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Re: Fic of the Month // Nocturne [File #09]
« Reply #120 on: November 22, 2008, 08:14:55 PM »
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And easy to read. Haha.

You couldn't be more right. Ahhh it takes that much for me to go through one of ya chapters.

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A heartbeat later, she still hadn't made painful contact with the floor. Opening her eyes, the first thing she saw was her glass being handed back to her in perfect condition, without a single drop spilled. Her own body was being kept upright by a firm arm around her waist, and she blinked in confusion, trying to process the identity of her savior.

Cool!! And so very convenient :P Kamei-chan must have already fallen for Ai. I know it XD

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Re: Fic of the Month // Nocturne [File #09]
« Reply #121 on: November 23, 2008, 05:19:22 PM »
Woo I'm back! Quick chapter. I shouldn't be doing this but I am. Shh. XD

Comment replies first.


JFC: Lol, I posted chapter 9 before you managed to post your comment about chapter 8...oh well, at least it wasn't so tough to add in thoughts about chapter 9 since it was so short. Haha. Ai's pretty slick, yes. She knows exactly what she's doing. We get to see more of Ai in action here. Hehe.

SxY: I'm glad you like the slow buildup...some people might find it tedious. Lol. Of course, there are no such things as coincidence, not really. Hmm, I wonder. XD

Fenrir: Don't read my mind! Well, you've got the gist of it, but the way things are being done...hehe, hard to tell what Ai's up to. xD

stefy: Ya whatever, it's a bit cliched I'll admit. XD But hey it works! Lol. Hmm~

poets: Naturally I stop at cliffhangers. XD Makes it more fun. Suspense? What suspense? *innocent look* XD

rev2hd: LOL at your suggestion. Nah...Ai doesn't kill unnecessarily...but well, you know, collateral damage could conceivably happen...hehe. Gotta wonder if Ai might actually fall for Eri, or if it's all just for the job. XD

Sukoshi: Ai's good at what she does. :P There's some element of planning going on...and then there's pure dumb luck, and the ability to take advantage of the situation. Hehe. Things are going well for our resident assassin~

sweeety: Aw, hating on the fiance. Lol. Well, I don't like him much either, especially after this chapter. XD

Ichigo-chan: Eri does have that rich girl aura around her, doesn't she? XD As for the name changing thing, she does change her name once in a while, but when you get right down to it, her name "Takahashi Ai" is actually a really ordinary name. She doesn't have to go out of her way to change it, something generic usually works. And you poor Gaki fans going to such lengths just to see her in the story...I dunno if I should be happy or sad for poor Gaki-san. XD

lil_hamz: Haha another short chapter here. I'm being kind here! I wonder if Eri's in love yet...well, who knows? XD You'll see here.


Right-o. Here we go~

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Re: Fic of the Month // Nocturne [File #09]
« Reply #122 on: November 23, 2008, 05:24:22 PM »
File #10


"Do I know you?"

Eri gaped at the woman. How could she not remember? It wasn't that long ago from when they last met. Still clutching her drink in a shaky hand, Eri struggled to find something to say before her savior walked away.

Before she could speak though, another voice overshadowed hers. Her fiance, not pleased by the waiter's mishap that could have been a disaster, had walked up to the hapless man and was threatening to have him fired for scaring his fiancee.

"It's really alright..." Eri tried to interject, but her attempt to enter the conversation was ignored. Around them, a small crowd was gathering around to see what was going on.

"I think that should be enough. The poor man made a mistake. Nothing bad happened, so you don't have to threaten him with his job." Eri turned to see that familiar voice speaking up in defense of the waiter, arms folded. The waiter shot a quick, hopeful look at his only defender.

"A mere stranger should know their place. You're not even on the VIP list, are you? Stay out of this." The tame puppy that had been facing Eri had morphed into a lion on familiar ground. Kobayashi was far more comfortable with handling business opponents and anything else that was impersonal; he only had trouble with pretty girls on a personal basis.

"I don't think I need to be rich to point out an injustice. You're overreacting over nothing." She would have said more, but an older man, also a journalist, quickly walked over and grabbed her arm.

"Cut it out, Takahashi! You're in way over your head." He hissed, trying to yank her away.

