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Re: I Don't Want You Back [TakaGaki] Update - Chapter 7
« Reply #40 on: November 30, 2010, 12:18:14 PM »
Poor Reina, seems as though she is totally confused over the whole situation, plus her mother is coming to town  :panic:

Wow Gaki kinda got all mixed up in the head didn't she, she just kissed Ai and then she could not answer Ai's question of why she kissed her and then, when Ai asked why she did it, collapsing to the floor in tears, she just left?!?  :angry:

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Re: I Don't Want You Back [TakaGaki] Update - Chapter 7
« Reply #41 on: November 30, 2010, 01:50:14 PM »
Chapter 1


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"Ai-chan, I’m going to kill myself if you don't open this door right now!
:scared: who's that Risa?  :shocked

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"Fine, kill yourself! See If I care."
Not a good dare  :mon scare:

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And then, there was silence...Wait, she didn't kill herself...Did she?
lol

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"What do you want me to say? That everything is going to be okay?"
What did she do?   :O

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"Ai-chan, I made a huge mistake."
What kind?  :huhuh

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"Why are you here at the first place? Aren't you supposed to be with him… in your honeymoon?"
In a WHAT?!  :OMG:  :OMG:  :OMG:

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“I left him because I couldn't live with him for the rest of my life...Ai-chan, I'm still in love with you...I’ve made the biggest mistake of my life by leaving you..."
Holy cow!? You left Ai for a guy?!  :frustrated:  (sorry boys lol)

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“I hope you die and rot in hell!"
OMG  :grin:

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“Fuck you, you whore, I don't want you back...”
Ouches



Chapter 2


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She told me that she likes girls, but if that’s true, then why was she sleeping with a guy?
Totally not cool

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“Awesome! There is this new movie about two people falling in love, and then getting married.” Wow! The story is so not predictable…Ai thought raising a brow.
:lol:

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“It’s a romantic movie.” Really? I thought it was horror… “I love romantic movies!” I hate those mushy movies…
:lol:



Chapter 3


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I smiled, and as I was walking up to her, that smile was replaced with frown when I saw him, placing his arms around her waist and giving her a kiss on the back of her head.
:grr:

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“Hi!” “Oh hi, babe.” She gave him a quick peck on the lips then turned to me.
Can I torture and kill him after?

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But where can I possibly get one? … Where is Reina when you need her?
Eh?

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After probably twenty seconds of making out
Jezzzzzz

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hey looked very embarrassed after their make out session.
Oh, they can feel that emotion?

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Risa was looking at the ground with her face burning red, and that bastard was…smirking?
That guy is annoying

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I'm borrowing Reina’s shotgun!
Oh I see XD

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“My name is Eri, and I saved you.”
Eririn!  :cow:

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“Yeah, right! You asked them if they had condoms…”
:mon freeze:

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She could have at least let me pretend it was a dream. Dammit.
XD



Chapter 4


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felt myself blushing like crazy, but thank god for the turned off lights in my apartment.
They're in a dark room?!  :OMG: What were they doing?!  :fainted:

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Someone has slapped me…
That bastard slapped Risa  :angry:

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“Sayu, I’m fine. Really, it was just a dream!”
Oh it's Sayu  :D

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I’d rather chew on broken glass than shopping
lol

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I feel like he’s hiding something from me.
He's got another woman



Chapter 5


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That’s a promise, and when I make a promise, I don’t break it.
Scary  :O

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Aichan  :cry:
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The girl and I cried in each other’s arms. Her tears of sorrow, and my tears of sadness.
That's sad  :(

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Risa-san, you will be sorry.
:dizzy:



Chapter 6


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“Come on Ai-chan!!!” “No, leave me alone!!!” She’s been following me around ever since she decided to stay at my place for the night…Uninvited!
Risa?  :w00t:

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I love her, but sometimes she makes me want to get a restraining order against her.
:lol:

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Reina why did you have to be my best friend?
Yay! No RenAi lovey dovey!  :cow: lol

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She was the last person I wanted to see. Of all people, why her? She looked at us in shock, tears started to build up beneath her eyes…Wait, what?
Risa!

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“You know? I caught Kei in bed with Sayu last night…”
EEEEEEEEEHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH?????????????????!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!???????????????

