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Lies - chapter 16 (MendolxMajisuka) 15/11/2011
« on: January 30, 2011, 08:26:12 AM »
Yeah, I'm totally inspired to write but I'm totally not a good writer....
This is my first fanfic ever.................
Hopefully, you'll enjoy this.......
So this is going to be a MendolxMajisuka fanfic.........
BTW the title has no relation to the no3b single Lie

As you can all tell, I'm really unsure about this fanfic...I feel really iffy about posting this...................


Chapter 1

Six months ago, I died. No no, I’m not a ghost. I’ve been given a second chance to change and make amends. It all started back when I got beat up and pushed down the stairs. I thought I was a goner. Well, not just me. My best friend and my family all thought I died in the emergency room. Only my family knew the truth that I’m still alive. Scratch that, only my grandma knows. She’s been taking care of me since my parents divorced and my younger sister was left with my dad. This time, it’s my turn to take care of her.

It took a whole month to recover. During that month, I got my grandma hold a fake funeral. I hid and saw it all, my family yearning my death. Mostly importantly, my best friend’s face full of sorrow and eventually became emotionless. My dear friend whose smile, and laughter seemed lost and never to be found. I felt bad. I really did. But this is for the best. Hopefully we will one day meet again…maybe…maybe not…who knows.

After I recovered, I went in search for a job that paid the most in the shortest time. I auditioned 39 times in 3 months to become an idol, but failed every single one of them. There, I met my long over-dued  comrades Asahi and Hinata. We all failed, but lucky for us, we got scouted by Kamonohatsu Entertainment Agency. The ones who got scouted were me and Asahi, while Hinata joined shortly after our debut. Our agency manager Saeko and secretary Marilyn were like parents to us. When I mean parents, I mean bad parents that will leave us to die and kick us while we’re down. I GUESS they’re not that bad but seriously, shachou is kind of getting onto my nerves. Shachou and Marilyn are L’s that grosses me out so much. Hopefully, after I’m done saving money up, I can get rid of them. But I don’t want to leave Asahi and Hinata. By the way, I still haven’t told anyone except shachou why I’m so in need of money, not even Asahi or Hinata. My grandma needs to do a heart surgery and I need the money for the surgery. So I’m borrowing money from shachou to pay for the operation which means I’m indebted to her…hopefully I don’t have to do anything I don’t want to for that favor.

Did I tell you that when we debuted, we debuted as a male band? Our group name is Persona, I’m Kai, Asahi is Riku and Hinata is Kuu. We just started two months ago with little to no success but we are doing all we can to become the next big hit. Since we weren’t that popular, we had lots of free time on our hands, so shachou is letting us continue school. Asahi and Hinata are going to the same school since Hinata has no friends in her old school, she transferred to Asahi’s school…what was the name…Majisuka Gakuen…I think that’s the name…I’m not exactly sure since I myself is doing home schooling. I can go at my own pace and finish faster. If I’m lucky, by the time I graduate I would have repaid shachou and be free so I can follow my dream. My dream is to become a nurse and be able to take care of others, especially my grandma. In my spare time I start studying to become a nurse. I bought a book, I actually bought two, and I wonder if she’s still going to do it…

-Present time-

“Nami, are you sure you don’t want to join us?” Asahi asked as she put on her black sailor uniform with a red neckerchief.

“Yeah, stop being a loner and join us.” Hinata agreed as she finishes packing her bag.

“Nah you guys go on and have fun. Besides, I don’t want to commute an hour a day to get there and back when I can use that hour more efficiently.” Nami declined, as she started to go downstairs to eat breakfast.

“Ah! We’re going to be late. Asahi hurry up! We don’t have time for breakfast. I don’t want to be late.” Hinata runs downstairs to put on her shoes.

“Wait up.” Asahi said as she quickly followed Hinata. “Bye Nami”

“Don’t miss us too much” Hinata yelled as she left running to the station.

“Of course I won’t, don’t worry about it.” Nami was once again left alone in a house by herself much like her childhood as her grandma worked so that she could fend for her grandchild.

-On the train-

“Hmm…maybe it’s a good thing that she’s not going to school with us…” Hinata stated as she turned to Asahi, who was taking out her red jacket with silver lines on the side of the arms. “Do you think if Nami were to find out what we do in school she’ll leave us?”

“Nah, we’re her friends.” Asahi said reassuringly to a doubtful Hinata.

“I mean, we even lied to her about our names...and who we really are…”

“…Even though Nami looks cool and sometimes heartless, she really does care about us.” Asahi noticed that Hinata’s doubtful expression soften.

“You’re right, what would Nami do without me.”

‘Nami would be able to get a piece of mind that’s for one and full meals everyday.’ Asahi thought as she suddenly remembered, “We left our lunches at home!”

“If we go back and get it, then I won’t be able to record who are late to school today.” Hinata explained as she took out her cell phone and started to text Nami.

Nami, we left our lunches at home can you bring it to school to us? I know you miss us already so here’s a chance for you to see us!

“Nami is totally going to ignore you. You do know that right?” Asahi got off of the train with Hinata beside her.

“Hey, you said that Nami wasn’t heartless.” Hinata said as her cell phone buzzed

Idiot. Fine, I’ll bring it to the entrance of the school by lunch okay?

“Yes!” Exclaimed Hinata.

‘Nami must be in a good mood today.’ Asahi started to drift away from Hinata.

“I’ll see you later than okay?” Asahi whispered to Hinata, as Hinata gave a small nod.

-Front gates-

“Hey, you guys hurry up, you have 30 seconds until you’re late for school.” As she put on her arm band labeling herself as student council president.

“Who are you?” Wota asked as she scanned the girl in front of her from head to toe.

“I’m Hina…I meant Minegishi Minami the new and current student body president” Minegishi said as she was looking at her watch.

