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Rondo (Chapter Twenty-One: Gluttony)
« on: May 23, 2009, 05:47:05 AM »
This is a new fic I wrote, hope you like it! ^_^

The title may change soon though.  :sweatdrop:
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Darkness filled the skies, engulfing brightness that appeared earlier. The day was now turning to night, and the last thing I could do was just stand there sighing and spacing out in the middle of the empty street. I slowly licked my lips as the moon started shining, clouds disappearing.

"Ai-chan?" a voice said my name with concern. I nearly let out my manly scream and turned around to see who this person was. "Y-Yes?" I stuttered, confused. A person in a pure white robe stood in front of me, hair waving in front of her face. Her frown turned into a smirk. "You are the one, Ai-chan." She pointed her finger at me, her smirk turning into a smile. Just what was going on?

"I-I'm the one?" I stammered, my heart throbbing. I was scared now...who is this girl? How does she know my name? The girl let out a laugh and left me standing in the middle of the road. "Wait!" I shouted, but she disappeared. Well that was random.

I looked up at the moon, licking my lips again. It's a very bad habit that I started doing when I was little. I have a lot to think about, that woman is mysterious. I have no idea what I am, but it's probably not good. I started walking, someone stood right in front of me. "Hi Ai-chan!" It was nice hearing my best friend's voice! After all that scariness, I really needed her. "Eri-chan!" I replied, my cheeks turning red. "How long have you been here?" Eri thought for a moment. "Ever since you started walking, and I wanted to scare you." She finally calculated. Poor turtle, you have to love her though.

"So, are you doing anything tomorrow?" Eri asked me, her voice sounding very hyper. I blushed again, should I or not? "I don't think so." I replied, trying not to remember the incident with the woman in the white robe. "Okay good, because I was wondering if you wanted to the watch the clouds and have a picnic tomorrow." Eri really knows me very well, we've been best friends since junior high school. "Alright then, I'll see you tomorrow Eri." I waved goodbye and went to my house.

Emptiness and the cold stares were the only two things I recieved from my parents. "We were worried sick about you Ai-chan!" My father erupted, his eyes filled with rage and fury. "Calm down honey," My mom comforted him, a soft look appeared in her eyes. "Ai..Sweetie..don't ever stay late again, okay?" "Why were you out late anyway?" My father asked me in a calm voice. "Eri and I were planning a picnic tomorrow." I half-lied, hoping they would accept the little lie.

My parents nodded and said I could go to my room. I opened my door and closed it quietly. I got dressed in a red nightgown and got prepared for bed. I need to get my rest so I can go out with Eri on our picnic.
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"She's the one." I whispered, my eyes glued to the girl that was about to fall into a deep sleep. She has to be..She is...

"Risa?" A voice motioned me to get down from the window. I jumped to where the girl in the white robe was standing. "Yes Reina?" I replied, wondering what was wrong. "We must get back to Yossie and Miki quickly." Reina warned, pulling the robe away from her face. I nodded, knowing that if we were late, Yossie and Miki would remove us from this task.

In no time, the two of us ran as fast as we could to our hideout, which was in a building. I looked around for Yossie and Miki as soon as we got inside. "Do you see them?" I asked Reina, both concern and curiousity filled my voice. "No, not yet." she replied, licking her fangs.

"Ah, Reina and Risa, so is Takahashi Ai the one?" I screamed, turning around. It was Yossie, who was laughing out loud. "I can't believe you fell for that!" Miki exclaimed, laughing even harder. "It's not that funny." Reina said coldly, her eyes filled with coldness. I like it when Reina defends me in front of our bosses. "Anyway, I told her she's the one, just like you said." she explained. "How did she react to that?" Yossie's voice was now serious. "She was confused, then I left it all up to Risa to spy on her." She, Yossie, and Miki gave me demanding looks. "She and her friend Eri are planning a picnic tomorrow, then she went home and went to sleep." I finished.

Yossie and Miki whispered to each other their plans. "It is your job to train her, Tanaka and Niigaki. Do not fail this task." Miki said with a cold tone to her voice. Reina and I nodded and looked at each other.

"Well, do you want to wait until daylight for us to tell Ai-chan what she is?" I asked Reina, not really knowing what to do. Reina's smirk faded into a frown as she stared at me with those cold eyes. She had a blank expression written all over her face, but her eyes say more. "Sure," she replied. "Let's play video games." I shrugged my shoulders as I followed her, playing until daylight arrived.
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I woke to the bright sun's rays creeping through my window. I sighed and noticed that I needed to get ready for the picnic with Eri. "I need to get ready!" I reminded myself, my whisper sounding urgent.

But then two girls stood in front of me, licking their fangs and giving me a smirk. One of them looked familiar, the girl was wearing the same pure white robe, but it revealed everything about her. Her eyes nearly scared me as I gulped. I looked at the other girl, who was wearing a black dress with white ruffles at the end. Both girls had long nails and piercing eyes that nearly scared the crap out of me.

"Ai-chan, we are training you." The girl in the white robe said, giving me a wink. Who are these girls? "Who are you?" I asked without thinking, shaking with fear.

The girls laughed, making me regret asking that question. "I'm Niigaki Risa, and this is Tanaka Reina." the girl in the black dress introduced themselves.

"We are vampires Ai-chan, just like you."

EH?!?!?!?!
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Yeah, I was listening to a few songs of Vampire Knight, and this is what I ended up with. XD
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Re: Rondo (Chapter One- Discovery)
« Reply #1 on: May 23, 2009, 10:06:47 PM »
How great!
This is the first Vampiric Fic that I read ^^ At beginning I was confused but at the end... wow, how great!
It's fantastic to read something yours again ^^

Keep writing, onegaishimasu!  :thumbsup

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Re: Rondo (Chapter One- Discovery)
« Reply #2 on: May 24, 2009, 01:43:00 AM »
Why am I not surprised that it's vampires again? :P

I'm guessing Aichan hasn't "been turned" yet, seeing as how she's got a picnic date with Eri during the daytime. Then again, she could be a daywalker...again. :P

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Re: Rondo (Chapter Two: Transformation)
« Reply #3 on: May 24, 2009, 06:31:49 AM »
@Liben: Thanks!  :w00t: :D XD

@JFC: XD Nope, Ai-chan hasn't transformed yet.... ;)
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The room was filled with a strange silence, until the birds started chirping. I tried to keep out of the sunlight as much as possible since it was expanding. We have to keep her trapped in here, there's no way she's leaving out of our sight. "EH?!?" she shouted, about to fall off of the bed.

In a second, Risa ran over to the bed and caught Ai-chan, who let out that infamous yelp. I started laughing, but started to move to a corner when even more brightness kept shining through the window.

"Ai-chan?" A woman knocked on the door, her voice a little muffled. My wonky eyes grew even bigger and wider as we heard the creaking of the open door. "Quickly!" I whispered to Risa as I found a closet. I opened the door and closed it quietly, eavesdropping on Ai-chan and her mother's conversation.

"Oh! You're awake!" Takahashi-san's voice was obviously filled with glee. I rolled my eyes, putting my ear to the wall. Risa's back was to the wall. I think she was feeling a little hot, probably due to the humidity of the closet.

"Uh..yeah.." Ai-chan replied, her voice sounding a little shaky. She's still shocked about her becoming a vampire. Risa shook also. I grabbed her arm, whispering, "Are you okay?" "What are we going to do Reina?" Risa finally whispered.

That was a good question, because I have no idea on what we were going to do...Ai-chan can't go out in the day, she's already starting to become a vampire. Hmm.....

