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Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 8)
« Reply #40 on: February 24, 2011, 08:38:37 PM »
I love you your fanfict so much  :luvluv1: I always wanted to saw kai in majijo sankyuu~
I'm looking forward the goukon :ding:

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Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 8)
« Reply #41 on: March 03, 2011, 07:50:10 AM »
it's not you who giving me a headache.... it's my eyes!!!
i think im ok now! just a few eye drops away!

this goukon is exciting...  :twothumbs
can't wait!  :panic:
i want Black and Gekikara!!!!!

LOL, that's good to hear that it's not me and that it can be fixed easily.
Hopefully you'll think the goukon is exciting....
I'm personally not that good at writing about Black or Gekikara but for you, I'll try...in the next arc...probably....;)

NOOOOO DON'T LET WHAT BOU-J525 THINK MAKE YOU DELAY THEIR NEXT MEETING!! :O
oh man i see some identity problems coming up. Kazuki, Kai, Torigoya, and Riku all have to go to the goukon  :huhuh

I love all the text messages going around during this chapter :)

LOL, don't worry no one can delay the next meeting...except me and real life....
Didn't you know that they all have stunt doubles? LOL...I'm kidding..
I like trying to write text messages....it's fun sometimes when I write them

I was actually going to make the next meeting soon but if you insist on me making you wait a while for the next meeting then ok  :theking
...
Cause bou-j525 thinks that the next meeting will happen much later..........everyone will have to wait  :theking
I'm kidding...... or am I?  :twisted:
Haven't read your chapter yet coz I don't have time.... but HAD to quote this.
DON'T. DOOOOOOOOOON'T!!!!!!! I'M GOING TO GET KILLED IF YOU DO THAT!!!
EDIT:
Just read your chapter... omg it gonna be awesome XD Or maybe not... But you know what, I'm just going to stop talking about your chapters just because I wanna stay alive... you know ¬.¬

LOL, don't worry no one will kill you, everyone loves your fanfics too much to kill you and risk another fanfic getting delayed.
Don't ever stop commenting, just cause the more comments I get, I try to get my homework and other shit done faster so I can update faster....
Actually, doesn't matter....unless you want the following chapters to have a long wait then be my guest.... :twisted:

I love you your fanfict so much  :luvluv1: I always wanted to saw kai in majijo sankyuu~
I'm looking forward the goukon :ding:

Thank you for reading. I really wonder what will happen next with Kai/Kazuki/Nami/Minami.....
I'm getting confused.....Don't worry, some will die off next chapter? Or following chapter?


Thanks for reading, and there's a reply button such that you guys can comment with. It makes me write up next chapters faster.  :theking
Sorry, this is actually a pretty short chapter....



Chapter 9

-Radio Station-

“Welcome back to All Night Nippon, I’m SDN48’s captain, Noro Kayo.”

“I’m Cindy.”

“Ohori Megumi, fufufufufufu.”

“Today, we have three special guests in the studio with us.” Noro announced as she saw that Ohori Megumi eye-ing the three boys in a ridiculously scandalous way.

“Osu, Persona’s Riku desu.”

“Osu, Kai desu.”

“Osu, Kuu desu.”

“So the three boys here, are here to promote their debut single 3seconds.” Cindy commented

“So how did you three meet?” Asked Noro.

“We met at an audition in which we all failed.” Riku replied.

“Luckily, Kamonohashi’s Shachou got to take a look at us and took a liking to us.” Kai added

“Ah! I mean, then we um…started under Kamonohashi Office.” Kuu’s sudden outburst was caused by none other than Ohori. Ohori likes all three of the boys but she likes them young and cute, as she played footsie with Kuu under the table causing Kuu to shutter.

Noro, who was completely obvious to what Ohori was doing, slapped her on the arm to remind her that they were on air and that if she wanted to continue, do it afterwards.

“What kind of girls do you three boys like? Like what are your types? I bet all your fans would love to know.” Asked Ohori as she emphasized the word love and directed it to Kuu.

“Ha? Um… A nice, interesting girl who I can respect and look up to.” Riku answered as he blushed slightly as Yuko’s face came to mind.

“A nice girl, who knows what her dream is and follows it.” Kai also blushed as Atsuko’s face came to mind.

“I don’t really know what my preferences are.” Kuu answered as he caught Ohori staring at him and turned away

“So are older girls ok with you?” Ohori especially asked Kuu.

“um….sure?” Kuu answered doubtfully.

“Fufufufufu.”

“Anyways, Kai-san, there has been rumors of you and Ray going out.” Noro asked to divert attention away from Ohori and Kuu

“No, we’re not going out. Kamonohashi is an off branch from Monkey Pro and um… Ray is just being helpful by leading and teaching us a bit and showing us the ropes.” Kai answered as he blushed tomato red as Noro made the assumption that he and Ray are going out.

Trying to give Kai a break from every radio show, TV show and varieties asking if Kai and Ray were dating, Riku changed the subject.

“Sorry, I have a question, why does Cindy-san’s photo have a Tiara on her head?” Riku asked as Noro and Ohori face palmed.

“YOU CAN SEE THE TIARA? Only cute people can see it.” Cindy got excited as Riku mentioned her Tiara

‘Now I know why Ohori-san and Noro-san face palmed…I really want to too…So hard to fight the urge to face palm.’ Thought Riku, as he just kept smiling to keep a professional profile up. To stop his palm from reaching his face, he gripped onto his knees and forced his hands down.

“Well, we have a new corner in our show such that we call one of the listeners so that they can talk to their idol which can be our guests here today or of course, us SDN48. Get out your phones now everyone.” Noro was told by the producer that if the listeners listed themselves on their webpage with their phone number that they may be able to talk to them as a special corner.

