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Re: Estrea's Sandbox [08/27 - Prisoner of Love]
« Reply #240 on: September 13, 2008, 11:25:52 PM »
WOO! -dibs- :heart:

Alright, lemme see if I can do this before dinner. XD

I love the text messages XD Short, but they really show the everyones personalities. I was hoping for Reinai LOL but you came out with Takagaki in the end, figures! XD Either way, awesome! ^_^

Oh, and the Nakazawa part made me LOL :lol:
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Re: Estrea's Sandbox [09/14 - Messages]
« Reply #241 on: September 13, 2008, 11:30:30 PM »
Aw, Takagaki love. <3 The GoRokkie love~ :) I love this fic. Happy birthday Ai-chan! ^-^

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Re: Estrea's Sandbox [09/14 - Messages]
« Reply #242 on: September 13, 2008, 11:56:00 PM »
That was adorable!!! :inlove: KYAAA~ Ok, we'll pretend I never did that. :lol: Love how cute the Rokkies are but obviously, I loved Gaki's message the best. Great present for Ai-chan. Can't believe it's already been a year: I can still remember your fic from last year, 21. Ah~ natsukashii
Anyway, great job, Estrea-san!

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Re: Estrea's Sandbox [09/14 - Messages]
« Reply #243 on: September 14, 2008, 07:29:56 AM »
But of course Risa would get it perfectly on the dot and be the first person to msg Aichan on her birthday. :wub: The messages from the Rokkies were cute, but they sent their msgs before midnight, so technically it was not yet her birthday when they did it. :D



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Re: Estrea's Sandbox [09/14 - Messages]
« Reply #244 on: September 14, 2008, 07:58:39 AM »
KYAAAH! Such a cute fic... And it's TakaGaki!  :cow:
I was pretty much expecting ReinAi. :P
But there's some of it, too, if you look hard enough. :)

Good job! :yep:

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Re: Estrea's Sandbox [09/14 - Messages]
« Reply #245 on: September 14, 2008, 03:25:06 PM »
Awwwwww, aw aw! :heart:
XD at all the Rokkies, they just have to get in before Gaki... But in Eri's case I was thinking it was so she could just go to bed and didn't have to wait up anymore :P
The msgs were all so true to character for each girl, makes me wonder if you're psychic and that's actually close to what Ai would have received :lol:
Risa's message, awwwwwwwww, I'm sure you're not reading too much into it Ai, she did want to say more... One day, you'll both get the guts. :wub:

TakaGaki forever :heart: And once again, Happy Birthday Ai-chan, there's still 1.5 hours left :D

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Re: Estrea's Sandbox [09/14 - Messages]
« Reply #246 on: September 14, 2008, 05:00:00 PM »
OHH that was sweet~  :wub:

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Re: Estrea's Sandbox [09/14 - Messages]
« Reply #247 on: September 14, 2008, 06:09:28 PM »
*randomly goes to JPHIP* *realizes Estrea didn't tell her about the new story she posted ~.~* *reads new story ^-^*

Like Sai posted earlier, the text messages were really good... totally sounded like something they'd write. My favorite was Sayu's XD "untill I reach that age!" LOLOL oh~ Sayu  :wub:

I liked the begginning with Ai thinking about her age and how it effects her idol persona. The idol world really does warp your perception of what is old. And ovcos the Yuko part was  :lol:

Love that it ended with Takagaki (though I sorta new that already XD)

I wonder if Ai will ever trully know why she got those messages at those.... particular moments XD
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Re: Estrea's Sandbox [09/14 - Messages]
« Reply #248 on: September 14, 2008, 10:03:18 PM »
Awww, I loved it! It's very sweet, and it matches perfectly with the birthday theme. The messages from the girls were so like them, lol.  :lol:

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Re: Estrea's Sandbox [09/14 - Messages]
« Reply #249 on: September 15, 2008, 01:02:33 PM »
I can't believe it's this time of year already!  why I still remember reading Ai chan 21st birthday fics like they were written just yesterday....it's scary how time passes so fast XD

but anyways that was sooo sweeet!   :shy2:  I just knew Gaki was going to be the one to wish her happy bday at midnight!  That just made it perfect! 

now that my mind is all sugary~

*fangirl dreams* Ai chan txting Gaki aishiteru for her upcoming bday in return~  :shy1:


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Re: Estrea's Sandbox [09/14 - Messages]
« Reply #250 on: September 16, 2008, 08:32:14 AM »
I thought Eri was the one who sends birthday messages on the dot :D No matter though since I'm always up for a good TakaGaki fic. I'm so happy you decided to write this pairing instead of your favourite one. Thankies!! :wub: Oh and I totally agree about how each girl's message sounds like what they would write. You get into their heads so well! I guess that's how a genius is :)

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Re: Estrea's Sandbox [09/14 - Messages]
« Reply #251 on: October 11, 2008, 08:10:03 PM »
Haha.....glad everyone liked the birthday story. And more on the birthday thing, because Sayu is awesome and told us what she gave Ai for her birthday. XD

A really really short fluffy story. XD Written while I had a headache, so no promises about quality...~_~ Enjoy!

