i say ... oh right  comment  :sweatdrop: ...

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Realy liked the GakiSayu pairing you've created .. they do get along well.. besides two tsukkomis is always fun read... i think this pairing comes in the 3rd place as my fave Gaki pairings ..

Fairytale
At first i thought you just made a Cinderella/Christopher fic without the relation to the actor who play them. Then when you mentioned their "real" names and also knowing your preferences, it led me to the second part ..
Gaki staring at Ai and completely oblivious to Kame's attempts..

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Re: More Than One Story... [Fairytale]
« Reply #118 on: July 15, 2008, 01:53:51 PM »
Fairytale  :heart:  (oddly enough I was listening to the song Fairytale (Tong Hua) while reading this...thank god it's two totally different things...if you know the song that is...)  anyways Fairytale  :heart: :heart:  I loved how I was completely fooled by the first half!...I was so well engrossed in Gaki's fantasy that being pulled into the reality of the story was mildly startling..*had to blink a couple of times*  oh how easily you captivate me with your settings  :wub:  Though I must say the second half does have it's perks...I love Eri's boldness...too bad it's lost on Gaki  :P

on another note, I'm so glad that there will be more GA to come!...withdrawal is a terrible thing...*sees poets and KonaKaga...and lollipopgirl touching...someone in the dark dark corner*  :-X  luckily I wisely chose to wait in this bush instead... 8)

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Re: More Than One Story... [Fairytale]
« Reply #119 on: July 16, 2008, 10:36:52 PM »
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"The dancing was fun! We should do it again…only this time, I'll be Cinderella.”
 
In a manner I deemed as discreet, I ogled my leader and the object of my affections until Eri’s words jerked me out of my reverie. Turning to face her with paramount attention, I gaped stupidly at the young women who had proclaimed her desire to undertake Cinderella's role.

"Run that by me again?"
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