*Ring Ring*

“Moshi-moshi, Shinoda Mariko-san?” Noro asked.

‘How come that name sounds so familiar? Might be just my imagination.’ Riku felt that the name Shinoda Mariko had a familiar feeling to it but he just couldn’t put the name to the face.

*DEADLINE*

“Eh? We must have been cut off, let’s try again.”

*Busy tone*

“Ok, I guess that caller is out of luck, and the next caller is also out of luck cause we JUST ran out of time, sorry guys. Well that concludes our little cover for Persona, and for all the listeners out there, here’s their debut single 3seconds.”

*Airs 3seconds*

“Thank you very much you three.” Noro thanked the boys for coming in so late in the night.

“No, Thank you for having us here.” Riku as the leader had to be the most polite.

“Kuu, here’s my number, call me.” Ohori gave Kuu a piece of paper and a wink.

“Thank you?” Kuu shivered.

-Kamonohashi Office-

“Boys, we have good news and bad news, which would you like to hear first?” Marilyn asked.

“Bad news?” Riku chose

“Next week, your all full booked solid, for TV shows and what nots. So no school but a lot of work next week.” Marilyn said.

“That’s not really bad news, rather, it’s good news… then what’s the good news?” Kai asked

“You get the day off tomorrow to get ready for work.” Shachou answered

“YAY.” Kuu shouted.

“Me and Marilyn will not be home all day tomorrow…we have um… other things to do.” Shachou said as she gave Marilyn a seductive look. As Marilyn started to melt because of the look Shachou gave her.

The three boys shivered.

“No partying.” Shachou warned

“OSU.” The three boys answered.

-Bedroom-

“Nene~, let’s go out tomorrow.” Hinata said.

“We have school tomorrow.” Asahi rejected Hinata’s offer of going out.

“We’re skipping school all week next week so how would one more day affect it.” Hinata pointed out.

“I want to sleep in tomorrow.” Nami answered as she saw Hinata giving her a puppy dog face.

“Well, I do want to relax before our week of work.” Asahi added as Hinata’s face brightened up. Asahi thought that if Hinata had a tail, she would be wagging it around so much that it would have broken off already.

“Sigh… Ok fine…” Nami agreed to go out.

“YEY.” Hinata jumped up and put her fist through the air.

Hinata messaged Yuko

Yuko-chan, are you free tomorrow? If you are, we can go out.

Yuko’s replies are scaring-ly fast.

FOR SURE! When and what time?

Hinata answered,

How about Harajuku at 12pm, the other side of the bridge, away from the Meiji Shrine.

Yuko’s reply,
Ok, see you then.

‘HEH HEH HEH, FOOD! Hopefully, Asahi doesn’t kill me.’ Thought Hinata.

-Yuko’s room-

Yuko sent a message to Maeda and Sado, exactly the same ones,

Oi, we’re going out tomorrow. Meet at Harajuku at 12pm, other side of the bridge, away from the Meiji Shrine. You better be there.

‘What should I say to Torigoya?’ Yuko thought, ‘Is she still mad at me?’

Ne, Torigoya, are you free tomorrow? Let’s go out and have some fun? I have a surprise for you.

‘Torigoya, please come. Please say yes.’

Sorry, can’t. Have plans for tomorrow.

‘AHHH…She’s still mad at me.’ Yuko’s sad face showed up.

-Sado’s room-

‘Mhmm, sounds like fun.’

-Atsuko’s room-

‘Yuko-san is so demanding…but we have school tomorrow…’

Yuko-san, I can’t skip school so I can’t go.

‘Hopefully, Yuko-san can understand that I can’t skip school…’

You don’t have to worry about that, I got you covered. You know, that day I told you to help me out to? I got 6 skip class days from the principal so don’t worry.

‘I don’t really have a choice do I?”

Kazuki-kun, I'm sorry to bother you so late, but are you free tomorrow to go out?

‘I don’t want to go if Kazuki-kun isn’t going…’

Maeda-san, sorry, I just made plans to go out with a couple friends. But please don’t let me be the reason why you’re not going to hang out with your friends. I’ll feel horrible if it was.

‘Kazuki-kun…sigh…’ Atsuko pouts. ‘I guess I’ll go…better tell Gakuran and Daruma to go to school without me then.’

Sorry, I'm not going to school tomorrow.

-Other side of town-

‘That’s strange, Atsuko normally doesn’t skip school…something is up.’ Gakuran thought.


TBC

I'm trying really hard to think of AKB/SKE/SDN people that were not included in Majisuka and trying to include them in somehow or another....well, mainly AKB (and former AKB members that are now in SDN) since I don't know much from SKE/SDN and of course the new one NMB....

And just as a side note, it is NOT, I REPEAT, NOT bou-j525's fault that it's not a meeting in this chapter.
I felt like including other stuff so kill me if you wish but not bou-j525, I like her fanfics.

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Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 9)
« Reply #42 on: March 03, 2011, 09:31:42 AM »
I'M SO CURIOUS NOW~!!  :on lol:

Please update as soon as possible~  :pleeease:


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Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 9)
« Reply #43 on: March 04, 2011, 02:51:50 AM »
I'm sure it my fault and you don't want to say it I know your secret! You want me to kill myself!!!  :panic: :panic: :panic:

...

 :nervous Overreaction  :nervous

Nice chapter  :lol: I look forward for the meeting. I really hope it's in the next chapter :D But I'm wondering... Won't Atsuko find it weird that ... what's his name already? *look* that Kazuki can never see her when she's with "others"? XD Same with Yuko about Torigoya XD Someday they will be like "Ok, this time, YOU COME!" at Kazuki and Torigoya, exactly when Kai and Riku will need to go too XD And Gakuran will move soon, I feel it...

