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Re: Paper Trails (Chapter 2: Everyday I'm Hustlin)
« Reply #20 on: November 13, 2008, 06:35:07 AM »
Reina's Pov
I concur with the motion that Reina should've kicked that asswipe's teeth in.  :angry:



Sayumi's Pov
No one can succeed against the power of a wonky hug! :lol:



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"Okay so here's the plan"

Reina leaned in closer to Sayumi and whispered her brilliant idea into Sayu's ear.

"That plan sucks!" Sayu yelled
Reina = :mon psst:
Sayu = :mon wtf:



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"Obviously you can't do this without me" she sighed "Bring me to the bank!"

Oh what the hell, I'm in
Well, it's not quite how Reina had planned, but Sayu's in! :rockon:



Risa's Pov

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*OPENING PART WITH TANASHIGE TALKING TO RISA*
The oddball-ness of the exchange is absolute money!  :rofl:



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"Listen" said Reina

"No"

"I didn't even say anything"

"Whatever it is No!"

"Wait-"

"No"

"I-"

"No"

"Buh-"

"No"

"Argh"
Dang, that's like how I am when students want to try and get me to give them permission to do stupid shit in class instead of doing their work. :D



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"We could got to jail"

"We won't get caught"
That's what they ALL think.  :-X




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Re: Paper Trails (Chapter 3: Don't Sweat the Technique)
« Reply #21 on: November 13, 2008, 07:25:06 AM »
Ehhhhh?!?!? The hypnotizing worked?? Hmmm Maybe I should try it on myself :hehehe: *Goes to stand in front of mirror with chain watch in hand*

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It should not be this f**kin cold...  F**kin Global Warming

I was thinking the exact same thing when I woke up today. It was pouring like crazy.

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I refuse to hug her back!
Nope not gonna do it

A few minutes passed and Reina was still hugging Sayu

Goddamn it!
People are starting to stare!

she sighed Fine I give up

Sayu raised her arms to hug Reina back, but just before she could finish wrapping her arms around the other, Reina instantly let go.

"Stupid cat!' Sayu mumbled

Shetried to play me! ME! SayuMI!

"Aww did I make the wittle bunny blush" Reina said with a smile on her face "hehe"

Its cuz I'm frustrated! FRUSTRATED! Not cuz of you- you conceited litt- That's it! I'm soo putting honey in your bra! MWHAHAHA!

This part cracked me up! :mon lmao: I hope no one noticed me slapping the table and laughing madly :sweat:

Seeing the girls speak such profanities is interesting. It reminds me of something that happened when my cousin and I were kids. My aunt grabbed a slipper and smacked her on the mouth for sprouting them. Gosh, that was one scary experience :mon wtf:   

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"Just here us out"

I think you meant ‘hear’? It’s not a big deal but I thought you might wanna know :gmon bang:

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Re: Paper Trails (Chapter 3: Don't Sweat the Technique)
« Reply #22 on: November 13, 2008, 03:39:16 PM »
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Shetried to play me! ME! SayuMI!
:rofl:!! good one there
lol you know its like, cuz the 'Sa' in Sayu's name sounds like the word for 'kill' in chinese, some taiwanese fans write her name as 'kill'you  :lol:
(sorry its a alittle off topic, but its funny anyway XD)

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"Obviously you can't do this without me" she sighed "Bring me to the bank!"
Well said Sayu, that's exactly what I thought XD


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I was not made to live like this

My god that is just SO sayu XD

Let me just say I was practically laughing through the chapter. I loved this.  :on GJ: five stars

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Re: Paper Trails (Chapter 3: Don't Sweat the Technique)
« Reply #23 on: November 13, 2008, 04:31:24 PM »
opps :mon sweat: *runs off to fix*
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Re: Paper Trails (Chapter 3: Don't Sweat the Technique)
« Reply #24 on: November 14, 2008, 08:35:20 AM »
absolutely loving Niigaki and Michishige in this XD

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"Listen" said Reina

"No"

"I didn't even say anything"

"Whatever it is No!"

