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Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle? [Chap 6 - Nov 12]
« Reply #40 on: November 14, 2008, 12:24:31 AM »
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It was 6:30, that girl was always late half an hour but can always seem to get up early in the morning; so obviously she never overslept, what in the world does Eririn do to keep herself distracted for 30 minutes?
MUST...RESIST URGE TO.........MAKE...PERVVY......COMMENT.  :-X

LOL go ahead! I was wondering if anybody would >__> Cuz I totally thought of something bad when I reread it haha


Edit:: JFC: is that a Junjun gif there on your sig?!?! :D
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Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle? [Chap 6 - Nov 12]
« Reply #41 on: November 14, 2008, 02:54:18 AM »
All the Takagaki love draws me out from lurking in the fanfic section recently. :lol: I blame Estrea and her angsty Ai. :lol:

Anyways, love the Takagaki :heart: I had a huge grin on my face afterwards. Better stop reading these at work :lol: Keep it up!  :on GJ:

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Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle? [Chap 6 - Nov 12]
« Reply #42 on: November 15, 2008, 05:33:01 AM »
lol Shikyo! do your Chem!
and @meowz: so you do lurk... you just don't update your own fic  :(

eh? But I haven't written any fics XD you must have confused me with someone else

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Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle? [Chap 6 - Nov 12]
« Reply #43 on: November 15, 2008, 05:54:13 AM »
lol Shikyo! do your Chem!
and @meowz: so you do lurk... you just don't update your own fic  :(

eh? But I haven't written any fics XD you must have confused me with someone else

Eh have I?? then geez I feel terribly embarrassed, well you should start one then XD

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Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle? [Chap 6 - Nov 12]
« Reply #44 on: November 16, 2008, 12:35:22 AM »
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It was 6:30, that girl was always late half an hour but can always seem to get up early in the morning; so obviously she never overslept, what in the world does Eririn do to keep herself distracted for 30 minutes?
MUST...RESIST URGE TO.........MAKE...PERVVY......COMMENT.  :-X

LOL go ahead! I was wondering if anybody would >__> Cuz I totally thought of something bad when I reread it haha
:hump:

'nuff said, I'd say. ;D


Edit:: JFC: is that a Junjun gif there on your sig?!?! :D
Yep. :cow:
It's a "shrunken" version so it's permissible as a sig. The "full" version is about 3x as large (in terms of filesize) and can be found here in the Yorosen thread:
http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=14792.msg524599#msg524599

JPH!P :heart:'s kuro808, Fushigidane, ChrNo, Jab & marimari. Always.

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Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle? [Chap 6 - Nov 12]
« Reply #45 on: November 16, 2008, 11:24:55 AM »
Finally I've decided to stop lurking around & leave a comment.  :lol:
I love the TakaGaki raburabu moments.  :heart: They make me feel uberly excited for some reasons.  XD

Wrong move for Sayu thou..  :banghead: Poor Reina.  :cry:


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Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle? [Chap 6 - Nov 12]
« Reply #46 on: November 16, 2008, 12:13:44 PM »
wah TakaGaki got together already!  very nice~

Ouch.  Double ouch.  Can't believe Sayu made two bad moves in a row...lying and then betraying Reina.  but at least she got Eri (for this chapter anyways) XD

*waves my kameshige flag around*

poor Reina though...but I think she'll be okay...can't wait to read about her revenge XD

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Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle? [Chap 7 - Nov 17]
« Reply #47 on: November 17, 2008, 09:00:06 AM »
:sweat: (Have any of you noticed how I always open with one of these guys? :lol:)

Phew... got a chapter out within um... 5 days woo~
well, it's like exactly 0:00 here XD (I use the 24 hour time... no clue why o.O")
I usually just get random urges on updating, I guess today is one of those days
plus I have something to celebrate for ^^

@rainer: OMG another lurker out!! XD
Yeah... talking bout any of my fav pairings get me uber excited too ><

@Sukoshi: lol hmmm... well... not really revenge... more like.. Tanakacchi's gonna go on a rampage?

Wow, so I'm kinda amazed at the amount of people that think Michishige did a bad move XD I have no comment LOL not because I wrote it but because... I'm not sure where I'm going with this  :P
Oh well...

Here's a chapter to celebrate me FINALLY finishing my personal statement and short response!!! ^^;
 :on woohoo:  :on grad: <----(lol whoops, this one is a little too early)

So this time accompanying Mitsui's long ass thoughts is... Niigaki-san's!!! (I'm sure you all figured that one out though :P)
and what's more?? CONFLICT
 

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Chapter 7

The morning sun shone through the window of the hotel room. Birds could be heard chirping in the distance, some were probably on the balcony.

   Risa loved mornings; however, this one morning beat all the rest hands down. This was because not only was the sun shining and the birds were chirping, but also beside her slept a beautiful girl. Risa turned her body to come face to face with the aforementioned girl. Her short -but beginning to grow- hair was splayed over the pillow. Her breathing was slow and steady; her face had a soft and peaceful look. How much or how long Risa admired Ai was unknown, but she felt as if it wasn't enough. She wanted to spend her whole life admiring the girl in front of her. She smiled wider as she saw Ai grip tighter onto her precious red blanket and then softly murmur "Risa..." in her sleep.
   The whole setting felt surreal, she couldn't believe the events that had happened. She replayed the moments from last night; the heated kisses and the um... exploration they did felt like a dream, Risa felt herself blush heavily simply at the thought. They had both agreed that, although they were a couple now, they weren't ready for it just yet. However... Couple! That word alone brought joy to her heart; just knowing that her love was not unrequited and was reciprocated allowed her to sigh in relief. Everything will be okay now, whatever ordeals will be triumphed over by the both of them now, no more solos.
Maybe she sighed a little too loudly because Ai began to stir.

"'morning..." She grumbled; she still sounded half asleep and maybe even a little angry for waking up.
"Good morning" Ai supported her body with her arms and pushed herself up. She was now in a half sitting position, her body facing Risa; her right hand supporting her and her left hand going up to push her hair back. The word 'Hot' repeated itself in Risa's mind and she fully admired the sight before her. She loved how she was allowed to look now compared to the other times in which she would force herself to tear her eyes away from the girl. Ai was especially sexy during concerts too, and it was near impossible not to stare.