I don't know why but I feel like I should stop talking and trying to guess things now... Update soon!  :grin:

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Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 9)
« Reply #44 on: March 04, 2011, 09:23:36 AM »
I like the SDN part especially meetan :thumbup
Riku trying to contain to facepalm, I can imagine it and I completly understand his situation lol

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Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 9)
« Reply #45 on: March 05, 2011, 05:20:28 AM »
ohnkalsngjrkenaekmnksaNnjbsnaiknbujfnvlakrv...fknav (thats me going crazy after seeing you updated your fic)
Lol  :lol:
Please!!!! Update soon, it was my first time reading your fic and i got into it sooo fast  :twothumbs :D
I've been literally checking like every 5 seconds to see if you've updated...when not actually 5 seconds more like 2  :P
but anyway...
PLEASE UPDATE SOOOOON!!!!

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Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 9)
« Reply #46 on: March 07, 2011, 09:09:31 AM »
sorry for replying soo late!!

lol its lucky you you said that side note or else bou-j525 would be in another world right now  :roll:

AWWWWW Aachan doesn't want to go unless Kazuki's goinggg.

man i'm gonna be seeing some problem if Kai and Kazuki are the same people

Once again yay for food loving Miichan! :lol:

Update soon!

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Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 9)
« Reply #47 on: March 09, 2011, 11:39:35 PM »
I'M SO CURIOUS NOW~!!  :on lol:
Please update as soon as possible~  :pleeease:

Good, I like to make people guess and become impatient with waiting  :twisted:

Nice chapter  :lol: I look forward for the meeting. I really hope it's in the next chapter :D But I'm wondering... Won't Atsuko find it weird that ... what's his name already? *look* that Kazuki can never see her when she's with "others"? XD Same with Yuko about Torigoya XD Someday they will be like "Ok, this time, YOU COME!" at Kazuki and Torigoya, exactly when Kai and Riku will need to go too XD And Gakuran will move soon, I feel it...
I don't know why but I feel like I should stop talking and trying to guess things now... Update soon!  :grin:

LOL, thank you =).
It's quite alright to keep guessing I dont mind...I like seeing other people's ideas then twisting it.....

I like the SDN part especially meetan :thumbup
Riku trying to contain to facepalm, I can imagine it and I completly understand his situation lol

It was so fun writing that part...I was grinning will I was writing....We have the same tastes ;)
As they say, great minds think alike...and we both think that part was fun so therefore we both have great minds

Please!!!! Update soon, it was my first time reading your fic and i got into it sooo fast  :twothumbs :D
I've been literally checking like every 5 seconds to see if you've updated...when not actually 5 seconds more like 2  :P
but anyway...
PLEASE UPDATE SOOOOON!!!!

I think it's an exaggration that you check every...5 or 2 seconds.... but thank you for liking my fanfic, I appreciate the support

sorry for replying soo late!!
lol its lucky you you said that side note or else bou-j525 would be in another world right now  :roll:
AWWWWW Aachan doesn't want to go unless Kazuki's goinggg.
man i'm gonna be seeing some problem if Kai and Kazuki are the same people
Once again yay for food loving Miichan! :lol:
Update soon!


It's ok, as they say, better late than never.....
I don't think you'd put bou-j525 in the other world...if you do that then there's gonna be a lot less fanfics....
I'm trying to make Atsuko and Kai a cute couple ish thing......
I foretell a lot of problems for Kai/Kazuki
I love Miichan =)



Please enjoy this chapter, as always, replies are well appreciated


Chapter 10

-Next Morning-

“WAKE UP NAMI! WAKE UP ASAHI!” Hinata, who seldom wakes up earlier than the rest started to jump from her bed to Nami’s to Asahi’s then back and forth from Nami’s and Asahi’s to make sure they get up.

“Argh…Hinata! What are you doing? It’s 9am.” Nami said with a pissed off face.

“I was planning on sleeping till noon today.” Asahi commented.

“We’ll now that we’re all up, let’s eat breakfast and go out.” Hinata was all pumped and ready to have some good food and fun today.

“Fine, I’ll let you off today. But don’t ever do this again on my day off.” Nami warned as she glared at Hinata.

Nami and Asahi started to choose their girl outfits for the day as Hinata interrupted,

“Oi, what are you guys doing?”

“What do you mean what are we doing? It’s obvious isn’t it? We’re choosing our outfits for today.” Replied Nami as she gave Hinata a weird look.

“Don’t you guys want to know how popular we are now?” Hinata asked

“I guess…but how do we do that?” Asahi asked as she felt that Hinata was hiding something from them.

“We’ll dress up as Persona but not with the usual outfits but like normal boy clothes but kinda hidden… like you know, idols or stars will wear like hats and face masks and sunglasses… well, I suggest we do the same.” Exclaimed Hinata.

“I guess that could be fun.” Asahi added as she started putting away her girl’s clothes and started picking out boys clothes.

‘I guess that is a good choice…since now that I know Atsuko is in Tokyo, there is always a chance that I may meet her again…’ thought Nami as she too, reluctantly put away her girl’s clothes too. 

After an hour of brushing themselves up, choosing and switching clothing, they were finally done and were completely satisfied with their outfits.
Riku, wore a white t-shirt with a simple but classy design on it, a pair of black jeans, and a pair of black loafers. To top it all off, he wore a black blazer, rolled up to the elbows. Classy but not the same as the one for work.

Kai, wore a white tank on the inside with a button up black shirt which was also rolled up to the elbows. The black shirt was buttoned but not the first and last buttons were left unbuttoned. A pair of blue jeans that had the design of washout and his signature black leather Jack Purcell’s.

Kuu, also wore a white tank but on the outside, he wore a blue plaid shirt. Like Kai, it was also rolled up to the elbows and the first and last buttons were left unbuttoned. A pair of dark blue jeans and a pair of white casual puma shoes.