Takahashi growled. "Let go of me Itsuki!" She looked disdainfully at her older colleague. "This is why I never joined the establishment; you're all weak ass-kissers."

"You're not with a newspaper? You have no right to be here then." Kobayashi folded his own arms. "Guards!"

Takahashi smiled grimly. "Think again, rich brat. I have every right to be here." With a flourish, she produced a document. "I'm allowed to cover non-classified government events and to be given free passage after outstanding service to the government."

Kobayashi paused, glancing over the paper with some apprehension.

"Alright, I concede that. But don't get cocky, you're just a journalist." Takahashi smiled.

"I'm not really a journalist, I just like to take photos." She raised her camera. "Don't go frowning now, you won't look good on print like that."

Kobayashi instinctively shielded his face, spitting a hasty reply in return. "Fine, whatever. You're not worth my time." He stalked off, and Takahashi lowered her camera smugly.

Only to be roughly turned around by a furious Itsuki.

"Do you know what you just did, kid? That guy you just insulted owns a large share in my paper! We could be in trouble after that little display!"

Takahashi shrugged and firmly removed his hands from her.

"That's very much your business, senpai, not mine." She looked around the room. "Well, there doesn't seem to be very much to do around here now, so I guess I better leave."

"Wait, you little...don't think I won't hit you because you're a girl!" Itsuki hissed, his veins bulging almost purple in his forehead. Takahashi raised an eyebrow at him.

"Don't think I won't hold back just because you're old." She shot right back, turning her back on him. "And remember who's the one who went into a war zone for 6 months. Hint: it's not you."

Itsuki took one step back at the dangerous tone in her voice, muttering vague threats under his breath as he backed off. Takahashi shrugged. Clearly her presence here would no longer be welcome.

Turning away, she started heading towards the exit. Only to be intercepted by a certain someone.

"Wait!" Eri huffed a little as she managed to catch up to her. Takahashi blinked.

"Yes?" Selectively disinterested. Eri sucked in a deep breath.

"Thank you for saving me." A moment of blankness, then comprehension.

"Oh. You're welcome." Takahashi looked at her with amusement. "You chased me all the way out of the room just to say that?"

Eri flushed slightly. "Er, well..." She decided to just go with her gut. "Actually, I wanted to talk to you. I've seen you before. You know, at the ice cream place. You and your sister."

A whole jumble of sentences strung together. Takahashi merely looked impassively at Eri, at least, until her sister was mentioned. Her brows knit together briefly, a flash of defensive concern flickering momentarily in her eyes.

"I see. What of it?" Eri paused. What did she have to ask of this person? Clearly, there was nothing more linking them, except curiosity, and Eri couldn't very well just randomly grab onto someone for no visible reason.

"If there's nothing else, I'll be leaving then." Takahashi was about to step away when a deep voice halted them both.

"Eri-chan. Here you are." Eri turned to look with wide eyes at the new arrival.

"Father..." Takahashi turned around, facing an imposing man much taller than her, his hair shot with silver, but losing none of his commanding presence for it. The pair locked gazes, cloudy eyes meeting clear russet. Takahashi did not falter, nor back down from that gaze; merely met it with a calm that showed amazing composure.

Kamei Otosuke broke the deadlock first, his eyes shifting to give his daughter a quick once over, as if to ascertain that she was completely safe. Eri fidgeted under her father's penetrating gaze, never fully comfortable by the intensity with which he studied that which he looked upon.

"I heard about the commotion. You are safe, my daughter?" His cloudy eyes showed genuine affection for his only daughter, although the smoky haze that veiled his inner thoughts from shining through his eyes created an unbridgeable distance between father and daughter.

"Yes father." Eri lowered her head. She loved her father, but feared him at the same time. Very few people were able to stand up to him, and Eri was not one of them.

"Good." He turned to give Takahashi another once over, studying the easy grace with with the young woman held herself, much like a dancer...or a fighter. His pupils contracted briefly, but he showed no other outward sign of his instinctive suspicion.

Without a single trace of fear, or even awe, Takahashi merely inclined her head politely at one of the most feared secret agents of the time, backing off a few steps before turning to leave through the front doors.

The elder Kamei watched her go, mentally making a note to check up on this stranger. Anyone who came near his daughter had to be screened; he had no wish to see anyone hurt her, not in the least.