"Wait-"

"No"

"I-"

"No"

"Buh-"

"No"

"Argh"

I get this all the time XD
and I do it to others too, whenever I read that part I have to read aloud cuz it's funnier that way ^^;

actually that whole conversation was hilarious
have I mentioned just how much I love Niigaki in this? ><

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Re: Paper Trails (Chapter 3: Don't Sweat the Technique)
« Reply #25 on: November 15, 2008, 10:09:56 PM »
Reina is such a badass. :lol: I love that. I also agree with the countless other ppl, she should have kicked his ass. Gah, should have known it was her idea!! :grin:
Oshit, Sayu... XD No one can resist a hug from Reina!!! Haha, Reina definitely needs her b/c she is teh masta manipulata~~~~~ :P
Gaki, sweet law-abiding Gaki~~ :wub: Her POV was obviously the best!!! Love how she's like the parent and already knows they are up to no good!!!

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Re: Paper Trails (Chapter 3: Don't Sweat the Technique)
« Reply #26 on: November 16, 2008, 12:28:00 PM »
hehe I would quote my favourite lines in the new chapter but I'm afraid there are just too many funny parts to list XD  though I must say I laughed the most at the stupid cat comment.  I'm a little doubtful at just how much smarter Sayu is since she's going along with it but..then again one really shouldn't doubt sayu XD  Can't wait to see how they get Risa in the mix.

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Re: Paper Trails (Chapter 3: Don't Sweat the Technique)
« Reply #27 on: November 24, 2008, 08:52:16 PM »
Hey guys sorry I haven't updated... stupid school stressing me out its like all the teachers decided to give me an exam the same week in some evil plot PLUS my job is... well I guess I should be posting that on the frustration thread :P But I'm in a good mood now and that means updating time so yea! :pimp:
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Chapter 4: Don't Push Me Cuz I'm Close to the Edge

Risa's Pov

Risa walked to her job as usual. Keeping a bright and friendly appearance for her co-workers, despite the growing stress Reina and Sayumi had caused her.  Her mind was consumed with thoughts and concerns:

Will they or will they not actually do it?... If so how can I stop them?... Should I stop them?- OF COURSE YOU SHOULD RISA WHAT ARE YOU THINKING!

Her manager had called her into his office awhile ago, however she wasn't really paying attention her mind still on her two foolish roommates

"I'm sorry Risa but we gonna have to let you go" her manager said, Risa was very alert now

"What!  Why!"

"The company is downsizing I'm sorry but" he shrugged

OMG this can't be happening "I'll work for less! Please I need this job"

"I'm sorry Risa, you know we all love you unfortunately your postison is not really a major asset to this company... We no longer need you here"

"Is there another position? I'll do anything I need this" she begged

"Risa-"

"Please don't do this"

"This isn't up for negotiation! Your fired, end of story! Just leave your uniform at you locker and leave... once again I'm sorry" He said obviously irritated that Risa was dragging this on

She left the supermarket feeling depressed and defeated as she headed home.  When she got there she was thankful that the other two weren't home.  She laid on her bed and stared at the peeling ceiling, a few minutes later she fell asleep. She awoke the next day to the sounds of the TV blaring in the living room.  She got up from her bed and went to the bathroom after brushing her teeth and washing her face she stared at herself in the mirror.  She began making funny faces to herself, contorting her cheeks, lips, and eyebrows into several different expressions

"Today is a new day... Yesterday sucked... Today will too... But that's okay cuz life sucks! Just gotta make the best of it!" she said cheerfully "Press on Risa!"

She went into the living room picking up a newspaper before sitting next to Reina.

"So I hear you were fired"said Reina who turned off the TV to face her friend

"I was"

"Interesting"

"Not really"

"So what now?"

"Now I look for another job" Risa replied as she skimmed through the classifieds circling some skipping over others

"I got a job for you... a bank job" Reina said smiling at her cleverness

"No!" Risa said putting down her newspaper "Bye"

"Where ya going"

"Job hunting and escaping your stupid rant on the benefits of committing a federal crime"
***
Day after day Risa searched for a job.  No matter were she applied she never got accepted, she knew it would be hard but she was starting to get frustrated.  It didn't help that both Sayu and Reina were whining and complaining in her ear, making robbing a bank more appetizing each day.  She refused to give in though and finally her perseverance paid off when she got called back for an interview.