The boys went downstairs and started to prepare breakfast of toast, scrambled eggs, and sausage.

As the boys sat down and ate, Riku and Kai noticed that Kuu was eating less than often.

“Maybe Kuu is saving room for lunch?” Kai whispered to Riku as they both kept looking at Kuu.

‘How should I get the others to wait at the bridge at 12? Hmmm… I can’t make it too suspicious… I bet Riku is going to kill me… all worth the trouble for food.’ Kuu thought. ‘Besides, they seem pretty fun.’

As the boys left home, they all put on their face masks and sunglasses.

-Harajuku 11am-

“Ne~ let’s meet up at 12pm at the bridge and go eat. I bet we all have things we want to buy and it’ll take too long if we go together.” Kuu suggested.

“But we have lots of time.” Riku said as he didn’t find the need to separate.

“Actually, I think that’s a good idea. I don’t really want to look at Lolita clothing.” Kai commented.

‘YES.’ Kuu thought.

“What do you mean by you don’t want to look at Lolita clothing? They are so great.” Kuu gave an angry pout.

“Fine, majority rules I guess.”

“So, 12pm at the bridge away from the shrine.” Kuu confirmed once more.

“Alright, ja.” Kai walked off as he was thankful for a day off, such that he can sort out his own feelings.

“Ok, I’ll see you later.” Riku walked off, opposite directions from Kai.

“Sweet… what should I do now?” Kuu said to himself.

-Riku-

‘Have I been too mean to Yuko? I swear, it’s Sado’s fault… How should I make it up to Yuko?’

Walks around shops and does window shopping. Riku stops in his track as he saw something that caught his eye, he knew right then that Yuko would like it. Riku went inside and bought it, but not without a little scene.

“Welcome.”

“Sorry, but could I get the bag in display please.” Riku asked as he took off his sunglasses and put it on his head, showing his glittering eyes that mesmerized the salesclerk.

“Sorry?”

“The bag, in the display window.” Riku once again confirmed

“Sorry, one moment please.” The salesclerk went to get the bag. “Thank you for waiting.”

“I’ll take it.”

“Is it for your girlfriend? Do you need it wrapped?” The salesclerk asked.

Riku blushed at the thought, as he answered, “No, it’s not for my girlfriend, I don’t have a girlfriend. It’s just for a friend. But if you could, could you please wrap it up?.”

‘Ah, I might have a chance.’ The clerk thought as she rang the item though and took money for the bag and gave back change.

“Sorry, we don’t have wrapping paper, but I have a box for it.”

“That’s fine. Thank you very much.”

“No no, thank you.” The salesclerk gave Riku the bag but not without slipping in a piece of paper with her phone number on it before hand.

-Kuu-

‘ICECREAM, CREPES, PARFAIT…FOOD! ‘ Kuu ran from shop to shop getting food and pigging out.

-Kai-

‘Alone at last.’ Kai thought as he went into a bookstore.

First things first, Kai went to the manga section and took a look at if One Piece had a new volume out. After spending 10 minutes browsing through mangas, he went towards the health section to take a look at Nurse books. Kai was engrossed with a nurse book, he decided to put the book down and take the one next to it as another person’s hand was trying to grab the same book. Kai accidentally grabbed the girl’s soft hand and he quickly felt a jolt of energy in him but left as quickly as he took his hand off and bowed to the girl to apologize.

“I’m so sorry.”

“Kazuki-kun?” Atsuko just knew as she felt the jolt of electricity in her like before, and this person’s eyes were the same as Kazuki-kun’s. She looked at Kazuki-kun and thought that he was well dressed in his shirt and jeans. And looked pretty cool with his sunglasses clipped on his shirt instead of putting it on his head.

“Eh? Maeda-san.”

“Kazuki-kun, I thought you said you were going to be out with your friends today.” Atsuko said as she pouted.

“I’m meeting up with them soon. More importantly, don’t you have school today.” Kai or rather Kazuki countered.

“My senpai’s would be unhappy if I didn’t skip with them.”

“As I said before, what kind of senpai’s do you have? Skipping and goukons?” Kazuki smiled as he thought that his Atsuko was returning. All the emotions that were hidden deep deep down inside her heart was floating up.

Both Kazuki and Atsuko were just pleased to have the other in their own presence as they continued to look at different nursing books.

“Are you interested in nursing?” Atsuko asked as she noticed that Kazuki-kun was engrossed with nursing books just like she was.

‘Shit, am I going to be found out…’

“Um, I just wanted to um…know more about you. No I meant, know how to take care of my wound or else I’d bet that you would feel guilty.” Kazuki blushed as he knew he said misleading things at first.

“Hmm, really now?” Atsuko said with a mischievous smile on her face.

“Yes really.” Kazuki answered as he looked at his phone and his smile became a small frown.

“What’s wrong?” Atsuko asked as she was totally aware that Kazuki-kun’s smiling face was not smiling anymore.

“Sorry, I need to go now and meet my friends.” Kazuki said as he had an apologetic face on.

“Hm, it’s ok, don’t worry about it. You told me that you were going out with your friends.” Atsuko said as the people around them in the bookstore felt that they had a cute couple vibe coming off the two.

“I’m really sorry, I’ll make it up to you next time.” Kazuki said with a wink and slowly, oh so slowly left.

“Ah! I better go too.” Atsuko took a look at her phone and she was in the same predicament as Kai, she didn’t want to be late either.

-Bridge-

Kuu was the first to arrive, followed by Riku. They were talking when Yuko and Sado walked towards them. As Riku saw the two girls, he gave Kuu a death glare saying that Kuu will die today and that he should say his prayers

Yuko and Sado, both very stylish.