"Risa, I have a plan." I whispered, ignoring the conversation between Ai-chan and her mother. "What is it?" Risa asked, curiousity rising in her voice. "Just follow me okay?" I asked Risa with my big wonky eyes. She nodded as we heard the door close.
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This is not going to look good. When Reina has plans, it would turn into a disaster. My heartbeat was going faster and faster. At least my body was cooling down as I came out of the closet. I saw Ai-chan looking at us with a scared look. She needs to stop being afraid.

"Listen you two, I have to go to the picnic with Eri. I can't miss it." Ai-chan went over to her bathroom, getting white towels and a white washcloth. "Set it for the sunset Ai-chan." A wave of coldness was now filling the room. That was your plan Reina?! That was a stupid idea! What if Ai-chan turns into a vampire at that point!?

"I'm not sure about that." Ai-chan replied, getting her soap. I sighed. "Come on, Ai-chan!" I grabbed her by the wrists, looking into her scared eyes. "Please?" Somehow, my whisper sounded like I was begging. I could tell that from behind me Reina rolled those wonky eyes of hers.

Ai-chan thought about it for a few seconds. "Fine." she muttered. I let go of her and she went into the bathroom door, closing it behind her. I was gazing for five minutes until Reina hit my hip. "What was that?" she whispered as she pulled me over to Ai-chan's bed. "Uh...I was trying to act like Rika?" I asked innocently, looking outside. Brightness stopped shining through the window, since it was already the afternoon. Reina was talking, but I wasn't really listening.

I'm still worried about Ai-chan. She has a lot to think about, and I don't blame her. I have an odd feeling that we are going to fail, but at least she fell for my cuteness.

"Risa, are you blushing?" Reina asked me, giving me a smirk. "No.." I replied, tugging at the ends of my dress. "Listen up," she whispered. "We're going to let Ai-chan go to that picnic with Eri, but we're going to follow her." I nodded, of course we are going to follow her.

A few minutes later, Ai-chan came out of her bathroom wearing a pink shirt with blue jeans and pink sneakers. Her hair was tied up in a ponytail. I could feel my cheeks heating up. This girl was going to become a vampire?

"So, what do you think?" Ai-chan asked. I thought we were supposed to be training her, but oh my god, she's so cute! "Beautiful." Reina and I said at the same time, giving each other mean looks. Noon was turning into sunset as we got to know Ai-chan. The orange hue was peeking through the window.

"I'm going to go," Ai-chan warned before opening the door. "Don't you guys make my room a catastrophe." "Yes Ai-chan." Reina and I again, said at the same time. We smirked, going to the window and opened it, seeing Ai-chan walking in the middle of the street.

"Are you ready?" Reina asked me as we saw her disappearing from our sight. "Yes." I replied, jumping from the window as Reina got out of the window, but she closed it before jumping down.

"Let's go." She said as we kept our eyes focused on Ai-chan the entire time.
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I tried to keep my mind off of the entire vampire thing. Even though those two girls were my trainers, it's...impossible.

I noticed Eri sitting in the middle of the park. She was with another girl, Michishige Sayumi. I walked over to the two girls, but I started sniffing like a dog. Why am I doing this? I'm not a dog!

This is a different scent, and I could smell it the more I get closer to the two girls. It was a strong scent. It was making me hungry. "Blood." I whispered as I stopped walking, getting a weird look from Eri and Sayumi.

"Where were you Ai-chan?" Eri asked me with concern. I bit my lip, but I pierced my lips with my own teeth. Am I growing fangs? "My mom wanted me to go shopping Eri-chan, I'm sorry." That was a complete lie, but I can't tell her I'm a vampire, and I'm transforming right now. "I have to get going now though, I just wanted to let you know." I told her. I needed to get away from this place, and fast.

"Okay then Ai-chan, I understand." Eri waved, and I waved back.

I finally sat down at a tree after running far away from the park. I didn't smell any blood, but I still had my fangs. I noticed my trainers smirking at me.

"Now do you believe us?" Reina's question sounded more like a statement. I nodded, looking at the moon and licking my fangs. Risa gave me another gazed look. She sat down next to me, taking my hand in hers. What is she doing?

"C-can we go home?" I asked, shaking a little. Risa helped me up and put her arm around my shoulder, calming me down. My face turned redder and redder at her touch. "Sure." Reina replied, shrugging her shoulders.

However, I could still smell blood all around me, but it wasn't as rich as Eri or Sayumi's blood. I kind of wonder why though.

"I know you're still curious about smelling the blood and all, but we will teach you that tomorrow." Reina told me, giving me a smirk as we walked home. Gosh, she smirks a lot.

"To be honest," I spoke shyly. "I'm really starting to like this vampire thing." Reina and Risa both grinned at each other, then they looked at me.

Still, I have a long way to go.
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It's even longer than the first chapter. (I guess...XD)

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Re: Rondo (Chapter Two: Transformation)
« Reply #4 on: May 25, 2009, 04:45:33 AM »
Heh, both Risa and Reina were swooning over Aichan. :yep:

So Aichan's vampire transformation was just an unaided, random happening? She wasn't sired by anyone? :?

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Re: Rondo (Chapter Three: Progress-Chapter Eight: Danger)
« Reply #5 on: June 24, 2009, 06:55:41 PM »
Once the three of us got to Ai-chan's house, I noticed that it was dark. "Were we out a little too late?" I asked, a little confused. "No," Ai-chan replied, scratching the back of her head. "My family goes to sleep early." Reina and I just looked at each other and shrugged our shoulders. She has one weird family. It's only 9 pm.

"I think I can go in the front door," Ai-chan decided, unlocking it. She's still in her vampire form, but if her family is asleep, I guess I shouldn't worry that much, then again, I'm still worried about her. I jumped on a tree branch that was near Ai-chan's bedroom window and opened the window, climbing inside. Reina was following me, closing the window behind her.

Ai-chan opened her bedroom door and closed it, turning the bedroom light on. She looked at us and let out her tiny manly yelp. Reina and I started laughing, while Ai-chan was throwing pillows at us. This made me laugh even harder. "Don't ever do that again!" Ai-chan whispered to us, hitting us with another pillow. "Ow.." I whined, slowly getting up from the huge pile of pillows. "That's what you guys get for scaring me." Ai-chan stuck out her tongue, getting her blue nightgown and going to the bathroom.

I looked over at Reina, who just glared at me with her wonky eyes. "What?" I whispered, moving away from her. She didn't say anything, but she kept moving closer. It was scaring me. What does she want? "What?" I repeated a little louder. I was trying not to make any noise because the house was quiet.

"You like her don't you?" Reina asked me with that trademark smirk. I put my hand over my mouth to keep from yelling. Reina knows me very well. I just simply nodded. Reina shook her head and pointed to me asking, "You do know that we have to train this girl to become a vampire, right?" "Yes." I replied, sighing in defeat. She's always focused on her job. Reina just stared at me until Ai-chan came back inside and climbed in her bed. "Good night." Ai-chan whispered before she was sleeping peacefully.

"I'm going to tell Yossie and Miki how Ai-chan's is doing so far," Reina stood up and opened the window. "Are you coming?" I looked at her, and then I looked at Ai-chan, who was somehow sleeping peacefully. Gosh, she looks gorgeous even when she's sleeping. "I'm going to stay here." I replied, my eyes still on Ai-chan.

"That's fine with me." Reina said before getting out of the window and closing it. I went over to a chair and sat down in it.
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The hideout wasn't very far away from Ai-chan's house at all. Actually, it was a few blocks away, which is perfect for walking...I guess. Risa likes Ai-chan. This is the first time I've ever seen her stare at another vampire like that. But we do have a job here, and it could possibly jeopardize her training other vampires.