"What time did you wake up?"
"Um... a little before you did."
"Thinking?" Risa loved Ai's one word question sometimes, especially when she understood her. It was one of those things where she felt she really knew Ai more than the others. Ai seemed to understand Risa as well, maybe she wasn't correct all the time, but Ai sometimes just simply knew what had gone on in Risa's mind. That should be expected though, they had known each other for more than seven years, but Risa always seems to find new things to admire in Ai.

"Yeah I was," she replied softly "still can't believe everything that happened though..." A soft laugh was heard from the girl sitting beside her.
"I know how you feel; I can finally do this..." Ai half turned her body, bent down and kissed Risa on the lips, afterwards her face lingered there for a moment, the two locking eye contact. "Or this..." Ai's head moved lower and kissed Risa on the neck; she felt her body lurch a bit from the contact and a soft moan escaped from her lips. "Or..." they locked eye contact once more, Ai's eyes flashed a burning desire for something, and Risa knew what that something was. She couldn't help but blush under the stare of the girl above her, she felt naked and vulnerable even. "Well, I guess not that yet, but just this is good enough." Ai brought her head down to capture her lips once more, only this time it was longer and more heated.

   They suddenly heard a knock on the door and Risa groaned loudly; Ai just pouted but smiled at Risa's reaction. She got off the bed and headed for the door, looking through the peep hole. The older of the two then gasped and turned around; her expression pressed a giant panic button in Risa's mind.
"Who's there?" The longer haired girl whispered.
"It's Reina"
"So? Let her in." Risa was confused why the girl would feel threatened over one of their group members.
"No, that's the problem; it's early morning, we're both in our pajamas and... well I don't want rumors to start about us again." Risa couldn't help but wince at the other girl's words. 'Again', it was because of their previous closeness that Ai tried to put distance between their relationship. The reaction queen didn't care much on what other people would say, but Ai didn't seem strong enough to handle all the rumors and teasing. That's why one day they had a talk, and Ai said she wanted some distance.
"Fine, I understand, what do you want me to do?" Risa gave in; she didn't want their relationship to end again.
"Uh... hide here!" Ai ushered the highly apprehensive girl into her closet and closed it. Then she went up to the door, gave herself a little clothes check, and then opened the door.

   Risa couldn't really see much except through the lines the closet door design had. However, she could hear perfectly fine and realized Tanakacchi was upset about something.
"Reina! Are you okay? Were... were you crying?" Ai closed the door when Tanakacchi entered and sat at the edge of the bed. It didn't seem like the small girl wanted to talk, she probably just wanted some sort of counsel. Ai went to sit beside Tanakacchi, worry clearly in her voice.
"Even though I might not be much help, I think it would be better if you told me what was wrong..." There was silence, and Risa didn't really know what was going on. She could only see their torso and could not see either of their faces at all.
She then saw Ai sit closer to Tanakacchi and wrap her left arm around her shoulder. If Risa didn't understand the situation she would have been slightly jealous, but right now her concern was for the usually energetic girl; albeit some of those times were anger, but at least she had energy.
"Ai-chan I..." Tanakacchi finally spoke, and what a horribly broken voice it was too. It was completely unlike the usually filled with confidence voice the leader and sub-leader always heard. It was a voice filled with hurt that made Risa want to cry just listening to it.

   There was silence yet again and then Risa noticed Tanakacchi leaning closer to Ai. There was an unsettling silence after that and for some reason Risa just knew what was happening. She was about to leap out of the closet but Ai beat her to it.
"What are you doing?!" Ai quickly pushed the short girl away and stood up, slightly away from Tanakacchi. The other girl just stayed there, sitting on the edge of the bed unmoving.
Since Ai stood up Risa could actually see her face now, it was filled with shock. Then the Morning Musume leader glanced at the closet with a guilty look. Risa caught this but didn't blame Ai, instead she wanted to jump out and scream, 'Ai's mine!' of course she refrained from doing so.
After awhile Tanakacchi stood up as well, her eyes fixated on Ai. "Look, Ai-chan just listen..." she started as she advanced towards the other girl.
"No wait, Reina. I'm with Ri-- Gaki-san now." A flicker of anger flashed through Tanakacchi's eyes as she heard this. Then she smiled, at least, Risa thought it was a smile, since she couldn't see her mouth very well. The glitter loving girl grabbed Ai's wrist and pulled her onto the bed. Ai gave a startled scream since she obviously did not anticipate such a move; neither did Risa for that matter as she was going through slight shock as well. Tanakacchi took this moment to position herself on top of the short haired girl and pushed her lips onto Ai's.

If there ever was a moment to jump out it would be now, as Risa bursted from the closet startling Tanakacchi. The slightly younger girl screamed and leaped away to the far side of the room. Ai quickly got up with an expression saying, 'My god, I have a headache.'
"Ah, didn't know you were there..." Tanakacchi finally said, obviously still in shock since that was a fairly redundant thing to say.
"Yeah well I was, and I would appreciate it if you kept you're hands off of my Ai-chan." Risa looked towards the girl in question expecting some sort of back-up.
"Gaki-san wait..." was her unexpected reply, and Risa felt a little pain swelling in her chest as she looked away from the two of them in anger. "Reina... do you...?" Ai asked a fairly subtle question to Tanakacchi and Risa's anger only built up.
'Why is Ai asking this again?'
"Yeah I like you, problem?" Tanakacchi was back to her confident self, only she leveled up to obnoxiously cocky now. There was definitely something wrong with her, but Risa couldn't feel sympathy anymore.

   Risa looked at Ai again, noting her expression as she stared at Tanakacchi. There was a small conflict within Ai's mind, Risa could tell. 'Ai, with such a big problem, are we going to lose our relationship again?' She knew Ai had some feelings for Tanakacchi, but also knew a lot of it had to do with lust. She didn't want to lose Ai, especially when they had finally gotten together, but she couldn't change the girl's mind if she really did decide to go with Tanakacchi.

