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It's seems as though Gaki is less than impressed that Eri has not told Reina that she is actually a girl, Gaki is right though but for some reason I  can't see Eri telling Reina  :banghead:

Jun's pretty perceptive isn't she, I think she had a good idea about what was going on all ready and they way Reina was racting confirmed it for her, I just wonder if she half thinks that Eri is a girl at all?

LinLin thinking Reina was excited over Manga was  :lol:


   “Don’t make jokes like that,” Reina scoffed.  “Even though I’m cool about girl-girl relationships because of you three, you know I’m not that type.”

   “Yeah, yeah, I was just joking,” Junjun laughed.  “It was just a scenario.”

   “Well cut the scenarios and return to reality,” Reina said.  “Despite all the pretty aspects of Eri, I’m thankful that he’s a guy.  And he’s perfect that way.”

Oh dear why does this just shout confrontaion at me!  :cry:

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@kano-chan: stay positive~  XD

@Michi.Pinku: we'll see how cruel i can/can't be...  :twisted:

@Haruka: oh yes, VEEEEEEEEEEERRRRYYY :lol:

@sapphire: LOL Junjun might as well have the whole neighborhood wired XD

@aussie: I don't know, maybe i'll make some tragic endings this time...  :twisted:

@fallenxangel: *sigh* i love the AikaJunLin pair....  :twothumbs

@rndmnwierd: yeah, i oddly started to find LinKa a cute pair, even though I was unsure about them when i first started the story :P

@oddball: Junjun's that one cool person who seems laidback but is super smart.... i guess we'll see how far her knowledge goes XD


So everybody seemed frightened/depressed by the last lines of the chapter.... that means i've succeeded :twisted: :twisted:

I plan on writing the next chapter this weekend, hopefully friday, so please look forward to it! :twothumbs
(Oddly, these days, I've kind been missing Kokoro no Uta) :nervous

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Oh SarangAi...I love this chap!!
I love Eri be with Risa part. It's look like she got a HUGE pinch
and Reina part it's like that she has her own type. Don't like the girl-girl relationship.

P.S. Aika is so adorable when I've imagine that kind of her from your fic >w<

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@aussie: I don't know, maybe i'll make some tragic endings this time...  :twisted:
:smhid Better not!! :cry: TanaKame are always separated by something, whether it be illness or accident or 'reality'....plus the turtle won't be around to entertain the kitty for much longer. At least let them be together in fics :yep: :lol:



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^ I agree.
To separating Tanakame in this fic I do not.

Reina likes a girl haha. Just don't let Reina's friends know and theres no problem hmm? Tanakame gets more trubbel :) :heart:

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I have the plot all over my brain >o<!!!!!!

It's like a book I just been reading and I know like 10 differents finals for it XD

I'm a little a freak =)


God!! She knows she's HOT!

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@Shiawase-Honoo: lol glad you like the Aika here~ but Mittsi is always cute XD

@aussie: GAH don't remind me about the grads! You don't know how sad I am..  :cry:

@Fushigidane: lol we'll see who finds out first :P

@Haruka: LOL don't worry, it's not freaky. I'd know :lol:


UPDATE~~ :cow:

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   “Kameha, are you sure you didn’t get in trouble with the math teacher again?”

   “Risa-chan, you were sitting right next to me.  I didn’t sleep in class today.”

   The bean shot a frustrated look at her turtle friend, who flashed an innocent smile back at her.  Their homeroom teacher merely laughed softly under her breath as she watched the mini quarrel between her two students.

   Risa had been, for a reason that she herself is not even sure of yet, looking forward to eating lunch with Takahashi-sensei again.  But she had forgotten that she always eats with her best friend when she doesn’t have make-up sessions during the lunch period.  And so, Eri and Risa and Ai were all sitting underneath the large tree in the school courtyard, getting ready to eat their meal.  But for some odd reason, Risa didn’t feel comfortable eating with Eri.  Actually, it was more like she didn't feel comfortable with the fact that Eri was eating with Ai.  The bean refused to believe it was jealousy… just discomfort.

   “It’s okay, Gaki-san, I’ll leave,” Takahashi-sensei chuckled.  “You should eat with your friend.  I’ll go join the other teachers in the cafeteria—”

   “No!” Risa interrupted a little too quickly.  Eri raised an eyebrow while the teacher’s eyes grew wide.  “I mean… all those other teachers are going to bother you again, so it’s not a good idea to eat with them.”

   “Yeah, Sensei,” Eri chimed in with a teasing tone.  She stood up and skittered next to the teacher to link arms with her, much to Risa’s glaring.  “We can all eat together.  Except I don’t know why our dear Iinchou is being all uptight about this…”

   “I am not uptight!” Risa yelled.