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Without warning she captured my lips with hers.
Whoa!  :mon money:

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he pushed me to the nearest wall, and started kissing me again, but this time with more passion. She left me up and before I knew it, my legs were wrapped around her waist and my hands around her neck as I kissed her back. She started caressing my thigh and as her tongue made its way into my mouth, I let out a soft moan.
:drool:

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“WHAT THE HELL IS GOING ON?”
:roll: Killjoy  :roll:



Chapter 7


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Second; the person that I’ve been avoiding for the longest time is in town.
Who? Eri?

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hen, I did the most unexpected thing…I walked out on her, and left her there crying her soul out.
Awww, not so cool


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Re: I Don't Want You Back [TakaGaki] Update - Chapter 7
« Reply #42 on: November 30, 2010, 03:56:09 PM »
Nooooo~ :OMG: :frustrated: :on blackhole: :mon wtf:
risa you just made one of the biggest mistake ever on your life! :scolding: :temper:
poor aichan :mon emo:
but in risa pov
risa would be worse...since if ur boyfriend is cheating you with your friend sayu...is quite hard :mon wind:

p.s.:I had read the fics with my cell phone during the lesson....then at the end I screamed quite loud "why risa why!!!" xD :scared:
The consequences: all look at me weirdly and maybe thought "who risa is" LOL :mon lol:

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Re: I Don't Want You Back [TakaGaki] Update - Chapter 7
« Reply #43 on: December 02, 2010, 09:51:55 PM »
@SarangAi: Hopefully...but that's going to be hard since Ai-chan hates her.

@kurosawa87: I hope so too.

@kano-chan: yes, she didn't love her. Or did she? hmmm...  :twisted:

@oddball: Yeah! what the hell was she thinking?  :angry:

@kRisZ: Yay! A new reader! Thanks for reading.  :)

@fallenxangel24952: Your reply cracked me up.  :rofl:
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Chapter 8


Cold blood trickling from her wrist as she sat in the tub. Everything was quiet, all she could hear was the sound of blood drops…Her blood drops.  She made a promise that she would stop cutting and hurting herself, but she figured Screw it! I’m already dead. As the blood kept dripping, the water got from no color to light red and finally, it turned dark red. She was sitting in a pool filled with her own blood.

How long is it going to take? When am I going to die? She was in so much pain, but it was nothing compared to the pain her heart was causing. She fell in love with someone who’s never going to feel the same way. She fell in love with someone who’s so heartless, so blind and careless. She fell in love with someone who left her on the floor begging and crying her heart, her soul out. She fell in love…with a monster.

Love, what is love? Everyone says love is a beautiful thing, but from what she went through, it’s anything but beautiful. It’s harsh, cruel, painful, sad and suffering. It makes you feel pathetic, it makes you want to disappear from this world and never return, not because you’re ashamed to admit and tell everyone that you have fallen in ‘love’ with the same gender, but because staying in this messed up world that’s full of monsters makes you want to kill yourself, just like what she’s doing right now. She’s waiting for her sad, lonely ending.

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A girl was walking down the streets humming a song that stuck in her head. She has just finished her part time job. Five more months and I’ll be able to pay for the rest of my college costs. Her life wasn’t necessarily the best, it was rather hard, but she had to keep on living. She has always wanted to become a doctor, because she wants to help people and save their lives.
She was working in a bar as a waitress, she didn’t like it, but the owner/ manager pays her a decent amount of money. I feel sorry for him; he gives me extra money, because he thinks I like him. Oh well, as long as I tell him that he has a chance with me, I guess it's fine. And plus, he’s not that bad looking, he’s actually very handsome…too bad, I don’t like men.

She was talking to herself while walking, she quite enjoyed talking to herself, but she won’t tell that to anyone, because they’ll end up thinking she’s crazy. Even if they did, it’s not like she minds it, she doesn’t care about what people say or think about her. She never was one of those kids who pretend to be someone else just so others like them. She also never had friends, because she enjoys her own company, she is her own best friend.

As she continued walking, she heard faint sounds, they were far, but she still heard them. It sounded like someone was calling for help. As she got closer, she could clearly hear “Help! Someone help me! She’s not moving! Please someone!” without hesitation she ran as fast as she could, not caring for the people she pumped into “Move!” she pushed and shoved until she was standing in front of the scene.