Several minutes later, I entered the building, and I noticed a tall girl who is a vampire also. Her name is JunJun. "Hi JunJun." I greeted her with a straight face. She didn't say anything back, but she did stare at me for a long period of time. Why is she gazing at me like that? "Hi Reina." She replied. I rolled my eyes and asked, "Where's Yossie and Miki?"

JunJun fiddled with her thumbs, trying to come up with the best answer. "Come on, I don't have all night!" I demanded, my voice echoing in the building. "They're doing something." JunJun mumbled quickly. I don't even want to know.

"Well, can you tell them that Ai-chan has just turned into a vampire?" I asked, hoping that JunJun would reply. She simply nodded, and wrote something down on a piece of paper.

"Aren't you supposed to go out hunting for blood?" I blurted, covering my hand over my mouth. I really need to shut up, but then again, I'm really curious. "Today's my day off from hunting for blood, but Yossie wants me to stay here for...um.." She fiddled with her thumbs. Why is she doing that? "It's okay, I don't want to know." I waved my hand, but she grabbed it. I looked up, and her eyes were growing bigger and bigger. "Sorry again." She muttered, looking down at her shoes. What the heck?

"Do you want to help me around here?" JunJun questioned, looking around the building. I perused the building also, noticing some other vampires. Risa's with Ai-chan, and there's nothing else to do. "Whatever." I replied, helping the taller girl. I just hope Risa doesn't get in trouble.
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I can't sleep. Not with Risa staring at me like some hungry maniac. It's like she wants to do or say something to me. I closed my eyes, and then I opened them again. Just go to sleep Ai, just go to sleep...

Crap. I opened my eyes for the umpteenth time and whispered, "Risa?" There was no response coming from my trainer. "Risa?" I whispered a little louder, this time she walked over to my bed and climbed in the covers. My face was red like crazy.

"Yes?" she whispered, taking my hand. I don't think I can breathe at the moment. "I can't sleep." I replied, wondering if Reina was in the room yet. "You're funny Ai-chan." she giggled. What? Does that have anything to do with my question? No. But it was kind of funny....

How?" I wondered, heat still rising to my cheeks. "I can't tell you." Risa replied, still holding my hand.

Yep, there's something she wants to tell me, but she doesn't want to say it. It's so obvious Niigaki Risa. You like me.

Somehow, I fell asleep, and I had a good dream too.

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Re: Rondo (Chapter Four: Early Morning)
« Reply #6 on: June 24, 2009, 06:57:40 PM »
My dream was interrupted by Reina closing the window. The noisde wasn't too loud, but it did wake me up. I tried to get out of the bed, but then I heard Risa mumbling something as she pulled me closer to her.

"I see that you two are comfy and cozy." Reina teased, walking over to my bed and sitting at the edge. "What time is it?" I asked, opening my eyes slowly. "6 A.M." Reina replied, checking the clock in my room. A little light as peeking through the window. I grabbed Risa's hand and gave it a gentle squeeze before turning on the lights.

"How long were you here?" I flicked the lights on and saw Reina running to the corner. I just shook my head and walked over to her. All of a sudden I stopped, noticing that Reina was shocked.

"A-Ai-chan, your clothes.." Clothes? What is she talking about? "What? It's just a night gown." I was so confused. "USO!" Risa shouted at the top of her lungs. Her eyes are as big as Reina's! What in the world is wrong with my clothes? I decided to look down and...

Oh my god. Just..oh my god. I didn't sleep in this last night! I was wearing a black shirt with a white jacket, black gloves, a black skirt, and black boots. How in the..when in the..these two have a lot of explaining to do.

"Why am I dressed in this?" I was furious now. I'm really starting to hate this vampirte thing. "At least you don't have to wear a robe." Risa muttered, pointing at Reina. Do these two ever listen to me?!? "Shut up Risa." Reina rolled her eyes. "Anyway, since you're a vampire, you're wearing those clothes." Great. That's exactly what I needed.

I could tell that Risa was staring at me again, my face getting hotter. She's always doing this to me. I just sighed and looked at my outfit. Dang.
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Wow. Ai-chan looks even more stunning than before. She's not even wearing a robe, which is a good thing! I'm sure Reina will have an outfit too/ "Training starts today," Reina looked at the clock. "We're leaving now." I opened the window, and Reina got out first.

"Your turn Ai-chan." I said as Ai-chan turned off the lights. She took my hand, and I helped her out of the window, closing it behind me. Gosh, she's pretty. I blushed at the thought. I followed right after her, and we jumped together.

"Are you guys done having your romantic moment?" Reina teased. I knew that she was trying to have a comeback. I could tell Ai-chan's face was red. Obviously, she was frozen. "Shut up Reina." I muttered, walking to the park. She just laughed and followed us.

"Ignore her." I murmured, trying to comfort Ai-chan." She looked at me, our eyes meeting. I gulped. She has beautiful eyes, and then she smiled. "Thanks Risa." I smiled too, heat rising in my cheeks.

"You two are so cute together!" Reina kept teasing us, a fake smile appearing on her face. Sometimes, I just can't stand her. We finally got to the park and Reina's face was serious. I let go of Ai-chan's hand and stood beside Reina. It is the time to train her.
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"Okay, first off, we must find a victim." I perused the park to see any humans entering the park. None yet, that's just great.

A girl with brownish-reddish hair walked to the park with a girl who had dark hair. They look familiar...

"Eri-chan and Sayu." Ai-chan mumbled, crossing her arms. Of course, her friends. I grabbed Risa's wrist as we noticed Eri and Sayu walking over to Ai-chan. We hid behind a tree, and we eavesdropped on the conversation.

"Ai-chan?" Eri asked, confused. Wow, she really is like a turtle. And she's really..cute when she's confused. Oh my god, she's a human! I can't have a crush on her now!

"Oh, hi Eri!" Ai-chan waved. Rich blood, I can smell it also. I can tell that Ai-chan is smelling it too.

"How are you? You've been acting weird lately." Sayu folded her arms, pouting. And she's the bunny obviously. Hmm...

"I've been doing fine." Gosh, this conversation is borning. I noticed Sayumi tugging on Eri's sleeve. This is a sign that she really wants to get something and they have to leave. Well apparently, I was right! I'm smart.

Ai-chan breathed a sigh of relief, but our training isn't over yet. "Ai-chan," Risa warned. "You have to listen to us. We need you to focus." "We know you're confused at the moment, just listen to what we are going to tell you."

Ai-chan nodded, waiting for the news. I turned her around, and pointed to a man across the street. "That's your first victim." I whispered. "GO!" Risa shouted, and Ai-chan disappeared. I want to see how she's going to deal with this man.

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Re: Rondo (Chapter Five: Focus)
« Reply #7 on: June 24, 2009, 06:59:19 PM »
I have no idea what I'm going to do. All I know is that I have to suck his blood, but how?

I hid behind a tree and noticed that he was talking on the phone. At this time of day?! It's almost...8 something. This is not going to be easy. However, I couldn't help but overhear his conversation.

"No Goro, she's not coming with me." She? Who is this person? I could hear a little bit of mumbling on the other line, but I couldn't translate what he was saying.

"What do you mean?" Wow, he was upset. He yelled into the phone and he threw it on the ground. This was my chance, but I really had no clue what I was doing.

I walked over to the mess, and the man was quickly picking up the pieces. He looked at me and jumped. Why was he scared again? Oh, yeah.

His expression turned from panick to calm. What the heck? "Oh thank goodness." he chuckled, standing up and holding the remains of his cellphone. He thinks I'm good?!? "I thought you were someone else for a moment." Yes, I am someone else...wait..what? "I'm alright right no, so why don't you go ahead and play with your friends?"