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Cupcakes


"Kame! Time to wake up~" An insistent voice poked incessantly against the slumbering aura of one drowsy turtle, who was currently sprawled all over in a chair and nodding off quite ostentatiously.

"Nnngh...5 more minutes..." Eri mumbled, shifting to curl up into herself.

"Gaki-san! That won't work. Let me try." A pause. "Eririn! The staff just brought in a plate of umeboshi! Wake up before Junjun eats it all!"

"Bbbrughwha?" A stream of gibberish erupted from the turtle, who nearly fell off her chair in her haste to wake up. A still groggy Eri peered around shortsightedly, trying to figure out what just happened.

Risa giggled at the sight, even as Sayumi flashed a triumphant peace sign. Eri just stared at them, not registering anything as her brain rebooted, flashing the word 'umeboshi' repeatedly as it started up again.

"Where?" Eri mumbled, looking around frantically. Risa just laughed again, poking Eri's cheek.

"Sleepyhead, it's almost time for rehearsal!" Eri glanced at the clock. "Already?" She pouted, already beginning to whine as Sayu planted herself next to her best friend.

"Yeah..." One glance around the room produced some notable absentees. Risa absently picked a lint off Eri's shoulder as she asked, looking at Sayumi.

"Have you seen Ai-chan yet?" The narcissist shook her head in reply. Risa looked up again, noting where everyone was.

Reina was chumming around with Aika off to one side, and judging from the chocolate smear on the corner of the young 8th gen member's mouth, the two were on a chocolate trip again. For someone who keeps wanting to watch her weight, Risa knew that Reina's one weakness was sweets, chocolate in particular. Ah well, the girl was stick thin to begin with, so it probably didn't hurt that much.

Junjun had just wandered in, nibbling absently on a piece of bread with a far off look in her eye. Linlin was nowhere in sight. Risa knew that Koharu was working off excess energy on the emergency stairs towards the back, and would be back any time now.

However, their errant leader was nowhere in view. Risa hadn't been particularly early herself, and so had missed seeing Ai in the locker room earlier. She figured that their leader was already there, given that her bag was in the room, but of the person herself there was no sign.

"Probably off talking to one of the senseis again..." Risa mumbled half to herself. Sayu had engaged a now awake Eri in conversation, and the two were practically joined at the hip, their usual practice.

Shrugging, Risa wandered over to Reina and Aika, the older of the two currently gesturing and talking about something in her usual animated way, and Aika just lounging in her chair, although she did appear to be paying attention.

Risa was about to tune in to their conversation when a familiar voice said an even more familiar name.

"Ai-chan!" Sayu's voice was shocked, and Risa turned around to stare at the entrance. Behind her, Reina peered around her subleader, and Aika tilted her head backwards to stare upside down. Junjun, for her part, continued chewing quite calmly.

Silence, as the girls gaped at their tiny leader. The only sound was the scraping of the fabric on fabric when Aika decided that all the blood rushing to her head was probably unhealthy and decided to shift to a more comfortable position.

"Uso! Did you just get out of bed?" Risa was the first to exclaim. Aika shook her head, trying to settle the dizzy feeling. "But she doesn't have bed head..." The youngest of the group observed, crossing her eyes briefly in a fair imitation of Reina, who noticed immediately and smacked the her cheeky junior playfully for it.

"Hi everyone, is there something wrong?" Ai greeted quite calmly, as if nothing had happened. She did fidget a bit though, under the stares of her fellow members. "What? What is it?"

"Why did you wear pajamas to rehearsal?" Reina, as usual, got straight to the point. Ai blinked, staring around at all the other girls, who were also dressed casually.

"But I'm not..." Reina snorted and waved a hand around dismissively.

"Leader, it's definitely pajamas, no matter how you look at it." The yankii cocked her head to one side, wonky eye rolling around. "And since when did you wear something this cute to sleep?"

Ignoring that for the moment, Ai walked over to where the other two Rokkies were sitting together. Eri was still at a mild loss for what to comment on about the shirt that Ai was sporting, only managing to blurt out a "it's cute..." as her leader came close.

