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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 61 - (8/2)]
« Reply #420 on: August 04, 2010, 07:25:27 AM »
OMG ... SarangAi ... u pull out so many lurkers again  XD  :rofl:
Don't think, the ppl drop a comment are only readers that you have  :D, there are really so many lurkers (including me)  :grin:, reg. or unreg. readers of your fic  :twothumbs in the forum
and, I come out from my hole second time   :mon sweat: , coz ... I also don't have access to the link that you gave ..  :cry:
Please I really need to read Chp. 63   :mon whine: I don't wanna miss a single chp. of your fic  :mon runcry:
Can you or anyone, PM me .....................  :cry:
Please ..  :bow:

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 61 - (8/2)]
« Reply #421 on: August 04, 2010, 07:41:59 AM »
DANGGG, YOU GO GIRL~!  :mon beam: :mon woo: Pulling out `em lurkers left and right! This thread is FLYING! :cow: :mon angel:
Props for pulling out all these lurkers~  CONGRATS! :yossi: :otomerika:

Heh, what'd I tell ya? :mon misch: Maybe you should write more of `em pervs to pull out more lurkers, eh?  :twisted: I know I'd like that. :roll:

You must be overworking yourself now~ having to PM all these people XD I think next time it'll be easier on you to just post up the pervs in a blog or fanfic community :P

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 61 - (8/2)]
« Reply #422 on: August 04, 2010, 08:19:10 AM »
One word... Y~ikes!
Just hope Eri does remember, if not its gonna be kind of a huge blow to Reina..

LOL! Well well well, look what perv chappys do to lurkers :mon misch:
Aww~ You bunch of... hentais! XD (KIDDING BTW)

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 61 - (8/2)]
« Reply #423 on: August 04, 2010, 09:06:03 AM »
Haha, can you please PM it to me too?
Im always lurking around so i dont have any post.  :lol:

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 61 - (8/2)]
« Reply #424 on: August 04, 2010, 09:19:50 AM »
Haha!! when I saw your post I was like "WHAT?? NO UPDATE?? WTF is she doing just posting comment replies for?  :mon annoy:  WHERE'S THE CHAPTER?!! :tantrum:"
....But then I realized you had it linked  :rofl:
and it took me to the BEST PLACE EVER!! :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart:
As payback for tricking me, I'll leave this...

http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=25888.msg753395#msg753395
tho, you might have already read it considering it's your topic :nervous
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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 61 - (8/2)]
« Reply #425 on: August 04, 2010, 02:26:58 PM »
:imdead: *is dead from replying in the perv section, but still felt the need to acknowledge this thread and also remind you that you didn't post a modified title for the last couple of chapters*

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 61 - (8/2)]
« Reply #426 on: August 04, 2010, 02:33:12 PM »
I read all this story and I do like !!!

Tanakame and AiGaki *_*

Please, can you PM the new chapter to me too ? ^^

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 61 - (8/2)]
« Reply #427 on: August 04, 2010, 02:36:27 PM »
So far I'm reading/downloading ur updates whenever I get a chance to go online...Please PM me that chapter too.. I won't pass a TanaKame Perv fic..hehehe..thanks a lot...keep up the good work! Oh and btw...evil Sayu is so cool!!!XD

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 61 - (8/2)]
« Reply #428 on: August 04, 2010, 02:56:31 PM »
Hi!

can you PM me chapter 63 since i don't have the access to perv forum 

I wanna know what is the happening about TanaKame in chapter 63  too.

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 61 - (8/2)]
« Reply #429 on: August 04, 2010, 06:23:49 PM »
Aaaaah  :heart:  :bleed eyes: :bleed eyes: :bleed eyes: :bleed eyes: :bleed eyes:
This was feckin hawt  :drool:

very well written... no more words xD  :oops:

One thing you should know: when the AiGaki perv comes in, Ada would love to read something wilder  :D

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 63 - (8/3)]
« Reply #430 on: August 04, 2010, 07:17:20 PM »
...... ~'.'~

Wow....

Hehe... That was.. Yummy... XD

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 63 - (8/3)]
« Reply #431 on: August 04, 2010, 07:20:33 PM »
So the thread is completely out of order now, since i pulled about a dozen lurkers....  XD

Wow, the perv chapter really emptied all those lurker holes... it made me busy with pm-ing too :D

And what's more interesting is that I noticed some lurkers even created an account to get this chapter... that makes me happy :twothumbs

So shocking that so many people actually read my fic... I nvr would've imagined! :w00t:

But all the pm-ing is creating too much work for myself, so I think I'm going to take animefreak's advice and set up a blog or something... :D

But until then, we're back to the sweet, cuteness of the two couples :wub:

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Chapter 64

   Eri moaned contently as she shifted her body in her own comfortable bed.  She tossed for a little then turned to lie on her other side.  She licked her dry lips and smiled as she felt the warmth of someone else’s skin.  She snuggled closer and the person put their arm around her. 

