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Re: Torn in Two (Chapter 2 ~ Desire)
« Reply #20 on: April 11, 2009, 07:11:57 AM »
:o :o :o :o Captain !? ..... that's her practicum .....


Captain is TERRIBLY crushed ........ she warned Miya "I'm letting you go with her tomorrow, but don't let anything happen between the two of you. I'm a jealous person" ...... and now she saw this with her own eyes ........


Megu, do your thing ~ steal her from Miya XD (just kidding lol)



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her eyes looking like it was beaten up by Maimi
LOL ..... sorry.... (to me, beat up by Maimi is heaven XD)



XD captain is the best girlfriend ever XD (please don't tell the other girls I said that lol)



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Saki froze for a second, wondering what made Miyabi kiss her like this
evil Miya ... she felt guilty, that's why lol



hmmm.... hope they didn't do something illegal since they're both underage LOL
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Re: Torn in Two (Saki/Miya; Chapter 3 ~ Past)
« Reply #21 on: April 11, 2009, 11:45:54 AM »
Cool chapter!
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Saki froze for a second, wondering what made Miyabi kiss her like this
evil Miya ... she felt guilty, that's why lol

I agree lol

So... Megu and Captain were together long time ago, but Megumi broke with Saki because the boy of the polemic? Wow, that's wonderful!

Captain is a good girlfriend  :heart: Too good, too innocent...  :lol:

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Re: Torn in Two (Saki/Miya; Chapter 3 ~ Past)
« Reply #22 on: April 12, 2009, 03:33:14 AM »
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hmmm.... hope they didn't do something illegal since they're both underage LOL
@kosu: lol, I assure you, they didn't..  XD

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Megu and Captain were together long time ago
@Liben: yeah..  :)  I just thought of ZYX days... :lol:

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I will soon be going to my thinking place, and when I do, I assure you that the next chapter will be out, either later or tomorrow. :grin:

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It helps me get the will to do the next chapter soon.  XD
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Re: Torn in Two (Saki/Miya; Chapter 3 ~ Past)
« Reply #23 on: April 12, 2009, 04:28:45 AM »
Why Miyabi? WHY???

Even while Saki is busy saving money to buy you some ridiculously expensive shoes too. Saki = BEST BOYGIRLFRAN evar. I'm going to have to trust in the pairing in parenthesis at the top of this thread and BELIEVE that Risako doesn't come between them.

LULZ@Megu, your Captain-love is so obvious. She's taken though. Raaawr.

I don't know about this Panick... I want Miya x Saki ♥ but present Miya doesn't deserve her what with her making out with Risako. DDD: (...but at the same time... Rii-chan<3) Make this better somehow prs!

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Re: Torn in Two (Saki/Miya; Chapter 3 ~ Past)
« Reply #24 on: April 12, 2009, 04:42:11 AM »
I can't really imagine captain cries, but this is indeed a sad chapter  :pleeease: But seeing a wild Megumi appearance, I feel really excited :D This will keep getting better and better. Thanks for the new chapter, panick  :cow:

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Re: Torn in Two (Saki/Miya; Chapter 3 ~ Past)
« Reply #25 on: April 12, 2009, 05:38:36 AM »
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I'm going to have to trust in the pairing in parenthesis at the top of this thread and BELIEVE that Risako doesn't come between them.
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I don't know about this Panick... I want Miya x Saki ♥ but present Miya doesn't deserve her what with her making out with Risako. DDD: (...but at the same time... Rii-chan<3) Make this better somehow prs!