Smiling at the still stunned Sayu, Ai grinned, doing a little twirl for the little devil of Morning Musume.

"See, Sayu, I'm wearing it!" The 22 year old leader's grin was very much like one that was half her age, seeking approval and brimming with a kind of childish delight.

Sayumi, who had been shocked to silence by this turn of events, burst out giggling and impulsively hugged Ai, squeezing the tiny leader tightly in her arms.

"Seriously...Ai-chan...you're the best..." Sayu laughed as she released her senpai. Ai grinned a bit more tentatively, almost like a little puppy (or monkey, whatever).

"Of course, it's Sayu's present, I wanted you to see that I liked it." The leader's eyes were still lit with that infectious smile. "Thank you."

"No, thank you." Sayu smiled warmly at Ai as she linked arms with the older, heading for rehearsal. Ai looked questioningly up at her, but Sayu just shook her head and smiled even more widely.

Thank you for being such a wonderful leader, Ai-chan.


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Title is because the shirt Ai-chan is wearing has cupcake prints on it. XDDDDDDDDDD

Okie sleeping now. Tired. Hope y'all like it. XD

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Re: Estrea's Sandbox [10/12 - Cupcakes]
« Reply #252 on: October 11, 2008, 08:20:03 PM »
Awwww Kamei, I :heart: sleepy turtle.

And LOL at emergency stairs running Koha xD

When the pajamas came up I was convinced this was just a dream.

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Re: Estrea's Sandbox [10/12 - Cupcakes]
« Reply #253 on: October 11, 2008, 09:18:21 PM »
Gah, it's sleeping Eri again! <33 Much luff to that. And I lol'd when I read about Koharu and the emergency stairs. XD Ai-chan in a cupcake printed shirt...the thought of it is so...cute! XD

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Re: Estrea's Sandbox [10/12 - Cupcakes]
« Reply #254 on: October 11, 2008, 11:27:03 PM »
Off to a good start with the sleeping Eri because you can never go wrong with that! Ai-chan's missing....? Love how you describe what everyone is doing. OOOSHIT, Ai-chan forgot to change?! XD Poop, I hoped she was wearing some sort of sexy lingerie. Awww, Sayu's sweet to give Ai-chan such a freakin adorable present!! So much love here!!! :heart:

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Re: Estrea's Sandbox [10/12 - Cupcakes]
« Reply #255 on: October 12, 2008, 04:55:04 AM »
ah so cute~ <3
Ai-chan sporting sth cute from Sayu?! kawaii~ <3
sleepyhead Kamei~ <3
cuteness overload.... :]]

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Re: Estrea's Sandbox [10/12 - Cupcakes]
« Reply #256 on: October 12, 2008, 05:12:25 AM »
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"Gaki-san! That won't work. Let me try." A pause. "Eririn! The staff just brought in a plate of umeboshi! Wake up before Junjun eats it all!"

"Bbbrughwha?" A stream of gibberish erupted from the turtle, who nearly fell off her chair in her haste to wake up.
Junjun's all about bananas. Koharu's the one in the group who's crazy about umeboshi. :lol:



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Junjun had just wandered in, nibbling absently on a piece of bread with a far off look in her eye.
Probably dreaming of her next banana. XD



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**AICHAN WEARING PRESENT FROM SAYU**
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww...:oops:

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Re: Estrea's Sandbox [10/12 - Cupcakes]
« Reply #257 on: October 12, 2008, 05:31:00 AM »
^Oops. XD But whatever, it seems to work out anyway. Anyone know what Eri's favorite food is so I can fix that little error? XD

I wanted Junjun to be eating a banana, but bread makes sense too. *saw her eating bread in backstage vid once* Haha. XD

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Re: Estrea's Sandbox [10/12 - Cupcakes]
« Reply #258 on: October 12, 2008, 07:15:58 AM »
^
Well, knowing Junjun, it was probably banana bread.
:on lol:

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Re: Estrea's Sandbox [10/12 - Cupcakes]
« Reply #259 on: October 12, 2008, 11:25:56 AM »
Eri's favourite is umeboshi so no need to fix that =)  JFC's just commenting on how Koharu would be the one to eat up all the umeboshi but then again JunJun's the one that's always eating so it works XD

hehe the story is so cute and even more cute since it's something that really happened XD

I loved the description of everyone's activities.  Sleeping kamei and chocolate Reina were my favourite parts.  hehe I thought this would be TakaGaki since Risa was the focus at the start but it's funny how it was Sayu that whisked the leader away at the end....in a non romantic way of course...but it was still so cute and very sweet.  Ai chan really is the best =D


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