Black and Blue (Ch 34 6/4 The End!)

[Shiawase_Honoo]

My first reply for this fiction HA!
I've read these for long time but I didn't have a chance to leave my comment.
I love this fiction!
Thanks for your fiction that I can get my idea

[Fushigidane]

OOH Now isn't this an exciting fic ^^ I'm so glad Reiki didn't get killed
And lol! Koharu wants her father dead, does she mean YOSSIE?! (Ribbon no Kishi the musical~)

[kRisZ]

Sayumi grinded up against a good looking man on the dance floor

  wait, man? I take that  back lol

She didn’t even notice Risa and Ai close by, practically making love in public, lips sealed together and hands wandering.

OMG 

half dead and bearing a note, his tongue long cut out.

Poor man

she cut herself off when she spied the lovers with their hands shoved down the front of each other’s pants, completely oblivious to the world around them.

Oh gosh 

“Idiot! Who’s cares if you don’t like to!? Get out there with her before someone steals her away!” The turtle cried

I miss the Turtle 

“You can have sex, can’t you?!”

    

Eri grabbing Reina’s sides and pulling her almost uncomfortably close so that they could roll their hips together rhythmically

“Come on, handsome.” Eri giggled, tugging him away, “You’re mine.”

Pull his nails out lol

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Very hot dance floor 
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“Stay with me in my bed tonight.” Reina offered in a voice that really made it sound like a command

Yay! Go Reina     

When they realized what they were hearing, they scrambled for the television remote to drown out the noise.

   


Wow! Sorry I didn't quote any from the battle scene, just too focused to pause       

[badsaints]

Oh shucks I'm really late in reading this! You'll forgive me, won't you?


*Club scene*
Woohoo for TanaShige! Lol and I'm guessing they did woohoo'd after the club? *pats the turtle on the back* Well done Eri. But TakaGaki was hot *coughcough*


*Fight scene*
Guess that was hard for Reina. But oh shit, Koharu!

[sunc]

Since i decided to delurk today i thought it was fair to confess that this is my fav fanfic  ..and i apologize for all this half year or so of lurking that i enjoyed reading your fanfic without saying thanks...so thank you very much and sorry for my english,it's not good

[rndmnwierd]

Well, since this thread has been so graciously bumped, I've decided to put forth some effort and make comment replies.



@grac - It really flatters me to hear all this praise.  That someone thinks this is good is enough to keep me (attempting) writing, but that you carry my story, my baby, if you will, around on your phone is something else.


@kano-chan - Thank you. I try to be as descriptive as possible, but I always feel as though I'm leaving out some important fact that brings everything together. I'm glad it's understandable.


@SarangAi - More praise. I was trying to make a cliffhanger type dealie there. Glad it worked. Let's hope my next chapter will be interesting enough to top this.

@oddball - I have some ideas, but nothing with enough form to write out yet. I'm trying to think of a properly explosive opening chapter to the next arc.


@Kawaiwai - Fighting Ai-chan is just so unlike her. Or is it? Hearing all these reports of her breaking furniture and screaming at her sister makes me wonder just how her temper really is.


@Shiawase_Honoo - Ah, welcome. I'm glad I gave someone some inspiration. Thanks.


@Fushigidane - It would be pretty funny if Yossie led a double life.


@kZ - Thank you, glad you enjoyed. I always love your quoting reply style.


@baddie - Hey, better late than never, right? Glad you liked it!


@sunc - Welcome to the forum and thank you for posting here! Your English seems fine to me. I hope this means we'll be seeing more of you around here?






Currently, I have about a quarter of the first chapter of the third arc typed up. And now ideas for how to make it exciting. Hopefully work won't kick all my ideas away with tedious monotony and I'll eventually pull something out of my ear. Then I just have to get it down.

[Ada XD]

Okay I just HAVE to bump this up x__x
I read it till 1 am last night and I resumed the rest of it this morning 8D I kinda skipped the arts class for this lmfao <3

Okay so this was just too good, got me hooked from the very start  I love how we got AiGaki fluff + hawt stuff in almost every chappie, and it always made me grin like a retard in pure pure delight   
Too good I say *fidgets* >_>
UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! *chants*  Now who's joining me lol 
Moar AiGaki loving before the action comes in again? 

[aya-chii]

i spent my little spare time for the last three days reading this fic too !!!
i love the action scenes and everything... i can clearly imagine every single moment of those bloody scenes <3
i love the rabu rabu and--- yeah i can clearly imagine those too hahah

so i'm joining ada:

update update update
update update update
update update update

[Ada XD]

;___;
Now that I`ve proclaimed this fic my fave of all time, you must understand how anxious I am to read more xD
*wails*
Please rndy, give us a new chappie~~~ 
*re-reads in the meanwhile*

[rndmnwierd]

I'm sorry, I know I've made ya'll wait, but my inspiration has gone away, for, like, life and stuff. I don't have nearly as much going on as some people, but my financial situation is driving me crazy and I think that worry is not helping my stuff getting written. So, I love all those that have continued to support my fizzling storyline and I hope that soon, like within the next few months or so, I will get back to writing with a lighter heart.

[oddball]

Don't worry about it buddy, you take your time and come back when you are ready too

GANBARE!

[Ada XD]

Awww I'm sorry D: I didn't know that ;_;
Well if that's the case, I'm gonna be patient and wait 8D Ada is still going to support you, whenever you'll be back
This still is my all time favorite series lol xD

[badsaints]

Hope everything will be fine for you Hang in there!

Miss this story much much too but we know that when you make your comeback, it'll be a blast!

[kawaii beam]

frizzle?! frizzle my behind lady! you know we (mostly me cus i nagg u...) will wait for your comback X3 and it shall be as epics as ever X3.......did i just make sense there?

[Sancho]

Hi rndmnwierd. It's been awhile. This story was one of my favorite but I have to admit that I haven't finish it yet. sorry. But don't worry. I'll be checking it this couple of days. Yey! 

[Sora-chan]

Risa with a gun is hot lol !!! xDDDD

[rndmnwierd]

I can't believe people are still coming back to this story. makes me feel bad for not updating in so long. And it has been a long time... but I promise all ya'll faithful readers that this is not not not on hiatus. I'm just a wee bit blocked at the moment...  Soon though, I will have a chapter up, as soon as I get some time off work that doesn't last until I have to be back again in four hours... slavedrivers

[Sora-chan]

ya~hoo. I cant read it whenever you upload.. ^_^ this is a very interesting and action packed story.

[rndmnwierd]

Just signing on to report to y'all that my update may take a bit longer than I anticipated. My computer officially died this afternoon, may it rest in peace. Let's all have a moment of silence for my hardest working compatriot in fanfiction, quietly taking all of the verbal and emotional abuse I have dished out over the years and only complaining every once in a while.

Hopefully I should be able to replace the bad parts quickly, but I'm not sure. Until then, any projects I had been working on are dead in the water. Le sigh, just a waiting game now.

[SarangAi]

RIP rndy's computer.