"Come. Keisuke-kun's waiting for you inside." He held out his arm to his daughter, ready to escort her back inside. Eri took it automatically, looked into her father's face, the smile he held, and clouded, unreadable eyes.

She shut her own eyes as they stepped back into the grand ballroom, already missing those calm, clear eyes. Eyes she could drown in safely, and not feel like she was being ensnared in a web of lies.

It was then that Eri realized something. A free thought, independent of her father's wishes.

I want to see her again.

Just a small thought, a tiny wish, held in her heart. Did not the smallest flame have the potential to grow into a raging fire? Eri did not think of that, could not think of that. There was only the want, and the need. She was a simple person in that aspect.

A small hope could change the world. Eri's wish could lead to great upheaval in her own life.

She just didn't know it yet.


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And there we are. The big 1-0. XD

Sleep nao~ Comment lots, and wish me luck for my exam...that's in 9 hours. @_@

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Re: Fic of the Month // Nocturne [File #10]
« Reply #123 on: November 23, 2008, 06:25:15 PM »
DIBS~~~~ :P If I can't wedge, I might as well call the first comment!!!

Haha, I was like XD at the first line!!!! Ok, Kobayashi is officially a jackass in my mind. I'm glad that he's good to Eri but he's a damn jerk to everyone else. Mmm, Ai-chan standing her ground is so hot, it's absolutely unbelievable. :lol: I feel so bad for Eri b/c Ai-chan is like pretending not to know her but at the same time, it's kinda funny to see her all flustered. :P Whoa, Eri's dad's a secret agent??? COOOOOOL. 8) Ai-chan must be after him. Wonder if he has any idea? Kinda seems like it but secret agents must be on their toes all the time so it could just be ordinary suspicion. Oh Eri, you will DEFINITELY be seeing more of Ai-chan. :grin:

Gaki is perfectly fine in our (read: MY :grin: ) capable fan-hands. I would never want her to get hurt. :D

Good luck on your exam!
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Re: Fic of the Month // Nocturne [File #10]
« Reply #124 on: November 23, 2008, 07:35:23 PM »
Yay!! More AiEri!! Damn you Kobayashi. T_T I dun like you. *shun shun* And I love the short meet between Ai and Eri.  She (Eri) seems a bit confused/flustered...and that's good. ;) Haha...you're gonna get more of Ai-chan than you could ever imagine, Eri... Just you wait...

Eri's dad is a secret agent?! :o Perhaps he really is the target. Oh my. No wait - what if he was secretly the secret agent who's protecting the real target?! <-- Completely random thought that makes no sense.

Excellent chapter, and I wish you the best of luck on your test. <3
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Re: Fic of the Month // Nocturne [File #09]
« Reply #125 on: November 24, 2008, 03:05:38 AM »
Damn, Ai's cold as ICE. That's so hot, btw.

With Eri's dad being a secret agent, I don't think he'll go down that easily, assuming he is the target. Ai better watch out or she might walk into a trap. Eri would be a very, very dangerous trap in this case lol Wonder if it'll give Ai enough trouble to turn to a Plan B.

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Gotta wonder if Ai might actually fall for Eri, or if it's all just for the job.

I would. No pun intended  :-X

And g'luck on your exam! When you're done with that come back and shower us with an awesome Chapter 11. XD

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Re: Fic of the Month // Nocturne [File #10]
« Reply #126 on: November 24, 2008, 03:38:55 AM »
So is Ai gonna save the damsel in distress and act like she doesn't know her for the third time yet again? Unless this time Eri saves Ai or at least just tracks Ai down..

Gahaha.. Itsuki do you like that enka singer or something?

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Re: Fic of the Month // Nocturne [File #10]
« Reply #127 on: November 24, 2008, 05:52:49 AM »
Hmm, don't think I've commented yet here, but decided to now. :) Or maybe it's just that I want to keep pushing off doing homework... lol, anyway.