'Why us?'
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   They had decided to crash at Junjun's place since she lived alone, reducing the hassle of over-polite parents and the reserved and awkward attitude they had to give them. It was a nice little apartment that was not too far from the train station for convenience. It was neat and tidy as well, quite an amazing feat since living by yourself tended to lead to laziness.
"Do you guys want something to drink?" Junjun asked as they entered the place; she immediately headed for the kitchen after removing her shoes.
"Orange juice!!!"
"Do you have apple juice?"
"Water..." Junjun looked at Aika with one raised brow.
"Water? Are you sure you don't want something else?" Aika waved her hands in front of her, signaling that water was just fine. Junjun shrugged and gave everyone their respective drinks. An echo of thanks was given to the tall girl in return as she went to take a seat at the dining table everyone seemed to be sitting at.
She took a seat across from Aika and because of Junjun's long legs, accidentally brushed against the thigh of the baby faced girl. Aika quickly stifled her squeak when she felt the movement, but Junjun seemed to notice.
"Sorry..." she quickly said, making sure to tuck her own legs under her chair. Aika couldn't help but mentally kick herself for causing Junjun to take it the wrong way. If anything, she enjoyed that brief skin contact and was rather upset that the girl across from her was making sure it was not going to happen again.

"So what should we do?" piped up the energetic Kusumi-san; the glass cup that used to contain orange juice, empty before her. That girl can get hyperactive on anything besides chocolate it seemed. Aika supposed that maybe it was for the better that there were energetic people around sometimes; since they seemed to balance out the calmer portion of the group, mainly Aika and sometimes Junjun. However, the tall banana loving girl can occasionally get into some heated arguments too, or have sudden bursts of energy, but that was good, in a way she balanced out into a fun person.
'There I go babbling about Junjun again...' she couldn't help but think to herself, shutting off her train of thought.
"I have a Wii in my room, we can play that."
"OH! I want to play Raving Rabbits!"
"Oh my god I love that game!" and with that, Linlin and Kusumi-san both raced to Junjun's room, which they assumed was the one between the computer room and the washroom, but stopped when they got to the doorway.

"What's wrong?" Aika asked, slightly worried from the expression of shock both of them seemed to carry. She joined them and stood at the doorway, peering inside. What she saw was definitely not expected; she saw giant posters of all the current Morning Musume members on the walls and a few photobooks can be seen on the desk. She couldn't help but blush when she saw a picture of herself blown up on the wall as well, and it worsened when she realized which photo it was. Out of all the photo posters the tall girl could get, it just had to be a sexy one. Next to hers she couldn't help but notice though, was the bikini wearing Leader and she involuntarily sighed inwardly.
'So it wasn't just me huh...'
The biggest one was Junjun herself however, and Aika couldn't help but want it herself. The expression of the girl in the poster made Aika feel warm inside, but she also felt a little bit embarrassed to stare at it.

   Overcoming the shock, Linlin went into the room to get the aforementioned game console, which was also the main reason for even entering the room. Kusumi-san seemed to have shaken away from the shock as well since she exclaimed loudly that, "Junjun is like a Morning Musume wota huh?" Aika was about to comment that that was rude until she saw the expression Junjun seemed to wear. It was a mix of amusement and slight embarrassment, but it seemed she was fine with the comment overall.
The two noisy girls grabbed the game console and brought it out into the living room where the television was. Sounds of yelling, screams of victory, screams of loss, and overall loud chatter could be heard from Junjun's apartment until it was 8pm. Halfway through they paid less attention to playing and more for talking. They became much closer than before and seemed to understand each other more.
"Do you guys want something to eat?" Junjun continued to act like the host and took care of everyone. She had gotten up and went into the kitchen, looking through the refrigerator.
"What time is it?" asked Koharu-san, craning her neck around to search for a clock.
"It's already eight! I have to go home..." Linlin said with a sad face, Aika couldn't help but notice and patted her on the back.
"Don't worry; we'll hang out like this again sometime." Linlin looked back at the girl beside her and smiled.
"Ah, Koharu has to go home too or her parents will be angry." Koharu-san said, almost expecting some counsel from Aika as well, but Aika however, chose to ignore the look and gave Linlin one last pat on the head.

"Koharu-san, are you getting picked up?" The girl in question frowned slightly but replied back.
"No, I'm walking with Linlin since I live close to her."
"Oh" was her only response, earning a curious look from Koharu-san, "ah it's just that, my parents aren't at home and I live pretty far, so I was hoping I could catch a ride with you." they spoke on a more familiar term since they understood each other more now.
"Sorry..." Koharu-san apologized with a guilty look.
"No no, it's not your fault don't worry." she gave the girl a reassuring look but then absently looked around, "But, what should I do now?" she asked no one in particular.
"You can sleep over?" someone who hadn't been talking the whole time suddenly spoke and Aika turned to look at the girl. Junjun stood at the doorway of the kitchen, leaning lightly on her side.
"Where?" again, Aika almost kicked herself, it was pretty obvious whose place she meant but she just couldn't process the information right.
"Here." Junjun said simply, she smiled at Aika, telling her not to be so polite all the time. Somehow she must have known that Aika would have politely declined.
"O-okay... thank you Junjun." Aika shyly smiled back, not noticing the growing displeasure showing itself on Koharu-san's face.

"No!"
"Huh?" Both her and Junjun looked questioningly at Koharu-san, not understanding why it wouldn't be a good idea for miss smiles to sleep over at Junjun's.
"I-I...” unable to give a good reason for her sudden outburst, the tall girl shifted her eyes to the floor.”No... It's nothing..." Aika scrutinized Koharu-san for a moment, trying to understand what in the world went on in that girl's head.
"C'mon Linlin, we should hurry, we might miss our train." and with that the two were off.
Junjun went to the door with them and continually waved at them as they left. Aika joined her as well, thinking that it was some Chinese custom; she watched as Koharu-san stalked off while Linlin would occasionally glance back and wave. Linlin gave a rueful smile and Aika wanted to run up and hug her, she looked like a little puppy being separated from her owner and it was too cute to ignore.

   When the two girls were finally out of view Junjun closed the door. She then headed for the kitchen while Aika still stood at the entrance, realizing now that she was alone with Junjun. That thought was quickly replaced however when she noticed that Junjun was cooking dinner; she quickly went into the kitchen to assist the tall girl.
"I'll help!"
"No no, that's okay, you're the guest."
"What? No, that's not right; you did so much for us tonight. I should help out."
Junjun looked at Aika and grinned, and then she patted her on the head, "You're such a good girl."
This stopped Aika right in her tracks, whilst she enjoyed the moment of the contact between her head and Junjun's hand. She quickly broke out of her moment when Junjun used the time to begin cooking. Aika pouted while standing under the doorway of the kitchen, slightly annoyed for being so useless at a time like this. If anything, the baby faced girl wanted to show how good her cooking skills were and get some praise from Junjun on the side.
With a sudden burst of determination she ran and wrapped her arms around the other girl's waist from behind, feeling the girl in her arms tense up immediately from the contact. Aika took this to her advantage and dragged the girl outside of the kitchen and then quickly locked Junjun out of her own kitchen.

