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Re: Oyasumi #9 (Tanakame Oneshot)
« Reply #40 on: April 07, 2009, 04:34:07 AM »
As cute as it is, I'd still be puzzled trying to figure out how Eri got in. :lol:

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Re: Oyasumi #9 (Tanakame Oneshot)
« Reply #41 on: April 07, 2009, 08:18:04 AM »
so sweet togerther :ptam-shy: :ptam-shy:
Yay for TanaKame  :luvluv1: :luvluv1:
Like I didn't hear it, like I couldn't hear it.... I shouldn't have heard your love in the first place
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Re: Oyasumi #9 (Tanakame Oneshot)
« Reply #42 on: April 07, 2009, 05:53:10 PM »
THE HELL!! xD

That TanaKame was awesome =D

Keep going *o*


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Re: Oyasumi #9 (Tanakame Oneshot)
« Reply #43 on: April 08, 2009, 05:18:57 PM »
Yada yada!! I can't forgive myself for missing so many updates. I'm gonna devote an hour to reading your thread tomorrow. I MUST!! *smacks fist in palm*

Thank you for updating so fast and so well. Arigatou Hotaru-chan :oops:

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Re: Oyasumi #9 (Tanakame Oneshot)
« Reply #44 on: April 08, 2009, 07:41:33 PM »
SO LATE!
but just as i was craving for some ReiKa, i saw yer cute little fic~  :ptam-kiss: that was SOSAM!!
 and then Yossie and Eri/ hehe. Eri is so cute~

TanaKame~ haha. Eri suprising Reina like that is just OSAM!  :ptam-ok:

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Re: Oyasumi #9 (Tanakame Oneshot)
« Reply #45 on: April 11, 2009, 03:18:06 PM »
 :shocked :shocked :shocked :shocked

USO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :shocked :shocked

7 REPLIES!?!?!

SUGOI!!!!!!!!!!

Okay, commenting time!!!  :glasses:

@strawb3rrykream:  :lol: XD Arigatou! :ptam-glow:

@panickofpain: You don't have to put your feelings into words Panick-chan!  :hee:

@JFC: Let's just say that Eri is very sneaky.  :glasses:

@YumePouk: Arigatou!! :cow:

@Haruka: I'm updating.   :on cny1:

@lil_hamz: Thanks Hammy!  :pandaaa:

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Re: Oyasumi #9 (Tanakame Oneshot)
« Reply #46 on: April 12, 2009, 02:06:09 AM »
 :wub: :wub: kawaii~ ^^ ruru-chan!!

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Re: Oyasumi #10 (Koharu + Aika + Sayumi Oneshot)
« Reply #47 on: April 20, 2009, 03:56:43 AM »
^Thanks Lone!
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Koharu yelped as something poked her, causing her to open her eyes and look around the room nervously.

"Ano...." she got up from her bed and peeked inside her closet. Nobody was in there.

"Who is it?" Koharu was even more nervous, her heart thumping.

"Teehee." a girl giggled.

Koharu froze, not moving. She slowly turned around, and-

"AHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!" Koharu flopped on her bed, noticing the girl laughing uncontrollably.

"Mittsi!" Koharu fumed as her cheeks turned red. She grabbed her pillow and hit Aika.

Aika was still laughing, but she smirked and whispered, "You know you like it."

"What's with all the noise?" Sayumi went inside the room, rubbing her eyes.

"Oh nothing, Sayumi, just waking Koha up." Aika helped Koharu sit up.

"Did you have to scare her so easily?" Sayumi asked, smirking at the crimson-faced Koharu.

"I planned it." Aika gave Koharu a sly face.

"Shut up Aika!" Koharu laughed.

"I think we should go." Sayumi peeked in the hallway.

"Okay." Koharu and Aika groaned as the three girls went to go get their breakfast.
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Sorry...it's short.  :sweatdrop:

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Re: Oyasumi #10 (Koharu + Aika + Sayumi Oneshot)
« Reply #48 on: April 20, 2009, 04:01:38 AM »
Somehow you know that if it had been the reverse, and it was Koharu scaring Aika awake, she probably would have gotten scolded for being too hyper first thing in the morning. :lol:

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Re: Oyasumi #10 (Koharu + Aika + Sayumi Oneshot)
« Reply #49 on: April 20, 2009, 02:06:52 PM »
 XD Aika scaring Koharu!  :twothumbs
nervous koha  :heart:

love it even if its short!  :thumbsup

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Re: Oyasumi #10 (Koharu + Aika + Sayumi Oneshot)
« Reply #50 on: April 20, 2009, 03:28:58 PM »
Aww, that was cute! Aika's such a little jokester. :lol: I totally cracked up at the "Teehee" part for some reason. :D

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Re: Oyasumi #11 (Yurina + Risako Oneshot)
« Reply #51 on: May 14, 2009, 02:55:16 AM »
Thanks minna-san! :D

I decided to write in first person for this one, I hope you like it! :D
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There she is. Sugaya Risako, walking in the classroom, her brown orbs glistening at me. The more I think about her, the more my heart goes doki doki. I could feel the heat rise in my cheeks as she comes towards my direction. I pretend to write on a piece of paper so she wouldn't catch me staring at her, but it was too late.