Yuko was wearing a white t-shirt with a simple design, a black jacket, red and black checkered shorts, tights and golden sneakers.

Sado was wearing a short one piece that had horizonatal black and white lines on the top and on the bottom was just like a black skirt. A red belt on the one piece, with a short sleeved gray hoody. To top it all off, she was wearing black 2” heels.

As they approached Kuu gave an appreciated whistle to the two girls.

“Good afternoon.” Riku mumbled as he tightened his hold on his shopping bag.

As the 2 boys and 2 girls started to chatter, Kai jumped the 2 boys from behind and scared them.

“BOO!” Kai shouted causing the 2 boys to shout in surprise.

“AHHHH!” Kuu and Riku screamed earning looks from Yuko, Sado and the pass-byers since it sounded girly

“Don’t you dare do that again.” Riku warned as he already had a pissed off look on his face.

That was then Kai started to look around him as he saw Yuko and Sado. Kai knew then why Riku was in a bad mood but gave the two girls a wave and said a hi.

“Shall we get going now?” Kai asked as he had his arms around both RIku and Kuu.

“We’re waiting for one more person.” Yuko announced. “There she is, Maeda, over here” Yuko pointed off into a direction and the three boys looked.

‘SHIT.’ Kai thought as Atsuko approached the group.

TBC



I really wasn't going to update anytime soon because of my HUGE lack of motivation to do anything right now.....
BUT since it's Bou-j525's birthday, I'll update....
I don't know when I will be motivated again....so enjoy this chapter while you can, cause I totally don't know when I'll finish the next one  :theking

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Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 10)
« Reply #48 on: March 10, 2011, 01:07:27 AM »
darn you're totally right. bou-j525 is too important for me to kill.  :smhid

hahaha Miichan just doesn't stop eating does she?

aww what a nice short takaachan moment here. LOL Takamina is in a funny situation wonder what she's gonna do

I hope you update soon! Here's some smileys for a bit of motivation! :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D

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Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 10)
« Reply #49 on: March 10, 2011, 02:15:35 AM »
Thank for the update! Right for my birthday, THAAAANK  :grin: :grin: :grin: Love you  :grin: :grin: :grin:

I.CANT.BELIEVE.YOU.HAVE.A.LACK.OF.MOTIVATION.NOW TT_______TT  :cry: What can I do to help you?!?  :? Huum... I actually know how you feel since I myself am in a lack of motivation right now   :nervous
Please, update soon! I wanna know what is going to happen between them! Because Acchan thinks Kai is Kazuki right now -.-' So I wonder what will happen......... WHYYYYY  :banghead:
Come on, let's bring back motivation  :theking  :) :w00t: :bow: :D :grin: 8) Ok, I know it is hard to bring motivation back  :smhid YOU CAN DO IT!!!
I'll be waiting  :twothumbs

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Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 10)
« Reply #50 on: March 10, 2011, 07:02:42 AM »
I have nothing to say to you~  :on drink:

 :on cny2: PLEASE JUST KEEP UPDATING~!!  :byebye:

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Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 10)
« Reply #51 on: March 14, 2011, 09:39:39 AM »
 :w00t: :w00t: :w00t: :w00t:
 :heart: this fic......
Ill be waiting for update!!!!!
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Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 10)
« Reply #52 on: March 15, 2011, 04:20:27 AM »
Okay maybe i did exaggerate...a bit~  :P XD
U never know, maybe i do~ (I honestly have no life... XD :lol:)
Anyway...U Updated!!!! GaAaAaAaA!!!!
Thank you kami-sama (god) lol
Please update soon!!

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Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 10)
« Reply #53 on: March 24, 2011, 04:21:02 AM »
cliffhanger! asdffggsfafdaskfdasjfkdgls I wonder what will happen if Acchan met Kai because you know she know that Kai's name is Kazuki and lol at the girly screams
I really like your fic
please update soon

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Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 10)
« Reply #54 on: March 28, 2011, 11:32:00 PM »
Can't wait for update!!!!! ^^
By the way I agree we have great mind ;)

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Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 10)
« Reply #55 on: March 31, 2011, 12:14:24 AM »
darn you're totally right. bou-j525 is too important for me to kill.  :smhid
hahaha Miichan just doesn't stop eating does she?
aww what a nice short takaachan moment here. LOL Takamina is in a funny situation wonder what she's gonna do
I hope you update soon! Here's some smileys for a bit of motivation! :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D

bou-j525 is WAYYY too important to me too....I love her fanfics too ;)
Miichan will never stop eating...you should know that by now.......
Maybe some more takaacchan moment here? I dunno...GO READ IT NOW....then press reply and tell me what you think
Thank you very much for your motivation

Thank for the update! Right for my birthday, THAAAANK  :grin: :grin: :grin: Love you  :grin: :grin: :grin:
I.CANT.BELIEVE.YOU.HAVE.A.LACK.OF.MOTIVATION.NOW TT_______TT  :cry: What can I do to help you?!?  :? Huum... I actually know how you feel since I myself am in a lack of motivation right now   :nervous
Please, update soon! I wanna know what is going to happen between them! Because Acchan thinks Kai is Kazuki right now -.-' So I wonder what will happen......... WHYYYYY  :banghead:
Come on, let's bring back motivation  :theking  :) :w00t: :bow: :D :grin: 8) Ok, I know it is hard to bring motivation back  :smhid YOU CAN DO IT!!!
I'll be waiting  :twothumbs

I only updated because it was your birthday....good thing birthday's dont come every week ;)
BTW, I'm still in lack of motivation.....you call burn my school down for me then motivation will come back
I love ending in cliffhangers....makes people start wondering and guessing and wanting to read more....
I updated so your turn? =D

I have nothing to say to you~  :on drink:
 :on cny2: PLEASE JUST KEEP UPDATING~!!  :byebye:

Since you have nothing to say to me, I have nothing to update...
JUST KIDDING......this is an update =)

:heart: this fic......
Ill be waiting for update!!!!!