The slowness of how this is progressing is driving me crazy! :banghead: At least you're updating every day, so it's making it a bit more palatable. As always, looking forward to more... :P

Ai seems to be putting an awful lot of faith into Eri being helplessly attracted to her - the aloof conversation, the seeming general disinterest in Eri or the situation. True there are a lot of cases when being mysterious or aloof in such away is the best form of attraction, but it's not 100%... Ai must really think a lot of herself to just be acting this way. XD She's just that damn irresistible, huh?

Like rev I'm also beginning to get a little suspicious about what might happen if Eri's father is the target. If he's really such a super secret agent, that means he's had similar training to Ai... and a lot more experience with it. Since Ai is an apparent genius at this, she obviously has a wicked plan, but no matter how good it is I have a feeling it won't be able to go just as written... She's going to have to use all her skills, and then some, to come away with this kill I think. I wonder if there might be any collateral damage in the process? If so, there are definitely some potential targets for it... Eri obviously... even Yuuka. Well, maybe we can see how good Yuuka is too.

Move faster. XD

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Re: Fic of the Month // Nocturne [File #10]
« Reply #128 on: November 24, 2008, 08:47:22 AM »
In Ai's mind: Target sighted, target assessed, recon mission complete. Next step: finalizing the plan involving Eri and Yuuka.

Good luck on that test.

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Re: Fic of the Month // Nocturne [File #10]
« Reply #129 on: November 24, 2008, 09:08:18 AM »
Another great chapter!  :D

Kobayashi's a jerk! :angry: And Eri has no idea what she's getting herself into.  :O Looking forward to more~! xD

Oh and good luck for your exams!

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Re: Fic of the Month // Nocturne [File #10]
« Reply #130 on: November 24, 2008, 09:34:37 AM »
you know what......because of your story i kept dreaming of ai-chan......... :on GJ: :hehehe: :shifty:




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Re: Fic of the Month // Nocturne [File #10]
« Reply #131 on: November 24, 2008, 10:25:38 AM »
Well the thought of it being an easy kill totally went out the window with the man being a former spy.  If Ai knows he used to be a spy...surely it wouldn't be long before he figures out who she is.  I'm not all that convinced that Eri's father is the real target though.  I imagine there's a grander scheme to it but then again that's probably because everything's still so mysterious.  I hope Risa or Sayu makes a reappearance soon.  I like it when both of Ai chan's worlds collide. 

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Re: Fic of the Month // Nocturne [File #10]
« Reply #132 on: November 24, 2008, 10:57:01 PM »
File #10

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"Do I know you?"

Eri gaped at the woman. How could she not remember?
Oh NOICE!! Aichan workin' the mind games! :rockon:



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"A mere stranger should know their place. You're not even on the VIP list, are you? Stay out of this." The tame puppy that had been facing Eri had morphed into a lion on familiar ground. Kobayashi was far more comfortable with handling business opponents and anything else that was impersonal; he only had trouble with pretty girls on a personal basis.
Ah, so he's confident when he's able to throw his weight around/exercise his authority...figures.   :-\



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"I don't think I need to be rich to point out an injustice. You're overreacting over nothing." She would have said more, but an older man, also a journalist, quickly walked over and grabbed her arm.

"Cut it out, Takahashi! You're in way over your head." He hissed, trying to yank her away.

Takahashi growled. "Let go of me Itsuki!" She looked disdainfully at her older colleague. "This is why I never joined the establishment; you're all weak ass-kissers."
How true. There have been many instances where so-called "journalists" just went along with and did what their sponsors wanted them too because they didn't want to risk getting fired, not to mention black-listed. :yep:



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Kobayashi folded his own arms. "Guards!"

Takahashi smiled grimly. "Think again, rich brat. I have every right to be here." With a flourish, she produced a document. "I'm allowed to cover non-classified government events and to be given free passage after outstanding service to the government."

Kobayashi paused, glancing over the paper with some apprehension.

"Alright, I concede that. But don't get cocky, you're just a journalist." Takahashi smiled.

"I'm not really a journalist, I just like to take photos." She raised her camera. "Don't go frowning now, you won't look good on print like that."

Kobayashi instinctively shielded his face, spitting a hasty reply in return. "Fine, whatever. You're not worth my time." He stalked off, and Takahashi lowered her camera smugly.
Point, Aichan. :yep:

As far as Kobayashi's concerned, Aichan's just a hired gun/papparazzi. Now while she might not be an actual journalist, that doesn't mean that she can't cause him trouble by selling off some bad photos of him to the gossip magazines. :D



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"Do you know what you just did, kid? That guy you just insulted owns a large share in my paper! We could be in trouble after that little display!"