"Yurina, why are you writing on the desk?" she asks, taking my pencil and erasing all the pencil marks I made on the table. I gulp. I didn't know what to say to her.

"You have pretty nails." I blurt out. Stupid, stupid, stupid Yurina. She got her nails done three weeks ago! That's all you can say to the girl you're in love with?

Risako's eyes are glistening again, and she giggles. She has such a cute laugh. It made me wonder what was so funny. Oh yeah.

"You're hilarious Yurina," she whispers softly. "Can you meet me at the entrance of the school?" I tingle all over, nodding at her request. "Good!" she perked up and went to go sit in her seat, which was in the very back. Kami-sama, please let this class not be boring.

The tardy bell rings, and Tsugunaga Momoko, Shimizu Saki, and Natsuyaki Miyabi run inside class like maniacs. Saki and Miyabi's hair and clothes were messed up. I look at Momoko, who sat right next to me, breathing, more like panting really hard. She held on to my arm for support as she leaned into to whisper something to me.

"I...saw..." She coughed. Poor girl. I was curious to know though as I gave her a concerned look. The girl's eyes were humungous!

"Miya..and...Saki...making out..." It was my turned to be shocked. I looked over at the two of them, and they looked like they were going to beat me up if I told anybody. I shook my head and kept my mouth shut.

"Class, today we are learning surface area." the teacher mumbled, writing on the board. Well, I couldn't keep my mouth shut for that long due to groaning.

"Come on..." Sudou Maasa murmured under her breath, taking out a pen and a pencil.

"Yes." Tokunaga Chinami whispered, already prepared.

As for me, I was unprepared. I didn't bring anything at all. I had no choice but to ask Momoko, who was staring into space.

 "Momochi, can I-"

I noticed someone tapping me on the shoulder. I quickly turned around and noticed that Chinami had a piece of paper in her hand. "It's from Risako." she whispered before allowing me to take the paper.

My eyes were wandering around the back of the room, straining to see Risako's beautiful face. Darn it, Maasa's big head was in the way...oh well I'll see her after school.

Meanwhile, I was about to face the most boring class of the day, and I was drifting in and out of sleep, dreaming of Risako.
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Finally, the bell rang. I grabbed my paper, and headed to my locker, which was...a mess? Binders fell out of my locker, creating a mess everywhere. I decided to take my backpack out of my locker and put the binders inside. I sighed, taking out what I need to bring home with me and putting it in my backpack.

"Okay, this should be good." I muttered to myself, closing my locker and heading to my destination: the entrance.

"Yurina," Momoko caught up with me. "Are you doing anything after school?" She asked, sounding genki.

"Actually Risako wants me to meet her, I'm sorry." I replied, trying not to hurt Momoko's feelings.

"It's okay, I understand." Momoko ran to meet up with Ishimura Maiha, our friend who has just returned from her private school.

I was perusing the crowd as one name rang in my mind. 'Risako...Risako...Risako...' As the crowd got smaller and smaller, I still couldn't find her. I decided to walk home until I felt a pair of arms wrap around my waist. Oh crap.

"Hi." I heard her say. I could tell she was smirking, I knew she was. I felt my face heat up yet again as I still headed towards home. "Where are you going?"

"Home." I replied nervously.

"Can you take me with you?" her question sounded like she was begging. I blush and think for a moment.

"Um...sure?" I hesitated for a moment.

She lets go of me and walks beside me, her smirk changing into a smile. I nearly melted inside.

A silence filled the air for a moment until we got to my house. I took out my key and unlocked the door, letting Risako in first as I closed it. It was a huge house I'm telling you and it was nicely decorated.

Risako sat on the couch. I sat down next to her. Finally, she spoke up.

"Ever since I came to your school, I've always thought you were beautiful." Risako quickly looked down and blushed. She still looks beautiful when she blushes. I giggled in reply.

"I thought so too." I murmur, taking her hand in mine. I couldn't stop staring at those eyes...I was so drawn to them..and I was drawn to her too. I couldn't take it anymore. I wanted to kiss her.