"Mitsui!!" forgetting the 'san' after Aika's name due to shock and slight frustration, Junjun could be heard knocking on the door.
"I'm cooking tonight~!" the girl inside the kitchen said with a sing-song voice, causing Junjun to cease all knocking. She must have been surprised at hearing such a carefree and happy Aika since she, herself, was shocked at the glee she exerted.
She couldn't hear Junjun anymore but she could feel that the girl was still in front of the door. Aika felt a little guilty but told herself it'll be okay when she's done, and so she continued to cook and unconsciously hummed as she did.

The girl felt herself grin when she heard a voice humming softly along with her from behind the door.
'Haha, Junjun is so silly sometimes, but I'm glad I fell in love with her.'
With her newly sorted emotions, Aika began to hum freely again.
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Okay........ even though I prefer manly Niigaki (where she takes control)
when I type, Takahashi automatically takes control o.O" no clue why!!! (and no comments saying because she's Seme and stuff!! XD)
mind you though, when I type this out I have no control whatsoever
So I kinda go like "WTF is happening" myself sometimes ^^;

BTW, 7/8th gen are gonna be on for awhile. Why? Because it's morning for everybody else but still friggin' night time for them!!
I can't believe only 2 days have elapsed in total o.O"
(feels like Macbeth... where it's rumored for the events to take place within only 2 days, but I'm not gonna say that out loud or I'll totally sound lame for letting you guys know I like Shakespearean plays:ph43r:

Working on the next chap already, I'll try and update within 7 days again XD
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Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle? [Chap 6 - Nov 12]
« Reply #48 on: November 18, 2008, 03:23:16 AM »
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*TAKAGAKI MORNING AFTER*
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! :wub:



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*REINA AT THE DOOR*
I guess I can understand Aichan's POV here. She's not the type to advertise everything that's going on in her private life, plus it takes her a while to get comfortable with certain things. She's only recently been able to come to terms with how she feels for Risa and take that next step in their relationship. She's just not ready yet for the others to find out. At the same time, one can also see how Risa would be upset by this. From her POV, it could almost be looked at that while Aichan really cares for her, she also cares about what the others think, so much so that she's scared (or even ashamed) to let them know for fear of judgement or disapproval.



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Risa couldn't really see much except through the lines the closet door design had. However, she could hear perfectly fine and realized Tanakacchi was upset about something.
"Reina! Are you okay? Were... were you crying?" Ai closed the door when Tanakacchi entered and sat at the edge of the bed. It didn't seem like the small girl wanted to talk, she probably just wanted some sort of counsel. Ai went to sit beside Tanakacchi, worry clearly in her voice.
Yeah, just finding out the the girl you confessed your heart to chose to give hers to your other best friend will do that sort of thing to you.



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"Ai-chan I..." Tanakacchi finally spoke, and what a horribly broken voice it was too. It was completely unlike the usually filled with confidence voice the leader and sub-leader always heard. It was a voice filled with hurt that made Risa want to cry just listening to it.

There was silence yet again and then Risa noticed Tanakacchi leaning closer to Ai. There was an unsettling silence after that and for some reason Risa just knew what was happening.
Oshit. Rebound?!? :o



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After awhile Tanakacchi stood up as well, her eyes fixated on Ai. "Look, Ai-chan just listen..." she started as she advanced towards the other girl.
"No wait, Reina. I'm with Ri-- Gaki-san now."
Well, I guess Aichan's gotten over her apprehension of telling the others about her and Risa.  Funny what can motivate people to speak up like that. :P



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A flicker of angry flashed through Tanakacchi's eyes as she heard this. Then she smiled, at least, Risa thought it was a smile, since she couldn't see her mouth very well.
It isn't necessarily that Reina's angry or hurt about Aichan saying that she's with Risa, but think about it, from Reina's POV, she's just gotten rejected for the SECOND time in (presumably) 24 hours.  Though we know that it's not coming from Aichan, it's still like Reina just got a shot in the gut.



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The glitter loving girl grabbed Ai's wrist and pulled her onto the bed. Ai gave a startled scream since she obviously did not anticipate such a move; neither did Risa for that matter as she was going through slight shock as well. Tanakacchi took this moment to position herself on top of the short haired girl and pushed her lips onto Ai's.
Oh boy. I guess Reina doesn't handle rejection well. :o



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"Gaki-san wait..." was her unexpected reply, and Risa felt a little pain swelling in her chest as she looked away from the two of them in anger. "Reina... do you...?" Ai asked a fairly subtle question to Tanakacchi and Risa's anger only built up.
'Why is Ai asking this again?'
Aichan's just trying to get all the answers here, trying to figure out why Reina just did what she did. Risa, on the other hand, is upset that Aichan's apparently not as "gung ho" about protecting their relationship as she is. For Risa, it's almost like it's not as important to Aichan as it is to her.



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"Yeah I like you, problem?" Tanakacchi was back to her confident self, only she leveled up to obnoxiously cocky now. There was definitely something wrong with her, but Risa couldn't feel sympathy anymore.
As I said before, I'm thinking that Reina's using Aichan (most likely subconsciously) as a "rebound" of sorts. While there was possibly some attraction between them, it obviously paled compared to what Reina feels for Eri. Otherwise, it would have been Aichan that Reina pursued/confessed to.



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"Do you guys want something to drink?" Junjun asked as they entered the place; she immediately headed for the kitchen after removing her shoes.
"Orange juice!!!"
"Do you have apple juice?"
"Water..." Junjun looked at Aika with one raised brow.
"Water? Are you sure you don't want something else?" Aika waved her hands in front of her, signaling that water was just fine.
Aika's mind is preoccupied, by the sounds of it.



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She took a seat across from Aika and because of Junjun's long legs, accidentally brushed against the thigh of the baby faced girl. Aika quickly stifled her squeak when she felt the movement, but Junjun seemed to notice.
"Sorry..." she quickly said, making sure to tuck her own legs under her chair. Aika couldn't help but mentally kick herself for causing Junjun to take it the wrong way. If anything, she enjoyed that brief skin contact and was rather upset that the girl across from her was making sure it was not going to happen again.
Aika = :doh:



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Linlin and Kusumi-san both raced to Junjun's room, which they assumed was the one between the computer room and the washroom, but stopped when they got to the doorway.