@Kuji: lol, I kind of thought you were going to say that..  XD  no worries. It will be fine...  :twothumbs  Just believe in the pairing in the parenthesis.  8)


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@ziggurat: me too, but, when you break down, you break down. And thanks for still reading this fic..  XD
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Re: Torn in Two (Saki/Miya; Chapter 3 ~ Past)
« Reply #26 on: April 12, 2009, 02:15:29 PM »
er.....as ive noticed this past few days that this forum has been filled up with new fics with miya and saki....haha  :dizzy: :dizzy: :dizzy:

where's my miya and risako meds fic? lol  :angry1:

hmm......well, i like this fic, hahaha miya the cheater! i really like it....er, erased that, love it!  :ding:

but...poor saki-chan!  :OMG: if i saw my bf kissing someone else, i will kick his butt right away!   :onionwhip: :onionwhip: :onionwhip:

saki such a martyr, not to mention she's working hard for that 100t yen for her cheater gf, hahaha  :sweat:

well, next chappie author-san!  :kneelbow:




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Re: Torn in Two (Saki/Miya; Chapter 3 ~ Past)
« Reply #27 on: April 13, 2009, 02:04:16 AM »
@ayase:  :sweatdrop: :sweatdrop: :sweatdrop: sorry... to tell the truth... I was bothered by a Miya/Rii fic when I was writing this chapter... I'm still building the plot but it will be a MiyaRii for sure.   XD

okay, as I was saying to ayase, yes, I am planning to do another fic, but I'm still thinking if I'll do it after this fic or while I write this fic, and yes, its MiyaRii:yep:
hold that thought.... I think it'll be just a long one-shot... idk yet..

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Chapter 4 – I Don't Deserve Her

Five minutes had passed since Saki turned off her phone’s alarm, telling her it was already 5:30 in the morning. She tried to sit up, but a hand pulled her down and wraps itself around her waist. I guess I won’t be going out for a jog today. She told herself, stroking the younger girls hair, as the girl snuggled close to her.

“Must… tell… Saki…” whispered the girl beside her.

“What do you need to tell me? Miya? Are you awake?” Saki asked while trying to take a peek on the girls face.

She waited for a few minutes but the girl didn’t answer, I guess she’s still asleep,  she concluded as she carefully moves Miyabi’s hands off of her, and slowly moves out of the bed. She looked out of the window, couldn’t find the sun anywhere. She stretched her hands upward, giving out a yawn before putting them down, and then looks at Miyabi who was still sleeping peacefully on her bed.

She leaned over to kiss her but a voice made her stop, “Must… tell… about… kiss…” It was just Miyabi, talking in her sleep, realizing it was about the kiss yesterday, Tell me about the kiss… She looks at the sleep-talking girl as she smiled, carefully brushing off some hair that were covering the other girls face.

“About that kiss, Miya-chan…” She continued stroking the girls’ hair, “I told you before that I don’t want anything going on between you and Risako,” She stopped playing with the girls’ hair and turns to her face.

“I haven’t told you, I saw the whole thing…” She gently placed her hand on the girls face, caressing the quiet girl’s face, “I… can understand when Risako leaned in…” she pauses for a moment, trying to clear her throat for the next words she’ll be saying, “But…when you were the one who kissed her, I… felt my heart beat faster…” Saki tried to hold back her tears as she held the other girls hand, squeezing it tightly, but the girl didn’t move.

“Feeling anger rushing through my veins… I keep telling myself, please stop… please stop it Miyabi… please…” She can’t hold it anymore, she looked down, letting her tears fell, “That’s when I opened the door… cause I wanted you to stop…”

She lets go of the other girl’s hand, as she tries to wipe her tears. She then leaned to the girl she loved, and whispered to her ears, “Please Miya… don’t do it again… I… I don’t know what I’ll do when I see you do that again…” Crying made it hard for her to continue, but she still wanted to say one thing, “Please remember, Miya… I love you.”

With that, she fled out of the room, ran towards the front door, quickly slid her feet in her running shoes and runs out of the house, running as fast as she can, as she let her tears come, she can’t stop crying, Miya… why do you have to do that… am I not enough?


Miyabi’s POV

She’s gone…  I wanted to stand up and follow her but my legs won’t move. I wanted to cry, as she told me she saw me kissing Risako yesterday, but I can’t, I can’t let her know I was awake the whole time she was talking. Why am I so selfish? She was crying and I didn’t even hold her. Is it because I cheated on her? Am I feeling guilty for yesterday?

Miyabi’s eyes started to get wet, as she realized how much she hurt Saki in just that one time she let herself be controlled by temptation. She buried her face on the covers and there she cried.