Her eyes were shining now as I lean in to taste those lips. I finally got to taste them.

"I love you..." Risako purred in my ear as she kissed me back. I still blushed, but I closed my eyes instead.

All of a sudden, I could hear a vibrating sound. Risako and I stop in our tracks as she opened her backpack and answered it. I could tell that a woman's voice was on the phone. It was her mother.

"Yurina, I have to go..." Dang it, dang it, dang it. Why? Why? Why?

"One last kiss?" I ask, giving Risako a puppy dog look.

She laughed and kissed me on the cheek as she went to the door and unlocked it...somehow...

"Bye Yurina, I'll see you tomorrow!"

"Bye." I waved back, closing and locking the door.

When I got to the living room, I was super genki and happy.

"YESSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!"
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I have never been this descriptive or written a oneshot this long before.  :lol:

But I love this oneshot.  :inlove:

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Re: Oyasumi #11 (Yurina + Risako Oneshot)
« Reply #52 on: May 14, 2009, 03:07:46 AM »
The tallest and the youngest! :lol: *exhales in relief* When I read that Saki and Miya's clothes were all wrinkled, I was like :twisted: LMAO at Maasa's big head. :grin: Aww, but then ending was both cute and funny~ Good combo of emotions! :heart:

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Re: Oyasumi #11 (Yurina + Risako Oneshot)
« Reply #53 on: May 14, 2009, 03:35:33 AM »
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"YESSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!"
I'd say that pretty much sums it up. :thumbsup

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Re: Oyasumi #12 (Maimi + Airi Oneshot)
« Reply #54 on: May 15, 2009, 05:05:38 AM »
@strawberry & JFC: Thanks! :D
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She's out there on the track, wanting to reach her goal to be the best on the track team. She's so brave, that's what I like about her. She wants to be the leader of the pack, and I will follow her. But there was one problem.

"Airin!" a cheerful voice behind me shouted, making me jump. I turned around and I glared at the girl, Arihara Kanna. She was dead in 5...4...3..2..1...

"KANNA!" I shouted, my voice echoing. I grabbed onto her shirt, making her stop in her tracks. She turned around and stuck her tongue out.

"So, you're staring at that Yajima Maimi girl again aren't you?" Kanna asked me, giving me a smirk. My face reddened, and I covered my mouth, trying not to scream.

"No I'm not," I started speaking in a matter-of-fact tone. "It's called entertainment." I was definitely lying, I knew Kanna was going to make another comment.

"Yeah, the entertainment of staring at her long legs." She started laughing. That's Kanna, always making those weird comments. I blushed even harder.

My eyes were directed towards the track, I was scanning the crowd until I spotted Maimi...with another girl. Her name was Erika Umeda, her girlfriend. My heart starts to sink every time I see her...I want to punch her, but I'm kind of scared.

"Uh oh, they're fighting again.." Okai Chisato, one of Erika's friends whispered, putting her arm around Nakajima Saki's shoulders.  "I wonder what's going to happen." Saki replied, shaking with fear.

Hagiwara Mai was also with Chisato and Saki, watching the couple fight. "I heard she likes Suzuki Airi." she murmured. I froze in shock, staring at Maimi. Wow, Erika must have made her pissed.

"It's over." she muttered under her breath to the girls. The girls' eyes were darted towards me, giving me a mean look.

"What?" I shrug my shoulders, pretending not to care. But I really did care. Maimi looked so upset.

"Listen Airi, you have to go talk to her." Kanna demanded, pointing to where Maimi was going.

"But..." I started to say, but Erika interrupted me, "Just do it." she said through gritted teeth.
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I ran to the locker room, that's where Maimi was at least. She had to be in here. I checked the rows, but she wasn't in there.

It wasn't until I was pinned to the wall and I could feel somebody's lips pressed onto mine for a quick second. I looked up. It was Maimi.

"Maimi..." I whispered, heat crept up to my cheeks again...Why did she have to break it?

"I broke up with Erika." she blurted, staring at the ceiling. There was silence in the locker room, I don't know how long.

"Why?" I finally managed to let out a whisper. I can't believe I asked that question..Wow I'm stupid.

"I'm in love with you Airi.." Maimi's hands ran through my hair. "I can never stop thinking of you..." Say something Airi, this is your chance to tell her you love her! I took a big gulp before saying something.

"I love you too Maimi." I replied, kissing her back.

"Let's get out of here." Maimi grabbed her jacket and put it on, I blushed even deeper.

"Why are you blushing so much?" she asked me. I gave her a quick peck on the lips.