Takahashi shrugged and firmly removed his hands from her.

"That's very much your business, senpai, not mine." She looked around the room.
Yeah, it's not like she works for his paper (which is a fact that rich boy should be aware of). If anything, one would think that he'd be rewarding Itsuki for trying to put her in her place. If he actually decided to cause trouble for Itsuki's paper over some "freelancer" that doesn't work for them, then he's even more of a spoiled brat than we initially thought.



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"Wait, you little...don't think I won't hit you because you're a girl!" Itsuki hissed, his veins bulging almost purple in his forehead. Takahashi raised an eyebrow at him.

"Don't think I won't hold back just because you're old." She shot right back, turning her back on him. "And remember who's the one who went into a war zone for 6 months. Hint: it's not you."

Itsuki took one step back at the dangerous tone in her voice, muttering vague threats under his breath as he backed off.
Hmmmm...was Itsuki part of the "arrangements" that Takeda was supposed to have made to help Aichan with her cover here?



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*ERI INTERCEPTS AICHAN'S EXIT*
Oooooooooooooooh...man I love how Aichan's act has got Eri strung around like this. ;D



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"Eri-chan. Here you are." Eri turned to look with wide eyes at the new arrival.

"Father..." Takahashi turned around, facing an imposing man much taller than her, his hair shot with silver, but losing none of his commanding presence for it.

...

"I heard about the commotion. You are safe, my daughter?" His cloudy eyes showed genuine affection for his only daughter, although the smoky haze that veiled his inner thoughts from shining through his eyes created an unbridgeable distance between father and daughter.

"Yes father." Eri lowered her head. She loved her father, but feared him at the same time. Very few people were able to stand up to him, and Eri was not one of them.
Interesting...Eri's dad is obviously used to being "the head honcho" in most situations.



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He turned to give Takahashi another once over, studying the easy grace with with the young woman held herself, much like a dancer...or a fighter. His pupils contracted briefly, but he showed no other outward sign of his instinctive suspicion.
Ooooooooooooooh...obviously he's dealt with his fair share of people that he can pick up signs that most others wouldn't be aware of. This is going to be interesting to see how he deals with his suspicions here.



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Without a single trace of fear, or even awe, Takahashi merely inclined her head politely at one of the most feared secret agents of the time, backing off a few steps before turning to leave through the front doors.

The elder Kamei watched her go, mentally making a note to check up on this stranger. Anyone who came near his daughter had to be screened; he had no wish to see anyone hurt her, not in the least.
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH?!?!?!?? ERI'S DAD'S A SPY?!!???!?!?
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It was then that Eri realized something. A free thought, independent of her father's wishes.

I want to see her again.
And Aichan scores another point...without even needing to be there.
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Re: Fic of the Month // Nocturne [File #10]
« Reply #133 on: November 26, 2008, 11:51:31 PM »
YAY~
i cnt wait for 11. XD

so exciting, with Yuuka on the mission as well.
Oooo. Kamei's finally here~ :cow: she is indeed an easy prey XD

Go Ai-sama~  :otomerika:

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Re: Fic of the Month // Nocturne [File #10]
« Reply #134 on: November 27, 2008, 05:12:53 AM »
^ Well it is Ai-chan. And a bass-ass Ai is so terribly hawt. It'll be a surprise anyone doesn't fall for her XD I wonder when Essy will have a new update. If I didn't remember wrongly most of your papers are over? So....write more!! :D

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Re: Fic of the Month // Nocturne [File #10]
« Reply #135 on: December 05, 2008, 11:03:08 PM »
It's like 6am in the morning now and I'm in no condition to do comment replies...so I shall simply present you with chapter and worry about it another time. =D

Sorry about the wait, it took some time to get it all down in my head. Plus I had to get down from the post-exam high...yes, exams are over YAY! Yup. XD

Enough babbling, chapter time~

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File #11


Eri yawned widely as she traipsed groggily down a relatively empty hallway. She had woken up late, thereby missing her early morning class at the university, but she had come anyway. She did have a lesson afterwards in any case, so missing her first class didn't mean she had to miss her second one.