"They're going not to hire you y'know" Sayu said as Risa got ready

"Getting an interview means you're hired, besides people love me" Risa replied buttoning up her blouse

"No people love me they only like you... but that's besides the point, no one hires a person with a record"

"I had a job before.. they hired me" Don't bother with your mind games Sayu I'm in too good of a mood besides tricks are for kids teehee

"Yeah to bag groceries! Come on Risa don't waste your time.  What are you going to say when they ask you why you were arrested" Sayu retorted

"That I was arrested but never convicted and I was a silly child then who has matured and learn from my mistakes"

"Oh thats good! I mean uh- don't go Risa the bank thing will only takes a day and we'll be rich"

"Nope"

"Damn you" Sayu pouted
***

"Hey how'd the interview go" Reina greeted Risa as she entered the door.

Risa ignored her and headed to the fridge.

"That bad huh"

Risa kept quiet

"I don't understand why you have to be so f**king righteous just-"

"You think I like this" Risa scoffed "Sorry I have freakin' morals"

"Whatever man... I'm out me and Sayu will be at the parking lot across the bank... We'll love it if you joined us" Reina said before leaving

"I hate this!" Risa continued, talking to herself "I hate struggling and being rejected! But I still do it!  I hate walking everywhere but I still do it! I hate this apartment but I still live in it.  Because I have to not cuz I want to!"  She sat down "I hate being stuck... no way of making it... no hope for a better life.  But I grin and bear it...  Those crazy kids!  I need to prove to them that we don't have to resort to theft!" she said rising out of her chair feeling renewed and motivated "That we can make an honest living and still-"

The lights went out in their apartment

Snap "You've gotta be f**king kidding me"she yelled

She walked out of the kitchen.  Tripping over various items as she headed to the living room.  Her eyes slowly adjusted to the darkness, once she found her keys she grabbed a sweater and left.  She met up with Reina and Sayu, who were staring across at the bank.

"I'm in"

Reina smiled "Cool"

"We should celebrate"Sayu suggested

"Celebrated what crime, theft, insanity?" Risa sarcastically asked

"Nope! Our last days pf poverty" Sayu answered smiling

"Here Here" said Reina
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Re: Paper Trails (Chapter 4: Don't Push Me Cuz I'm Close to the Edge)
« Reply #28 on: November 25, 2008, 12:40:14 AM »
OMFG, this was so much WINNNNNNN~~~~ XD Dammit, why the fuck would ANYONE fire Gaki?!?!??!?!?!?! :angry: I know I wouldn't b/c I'd wanna stare at her all day long. :inlove: Wait a sec, Gaki was ARRESTED?!?!?!?!?! :w00t: For what?!?!??!! I'm so intrigued. :lol:

BTW, the title sounds familiar... :?

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Re: Paper Trails (Chapter 4: Don't Push Me Cuz I'm Close to the Edge)
« Reply #29 on: November 25, 2008, 02:36:44 AM »
Chapter 4: Don't Push Me Cuz I'm Close to the Edge

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*RISA'S JOB PROBLEMS*
:mon wtf:

Well, I guess NOW she'll have more of an incentive/reason to join the other two.



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no one hires a person with a record

...

What are you going to say when they ask you why you were arrested" Sayu retorted

"That I was arrested but never convicted and I was a silly child then who has matured and learn from my mistakes"
Uh-oh. That could be a problem. :o

And here are Sayu and Reina trying to get her to ADD to her record?  :-X



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"Hey how'd the interview go" Reina greeted Risa as she entered the door.

Risa ignored her and headed to the fridge.

"That bad huh"

Risa kept quiet
Yeah, it makes it hard to make a decent living when most employers refuse to look beyond a person's record (or even AT it to see what's actually on it) and give a chance to someone who could potentially be just as valuable an employee as someone without a record.  :angry:



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The lights went out in their apartment

Snap "You've gotta be f**king kidding me"she yelled

She walked out of the kitchen.  Tripping over various items as she headed to the living room.  Her eyes slowly adjusted to the darkness, once she found her keys she grabbed a sweater and left.  She met up with Reina and Sayu, who were staring across at the bank.

"I'm in"
Well...everyone has their breaking point.   :(

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Re: Paper Trails (Chapter 4: Don't Push Me Cuz I'm Close to the Edge)
« Reply #30 on: November 25, 2008, 06:44:11 PM »
O.O!
A drug-dealer Reina

Sayu is SO cool on this fic  :inlove:

Gaki XD

What didi she do?

Highlight of this chapter:
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Reina spoke first "Risa"

"Yes"

Sayu spoke next "Mame"

"Yes?"

Reina's turn "Gaki"

"..."

"Ni-Ni?"