"What's wrong?" Aika asked, slightly worried from the expression of shock both of them seemed to carry. She joined them and stood at the doorway, peering inside. What she saw was definitely not expected; she saw giant posters of all the current Morning Musume members on the walls and a few photobooks can be seen on the desk.
What? Can't Junjun be a fan as well as a member? :D



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She couldn't help but blush when she saw a picture of herself blown up on the wall as well, and it worsened when she realized which photo it was. Out of all the photo posters the tall girl could get, it just had to be a sexy one. Next to hers she couldn't help but notice though, was the bikini wearing Leader and she involuntarily sighed inwardly.
'So it wasn't just me huh...'
Oh crap, now Aika thinks Junjun likes Aichan?
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The biggest one was Junjun herself however,
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Aika couldn't help but want it herself. The expression of the girl in the poster made Aika feel warm inside, but she also felt a little bit embarrassed to stare at it.
Awwwwwww...:oops:



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"What time is it?" asked Koharu-san, craning her neck around to search for a clock.
"It's already eight! I have to go home..." Linlin said with a sad face, Aika couldn't help but notice and patted her on the back.
"Don't worry; we'll hang out like this again sometime." Linlin looked back at the girl beside her and smiled.
Poor Linlin. It's hard enough when she feels like she's being left behind when everyone goes off into their own little groups at work. Here it was, some time for her to get in on the belonging...and it's time to go.  :(



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"Ah, Koharu has to go home too or her parents will be angry." Koharu-san said, almost expecting some counsel from Aika as well, but Aika however, chose to ignore the look and gave Linlin one last pat on the head.
Ouch.

Koharu at lack of Aika attention = :cry:



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"Koharu-san, are you getting picked up?" The girl in question frowned slightly but replied back.
"No, I'm walking with Linlin since I live close to her."
For Koharu, this probably sounded like Aika was trying to get rid of her or something.



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"Oh" was her only response, earning a curious look from Koharu-san, "ah it's just that, my parents aren't at home and I live pretty far, so I was hoping I could catch a ride with you." they spoke on a more familiar term since they understood each other more now.
"Sorry..." Koharu-san apologized with a guilty look.
"No no, it's not your fault don't worry."
Again....ouch.  :sweatdrop:



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"But, what should I do now?" she asked no one in particular.
"You can sleep over?" someone who hadn't been talking the whole time suddenly spoke and Aika turned to look at the girl. Junjun stood at the doorway of the kitchen, leaning lightly on her side.
"Where?" again, Aika almost kicked herself, it was pretty obvious whose place she meant but she just couldn't process the information right.
"Here." Junjun said simply, she smiled at Aika, telling her not to be so polite all the time. Somehow she must have known that Aika would have politely declined.
"O-okay... thank you Junjun." Aika shyly smiled back, not noticing the growing displeasure showing itself on Koharu-san's face.
Aika = :mon unsure:
Junjun = :monster:
Aika = :mon huh2:
Junjun =  :hee:
Aika = :mon sweat:
Koharu = :mon annoy:



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"No!"
"Huh?" Both her and Junjun looked questioningly at Koharu-san, not understanding why it wouldn't be a good idea for miss smiles to sleep over at Junjun's.
"I-I...” unable to give a good reason for her sudden outburst, the tall girl shifted her eyes to the floor.”No... It's nothing..." Aika scrutinized Koharu-san for a moment, trying to understand what in the world went on in that girl's head.
Look into her eyes, see if they've turned green. :yep:



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Linlin would occasionally glance back and wave. Linlin gave a rueful smile and Aika wanted to run up and hug her, she looked like a little puppy being separated from her owner and it was too cute to ignore.
Linlin = :mon whimper:
Aika seeing Linlin = :wriggly:



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Junjun was cooking dinner; she quickly went into the kitchen to assist the tall girl.
"I'll help!"
"No no, that's okay, you're the guest."
"What? No, that's not right; you did so much for us tonight. I should help out."
Junjun looked at Aika and grinned, and then she patted her on the head, "You're such a good girl."
Junjun meant well when she said that, but given how Aika feels...again.........ouch.
Aika = :on blackhole:



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With a sudden burst of determination she ran and wrapped her arms around the other girl's waist from behind, feeling the girl in her arms tense up immediately from the contact. Aika took this to her advantage and dragged the girl outside of the kitchen and then quickly locked Junjun out of her own kitchen.

"Mitsui!!" forgetting the 'san' after Aika's name due to shock and slight frustration, Junjun could be heard knocking on the door.
"I'm cooking tonight~!" the girl inside the kitchen said with a sing-song voice, causing Junjun to cease all knocking. She must have been surprised at hearing such a carefree and happy Aika since she, herself, was shocked at the glee she exerted.
She couldn't hear Junjun anymore but she could feel that the girl was still in front of the door. Aika felt a little guilty but told herself it'll be okay when she's done, and so she continued to cook and unconsciously hummed as she did.
Junjun = :dunno:

Unexpected? Yes and no. It's not surprising in that Aika wants to impress Junjun here, probably in hopes of getting Junjun to like her more in the same way that she likes her. The way that she's doing it, however, IS somewhat surprising, seeing as how Aika probably has NO idea what Junjun has in her kitchen, and the fact that (given her young age) we don't know how well she can actually cook.



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The girl felt herself grin when she heard a voice humming softly along with her from behind the door.
'Haha, Junjun is so silly sometimes, but I'm glad I fell in love with her.'
With her newly sorted emotions, Aika began to hum freely again.
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww... :shy1:




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Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle? [Chap 6 - Nov 12]
« Reply #49 on: November 18, 2008, 04:24:11 AM »
Oh no...oh my... REINA?! :doh: But I feel happy for TakaGaki...though Reina seems like she might but a dent in things. And JunMittsi... :wub: Well, one sided anyway. I bet that room Junjun has is just of all the members and such. In fact, I believe that there's some secret spot somewhere in her house for Kamei's stuff... :ph34r:

Excellent job! I'm amazed that you managed to stay updated... I could never do that... ^^;

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Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle? [Chap 7 - Nov 17]
« Reply #50 on: November 19, 2008, 09:17:49 AM »
I'm glad I came to check this thread. It's been some time and I apologize. I wonder what made me click on this today, must be all the 7s in the title (I like the number 7) and the pull of a Risa filled chapter. I just gravitate towards anything Gaki-san you see :P

Well, well, well. Reina, damn...she sure is bold isn't she? And of all times to confess her feelings? Why now when TakaGaki are together? But if it ain't so things wouldn't be fun would it?