If this were an anime, there would be a sound of a record stopping in the background. I could tell that he was panicking. "Um..er..HELP, HELP!" He dropped the phone remains and started running. I chased him.

I don't know what came over me, but I didn't want him to run away screaming like a little girl, which was pretty funny by the way. I chuckled for a little bit.

Risa and Reina were on my tail the entire time. Well, of course, they are my trainers after all. The man ran to an alley and soon we came to a dead end. Finally because my knees nearly buckled for a minute.

I cracked my knuckles and grinned at him. It wasn't a nice grin or anything sappy like that, it was devilish. "Where are you going?" I asked him, my voice sounding different. He didn't respond, just gulped. His mind was racking up ne ideas to escape.

I pushed him against the wall and bared my fangs. His eyes grew very big and wide with fear. "You can't be..." I turned his head to the side, and I could smell his blood. I started sucking his blood until I could feel his body weakening. His limp body fell and he as uncoscious. I just looked at him and turned around.

"Okay you two, you can come out now."
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Dang. That girl is good on her first day of traning. I'm pretty shocked at the moment. This girl doesn't really have that much training to do, so she's fine today. I came out from one building of the alley, and Risa jumped from a tree.

"Good job Ai-chan." I applauded. "Yeah, you were great out there." Risa was about to go into Reaction Queen mode anytime now. "Really? Um..er.." Ai-chan blushed and scratched the back of her head. "Duh Ai-chan." I made a funny face and I started giggling. Risa and Ai-chan just looked at me like I was crazy. What?

"Uh..anyway, I don't think you need any training right now." I told her, a little bit unsure. But she was awesome out there, so I have to give her credit.

"Reina?" I turend around and saw JunJun, again. It looked like she was hunting for a target too. But why was she here? "Morning Jun." I greeted, my expression a little confused. "Oh, morning JunJun!" Risa became the Reaction Queen, tugging on JunJun's sleeve.

"Ai-chan, this is JunJun." We all know that Risa. JunJun bowed. "She's a vampire." I finished. Of course she is, it's obvious. What am I saying? "It's very nice to meet you." Ai-chan bowed in reply. "Oh my god, yay!" Risa held Ai-chan's hand, and their faces were crimson. I felt like teasing them at that point. "Well..uh...at least we all met." Risa finished her statement. I nodded in agreement. JunJun scanned the alley and saw her target. "Well it was nice meeting you Ai-chan." She waved at us before running of to her target. We all said "goodbye" and we just looked at each other for a moment.

"So JunJun hunts in the daytime now?" Risa asked, breaking the silence. She was still holding Ai-chan's hand, but their faces weren't as crimson anymore. Crap, I was just about to tease them again. "So, how do you feel?" I questioned Ai-chan, who was looking down at the pavement. "Okay I guess." she replied. So she's doing fine. "Good, now what are we going to do?" I looked around the alley for any sign of escaping. "Well, we can get out of here." Risa suggested. Well duh Risa. But before I could say anything, she jumped over a wall. Ai-chan followed and I was right after them.

I must admit, Risa and I are doing very well on this task so far. I guess it's time to tell Yossie and Miki the news later in the night.
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"Okay, what now?" I asked as the three of us were at the park. No response came from the two girls. I turned around, and they had a blank stares. Their faces were expressionless, but for some strange reason, I couldn't stop staring at Ai-chan. But seriously, what was up with these two?

"HELLO?" I shouted, my voice echoing into the noisy park. Still nothing. I walked over to Ai-chan and Reina, and waved my hands in front of their eyes. Still no response! Oh, what to do, what to do?

OH MY GOD, did they die or something? No, they would have passed out by now. I paced around in circles. I was scared now.

Before I went completely ballistic, a giggle escaped from Ai-chan's lips. Then from Reina. I was so confused, I felt like screaming. "GOTCHA!" Reina and Ai-chan shouted at the same time. The two started laughing, but they stopped as they noticed my eyes growing bigger and bigger. They knew I was going to explode in 5...4..3..2..

"USO!!!!!!! GET BACK HERE!!!" They ran off, trying to escape my Reaction Queen moment. I chased them..again. Where are they running off to? I'm tired already.

I just decided to follow them, not knowing what else to do.

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Re: Rondo (Chapter Six: Alone)
« Reply #8 on: June 24, 2009, 07:00:17 PM »
My legs felt like collapsing. I really didn't expect for Ai-chan and Reina to run so fast. I tripped on my boot and fell on the grass. I let out a scream, but it was muffled. Someone grabbed my hand, and I looked up and noticed that it was Ai-chan. Reina just looked at me, giving me a signal that she's going to tell the bosses, as usual. It's her job to be the messenger, thank goodness I don't have that job.

So now I have Ai-chan all to myself.

"Don't scare me like that again!" I yelled, still in my Reaction Queen mode. "Oh my god, you nearly killed me right-" Her finger was right on top of my lips. "Shh!" she warned, her eyes sparkled. "People are still asleep." "Even when it's almost 9:30?" I joked. Ai-chan giggled in response. "Silly Risa, you are so cute, you know that?"

OH MY GOD SHE SAID I'M CUTE!!!!!!!!!! Yay, yay, yay! I'm so happy. I guess this is my chance to tell her I like her. My cheeks started heating up from the thought.

"Are you okay Risa?" Ai-chan was still smiling, her fangs showing. I think I'm going to die now. I nodded, "Yes, I'm fine. Um...Ai-chan, can I tell you something?" That was terrible. My heart started thumping. "Sure, go ahead." Now my heart was beating faster than ever.

"IloveyouAichanveryverymuchIhopeyoufeelthesameway." I confessed in one breath. Ai-chan didn't respond, her expression was very shocking though. She was calm, giving me a smirk. She nodded, "I know." She does? She does? Oh. Crap.

"What do you mean?" I blurted, covering my hand over my mouth. "Hmm...let's see," Ai-chan calculated. "Number One, you stare at me." she pointed out. I put my head down in defeat. I should have known that it was obvious. "What's the next one?"

"Number Two, you wrapped your arms around my waist while were sleeping." Ai-chan blushed, looking down. "So you were awake!" "At first." Ai-chan corrected me, trying to put on a serious face. "Did you like it?" I asked curiously, licking my fangs. ".......No." Ai-chan replied. She's such a bad liar.

"You're terrible." I laughed. "Seriously, I didn't like it." Her face was crimson. "Admit it." I demanded.

"IloveyoutooRisaespeciallywhenwewereinthebedtogether." Ai-chan admitted, her face not as crimson anymore. Yes, I got her! We are together now!

"How did you become a vampire Risa?" Ai-chan asked me, her eyes full of curiousity. I gulped before I replied, "I was born a vampire, I trained at the age of 8, and I became a trainer at the age of 17." Ai-chan just gave me a look, no emotion. It was unreadable.

Her lips touched mine, and it was AWESOME! We pulled away, and there was a silence.
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I can't believe I did that. Even though we are together now, I still can't believe I did that. I finally kissed her, and I feel so much better.

"I knew it." Risa pointed at me. "What?" I replied with another smirk. "You kissed me!" Risa had another Reaction Queen moment. "USO!" she added. She was definitely having a Reaction Queen moment.

"Where's Reina?" I asked, perusing the street. I haven't seen her ever since I talked to Risa. "She's at the hideout." Risa replied, squeezing my hand tightly. Eh?

"Hideout?" I asked, wanting to know about the place. "It's our training place." Risa told me. "We can go there now if you want to." "Yes, let's go."