"What's up guys"

"Risa I hate to be the one to tell you this but... you've changed"said Reina

Sayu continued "Your bright light is diminishing"

"Your fading away"

Risa watched them amused "Uh huh"

"Yeah! and we miss the old bubbly you"

"Super positive and fun!" they both stuck their thumbs out in unison

"Uh huh" something's not right here

"But don't worry we found a way to turn you frown upside down"

"Alleviate your burden"

"Set you free from the stress you suffered!" Reina exclaimed rising at her seat with excitement

"What do you wan-"

"Sssh its okay we understand"

Risa stared at them, squinted her eyes she focusing in on Reina"What did you do"

"Nothing..." Reina replied "yet"

Risa put her bags down and rubbed her temples I don't like where this is going

Bunny+Cat=So hillarious together XD

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Re: Paper Trails (Chapter 4: Don't Push Me Cuz I'm Close to the Edge)
« Reply #31 on: November 26, 2008, 11:21:06 AM »
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Sayu's radio show: Reina is glad she joined MM, not just herself, but a lot of people think so. People said that if Reina didn't join MM, she'll probably end up on the street up to no good. Sayu says she might still find out about Reina, but from the news.

Reading that made me instantly think of this story XD  Fiction based on possible fact is sometimes so hilarious XD

like the others I'm really curious what Risa did to have a bad brush with the law.  Risa seems so innocent...my guess is she accidentally burnt a good building down in Yokohama.

I feel bad for Risa...plus the cat and bunny aren't helping (but man are they funny XD

I'm so excited after this chapter!  Can't wait to see what happens to the trio.



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Re: Paper Trails (Chapter 4: Don't Push Me Cuz I'm Close to the Edge)
« Reply #32 on: November 27, 2008, 05:03:56 AM »
Dammit, why the fuck would ANYONE fire Gaki?!?!??!?!?!?! :angry: I know I wouldn't b/c I'd wanna stare at her all day long. :inlove:

Ditto that :P

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*RISA'S JOB PROBLEMS*
:mon wtf:
Well, I guess NOW she'll have more of an incentive/reason to join the other two.

Risa will always has a job offer. To be my personal assistant XD

like the others I'm really curious what Risa did to have a bad brush with the law.  Risa seems so innocent...my guess is she accidentally burnt a good building down in Yokohama.

OMG just imaging Risa setting a building alight made me laugh :lol:

I hope you don't get too stressed out from school. Just think of those teachers as a basket full of baddie egg yolks!!! <--HUH?!?! :D

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Re: Paper Trails (Chapter 5: Ching-A-Ling)
« Reply #33 on: December 02, 2008, 09:54:16 PM »
@strawb3rrykream: haha all of my titles are Rap song titles... there’s no point in them really but I listen to it when I'm trying to get gangsta' :P... oh and Gaki's past will be revealed soon

@JFC: So very true it’s messed up but that’s the type of world we live in... Oh and Sayu and Reina aren't trying to add to the record they believe they'll never get caught

@Yankii Heart: I love the bunny+cat combo too :yep: I find them interacting with each other fun

@Sukoshi: Haha dude that’s awesome Reina on the street up to no good I wonder what she meant by that I hope not drug dealing  :shocked: but yea Gaki's too innocent... with roommates like Reina and Sayu she has to have some kinda hidden dormant kick assness :twisted:... but pyro Risa sounds fun

@lil hamz: Baddie egg yolk you say *rubs chin* that just might work!
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Chapter 5: Ching-A-Ling



"Do you really think we should be drinking?  Shouldn't we have a clear mind for this?" Rise asked

"It's for the nerves" Reina answered "and to make you more accepting to our plan"

"Not 'our' yours " said Sayu

Reina rolled her eyes

"Umm... So what’s this plan you guys came up with... this plan that makes you so confident we won't get caught"

"No, not 'you guys' Reina!  Reina's stupid idea"

"Hey"

"I came up with something better" Say continued "A sure thing but Reina shot it down... I don't see why... money's not an issue considering we're robbing a bank"

"Risa, she was being ridiculous... super fancy expensive technology! Hiring more people!  That means dividing the money up even more! AND! They might turn on us like in the movies.

"Whatever!  It would've worked besides we would have ditched them so that wouldn't even-"

"But they could still ID our faces! Duh!"