   “Sensei, did you see that?” Eri said with mock terror on her face.  “Risa-chan just yelled at me, her best friend!  Kowai~”

   “You know, Kameha, I found a really good recipe for turtle soup last night—”

   “Okay, stop right there!” Ai interrupted, holding up her hands.  “Let’s not get into any food references, shall we?”

   “Yeah, Risa-chan!” Eri said, sticking out her tongue.

   “You too, Kamei-san,” Ai scolded.  “Don’t tease your friend so much like that; you girls are high school students so be more mature!”

   “Hai, Sensei~” Eri chirped.

   “Hai…” Risa grumbled, crossing her arms across her chest.

   “Now cheer up, Niigaki-san,” Takahashi-sensei smiled.  “Lunch period doesn’t last forever.  Let’s start eating.”

   After a couple more seconds of pouting, just for pride’s sake, Risa finally started to unpack her bento from a plastic bag.  Eri opened her own bento box and waited for the rest of her companions to get their lunch out.  The bean took out two wooden boxes and pushed one towards her teacher.

   “The promised bento,” she explained.

   “Thank you so much, Niigaki-san,” Ai smiled.  That made the wrinkle between Risa’s eyebrows relax more; she wasn’t happy yet, but she was a little calmer.

   The teacher opened the bento box and gasped softly.  Eri craned her neck to look inside the lunch box and also chocked on a breath of air.  The bento was elaborately decorated with various colors of side dishes.  The biggest section had the white rice with a single umeboshi and some black sesame seeds sprinkled on top.  In another section, there were rows of ham cut up into the shape of a star.  Next to that was the salad with lettuce, tomatoes, and cucumbers.  Right beside that was the fried shrimp, all crisp and golden.  In another section, there were chunks of fried chicken with sweet and sour sauce glazed over the top.  The dessert section contained apples cut up into the shape of rabbits.

   “Niigaki-san, you really outdid yourself!” Ai breathed.

   “You never make me a bento like that!” Eri whined.

   “That’s because you can make your own bento, can’t you?” Risa shot back.

   “Yeah, but I’m not as good at it as you…” the turtle pouted.

   “We can share this together, Kamei-san,” Ai laughed.

   “Sensei, yasashii ne~” Eri smiled, her eyes sparkling.  “You’re so nice!  I knew I liked you from first sight.”

   “I’m hungry, let’s eat,” Risa interrupted.  Somehow, it kept on bothering her how Eri was sitting so close to Takahashi-sensei like they had been life-long acquaintances while she was sitting a little further across from them.  She wanted to be closer to them too… she wanted to be closer to Sensei.

   “Itadakimasu~” the three women chanted.  Eri took in a piece of meat from her own lunch and let out a sigh of satisfaction.  Risa slowly took a bite out of fried shrimp while carefully watching her teacher’s reaction to the star-shaped ham.

   “This is really delicious, Gaki-san,” Takahashi-sensei commented.  “I haven’t had food like this in a while.  Thank you so much.”  She smiled and Risa could feel her heart picking up its pace.

   “I-it was nothing,” Risa mumbled.  Why is my heart beating so fast?  Whenever this teacher smiles, why do I suddenly feel happy?  I don’t get it!

   “Sensei!” Eri chirped, leaning even more into the older woman next to her.  “Can I have a taste of Risa-chan’s bento?”

   “Of course, Kamei-san,” Ai smiled.  “What would you like?”

   “This one!”

   Takahashi-sensei picked up the sweet-and-sour chicken and held it out for Eri to eat.  The turtle made eye contact with her friend and smirked a little before eating the chicken right out of the teacher’s chopsticks.  Risa could only watch as she fumed silently.

   She is so doing that on purpose! The bean thought. Kameha, focus on your own girlfriend and stop hitting on my Sensei!  … Wait a minute, did I just say “my” sensei?  What is wrong with me?

   “Ah~ oishii!” Eri exclaimed, chewing and swallowing. 

   “It does taste good, doesn’t it?” Ai chimed in.

   “It’s really delicious,” Eri grinned.  “I knew Risa-chan was a good cook, but I think the bento is even more delicious today because she made it for you, Sensei.”

   “Kameha, what are you saying?” Risa yelled, feeling her cheeks burning up.  What is wrong with that aho turtle?

   “Is that so?” Takahashi-sensei laughed.  “That makes me kind of happy.”

   It makes her happy? Risa thought, a tiny smile creeping onto her lips.  Does that mean she…?