Why am I so stupid? I let myself get carried away, and now I hurt Saki. I… I need to apologize…

Why didn’t I tell her last night? I was scared, scared that she’ll get hurt, since she warned me not to have anything with Risako…

She stopped thinking and just cried. Saki might come back soon, I should stop crying, she tried to hold back her tears but she failed, she curled herself as she keeps on crying. I don’t deserve to be her girlfriend…

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Finally back in the house, Saki takes off her shoes before walking to her room. She froze in front of the door with her right hand holding the doorknob, when she heard crying inside. She quickly opens the door, seeing Miyabi curled up on her bed, crying.

“Miya, what happened?” She quickened her pace and as she reached the bed, Miyabi threw herself on her chest. Saki wrapped her arms around her as the girl buried her face on her chest.

“I’m sorry Saki… I let myself get carried away… I… I let my desire control me… I…” She couldn’t find the words to continue as Saki held her tightly.

Saki gave her a tender kiss on her head, as she realized Miyabi heard everything she said earlier, “Don’t worry about it anymore Miya. Its finished. We can forget about it.”

Saki let her cry until her tears were near to dry. Miyabi moved back a little, and looked at her near to be ex-girlfriend, as the other smiled softly, I don’t deserve to be her girlfriend, not after what I had done… Miyabi opens her mouth, but the other girl stopped her from saying anything.

“You were thinking way too much again, Miya,” the girl started as she leaned closer, closing the gap between them, as she kissed Miyabi.

She held it there for a while, waiting for the other to return the kiss. She waited another few seconds and was about to let go, when the other returned it. They locked themselves into a passionate kiss, not letting each other go.

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Lying down on the bed, holding each other close, when a voice from downstairs startled them, “Saki! Miya, dear! Breakfast is ready!”

“Why are you the only one she calls dear?” Saki turned to Miyabi, laughing.

“Because she likes me.” Miyabi answered, accompanying the other girl in laughter.

“Because she likes you as my girlfriend.” Saki corrected, as she gently pushes Miyabi’s nose.

Still not getting out of bed, a knock came from the door, “Saki! Miyabi, dear, breakfast is ready. You don’t want to miss breakfast, Saki, or else you’re going to tire yourself quickly.” Her mother called on them once again, but this time, they got off the bed.

“We’re coming mom.” Saki replied as she looked at the mirror, not wanting her mother to know that she cried. Another face came up on the mirror, as she felt sudden warmth behind her.

“Do I look awful?” Miyabi asked while checking her face on the mirror.

“Yes, you do.” Saki let out another laugh, teasing Miyabi is fun for her.

Miyabi pouts a little but it faded when she recalled what Saki’s mother said earlier.

“Saki, you’re going to work today? I didn’t get any message from H!P.” Miyabi asked while searching her phone for maybe an unread message.

“Not that work.” Saki replied as she was combing her hair, “I told you yesterday I have a practicum to finish.”

“About that, what is this practicum?” Miyabi countered as she glared at Saki for not making it clear yesterday.

“It’s a project for a class of mine, we need to finish 40 hours of community service, you know, helping out a community.” Saki smiled as she turned to her girlfriend who was glaring at her.

“Oh… Then, until when are you going to do this project?” Sounding a bit curious and disappointed as she knows she won’t be able to be with Saki for the next few days.

“I still need to work for three days.” Saki answered as she pulled Miyabi closer to her, “Don’t worry, I’ll be visiting you when I get out of work early.”

“But… three days is long…” Seeing the older girl smiling gently at her, the only thing she could say is, “Okay, fine… But you better visit me or else I’ll cheat on you again.”

Hearing what the other girl said, Saki didn’t mind as she knows, no, believes that Miyabi won’t cheat on her again.

“Saki! -” “We’re coming!”