‘Opps, I almost told them my fake name, Hinata. Looks like they don’t care’ Minegishi thought as she felt relieved.

“Never seen you around” Akicha walked right in front of Minegishi and stopped to look at her watch. “We’re late now, so what are you going to do about it?”

Unagi, Bungy, and Mukuchi surrounded Minegishi on all sides.

“Whatever, let’s go team Hormone. I’m hungry, let’s eat.” Wota walked past and just brushed off Minegishi. With Akicha, Unagi, Bungy and Mukuchi following her.

“I’m telling on you.” Minegishi yelled across the field.

-Rappapa Headquarters-

‘Is it just me or is there a remarkable resemblance between Maeda’s best friend Minami and Nami. But that’s not possible right? Nami’s not a ghost. Maybe they’re long lost twins?!?!?! Ah, whatever, that’s not that important. It sucks that we have to repeat another year…but it is funny how Yuko got the diploma but still has to repeat like the rest of us since we skipped too much last year. Maybe it’s because the principal wanted to fulfill Yuko’s last wishes...’ Torigoya thought as she felt that something is amiss.

“Yuko-sempai is still not back?” Torigoya who was slightly pouting, with her jacket half on and half off, asked as she played with her hair.

“No, not yet. Though she is miraculously getting better. ” Sado confirmed.

‘I wonder when Yuko’s coming back. I miss her.’ Torigoya started drifting off into her own world.

“I’m so bored” Shibuya cried as she saw two figures walking on the field towards the school and tightens her grip.

“Shibuya, after you lost your fight with Maeda, you still wanna try?” Black asked as she smirked.

“Shut up.” Shibuya gave Black a deathly glare.

“Shibuya, Yuko-san ordered us to protect Maeda, not to kill her.” Sado took out her toy and started to balance it.

“Whatever…” Shibuya leaves the room fuming that she can’t get her revenge so she vented her anger by punching and kicking all the other students in the hallway.

-Classroom-

Noisy yankee high-school girls playing mahjong and eating while ignoring what the teacher said and kept doing their own things. While one student, Maeda Atsuko, whom was also not paying attention to the teacher and was reading her own textbook.

 “So we’ll continue from last day’s math class, does anyone remember what we did last day?” The teacher looked at Wota and smiled.

“I don’t know and I don’t care.” Wota said as she caught the teacher’s eyes looking at her.

“But but you need to know this if you want to graduate” exclaimed the teacher

Wota just glared at him.

“Okay…self study period” the teacher left crying on the inside and questioning himself, ‘why am I teaching at a school that has no respect for teachers?’

-On the road to Majisuka Gakuen-

Nami was listening to her ipod when she thought to herself.

‘Maybe I should try out a different school. But if I do that, then Asahi and Hinata will know that I lied to them about my real self since I’ll have to apply with my real identity. Sigh…how can I tell them now that my real name is Takahashi Minami. They’ll think that I never really treated them as comrades.’ Nami scratched that thought as she approached the school with a lunchbox in each hand.

-School Gates-

“They’re so slow”

“Sorry for making you wait.” Asahi apologized as she grabbed her lunch from Nami.

“Where’s Hinata?” Nami looks around the field to see if Hinata was running over since she should be starving by now.

“Um…I don’t know.” Asahi lied as she looked away into a distance to see if anyone was watching them.

“Well, I still have work to do so can you give Hinata her lunch?”

“NO…I mean, you know Hinata always runs off somewhere and the school is pretty big, it’ll take me my whole lunch to find her.” Asahi declined as she started running back. “Thanks Nami.”

“ASAHI.” Nami yelled across the field earning people in class to look down to where all the commotion was at.

-Classroom-

‘How come that person down there has a familiar aura around her?’ Maeda looks out the window to see a person…a girl…by the school gates with Torigoya from her running away and back into the school.

‘Torigoya sure can run fast when she needs to.’ Maeda thought to herself.

“ASAHI.” The mysterious girl shouted.

“Her voice…it sounds like…Minami” Maeda whispers to herself as she looked at the mysterious girl, intrigued by the fact that her memories of Minami were awaken. She then used her right hand to grab her left wrist to find her two hair-ties. One was blue with an M on it while the other one was an orange one with an A on it.

Maeda who was still staring at the mysterious girl saw yet another student from her school running out towards the gate and stopped right in front of the mysterious girl.

-Front gate-

“Sorry for making you wait, the teacher wanted me to help him.” Hinata said as she was panting and catching her breath.

“You helping other people? I’m impressed. Most of the time, if you don’t help out that’s already a huge favor done for everyone. So who’s the stupid teacher?” Nami looked at Hinata amused that she was actually a role model student.

“Hey, that’s not nice. I’m different in front of other people.” Hinata pouted as she grabbed her lunch from Nami.

Nami gave Hinata a weird look and began to comment, “What’s up with you and Asahi? Are you guys in a hurry or something?”

“Um…we both have club meetings at lunch time…wellgottagobyenami.” Hinata said as she ran back into the school.

“Ass. Didn’t even say a word of thanks.” Nami left unappreciated.

-Classroom-

“…Minami…” Maeda whispered to herself.

TBC?

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Re: Lies
« Reply #1 on: January 30, 2011, 08:48:12 AM »
I like it~! please do update :D

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Re: Lies
« Reply #2 on: January 30, 2011, 09:11:44 AM »
i like this story alot!! glad you shared it with us! :twothumbs
the way you put the 2 shows together was very well done  :)
lol i hope that you are a slight Takaachan fan cause i wouldn't mind seeing them in this story  :roll: but it's fine if you're not
Update soon!!   :D

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Re: Lies
« Reply #3 on: January 30, 2011, 09:16:36 AM »
the way you put the 2 shows together was very well done  :)
lol i hope that you are a slight Takaachan fan cause i wouldn't mind seeing them in this story  :roll: but it's fine if you're not
Update soon!!   :D
Agreed on all three statements above! Especially the Update soon!!  bit ^_^!!