Her eyes widened as she saw a girl with two wavy ponytails holding another girl who was soaked with what looked like…blood. “Thank god, help me! She’s…she’s dying…please…” the girl with ponytails begged as the waitress just started in shock. After realizing what was happening, she quickly flipped her phone open and called the hospital “We need an ambulance! A girl is dying! Please hurry!”

“Ai-chan, please hold on! Don’t give up on me! Please, you can’t do this to me!”
Ai-chan?! As if she wasn’t shocked enough. She looked again at the girl with the bloody clothes, and then it hit her…hard! ‘Ai’ is a pretty common name in Japan, but this girl wasn’t just another ‘Ai’. This was the ‘Ai’. The girl that the waitress fell in love with, Takahashi Ai. I must be dreaming. This is not happening…

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“Tanaka Reina? Kamei Eri?” the two girls stood up when they saw the doctor. “Doctor, how is she? She’s not going to…Die…” After saying that last word, her tears were falling once again. “Tanaka- san. Takahashi-san is going to be fine. Although she had lost a lot of blood, and I’m quite surprised that she’s still alive, but she is, and that’s what matters.” The wonky eyed girl stopped crying and looked at Eri then the doctor, and then suddenly she started crying again, but this time, she was crying tears of happiness. “Thank you so much!” She was so happy that her best friend is not gone. She's going to be able to see her again. “You’re welcome, but I think you should be thanking Kamei-san not me.” Reina looked confused. Why would I thank her for? “You see, Kamei-san is the one who donated her blood for Takahashi-san. She saved her.” Her confused stare turned from the doctor to the girl standing next to her. Reina was too busy crying, she didn’t even notice the gauze on the girl’s arm. “Thank you.” She gave the girl a tight hug and then smiled. They both turned their attention to the doctor. “So doctor, can we see her?” he looked at the papers in his hands and then answered “I’m afraid you can’t. She needs to rest, but you can visit her in the morning.” Reina and Eri looked disappointment, but they didn’t say anything. “I have to go now, duty calls.” With that the doctor disappeared.
“My name is Tanaka Reina, nice to meet you.” Reina extended her hand to the girl. “Kamei Eri, likewise.”
Kamei- san, thank you so much for saving Ai-chan’s life.

To be continued...

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Re: I Don't Want You Back [TakaGaki] Update - Chapter 8
« Reply #44 on: December 02, 2010, 10:36:26 PM »
What? Was Ai the one bleeding out at the start? I guess Reina found her, then. You know, I actually think the most surprising part in this was that Eri wanted to be a doctor. XD

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« Reply #45 on: December 02, 2010, 10:55:50 PM »
Wow, I guess Ai feels really shitty, but thanks to Reina Eri, she seems okay but yeah the thought of Eri becoming a doctor seems quite intriguing
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Re: I Don't Want You Back [TakaGaki] Update - Chapter 8
« Reply #46 on: December 03, 2010, 12:23:29 AM »
WHAT.  OMG that was INTENSE reaction from Aichan O___O

must've really felt pained.... gah, you're making me cry! :cry:

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« Reply #47 on: December 03, 2010, 02:04:33 AM »
Ai-chan! Don't be silly! :cry: Everything will be alright......right? :mon scare: Wow...Kame saved her! :w00t: Gaki hurt Ai-chan so much to the point that Ai-chan had to kill herself. :( Does that mean Ai-chan might return Eri's feelings? :roll: Dang...This is really somethin'! :panic:

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« Reply #48 on: December 03, 2010, 08:33:10 AM »
I wondered that Eri's blood can give to Ai-chan, am I wrong? :dunno:

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« Reply #49 on: December 03, 2010, 05:33:41 PM »
I'm still standing by my earlier convictions that Ai isn't quite right in the head, her attempting to commit sucide is just another peice of the puzzle that is an Ai-chan that is not totally menatally stable....

So it was Eri that gave bllod to Ai? It seems at least that Reina was very greatful to her, as for Ai-Chan? well perhaps we will wait and see.....

hmm as a side thought Tana/Kame anyone?.....

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« Reply #50 on: December 05, 2010, 03:50:19 AM »
I lol-ed at the part where Eri said she didn't like men XD I'm sorry but somehow...it was funny ^^;

Sayu slept with Gaki's bf? Wow! And I'll help you answer why you forced yourself on Ai like that Risa. The reason is simple, cuz Ai is one hawt girl XD

So It's gonna be a triangle between Eri, Reina and Ai with leader caught in the middle? Where is that gonna leave Risa? Oh and don't tell me Sayu would end up with Kei for good @@

One last point, Eri can't donate blood to Ai cuz she's AB+ while Ai is A+. If anything, everyone else should be able to donate to Eri. Okay, I'll shut up now cuz this is totally irrelevant to your awesome fic XD I guess I found another fic to chase :)

Thanks for writing this. I love the angst.