"Because I can. Race you to my house?" I reply, giving her a wink.

"Yes, Ready! Set! Go!" she replied once we got to the entrance of the school.

And we ran to my house.
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I love writing first person now! :D

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Re: Oyasumi #12 (Maimi + Airi Oneshot)
« Reply #55 on: May 15, 2009, 05:52:10 AM »
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww. :wub:

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Re: Oyasumi #12 (Maimi + Airi Oneshot)
« Reply #56 on: May 15, 2009, 08:34:42 AM »
as I said in H!O ! XD

Love your new one-shots hotaru-san!  :heart: :heart:

and most of all, I LOVE this >> "Miya..and...Saki...making out..."   :heart:

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Re: Oyasumi #12 (Maimi + Airi Oneshot)
« Reply #57 on: May 15, 2009, 03:37:36 PM »
I love Kanna teasing Airi like that. XD It's hilarious. LOL at Mai's whispered statement. :P AWWWW! YajiUme broke up.... :cry: I like them. WOW, Maimi makes her move quite fast, doesn't she? :lol:
First person is awesome. I like writing that way too.

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Re: Oyasumi #13 (Maimi + Saki Oneshot)
« Reply #58 on: May 16, 2009, 06:42:44 PM »
@minna: Thanks! :D
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It was another boring day here at school. Thank goodness it was a new semester. I also heard we were having a new student, which was okay with me. I get to show them around the school just to skip class.

"Are you Yajima Maimi?" A short, dark-haired girl questioned, giving me a puzzled look. I was gazing into her dark brown eyes, a little warmth from them. My heart felt like it was throbbing now.

"Yes," I replied, my ears turning red. "What is your name?" Shimizu Saki. Duh, it says it right on her nametag. Oh well, I want to hear her say it since she pronounced my name beautifully.

"Shimizu Saki," Saki replied, bowing. "It is very nice to meet you Maimi, you have a pretty name." I blushed when I heard her say it again. I must reply back.

"S-Saki is a..uh..pretty name too." I stammered, trying not to break out in a sweat. My hands were clammy, my mouth was dry, and my skin was all prickly with goosebumps.

"I think we should start with the classrooms first, so let's go." I gave her a tutorial around the classrooms before going to the gymnasium.
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"As you can tell, this is the GYM!" I shouted, my voice echoing in the silent, gigantic room. Everybody who had gym this period had to go outside for the day. I moved back so that Saki could walk around the room, but our hands touched, and she held onto it.

"Saki, what are you-" Saki looked like she wanted me to walk with her, so I did. I blushed as we were walking, and she could tell.

"What do you like about me...Maimi?" Saki immediately asked, covering her mouth with her free hand. We were still holding hands.

"Well, you're gorgeous." I reply, taking a strand of hair from her face. She giggles and she blushes. "What do you like about me?"

Saki looked down at my legs, and then she looked up at me. "Those lovely legs of yours, and your smile." I laughed, every girl who has a crush on me says that all the time. But now I have an odd feeling of finding a closet and having an intense makeout with her. I was shaking at the thought.

"What? It's tru-" I cut her off, giving her a quick peck on the lips. All of a sudden, she kissed me back.

That was it. I need to find a closet, now.

"We have to get out of here." I was breathing hard, taking Saki's hand and went to the nearest closet in the hallway. I found one, and we made out there until the bell rang.
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Afterwards, Saki and I came out of the closet as fast as possible, closing the door behind us. I can't believe we did that. I found Nakajima Saki, or Nakky, walking alone with Okai Chisato, her girlfriend.

"Hey you two, what's up?" I asked them with a smirk.

"We know what you did in that closet Maimi..." Suzuki Airi, the girl who knows me very well, said as she looked at me with a puzzled look.

"Making out with the new girl Saki." Arihara Kanna smirked as she wrapped her arm around Airi's waist.

"Shame on you." Hagiwara Mai shook her head. I stood alone, blushing.

"So, did she say anything about those legs of yours?" Umeda Erika asked me with that big toothy grin of hers.

"Okay, yes Kanna's right," I admitted, my face went back to my original color. "And yes Erika, she said something about my legs. We are officially together."

I turned around and looked at Saki, who was waving at me and mouthing, "Let's meet up after school." I nodded, winking at her in return.

"Let's go to class, I don't want to be late." I said as the seven of us headed to the stairs.
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I hope you like this one! ^_^

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Re: Oyasumi #13 (Maimi + Saki Oneshot)
« Reply #59 on: May 17, 2009, 03:41:08 AM »
CaptainMaimi? NakkyChisa? AiriKanna? Whole lotta shippin' going on here. :lol:

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