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the band-aid thing got me real good.  :grin: so shweet! i love imagining Jun being bossy and petulant about wanting such an odd item. this was a good chapter. plus, pretty pictures to look at.

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Wow!!!
Sorry for the last time I didn't leave a comment because I've a fight with my laptop (and I still because it don't show any emoticons).
Cel. for this chap!!!
I can't explain but I love it so much and wait for the next chap >w<
SarangAi Otsukaresama!

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Fantasy! :w00t: Fantasy!11? ;D If you want to write something else but Takagaki and Tanakame then how about Tanashige? :w00t:
Junsayu is getting cuter ch by ch! XD Go for it everyone!!!!! :lol:

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@kawaii beam: lol~ thanx kawaii-chan~~!!!  XD

@kurosawa87: yup, but you could say vice versa as well~  :lol:

@rndmnwierd: OMG you should definitely give the songs a listen.  they're REALLY good songs  XD lol Ima hit TakaGaki then come around to TanaKame XD

@kano-chan: oh you'll see this couple more~  XD

@mmsuki: lol oh yeah, there's next time...  :D

@XcuteX: aww~ glad to hear it!  :inlove:

@eruchan: jun got no girl cuz jun is a PLAYAH  :P

@oddball: oh you really got it down there. Jun wants to keep her cool character while Sayu is just being mean on the outside  :D

@fallenxangel: lol i like school life fics too, but i'm kinda scared since Chigatte mo is a school fic and i'm having a hard time with it... but if it's picked, i'll do my best!  XD

@gracula: lol the pictures make the story  :D

@Shiawase_Honoo: lol i hope you and your laptop made up...  :lol:

@Fushigidane: hey, whatever is the majority vote  :D


Thank you so much for all the comments!  I enjoyed reading every single bit of them  :twothumbs

As for now, it seems like School Life is in the lead with Fantasy close behind.  K-drama is falling behind a bit, which surprised me, since Kokoro no Uta was kinda like K-drama you know?  But Chigatte mo Iin da yo is like School life so...

I don't know what you guys like, you guys make your pick  XD XD

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Damn work >o< stoping from commet >_>

I don't know if Eri can give advices when she's a mess XD

And the SayuJun was awesome >o< no one can against bamboo *u*


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God!! She knows she's HOT!

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Very interesting chapter!~It seems that Junjun and Sayumi are developing feelings to each other, yet they don't know it. I'm excited to find out how it will end up being~
I lol'ed when I saw that you posted pictures of the other gang members (in a good way). For some reason, it's just really "you" to do that. :lol:

As for the poll, I gave my vote to Sci-Fi. I think, for a long time, people have imagined MM as either in the idol position or high schoolers.
Maybe introducing another style would totally change the way people look at them and even make the stories more unique
I read fanfictions of other groups (ie. kpop), and Sci-Fi works very well
It would be interesting reading those fanfics, because it holds a completely different tone
Plus, experimenting with different writing styles is something I try to do.
I have written (in other places) fanfictions of MM in a Sci-Fi style (TakaGaki)
Sometimes, it helps you as a "writer" too :)
However, don't be pressurized that it might not be good. Experimenting with different genres makes readers appreciate you more.

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@Haruka: oddly enough, the turtle seems to be better at handling others' problems than her own.  XD

@sapphire: lol because I like visual stuff, so pictures/videos are always god :twothumbs  Yeah, I know what you mean.  I wanna try writing other genres too! :)


Okay, just a REALLY short chapter before bed.  It's more like a filler chapter.  You know, build the suspense :twisted:

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Chapter 31

   The boy smiled as he continued to move his fingers rapidly over the keyboard.  The click-clacking of the cell phone wasn’t too loud, so he wasn’t worried about being caught texting, even if it was Takahashi-sensei.

   Yeah, she’s totally hot, the boy thought as he texted his friend in another classroom.  I don’t really care about history and all but I could seriously listen to this shit all day if I can stare at her bod

   Suddenly, something small whizzed by the boy’s head, grazing his cheek in the process.  The student looked up with a shocked expression, dropping his cell phone to the floor.  Everybody in the classroom was staring at him with surprised faces as well.  The history teacher at the front of the room was dusting her hands off.

   “Please refrain from texting during my class, Kukai-kun,” Takahashi-sensei said, smiling brightly.

   “S-s-sumimasen…” the boy stuttered, still not over the initial shock of having something thrown at his face.

   “Thank you,” the teacher said.  “Now please do me a favor and pick up that chalk behind you?  It’s a shame that it broke; it was my last piece.”

   “H-hai!”

   The student immediately stumbled out of his chair, tripping on air in the process, and grabbed the broken piece of chalk that was behind him.  He was sitting all the way in the back and the teacher had thrown this at him from meters away.  That was scary.  What if it had actually hit him instead of just grazing his face?