I'll be anticaipating your next update and I appreciate the long chapters. Ganbatte~!! :)

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Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle? [Chap 7 - Nov 17]
« Reply #51 on: November 19, 2008, 10:08:24 AM »
eeek!  Reina messing with TakaGaki!  And here I thought one couple was set XD  oh how wrong i was.  Predictable is one thing this story is not and because of that it's a lot of fun to read =D

loved the long chapter.  It would have been perfect if eri and sayu also made an appearance but I'm sure that's coming up soon. keep up the good work!

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Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle? [Chap 7 - Nov 17]
« Reply #52 on: November 19, 2008, 11:56:35 AM »
HEHE. now Reinas messing with TakaGaki i cnt definitely wait! OMG! XD

weeeee~  :cow:

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Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle? [Chap 7 - Nov 17]
« Reply #53 on: November 19, 2008, 06:05:37 PM »
love circle indeed  XD

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Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle? [Chap 8 - Nov 27]
« Reply #54 on: November 28, 2008, 06:21:24 AM »
 :bigdeal:
LOL Aw man.... I obviously fail at deadlines, I'm like 4 days over the one I made for myself

But here's some interesting news about the life people probably don't give a damn about;
this Friday our school has a Japan Fair and the Japan club and those in Japanese class have to attend and participate
- in other words create stations and what not -

The grade 12's (me this year) always have to do some sort of play, guess which play we decided on (I swear I did not even bother to suggest it, but it was in my head for awhile when I heard that we had to do a play)

CINDERELLA  :on gay:
(lol we should have made it a musical :lol:)

As soon as I found out we would be doing this play I practically laughed like crazy (emphasis on crazy since nobody was a Momusu fan so that's what they thought I was, plain crazy)

I was pretty shocked actually, the irony of it was a little too much; btw last year was Romeo and Juliet

Big downside is the fact that not many people understand Japanese, and need subtitles, so since there are subtitles there's not much freedom in ad-libbing (Which I can be good at even if it is in Japanese, I'm pretty sure a select few in my class feel the same)
Plus the subtitles (AKA flimsy paper with horrible writing) are driving everyone insane.

So that's my rant guys, probably not many people read that but oh well XD


@JFC: Haha yes rebound >< shows what a little rejection can do, and there is absolutely nothing wrong with Junjun being a fan XD

@ShikyoxYaiba: LOL OMG I swear I should have put that!! :: includes a secret extra room in Junjun's apartment :: there should be like levers and locks and stuff XD

@lil_hamz: Well, they can be happy together, but they're going to have to earn it :P Or maybe Takahashi will end up with Tanakacchi o.O" :: gets killed by TakaGaki fans ::

@Sukoshi: Yes well, lately I've been able to predict storylines far too often for my taste, so a little unpredictability wouldn't hurt XD

@ringo-hime: Haha, you're gonna have to wait a little longer though, since this is right now 8th gen.

@kRisZ: >_> At least that came across well~



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Chapter 8


'Stupid Junjun'
Koharu briskly walked to the near empty train station. It was already fairly dark outside and the wind made the girls shiver.
'Stupid Mitsui'
Linlin tried to keep up with Koharu's pace but ended up at least a meter behind her.
"K-Kusumi-san? Why are you walking -- so fast??" Koharu did not hear the girl behind her and continued walking. The tall girl abruptly stopped when she got to the station, causing Linlin to accidentally bump into Koharu's back due to the momentum. These were all ignored by the tall girl however, because Koharu couldn't keep away the thoughts of the possible things Mitsui and Junjun could be doing at this time.

"I wanna head back..." She suddenly said to Linlin, causing the other girl to give her a bewildered look.
"Huh?! Why?"
"I... I'm afraid to leave those two alone together..." she said quietly, her eyes downcast and her bangs hid her face.
"Ah... I see, Kusumi-san, you wouldn't happen to like Mitsui-san would you?" The tall girl whipped her head up and looked at Linlin with a surprised look.
"How--? Linlin you won't tell anyone will you?"
"Of course not, don't worry." The girl gave Koharu a reassuring smile, causing Koharu to calm down.

"I just get so jealous sometimes when I see how Mitsui looks at Junjun..." Koharu started, casting her look to the city lights, "and now Mitsui is sleeping over at Junjun's... I'm afraid of what they might be doing." confessing her greatest fears to the girl beside her, she shifted slightly to her left leg, looking around cautiously at the people around them. Linlin gave a saddened expression beside her.
"I didn't get jealous at that for some reason..."
"Huh?" Koharu looked at Linlin again, not really understanding what the girl meant.

"I wonder how I feel about Junjun." Linlin continued, causing the both of them to fall silent, both unsure of what to say. They had all gotten closer together, so being the new friend that she was Koharu thought she should help Linlin as a friend.
"You get jealous when she gives her attention to other people don't you?"
The other girl nodded slowly but tilted her head slightly in confusion. "That's true, but I wonder why I didn't get jealous about Mitsui sleeping over at Junjun's..." Koharu couldn't help but smile a bit despite the serious conversation they were having.
"Linlin that's not good, you forgot the 'san' again."
"OH NO, why do I keep doing that??" both of them lightened up and began laughing, some people who were walking by would look at them strangely, but they didn't care.

"Linlin" Koharu called the other girl, causing her to look up at Koharu.
"Hm?"
"We're friends now, so whatever problem we'll tell each other okay? It's difficult being alone all the time." Koharu smiled when she saw Linlin smile brightly at her.
"YES, we are good friends! I'll try to help you as much as I can!"
The miracle girl just laughed at the other girl, "its okay, you don't need to physically help, just talking with me is helpful enough."
Linlin hugged the girl beside her, "Don't worry, I'll be there for you!"
They both laughed freely, allowing their sadness to slowly fall away.