It was not that Eri was that much of a conscientious student; it was just that when she was at school, she was out of the direct surveillance imposed on her by her father. It was the result of numerous attempts involving begging, pleading and assorted other probably underhanded tactics that she managed to get him to agree to have her bodyguards wait outside of campus instead of trailing her like obedient guard dogs.

In any case, they were merely a quick call away, and Eri had the suspicion that her father had probably stuck tracking devices on most of her belongings in case of any kidnapping. He was that kind of man, always planning for the worst case scenario.

Blinking sleepily, Eri peered around the relatively empty premises. Here and there students milled around, some looking just as groggy as Eri did, others being somewhat more alert thanks to the cups of coffee they were nursing in their hands. It was a scene Eri was used to seeing every time she had morning classes; everyone seemed to be a veritable zombie until they had coffee or after noon...whichever came first.

Coffee definitely seemed like the first order of business. Making a quick detour, Eri headed down to the cafe where they sold better coffee than the lousy canned ones from the machine. A few minutes later she emerged with a steaming cup of coffee in one hand, sipping contentedly as coherence returned to her brain.

The hot liquid helped to kickstart her cranial functions, which led her to actually start thinking. Naturally, her thought processes followed her whims, which flitted around like a fickle bumblebee in search of pollen. Currently, the object of her thoughts revolved around a certain enigmatic freelance journalist.

Takahashi Ai, age 21. Parents divorced when she was young, custodial rights given to her father. Both parents confirmed dead at present time, sole remaining relative being a younger half sister. Portfolio centering around war-related photography, and was involved in an undisclosed hostage situation overseas that was successfully resolved without much public outcry.

Yes, Eri had done her research. She might not look like it, but she had inherited her father's natural inquisitivity. Plus, her father's name seemed to open doors when it came to accessing archival records in general. Having a government agent for a father could be useful at times.

Frankly, this person fascinated her. The concept of a woman, traveling alone and free, to dangerous and exotic locales boggled Eri's imagination. For someone who had lived her entire life in metropolitan Tokyo under the watchful eye of numerous custodians and even more bodyguards, that kind of freedom to simply come and go as one willed was completely alien to her.

Eri had been brought up as a proper girl...that is, her place was to be in the household. Traveling for leisure usually meant trips to the other typical shopping and fashion capitals, like Paris or Milan for example. And even that usually involved a small entourage to accompany her as dictated by her domineering father. Eri could not imagine how it was like to simply take a backpack and go off on a trip somewhere, it was a move that never had been available to her.

Thus, a person, a character like one Takahashi Ai fascinated her. That a mere woman could stand up to the men that ran their lives, and be free to explore her own interests...Eri felt seduced by the thought of freedom, though knowing that it could never really be, not for herself.

Her thoughts were briefly interrupted as she turned a corner, running straight into someone else. The resulting scramble was punctuated by the loss of her papers, which were scattered all around her after the collision. She did manage to save her coffee though, if nothing else. Funny how it all worked out.

"Ah! I'm sorry!" The stranger babbled, quickly helping to gather up the scattered papers. Eri looked on languidly for a moment, before unhurriedly picking up a few of the pieces closer to her and letting the other girl do most of the work.

"I'm sorry for bumping into you. Here, your papers." Eri looked at the girl. Pretty and fashionable, with dark hair and unbelievably fair skin. Shrugging, Eri took the papers back, feeling charitable enough not to throw a fit at the other girl for bumping into her.

They parted ways, shoulders brushing past each other as they moved in opposite directions. The musical jingle of a ringtone lit the air as they passed each other, punctuated by a clear voice as the other girl answered the phone.

"What do you want now?" Pause. "No I refuse to miss class again." Growing fainter now, as the distance between them increased. "Oh all right, whatever, be that way. I'll see you..."

Boyfriend, most likely. Eri surmised as the other girl went out of earshot, still talking animatedly into her phone. Eri had already lost interest; by the time she reached the next corner her thoughts had already returned to its previous track.

She was that kind of person. Simple, yet complicated. Easy to figure out, yet difficult to understand. The best and worst incorporated.