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« Reply #4 on: January 30, 2011, 11:21:13 AM »

the way you put the 2 shows together was very well done  :)


hai, hai...totally agree!  :twothumbs



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Re: Lies
« Reply #5 on: January 30, 2011, 04:24:31 PM »
I totally thought "Mendol&Majisuka, really?!"
And I have to agree, this is a really nice idea. I want an update as soon as possible!  :cow:

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« Reply #6 on: January 30, 2011, 05:10:57 PM »
Wow!! yourstruly san, thanks soo much for the story  :mon XD: I was like  :mon fyeah: when reading it :]
Combining 2 shows.... Wow, so amazing  :mon determined:
I'm really soo curious for the next chapter :] Hope you'll update this soon :]  :mon inluv:

And really, this is your first?!  :mon closeup:  Wow  :shocked you're cool :] (I wish I too, could write such a good fic even if it's my first...  :mon exhaust: hehehe...  :grin:)

I really want you to pls. continue this fic of yours, pls.. :mon pray2: :] I'm soo excited about it :]  :mon cute:
Thanks again for this fic... yourstruly san pls.. update as soon as you can  :on GJ: :]
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Re: Lies
« Reply #7 on: January 31, 2011, 02:58:29 AM »
Thank you so much guys, I really appreciate all the comments and support

lol i hope that you are a slight Takaachan fan cause i wouldn't mind seeing them in this story  :roll: but it's fine if you're not
Don't worry, I am a Takaacchan fan. Not very big on the Kai/NamiXRay  :P


Before you jump the gun and start reading Chapter 2, there are things that should be pointed out that I forgot to do when I posted Chapter 1, but as people say, "Better late than never." so,
1. I took out the whole yakuza is trying to find Nami and Asahi since Asahi cant go to school if there were yakuza's looking for her
2. For the next couple chapters, I'm basically restating the storyline of Mendol so everyone is up to pace and it gets kinda repetitive, I know but it's needed to introduce Ray and Katsuyuki
3. I'm skipping some of the other scenes in Mendol so I can speed up the retelling process
4. Some of the Mendol scenes are not in the same timeline as the Mendol drama
5. I'm doing a crappy job of retelling (or so I think) cause it's boring
6. For each of the retelling chapters, I'm trying to include some stuff about Majisuka side too so it wont get that dull
7. Please enjoy  :theking



Chapter 2

-Home-

“We’re home.” Asahi and Hinata opened the door and took off their shoes and slipped into slippers.

“Welcome back.” Nami shouted from upstairs. “Come up and get ready, shachou is picking us up soon. We have to finish recording our first CD.”

“But I’m hungry.” Hinata said weakly. She felt drained of all energy since she didn’t have breakfast, only a small lunch, and all that transportation was taking a toll on her mental well-being.

“Eat there, shachou is going to get mad at you if you keep lazing around and not getting dressed.” Asahi left Hinata and began going up stairs to start changing.

“Fineeeeeeee…” Hinata slowly gets up and walks upstairs when the door opens.

“Are you guys ready yet?” Shachou asked with a murderous intent. As Hinata ran like the wind to their room and started dressing in a break-neck speed.

“We’ll be done really soon.” Asahi reassured shachou. As Nami walked down the stairs in her causal disguise first earning a nod from shachou, then came Asahi and finally Hinata.

“Let’s go.”

-Recording studio-

 “These 3 kids are Persona. Please take care of them.” Shachou said as she introduced us the recording staff.

“Osu. Riku desu.”

“Osu. Kai desu.”

“Osu. Kuu desu.”

“Yoroshikuonegaishimasu.” As all three of us said at once.

“Yoroshiku. Let’s not waste time, time is money. Recording studios are expensive so don’t waste your time and leave.” The tech bluntly stated.

“What? Son-of-a-bi”

“Okay. We’ll start right now.” Riku said as he cut Kai off from starting a fight on their first recording day.

-Inside the recording room-

“Okay we’re going to start from the beginning of 3 seconds. Riku starts first. Then Kai. And don’t mess up.” The tech explained. “Give me a moment to get the machine running.”

“Riku, why’d you stop me?” Kai asked with an annoyed face.

“We’re new, we need all the support we can get and I don’t want a fight to break out on our first day.” Riku explained.

“I guess you’re right…Kuu, what’s wrong you haven’t been talking.” Kai said as he poked Kuu lightly on the arm.

“I fell asleep.” Kuu said as he yawned.

“We’re starting now.” The tech spoke up.

…..3 hours later…..

“That’s it for today. And I guess you did a good job for a newbie.” The tech said as he started to pack up.

“We have a special guest here to see you today.” Shachou said.

A man in purple suit and a woman decked out in pure white clothes with her sunglasses on walked in.

“Hey. I’m the president of Monkey Pro. Just call me Sarukawa shachou. And beside me, we have the number 1 selling diva Ray.” As sarukawa shachou starts dusting off Ray like she was a trophy.

“Stop, you’re getting dust all over my clothes.” As Ray starts to fan herself as she told her shachou to stop.

“Woah! I’m a huge fan, if it’s ok, can I please shake your hand Ray-san?” Asked Riku as he wiped the sweat of his hands and onto the side of his pants.

Janitor comes in.

“I’m a huge fan. I’m so happy that I can meet you today.” As the janitor takes and shakes Ray’s hand.

“Who are you?” Ray asked with a disgusted look on her face as if she just touched crap.

“I’m your biggest fan. I hope to one day share a stage and sing a duet with you.” The janitor excitedly said.

