Rokun - LoL, I noticed my fic was 2nd on google when you search "byenara". Unfortunately the only time it's mentioned is in the title.
Sukoshi - Ah, that's so like Kameshige, should I make an alternate ending?
Nah, I spent way too long writing this story, it'll probably take me another few years.
Funny you mentioned creepy Eri talking to herself. Since this story was written back in 2005/6ish it probably had some remnants of another fic of mine written around that time *hint hint*
kRisZ -
kurosawa87 - I did find Parts I & II the other day in a file I saved awhile back, it'd be kinda weird to post them in this thread so maybe I'll just upload it and link it here or something, if anyone's interested. Like I said, Patachu's writing is way different than mine but still LoL.
cogi_yoshi - Man, I notice I keep writing about nattou in my stories (it's mentioned several times in my "April no Aho" story) Maybe it's my subconscious curious about how it tastes.
No one figured out which Musumes said "byenara"? Erien Hime (ShikyoxYaiba) should know this.
Oh, I think I gave away another clue.