LOL, :heart: you too for always replying me

Okay maybe i did exaggerate...a bit~  :P XD
U never know, maybe i do~ (I honestly have no life... XD :lol:)

I don't mind the exaggeration, makes me feel good about myself ;)

cliffhanger! asdffggsfafdaskfdasjfkdgls I wonder what will happen if Acchan met Kai because you know she know that Kai's name is Kazuki and lol at the girly screams
I really like your fic
please update soon

Well, lucky day, you will find out when you read this chapter.
I like your fanfic too, update soon =)

Can't wait for update!!!!! ^^
By the way I agree we have great mind ;)

I agree that you agree that we have a great mind =)


Without further ado, I present you with Chapter 11 of Lies,
Don't kill me for taking so long, if you must kill someone, kill my teachers, I had lots of homework = no free time = no time to write

and AX was out this month.....LALALALALALALALALALALALALA....
totally wasn't replaying it again and again along with Aki Matsuri..........................

Thank you for reading as always





Chapter 11
 
*Awkward silence*

Atsuko was looking at Kazuki as Kazuki was staring back at her. The other boys and girls all noticed the Kai’s aura changed from surprised to horrified.

‘Do I pretend to know her or not? Do I tell her I’m Kai or Kazuki? Ahhhhhh… Why did I not just tell her my name was Kai in the beginning! Now I'm so screwed.’ Kai’s brain was in overload as the street was full of people passing by, with some girls taking a quick look at the boys and stopped in their tracks as they thought that they looked familiar.

‘People are starting to notice us.’ Thought Riku.

“Let me introduce myself, I’m Ruki.” Riku lied as the girls that stopped in their tracks looked disappointed.

“Oh, I’m Kuro.” Kuu played along with Riku.

“I’m Kazuki.” Kai sighed in relief as Riku saved his ass. The girls that were staring at the group all left disappointed that none of the boys, however resembling the boys from Persona, were not actually either of three boys.

“This is Maeda Atsuko, she’s my kouhai so be nice to her.” Yuko introduced Atsuko but Yuko felt that Kai or Kazuki now, knows Atsuko and vice versa.

“Let’s go have some fun today. YEY!” Kuu exclaimed, as he earned looks from Sado, who was silently and discreetly trying to shut him up with glares as he was attracting a lot of attention and is embarrassing her.

As the group of six started walking around and shopping, they broke up into pairs as they shopped around. Kuu with Yuko, Riku with Sado, and Kai with Atsuko.

Kuu and Yuko were having tons of fun making fun of weird articles of clothing while Riku and Sado looked over them as if they were the parents. Making sure that they don’t cause trouble, while in the corner of the store, Kai was with Atsuko. Kai and Atsuko were giving off the vibes of couples, as they were actually looking at clothing, with Atsuko putting it in front of herself and asking Kai’s opinion. Kai and Atsuko were unaware that the other four were paying attention to their interactions as they were 5 to 10 meters apart from the rest of the group.

Off in a secluded corner, someone who was basically all dressed in black was fuming as the scene of Kai trying on a ridiculous looking hat that Atsuko picked out. Atsuko was laughing while Kai, with his mask on, seemed amused at the sight of Atsuko having a good time. ‘I will get back even.’ Thought the person in black as the group left the store and decided not to follow them anymore.

As they left the store, Kuu’s stomach gave a well timed growl as the rest of the group started to get hungry as well, it reminded them what time it was, lunch time. As the group settled down at a local family restaurant, their seating arrangements were Riku in between Kai and Kuu, across from Riku was Yuko, Sado across from Kuu and lastly Atsuko across from Kai.

“I’m so tired and hungry.” Kuu said as he was contemplating between a white sauce spaghetti with prawns or curry beef.

“Well, I’ve decided, I’m getting hamburger steak.” Yuko said.

“Are you ready to order?” A server came by and asked.

“Yup, I want hamburger steak.”

“Curry pork.” Sado coldly said to the server.

“Grilled mackerel set please.” Atsuko politely said.

“Well, since Sado is having Curry, I want white sauce spaghetti with prawns.” Kuu thought that maybe he could steal a bite off Sado’s plate and satisfy his craving for curry while he has his favorite prawns.

“Katsu-don.” Kai said as Katsu-don was his favorite food of all time.

“Omelet rice please.” Riku didn’t know what to eat so he randomly picked omelet rice.

As they were waiting for their orders to arrive, Kai’s phone rung as he got a message.

Kai~ I miss you so much. What are you doing? Are you free? Maybe we can go out. You better not be cheating on me with other girls. Don’t even look at them, you can only look at me. Since I’m not beside you, I’ve attached a photo of myself so that you don’t need to look at other girls, just look at my picture. I know a picture of me isn’t enough but don’t worry, because I’m yours, we will one day get married and you can look at me all the time, maybe in bed and under the sheets too.

A photo of Ray in a white bikini was attached, with Ray leaning down towards the camera showed her assets very well with a lot of cleavage.

As Kai read the message, he wanted to puke and his whole face changed from happy with friends to back off if you want to live as he popped a blood vessel when he finished reading the message.

“Kazuki-kun…Kazuki-kun, are you ok?” Atsuko asked as she was worried about him.

“I’m fine.” Kai said as he gritted his teeth but his expression soften as he looked into Atsuko’s eyes. Kai decided to ignore Ray and just closed his phone up and putted it back into his pants pocket.