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Re: I Don't Want You Back [TakaGaki] Update - Chapter 8
« Reply #51 on: December 13, 2010, 09:14:35 AM »
Thanks for the awesome replies :heart:
I hope you enjoy this sucky chapter. I know it's not good, but please be nice :nervous
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Chapter 9


She woke up to find herself lying in a hospital bed. She was confused and somewhat scared. How did I get here? Why am I here? She looked right, left, up and then down. She noticed gauze wrapped with a medical tape around her left wrist. I had tried to kill myself again, but this time, I went a bit too far… she stared at the blood stained fabric on her wrist and started crying.

{Flash back}
“Ai-chan, please hold on! Don’t give up on me! Please, you can’t do this to me!”
{End of flash back}


She tried to stop the tears, but they kept falling. Stop it you crybaby! You did this to yourself. Why are you crying? She scolded herself, but that only made it worse.

Why am I doing this? What did Reina do to deserve this? I made her cry…Reina doesn’t cry! She didn’t cry when her mom kicked her out of the house, and she didn’t cry when she lost her boyfriend in a car accident…but she cried for me, for my life.

Ai cried until there were no more tears left. “Reina, you will cry no more. I promise.” She made up her mind; she’s not going to let anyone hurt her again, she’s not going to let anyone play with her feelings again, especially that person who was the cause of all her pain. Goodbye, Risa…

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Reina’s POV

“There is no way in hell I’m going to let her get away with this!” I said quietly while biting my bottom lip. She must’ve heard because she stopped and looked at me. “Tanaka-san, are you okay?” I gave her my awesome model-like smile and replied. “Yeah, I’m okay.” She smiled, and then her smile turned into a worried expression. “Oh my god! Tanaka-san, you’re bleeding!” I must’ve bitten too hard. I was trying to wipe the blood away, but suddenly, I felt two hands cupping my face, that’s when I completely froze. “How are you okay? Your lip is bleeding. Here let me…” she leaned closer and wiped the blood with her finger. “Why were you biting your lip?” she said calmly. Why is she calm? She’ way too freaking close! My cheeks were burning; my whole body was feeling hot. What is wrong with you? Why are you feeling like this? This is not the first time a girl gets way too close to you? You’re always like this with Ai-chan? But, this is…different. What are you thinking!? Reian, you baka! “Tanaka-san? Tanaka-san? Hello?”
The scolding in my mind was interrupted when I saw her waving her hand in front of my face. “Huh? Sorry.” God, I’m such an idiot! No wonder Ai-chan is my only friend. No one wants to be friends with someone like me.

Kamei-san offered to walk me home, and I happily accepted. As we were walking, we saw two figures standing under a street light. We couldn’t really see what they we’re doing because of the distance, but when Kamei-san and I got closer, we could clearly see what was happening…fucking PDA. I had a disgusted look on my face, while Kamei-san hung her head low. I think she was embarrassed, because I could see a tint of light pink on her cheeks. So cute~! Wait-what? I shook off the strange feeling that swept through me, and focused on the couple. I had an awesome idea. “Ano, Kamei-san?” she lifted up her head and looked at me. “What, Tanaka-san?”  I have to admit, she kind of looked cute doing that…oh my god! Stop it, you baka!
“How about we surprise them?” I told Kamei-san my idea, and she seemed to like it, because she agreed quickly without hesitation. This is going to be so much fun.
We walked from behind them and “BOO!” they both jumped at the same time, and then looked at us. “What the hell is wrong with you?” “Stop sucking face in public! It’s disgusting! Get a freaking room, will ya?” they both gasped in shock and then the girlfriend quickly grabbed her boyfriend’s arm and walked away. “Don’t forget, always use protection!” I shouted as they disappeared.

I felt so proud of myself, and as I was praising my awesomeness, I heard Kamei-san giggling. She looked at me and said: “That was so fun. Did you see the look on their faces? It was priceless.” I couldn’t help but grin from ear to ear. Kamei-san, I want to get to know you better.