   “Risa-chan, you put a lot of effort into this,” Eri continued on, smirking a little.  “Sensei must be really special to you—”

   Before Risa could completely explode on her friend, the turtle’s cell phone started to ring.  She flipped open the phone and realized it was a text message from her own special person.  Eri smiled to herself and stood up.

   “Sorry, I have to make a call,” she announced.  “I’ll be back in a couple minutes.”

   Thank you, Reina what’s-your-name, Risa thought.

   “Keep your eye on the clock,” Ai warned.  “Lunch period doesn’t last forever.”

   “I will,” Eri answered. 

   As the turtle started to leave, Risa shot her a glare that said, “You are so dead when I catch you later”.  Eri responded with a smile that said, “I think I did you a favor.  You don’t know your own feelings too well”.

   After Eri disappeared out of sight, the teacher and the class representatives ate in silence for a couple more minutes.  When Risa finally decided to speak up, both women were already chewing on the rabbit-apples.

   “Sensei, you just moved here, right?” she asked.  “I mean, seeing that you’re a new teacher and all.”

   “Yes, I used to live in Fukui,” Ai answered.  “I just moved into an apartment near downtown; I have to take a bus or the subway to get here.”

   “Are you all settled in and stuff?” Risa asked.  Wow, I’m asking really stupid questions.  But I just want to keep talking to her…

   “Not quite yet, actually,” the teacher admitted.  “I was planning on going into town after school today to buy some extra supplies I need.  Things like kitchen utensils.  I don’t need much, but I barely have any at the moment.”  She took a bite out of the apple in her hand and sighed.  “I’m just worried about shopping in such a big venue; I don’t really know my way around yet.”

   “I can show you!” Risa offered quickly.  “I mean, I know these areas a little better than you do.  I can help you carry stuff too… if you want.”  I’ll probably have tons of homework, but I still want to spend more time with her…

   “Would you do that?” Ai said happily.  “That would be absolutely fantastic!  Thank you so much, Gaki-san.”

   “It’s not a problem,” Risa mumbled under her breath, feeling her cheeks getting warm again. 

   Giggling a little at the bean’s shy reaction, Ai continued to finish up the rest of the bento.  Risa ate at a slower pace while she watched the beautiful woman sitting across from her.

   Could Eri be right? She thought.  Could it be that I really don’t know my own feelings?  Why am I going so far for this person…?

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Not exactly a strict TakaGaki for this chapter, but you guys have something to look forward to now, right? :twothumbs

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Dear Gaki... Eri IS right, you baka girl, just accept it  :smhid
Well, definitely we have something to look forward now  :grin: :grin:
Waitin' moar  :cow:

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Risa has become oblivious to her actions, get yourself together and go for it! :)
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“It’s okay, Gaki-san, I’ll leave,” Takahashi-sensei chuckled.  “You should eat with your friend.  I’ll go join the other teachers in the cafeteria—”

   “No!” Risa interrupted a little too quickly.  Eri raised an eyebrow while the teacher’s eyes grew wide.  “I mean… all those other teachers are going to bother you again, so it’s not a good idea to eat with them.”

   “Yeah, Sensei,” Eri chimed in with a teasing tone.  She stood up and skittered next to the teacher to link arms with her, much to Risa’s glaring.  “We can all eat together.  Except I don’t know why our dear Iinchou is being all uptight about this…”

   “I am not uptight!” Risa yelled.

   “Sensei, did you see that?” Eri said with mock terror on her face.  “Risa-chan just yelled at me, her best friend!  Kowai~”

   “You know, Kameha, I found a really good recipe for turtle soup last night—”
:mon lmao:

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Why is my heart beating so fast?  Whenever this teacher smiles, why do I suddenly feel happy?  I don’t get it!
Because you love her. Risa stop being so stupid! :scolding:

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Wow, I’m asking really stupid questions.  But I just want to keep talking to her…
:luvluv2:

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I’ll probably have tons of homework, but I still want to spend more time with her…
:luvluv1:

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Could Eri be right? She thought.  Could it be that I really don’t know my own feelings?  Why am I going so far for this person…?
Because you're in love with her :wriggly: NOW STOP BEING STUPID, AND GO MAKE OUT WITH YOUR SENSEI!!! :gmon pissed:


                                                                                                                                         

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But for some odd reason, Risa didn’t feel comfortable eating with Eri.  Actually, it was more like she didn't feel comfortable with the fact that Eri was eating with Ai.  The bean refused to believe it was jealousy… just discomfort.
tsk tsk tsk gaki-chan it it jealousy :on cigar:

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“You know, Kameha, I found a really good recipe for turtle soup last night—”

“Okay, stop right there!” Ai interrupted, holding up her hands.  “Let’s not get into any food references, shall we?”