"NOT IF WE NEVER DIRECTLY SPOKE TO THEM OR USED A DISGUISE"

"THAT WOULD'VE TAKEN FOREVER... SMASH-GRAB-GO CLASSIC!"

"Guys" Gaki said trying to interrupt the argument

Sayu responded completely ignoring Risa's attempt "CLASSIC MY ASS!  THIS IS THE 21ST CENTURY-"

"Guys!" she tried again

"IT WORKED THEN IT'LL WORK NOW"

"WHA-"

"GUYS!" Risa yelled in frustration

They stared at her, surprised by the sudden outburst.

"The plan...” she said annoyed

"Oh! Right!" said Reina "Okay so it’s like this... me and you will do the actual heist since Sayu is freakishly uncoordinated"

"Hey I-"

"Don't bother Sayumi, we all know it’s true" said Risa

"Anywho... she's the get-away driver and Risa, since you have those hawk-like eyes, you'll be the shooter-"

"WHAT!" Gaki exclaimed

"Tranquilizer guns!" Sayu explained "My idea, Reina wanted to run in there with real guns"

"To threaten with! Not to shoot!-"

"But I suggested that we get tranquilizer guns... knocking out all potential witnesses and disabling any method of contacting the police" she grinned pleased with herself

"Oh.My.God." Risa was beginning to panic her hands shock as she gulped down the rest of her beer "Okay... So" She drank again "How are we going to get these tranquilizer guns?"

"Don't even worry about that" said Reina "I know a guy who works as a janitor at the hospital... he's willing to jack a few from the pysch ward in exchange for 2lbs of weed- more than a fair exchange I say- but he doesn't know what I need it for.  So the simple Mofo poses no threat during a police investigation the stupid pothead will either be too high or too scared to say anything even then he's totally clueless."

"I see..." Risa responded trying to remain calm

Reina continued "I'm going in with the explosives and-"

"EXPLOSIVES!"

"Calm down Gaki it’s for the vault" said Sayu

"Sorry my mind is barely wrapping itself around this" Risa apologized sarcastically

"Okay but inside voices please"

Gaki stared at her younger friend before opening another can of beer "And how will we bring bags of explosives and tranquilizer guns inside without anyone noticing... unless y'all really think I can knock out- OhgodwhatamIsaying- everyone in enough time"

Sayu clapped "I'm glad you mentioned that Risa cuz Ms.Tanaka over here really thought you could walk in with gianormous black duffel bags while wearing black ski masks... but I had to edit all of that see I-"

"Do you want to explain the plan"

"If you insist" Sayu chugged her reaming beer, straightened herself out, and proceeded to speak in a very serious tone:

   "1st: Our disguise will be flashy neon-colored hoodies and blue jeans; mine will be pink, Reina's purple, and yours will be lime green.  Also, we will have on white oversized sunglasses and both of you will carry 2 extra-large (fake) designers bags.  Our faces will be covered and we can transport the necessities without being obvious.  The flashy hoodies will be the only thing the people will recall when giving our descriptions to the police and since they will be zip-up hoodies-yes I've already bought them- we can discard them easily.

   2nd: Risa you will need to take out the employees at the counters and desks first- while Reina does crowd control 'Everyone down on the floor' and all that jazz- then target the other employees and security guards- Reina you help so this is done before they have a chance to react.  Civilians will be last to get tranquilized.

   3rd: Both of you will use black spray can to take out all the cameras. Make sure you're wearing gloves because we're leaving all that stuff there... the once filled bags will now be used to carry the money.

   4th: Reina, you will need to move fast, I know you're slow as hell, but move your ass since there might be an alarm attached to the vault.  Rise, you help.

   5th: Walk out nonchanatly we don't want outsiders to be suspicious- So Rise don't freak out- and meet me at the alley next to the bank we ditch the disguises, throw the money in the trunk and drive away... Simple"

"Simply perfect" Reina said smiling

"Simple... right...Who are you people?"

Reina and Sayu laughed

"So we're really gonna do this"

"Yup"

"We're nuts"

***

Sayu's Pov

Ugh my head hurts...
How long was I out?
Damn we drank way too much


She slowly opened her eyes and was surprised to find Risa awake and still drinking

"What time is it?"