"Oh, Linlin! The train is here!"
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   The sweet smell wafted from the kitchen, filling the living room. Junjun, whom was sitting with her back leaning on the kitchen door, closed her eyes and enjoyed the scent. Her stomach rumbled slightly and she couldn't help but rush Mitsui-san in her mind. A little after 10 minutes Mitsui-san opened the door; Junjun had not expected it to be opened so suddenly so she toppled backwards. Good thing Mitsui-san was cautious and somehow knew she was there and took a step back.
Junjun groaned slightly from the head pain, she had hit her head on the floor when she fell. Her eyes were closed as she rubbed the back of her head but she opened them to see a giggling Mitsui-san above her.
"Junjun you okay?" blushing, she nodded in embarrassment and quickly got up.
"Done?" Junjun asked, looking forward to whatever the other girl had cooked up.
"Yup, it's here." Mitsui-san pointed to the two plates sitting on the kitchen table.
"Okay, I'll help." the tall girl took both plates, one in each hand, and headed for the dining table.

"Wait! Isn't it heavy? And that's dangerous, let me help you!" Mitsui-san's words were lost on the girl as she held both plates firmly. After a little while they proved too heavy and with shaky hands, Junjun attempted to put the plates down softly but her left hand moved and the bottom of the plate hit her right arm.
Junjun hissed as she dropped the plates on the table successfully; Mitsui-san rushed over to the girl immediately.
"Oh my god, are you okay?!"
"Yes, I'm fine don't worry." She tried to put up a strong front but the shorter girl in front of her saw through it easily.
"No you're not, let me see it." Junjun wouldn't oblige to the command resulting in some tugs and whines. Finally Junjun lifted her left hand to reveal a large red spot on her arm.
"Oh geez, come here," Mitsui-san grabbed Junjun by the other arm and she softly but forcefully led the girl to the sink, turning on the cold water, and sticking Junjun's arm under it. "You have to put it under cold water for 5 minutes or so."
She nodded slowly, amazed at how mature Mitsui-san was. "Yes mother~" she jokingly said, earning a small shove from her side.

   Both hands were under the cold water as Mitsui-san had not yet removed her hand from Junjun's arm. A peaceful silence came and the only sounds they could hear was the rushing water. Unknowingly, Mitsui-san's hand had crept down to reach the other girl's hand and Junjun unconsciously intertwined them. Both of them just stood there, the warmth of each other's hands countered the cold temperature of the water. However after awhile Junjun finally seemed to process the mood it was turning into and became afraid. She quickly let go of the hand and turned the water off, heading for the dining table.
"I'm fine now, we should eat." Her voice turned out colder than she expected and she didn't want to turn back to see Mitsui-san's hurt expression.
'Why am I so afraid of being close to Mitsui-san?' It was true; every time they got too close it would be she whom always steps away. It wasn't because she hated Mitsui-san or anything - that was definitely not it - in fact, she found the little girl quite interesting and was always amazed on how mature the baby-faced girl can be sometimes.

   Mitsui-san followed after Junjun and both of them sat down to eat. They ate in silence and it was slowly driving Junjun insane. Why was that she can easily befriend anyone in Morning Musume and become very close with them except for Mitsui-san? She looked up from her plate and watched the girl sitting across from her. Mitsui-san's bangs were down and her short hair hid her eyes as she put her face close to the plate. Junjun wanted to apologize to the girl, even if she didn't understand what it was for, she felt as if she had to apologize.
"Mitsui-san..." she began, but the girl in question swiftly looked up and stopped her.
"Junjun, call me Mitsui, or better yet, Aika is fine too. We're friends right?" Junjun thought this through for the moment, indeed she wanted to be friends but could she do it?
"Well, if that's the case, call me mm..... Jun!"
"Jun??"
"Yep!" Junjun grinned at the girl and she received a grin back, it seems they were finally getting closer. She was about to go back to eating before Mitsu---- Aika stopped her again.
"Were you going to say something Jun?" when Aika said her name at the end it sounded a bit awkward,  Junjun assumed it would sound just as weird if she called Aika's name too.
"Oh right," she had quickly forgotten, getting a new nickname seemed to have distracted her, "I was going to say sorry."
"For what?"
"Uh..."
"Is this about avoiding me all the time?"
'So she noticed' Junjun mentally face palmed.
"Well I'm fine with it, as long as you tell me a reason why you have been avoiding me." Aika said while smiling sweetly, Junjun instantly declared that a devil's smirk.
"Well..." Aika looked directly into Junjun's eyes; it felt as if she was looking into her soul, "I'm not sure." Junjun ended lamely, she bowed her head down, breaking the eye contact with the other girl.

   Junjun could still feel the intense stare Aika gave her despite the fact that Junjun's head was down. "I see." was all that Aika had said after Junjun lamely attempted to understand her emotions. Suddenly she was very afraid of suggesting something, and she pushed the thought to the very back of her mind and continued eating. Aika did not continue, and Junjun could still feel the eyes of the other girl following her move.
"Is it because I'm not really an adult yet and I'm much younger than you?" This caused the tall girl to look up, and look straight at Aika in the eyes. Looking deeply into it, she could see the reflection of herself in the glistening dark brown orbs.
"Is that why?" Junjun didn't really direct the question at the other girl; it was more of a question directed to herself. The girl sitting across from Junjun seemed to smile at the tall banana loving girl; Aika seemed to just shine, and Junjun felt warmth just being around her. As expected from Miss Smiles she supposed.
"Jun..." Aika's right hand went to cup Junjun's cheek; the name she called was soft, almost as if in a whisper. "You're crying again." Her voice contained a hint of laughter, but it wasn't at her, it was to reassure her and to calm her down. Before Junjun noticed, her eyes indeed were watery. She was a cry baby, and she knew, but this time she forced herself to stop, her mind yelling to stop crying. It was embarrassing for her to cry in front of someone much younger than she.
She looked away, the thought of being strong firmly in her mind. After a few sniffs she got herself together and looked back at Aika. It was late, and she had to ask the question sooner or later.

"Are you going to sleep with me tonight?" Junjun could not phrase that any better and did not understand how odd that question sounded due to her lack of Japanese vocabulary, but somewhere in the back of her mind, she knew that question was a little awkward. Aika severely blushed, for being a 16 year old girl; it was much too early for her to be having thoughts like that. Junjun blushed too and quickly clarified herself.
"I mean, I can sleep on the sofa if you want..." Aika shook her head at the tall girl, causing her to trail off.