Saki held Miyabi’s hand and led her to the kitchen for breakfast.
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Re: Torn in Two (Saki/Miya; Chapter 4 ~ I Don't Deserve Her) *Updated 4/13*
« Reply #28 on: April 13, 2009, 02:43:13 AM »
You're fast :D They're still going about this, huh? It's like reading a shoujo manga :lol: Man, it's hard to understand girls. :P

Thanks for the new chapter :kneelbow:


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Re: Torn in Two (Saki/Miya; Chapter 4 ~ I Don't Deserve Her) *Updated 4/13*
« Reply #29 on: April 13, 2009, 05:05:54 AM »
captain is the best girlfriend ever (did I just say that again?? oops ....) LOL

well, captain maybe understands that 99% of human can't control themselves when Risako leaned in ... LOL

Miya don't do it again ... no one knows what Saki will do ... 

as for Risako ... let me handle the punishment  :grin: :grin: :grin: :grin:  :twisted: :twisted:


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hmmm.... hope they didn't do something illegal since they're both underage LOL
@kosu: lol, I assure you, they didn't..  XD
really ?? hmmm  :?  :? .......... :grin: :grin: :grin:

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Re: Torn in Two (Saki/Miya; Chapter 4 ~ I Don't Deserve Her) *Updated 4/13*
« Reply #30 on: April 13, 2009, 01:55:31 PM »
Waouh u are fast!!!

Chapter 3:
OMG.... Miya..... >___<
aww Saki, u are the Best Girlfriend.... but don't be to kind.


Chapter 4:
aww Saki, so kawaii and kind

Miya don't cheat her again >.<
Even if u will not see her during some days.
You will break her heart again.... otherwhise I can't fogive you >_<
Like I didn't hear it, like I couldn't hear it.... I shouldn't have heard your love in the first place
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Re: Torn in Two (Saki/Miya; Chapter 4 ~ I Don't Deserve Her) *Updated 4/13*
« Reply #31 on: April 13, 2009, 04:36:07 PM »
Great chapter!
Miya... don't cheat her again  :sweatdrop:

Waiting for the next chapter~!

Sonna Rolling Days~!

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Re: Torn in Two (Saki/Miya; Chapter 4 ~ I Don't Deserve Her) *Updated 4/13*
« Reply #32 on: April 13, 2009, 11:55:17 PM »
@ziggurat: well, its easy to understand guys...  :lol:
@kosu: so you really prefer Saki x Miya.. lol  great to know that!  :twothumbs  and what punishment will you give to Risako???
@YumePouk: lol, am I fast? want me to slow down? well, its summer vacation right now, so I really don't have anything to do... XD
@Liben: idk when the next chapter will be out.. but yeah, just wait for it and enjoy this new fic I just posted!  :grin:

I've said earlier right? I got a new idea for a new fic and here it is! ^_^
I made a video for it, since I got inspired doing one when I saw indigo's vid for YajiUme... XD
So btw, here is the link for the video [noembed]Hoping for Chance [SakiMiya Fic][/noembed] *I just uploaded it so maybe its not in a better quality*
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Re: Hoping for Chance (Mixed; momo/saki/miya/rii; Chapter 1) *Updated 4/14*
« Reply #33 on: April 14, 2009, 02:45:37 AM »
Lol what. Captain is having a hot for Momo too? lol. Maybe Berryz members kiss each other everytime they meet.


J/k lol. Thanks for the new chapter :lol:

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Re: Hoping for Chance (Mixed; momo/saki/miya/rii; Chapter 1) *Updated 4/14*
« Reply #34 on: April 14, 2009, 03:37:14 AM »
^ its a new fic... its not in Torn in Two.. ^_^
well, you must watch the video first to trully understand the fic...
you can access the vid by clicking on the title of the Fic on top of my post.. ^_^

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Re: Hoping for Chance (Mixed; momo/saki/miya/rii; Chapter 1) *Updated 4/14*
« Reply #35 on: April 14, 2009, 04:28:40 AM »
comment time!.....  :cool2:

so, torn in two is a mi-rii fic??? hontou???   :kekeke: :kekeke: :kekeke:  kya!  :luvluv1: :luvluv1: :luvluv1:  suki desu author-san!

well, all i can say is that, miya's some kind of a cheater huh? haha  :on hobo: :on lol:

new fic with saki-chan again? haha  :hehehe:

keep it coming author-san...i mean the miya-risako fic....  :kneelbow:




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Re: Hoping for Chance (Mixed; momo/saki/miya/rii; Chapter 1) *Updated 4/14*
« Reply #36 on: April 14, 2009, 04:53:17 AM »
^^ Oh my bad. You put it in the same thread? Ok, I will pay more attention lol. Sorry for that.