“If I’m top grade caviar then you would be shark feces. How can caviar and feces stand on the same stage? And I don’t do duets.” Ray said with a bitchy face.

“Hey, apologize to him right now. Even if you don’t like him, he’s still your fan. What you said was uncalled for.”

“Stop Kai, and apologize to Ray.” Riku got a caught of Kai and Kai flung him to the floor and hit the table which caused a domino effect that tipped the glass of water which then spilled on him. Kuu then helped Riku up and tried to dry Riku’s hair with his sleeve.

Kai grabbed Ray’s wrists and said, “Even if you have a pretty face, with that horrible personality like yours, you’ll be alone for the rest of your life.”

Ray storms out as Sarukawa shachou calls Ray back.

“Our princess has a temper.” Sarukawa shachou said as he left.

-Kamonohashi Office-

“Nami, why did you piss Ray off?” Asahi asked.

Shachou comes in with Marilyn with a whip in her hands.

“Marilyn.” Shachou said as she snapped her fingers. Marilyn then held Nami down onto the coach with her ass facing shachou.

“Apologize to Ray and never ever do that again.” Shachou said as she violently whips Nami.

“ITE.”

“Don’t you ever forget this moment. If you ever do it again, it will be 10 times worse than this.”

-Upstairs in their room-

Nami was laying on her front as she relives the pressure from her ass.

“Serves you right for saying that to Ray.” Asahi said.

“She deserved that scolding.”

“Well, whatever. Just don’t do it again.” Asahi said as she watches Hinata sneak up and poke Nami’s ass.

“ITE. Don’t touch it you idiot.” Nami exclaimed while rubbing her sore ass.

“You’re no fun.” Hinata pouted.

“You try getting your ass whipped and then tell me that’s fun.”

“Alright you two lets not break into a fight now, Hinata go to bed, we have school tomorrow.” Asahi starts making her way to her bed.

“Alright then.”

“Yeah alright, leave me in pain while you guys sleep.” Nami sarcastically said, as she noticed Hinata and Asahi are already in deep sleep.

‘They must be really tired from school. Maybe I should cut them some slack sometimes.’ Nami thought. But stopped herself as she looked at Hinata. ‘or maybe not’

-Next day-

“Hinata, stop drawing on Nami’s face and get ready for school.” Asahi chuckled as she saw Hinata drawing eyes on Nami’s eyelids and lines connecting her eyebrows to make an “awake” Nami face but uni-browed.

“Aw alright but let me take a picture first.” Hinata pouted when Asahi stopped her from drawing poop on Nami’s face. She then whips out her cell phone and takes a picture of a sound asleep Nami.

“Remind me never to let my guard down around you.” Asahi said as she started downstairs.

“Nah, that wouldn’t be much fun now would it.” Hinata pointed out as she followed Asahi downstairs.

Hinata and Asahi left, not without slamming the front door which woke up Nami.

Nami then slowly gets up and goes to the washroom. As she saw her own face…

“HINATA!!!!!!” screamed Nami.

“Nami’s awake now.” Hinata said as she pointed out the obvious. Hinata kept walking, feeling calm since she was almost a block away from the office. And knowing Nami, she wouldn’t chase me that far if she just woke up since she didn’t shave yet.

‘Looks like there’s going to be a funeral tomorrow.’ Asahi thought as they made their way to the trains.

-Trains-

As Hinata and Asahi got on the trains, they segregated apart with one by each side of the door.

Hinata takes out her phone and mails to Asahi,

Here’s this mornings pic of Nami. *insert pic of Nami*I think its an improvement.

Asahi chuckled as she read the mail and replies,

Well don’t let Nami know that you took a pic. I don’t know how to save you from her.

Hinata then replied,

Tell me that earlier, I just sent “This is an improvement” and the pic to Nami.

Asahi facepalms as she thought ‘typical Hinata’.

-School- -Rappapa Headquarters-

Maeda slowly walks into the club room with Shibuya glaring at her.

“What brings you here Maeda? You never come up here to the club room.” Sado asked as she looked at Shibuya to get her to calm down.

“…Is Torigoya-san here?” Maeda asked as Sado had a blank expression on her face wondering why Maeda would want Torigoya for.

“She’s currently walking up the north stairs of the 2nd school building by classroom 3-1.” Shibuya said as she rolled her eyes and continued. ”She’s not in the club room as you can well see with your glasses on…which in fact I don’t know why you need them since you take them off when you fight. Since she’s not here then why the hell would we know where Torigoya is?” Shibuya said earning a glare from Sado.

“Shibuya enough. Yuko-san said that-“ as Sado spoke, Shibuya interrupted.

“Said that we’re suppose to protect her, but she never said we that we can’t have a little fun talking to each other.” Shibuya retaliated

“Ummm…it’s ok if you guys don’t know. I’ll just look for her myself.” Maeda then excused herself as she left the room.

“Shibuya, be nice. She’s Rappapa’s future president so stop being so rude.”

“Whatever.” Shibuya left displeased with that fact.

‘ARGH, pisses me off so much that I even Sado is scared of her.’

TBC........

PS: Sorry for the long points that is kinda needed to be pointed out before reading.
PS2: I might not be able to update until end of the week since midterms are coming up....again...........................................

That is all.
Thank you for reading my rambling, I appreciate it.

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« Reply #8 on: January 31, 2011, 03:41:50 AM »
Thanks for updating!

yesss you're a Takaachan fan! i'm not much of a Nami/Ray fan either  XD

lol how is Miichan gonna survive the wrath of Takamina after what she did? :lol:

I don't mind all the retelling chapters since i know waiting's gonna be worth it  :D

Update sooon!