   “By the way, I wasn’t really going to hit you with the chalk,” Ai said, smiling.  “I just wanted to get your attention a little.”

   The boy laughed nervously, slightly frightened by how his teacher had just read his mind, or his face.  This teacher was gorgeous, but kind of creepy at times.  Just like how she seemed to know everything going on in the classroom and the way she failed half the class for the first term.

   The male student quickly walked over to the front of the classroom and presented the pieces of chalk to his teacher.  Ai took it and smiled.

   “Arigatou, Kukai-kun,” she said happily.

   “Uh.. no problem, Sensei…” the boy said slowly, his cheeks blushing.

   As the boy went back to take his seat, the rest of the students turned back to the board, sitting up straight just so they wouldn’t get in any unnecessary trouble.  Risa just shook her head while grinning.  Her peers were finally learning how scary Takahashi-sensei could really be, not to mention strict and merciless.  She turned to look at Eri, who had a very confused expression on.  Obviously, the turtle was still a little slow at understanding Ai’s character.

   After a couple more minutes of lecture, the bell finally rang to indicate the end of the period. 

   “Make sure to read tonight’s chapters,” Ai yelled as she gathered her things.  “Good work today, everyone.”

   “Kiritsu!” Risa called, as the entire class stood up.  “Rei!  Otsukaresama deshita!”**

   “Minna-san, otsukaresama!” Ai returned the thanks, before she walked out of the classroom.

   While the other students all sat back down, Risa started to run out of the room after her teacher.  Eri whispered some sort of chant to cheer her friend on as the bean turned around and gave a wink.

   Risa quickly walked down the hallway and caught up to her teacher.  Ai turned around at the sound of someone approaching and smiled.

   “Ah, Gaki-san!” the teacher said happily.  “Good work today.  I really liked the way you presented your answer today, very well done.”

   “Arigatou gozaimasu,” the bean said breathily.  “Sensei, I… uh… I have request.”

   “Yes?”

   “I’m sorry to ask you this at the last minute,” the student started, “but will you be able to meet me after school today by the courtyard tree where we always eat?  I have… uh… something to tell you.”

   “… Actually, I have a prior engagement,” Ai said quietly.  “I’m not sure if I can…”

   “You have to come!” Risa yelled with a sudden burst of energy.  “It’s very important, you have to listen!”

   The bean had no idea where she was getting this spontaneous courage from.  Normally, she would just said she understood and ask for another date, but she couldn’t help it.  Something told her today was the day to confess and she had to follow her gut feeling.  If she didn’t confess her feelings today, she knew she wouldn’t be able to do it in the future.  And then, she would regret never coming clean.

   “… I understand,” Ai finally said, smiling a little.  “I’ll stop by to meet you by the tree, right after school.  Will that be okay?”

   “That would be perfect,” Risa sighed.  “Thank you.”

   “You’re welcome,” Ai chuckled.  “Now you better return to class, the starting bell is going to ring soon.”

   “Okay!” Risa grinned, her happiness dying her cheeks soft pink.  She turned and quickly skittered back to the class room.  Ai watched her disappear through the door as her expression took a gradual change, from a smile to something else.  Was it anger?  Misery?  Worry?

   So there’s no way to avoid this, she thought, sighing.  Well, one heart is about to be broken… or two.

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**NOTE: Risa says, "Stand up, bow, good work today".  The class representative does this after every class and does a greeting in the beginning too.  It's called ojigi  :)

excited? me too! :lol:

i hope i'm getting some of you worked up, i'm gonna start writing the next part tomorrow :D

But don't worry, I haven't forgotten about TanaKame.  In the end, i'm expanding more on them than the other couples.  they ARE main, after all XD

Also, for the poll, it seems like School-life is winning, which kinda surprised me since Chigatte mo Iin da yo is school-life and I did a better job in Kokoro no Uta.  But I guess everybody has differing opinions, nee~?

If School-life does end up winning, i'll have to think of some special plot so it doesn't get too similar to Chigatte mo :P

 :byebye: :sleep:

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lol filler chapters are epic~ XD

i love how eri chantted risa and how risa just HAS to tell ai-chan how she feels X3 i really cant wait~! but the end......im worried~!D: ai-chan dont break mame's heart~~~D:

cant wait for more aiai~>3<
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Poor boy XD j/k well I guess Risa will be able to say what she needs to say hopefully....
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dun dun..  :mon cweepy: 

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  So there’s no way to avoid this, she thought, sighing.  Well, one heart is about to be broken… or two.
:panic: :panic: then just wait for her to graduate Ai-sensei..

and LOL she failed half of her class plus she got some serious ninja skillz!.. :lol: :bow: :bow:

and i present you this pic.. the strict and merciless Aichan.. :)

~it looks like i have a habit of posting pics on your thread.. :nervous: i can't help it.. hehehe.. ok, i promise this will be my last,, maybe.. XD
« Last Edit: January 16, 2011, 07:57:46 AM by mmsuki »

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Woah... I'm seriously scared here. It feels like nothing can stop that heartbreaking from happening. But.. I hope Gaki-san can still convince Takahashi-sensei in the end! Gaki-san fight!!! :rock:

Breaking them is a crime!