   Then, realizing that there shouldn’t be anyone else besides herself in her own bed, the turtle gasped and opened her eyes.  She was staring straight at someone’s neck.

   “Morning, baby,” a familiar voice whispered.

   Eri lifted her head to find her girlfriend, lying next to her, naked.  She let out a yell and shifted away.  Reina laughed softly.

   “What’s with that reaction?” she giggled.

   “You… you’re naked!” Eri whispered loudly, blushing.  She felt the cool air blow into the blanket and hit her skin.  Wait… it hit her bare skin.

   The older girl looked down at her own body and realized that she was also not wearing any clothes.  She let out a small yelp and quickly pulled the covers up to her mouth, concealing her nakedness.  She could feel her cheeks burning up as she comprehended the current situation: she and her girlfriend were naked in her bed together.

   “Don’t give me that look,” the yankii mumbled.  “You’re the one who begged me not to leave last night.”

   “I was?” Eri asked.

   “You were also the one who started stripping first, and then forced me out of my own dress.”

   Eri blinked furiously as she tried to remember the previous night’s events.  It slowly started to come back to her: the alcohol, all the couples, the bathroom, the pleasure…  She gasped.

   “I guess you remember everything now,” Reina laughed.  “I can tell from your expression.”

   “Yeah…” Eri mumbled.  “And then we came back here…”

   “And you tried to go all the way with me,” Reina recalled, giggling to herself.  “I had to pin you down and force your eyes close to get you to sleep.”

   “I’m sorry!” Eri cried, completely hiding her face underneath the sheets.  “I… I really shouldn’t have drunk alcohol, it’s my fault.  I’m sorry for making you… do that… in the bathroom… I’m sorry!”

   “What are you sorry for?” Reina asked, puzzled.  “I thought I would be the one to apologize.”

   “Why would you apologize?” Eri mumbled into the blanket.

   “I thought you wouldn’t want me to take advantage of you like that while you weren’t completely sane,” Reina explained.  “It made me happy that you opened up to me… but I worried about whether you would regret your actions or not.  But I still couldn’t control myself… so I’m sorry.”

   “You shouldn’t apologize!” Eri yelled, looking up at her girlfriend.  “I behaved very inappropriately… I’m sorry.”

   “Okay, we’re not getting anywhere here,” the yankii laughed.  She pulled herself over to her blushing girlfriend until their foreheads touched.  “Are you okay with what happened yesterday at the party?”

   “… Yes,” Eri admitted quietly.  “It… it felt good…”

   “And it makes me happy that you’re okay with it,” Reina said.  “There, it’s settled.  We’re both happy with last night.  So can we stop with the apologies?”

   “Mm-hmm,” Eri answered, smiling that sweet smile that Reina goes crazy for.  “I don’t regret anything.”

   “Me neither,” Reina sighed, embracing her beautiful lover.

   “I love you.”

   “I love you more.”

   “Wanna bet?”

   Eri looked up and kissed her younger girlfriend, bringing a smile to her lips.  Reina kissed her back gently and sighed contently.  Eri put her arms around the yankii and snuggled closer to her warmth.

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   “And that’s when I was five years old, at Kameha’s birthday party.”

   “You look so cute!”

   Ai chuckled as she looked at the old picture in Risa’s childhood scrapbook.  The two lovers were sitting in Risa’s bed, side by side, both wearing T-shirts and sweatpants.  Since the drunk turtle was so persistent in holding onto her girlfriend, Risa suggested that Ai stay over for the night as well. 

   The leader had insisted that she sleep on the couch but the bean disagreed.  She had said she was willing to share her own bed with her girlfriend.  Then, Ai had teased her about how cruel that was again, which made Risa blush.  But in the end, the couple slept together anyway while holding on to each other all night.  And of course, Ai put all her focus into not getting carried away.

   “Yeah, I have a lot of pictures from when I was little,” Risa grinned.  “But… it kind of makes me regretful that I don’t have any pictures of Ai-chan.”

   “It is a shame,” Ai nodded, flipping through the scrapbook some more.  “That’s why it’s important to leave a mark while you can.”

   “I think I can agree with that,” Risa said.