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« Reply #9 on: January 31, 2011, 04:45:26 AM »
Omg a Takacchan fan! Yay! :D i'm not much of a Nami/kai x Ray fan but they are kind of cute... sometimes LOL good job! :D

seems like this is going to be interesting... please do update soon! XD

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« Reply #10 on: January 31, 2011, 06:21:44 AM »
New story.....
MendolXmajisuka!!!!!
Great!
Thanks!!!
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« Reply #11 on: January 31, 2011, 09:44:49 AM »
 :k-great: Want more~!!  :luvuluvu:

 :tntrm: Please update~!!  :kneelbow:

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« Reply #12 on: February 03, 2011, 09:08:21 AM »

yesss you're a Takaachan fan! i'm not much of a Nami/Ray fan either  XD
It's not like I dislike/hate NamixRay, it's just that I prefer Takaachan a lot more

Thank you for all the comments, I really appreciate it...It motivates me to finish all my other stuff faster so I can write more 

Sorry it took so long, I was proof reading it........

Enjoy?  :theking


Chapter 3

-Rooftop-

‘The sky’s so blue…wonder what Yuko is doing’ As Torigoya starts dosing off, Maeda comes upstairs.

“Torigoya-san, I’m sorry to bother you but I have a question to ask you. Is right now a good time?” Maeda asked ever so politely to the absent-minded Torigoya.

“Hmm, sure. Right now is fine, not like I have anything better to do.” Torigoya replied as she stared out to the school gates.

“Um, yesterday, by chance I saw you by the school gates with a person. I was wondering-“ as Maeda was about to finish her sentence, Torigoya erupted with energy which Maeda had never seen before. Usually, Torigoya was absent-minded and didn’t care about her surroundings.

“Yuko-san! Sorry Maeda, I’ll talk to you later.” Torigoya left the rooftop and headed towards the school gates where Yuko started walking towards the school.

-Gates-

“Hmm, Majisuka sure became quiet around here. Where’s all the Yankees fighting?” Yuko spoke aloud. As she saw a figure quickly approaching her.

‘Sado? No, it’s Torigoya.’ Thought Yuko. As she stopped, their eye’s met for the first time in a long time.

“O-ha.” Yuko gave her usual energetic greeting as Torigoya approached her.

“Yuko-san, how are you feeling?” Torigoya asked as she slightly blushed at the long eye-contact with her club president.

“I feel like I can take down 100 Yabakune’s right now.” Yuko replied with enthusiasm to show that she was better than ever.

“No! I mean, you just got out of the hospital. I bet the others are dying to see you.” Torigoya said as she thought that she might get in trouble for saying no to Yuko’s enthusiastic reply. She couldn’t let herself see Yuko get hurt again.

“Fine, I’ll leave that for later since you are right, I haven’t seen those guys in a while. Have they been taking care of Maeda?” Yuko asked as they both started to make their way towards the school again.

“Which meaning of taking care of Maeda are you asking?” Torigoya asked air-headedly.

“Obviously not beating her up. Since I got better, it’s my turn to have fun with her.” Yuko said as she smiled her famous smile showing her dimple. Unobvious to her surroundings as to all the Yankees in the school were all either by the window or on the field now.

“Welcome back Yuko-senpai.” Every yankee except Maeda, the Four queens, and Sado in the school shouted at the same time. All happy that the top of their school was back.

“I’m home.” Yuko shouted. Yuko seriously thought of Majisuka Gakuen as her home, and that each and every yankee in the school were her sister. It was a huge family for her to take care of but she had friends to help her.

As Maeda made her way down to greet the president, the yankee’s parted a like the river of Nile. Giving way to Maeda. As they thought the fight of the century would occur in just a few moments away.

“Konnichi wa, Yuko-san.” Maeda politely said.

“That’s the first thing you want to say to me when I come back? Majisuka? Well that’s alright, we have a lot of catching up to do.” Yuko said as she started walking towards Maeda.

“It’s going to happen any moment now.” Wota commented as the rest of Team Hormone watched the scene unroll in front of them, not blinking as to not miss even a single detail of the history that was about to be made in front of them. Who would come out victorious? Who would become the top? Would it stay the same? Or was history of Majisuka going to be rewritten today?

…silence… no one dared to interrupt or intervene in this….

“IT’S TIME FOR CLASS NOW. GET TO IT.” The principal shouted. As all the Yankee’s started to part from their regular groups and slowly, oh so slowly work their way back to the classroom to make sure that if Yuko and Maeda were to start anything, they would be the first to know and see.

“AHAHAHA, sorry. I forgot I wasn’t supposed to disturb them from their classes.” Yuko said as she looked at the principal.

“No problem. I bet you have things to do so run off now. And don’t start anything at school.” The principal warned.

“I’ll try not to.” Yuko smiled as she answered the principal. In which the principal gave her a suspecting look that says I don’t believe you but just don’t do it in front of me.

-Rappapa clubroom-

Yuko throws away the sign that says ‘Reserved for the President’ sign away from her chair which was covered by a golden color cloth. And sat on her rightful throne.

“Where’s Maeda?” Yuko asked as she cozy-ed up in her chair.

“In class. She attends classes regularly unlike the rest of us.” Sado replied

“Good-two shoes.” Shibuya commented.

“Well, I’m bored. Amuse me.” Yuko commanded.

“Since I don’t want to repeat another year, I’m just going to class now.” As Sado escaped from the task of ‘amusing’ the president.

“I have some unfinished business to attend to.” Shibuya said as she left behind Sado.

And Black, as quietly as she came into the club room, quietly left.

“That leaves you and me.” Yuko said as she watched Torigoya.



-Kamonohashi Office-

“She’s in a daze. What happened in school today?” Nami asked as she felt intrigued by Asahi’s air-headed side.

“She’s been like that since we met up to go home together. Smiling to herself like a crazy person.” Hinata said as she started waving her hands up in the air in front of Asahi’s face to get Asahi’s attention

“When did I become buddy buddy with you again?” Nami starts to crack her knuckles.