She walked me home as promised, and you couldn’t imagine the awkwardness.
“Mom?” What the hell is she doing here? I thought she said that she didn’t want to see me again. But what is she doing here staring outside my apartment?

“Reina!” she hugged me, but I didn’t hug her back. Why would I? “God, you have no idea how much I’ve missed you.” She started stroking my hair. “Oh! Who’s your friend?” I guess she noticed Kamei-san standing behind me. “Hello, my name is Ka-““Her name doesn’t matter! What are you doing here? Why are you here?” I glared at my mother. “Aren’t you happy to see me?” “No, I’m not!” I shot back. I was so mad, I wanted to slap her across the face, but I couldn’t bring myself to do it. She’s still my mother whether I like it or not.

After staying silent for some time, she finally spoke. “Reina-chan, I’m sorry…” she started crying.
Great, yeah just great! She likes making me look like the bad guy! I’m the victim here, not her! I was sick of it, of her, of everything. I had to get away from her. Seeing her made me sick to my stomach. “Come with me.” I grabbed Kamei-san’s hand and started walking. “Reina!” I heard my mother calling, but I didn’t want to see her. I hate her. “Tanaka-san! Stop it!” Kamei-san tried to release herself from my grasp, but failed. “What are you doing? Stop it!”
She was getting on my nerves. Why wouldn’t she just shut the hell up! I stopped and pushed her. She flinched as her back and head made contact with the concrete wall. “You’re irritating me, and I’m getting fed up with you.” I said with a cold voice. As I was walking closer, she started whimpering. “Tanaka-san, you're scaring me…”

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Eri’s POV

“Tanaka-san, you’re scaring me…” tears started to build up under my eyes as I watched getting closer, and closer. I closed my eyes preparing myself for whatever was going to happen. I waited, and waited, but…nothing happened. I slowly opened my eyes and saw tears rolling down her cheeks.
Tanaka-san…

               
To be continued...

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Re: I Don't Want You Back [TakaGaki] Update - Chapter 9
« Reply #52 on: December 13, 2010, 10:09:47 AM »
Hmm Reina seems to care about Ai but somehow Eri comes in as the buffer between everybody... I wonder how Risa will save what ever is left....
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« Reply #53 on: December 13, 2010, 04:38:05 PM »
Hmm, seems as though Reina has allways had a litttle something for Ai but perhaps Eri is the new object of her affections, not like she is with Ai but actually proper love, I wonder how Reina will react when she finds out Eri loves Ai???

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« Reply #54 on: December 14, 2010, 10:30:06 AM »
Dang...Ai-chan.. She totally hates Risa now.. What possible way is there to get TakaGaki together? :panic:

Oh my gosh! LOLOL! "Stop sucking face in public!" and the, "...always use protection!" was so  :lol: TanaKamei really getting along there! :heart:

Reina's mother is messed up.. :smhid And poor Reina! She's crying again! :O What will Kame do now..? :roll:

haha...The chapter doesn't suck.

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« Reply #55 on: December 15, 2010, 06:18:15 AM »
@kurosawa87: I'm wondering the same thing...

@oddball: You'll have to wait and see... :twisted:

@kano-chan: Don't worry, Ai and Risa will end up together...Maybe. :twisted: Yeah, what will Kame do now? hmmmm 

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Re: I Don't Want You Back [TakaGaki] Update - Chapter 9
« Reply #56 on: December 15, 2010, 06:38:44 AM »
What in the world is going on here?!!  :shocked
I am totally sucked in to this story!
All the ties, all the passion, all the crying, all the pain....
I LOVE IT!!!   :bow:
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« Reply #57 on: December 15, 2010, 07:13:27 AM »
@Swtme03: Yay!!! :otomerika:
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Chapter 10

Her phone rang, but she wasn’t in the mood for talking to anyone, she was pissed, very pissed, confused, heartbroken and drunk.
Her phone vibrated, she looked at it, it was a text message from that guy, the guy she loved. The guy that slept with her best friend, correction, former best friend.

Baby, why aren’t you answering your phone?
Everyone is worried, Sayu and I are worried, you haven’t showed up to work today.
Is everything alright? Should I come to your place and check up
On you?
Please reply as soon as you get this message.
- Hitoshi Kei
(a made up name.)
   