As the food came, everyone was so hungry that they just ate without talking. The boys took off their masks as their food came but since the girl’s food came first, no one really noticed their faces. Well, at least Atsuko didn’t notice. Kai and Kuu is normally a messy eater so food got all over their faces while Riku was eating his omelet rice gracefully. Sado, who was eating her curry noticed that Riku wasn’t like most boys who are rude and immature but is actually well mannered and graceful with a hint of air-headedness.

Kuu, noticed Sado paying attention to Riku and not to her food, so he took his clean spoon and sponged off a bit of curry and rice off of Sado. When Sado finally noticed that her precious curry had been defiled by the villain who was now licking his spoon clean from the evidence. Kuu gave Sado a look that said, I didn’t steal your food. While Sado kept glaring at Kuu, from Riku, Kai, Yuko, and Atsuko’s point of view, they swore they saw daggers in Sado’s glares as Kuu continued with his own food.

Yuko tried to ease the tension as she stole some of Riku’s omelet rice.

“Delicious.” Yuko exclaimed as she began to lick her spoon clean of rice.

Riku was shocked, Yuko didn’t even change spoons as she stole his food. ‘When did I become so close with Yuko such that she’s comfortable enough to share food with me…a guy? It’s highly irregular as only couples or really close friends would share. Aren’t we just friends?’ 

Yuko started to blush a slight pink, not very noticeable but pink nevertheless. ‘Opps, bad move Yuko. How come my body reacts like normal with Riku, as if… as if he was her…Torigoya. No, bad Yuko, I can’t cheat on Torigoya.’ Yuko thought.

“You have Katsu-don all over your face.” Atsuko said with a smile. Kai started to clean his face off with a napkin. “Not there, over here.” Atsuko took his napkin and cleaned his face. As Atsuko took a good look at his face, she paused.

“Can someone tell me what’s going on over there with the two love-birds?” Yuko whispered to the other three.

“Let’s just sit back and enjoy the show.” Sado said as she herself didn’t know either and was hoping for an answer through the scene unrolling before their eyes.

‘Minami?’ Atsuko thought as she saw a slight blush appear on Kai’s face so she quickly moved away and excused herself to the washroom.

-Ladies Washroom-

“Minami…Kazuki-kun resembles Minami…does Minami have siblings other than Erena? A long lost twin?” Atsuko tried to cool herself down as she washed her face in cold water.

*Knock Knock*

(From the outside) “Maeda-san, are you ok in there?” Kai asked.

Atsuko quickly opened the door and pulled Kai into the washroom and locked it.

“Minami…” Atsuko said aloud.

‘SHIT SHE KNOWS.’ Kai thought as he acted like normal.

“Who’s Minami?” Kai asked as he acted slightly confused about the outburst from Atsuko.

‘Yeah, there’s no possible way that Kazuki would know… Minami in heaven is looking after me by sending a Minami look-a-like…’ Atsuko thought as she smiled slightly.

“I…had a friend called Minami… She was my best friend.” Atsuko started. “You resemble her so much… I nearly mistaken you for her…”

‘What should I say now? How do I politely move away from this dangerous topic without sounding insensitive?.’ Kai’s thought were interrupted as Atsuko started talking again.

“It’s all my fault that she isn’t here with me anymore.” Atsuko started to lightly sob. “I…killed her.”

“It’s not your fault, you didn’t kill her, if you did, you would be in jail.” Kai said as he tried to disagree with the statement of Minami’s cause of death.

‘She didn’t even die… She’s right in front of you… Please don’t cry.’ Kai couldn’t take it anymore and engulfed Atsuko in a hug.

“It’s ok to let it all out. I’ll always lend you my shoulder.” Kai reassured Atsuko the only way he knew how, silent encouragement of being beside the other and listening to her problems.

“I’m sorry, I think I feel better now.” Atsuko said as her eyes are still red

“If your better now, then can I see your beautiful smile?.” Kai asked as Atsuko blushed slightly and gave a small smile but noticeable.

“Ok then, let’s go back to the others.” Kai said as he felt relieved that Atsuko didn’t realize Kai/Kazuki and Minami are one and the same person.

‘Atsuko, I’m sorry.’

-Back at the table-

“So the two love-birds are finally back from their washroom break together.” Yuko said as Atsuko and Kai sat back at their respectfully places.

“You go Ka…Kazuki, you sly dog you.” Kuu said as he grinned.

‘Almost slipped up there. Kai is such a player.’ Kuu thought, ‘He has Ray and now Atsuko too…’

As the three boys had their masks off, the people around them in the restaurant were starting to notice them. The people around them couldn’t put a finger to it but for some odd reason, they remember them from somewhere, but where? As the other tables started to remember the three boys quickly put their masks back on, and left the restaurant with Riku paying for everyone as he got the bands spending allowance for the week.

After lunch, the day was still young as it was only 2:30 in the afternoon so they decided to go karaoke since it’s less exposure for the boys which was suggested by Sado. Sado just didn’t like the attention they were getting since she was never really use to being in the spotlight.

-Karaoke-

As they settled down into the Karaoke room, Atsuko was curious about how come they were getting so much attention today while they were shopping and eating lunch asked,

“Are you guys famous or something?”

“You found out.” Yuko said as she kept smiling.

“Kind of, not really. We three are Persona. I’m Riku.” Riku said

“I’m Kuu.” Kuu gave Atsuko a wink

“I’m Kai, sorry for lying to you.” Kai said as he gave a bow as a symbol of apology.

“Sorry, I still don’t really understand.” Atsuko gave a slight smile as she was still confused…

‘Ruki=Riku? Kuro=Kuu? Kazuki=Kai? Who are they?’ Atsuko’s head was spinning.

“We just debuted as a three man band. Our first single will be out next week.” Riku explained

“Then how do you know Yuko-san?” Atsuko started to understand but if they were famous, why would they hang out with Yankee’s.