“Wait, Asahi’s case is more important than beating me up right now.” Hinata started to panic.

“I beg the differ.” Nami said as she put Hinata into a head lock.

“What have you three been doing? Get ready, you’re meeting Sunny Music’s director, Katsuyuki.” Saeko said as she motioned towards the three. “Don’t you dare piss him off. As you see, me and Marilyn can’t go watch you three since you are going into a club with other men. Be on your best behavior, no drinking and go win the favor of the director. If you do not do all three things listed, there will be DIRE CONSEQUENCES.”  Saeko said with a threatening voice. As she made a whipping action to emphasize the consequence.

“O-SU.” All three replied.

-Private club room-

“Let’s have some fun. Come on, loosen up.” Katsuyuki said as he started to grope a nearby girl hostess.

“Sorry, um it’s our first time. And we’re still under aged so we can’t drink.” Riku said as the leader of the group, he had to put up a responsible image. As he kindly rejected Katsuyuki, some of the girl hostess heard and squealed.

“KAWAII.” As the girl hostesses moved towards the three man group to take a look at new blood.

“Don’t touch me.” Kai said as he plainly rejected the girls. This in turn makes the girls want to touch him more just to tease him.

“Ahhh.” Kuu just screamed trying to run away from all those pairs of hands trying to catch the cutie-boy.

“All men for themselves.” Riku dodged left and right to get out of their private room. While pushing Kai and Kuu in front of him when a hostesses tried to jump him. As to use Kai and Kuu as a shield.

-Club lounge-

After dodging and excusing themselves out of the room, Kai and Kuu sat at the lounge area of the club.

“Men are the worse.” Kai said as he started to sip a transparent drink which he thought was water…

‘Tasty water.’ Thought Kai.

“Argh, why are we doing this again?” Kuu asked as drank the transparent drink thinking that it’s as well water.

“Because Shachou will kill us if we don’t do it. By the way, where’s Riku?” Kai asked as he started to feel a little strange.

-Rooftop-

“Sighh…”

“Oh Riku, what are you doing here?” Katsuyuki asked as he just got through the door leading to the rooftop.

“Ah, Katsuyuki-san. I’m getting some fresh air.” Riku replied ever so politely as to not offend Katsuyuki.

“Me too.” As he started to walk over to Riku’s side to see the night view, he tripped forward with his hands holding the closest possible thing to balance himself, Riku’s “solid chest”.

“Wow, you’re surprisingly solid.” Katsuyuki commented as he patted Riku’s chest.

“ECCHI.” Riku screamed as he pushed Katsuyuki on the floor and ran away.

“Ha?” Katsuyuki wondered what was up with that as he held up his hands to motion a groping action.

-Club private room-

Riku entered to tell Kai and Kuu that it might be best to leave now. But as he entered, he noticed that Kai and Kuu looked flushed and having fun with the female hostesses…too much fun.

“Riku, come here, you have to try this. It’s sooo good.” As Kai held up a clear liquid.

“Yeah, let loose and try it.” Kuu commented as he started to grind against a hostess.

“No thank you. We really should be going now.” Riku said as he started to excuse himself and his other two bandmates.

Kai and Kuu got a hold of Riku as one of the hostess started pouring the drink into Riku’s mouth.

TBC....

Hopefully, I can get one chapter done by this weekend...or else you guys won't get one till end of next week.... you guys can go ahead and blame my prof's for all the homework assignments, quizzes and midterms coming up for that.

PS: I don't know if I'm ever going to add the little KojiYuu scene....for now, I'll leave that up to your imagination.

Thanks for reading my rambling again. 

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Re: Lies
« Reply #13 on: February 03, 2011, 08:49:48 PM »
Why~?  :gyaaah: Please add the KojiYuu scene too~!  :mon cute: PLEASE~!  :kneelbow:  :mon pray2:


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Re: Lies
« Reply #14 on: February 04, 2011, 12:50:59 AM »
Thanks for updating!!! :D

lol i don't hate Nami/Ray either but Takaachan totally rules! :)

You should totally add the KojiYuu Scene but that's totally up to you

I wonder if Aachan and Yuko will have their fight soon or they aren't gonna fight at all

man when mendol drink alcohol all things go bad LOL  :lol:

Update soon!!!

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Re: Lies
« Reply #15 on: February 04, 2011, 03:57:09 AM »
Seriously wondering when Maeda will have time to talk about "Nami" to Torigoya  XD
And I want that KojiYuu scene too.... if it was really a KojiYuu scene XD
I also want a fight between Yuko and Maeda.... And I'm wondering what will happen with Takamina... well in fact I have thousand questions  :grin:

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Re: Lies
« Reply #16 on: February 06, 2011, 11:23:58 PM »
Seriously wondering when Maeda will have time to talk about "Nami" to Torigoya  XD
And I want that KojiYuu scene too.... if it was really a KojiYuu scene XD
I also want a fight between Yuko and Maeda.... And I'm wondering what will happen with Takamina... well in fact I have thousand questions  :grin:
Maeda and Torigoya will talk soon? Maybe? I have no clue...I don't plan that far ahead but it will happen....eventually....
KojiYuu scene....yes...as you read this chapter....you'll get it.....
I really don't know who would win if Yuko and Maeda fights.....I'm still debating on who should win.....
Takamina will be Takamina =P
I have a thousand answers but none of which answers your questions  :theking


This chapter felt longer when I was writing this on Microsoft Word....and then, it looks short now =(

Anyways, enjoy =)

Chapter 4

-Next morning-

“Ahhh….my head is throbbing” Nami said as she held her head with her hands.

“Hinata feels like the world is spinning around and around….haha it literally feels like the world is revolving around me…oww” Hinata said as she closed her eyes to rest so the world would stop revolving around her but deep down inside she knows that even if she closed her eyes, the world truly does revolve around her….only in her head.