“You and Sayu are worried about me? Hah! If that’s true then I’m the queen of Jordan.” Risa said after gulping down another glass of alcohol.
The bar tender was getting worried because she was drinking too much. “Excuse me Niigaki-san, I know this is none of my business, but I think that’s enough for tonight.” Risa glared at him “If you know that it’s none if your business, then shut the hell up!” After realizing what she had said, she immediately apologized. “Gomenasai.”  “I’m sorry, it’s just that….” then tears were running down her face, “Does he know how much it hurts?” “Does Ai-chan know that I didn’t mean to make her cry?” she didn’t bother to wipe the tears “Does she know that I might have feelings for her?”

THUD

“Call an ambulance!”

[In the hospital]

“Doctor, Are you sure that she will be fine?” Sayu asked the doctor while crying her eyes out. Isn’t it ironic? How she’s worried. She’s been going out with Kei for the past month without caring about how her ‘best friend’ will feel if she finds out, and now, here she is in the hospital, in the middle of the night, messy hair, no makeup, no stupid ‘kawaii’ smile and swollen eyes from crying.
“Niigaki-san consumed too much alcohol, and that’s not good, but she’ll be fine.” He finally said before a nurse called him. “Don’t worry, she’s strong.”

Sayu was walking to Risa’s room, she reached the door, but before she could open it, she stopped, “It’s all my fault. How can I see her after all the things I’ve done? I’m the one who caused this…” Everything went silent, except for the ticking clock in the background. “Gaki-san…I-”

“Excuse me!” a nurse called, “Are you Michishige Sayumi?” Sayu turned around and saw a nurse standing inches away from her. “Y-y-yes?” She hesitantly replied.

“I’m sorry, but Niigaki Risa-san told us that she doesn’t want to see you.”

“Huh?!” Sayu looked at the nurse with a surprised look on her face. “But, I’m her best friend!”

“I’m sorry…but you have to leave.”

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“What do you want Sayu-chan? I’m busy here.” Kei said obviously irritated by the bunny’s sudden visit to his work place. “We need to talk.” She said firmly. “And I told you I’m busy, or are you just deaf?” Risa, what is so special about this jerk? “Risa has been taken to the hospital.” Miss usa-chan peace waited for a response, but she didn’t get the one she wanted. “And…?” I can’t believe this asshole! “What? Don’t look at me like that. You’re scaring me.” Kei said with a mocking voice, and then he smirked. “I’m not sure if you’re aware of this, but I don’t care about either you or that slut Risa.” How dare he? “Usa-chan, are you going to cry? Your eyes are getting red.” Sayu didn’t say anything; she just stood face to face with him trying so hard not do anything stupid that will get her into trouble.
She gathered up all her courage and spoke. “So, that night…didn’t mean anything to you?” her voice cracked at the last word. “No.”

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Eri’s POV

That night she told me everything. She told me why Takahashi-san tried to kill herself several times, and who was responsible for her suicide attempts…Niigaki Risa.

I made a promise that I will make whoever was hurting Takahashi-san sorry, but after what Tanaka-san had told me, I can’t. Takahashi-san is in love with Niigaki-san, I’m afraid if I did anything to her, Takahashi-san will jump off a building, and I don’t want that to happen. She’s not in a stable state right now.

So after thinking for a long time, I’ve decided that I will let go of Takahashi-san. I know it’s not going to be easy, but I have to. I love her, but she doesn’t love me, and she never will. At least no as much as she loves her. It’s always going to be ‘Risa’. There is no place for ‘Eri’ in her heart. How can she love me, when she doesn’t even know me?

The hardest thing to do is to watch the one you love, love someone else.
Goodbye Takahashi-san. In my dreams you're mine forever...

To be continued...

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Re: I Don't Want You Back [TakaGaki] Update - Chapter 10
« Reply #58 on: December 15, 2010, 07:42:38 AM »
Eri seems torn either between Ai and her heart, I wonder if Eri will approach Risa...
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Re: I Don't Want You Back [TakaGaki] Update - Chapter 10
« Reply #59 on: December 15, 2010, 09:14:23 AM »
Risa! What do you see in that JERK?! :mon fierce: So Sayu actually cares and isn't completely cold-hearted. Now she knows the real Kei. Gah! He slept with Sayu just for his own desires! :angry:

I didn't expect Kame to give up on Ai-chan so easily, but this gives Reina a much better chance to be with her. :wub:

It's more like, let's see how Sayu will approach Risa after this. :roll:

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