Kamei Eri wasn't the type to care. She moved purely by passion, reined in only by duty. The two had yet to come into conflict, but it would soon.

Soon.

~*~*~

"You had better have a good reason for making me miss class again." A disgruntled Michishige Sayumi glared at a nonchalant Takahashi Ai, who shut her book and looked up with a pleased expression as her companion sat down opposite her.

"I'm paying, as usual. That's really all you need to know." Ai informed Sayu with a matter-of-fact tone, a teasing edge to her voice. Sayu rolled her eyes.

"Yeah yeah, the customer is king...don't tell me you're thinking of that this early in the morning?" And there it was, the counter-thrust. Ai took it with a smile.

"Time enough for that later. I just wanted to see you. Isn't that good enough?"

The look Sayumi gave her was skeptical. When she spoke, it was heavy with sarcasm.

"Watch it, Takahashi. I might almost believe that you're in love with me."

Ai's return smirk was equally ironic. Leaning forward to close the distance between their faces, the older woman flashed a cocky grin.

"Only as much as you are with me, usagi-chan."

The staredown lasted all of a few seconds before Sayu tore her eyes away, rolling them heavenward as she leaned back into her chair.

"Honestly, Ai-chan, you're incorrigible." She just seemed amused now, and her companion equally so. They shared a mutual glance of understanding, the lies and truth they shared making their bond all the more complicated...yet painfully simple at the same time.

"Naturally." Ai laced her fingers together as she gazed intently at Sayu. After a few moments of intense scrutiny, Sayumi finally burst out.

"Now what? Can't keep your eyes off me because I'm just that kawaii?"

Full lips curved into a lazy smile. Ai leaned one side of her face into an upturned palm, staring at Sayu with her head held sideways like that.

"Always the narcissist. I am going to miss you."

Sayu fought the curiosity from her voice. "What, are you going somewhere?"

"Perhaps." Pale fingers played with silken strands of hair. "I'm going to be otherwise...occupied for a while, so I won't be meeting you quite as often. Just letting you know in case you thought I dropped off the face of the earth or something."

Sayu couldn't help but notice the serious note behind the lighthearted tone. She had spent enough time with Ai to be able to sense such things. There were still so many things she didn't know about the older girl, and she was fairly sure she didn't want to know.

"Ah~ That's good, I can finally catch up on my rest for once." She showed none of her concern for Ai, knowing that the latter would not appreciate any unneeded emotion between them. There was only the passion of the flesh between them, and an unspoken camaderie of those who had too much to hide. No more, and no less. The lines had already been drawn from the start.

"You should work out more often, usagi-chan. Your stamina is horrible." Ai teased back, eliciting a light flush across said bunny girl's cheeks.

"You give me enough of a workout any day, why should I bother?" Sayu shot back instantly, and a self-satisfied smirk crossed Ai's face.

"Is that so~ Then you're probably going to gain weight when I'm not around, hmm?"

Sayu snorted. "Contrary to what you think, I actually have other activities to worry about...like rescuing my grade for the semester, no thanks to you."

"Touche." Ai seemed pleased by the verbal sparring. Standing up suddenly, she held out her hand to Sayu with a flourish, falling back on her gallant persona.

"Will you do me the honor of keeping me company today, my lady?"

Sayu took the hand. There really was no question about the answer, was there?

~*~*~

Much, much later, they lay tangled between the sheets, panting slightly from their exertions. Well, one was panting slightly. The other was gasping for air like a fish out of water. Ai's comments about Sayu's lack of stamina was not completely unfounded.

"I am definitely going to miss this..." Ai breathed into the back of Sayu's neck, her lips brushing over the numerous marks she had made earlier with her teeth.

There was no response from Sayu, who was still trying to get her world back in focus after the mind-shattering orgasm Ai had just given her. In the darkness of the room, unable to see each other, relying on touch alone to guide them...it was the only time they could not hide, not lie, exposed to each other as they were, naked as the day they were born.

Upon recovering, Sayu squealed again as Ai's fingers found a particularly sensitive spot, before receding to low, continuous moan as Ai continued to explore her with a studied intensity.

"Ah~" Sayu whined softly, whimpering in a way Ai was certain no one could make her do. She was just that confident that no one could get such a response like she could from the younger girl. Arrogance, or perhaps just self-assuredness. It was a matter of pride for her.