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Re: Hoping for Chance (Mixed; momo/saki/miya/rii; Chapter 1) *Updated 4/14*
« Reply #37 on: April 14, 2009, 06:09:06 AM »
@ayase: lol  Torn in Two is really a Saki/Miya fic... but my new one, Hoping for Chance (chapter 1 above), is a mix of Saki/Momo, Miya/Risako and Miya/Saki... ^_^

@ziggurat: no prob... and maybe I should make a new one just for the new fic... lol

I should make a new thread for Hoping for Chance since I think most of you are getting confused.. sorry about that.... :sweatdrop: :sweatdrop:

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Re: Torn in Two (Saki/Miya; Chapter 4 ~ I Don't Deserve Her) *Updated 4/13*
« Reply #38 on: April 14, 2009, 11:38:28 AM »
Lol
NOOOOOOOO
Don't slow down~~~~ :D

I want to know what happen next >_<

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« Reply #39 on: April 15, 2009, 08:39:21 AM »
Chapter 5 – Special Day Part 1

After they ate breakfast, Saki and Miyabi took turns on using the bathroom, as they get ready to go. Saki’s mother bid them farewell, as they went out of the door and walked towards the train station. The older girl sat on one of the benches in the waiting area, while they wait for the train to come. Miyabi sat beside her, “Do you really need to work until later in the afternoon?”

Saki nodded as she flips to the next page of a textbook she brought with her, “Are there any exemptions?” Saki looked at her, closing the book.

“I’m sorry Miya, if I don’t need to do this, I’ll spend the whole three days with you.” Saki leaned in and kissed her cheek. She looked at the tracks to see if the train is already visible.

She couldn’t take her eyes away from the older girl, as she wanted to tell her what is going to happen at the day of her last practicum, “Saki…”

The older girl turned to her, smiling happily, “hmm?”

“Do you remember any special event that will be happening this week?” She asked, examining the other girls face.

Saki tilted her head sideways, thinking of a special event that Miyabi was asking, “Well?” Miyabi asked, getting a little bit worried, as she guessed the other girl forgot all about it.

Saki kept quiet until a loud honk came from the tracks, “Ah! The train is here,” Saki exclaimed, as she stands up, held Miyabi’s hand and drags her inside the train.

The train trip was quiet, no one even said a word, but the older girl held Miyabi's hand and their fingers intertwined. She didn’t forget, right? Miyabi asked herself, placing her head on Saki’s shoulder. She won’t forget right? She’s my girlfriend. She won’t forget. She continued telling herself, until Saki finally talks.

“Miya,” she started, as she stared at their hands, “hmm?” she answered, looking at the other girls face, “What do you want for your birthday?”

Miyabi’s eyes widened, I knew she wouldn’t forget, she hums a tune for a while, as she thinks of a thing she wants, “Can I have anything?” she asked slyly, as her hands held Saki’s hand in between.

Saki looked at her, smiling her usual, warm, loving, caring smile, as she caressed Miyabi’s face, “Of course, anything my princess would want.”

“Then, I want-” she stopped, remembering the shoe, but she knew it was impossible to buy that for now, “I want you come and stay in the party I’ll be having two days from now.”
Saki looked at her, confused, why didn’t she ask for those expensive shoes?

“That’s all?” Saki asked, tying to see if she will ask for it.

The younger girl nodded, “Yes, nothing else. I just want you to be in the party and maybe, we could announce about us…” her voice faded as she said the last word. Many doubts came popping in their heads as to what the others would think if they get to know about them.

The train pulled to a stop, Saki took the younger girls hand and led her out to the streets. When they arrived on Miyabi’s house, she wanted to let her girlfriend in but she remembered, the other had work to do, “So…see you later then.”

