Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [COMPLETE - EXTRA: Ch. 101 - (12/1)]

[kawaii beam]

oh snapz that was hot...and why do i feel that tanakame is going to more hott? great jobby~

[Ada XD]

Aah sweet hotness 
I was expecting something like this to happen at this kind of perv party xD

“I can go a little further,” Risa insisted.
Omg kinky Gaki 
That was very nice I'm waiting for some hotter stuff sometimes (near) in the future 


And why do I have this feeling that TanaKame action will be 10 times hotter than this?   

[Swtme03]

 
 
 
 

That was so effing HAWT!!!   

The kissing and the foreplay and.....*in a more husky voice*....the teasing 
You are definitely on the the right track when it comes to writing...those kinds of chapters     

I thought it was cute that Risa was worried about Ai's sexual being 
She ended up lighting a match in Ai's control system, not knowing just how fast that flame can spread 
Ai really knows how to turn up the heat too choosing all the right places to play with on Risa   
Then poured some water on her OWN flame because she respects that she isn't ready yet. 
The dancing at the end was just so 
I'm looking forward to the time when Risa IS ready 

Next up is TanaKame's party story~

You know where else there's a party?  (<~hoping you catch my drift) 

moar!! MOAR!!!!! MOAR!!!!!!!!! 
.....please? 

*scampers off to read again~

[xanimefreak13x]

You are so freakin` AWESOME you know that!?
Lots of love for you~

“Me,” a voice said, as Risa felt a pair of arms around her shoulders.  “You boys got a problem with my girl?”
 “All of you, out,” the leader ordered.  Her glare was dark and threatening.

w00t! Show `em who's the boss, Aichan! Me lovin` this dominating character you have going on Aggressive Aichan is sexyyy
Whaaa~!? I'm quite surprised that Risa is Ai's first lover! That was quite unexpected~

mmm, aggressive Risa is quite hot too...
*Takagaki talk* : OH shoot! This isn't gonna go where I think it is, is it? Somehow I thought you were gonna be evil and end the lovin' there But phew! good thing you didn't.

“From… you know… doing what couples do… and stuff.”

Aww! this line is SOOOO CUTE~ Risa seems so innocent here~ putting Ai's needs ahead of herself~ she's so caring!

“I can go a little further,” Risa insisted.
Omg kinky Gaki 

And, ooo~ I'm liking this kinky Gakisan also~ Hehe. She's such a tease!
But DANGG, I wonder how she can have that much self-control! Especially when it's Ai in front of her and stopping in the middle of everything too... haha. I applaud her that~ She totally wins there! Oh, and vice-versa too for Ai
Aww, the ending was so cute also~ Heh, you sure do know how to keep your readers hooked~
Mann, this chapter was just soooo much WIN!  Hot dayummm~ 

[rndmnwierd]

I don't really know how to rephrase everyone else's comments and make it into my own, since everything I want to say is already written down here. Maybe I should just go with a few more 'Homg Hawt! ' and a 'Geez, Ai is sexy when she takes control. ' Oh and how about a, 'If this is what Takagaki is doing, then I really wonder about Tanakame~! '

And definitely a 'Next chapter plox!' 

[YumePouk]

Omg omg omg O_O
i was just away during the weekend + 1 day.....
And I already missed 6 chapters T-T
damn.....I'm still in shocked....
you really are a faster autor-chan...
And I like it
.....I wanna be Back to comment the chapters
otherwhise I will not do my job at all....

[oddball]

Man two episodes of comple fluff, have decided to go to a halloween party as a cow however 

[NekoMioko]

Err...umm... I'm.... speechless ... 
I really loved this chapter, it was really sweet and hot 

I'll be waiting for Tanakame~~

[SarangAi]

@xanimefreak13x: Yeah, i tried to portray Sayumi as this sickly girl who seems so helpless... but not necessarily weak   and yeah, I like that line too

@aussie: wow, you are HEAD ON about that analysis, right there.  That's exactly the situation, where Sayu is blaming Ai for everything and Ai believes her

@kawaii beam: oh, TanaKame will be pretty hott   and i think you have a knack for getting new pages in my thread

@Ada: LOL kinky Gaki..

@Swtme03: I love reading your comments~   and hopefully, TanaKame will send you on another emoticon rush..

@xanimefreak13x (again): aww~ thank you, i think you're pretty awesome too and yup, Ai-chan likes her "property"~

@rndmnwierd: LOL everybody seems to get the drift that TanaKame is always one step ahead of TakaGaki 

@YumePouk: Yeah, I update pretty fast (it's because I have nothing better to do, usually)

@oddball: LOL Risa didn't decide, Eri decided for her

@NekoMioko: speechless is good


Wow, that last chapter DEFINITELY got the comment count back up
Without further ado, here's the next chapter!

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Chapter 63

   TanaKame HAWTNESS---> http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=25888.0
   TanaKame HAWTNESS---> (for lurkers and non-pervers) http://sarangaifanfiction.wordpress.com/2010/08/04/kokoro-no-uta-ch-63/

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PSYCH.  Yes, chapter 63 is a PERV CHAPTER
It's my first perv so please go easy on me...
And when you're done reading, it would be nice to come and comment back here 
Enjoy~ 

[kuro808]

good job on both chapters, it was quite intriguing and a lot of goodness coming from both

[Ada XD]

I didn't get access to the perv forum ;_;
Yet 
Can you PM it to me please? 

[NekoMioko]

I have the same request as Ada
pretty please? ;w;

[Michi.Pinku]

the same here X'D i can't read the chapter .w.
Pm me pleease pleease pleease >.<

[xanimefreak13x]

w00t~ Thanks for the PM Lol, yeah, I'll try for access once I get enough posts...
Hmm, might I suggest that you post the non-pervy parts of the chapter here next time? Like just omit the pervy part or something... 
Oh yeahh~ and the thread title needs to be updated

As for the chapter... GOOD JOB!
Personally, I like the previous chapter better I don't know why though. I guess maybe it's cause I'm a sucker for Takagaki or maybe it's cause the chapter hasn't really sunk in yet for me. I really don't know. It just didn't have the same effect as the last chapter? Hmm, or is it that I'm just not as perverted as I thought I would be, LOL. jk.
I LOVED THE ENDING~ SOOO CUTE~ Aww, Risa finally feels like she belongs~  Maybe soon she will claim her property like Ai does... hehe.   
Yeahhh, maybe I am just a sucker for Takagaki rabu

[kano-chan]

Please pm me! I won't be able to sleep if I miss a chapter!

I read this story like twice waiting for chapters and then I decided to register because I love your story!

Takagaki chapter is so hot!!

[xkennax_love]

-has been a silent stalker-

I totally love this story.... AND I NEED TO READ THIS CHAPTER!!! TT.TT

Please send it to me!!

[gab98]

OMG!!! well your fan fic is so interesting and this last chapter was so hot  >.< tanakame!!!! hahahaha continue please!! more takagaki!!! 

[kawaii beam]

that was hot.....im happy i have accese to the perv forum XDDD drunk eri is pretty funny though and hot as well and poor reina just spazzing out  at 1st only to give into the bunny turtle girl

now i really cant wait for the takagaki perv! 

keep it up~

[junejy]

Can you PM it to me please? I can't read the chapter

I really love your story,especially TanaKame part

[fallenxangel24952]

Hi!

can you PM me since i don't have the access to perv forum 

I wanna know what would happen in chapter 63 

and your are a good writer