   “… You don’t have a picture of me yet, either,” Ai realized.  “And I don’t have a picture of you.”

   “I have your ‘Everyday Everywhere’ single,” Risa giggled.

   “That’s not the same,” Ai said.  “Next time we see each other, I’ll give you something to remember me by.”

   “I don’t need a picture,” Risa said.  “I mean, I’ll always see you… right?”

   “Of course,” Ai laughed.  “But I miss you even while I sleep.  I don’t know about you, but I miss you even when you’re right next to me.”

   “That doesn’t make any sense,” Risa laughed.  The leader also smiled and put her arms around the bean.  She then kissed her playfully on her head.

   “It’s because I love you too much,” Ai grinned.  “I think I may be addicted.”

   “That’s not good,” Risa frowned.  “Society isn’t going to wait for you to get over a drug like me, Ai.”

   “Then I just won’t get over you,” Ai replied.  “I’m going to forever be addicted to Niigaki Risa, and love every moment of it.”

   “You’re ridiculous,” Risa laughed.  “But I still love you.”

   “I love you too,” Ai chuckled. 

   She placed one more kiss on top of the bean’s head.  Risa turned her head and placed a quick smooch on her girlfriend’s cheek as well.  They giggled together as they flipped through some more of the scrapbook on their laps.

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 64 - (8/4)]
« Reply #432 on: August 04, 2010, 07:27:00 PM »
I CAN FEEL THE SUNSHINE~! XD

SO MUCH CUTENESS~ X3

mega lol at eri spazzing out about what happened XDD and ubber cute takagaki~ >3<  i wannay just cuddle the fluffyness poping out of this chapter~! X3
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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 64 - (8/4)]
« Reply #433 on: August 04, 2010, 07:40:45 PM »
Chapter 63: I think I lost too much blood :imdead: :luvluv1: :on bleed:

Chapter 64: OMG thats so cute :nya: Tanakame quite sexy but takagaki cutest couple :luvluv2:

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 64 - (8/4)]
« Reply #434 on: August 04, 2010, 07:48:30 PM »
The previous chapter was a little... shocking for me. xD
(Yes, I'm so pure =P )
I didn't expect Eri can be like that. Oo

But this chapter is very cute !
I like the relationship between Gaki and Aichan ! ^^


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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 64 - (8/4)]
« Reply #435 on: August 04, 2010, 08:25:40 PM »
Woah nekkid Tanakame  :w00t:
xDDD they're so funny and cute  :heart:

And AiGaki are even cuter AWWWWW  :wub: *melts*
I wonder how much all this happiness will last xD

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 64 - (8/4)]
« Reply #436 on: August 04, 2010, 08:35:55 PM »
Thanks for sending me the last chapter!! (and sorry for troubling you :sweatdrop:) I found it cute that Reina was struggling to not get carried away xD and I was kinda worried that Eri would forget/regret :< but it is good that she is fine with it :3

Ah~ the TakaGaki interaction is so cute in this chapter :wub:

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 64 - (8/4)]
« Reply #437 on: August 04, 2010, 11:24:26 PM »
When I read the first part of the chapter, I was like, "They did it?! And it wasn't written down in full detail? Nooo~!" But then I read some more and went, "Whew!" Thank god Eri remembers and is okay with everything.

And then some great, cute Takagaki. I wonder why Risa doesn't have any pics of 'Ai-chan'? Not enough time? I hope these two can rectify the no pictures thing soon enough.

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 64 - (8/4)]
« Reply #438 on: August 04, 2010, 11:25:14 PM »
All right. You've got me. :smhid Another lurker coming out, yoroshiku!! I simply adore this fanfic, and you're a very great writer. Usually I get bored when the chapters are super long, but you've got me hooked like no other. I never thought about making an account because I know I don't really do anything here except read certain fanfics. :lol:

But.....can you PLZ pm me chapter 63? :P

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 64 - (8/4)]
« Reply #439 on: August 04, 2010, 11:52:43 PM »
Yay ... I got PM ..  :cow:
Chp. 63  :on study: OMG ... SO FECKING HAWTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT  :imdead:  :bleed eyes:
it's 7:30 AM here n' I've to go to school  :temper: ... how am I gonna   :bleed eyes:
 XD Good Lord .. I shouldn't have log in earlier :bleed eyes:
Chp. 64 So Sweet! *ahem* do u have any plan to write perv. chp. for TakaGaki  :mon misch:
Pls do some of those hawtnessssssssssss for that cute couple too  :wub:

You are an awesome Writer SarangAi!  :twothumbs
Waiting for next Update ....  :D
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