I'm really curious about this place. I know it's going to be full of vampires, but I still want to know about this hideout.

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Re: Rondo (Chapter Seven: Secrets)
« Reply #9 on: June 24, 2009, 07:01:43 PM »
I'm so tired. I'm kind of lost. I need to know where I am before I go any further.

"Reina..." a creepy voice whispered from behind me. Oh, I think I know who she is, her voice sounds familiar. "Just come out Aika." I sighed, crossing my arms. "Aw, how did you know it was me?" "Your voice sounds familiar." I replied. "What are you even doing out here anyway?" "I have a new trainer." Aika's face turned red. "Eh? Who?" I wanted to know. "JunJun."

WHAT?!?

"Yeah, that's me." JunJun came out of nowhere. She blushed, trying not to make eye contact with me. Seriously, why does she always pop up in my life? "I know it's you, silly." I tease. Aika giggled, and JunJun looked kind of irritated. "When did you guys start training?" I was sick of asking questions, but dang it, I'm very curious!

"Today," JunJun was obviously confused. "Um..we have to go." "Nice seeing you again Reina!" Aika shouted as JunJun pulled her away from me. I just waved goodbye and decided to move on.

"Oh look, it's Reina." Do I need more visitors? I'm tired already. But this time the voice sounded like Risa. "Reina! Come on, we're all going to the hideout." I turned around and noticed that Ai-chan was with her. "We're taking Ai-chan with us?" I raised my eyebrow. I really didn't know about this. "I know the way, and yes, we're taking her with us."

"Okay, but on the way, don't act like lovebirds." I joked, laughing. "Shut up Reina." the lovebirds said at the same time in a monotone. I started following them to the hideout.
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"Yossie and Miki please?" I requested once we got to the front desk. "They're in the office." the young girl replied, sounding a little dry. I didn't pay much attention since Ai-chan was whispering something in my ear.

"Ah, Takahashi, very nice to meet you." Yossie was the first to greet us. "She's very pretty." Miki put her arm around Ai-chan's lower back. It wasn't until she slid her hand down further that I knew what she was doing. My eyes grew big, and I nearly freaked out.

"Don't grope her Miki." I warned. Miki stopped, her glare made me scared at first, but her expression turned from a glare to a smirk. "Always ruining the fun." she muttered under her breath.

"Are you alright?" I whispered in Ai-chan's ear. I could feel her body shiver. She nodded wordlessly. She was probably scarred for life. Well, not for life.

I gave Miki a glare, and turned my attention back to Ai-chan.
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Thank goodness Risa saved me. I was about to panic for a moment. Who are these two vampires? "We are Niigaki and Tanaka's bosses," Yossie continued. "It is very nice to meet you." "It is very nice to meet you too." I bowed quickly.

"Anyway, we heard about the first target," Miki stated blantantly. "You did a good job Takahashi." "Um..thank you?" I blurted, my face turning red. "No problem." Yossie smiled. "Now you three leave." Miki pushed us out of the room. I let out my manly scream and held on to Risa for support. Since when was I the clumsy one?

"Do you want to go somewhere else?" I asked, covering my mouth. I didn't want to ask that question. Risa and Reina shrugged their shoulders, and we headed home.

Until we ran into Eri and Sayu.
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"Eri, let's go that way!" Sayu tugged on my sleeve, putting her head on my shoulder. It's really embarrassing seeing her like this sometimes. We were eating out at a diner, and we noticed Ai-chan running after some guy who was screaming like a girl.

"Eh? Is that Ai-chan?" Sayu asked, paying attention to the scene. Two girls ran after her. One in some hooded robe thingy, and another in a black dress. Who are they, and what are they doing with Ai-chan?

"Yeah, that is her." I replied, paying for the food, and we left the diner as we saw Ai-chan turn a corner, the two girls following close behind. I started running as fast as I could, but the slow bunny behind me was so slow that I grabbed her hand, and took her with me.

"Where did they go?" I asked, out of breath. "She's gone, let's just go back and eat." Sayu was about to go in the opposite direction until we heard a scream. It came from the man, and it sound like it came from the alley.

Right when we saw Ai-chan suck his blood, Sayu was about to scream, but I covered her mouth with my hand. We hid behind a building and we witnessed that scene. Right when Ai-chan left with the two girls, we went to go check on the man.

"He's unconscious." Sayu didn't touch him. I didn't say anything, I was too shocked. "She's a vampire." I shook my head. I can't believe this, it's all a dream. Maybe if I just go to a corner and close my eyes and open them, I would be in my bed.

But it's not a dream, it's reality. "Let's go Eri," Sayu took my hand. "I know what can take you off of your mind." I doubted it, but we went to a clothing store, and I noticed a T-shirt that had a turtle on it. I decided to buy it, and we walked down the sidewalk.

"Hey look, it's Ai-chan." Sayu whispered, her voice full of warning. I didn't want to say anything to her. She's ticking me off.

"Ai-chan." I greeted loudly. "How are you?" Her face was crimson. "Fine, how about you?" "Liar!" Sayu blurted. I hit her playfully on the arm. "I know you're a vampire Ai-chan."

"WHAT?" Ai-chan fake laughed. I could tell it was obvious. "Don't lie to us, we saw you." Sayu crossed her arms. "We're not going to tell anyone Ai-chan." I promised.

Ai-chan was speechless, and she ran away. "Oh crap, she left." Sayu pouted.

She's a mysterious girl, and I want to know more about her, especially the vampire part.

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Re: Rondo (Chapter Eight: Danger)
« Reply #10 on: June 24, 2009, 07:03:09 PM »
DANG IT!

Eri and Sayu found out about me being a vampire. Crap. Just crap. What the heck were they doing spying on me anyway? I feel like I'm about to have a heart attack right now. All of this running is tiring me, but I must get away from Eri and Sayu as soon as possible.

I bumped into a girl with long, black hair that was pulled up in a ponytail. I scratched the back of my head and I blushed in embarassment. "I'm sorry, I shold have watched where I was going." the girl apologized. Hmm, she looks familar. She does hang out with Sayu a lot. "Aren't you Sayu's mentee, Kusumi Koharu?" I asked without thinking. Koharu nodded. "Erm, well it's nice to meet you!" I waved goodbye, and I turned a corner.

Reina and Risa came out from whatever hiding place they were in. "I can't believe Eri and Sayu know about us." Risa muttered under her breath. I shook my head. Why did all of this have to happen so suddenly?

"I'm not surprised." Reina quickly replied. Risa and I stared at her, our eyes growing big. This girl must be crazy or something. "What do you mean?" Risa managed to ask. "I'm sure Eri won't tell anyone, but that Sayu girl on the other hand, she probably won't tell anyone either." "I doubt it." I muttered. "Well, they're getting themselves in a dangerous situation here." Risa added. That was true. Plus, their blood smelled even richer than my first target.

"I need to stay away from them." I said, looking down. "What?" Risa asked with an odd tone in her voice. "Well, from the expression in Eri's face, it looks like she wants to know even more about Ai-chan." Reina explained. Gosh, it's like she can read minds and expressions. Eri did look kind of scary, while Sayu was erm...puffing her cheeks.

"That's why I need to hide from them." I explained, my eyes still glued to the sidewalk. "I don't think that's going to happen." Reina shook her head in disagreement. "You need to think about it for a while." Risa's arm was around my shoulders, and I could feel heat rising in my cheeks. "You know I'm going to protect you."

"Aw, that's so sweet!" Reina poked her head in between us. "AH!" I yelled, nearly falling down. "What are your parents going to say Ai-chan?" A look of worry was painted on Risa's face. "They still think I'm with Eri." I replied, waving my hand. "Oh, thank goodness." Risa breathed in and out. "Someone was about to have a Reaction Queen moment." Reina rolled her eyes and giggled. I did also, and then we burst out laughing.