"I'm sleeping with you tonight."
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 :dizzy:
I'm wondering if I'm getting the person's color right =.="
Because it was either Tanakacchi or Linlin, they always seem to switch
and I'm like friggin' color-blind (slightly) so I can't tell shades =.="
Good thing wordpad tells me what color I'm choosing XD

So in case you haven't noticed, I've been working on dialogue recently ^^;
I believe dialogue brings out their personality easier than well... description and narration I suppose.

But I guess I find dialogue slightly more comical than action,
plus action can be a pain as a description XD

I'm sorry if people don't really like 7/8th gen, but I can't leave them one day behind forever.
BTW here's a little Jun/Mitsui-ness from me :twisted:   :lol:

Their colors are really close and both have a calm feel to it
Junjun looked a little nervous around Mitsui in MM DVD Mag.19
There are times when Mitsui sides with Junjun in the 7/8th gen MC's in the Resonant Blue concert (she hasn't sided with Kusumi I don't think...)
(One I really like) In a Haromoni@ ep when they gave Mitsui a really hard memory quiz; Mitsui pulled her jacket too far down and Junjun pulled it up (I couldn't find what was wrong but I guess Junjun got a little over-protective)
You see in the next frame that the zipper is pulled up~  :D

and other little bits that can be seen if you look XD
Okay I'm off~ :byebye:

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Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle? [Chap 8 - Nov 27]
« Reply #55 on: November 28, 2008, 08:12:44 AM »
Kyaaaa! I'm glad there's a lot of interaction between the 7th/8th gen. ^^ Linlin and Koharu now understand each other, and as for Junjun and Mittsi...well, I guess we'll have to see how that goes. :/ I wonder if Junjun's gonna end up confused now... o_O Mittsi or Eri? xD

Ah, I forgot to mention about the members colors. Reina's is more of a brighter blue and Linlin's is more of a... darker seafoam green. xD (Sorry, I'm actually fairly color specific.) I suppose an example would just be better.

Reina
Linlin
(<--Just a bit more blue/darker.)

I hope that helps. ;) Gosh, that was hard to do by iTouch... xD
« Last Edit: November 28, 2008, 09:26:16 AM by ShikyoxYaiba »

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Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle? [Chap 8 - Nov 27]
« Reply #56 on: November 28, 2008, 08:24:22 AM »
I like reading about stuff that happen in people's lives especially one that is H!P related so feel free to post about it. I wanna know what happens during your rehearsals. Who got to be prince and Cinderella? :D

When Koharu said she didn't need Lin Lin's physical help I cracked up XD
I wonder why I get shivers reading about Jun Jun and Aika. I think it's because I never thought about those 2 liking each other that way. Oh man now you got me thinking :lol:

OMG there was a jacket scene in HM@? Which? Better yet somebody put up the YT link cuz I don't know how to start looking :P

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Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle? [Chap 8 - Nov 27]
« Reply #57 on: November 28, 2008, 01:49:02 PM »
T-T. gosh. XD

oh well, this chappie is cute~ hehehe.
8th gen <3

kekeke.  :lol: poor Koha and Lin  :O

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Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle? [Chap 8 - Nov 27]
« Reply #58 on: November 29, 2008, 04:24:34 AM »
OKAY OMG,
SORRY THIS IS NOT AN UPDATE BUT I HAVE TO SAY SOMETHING WHILE I'M STILL IN THIS MOOD
AH
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sorry caps.. okay, so I just got home after finishing up the play and cleaning up
and I'm gonna go ahead and say, WOW that was exhilarating!!!
(I kinda understand the feeling of being on stage now  :tama-laff:)

The play~ the subtitles~ the sound~ EVERYTHING was PERFECT
even though there would always be something wrong during practice ><
The crowd received everything well and we got the reactions we wanted,
nothing can describe my feeling of happiness/accomplishment right now

So yeah, technically we named it
Cinderella and the Samurais

so it was our rendition of Cinderella (everyone wore Yukatas)
we were warned no cross dressing but I ended up as a samurai anyway XD (thank god)

Well, I'm gonna get it sometime next week (the video; somebody recorded it) and I'll post it up on youtube if any of you guys want to see it
the subtitles did not get recorded in but... is that okay?

Now I really wanna watch Cinderella the Musical now >< I wanna see how fail ours is compared to theirs (obviously)
but still, I'm happy about ours

In rehearsals at least 1 person would always be absent or busy and sometimes we don't have enough people for one or two scenes
or the subtitles were all messed up and some went missing
But during the actual thing, the subtitles were great, the acting was great, nobody forgot their lines

afterwards we were all sweating and it was hell hot (everyone was fanning themselves with uchiwas)
I understand now that Morning Musume sweat so much (or say it was a very hot concert) not just because of dancing so much, but it's also just being on stage as well XD

Haah~
I'm just in my all time high right now :luvluv2:



Now something a little more on topic:
@ShikyoxYaiba: (almost wrote your name as Yabai) lol yeah well... Mitsui is a determined worker and mature and reliable, Eri is impossibly adorable and cheers people up just by being there
Haaard choice really... even for me ><
Haha and about the colors,mind going on word pad and telling me the names of the colors that's for them XD cuz seriously, even though you've put them side by side the colors look the same to me ^^;

@lil_hamz: ^::points to mass of text above:: lol well there you go
the prince  :on asmo: was my Korean friend (very feminine, amazingly knows a lot about hair and makeup, but also exceedingly shy and unspoken)
and there were 3 Cinderellas
(1st one has adequate Japanese, smart, cute, nice, ...uh.. yea... >__>)
(2nd one is a pretty miss perfect, family knows Japanese so her pronunciation was never wrong)
(3rd one is my friend, horrible Japanese, shy.. uh.. on stage only, but she only had a few lines so no problems)
LOL well... Linlin's physical help may screw up things more XD
and YES hopefully by the end you'll be converted into a JunKa (or should I say MiJun?) pairing fan XD

@ringo-hime: Thank you~ haha Kusumi and Linlin may seem excluded, but I really want them to be more helpful and important than they usually are in fanfictions >__<
it's so rare for 8th gen to be featured sometimes!
but yea, thanks for reading





 :sweat: ::notices the lack of comments::
oh well, I can't be like that since I decided to post my story up either way~
but I thank all those that read and comment~ :heart:
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Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle? [Chap 8 - Nov 27]
« Reply #59 on: November 29, 2008, 06:30:50 AM »
hmmm wonder what will happen next *coughonbedcough*  XD


UL, i'm sure it's fun to watch it 

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