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Offline Maimi_Yajima

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Re: Playing On The Edge(UPDATE 12/18)
« Reply #20 on: December 20, 2008, 02:07:00 AM »
OH!
Maimi! will have a sword!
Maimi is also a rebel in this chapter!
It's great!
Ai-chan can not control to Maimi and Reina! XD
This is the best of all!  :P
They do what they want!
I do not like to see a Maimi coward ...  :sweatdrop:
but... she is not a coward ...  :sweatdrop:

Now I understand because they are co-workers Reina and Maimi! :w00t:  :inlove: :yep:
oh!
I want to see them on a mission!  :inlove:
I imagine it will be a dangerous mission!  8)
A good duo!   :heart:
next chapter :)
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Re: Playing On The Edge(UPDATE 12/18)
« Reply #21 on: December 20, 2008, 01:14:42 PM »
poor yajima! maimi airi.....kawaii

er....renai...

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Re: Playing On The Edge(UPDATE 12/18)
« Reply #22 on: December 20, 2008, 08:08:22 PM »
lol no it's still in Maimi's POV ok maybe I should label them now. Just to get rid of the confusion.
So then...is Chapter 5 set BEFORE Maimi loses her memory, or is she just faking that? It does not make sense that she'd remember stuff  like where the High-King lair is and who Aichan/Reina/etc are, but ONLY not remember her personal stuff.

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Re: Playing On The Edge(UPDATE 12/18)
« Reply #23 on: December 20, 2008, 09:16:28 PM »
This fic has no relation to the High-King fic. It's completely different.

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Re: Playing On The Edge(UPDATE 12/18)
« Reply #24 on: December 20, 2008, 09:30:22 PM »
This fic has no relation to the High-King fic. It's completely different.
DOH! :doh:

See, this is what happens when you're reading multiple fics at the same time, and they use the same people as the main characters.


Now I'll have to edit my comments on this most recent chapter.
:on lol:
« Last Edit: December 20, 2008, 09:41:59 PM by JFC »

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Offline Maimi_Yajima

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Re: Playing On The Edge(UPDATE 12/18)
« Reply #25 on: December 20, 2008, 10:54:30 PM »
This fic has no relation to the High-King fic. It's completely different.
DOH! :doh:

See, this is what happens when you're reading multiple fics at the same time, and they use the same people as the main characters.
Now I'll have to edit my comments on this most recent chapter.
:on lol:

The HP KIDS are succeeding more popularity my dear JFC!
Now with the graduation of the Elder Club.
Just is Morning Musume,Berryz Koubou and  ° C-Ute. AH! and the current unit Ice Cream!
and will soon Fan Fic of Ice Cream with time.
Besides Morning Musume also has many Fan Fic. XD

@writerjunkie: no matter who are the same characters,  Because everyone looks the same agency H! P.
Does not matter that has swords, bows, daggers, supernatural powers, vampires or anything else.
This fan fic is very different from High King.
in High King  The sword elect its owner. :)
and in her history,  this sword is like having a pact with the devil. :)

There are a vampire! as in the history of Estrea.
  And also is different from the story of Estrea.
In the history of Estrea  Maimi is not a werewolf.
And this werewolf does not work with a vampire to kill the  villains.
and in her history
Tanaka is a vampire and companion of Maimi and she is a werewolf.
Tanaka and Maimi,  they are mates.
They work together in missions to wipe out the villains.
I imagine that in this story the main characters are Tanaka and Maimi.
Or I may be wrong ... nE? Gomene... :P
And many questions arise which did  reveal ...
How they met with Ai?
How Maimi and Tanaka  became companions?
Why Tanka y Maimi decided  work with Ai?
What's behind that?
There is a covenant or a reward?
They had to have a covenant or a reward to work with Ai ...
Risking ... her ass for free ...
I do not think so ...
It is an agency I suppose ...
an agency where there are people with supernatural powers?
Y. ..
Who are the villains?
Who is the enemy of Ai?
writer you have to be explaining these things ...
These details ...
Dan another approach wing history ...
  truth... JFC?
GambaRE!!!!  writer!!!!!! GamabrE!!!!! :)
You prove it can make a different story despite having little details in common with other stories of the forum!
GambaRE!!



« Last Edit: December 20, 2008, 11:02:41 PM by Maimi_Yajima »
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Re: Playing On The Edge(UPDATE 12/18)
« Reply #26 on: December 20, 2008, 11:27:17 PM »
lol It's ok JFC

and yes will try and explain things further on. Right now I'm taking things slow. I hope things aren't to slow or if it makes no sense or doesn't cover enough detail on things. I'll try my best to make make the story good.

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Re: Playing On The Edge(UPDATE 12/18)
« Reply #27 on: December 21, 2008, 03:13:31 AM »
lol It's ok JFC

and yes will try and explain things further on. Right now I'm taking things slow. I hope things aren't to slow or if it makes no sense or doesn't cover enough detail on things. I'll try my best to make make the story good.

Arigato!! and GanbaRE!!!! :otomerika: :otomerika:
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