“Yeah, see you later. Oh yeah, I’ll be bringing snacks when I come by.” Saki smiled genuinely at the younger girl, she held her hand again, but this time, pulled her closer and planted a kiss on her lips. Miyabi didn’t want this to end, but the older pulled back, and bid her goodbye.

That afternoon, true to her word, Saki came by with snacks they just ended up finishing before they could give to Miyabi’s parents. The next day went by the same, nothing really special happened between the two of them, only a few hugs and kisses.

Finally, the third day came, and it was also Miyabi’s special day. Not wanting to get out of bed, she reached her phone and found 16 unread messages, What? 16 messages?

She opened the first one, which she received exactly midnight, she read it aloud, “HAPPY BIRTHDAY MIYA! As you want for your birthday, I’ll be going to your party later. I just need to finish my work and I promise, I’ll be there as soon as I can.”

She was so happy that the very first one who greeted her was Saki. She really stayed up until midnight as she promised me on the phone last night. She scrolls down, as continued reading, ”You must be asleep by now, so when you read this, just imagine that I’m beside you, holding your hand tightly, while I caress your cheek, and give you a kiss,” she did as she told her and after imagining it, she actually felt a warm peck on her cheek. She felt her ears burning, as her face turned red. Her face can’t contain her shade of red when she read the last sentence, “I love you. <3 <3”

Her heart, racing as she got thrilled on finally seeing Saki again later in her special day, she opened her other messages and found out all of H!P Kids has greeted her, and one unexpected greeting from Tanaka-san.

She replied all of them with a “Thank you,” and an invitation to her party later. She wanted the whole karaoke place to herself, but it was too big and she just invited 16 people, so that means its only going to be two rooms if they won’t fit in one.

She threw herself on the bed as thoughts of Saki came popping in her mind then she remembered Risako and the desire she felt, when she kissed her. It was…great. She can’t describe it anymore, and she fell into deep thought, When I kissed Risako that day, it felt wonderful, enjoyable, passionate, and I actually wanted more, that’s why I leaned in after. Now that she thinks of it again, why can’t I describe it as before? Is it really just for that time? She kept quiet, thinking she wanted to kiss Risako again, just to confirm if she really liked the kiss lustfully or it was just for that one time, that she thought Saki wouldn’t see. She shook her head, trying to get those thoughts out, she stared at the ceiling, trying to find something on it to grab her attention, but her thoughts lingered again, I’ll kiss her…

She jumped out of bed, hitting both her cheeks, “Miyabi! What are you thinking! You can’t do that! You have a girlfriend, a GREAT girlfriend!” She kept walking back and forth, organizing her thoughts, You can’t find any other girl like her Miyabi, and you LOVE her!

Her pace got faster, as a trail became visible, I’ll place some rules. First, cheating is a NO-NO! Upon saying this, she instantly remembered Tsuji-san. A smile formed on her face but she shook her head, making herself focus, Second! Making Saki cry is a sin! Now, I’m accused guilty for that rule. She continued walking, not feeling any pain on her feet, “Lastly, love her.” She finally stopped, smiling contentedly on her rules, but then, her smile faded as she lay down on the floor, wanting to do a tantrum, “What number is that rule? I can’t believe I forgot what number I was on.” She pouts, as she did do a tantrum, I feel stupid and need to go back to kindergarten…

***In Nakai-san’s clothing store that afternoon***

Saki cleaned up the mess as Nakai-san turned the sign around, showing CLOSED behind the glass. Nakai helped Saki finish cleaning, before letting her go.

“Thank you for helping me Shimizu-san. I’m disappointed on Cho for not coming today. If he comes tomorrow to collect his pay, I’ll just give him the amount for two days.” Saki giggled as Nakai-san looked furious as he thought of Cho, a boy about 5 years older than her. Nakai-san is really upset that Cho didn’t come.

