Okay, I'm interested, now I gotta go back and read this story. I will edit this when I get done.... After work...
EDIT: You were right rokun, I laughed my ass off at this story.
This is a roller coaster filled with crack and mushrooms! Everyone is hilariously out of character and in the end you had the audacity to kill off Maasa in a flashback! And not even a proper flashback! But holy crap I enjoyed this story.
I still don't like Momoko though. I don't at all, in any story.
But anyway, my favorite chapter has got to be that cracktastic version of Romeo and the tree. I would pay good money to see a play that hysterically hysterical. I tried really hard not to alert the whole house to my merriment but it's hard to be quiet when you're laughing so hard you can't breath.
The only nitpicky I have is with your grammar and such but the easiest way to fix that is just have someone look over your story before you post. Then again, it don't think it would have been half as funny without a little Engrish sentence structure thrown in.
All in all a good read.
My compliments.
Also, Mano/Maimai