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Re: KonaKaga's Nursery [OPV - Save Me]
« Reply #140 on: March 08, 2009, 06:27:33 AM »
UWAAAAH. YOu had my stomach in knots because of that. Where'd the background music come from? *likes it*

Oh my god. This kind of reminds me of my 2nd fic "Answers". Except it's GakiKame forward. :O I can't wait to see it. Like JFC said, quality over speed. Good luck writing!!
« Last Edit: March 08, 2009, 11:09:01 AM by ShikyoxYaiba »

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Re: KonaKaga's Nursery [OPV - Save Me]
« Reply #141 on: March 08, 2009, 08:12:01 AM »
wah! when i saw the title "OPV - Save Me"  I was like...uSO!  cause I actually have an unreleased opv file named that XD  so I was thinking wow...don't tell me our minds are linked!  hehe turns out they are totally different (cause I tend to not make sad stuff...or maybe I just don't know how XD) but after watching yours...the idea intrigues me greatly!  You did a really great job setting the mood in the opv.  I want to read the story *___*!

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Re: KonaKaga's Nursery [OPV - Save Me]
« Reply #142 on: March 08, 2009, 06:17:05 PM »
the video looks so good and it's so sad! =( Poor Eri and Risa! The fic looks promising. I can't wait. Do your best. I'm not all that into Gakikame, but I do think they're cute together even though I think Risa should be with Ai. lol I love sad and angst stories. :D

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Re: KonaKaga's Nursery [OPV - Save Me]
« Reply #143 on: March 09, 2009, 12:51:59 AM »
@Haruka - Let's see...your total comes to all of the money in the world. Would you like to pay with debit, credit or cash?
@JFC - Well, it's done! Hopefully it's good O__O
@strawb3rrykream - *hug* There, there *hands hot chocolate* Drink it all up.
@SxY - Thanks. I replied to you on YT but I'll post the name of the song here as well. It's "Kagami Dake Chigaku Class Ni Nachatta..." from the anime Lucky Star.
@Sukoshi - OMG *glomps* SUKOSHI!  :w00t:
Well, there is that saying "Great minds think alike" :P I wanna see that OPV *hint hint*
@writerjunkie - It's weird, lots of people don't seem to like GakiKame all that much yet they read my stories...  :huhuh I hope you like the story!

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Save Me


I felt the warm sand gently cuddle my feet with each step I took across it. Here I was, at a beach, staring out at the sunset which had dyed the sky a mellow orange. The calming sound of the waves gently over lapping each other graced my ears. My breath suddenly hitched and I felt my lungs painfully contract. Coughing, I tried to try and clear my air ways. Quickly as it had come, the attack disappeared. Gasping, I gulped in as much air as I could. These attacks were getting worse. I had secretly sneaked out of the house earlier during the day to go and visit my doctor…
Only bad news awaited me. “Tonight” he had said. I felt a tear fall as I crashed onto my knees. Clenching my fists, I punched the sand with all my force. I could feel my knuckles stinging from the impact.
“…why?” I asked out loud. “WHY?!
I punched the ground again.
“It’s only been a month…” I noted in disbelief.
It had only been one month since I was diagnosed with this illness. The doctors… they didn’t know what I had. They tried everything, but I just kept getting worse. No matter what medication they gave me, the disease was too strong.
“Everyone…”
Thoughts of everyone I had met in my life flashed through my mind. Sayu, Ai-chan, Yaguttsuan, Abe-san, Reina, Gaki-san, Fujimoto-san, Koharu, JunJun, Mittsui-
Gaki-san.
I bit my lip. The one person who was there for me when things got rough. The one person who made me laugh when I was sad. The one person who showed me the world. The one person I loved more than anything. The one person I fell madly in love with. The one person I couldn’t confess to.