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Oh! Ai-chan in this chap is so cool!
I like it because I always think that Ai-chan isn't the sweet person :nervous
But...Hey! Is it too short!? :shocked
You always make me to be the impatient :panic:
Anyway, L.O.V.E. Lovely SarangAi :wub:

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Whoa! Ai-chan said that she wasn't really aiming to hit him, yet it grazed his cheek! :shocked: Something tells me that Ai-chan is really skillful in.... in what? :? Anyway, that's what he gets for being a perv! :tama-mad:

Yay! Gaki is finally going to confess! :mon money: But I'm getting mixed feelings about this... :panic:

What's with the "..one heart is about to be broken... or two." ??? :stunned:

Aahh! Who else?? Who is this number two!?? WUT?! :shock:

It's coming.... :badluck:

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Suddenly, something small whizzed by the boy’s head, grazing his cheek in the process.
Ex-Yankee? lol..

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  So there’s no way to avoid this, she thought, sighing.  Well, one heart is about to be broken… or two.
one is gakisan
two..hmm..either ai herself OR someone else..

seem like gakisan will definitely get hurt..gakisan should jus grab Ai sensei and kiss her hard.. :lol:

JunSayu is deinitely  :heart:
they already fallen for each other for sure..

Tanakame, i think their problem will solve sooner and later..

but AiGaki..dont seem like a nice path for them now..

*disappear again*

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So there’s no way to avoid this, she thought, sighing.  Well, one heart is about to be broken… or two.

DUN DUN DUUUUN!!!



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 :lol: Scary Sensei is awesome! And hot. :inlove:

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Well, one heart is about to be broken… or two.
So she knows that she has to reject her, but she doesn't want to. I wonder if maybe Risa will not be able to accurately tell her at first, then kiss her with 'Actions speak louder than words' going through her head.

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So there’s no way to avoid this, she thought, sighing.  Well, one heart is about to be broken… or two.

 :cry: I said Ai would do something like this because se thinks that she is not good for Gaki, stupid Ai :angry:

Hmm, don't think I wouls mess with her if she was my teacher mind!

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Suddenly, something small whizzed by the boy’s head, grazing his cheek in the process.  The student looked up with a shocked expression, dropping his cell phone to the floor.  Everybody in the classroom was staring at him with surprised faces as well.  The history teacher at the front of the room was dusting her hands off.
:shocked :shocked  :shocked Takahashi-sensei FTW :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs

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So there’s no way to avoid this, she thought, sighing.  Well, one heart is about to be broken… or two.
Her and Risa hearts? or someone else?
Arrgh!! really want to know :P :P :P

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@kawaii beam: lol I'm REALLY getting used to this "aiai" nickname... i think i really like it XD

@kurosaw87: lol the boy is O_O :P

@mmsuki: NO omg, those pics are GREAT! that's her face when she throws chalk but then she reverts to a sweet side when she smiles. XD and i like ur picture post, don't worry about it! :D

@Tchips: hehehe... ur scared?  hehehe...  :twisted:

@Shiawase_Honoo: LOL sorry bout the shortness... i'm just trying to get something out so we can keep moving :nervous  L.O.V.E pucchimoni~ :D

@kano-chan: oh yes, it's coming...  :twisted:

@alwaysYou: nooooo why are you disappearing? NOOOOO  :fainted:

@XcuteX: you summed it up pretty nicely there :lol:

@rndmnwierd: not a bad idea... well, we'll see :P

@oddball: lol but you still don't know what will happen with aichan and gakisan! wait and see... and then judge XD

@fallenxangel: lol the chalk-throwing was a last minute addition :D


thank you so much for the excessive amount of comments, even when the chapter was so tiny..  :twothumbs
you guys really help me so much~  :heart: :onioncheer:

as of now, i'm working on the next chapter while planning the upcoming story, since the only planned one i have left is the next one  XD
I'm trying to write right now so we'll see when this gets up...  :P

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So there’s no way to avoid this, she thought, sighing.  Well, one heart is about to be broken… or two.

could be sensei  :wub: :wub:

Risa gambatte


PD: Sensei is awesome  :rofl:


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