“We need to get up now…if shachou finds out-” Asahi said as she was cut off by Saeko and Marilyn.

“Good morning” said the two freighting figures as the three girls jumped up and got onto their feet.

“GOOD MORNING!” the three said as pain jolted through their brains causing them to cry in agony.

“UH” Nami cried out

“bleh….” Hinata blurted out as she covered her mouth with her hands.

“We’ll get ready as soon as possible” Asahi said to try and cover things up.

“We’re not stupid…we can smell your stench a mile away…you guys reek of alcohol when I specifically said you were not allowed. Breaking my rules ay…then do you know what gets broken next?” Saeko smiled as a grim line appeared on her face while her hand was held out as Marilyn put the handle of the whip in her hand.

‘Shit’ the three girls thought at the same time as the whip was being handed to shachou

“Attention!” Marilyn shouted as the three girls who were slouching before stood up straight

“Turn!” the three girls turned such that their asses faced shachou and Marilyn.

“Stick your butts out!” and the girls bent down. As they got what was coming for them for breaking the rules.

-Recording studio-

 “Sanbyou mitsumeru dake de.” Riku started.

“Otoshi- bleh” Kai covers his mouth with his hands

“Kai, are you ok?” Riku asked as he nervously looks over back and forth from Kai and Shachou who had her handy whip out.

“Kai, common, Shachou’s going to whip you again.” Kuu added.

“I know but..BLEH…” Kai runs out of the recording studio to get some air.

-Rooftop-

“Argh, I can’t take this anymore, my head is hurting so much.” Kai said to himself as he was unaware of the person softly walking towards him.

“A hangover?” Ray asked. She started to curse herself for asking such an obvious question.

“Ray…..san?” Kai shocked from seeing the third to last person in the world.

‘At least it’s not shachou or…her.’ Thought Kai. ‘I’d rather deal with shachou’s abuses then to see…her.’

“What are you doing here?” Kai asked as he paused for a moment and started again while feeling really nervous about what he was going to say next, “I mean, I would like to apologize about the thing last time. I’m really sorry. I was just saying what was on my mind, I mean…um..”

Kai paused as he was scrambling on what he should say next. While Ray was looking at him with an intrigued look on her face.

As Kai starts to explain himself, Ray walked forward which shocked Kai, to stop talking and to see what the diva was going to do next.

‘Is she going to slap me?’ Kai thought.

Kai’s thought was the exact opposite of Ray's action as Ray leans in and kisses him on the lips.

‘…’ no thought processes was needed for Kai to choose his next reaction, as if in automatic gear he pushed Ray away.

“What are you doing?” Kai asked

Ray just smiled and kissed him again. Kai, who was thoroughly shocked did nothing.

“A SCOOP” Shouted the blonde paparazzo after he took a picture and ran away.

‘SHIT!’ Kai thought as he saw Kuu shocked from the exchange he had with Ray and Riku running after the paparazzo.

“Why did you do that?” Kai asked as he pushed away Ray and tripped himself in the process and landed on his ass.

“We’ve been photographed.” Ray said with an amused voice.

“Why do you not care that you’ve been photographed? You’re Japan’s number one diva. This scandal could hurt you.” Kai said, not amused that Ray didn’t care for her own career. This turn of events might kill his own career not that he had much to start with. Now Kai can never repay shachou.

“It’s ok. I want the world to know that I belong to Kai…” Ray blushed as she started to finish her sentence, “and Kai belongs to me.”

“WHAT?” that was the only thing Kai thought of and so he said it aloud.

“I’m really happy about what you said to me yesterday. No one dares to lecture me since I’m really popular. But I know you only said those things to me because you really care for me and love me.”

“You’ve got things all wrong. It was the truth…” Kai stated bluntly but stopped as he saw the heartbroken diva’s face.

“You don’t love me?”

‘WHAT AM I GOING TO DO?!?!?! If I make Ray unhappy I’m going to get another whipping….’ Kai thought as he tried to juggle himself out of this predicament

“I meant…we should…take things slow….and I mean really really slow…” Kai regretted his words since this gave Ray hope. “We…don’t know each other at all…..”

“It’s ok since we’re dating now. IM SO HAPPY” Ray said as she started to move towards Kai again and placed her lips against his.

“WHAT THE HELL?” Kuu shouted as he entered the love scene from a bad romantic drama and stole the main male actor and booked it down the stairs and into an empty room.

-Empty room-

“WHAT THE HELL?!?!?” as the two males shouted at the same time.

“What took you so long to save me?” Kai asked.

“I was in shock” Kuu replied truthfully.

“Who do you think was in more shock?”

“Me of course, I actually thought you liked it.” Kuu said as he smirked.

“I HATE L’S. I DETEST THEM.” Kai shouted to state his point

“It’s not really L if Ray thinks your male.” Kuu retaliated.

“SHUT UP”

-The chase-

As Jiro ran for his life, Riku was on hot pursuit to take him down with shachou a block behind her.

‘I need to stop him….I don’t want my career to end before it actually started.’ Riku’s head was full of ‘I have to stop him now…but how can I do it?....maybe….just a little bit?’

-Flashback-

(-Clubroom-)

“That leaves you and me, Torigoya.” Yuko pointed out. “So how will you amuse me?”

“Um...I don’t have any games on my phone…maybe I can go find you something to do? What do you want to do?” Torigoya asked since if Yuko is bored, she’d go looking for fights and Torigoya really don’t want to see her hurt again…

“You can amuse me…with your body.” Yuko smirked.

‘…’ Torigoya just stood there shocked about what Yuko said to her. As Yuko starts closing the drapes of the room.