Hand shaking, I slipped it into a small pocket that was attached to my white dress. Finding a small piece of paper and pencil I began to write. I tried my hardest to write as neatly as I could with my tears blurring my vision. Why did I have to fall in love? She was making this too hard for me. I looked up at the horizon as I folded up the note. The sun had nearly fully sunken behind the sea.
It’s time…” I mumbled to myself.
Then, right on que, I could feel myself fading away from the world. Everything began to spin as it lost its colour. The only things that had colour now were my memories.
“Arigatou, minna…”
I was scared. So scared. I didn’t want to die! Why did I have to have this stupid disease?! What did I do?! I felt myself stumble a few steps towards the ocean.
I’m scared, Gaki-san… Save me.
I looked down at the water which ran over my feet. I heard rushing footsteps.
KAME!
I turned around. I felt my vision clear for a moment. I instantly knew who it was. I smiled. I could die happy now.
“Gaki-san!” I yelled with what little power I had left.
Suddenly my legs collapsed and I fell into the water. I never let go of the note in my hand.
“KAME!”
A few seconds later I felt her arms around me; cradling me.
“Kame! Oi, Kame! Say something! What’s wrong?!” she exclaimed from a distance of less than 30cm. Sure was like her. I weakly opened my eyes.
“G-Gaki-san…” I croaked out.
“What’s wrong, Kame?! I’m calling an ambulance!” she screamed her eyes brimming with tears. She held her phone to her ear. I slowly raised up my hand.
D-Don’t, n-not enough time…F-For you…”
She dropped her phone in the sand and took the note from my hand, quickly opening it.
G-Gaki-san, gomen ne… for never telling you that I’m ill.
There’s no way that I could have; I didn’t w-want you to worry… But most of all, I didn’t want you to lose your smile.
So that’s why please… forgive me
,” she read out through her burning tears in a voice that screamed with disbelief.
“Kame, what is this?!” she demanded. I didn’t reply.
KAME!
I could only smile at her.
“K-Kame… Kame, Kame, Kame…”
Her tears fell and rolled down my face.
“You can’t go… I love you…you can’t…” she begged, “please…”
“I-I love you to…”
I felt my eyes loll shut. Everything began to fade away… even Gaki-san’s voice.
Kame, don’t go! I need you! …onegai…
Everything went white and deathly quiet. The last thing I remember was the soft touch and sweet taste of her lips.
« Last Edit: March 09, 2009, 07:55:59 PM by KonaKaga »


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Re: KonaKaga's Nursery [OPV - Save Me (Fic POSTED)]
« Reply #144 on: March 09, 2009, 01:22:26 AM »
awww so sad! Damn it! Poor Risa, and Eri. =( yeah a lot of people do tend to read it cuz you're a pretty good writer! lol So they can get past the GakiKame pairing I think. lol  I can't wait for the next chapter, if they're is a next chapter. There is right?

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Re: KonaKaga's Nursery [OPV - Save Me (Fic POSTED)]
« Reply #145 on: March 09, 2009, 01:43:31 AM »
Awwww~~~ :cry: Eri-chan!!!!!!! *cries*
*drinks hot chocolate* Damn, I needed that. :P
I also think ppl read your stories b/c you're good! I know I do. But at the same time, you've also "broadened my horizons" (remember? :grin: ) and I personally don't dislike GakiKame. I think they are cute together and everything, they just aren't my top pairing. Like to me, they're better off as great friends, rather than lovers. :D

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Re: KonaKaga's Nursery [OPV - Save Me (Fic POSTED)]
« Reply #146 on: March 09, 2009, 02:28:00 AM »
UWAAAAH!!!! :cry: Kame!!! Risa!!! *sobs more and huddles self in a corner* ;_; So...so sad...

Holy crud, no way... It's from Lucky Star? :O Maybe I should have followed that series after all...

Aw, I'm always here to read. GakiKame ftw~ I agree, GakiKame isn't all that popular... I can't help but love them, though. (Then again, I love practically any Eri pairing. Gaki-san just happens to be at the top. Damn it Eri, your relations with other people are just too much! :P)

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Re: KonaKaga's Nursery [OPV - Save Me (Fic POSTED)]
« Reply #147 on: March 09, 2009, 02:57:31 AM »
I just saying that I have the money to go xD not all the money in the world xD

Cash  8)

But well... close case =3

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T_______________T ERI... DON'T!!!! damn u_u why Eri... why?? T_T I love you too xD

I'm agree with strawb (sorry for the short name) they are pretty cute together but they aren't at the top, just like friends very good ones *.*

Maybe I'm a kind of dreamer... or maybe still a kid... but I just thing that... in the world it will be always exist this kind of friendship, that you could possible give your life for a dearest friend...

I don't know... maybe I'm just a dreamer... x3 don't pay attention to that xD

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I really like how you write... it's quite amazing... but real in some view... or it's just me xD


God!! She knows she's HOT!

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Re: KonaKaga's Nursery [OPV - Save Me (Fic POSTED)]
« Reply #148 on: March 09, 2009, 08:10:56 AM »
wah! when i saw the title "OPV - Save Me"  I was like...uSO!  cause I actually have an unreleased opv file named that XD  so I was thinking wow...don't tell me our minds are linked!  hehe turns out they are totally different (cause I tend to not make sad stuff...or maybe I just don't know how XD) but after watching yours...the idea intrigues me greatly!  You did a really great job setting the mood in the opv.  I want to read the story *___*!
I wanna watch your OPV!!! :D

Save Me

Awww poor Eri...she dies again XD But I liked the story a lot. It's heartwrenching! :cry: Your writing always makes me feel sad and touched at the same time. I'm happy to see you are updating more often. This makes me a happy Hamzy :)

The OPV was awesome too of course. That is a given. I was so sucked into the whole sadness, melody, olden feel of the colors that I sniffed a little. Then for some reason KAME!! in capital letters made me laugh. I'm so sorry cuz that should so not have happen :oops: Write more one-shots please!! I wanna be buried under a ton of your fics :muffin:

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Re: KonaKaga's Nursery [OPV - Save Me (Fic POSTED)]
« Reply #149 on: March 09, 2009, 07:50:13 PM »
 :cry: wow! that was heart wrenching!!   :cry:

poor Eri and Risa. right when you were listing ppl, i read over and saw Eri's name wasn't there and then when she said Gaki-san last i was like  :shocked 'no!'  :cry: Eri can't die!!

idk but i've notice in some of the fics ive read *don't member which ones* Eri seems to be the one is is either really sick or dies  :cry: :cry:

lol i thought i'd to point that out XD lol but excellent fic, well written, i love the little note.