"HEY! THAT'S NOT FUNNY!" Risa pointed at us. Now she's having a Reaction Queen moment. Reina and I smirked at each other and whispered, "3...2...1!" We gathered up all our energy and ran as fast as we could to my house with a Reaction Queen screaming and running behind us.
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They are so going to get it. I don't know what I'm going to do, but they are so going to get it. We get to Ai-chan's house, and Reina went to climb in the window. I follow her, but before I climbed in, I looked at Ai-chan, who was panting and trying to catch her breath. "Are you going to be okay?" I asked, my voice had a very cautious tone. Coughing, Ai-chan looked up at me and replied, "I'm going to be alright, I'm sure I can go in the front door." "Okay." I warned, climbing inside and closing the window behind me.

"At least Ai-chan got Miki'd." Reina teased, a grin forming on her face. "She didn't really get Miki'd." I replied, getting techinical. Reina was about to open her mouth, but then we heard some yelling. It sounded like Ai-chan was arguing with her parents.

"In the closet, now!" Reina grabbed my wrist and we ended up in Ai-chan's closet once again. I put my ear to the wall to listen to what's going on.

Well, the arguing ended up happening downstairs instead of upstairs. It was a long time when we heard the door open. "Okay, it's safe." I opened the closet door and went to go sit next to Ai-chan on the bed. "So, what happened?" Reina and I asked at the same time. I pulled her closer to me.

"After a lot of lying, I finally convinced them that I stayed over at Eri's house early this morning." Ai-chan explained. Reina and I just looked at each other and shrugged our shoulders. "That was a lot of yelling though." Reina muttered. I agreed, all heck broke loose downstairs.

At least she's okay, I just hope no one else interferes today.
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"Are you serious?" Sayu asked me when I told her that I wanted to know more about Ai-chan. "We shouldn't just bug Ai-chan." She was right, but Ai-chan's my best friend, and she's never told me that she's a vampire. She needs to tell me everything about this "vampire" thing.

"I'm late!" Sayu shouted as she put her hands on top of her head. "What are you late for?" Normally, Sayu's not late for anything since she's always with me. "I have to meet Koharu soon." "Koharu?" Now I was curious about this Koharu girl. Is she dating Sayu or something? "She's my mentee." Sayu replied in a shy voice. "Ooh, sounds like you like her." I said in a teasing voice. "Very funny Eri." Sayu playfully hit me on the arm. "Okay, then I guess you should go." I waved goodbye to Sayumi, and I continued walking.

What else am I going to do today? I sighed, my eyes darting up to the light blue sky. Without Sayu, I have no one else to talk to. I really want to know about Ai-chan, but Sayu was right, I can't interfere. I just hope that she's alright.

"Eri-chan?"

"EH?!" I shout seconds later. I turn around and notice a short Chinese girl behind me. Oh, I know who she is. "LinLin, hi." I smiled in relief, and waved sheepishly. This girl scared me so badly. "I noticed that you were all by yourself," LinLin giggled a little bit. She's always happy. "Where's Sayu?" My body flinched when she said Sayu's name. I don't know why though.

"She's with Koharu." I replied. "Oh, Kusumi-san." LinLin was in a thinking pose at the moment. I felt like sitting somewhere, I'm so tired of standing here. We sat down at a bench. I need to tell someone about this, and I'm sure that LinLin would understand, since she knows Ai-chan.

"Um, L-LinLin?" I asked nervously, my throat a little scratchy. "Yes?" LinLin sounded fine, it was perky and happy as usual.

"I need to tell you something."
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"Koharu! I'm sorry I'm late!" I shouted when I was inside the room. Koharu jumped up and hugged me tightly. My cheeks were turning pink at her touch. Then again, I've been feeling like this ever since last week. "It's okay," her face was close to mine, a smile forming on her lips. "You're always late." I started blushing even harder.

"How's everything?" I asked as Koharu went to go sit down in her seat and patted the chair next to her. I obeyed and sat down. "Everything's good, but school is very boring." Koharu replied, rolling her eyes and playing with a strand of her long, black hair. Her plush lips formed into a pout, and her eyes were cast downwards.

I want to kiss them.....

OH MY GOD! SAYU WHAT ARE YOU THINKING?!? YOU'RE HER MENTOR! ACT LIKE ONE DANG IT! My cheeks were crimson now. I could just feel it. Why does Koharu have to look so cute?!?

"Eh? Sayu, are you okay?" Koharu's eyes aimed towards me. "Erm...everything's fine." I lied, my face getting hotter and hotter by the second, my legs feeling like Jell-o. "Doesn't look like it," The tone in her voice sounded like she was worried. "You can tell me." No. I can't tell her about Ai-chan. I can tell her about the feelings I have for her, that is if I have the guts to say so.

"I like you Koharu." I blurted, covering my mouth with my hand. Me and my big mouth. "I like you too Sayu." Koharu walked over and she kissed me on the lips. I kissed her back, but Koharu broke the kiss. "Is there still something wrong Sayu?" I nodded. "It's about Ai-chan..." "She's your friend right? I bumped into her on the street." Koharu rubbed the back of her head, another smile forming on her lips.

"She's a vampire." I mumbled quickly. Knowing Koharu, I think she would get the message. She didn't move, her eyes growing big slowly. Her eyes slowly met mine. I was supposed to feel scared, but I could just melt.

The door opened with a loud boom. "Michishige, Kusumi, time for you to go." The lady pointed to her watch. "Yes, thank you." We said at the same time.

Koharu's fingers were tangled in mine as we exited the building. Before we parted ways, Koharu whispered, "I won't tell anyone." "Please don't." I whined, waving to her as I headed to my house.
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I'm. So. Tired. If I stay out in the sun even longer, I will become drowsier than ever. Being the messenger, I have to stay up, or else I will have a whole lot of yelling from Yossie and a lot of groping from Miki.

And trust me, no one wants to be Miki'd. That was a nice save from Risa though, Ai-chan definitely doesn't want to experience that moment. Especially since I'm mostly the one that's been Miki'd.

Risa held Ai-chan's hand, and they were lying on the bed together. I feel like teasing them at this point, but that's just my personality and how I feel at the moment.

I giggled, then I smirked. I rubbed my hands together, and teased, "Ai-chan and Risa: The Lovebirds~" They flinched, and they sat up and looked at me. An innocent smile formed on my lips.

"What the heck Reina?!?" Risa and Ai-chan said at the same time. "Nothing~" I kept teasing. They rolled their eyes and they laid back down.

I love teasing them, but Eri and Sayu are on my mind at the moment. They better not have told anyone.
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I finally saw LinLin running across the street. There were no cars. Thank goodness, because I was ready to shout at any minute.

"Sorry about that Koharu," LinLin was hypervenilating a little bit, but she was alright after a few seconds. "I had to take a walk, and Eri-chan told me about Ai-chan." I froze at her name. My eyes grew big again, and I still didn't move while LinLin was poking me. "So, I guess Sayu told you too?" LinLin asked, still poking me. I moved out of my spacey zone and replied, "Yes. She did."

"Hey, you want to come over to my house?" LinLin changed the subject. "Sure!" My energy was back, and I nodded very fast. "Okay, then let's go this way!" LinLin pointed to the left, and we went to that direction.

I hope Sayu doesn't mind about me going over to LinLin's house for the afternoon.
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"Okay Aika, you jump off of the wall like this..." JunJun demonsrated, her feet shooting from the wall to the cold, hard pavement. I watched, my eyes were focused on JunJun's every move. When she landed, she looked up at me, her smile was very bright. I smiled back. "Now, you try." I gulped, feeling nervous.