"Ah....Ai..." Sayu breathed out, her world already starting to spin around her again as Ai teased her with her hands. Seconds later, her world exploded yet again in another shattering climax.

She actually saw stars this time. Ai leaned down and kissed her temple softly.

"Good girl." The way she always did. Sayu, as usual, would be too busy trying to regain her senses to even...

"Don't die." The whisper cut through the room like a chill wind. A soft, wispy sound, huffed out by someone very much out of breath. Ai stilled, still on top of Sayu, but her hands had frozen.

Clear, watery eyes looking up, through the darkness. They could not see each other, but Ai definitely felt it as Sayu's small hand cupped her cheek, pulling her closer.

"You can't die." Repeated, more firmly this time. Ai closed her eyes, felt the warmth traveling from Sayu's palm and on into her. She leaned into the caress, just briefly.

"You talk too much."

The next time, they came together.

As if it was their first time, as if it would be their last. Past and future didn't exist; there was only the now.

Only the now mattered.

Now and always.


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Re: Fic of the Month // Nocturne [File #11]
« Reply #136 on: December 06, 2008, 01:53:48 AM »
Well, you came out of comment hiding to comment first on my new fic, so I suppose you deserve mine as your first comment on this too. ^_^

Uh oh, this has quite a fatalistic feel to it... Don't tell me Ai-chan IS going to meet more than her match in this job?! :shocked: It had all the feeling of a last time... and how sweet it was... You could almost believe that if they're able to meet again they really would fall in love... :wub: Poor Gaki-san...

As for Eri, good on her for doing her homework, but too bad the information seems to be fixed... Ai and that guy she works with sure must have the connections. I thought it was funny how they all go to the same school. :lol: (meaning Risa, Sayu and Eri). That might give a chance for Risa to come into it again later. We'll see how things develop. ^^

This chapter made me think about something again... Since the beginning of the story started in a different way, I've been wondering if this plot with Eri and her father is the main part of the story - meaning once it's over with the story will be over - or if it's just an episode (which is what I thought at first), and they'll just move onto the next target later. It's seeming more and more like it's becoming the main plot, so I'm getting curious... We'll see how it goes. ^^

Glad you somehow got the inspiration to write again. ;)

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Re: Fic of the Month // Nocturne [File #11]
« Reply #137 on: December 06, 2008, 02:03:44 AM »
Awww, sleepy Eri~ :wub: Can't help but think of that time FujiGaki came into her hotel room to find her already awake! :lol: I feel bad for her though, I'd never be able to survive with ppl breathing down my neck at all times. Hoho, so Ai-chan's not the only one that does research on ppl huh? Of course at least half of that stuff isn't true but Eri really doesn't need to know. And now Eri meets (more like bumps into) Sayu!!! :lol:
Shoulda known it was Ai-chan!!! :P (I made a little noise when I read it was her and my friend next to me was like :? ) This is a battle of the wits!! To tell the truth, between Ai-chan and Sayu, it's hard to tell who would win. She's gotta work on her assignment, huh? :(
Bwahahaha, of course it comes to this. XD Seems like Ai-chan's a little possessive with Sayu. Too bad we can't say the same for Gaki. (Yeah, I brought her back into this. :grin: )
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Re: Fic of the Month // Nocturne [File #11]
« Reply #138 on: December 06, 2008, 02:25:16 AM »
Yay! Another Chappie! :heart:

I knew it was Sayu that Eri bumped into and the phone call confirmed it. XD

I beginning to wonder if the relationship between Ai and Sayu is really just physical. I bet they are both denying it. Which would leave poor Gaki-san out! :(

Hmm... it seems this is foreshadowing the difficulty of Ai's assignment this time. Will evil, sexy Ai meet her match?! Dun-dun-dun!! XD

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Re: Fic of the Month // Nocturne [File #11]
« Reply #139 on: December 06, 2008, 03:12:35 AM »
Aw, the turtle's all sleepy... :wub: And she ran into Sayu! Literally! xD I wonder how they're all gonna get tied in together... And there's even more AiSayu! <3

We haven't heard from Risa in a while. I hope she's okay. :(

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