“The one that really made me pissed of is that, he let you take care of it all. The sad thing there is that, you’re a girl. He’s a guy! You’re younger. He’s older!” Saki really felt bad for Nakai-san, even if Cho let her do everything today, Nakai-san helped her along the times, people keep on asking her for the shirts they were holding.

“That’s okay Nakai-san, we managed to sell everything today. Let Cho be, maybe he met an emergency and need to excuse himself for the day.” Saki tried to cheer him up, and he did, reaching a brown envelope on the counter and handed it to Saki.

“Here. I have put more than you’re expected pay. Thank you again Shimizu-san.” Saki wanted to give back the extra money, but Nakai insisted that she keep it.

“Thank you Nakai-san for letting me help you.” Saki bowed down, showing her thanks.

Nakai shook his head, “It’s okay Shimizu-san, and you’re a big help.” He smiled at her but got curious, “Well Shimizu-san, I’m sorry for asking but, why did you want to help work for me these three days?”

Saki smiled, playing with the envelope on her hands, “I was saving for a gift for a special someone.” She felt a slight blush came up but she tried hard to hide it.

Nakai-san smiled happily at her, “You worked hard just to buy a gift for a special someone?” he kept on smiling as Saki felt him staring at her, “That’s very thoughtful of you. He must really be lucky to have a girlfriend like you.”

Her face turning redder, she thanked Nakai-san again before leaving the store. She went straight to the Nike shop and looked for the shoes Miyabi wanted. She circled the whole shop but she couldn’t find it. She made her way to an employee of the store and asked about those shoes, “I’m sorry miss, but someone already bought it, and that is the only stock we got.” Seeing that Saki’s expression changed, failure and disheartened feeling came creeping to the employee’s back, “If you really want that shoes, the girl who bought it, just went out of the shop.”

With that, she thanked the man as she dashed out of the shop, trying to catch up with the girl, the employee pointed out.

“Sumimasen!” She called out as the girl stopped and looked her way.

“The cute pink colored shoes in the Nike shop, did you buy it?” Saki asked, gasping for air.

The girl nodded, “Yes, it’s cute isn’t it.”

Saki stood straight and made eye contact with the girl, “Please! Please let me buy it from you,” she bowed down, as a sign of sincerity, “Please, my friend really wanted that and I promised I’ll buy it for her birthday.”

Surprised as to what the younger girl just asked, she held the paper bag closer to her chest, “I’m sorry, but I can’t. I want these shoes.”

Saki looked at her again before bowing down as before, “Please! I’ll pay you more than the amount you bought it. Just let me buy it from you, please!” Saki pleaded, but the girl didn’t agree and walked away. I need to get those shoes.

She ran to the girl again and bowed down as before, still pleading for the girl to release it to her, she did this all over again as the girl tried to walk away three times.

“I said NO!” Saki was taken a back, “I don’t want to sell this to you. As I said, I like this shoe and I won’t sell it!” The girl walked away, leaving Saki feeling disappointed and frustrated, I guess I have to bring her to the shop tomorrow and as what she wanted besides that.

She walked to a well-known bakery near the place of Miyabi’s party. She was in charge of the cake as the others told her last night. She picked this simple white colored cake and let the baker design it the same as in the paper she just handed. I hope it turns out great, Momo and Chinami’s joint drawing of the cakes design made it look great, but I hope the baker understands what they put there.

She sat down at the table, just in front of the counter as she waits for the cake. She felt her phone vibrated, taking it out and reading the message, “How is the cake doing? Miyabi’s getting crazy waiting for it,” she let out a short giggle as she read Maasa’s mail.

“They are getting the decorations done. So what exactly is Miyabi doing?”

“She’s walking back and forth, while saying, Hurry up will yah! I’m getting anxious. Momo kept pulling her down to her seat but she gets up and starts to walk back and forth again. You should tell the pastry man to hurry up, Miyabi wants the cake right now.”

Saki almost laughed when she read about Miyabi and the last sentence in Maasa’s mail, Maasa doesn’t know that the cake is not what Miyabi wanted now, she told herself, giggling, she wanted me to go there now.

The man in the counter called her, handing out the cake in a lovely box. She payed for it and she went straight to the party.

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