“Yeah, Risa-chan!” Eri said, sticking out her tongue.

“You too, Kamei-san,” Ai scolded.  “Don’t tease your friend so much like that; you girls are high school students so be more mature!”

“Hai, Sensei~” Eri chirped.

“Hai…” Risa grumbled, crossing her arms across her chest.

“Now cheer up, Niigaki-san,” Takahashi-sensei smiled.  “Lunch period doesn’t last forever.  Let’s start eating.”
don't know why...but I really like this part :lol: :lol: :lol:

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“You never make me a bento like that!” Eri whined.
Because Aichan is special :wub:



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“We can share this together, Kamei-san,” Ai laughed.

“Sensei, yasashii ne~” Eri smiled, her eyes sparkling.  “You’re so nice!  I knew I liked you from first sight.”
hm....I sense some jealousy :P

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“Sensei!” Eri chirped, leaning even more into the older woman next to her.  “Can I have a taste of Risa-chan’s bento?”

“Of course, Kamei-san,” Ai smiled.  “What would you like?”

“This one!”

Takahashi-sensei picked up the sweet-and-sour chicken and held it out for Eri to eat.  The turtle made eye contact with her friend and smirked a little before eating the chicken right out of the teacher’s chopsticks.  Risa could only watch as she fumed silently.
More jealousy? :lol: :lol: :lol:

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“Sorry, I have to make a call,” she announced.  “I’ll be back in a couple minutes.”

Thank you, Reina what’s-your-name, Risa thought.
Reina for the day!!! XD



yeah i'm looking for the next chapter :lol: :lol: :lol:
don't know if its correct but the nxt chap shoud be junsayu right? :?
since it goes: TanaKame -> AiGaki -> JunSayu

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TakaGaki!!!
I love Eri in this chap!
She's so brilliant!

I think next chap that Gakisan will do the thing so far that I though  :twisted:

P.S. Turtle soup it sounds good :drool:

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@Michi.Pinku: lol who would've though Gaki is the bakajo? XD

@kurosawa87: she really needs to pick herself up :lol:

@kawaii beam: then continue looking forward to it :P

@xcutex: LOL we all want Gakisan to go make out with her sensei  XD XD

@fallenxangel: ooh~ you caught on! usually it's that pattern... sometimes i flip it around but usually... yeah XD

@Shiawase_Honoo: LOL i don't even know it turtle soup exists :lol:


SO i guess the last chapter was a comedy chapter more than anything... and the "Yell at GAkisan to realize her own feelings" chapter XD

And as fallenxangel has predicted, the next chapter is ShigeJun~ i'm workin on it now :twothumbs

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SHIGEJUN!!!!  :w00t: :w00t: :w00t: :w00t:
I was waiting this  :panic: Now I'm impatient  :bleed eyes:
Looking Forward ><

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I love the teasing from Kamei! :lol:

I hope Ai-chan is getting hints about Gaki's feelings because of the way she acts. :mon innocent:

I wonder what Reina's phone call for Kamei was about. :dunno:

Yay, I'm looking forward to TakaGaki since they'll be shopping together! :mon squee:

ShigeJun is going to be good! :D

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yeah!!! I was right for the first time :cow: :cow: :cow:

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I so love shy Risa. She's usually so outgoing and outspoken, so for her to be so demure, especially towards Teacher!Ai is just..... Cuddle-tastic XD It's so awesome, it deserves a new word. :lol: The Eri teasing parts were great, Risa doesn't even realize how obvious she's being. Somehow, though, I don't think Ai will be oblivious for long. I wonder how long it will take her to fall for the young bean in return? And how long it will take for both to experience some heartache.

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Sorry I'm LATE!!!!!!!!!

I just arrive from my camping weekend =D

And I came here and found this beauty upload XD

The best thing EVER...

After almost 3 days without internet... without hot water... without smartphone... X_X
But it was kinda refreshing =)

With clean sky and full moon, with fire and grass... and bears and wolfs and almost no food X_X
well... it was funny

I love this TakaGaki chapy =3
How blinded she could be?!?!?! XD
Well is part of the Charm =3

Mmmmmmm... I wonder... TakaGaki... in THE house >o<.... mmm...
ANYTHING can happend *u*
But it's to early... but that didn't stop me of thinking XD

Eri's a MasterPiece XD I <3 all the teasing D=

Give us ShigeJun... I can image a Knight in shining armor XD
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God!! She knows she's HOT!

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Oh, dear! Poor Gaki getting all worked over Ai and getting jealous because of Eri  XD It was nice to see Eri get one over her friend for a change.

Lucky that Reina, sort of came to Gaki's rescue by txt Eri, I think poor Gaki was about to say something silly.....

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