I jumped off of the wall and I landed perfectly on the ground. I slowly opened my eyes and saw JunJun standing right beside me. I was shocked. "I did it!" I beamed, my smile was glowing. "That's very nice for a first try, I've never had such a fast learner." JunJun messed with her hair a little bit.

"Well, that's how I am." I smirked, poking JunJun in the cheek. "Hey!" JunJun touched her cheek on the spot where I poked her. I laughed, covering my mouth with my hand. JunJun started laughing too. "Nobody pokes the trainer in the cheek!" "Nobody except me!" I stuck out my tongue. "Okay, now our second training destination is going to be in the busier part of the city." JunJun pointed out.

I was really excited for this. I'm happy that JunJun's my trainer.
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"Bananas~" I sighed, my eyes fixated on the object. It was plush, but I didn't care. I wanted to get it, but people would think I'm crazy if I went to the store and bought it. "You're supposed to train me JunJun~" Aika whined, pulling my arm. Oh crap, I got distracted again, me and bananas.

"Oh, I'm sorry Aika, let's go in this building." It was abandoned, and all the lights were on. Aika was holding on to me.

"JunJun I'm scared."

"It's okay Aika, we're going to be alright." I comforted her. We got to the stairs, and Aika's eyes met mine.

"So, are you ready to begin the second part of your training?" I asked. Aika slowly shook her head, and let go of me. "Okay, let's begin."
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Everything was decorated with Chinese stuff as Koharu and I entered our large house. My parents finally decided to live in Japan after a year I came as an exchange student. They had to deal with business stuff first before moving. It was always like this whenever I came here though. However, the expression on Koharu's face was shocking. "This place is amazing!" Koharu squealed, jumping up and down.

"LinLin, who is that you brought over?" My father asked in Japanese, walking into the main hall, which is where Koharu and I were at the moment. "Father, this is Koharu, my friend." I introduced. "Hello." Koharu bowed, my father bowing also. "It is very nice to meet you Koharu, please enjoy your stay." "Thank you, I will." Koharu replied.

"Let's head up to my room." I said, and we went up to my room. We opened the door and entered my room. Koharu sat in my chair, and I sat on my bed. "There's something still on my mind." we said at the same time. "You go first." she demanded.

"Eri.."

"Sayu.." We both looked up, and we knew what the both of us were going to say next.

"Ai-chan."

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Re: Rondo (Chapter Three: Progress-Chapter Eight: Danger)
« Reply #11 on: June 25, 2009, 12:13:13 AM »
Aaaaaaaaaaaand the plot gets sub-plots. :D


Never thought I'd see vampire fluffage. :lol:

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Re: Rondo (Chapter Three: Progress-Chapter Eight: Danger)
« Reply #12 on: July 02, 2009, 04:20:26 PM »
I lol'd so hard at their love confessions.  XD


and who doesn't want to get Miki'd?  :P



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Re: Rondo (Chapter Nine: Rainfall)
« Reply #13 on: July 06, 2009, 07:43:52 AM »
The sound of raindrops hit the window like bullets. It was nighttime, which is not a good time to be out.

Koharu waved goodbye to me a few hours ago, or else she would have to walk home alone in the rain. I don't blame her, I would go home the moment I heard thunder and lighting.

"LinLin?" I looked up from my Chinese dinner to my parents. The expressions painted on their faces were a look of worry. "You haven't touched your food." My father said sternly. "Is something wrong?" my mother asked with concern. "Um, no." I lied, my body was weak at this point. I've never lied to my parents before. "Are you sure? You can talk to us about anything." I ate my rice, shaking my head in reply. Anything? They must be crazy. "So nothing's on your mind?" My father asked. I didn't bother to look up, but I replied, "Nothing's on my mind." Being the fast eater in my family, I grabbed my plate and put it in the sink.

"I'm going outside." I walked over to the coat rack, getting an odd reaction from my parents. "Be safe, sweetie." I knew that was all my mother could say at the moment. She closed the door behind me, and I put on my coat.

I pulled the hood over my head to prevent my hair from getting wet, or even worse, getting damp. If my hair got wet, I would become the "Reaction Princess" when I get home. Nobody wants to see me like that.

Well, I knew it was raining outside, but I didn't expect it to be pouring! Great, now my hair is going to be wet! This sucks!

Wait, shouldn't my mind be on this vampire thing that Ai-chan has? I don't really believe in vampires...yet. It's not true, it can't be true. There's no way it's true. It can't be right.

Having no clue where I was going, I stopped in my tracks. I knew that I was on a sidewalk, it's raining, and it's dark out!

HOW AM I GOING TO GET HOME?!?

I could hear heavy breathing behind me, someone's hands were on my shoulders. Don't panic LinLin, don't panic. "Looks like I have another victim." Victim? What is this creepy guy talking about. "Fresh blood." THIS GUY'S A CREEPY VAMPIRE?!? Okay, it's time to act now!

I tried to get out of his grip, but the more I kept moving, his grasp on me became tighter. His teeth started sinking into my flesh. I don't want to be unconscious! His teeth started sinking further. I heard footsteps coming our way, and someone shouted, "LET GO OF HER!"

The creepy vampire dude let me go, but I fell face forward in the murky water puddle, both my hood and my hair wet. He is going to pay for this. He ran off, and I started shaking. Like I said before, it was pouring outside.

"Hey, are you okay?" the voice sounded like a girl. My eyes darted to the girl immediately. Her eyes were shining, and her smile was bright. There was something different about her smile though. Wait a minute...are those fangs?!? I started panicking, having a Reaction Princess moment. As if she were reading my mind, she let out a giggle and said, "Don't be afraid of me, I'm not harmful, you're lucky I saved you." I was stunned, I couldn't say anything due to my throat being dry. "Uh..thank you very much, my name is LinLin."

THAT'S ALL I CAN SAY?!? I could burst at any minute. My cheeks reddened at my lame introduction and that smile that this vampire had. She's so cute...Ugh! LinLin stop it! "My name is JunJun." the vampire introduced helping me up. My body shivered a little.

"I don't want to see you hurt again." JunJun kissed my forehead before leaving me. If the sun was out, JunJun would see my crimson face. Thank goodness it was dark. "Let's go Aika!" she called. A girl with short, brown-or black, I couldn't tell-hair jumped from out of nowhere and landed beside JunJun. "Good job!" JunJun exclaimed, giving her a high-five. She must be one of those trainers.

Before the pair ran off, JunJun looked back at me and shouted, "If you get hurt again, I'm going to be there for you!" She dashed off across the empty street, disappearing before my eyes.

I didn't care about my soaked hair anymore. Instead, I tried finding my way home by searching for signs.

Eventually, I found my way home. I arrived late, but there was no response from my parents since they were asleep. I dried my hair before changing into my night clothes, and I went straight to sleep.

That night, I couldn't help but dream about JunJun and the vampire that tried to attack me.
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My eyes opened, seeing the window filled with raindrops. Oh wow, nighttime. I guess I slept through the afternoon. Wait a minute, I did sleep through the afternoon! Darn.

Risa's arm was around my waist, my cheeks burning up at her touch. Reina was fast asleep in my chair; the sun did make her drowsy after all. I thought that this would be a good time to have some alone time to myself and thinking things over.

I carefully took Risa's arm off of my waist, I got out of my bed, and wrote the girls a quick note. I hope this would make sense.

Gone out.