"Ah Duesen noes" Risa mumbled

"Tomorrow we robbing a bank" Sayu said "I'm shocked you agreed"

Risa mumbled something again before passing out

"I'm shocked I agreed" She looks over at Reina "Actually I'm not"

She looks around the apartment again, not really focusing on anything in particular before falling asleep.
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This chapter is kinda sucky... sorry about that but oh well... oh and in terms of time we are right were the prologue started
« Last Edit: December 03, 2008, 07:46:08 AM by takagakifan »
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Re: Paper Trails (Chapter 5: Ching-A-Ling)
« Reply #34 on: December 03, 2008, 06:55:33 AM »
Chapter 5: Ching-A-Ling

Absolutely LOVED the bickering between Sayu and Reina over who's plan was better. XD



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"Oh! Right!" said Reina "Okay so it’s like this... me and you will do the actual heist since Sayu is freakishly uncoordinated"

"Hey I-"

"Don't bother Sayumi, we all know it’s true" said Risa
:rofl:



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"How are we going to get these tranquilizer guns?"

"Don't even worry about that" said Reina "I know a guy who works as a janitor at the hospital... he's willing to jack a few from the pysch ward in exchange for 2lbs of weed- more than a fair exchange I say- but he doesn't know what I need it for.  So the simple Mofo poses no threat during a police investigation the stupid pothead will either be too high or too scared to say anything even then he's totally clueless."

"I see..." Risa responded trying to remain calm.
If I was Risa I'd be worried. Pothead or not, the more outsiders that are involved in this scheme (either directly or indirectly)...the more potential leaks there can be and the more potential trouble it can lead to.



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   "1st: Our disguise will be flashy neon-colored hoodies and blue jeans; mine will be pink, Reina's purple, and yours will be lime green.  Also, we will have on white oversized sunglasses and both of you will carry 2 extra-large (fake) designers bags.  Our faces will be covered and we can transport the necessities without being obvious.  The flashy hoodies will be the only thing the people will recall when giving our descriptions to the police and since they will be zip-up hoodies-yes I've already bought them- we can discard them easily.
That idea's actually not half-bad. Sayu's right that the colour of the hoodies will likely be the main (and perhaps only) thing that any potential witnesses would remember if they're interviewed by police. And if they're big enough, they'll probably be able to cover up most of the rest of the outfits that the girls will be wearing underneath. Once they're out of harm's way, they ditch the hoodies, and they'll look different from what the people and security cameras will remember.



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*REMAINDER OF PLAN*
On paper at least, the plan looks surprisingly well-planned. :)



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*SAYU'S POV*
Risa was STILL drinking? Wow.

I've heard of "liquid courage" but Risa's taking it a bit far. :lol:

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Re: Paper Trails (Chapter 5: Ching-A-Ling)
« Reply #35 on: December 04, 2008, 12:49:15 AM »
OMG it's starting!! I'm assuming in the next chapter the girls are going for the heist. Did I spell that right? @@ Can't think straight right now since my tummy hurts <--- Why am I telling you that? :P

Sayu is hilarious once again. Does she really think the outfits she thought up won't attract attention :lol: And tranquilizer guns XD I hope no one gets hurt in the process *afraid*

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Re: Paper Trails (Chapter 5: Ching-A-Ling)
« Reply #36 on: December 04, 2008, 02:05:10 PM »
yay! another cool story  :muffin:

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Re: Paper Trails (Chapter 5: Ching-A-Ling)
« Reply #37 on: December 04, 2008, 03:59:14 PM »
OHHHH, nice plan XD
hahaha.
 now i cnt wait!!!  :lol: :lol:

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Re: Paper Trails (Chapter 5: Ching-A-Ling)
« Reply #38 on: December 06, 2008, 01:54:14 AM »
OMG I'm so excited!!! :w00t: Can't believe I want them to rob a bank. :lol: I love Sayu and Reina arguing so much, just makes it funnier. Shit, Reina wanted to bring real guns?! :shocked: Never mind, I guess that's what you'd bring if you were robbing a bank anyway. I like the flashy hoodie idea, pretty smart.
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Re: Paper Trails (Chapter 5: Ching-A-Ling)
« Reply #39 on: December 07, 2008, 11:53:20 AM »
Ah that was once again hilarious.  Reading this does bad things to the mind!  All of the sudden you start thinking it'd be fun to rob a bank and that their plan sounds almost doable  :P

I can't believe it but Reina really does have the better plan XD   the flashy hoodies are just mad brilliant though! XD

I love how the story has come full circle.  It feels like it's really starting now.  Can't wait to see what happens.

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