Yuko walked up to Torigoya and engulfed her into an embrace…and whispered softly. “Now, no one can see us from the outside and you can’t get distracted by looking out the window like always…you will pay full attention to me and only me.”

Torigoya’s heart skipped a beat when she heard Yuko’s soft whispering into her ear. A tingling sensation for her, as her heart started to race as they met eye to eye.

“I’m going to train your body and mind…” Yuko’s grin grew larger.

Torigoya just gulped.

“I’m going to teach you new things that you won’t even imagine…I’m going to train you until you can’t take it anymore…I’m going to teach you how to control your inner Torigoya.” Yuko said, as she noticed a blush appearing on Torigoya’s face. “What were you thinking of?”

“…I thought you were going to um..teach me how to fight like you.” Torigoya tried to cover herself.

“Mhmm…Torigoya, you can let it out now.”

“Yuko-san, are you sure? It’s really unstable.” Torigoya afraid that she’d hurt her precious president.

“Let’s do it.”

“Okay then…….” Torigoya’s head shook violently as her inner self started to overtake her. She broke off the embrace as her hand reached for Yuko’s head to see her deepest fear.

‘I can’t lose her…not to anyone or to herself…I can’t lose you, Torigoya.’ Torigoya read Yuko’s deepest fear as she tried to shake off her second personality, but it was just too strong.

“I saw it.”

“Torigoya, are you in there? You can’t let her overpower you. One of these days, if you can’t control her, then you can never come back and I’ll never see the true you again.” Yuko tried to get the normal Torigoya back.

“Ahhh…My head hurts.” Torigoya starts screeching in pain.

‘I can’t let Yuko down, I can’t bear to see her sad, and most of all, I can’t bear to leave her and never see her again…I can do this, I can overcome myself.’ As Torigoya stood still her minds contemplating to fight for the body.

“Nyan-nyan!.” Yuko shouted.

“Tadaima. Yuko-san.” Normal Torigoya said.

“Nyan-nyan?”  Yuko asked.

“Hai, I’m back…”

-End of Flashback-

‘I can do this, I’ve done this with Yuko and I can control myself’ Riku had to take charge now or else he’ll be too late to stop the paparazzo.

As Jiro turned into a back alley, Riku jumped him.

Riku took hold of Jiro’s head with one hand.

“I saw it.” Riku said as he pulled Jiro closer and whispered into his ears. Then dropped him.

Shachou just got into the back alley as she saw Jiro cowering on the floor. And took the camera and deleted the pictures and took out the memory card and cracked it in two so they the paparazzo can’t even try to recover any data.

Riku shock off his second personality as shachou came over to give Riku a pat on the back for a job well done.

As Riku and shachou left, Riku warned the paparazzo.

“Don’t ever try that again or you know what will happen.”

- Kamonohashi Office-

Kai started to throw a fit.

“I quit, I HATE HATE HATE L’s” Kai took off his wig and threw it down. His, I mean her long hair came down and reminded everyone that he was indeed a she. But with her personality it was really hard to tell even with the long hair.

“Oh come on Nami, it can’t be that bad.” Riku said as he tried to comfort Nami

“Yeah, think about it, Japan’s number one diva at your beck and call. How cool is that.” Kuu said not noticing the glare Nami was giving him.

Shachou and Marilyn came in and started to announce,

“Our first single has been decided..” Marilyn said leaving the more important announcement to shachou.

“You three will be photographed by Kichin.”

“The famous erotic magazine photographer Kichin?!?” as Nami restated unsure if she heard right.

Shachou and Marilyn nodded. As the three squealed in delight.

“Wait, Nami, I thought you said you were going to quit.” Riku stated

“Being photographed by Kichin is a separated matter.” Kai replied with enthusiasm.

“Yes, you three will be photographed by Kichin. The cover will be the three of you, in nude.”

‘…’ was running in the minds of the three man band.

“NUDE?!?!” as the three shouted.

“Yes and the set will be at Majisuka Gakuen.” Marilyn said as she continued. “The principal already agreed as shachou and her are apparently really good friends.” Marilyn said as she was green with jealously.

“Majisuka?” Riku and Kuu said at the same time. Shocked and not knowing if they can hide their identities from Nami and their school mates any longer.


TBC..

I know everyone wants a confrontation between Takamina/Kai/Nami and Maeda....I wonder if it will happen soon =P
I guess everyone will have to wait until I finish the next chapter...don't kill me

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« Reply #17 on: February 07, 2011, 02:32:03 AM »
LOL Thank for your... very clear answers...  :huhuh


I have a thousand answers but none of which answers your questions  :theking

CRUEL.  :shocked

This chapter felt longer when I was writing this on Microsoft Word....and then, it looks short now =(

LOL I totally know how you feel  XD

Thank for the update :D Since you have not a single answer to my questions, I'll just say... I want a meeting between Takamina/Kai/Nami (seriously wondering how she can survive with so many identities  :smhid) and Maeda!!!
But hey... maybe they will just go there when no one will be at school anyway so XD I mean, knowing Saeko, she doesn't want their real identity to be discover so it'd be logic... OMG if you do that, I'll hate you XD
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Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 4)
« Reply #18 on: February 07, 2011, 09:22:54 AM »
Thanks for update!

woahhh Haruna can control her inner self now? that should be pretty useful to keep people quiet

awww Yuko's biggest fear is losing Harunaa  :)

I agree with bou-j525 Takamina and Aachan should really meet but i wonder how Aachan would react with seeing her dead best friend  :?

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« Reply #19 on: February 07, 2011, 01:04:22 PM »
As expected~  :tntrm:

I LOVE KOJIYUU MOMENT THE BEST~!!  :luvuluvu:

Thanks~!!  :k-great:  :on GJ:

 :onioncheer: Please update more KojiYuu~ yourstruly-san~!!  :tama-apeshit:   :kneelbow:

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