-Ai


I took my raincoat and went down the stairs. "Are you going to get something to eat Ai?" MY father asked me when I turned the doorknob. "YeahsureIwillloveyouDad, bye!" I replied all in one breath, closing the door.

I ran down the street, bumping into something, or someone. I almost fell, but I caught myself.

"Ai-chan, there you are." A girl spoke. It sounded like Eri, but she looked so different. Her eyes were beady, and that turtle-like smile she had, turned into a devilish one in seconds. What is wrong with her?

It's like she's possessed.

"I've been wanting to know more about you." She started walking closer to me. I walked back, trying to avoid her.

WHAT THE HECK IS WRONG WITH THIS GIRL?!?

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Re: Rondo (Chapter Nine: Rainfall)
« Reply #14 on: July 06, 2009, 08:25:36 AM »
oh~ great~ junlin~~
love your story~~
plz continue to update!!

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Re: Rondo (Chapter Nine: Rainfall)
« Reply #15 on: July 06, 2009, 04:19:33 PM »
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She's so cute...Ugh!
Linlin has a crush on Junjun  XD

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"I don't want to see you hurt again." JunJun kissed my forehead before leaving me.
Junjun has a crush on Linlin?  :?

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"Ai-chan, there you are." A girl spoke. It sounded like Eri, but she looked so different. Her eyes were beady, and that turtle-like smile she had, turned into a devilish one in seconds. What is wrong with her?

It's like she's possessed.
Evil Eri...interesting  :twisted:

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Re: Rondo (Chapter Nine: Rainfall)
« Reply #16 on: July 11, 2009, 12:31:19 AM »
Awwwwwwwwwww...JunLin! :oops:


Ocrap possessed Eri! :shocked

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Re: Rondo (Chapter Ten: Mirror)
« Reply #17 on: July 11, 2009, 07:41:49 AM »
@~happyxcharmy~: OMG I love your username!  :heart: :grin: Thank you very much! ^_^

@badsaints: Haha, thank you, and yes JunJun likes LinLin. ^_^

@JFC: Yes, possessed Eri.  :D XD
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I fiddled with my hair, looking at my reflection in the mirror. "You are cute Sayu." I repeated to myself, making an expression. I smiled, setting the mirror down and walking over to my bunny nightstand where my pretty pink phone lies. I grabbed it, and I noticed that I had two text messages. One was from Koharu, the other was from Eri. I wasn't surprised, but I started spacing out like Eri for a moment. I clicked on Koharu's message.

Hey Sayu,

Um..well, now that we are together...um..I was wondering...if we can go out sometime? Like maybe..Saturday? I can come over to your house at 3 pm? I hope you don't have anything to do.

Love, Koharu


The heat in my cheeks increased as I grinned. Since today was Friday, I was fine with going on a date with Koharu. "Oh crap, I need to find an outfit!" I muttered, running to my closet and opening the door. After twenty minutes, I picked out a bunny shirt, jeans, and bunny sneakers. The accessories, I will pick those out tomorrow.

Wait, didn't I have another message? I went back to the nightstand and picked up the phone. Oh yeah, another message from Eri. Did I mention that I wasn't surprised? She's probably bored, as usual.

Hey Sayu,

Come outside. Now. I mean it. I found Ai-chan.

Bye.

Eri


It's raining out there! Seriously, I don't want my hair to be messed up! I want to be cute! Eri, why do you make me do these things? Especially when it's raining? She should know this by now!

No. Calm down. Get some rest. Eri is fine. She can handle this by herself. I placed the phone back on the nightstand and went over to my bed. Pink sheets with a bunny blanket. Too bad I didn't get pink pillowcases for my pillows. Oh well.

I snuggled under the covers, closing my eyes. Ah, it feels so good to be in the comfort of my own bed. Now I can dream about my date with Koharu! Also, I can dream about how cute I am!

Silence. Well, except for the rain. I could feel my heart pounding in my chest. My eyes were shut tight. My body was fidgeting. The rain was harder, and then thunder burst in the scene. My body jerked at the sound of the thunder. My cellphone rang. I grabbed the phone and answered it, not even looking at the Caller ID.

"You're not coming?" My eyes widened at the voice. She sounded so different, my throat was getting dry. "E-Eri?" I whispered, my voice cracking in response. "So, are you going to come or what? I've got Ai-chan." Why is she doing this crap? I don't want her to interfere, but it is too late. "I'll be right there, don't do anything." I hung up, and I went to the closet again to find an outfit. This time I chose blue shorts and a pink T-shirt.

I snuck past my parents' room and went downstairs. I unlocked the door, closing it quietly. After that, I ran outside. Usually, I would meet up with Eri at the park, but she's probably near Ai-chan's house. I should go over there first. But wait...

HOLY CRAP I FORGOT TO BRING AN UMBRELLA!

Dang Eri, why did you make me come out here in the first place? You just had to know about her didn't you?

My thoughts were interrupted when I saw Eri grabbing Ai-chan by the shoulders. Thunder roared and lighting flashed afterward. "NO!" I shouted. Eri turned around and smiled...in a devilish way. "Finally." She walked over to me, dropping Ai-chan in the process. Ai-chan was shaking, and her body was so weak. "Why are you soaking wet?" Eri asked me, looking confused. Now she wants to play the innocent role. "I thought you were Ai-chan's best friend." I changed the subject immediately, crossing my arms and pouting.

Ai-chan got up quickly, still shaking from the rain. She gave me a frightened look. Eri spun around and shouted, "I'm not letting you go anywhere!" Thunder and lightning strolled in after her outburst. What's up with Eri? I've never seen or heard her act like this before. She looked back at me and replied, "Best friend? Yeah I was her best friend, but there is more to that girl than I thought."

I couldn't say anything, I was in complete and utter shock.
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I was wide awake, my eyes scanning the room. "Rain, how interesting." I mumbled, staring outside the window. Risa was still asleep, but..Ai-chan! Where is she? There was note. I ran over to the table and picked it up.

Gone out

-Ai


I crumbled the paper into a ball. I went over to Risa and started shaking her. "WHAT?!?" Her shout was a Reaction Queen shout. "We need to leave." I warned. "Why?" "Ai-chan's out." She didn't say anything, running over to the window, opening it. I followed after her, climbing out and closing the window behind me.

We ran down the street. I was hoping that nothing bad would happen to Ai-chan. I know Risa would be upset, she's in love with that girl.

We caught up to a shaking Ai-chan standing in the middle of the street. Risa pulled her over to the sidewalk and hugged her, while Ai-chan was holding onto her for dear life. Okay that's it, something's wrong with that Eri girl. I knew it from the start that she's been acting weird lately.

"You." My voice boomed, a flash of lightning appeared behind me. Eri giggled and assumed, "You must be one of Ai-chan's protectors." "No, I am one of her trainers." I corrected, rolling my eyes.

"What did you do to her Eri?!?" Risa cried, angry tears strolling down her face. Dang, that devilish smile appearing on Eri's face again? That's not going to fool me. I know better than that.

But this girl is seriously insane! One minute she's nice, the next she's gone crazy!

"Listen, if you don't tell what the heck is your problem, you are going to pay." I snarled, baring my sharp fangs. She backed away. "I'm not telling you." she snickered, smiling again.

Oh that was it, all hell is going to break loose now.

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Re: Rondo (Chapter Ten: Mirror)
« Reply #18 on: July 11, 2009, 08:09:24 AM »
HOLY SHAT! PSYCHO-SCHIZO ERI!!!
:OMG:

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Re: Rondo (Chapter Ten: Mirror)
« Reply #19 on: July 11, 2009, 10:07:16 AM »
Whoa insanely intense  :O

You better update quick or I'll turn possessed myself  :twisted:

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