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Re: KonaKaga's Nursery [OPV - Save Me (Fic POSTED)]
« Reply #150 on: March 10, 2009, 11:33:38 AM »
NUUU!
another death.  :cry:

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Re: KonaKaga's Nursery [OPV - Save Me (Fic POSTED)]
« Reply #151 on: March 10, 2009, 07:33:28 PM »
Save Me

Can't comment too much now because afternoon classes have started. This emoticon pretty much sums it up though...

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Re: KonaKaga's Nursery [OPV - Save Me (Fic POSTED)]
« Reply #152 on: March 11, 2009, 03:10:10 PM »
aww, another ouches story for the night  :cry:

what will happen to Risa after the I love you too and the kiss.?.  :(

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Re: KonaKaga's Nursery [OPV - Save Me (Fic POSTED)]
« Reply #153 on: March 12, 2009, 09:36:13 AM »
awww...I tried to be prepared because I knew this would be sad....but it was still so sad   :pleeease:  Eriiiii~

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Re: KonaKaga's Nursery [OPV - Save Me (Fic POSTED)]
« Reply #154 on: April 27, 2009, 04:32:55 AM »
Quick post before I go to bed:

One Week Epilogue - One Night
Posted on LJ since it's a perv.
http://community.livejournal.com/renairev/76959.html

Night :heart:


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Re: KonaKaga's Nursery [One Week Epilogue - One Night (Perv)]
« Reply #155 on: April 27, 2009, 06:21:12 AM »
OMFG KONAKAGA!!!! I LOVE YOU!!! XD Haven't read it yet but I'm just about to! :P Need my perv fix, withdrawl for this ain't pretty. XD

Edit: Oh jeez, that was so :drool: I giggled when Eri was feeling weird in "that" area. :lol: And then I blushed like hell for the rest of the story! XD Great job though, it was quite hot. *fans self to ease the redness of my cheeks* :D
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Re: KonaKaga's Nursery [One Week Epilogue - One Night (Perv)]
« Reply #156 on: April 28, 2009, 06:46:11 PM »
OMG Eri's first time  :drool:


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Re: KonaKaga's Nursery [One Week Epilogue - One Night (Perv)]
« Reply #157 on: May 10, 2009, 10:23:24 AM »
I read it too!!! And boy was it intense. Make me feel so hot!!! The weather is already enough to kill and with this fic too?? GAH........ *dies*

The story was incredibly long, great IMO. And because I was reading slowly to savor it, it really took me quite a bit of time :lol:

Hee hee, I still can't get over how awesome the fic was. I wish you had time to write more :( Why must there be horrible things called school!! *angry* LOL

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Re: KonaKaga's Nursery [One Week Epilogue - One Night (Perv)]
« Reply #158 on: December 08, 2009, 12:48:14 AM »
O   M   G
It's been 7 months since I last posted an entry in here  :shocked
Thanks to everyone who has ever read my thread and my stories. Looking back now and reading all of them, I feel proud of myself. At the time when I wrote these pieces I couldn't stand the way that they sounded. But once months have passed and I forget about the piece and go back and read it, it always sounds so much better :sweatdrop:

But, I thought that I'd just let you guys know (or whoever is reading this) that I'm planning to write a new story this week.
I'm not going to lie; over the past few months I've lost my enthusiasm in writing and Morning Musume. I've also become a fan of SNSD (Girls' Generation) but I can't stop myself from checking H!O for all the latest updates on what's happening with H!P. I am still deep down a true MM fan. If it weren't for MM I would never know the amount of Japanese I know today, and for that I am truly thankful  :oops: (Not to mention how sexy uhhh mouth-watering awesome GakiKame are :P )

For all of my readers out there who have felt abandoned, offended, annoyed, angry in any way by my sudden disappearance, I am honestly sorry  :kneelbow:

I'm hoping that maybe I could have the same amount of readers or more who used to read my stories! But for now, my goal is just to fall back into the rhythm of writing again and to make sure that my writing ability is up to par.

If there is any way in your hearts that you could forgive me, then I would be elated :oops:

For now, this has been KonaKaga, hope to talk to some of you later this week   :)


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Re: KonaKaga's Nursery [UPDATE - 07/12/09]
« Reply #159 on: December 08, 2009, 01:00:39 AM »
it's alright~! X3*hugs* sometimes people just need a break and need to let the creative-ness come freely^^
and~ i cant wait~! X3
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