“We filmed our PV at Majisuka, there, I got to know Yuko-chan and got her contact information so we just planned an outing.” Kuu replied.

“Oh…ok…”

“Enough of the chit-chat, let’s sing.” Yuko’s sudden outburst made everyone shift gears from serious talk to let’s have fun.

-An hour later-

“Sorry, I need to go to the washroom.” Riku excused himself as Kuu and Kai just followed him so that they can all go together to the men’s washroom Kuu and Kai were holding it since they got to the Karaoke place but they just didn’t want to go alone.

The three boys left, leaving the girls alone.

“Riku really needs to let loose sometimes.” Yuko said as she started to sip her tomato juice

“Kuu needs to shut up, he gets on my nerves all the time.” Sado gritted at the thought of Kuu.

“Kai…” Atsuko didn’t notice that she said Kai’s name aloud.

“So, what about you and Kai?” Yuko asked.

“Ha? What? Nothing? What are you talking about?” Atsuko started to panic a bit.

“Mhmm, so this is your nothing? Getting all nervous at the thought of Kai?” Sado teased.

“Oh shit!” Yuko exclaimed as she accidentally spilled her tomato juice on Riku’s shopping bag. Sado helped clean the table as Atsuko went out the room to find more tissue. Yuko took out the box and started cleaning the juice off and opened the box to make sure that no stains were made. As Yuko took out the bag that was in the box, she instantly fell in love with the bag.

‘Ahh, it’s so nice… I’m so envious… I wonder who it’s for? Riku has a lover?’ Yuko thought as she examined the bag. ‘Shit, it stained the bottom a bit…Hopefully he doesn’t find out.’

The mess was all cleaned and everything was put back into place before the boys got back. They all continued to sing and have fun. As it was getting late, each of the boys took a girl home as they were gentleman.

-Yuko’s front steps-

“I had a great time today, thank you for accompanying me the whole day.” Kuu said

“Me too, maybe we can do it again soon.” Yuko added.

“For sure, maybe the next time, just you and me, and not the sky scraper.” During Karaoke, Sado and Kuu kept bickering and Kuu thought of a nickname for Sado, sky scraper, since she was the tallest out of the whole group.

“I swear, you and Sado are really good friends.” Yuko said as she was thoroughly amused at the sight of Sado opening up to someone other than her and the queens.

“Ew, no. blegh.” Kuu made barfing sounds to the thought of Sado and him being good friends.

-Sado’s front steps-

“Well, good night.” Riku said

“That’s all you have to say to me? I know your hiding something Riku. Is Riku even your real name?” Sado was always the brighter of the two top’s in Rappapa.

‘Oh no.’

-Atsuko’s front steps-

“Well, this is it.”

“Thanks for taking me home, Kazuki-kun… I meant Kai-kun.” Atsuko corrected herself but felt stupid because she mixed up the names for the billionth time today after the announcement of his real name.

“It’s ok, it’s my fault. I should have told you.” Kai said as he looked down to the floor.

“It’s ok, I had fun today.” Atsuko smiled as Kai looked up to her face.

As Atsuko started to her front doors, she tripped. Kai, out of reflex, caught Atsuko but since they were both unbalanced, they came down to the floor with Kai on the bottom and Atsuko on top. As if in slow-motion replay, Kai grabbed Atsuko and pulled her close such that when they fell onto the floor, Atsuko would be unscratched but since Atsuko is taller than Kai, Kai pulled Atsuko face close to himself. In doing that, as they fell, Atsuko’s lips lightly brushed Kai’s cheeks. Atsuko blushed a deep red as she got off Kai and ran to the door.

“Thank you and good night.” Atsuko closed the door behind her.

Kai was shocked but even more so, blushed a bright red as he touched the part of his cheek that Atsuko placed her lips. “Good night?”

TBC...

I'm really sorry it took so long....School sucks as usual and my work ethnics is that I get the next chapter done before I post the current chapter.... and the next chapter was a bitch for me to write....and now I'm starting on chapter 13 which is also a bitch......I don't think me and this relationship with writing fanfics will last very long......

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Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 11)
« Reply #56 on: March 31, 2011, 05:08:17 AM »
 :mon squee:

WANT MORE~!!  :mon XD:

THANK YOU~!!  :mon fyeah:

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Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 11)
« Reply #57 on: March 31, 2011, 06:04:44 AM »
Cool you updated!

I was so afraid things might go wrong but yea it worked out perfectly

especially for Takamina getting a kiss on the cheek by Aachan :D

Woah when Haruna gives Yuko the bag she might see the stains and start thinking

hahaha Miichan and Sado arguing is just so funny

I don't mind waiting at all as long as you don't give up on the story! Don't get yourself too stressed!

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Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 11)
« Reply #58 on: March 31, 2011, 09:20:28 AM »
wow!!!! update!!!!
 :cow: :cow: :cow:
i was expecting an angry Gakuran!
hahahahaha!
but its Ok!

this is so cute!

Quote
‘Opps, bad move Yuko. How come my body reacts like normal with Riku, as if… as if he was her…Torigoya. No, bad Yuko, I can’t cheat on Torigoya.’ Yuko thought.
Yuko makes me smile in this part!  :)

as expected of Sado-sama!!!  :panic:

and Kai got a kiss from Maeda!  :twothumbs

thanks for the update!!!!!
update soon! :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D


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Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 11)
« Reply #59 on: March 31, 2011, 10:25:47 AM »
I agree that you agree that I agree that we have great mind XD

I was smilling even before read ypur fic when I saw you updated lol
Can't wait for the scene when Torigoya will give the bag to Yuko ^^
Minami & Atsuko moment = win  :twothumbs
Miichan ahahahah this character would always make me smile

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